Date: 27 Jun 2011 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 21
Gosh! How long does the truth serum last? Bella must be so desperate to get those answers to have Snake touch her like that.
Author's Response:
Lmao! Bella needs answers. Going near Snake was stupid but she just wanted to help out. In other words, she is desperate. lol.
Date: 27 Jun 2011 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 21
cool they got him maybe they will find out who to go get!! can't wait for more. i can't believe that ed let her do it and didn't blow the whole thing!
Author's Response:
E is full of surprises. He can actually be rational when it comes to Bella if he puts his mind to it (even just for a while). lol
Anyway, thanks. =)
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2011 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow! Bella is her own undercover operative! Thank goodness, Edward waited in the truck and everything went off as planned. I can't wait for the next update. I hope we get to find out more about Snake's plans and who is behind the plot to destroy Bella's family.
Author's Response:
Yes, you will, don't worry. You'll have your answers in the next few chapters. Thanks. =)
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2011 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 21
phew now Snake had my skin crawling and I was only reading the story **chuckles** thanks for the chapter update ... I know we stiil have lots more to learn about who has done what, really looking forward to more of this story... TTFN Kathy xoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you. Until next chapter. =)
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2011 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 21
hmmm eddie's so wrapped around her finger. Go Bella. Cut the head off that snake.
Author's Response:
Lol. Thanks sweetie. =)
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2011 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 20
Yeah I think she needs to be worried. Edward is not a happy camper.
Author's Response:
Let's see what E does next chapter. He might really surprise you.
Anyway, thanks. ;)
Date: 18 Jun 2011 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 20
this is seriously my favorite story ever!
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you. I'm flattered you love this story. =)
Date: 13 Jun 2011 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 20
i have to say first off that i just found his story and read what you have so far and am totally invested in your characters...yet the spicyness of the earlier chapters, where bella was tough and made edward work for it hasflamed out a bit...which makes me sad. i love angst and drama and i love tough bella but it is honestly pissing me off that she forgives him so quickly and easily everytime i think major shit and angst is gonna go down...i wanna see edward suffer for his bullshit he pulls and i dont wanna see bella being so weak willed for him...looking forward to major shit hitting the fan...and hopefully bella stays strong this time...he has done her wrong so many times, i wanna see edward get his worst fear and her leave him...with an eventual, hard earned hea...
looking forward to an update
Author's Response:
My Bella in this story is tough and feisty, but there will be not much angst in this story since this is not one. It's a romance in a crime-filled world. Sorry if I disappoint you in that department.
Anywho, I appreciate that you still want to read further. Really makes me happy. ;)
Don't worry, I'll update soon. Thanks. ;)
Date: 13 Jun 2011 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 20
Edward is going to kill someone shit.
Author's Response:
Let's see what E does next chapter. Thanks for this review. =)
Date: 12 Jun 2011 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 20
when will you update again its sooo good cant wait to see what edward does=)
Author's Response:
I'll update soon, don't you worry.
Thanks. ;)
Date: 12 Jun 2011 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 20
oh my! cant believe you ended the chapter like that! anxious....
Author's Response:
Don't worry, I'll update soon. thanks. =)
Date: 11 Jun 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
dun dun dun. Go Bella Do what the skanky V couldnt do
Author's Response:
Lol. Yeah, let's see how she handles Snake.
Anyway, thank you. =)
Date: 10 Jun 2011 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 20
Love this story. Bella sure does jump into things without thinking. Does Edward recognize her disguise? Is he going to blow her cover or let her continue to try to get info from snake. Too bad there is no BDSM in this story as I'm sure Edward would love to whip her ass lol.
Author's Response:
Lol. Bella is still an amateur when it comes to Mafia things. She is impulsive. Add that she is still emotional over what happened to Rose, then you will get an irrational Bella. However, they never anticipated Snake will be interested in her. Bella just came so she can see what Snake looks like. But since Snake wants her, she needs to improvise and deal with the situation.
Anyway, thanks. ;)
Date: 10 Jun 2011 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 20
WTH was Bella thinking, trying to get to Snake with only Victoria as her backup?
Author's Response:
Oh, hey girlie. ;)
Bella is screwed if she get's caught. lol but don't worry, E has arrived, albeit, furious at the moment.
Anyway, thank you for this review. *hugs*
Date: 09 Jun 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 20
Bella wasn't going to stay behind with her arms crossed, that has never been her. Edward thought she would comply, he was wrong. So now things are interesting to say rhe least. Snake preferred her over Victoria and Bella is going along with it, little back-up and almost no plan... Just when she thought it couldn't get more complicatted, guess who showed up? ;)
Author's Response:
And yes, as expected, E is pissed. Let's see if he keeps his cool next chapter.
Thanks. ;)
Date: 09 Jun 2011 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 20
well leave it to her to get in to deep
Author's Response:
Thanks. ;)
Date: 09 Jun 2011 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 20
This is not going to go well for Bella. Can't wait!
Author's Response:
Nobody expected Snake to be interested in Bella. It was Tanya's task to crack Snake, but now B just have to deal with the situation.
Thanks. ;)
Date: 09 Jun 2011 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 20
cool bella is being a bad ass bitch love it... oh boy can't wait to see what ed is going to to. i hope he doesn't blow it!
Author's Response:
Yes, let's see what E does in the next chapter.
Thank you bb. ;)
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2011 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 20
Shit Shit Shit is right!!! OMG Bella what on earth are you thinking deary! You're the BOSS'S wife! Holy Shit!!!! Oh this is so good! Poor Rose and Em, they lost the baby! awhhhh!
Can't wait for the next chapter, Thanks so much for this chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you sweetie. ;)
Date: 09 Jun 2011 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh holy shit!!!! Edward is gonna be pissed... Bella may even need to get spanked for going against her husband.... hehe
Author's Response:
Lol.
Let's see what E does in the next chapter.
Thanks. ;)
Date: 15 Apr 2011 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 19
Edward is in trouble with Bella but I think she needs to com down a bit i think she needs to be pissed that he didnt tell her something happened but she cant blame him realy for what happened.????
Author's Response:
Bella is just irrational/emotional because of what happened. She'll get over it...eventually. But Edward promising her that was stupid, really. Now he has to make it up to her.
Date: 13 Apr 2011 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 19
Things are a mess right now, a really big one with no clue as to where to start working from. Bella's anger is more than understandable, but she can't hold Edward responsible, even if he promised to keep her family safe. Edward is so stressed and worried right now, that neither can think straight. They need to calm down, something that won't be easy right now.
Rose needs to be okay as soon as possible. Meanwhile they need to find out who and how did this, while preventing another attack. Easier said than done.
Author's Response:
Everybody's stressed...but they need to chill at the same time be careful because danger still lurks. Bella is irrational right now but she'll get over it...eventually. Edward promising something like that was stupid. Now he has to make amends with her.
Thank you for reading bb. =)
Date: 13 Apr 2011 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 19
well i hope for her sake that she realizes that he cant protect everyone cnat wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Bella will get over it...eventually. Don't worry.
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2011 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 19
WOW, that was hard to read!
Author's Response:
was the 'wow' good or bad? lol.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 19
like your story cant wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Thank you. =)
Date: 12 Apr 2011 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 19
was wondering when that promise would come into play
Author's Response:
Edward promising that was stupid...but maybe he can redeem himself in future chapters. We'll see.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 17
You do realize that Chicago is in Illinois, right?
Sorry, a sentence was bugging me. But, all in all, this is a great story and it has well-developed characters. Keep up the good work. Btw, I like your banner ;)
Author's Response:
What sentence was bugging you, please clarify so I can go back and check it. (I'm aware that Chicago is in Illinois...and that is why I'm confused).
Drop me a tweet/mail/message so I can answer your questions.
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2011 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 19
I love this story and have been seeing alot of other writers recommend this one too! Your rocking the Mafia Edward and Baby Girl that's for sure. Hum now to figure out the who done it!!!!
Cant wait for more and thanks for the blog... very sweet!!!!
Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you sweetie. Glad that my Edward and Baby girl are entertaining lots of readers.
If ever you remember the names of the authors/readers who rec'd this, please drop me a tweet/mail/message so I can thank them.
Thank you for visiting my blog (it's been up just recently so not much posts added yet.)
Hugs and kisses bb. =)
Date: 12 Apr 2011 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 19
She's emotional right now she doesn't know what to do..everything she knows is falling apart in front of her. And she has the love of her life holding things from her. anyone would be upset about that. update soon
Author's Response:
you got that right, honey.
I'll try to update soon. Thank you. ;)
Date: 12 Apr 2011 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 19
Of course she's crazy. She's part of the mob!
Author's Response:
LOL. Yes, she is.
Thanks sweetie for reviewing. *MUAHZ*
Date: 12 Apr 2011 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow, that was amazing :) I really loved it so much! Cannot wait for things to get better again :)
Author's Response:
Glad you did. Your review just made me smile, and I thank you. ;)
I'll try to update as soon as I can. *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2011 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 19
Eddie now gets to learn that all of his actions/inactions DO have consequences!:)
Author's Response:
Edward making that promise was stupid. Now he has to find a way to make amends.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 19
oaky bella you are crazy you forgive him for the hit on your brother and for betraying you when you were younger but not this... you have lost it!!! thanks for the update can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Lol. Bella is kinda irrational right now..but it's because, aside from Edward, Rose and Em are her only family. She'll get over it...eventually.
Date: 05 Mar 2011 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 18
ok you took all of the fight out of her that quick... kinda lame all he had to do was explain and now she isn't leaving? i am confused. i like the story very much but for a tough bitch bella sure isn't. why did she even wait for him i just find it strange that she gets all riled up and then backs down like nothing... she didn't even get mad over him lying!
i am not being mean i am just questioning her actions i do like the story and i am glad to be reading don't be too mad at me.
Author's Response:
Lol. I'm not mad. I can understand your questions...
I hate it when one of the lead characters just walk out without talking or clearing things up bec. in real life it rarely happens that way and it doesn't really solve anything. Besides, Edward did that 3 years ago, when he didn't know about Emmett and Bella...that's what mobsters do...take out competition to stay in power. Bella understands, even though upon stumbling upon the information made her react the way she did.
So, I hope I answered your questions.
Date: 05 Mar 2011 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 17
jasper you little perv!! haha!! again ed is the perfect lover able to go for hours and bella is always wet and ready... damn you fanfiction!!
Date: 05 Mar 2011 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 16
ed you are such a caveman!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 15
damn rose is one bad ass bitch!!! taking off the fingernails you are more bad assed than bella!!! lean huh didn't see that coming. not jacob sorry jacob.. no not really i really dont' like him!!!
Author's Response:
Don't like Jacob either. Lol.
Date: 04 Mar 2011 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 14
it was also emancipation proclamation. carlisle put a chip in bella after he got her from her father. anyway.... i knew it was someone they knew it has to be jacob...maybe?!?
Author's Response:
EP? Sorry, I haven't read that story even though it's one of the well known fics. It's really kinda long for me. ;) but good to know though about the chip.
Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 13
ok everything is out now who is the one after them?
Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 12
okay it is all out in the open now!! the results are next...
Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 11
jacob has something to do with it ed is right but i wonder why well i know why but i don't know why he would hurt bella unless it wasn't meant for her.
Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 10
knew something bad was going to happen you got that L-word out too damn quick it is nothing but downhill.. i still think jacob has something to do with it.
Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 9
f-ing HWOT!!!! damn girl undie change is needed!! hahah!! jacob is going to be trouble i have a feeling he isn't going to be alive very much longer. if bella was so into her dad's business why isn't ed letting her do stuff because he is a caveman? just wondering?!?
Date: 04 Mar 2011 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
oh ed... bella you need to give him more shit. now that you have the L-word out it is nothing but trouble!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 7
ok yeah she loves him but why is she forgiving him so quick.. the minute i saw vicki would have walked the f out!!!
Author's Response:
thank you for reviewing ever chapter. Really appreciate it. =) muahz
Date: 04 Mar 2011 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 6
not good i guess the whole truth is going to have to come out now!!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
as always ed is the best lover ever and bells can do anything.... love it!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 4
ok it's hot did he really cheat on her? why? damn they are hot together!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
wow the heat is awesome between them at least we know some of the background now... want more though. thanks for punching jacob that is always a good thing!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
are you going to spill on the past? i am soo interested and they as always are HOT together
Date: 04 Mar 2011 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
well i wonder the history... hum this is going to be good. you can feel the tension already!!
Author's Response:
thank you. =)
Date: 03 Mar 2011 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 18
I would still make him suffer - that is some heavy information to take in about Emmett and herself. He needs to come clean if there is anything else, because how much more can Bella take and still trust him - - she may always love him, but the trust is something you have to earn too. I just started this story yesterday and could stop reading it! Thanks for your story - looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you sweetie. Glad you're liking it. ;)
Bella kind of understood since he didn't know. Only prob. is Emmett's reaction when he finds out.
Date: 01 Mar 2011 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 3
Just saw the story featured on TWCS...I love mob related stories and started reading right away. I really like it so far. I love how things just started with a bang. I am hoping we find a bit more about why Edward left Bella so suddenly after their month together. It seemed from EPOV in the second chapter that he still cared a great deal about her (following her for 3 years...can you say obsessed stalker ;) ), but must have had a good reason for ditching out. Since you're already 18 chapters into the story, I guess I will find out soon (or notÜ).
Author's Response:
glad you're liking it. ;) hope you'll still be here after the 18 chaps. Anyway, thanks! =)
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 18
Funny reckoned it was her... That chase was fun...
Author's Response:
thank you. =)
Date: 23 Feb 2011 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 18
very intense chapter, well written and entertaining. I am glad they managed to get it all sorted out, and ended it in each others arms. But I can't wait to see how Emmett reacts, or whats up with Bella's phone.
Author's Response:
Yes, Emmett's reaction is one to wait for. I'll explain what happened to Bella's phone maybe next chapter. thanks!)
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2011 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 13
I am looking forward to finding out who, somehow I don't think it is the obvious person.
Author's Response:
You'll get to learn who it is soon, don't worry. thanks! =)
Date: 23 Feb 2011 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 18
well bella now know the truth... which is great :) update soon
Author's Response:
Yes, I needed this chapter to explain how Edward found out she was in the mob. Glad you liked it. Thanks! =)
Date: 23 Feb 2011 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wow Edward got his ass out of the fire with her but what about Emmett???
Author's Response:
They better be prepared for Emmet's reaction when he finds out.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2011 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
This is so readable, I am flying through it, still a great story.
Author's Response:
=) Glad you're liking this.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 4
God this is good!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you sweetie. =)
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2011 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ok this one has me intrigued and by God its hot...the sexual tension is oozing from the screen.
Author's Response:
thanks! =)
Date: 22 Feb 2011 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh Edward... Cannot wait to see how everything works out for these two :)
Author's Response:
Yes, Edward. lol! anyway, thanks! =)
Date: 22 Feb 2011 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
GREAT chapter!!
Author's Response:
thank you. ;)
Date: 22 Feb 2011 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 18
hmmm em is going to flip a gasket.
Author's Response:
lol! hopefully it won't be that bad...I'm still in the process of writing how he reacts. ;)
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 18
Yeah, I dont think that Em is going to take it lightly that Edward put a hit on him. But who really shot Em?? Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks sweets. ;)
The shooter will be revealed in later chapters. They have to first see hoe Emmett reacts when he finds out.
Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh! Edward, you should start checking for everything you have been keeping from her and start talking, really talking. I can't be sure how many more chances will Bella give you. Especially after this one, not to mention Emmett and Rosalie.
He might have had his reasons in that moment, and that's probably why Bella forgives him. But he should have checked her out before. That's a big mistake on his part.
So after all this commotion, where's her phone? ;)
Author's Response:
Her phone...that's one tiny bit of info I kind of forgot to mention here. Maybe in the next chapter, her phone will be explained. lol!
Emmett will find out about the hit. The only problem is what his reaction to it when he does.
Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 18
emmett will kick his ass and kiill him ! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Emmett's reaction will be one to wait for. Don't worry, it won't reach to a point that they will be killing each other.
Date: 22 Feb 2011 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 18
Yeah. After all that sex, give us a revelation!
Author's Response:
Hey you...lol! that is all I'm saying. *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2011 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 18
I hope that Emmett gets a chance to weigh in on Edward's attempted "HIT".
Author's Response:
Yes. Emmett's reaction will be the one to wait for.
Date: 22 Feb 2011 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
love history...Im Brazil
Author's Response:
Thanks! =)
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2011 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 18
Thanks for the Chapter update, I love this story!!!! I think I have said that a time or two perhaps in my reviews of other chapters.
Pretty Interesting, so ... he put a hit out on Emmett huh?! Well that's pretty normal for this type of storyline, but what was nicely unexpected is the fact that someone else outside of the Cullen Organization did it. Hummmm!!!! She really loves him doesn't she, I would have thought she would have been gone and then asked questions later.
Great Chapter we really see that they are passionate people, volitle too, but they do have an eminse love for one another.....
Ready for another Chapter this one was just a little shorter than I would have liked, but I understand that they all can't be looooonnnnnnggggggg!
Your great with your writing abillites. Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. This was an important chapter as it explains how he learned she was in the mob.
I hate it when the main character walks out...because that never solves anything so I made her stay.
Thanks for the compliment on my writing. Really appreciate it. ;)
Date: 16 Feb 2011 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 17
whew, you start us off with a hot lemon right off the bat; even Jasper couldn't interrupt their happy time.
hmm, worrying about babies...maybe a premonition of things to come. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
It has been a while since I've written some good loving between these two. Glad you liked it. ;)
Bella won't be getting pregnant anytime soon so no need for you to worry about it...yet. lol! Anyway, thanks! ;D
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2011 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 17
Too funny about Jasper just busting in. I cant believe they didnt kick his butt. I am a little worried about him telling Bella a lie about wanting kids.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. Don't worry, Bella won't be getting pregnant anytime soon. ;) thanks!
Date: 13 Feb 2011 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 17
They are really taking advantage of the honeymoon, even with their entourage. But as Edward said, it was their fault, they decided to tag along. ;)
It has been intense and Bella will need sometime to recover, Edward too I should guess. He has stamina, no doubt there.
As for the kids comment... he really doesn't want any? Or he hasn't thought about it much?
Author's Response:
Yes, Alice?jasper just have to endure it all. Lol!
As for Edward and kids....well, he just doesn't know how he feels about kids so that's why he lied. He might even consider it someday...not very soon though. ;)
Date: 13 Feb 2011 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 17
That was some hot stuff going on :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. ;)
Date: 13 Feb 2011 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
that was amazing :) I really love the dirty talk/sexy times ;) I cannot wait to see what Bella gives Edward for Christmas and what happens next :)
Author's Response:
Glad you did.;) lol. Thanks!
Date: 13 Feb 2011 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved the lemony loving, even if Jasper and Alice are spoiling some of the romance. Even if it is in very entertaining and highly amusing cock block. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
lol. Thank you. ;D
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2011 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 17
Man, its amazing that she is not raw. LOL That would be a good raw so it seems.
Author's Response:
lol! yes, a very good thing that she isn't. *winks*
Date: 12 Feb 2011 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 17
:) happy for them but i have a feeling that edwards lie is going to come back and bite him in the butt
Author's Response:
Bella won't be getting pregnant anytime soon, don't worry. ;)
Date: 12 Feb 2011 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 17
yummy time..... Poor Eddie has to share his wife with his sister on their honeymoon
Author's Response:
Yes, but it didn't hinder him from having a good loving time with his wife. *winks* lol.
Date: 12 Feb 2011 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 17
that sucks alice invited herself and jasper...wow update soon
Author's Response:
=) thanks!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2011 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 17
Dear Lord Above --- Yes, Loved - Loved this chapter.. Holy Hell! Can we say insatible?
Can't wait for the next chapter
Later Kathy xoxo
Author's Response:
thank you bb. Glad you liked it. =)
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2011 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 17
Let's hope the shot works...they aren't ready for little EandBs! Jasper is too creepy for words!
Author's Response:
lol! yes, Jasper is creepy but in a funny kind of way. ;) Don't worry, Bella will not be pregnant any time soon.
Date: 12 Feb 2011 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 17
their hot together! keep the updates comming
Author's Response:
thanks! =)
Date: 12 Feb 2011 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 17
WOWWWW I envy Bella!!!! lol
Author's Response:
lol! =)
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2011 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 16
Fucking a
Author's Response:
lol! =)
Date: 04 Feb 2011 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 16
HOTNESS !!!
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you! =)
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 16
Hells Bells if that's what she gets when he gets angry with her, HE best look out, SHE will make sure to Piss him off just for his reaction. HAHAHA!!!
Can't wait for the next update, please soon....... Great Story!
Kathy xoxo
Author's Response:
Much love to you girl! You basically flooded my mail with your reviews...and I loved it. Thank you for taking the time, really appreciate it. =) don't worry, the next chapter is with my beta already..so the update will be soon.
See yah then. *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 15
I thought it was Leah, stupid stupid girl!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 13
Bless B's heart she thought he left her without saying goodbye.
Another thing I like about your writing style is you let Bella acknowledge the choice she made, regardless of other circumstances which led her to making that choice, it was still a choice, poor as it may have been, she is accepting responsibility for her actions.
Great story, going on to the next chapter... Laters BB Kathy xoxo
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 12
I had been so wrapped up in the story I had not even digested the fact Bella has been calling him MASEN or MASE at times. Naturally I hadn't even given consideration as to what the outcome or response would be from Emmett when this was revealed.. Oh Brother
Explosive times!
Laters Kathy xoxo
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 11
Such a good story! Was it Leah that was close to having a panic attack? I'm confused.. sorry about that. Love the story. Going to the next chapter!
Later Kathy xoxo
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 10
Holy Shit Batman talk about a cliffie! Glad I already have the next Chapter Thank you V!
BTW did I tell you how much I love this story! Who doesn't love this Edward? Hey Hey!!!! Sexy boy! Isn't this the first too that we are fully aware of his Tattoo with Baby Girl on his forearm. When did he get that?
Laters BB Kathy xoxo
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 9
Bella darlin when will you learn that your husband has your best interest at heart!!!!
Sneaky little vixen!!!!
This was a GREAT, HOT chapter!
Laters BB Kathy xoxo
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 8
awesome
Author's Response:
Hey sweets, I really love you reviewing chapters. =) glad you're liking the story. Thank you! =)
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 6
cliffie hey...I really like the story and think you're really good and have talent hope you stay encouraged and motivated in your writings,
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 5
well I am pretty curious and anxious to find out about their time in NY 3 years prior now! Can't say I blame her for not wanting to go on a honeymoon, she can't help that her body betrays her, but at the same time I think whatever he did back then he had have done it with her best interest at heart.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 4
I love our Bella you go girl!!!