Date: 28 Oct 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 27
thanks for the update can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Oct 2010 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 27
OH my my... :( How sad.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Oct 2010 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 27
um I think we know why he has a stick up his ass. lol she blames him for losing the baby or subconciously she does. I like this story. keep it up thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I think he is just having his man period:)
Date: 28 Oct 2010 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 27
OMG ouch!! Thats harsh! I cannot wait to see whats up with E! Poor B, she is going through enough shit as it is.
Looking forward to the next update! Thanks BB!! *hugs*
Author's Response:
THanks:)
Date: 28 Oct 2010 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 27
Poor Edward. No wonder he ignored her!
Author's Response:
Yep, Poor Edward!
Date: 28 Oct 2010 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 27
well its been a very difficult year for them and its vcome back around but then need to talk and work it all out if they want to move foward cant wait ti ll the next chapter keep them comming
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 26
I am cracking up that Bella got all of them invloved in the whole Jasper abduction dream. That was funny and totally something that they all would have done.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 20 Oct 2010 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 26
I loved the prank. I think the real Bella is back. She even talked about Christmas and Charlie without breaking down. She has so much love around her. She needs to enjoy it and feel blessed.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 26
Apology accepted, we dont hold it against you anyway :)
I love this chapter, its time for them to get a break from the drama and that is just what this was. I loved it!! I laughed throughout the entire first part of the chapter due to the prank on Jasper, classic!! Poor guy, just cant seem to get any respect! First little green men anal probe him, then everyone pranks him about it. Tough luck Jazz! *gigglesnorts*
I cant wait to see what happens next :)
Author's Response:
I laughed so hard while writing this one. I almost feel bad for Jasper, but not really.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 26
Great chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 26
loved the prank and the Edward luvin....keep up the good work
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 26
well i hope they get more happyiness in their lifes and not all this dread! cant wait til lthe next chatper
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 26
OME!!! The prank on Jasper was HYSTERICAL!! Great job! :D
And the lovely lemon to end the chappie, so beautiful. Christmas decorating sounded fun, too.
Author's Response:
I nearly busted my gut laughing so hard while writing that part:)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 26
OMG that was so funny good thing they stopped before he started swinging.
Author's Response:
I know, right???
Date: 18 Oct 2010 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 26
Loved the prank. Jasper should have known better than to tell Bella!
Hope they have a peaceful Christmas season. They need a break!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 26
I was rolling when Alice pulled out that vibrator. lol and Jasper's like not this again. Wait AGAIN? the vibrator has happened before? lol i love it. then we ended with a long awaited lemon. thank you thank you THANK YOU!! keep up the great work. can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
I had tears falling down my face from laughing so hard. It's a wonder I was able to write anything with the way I was laughing.
Date: 17 Oct 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 25
I'm so sorry for your lost.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 25
Very nice chapter, BB! *Big Hugs* *sniff*
Nice diversion with the whole Jasper/Alien Abduction thing, LOL! I was rolling! WTF?
Author's Response:
IT was like a tension releiver:)
Date: 09 Oct 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 25
I love this story! I'm sorry about all you have been through. Sometimes life just isn't fair!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) It's been fourteen years since my daddy passed and ten years since my miscarriage. It's still hard but I am ok:)
Date: 08 Oct 2010 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 25
That is sad that Charlie isn't there but it was good that even thoguh Bella was at work she got to be with her family for the holidays.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 08 Oct 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 25
Sorry about your dad. Keep up the good work :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 08 Oct 2010 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 25
I totally know the feeling of a holiday without your dad around. I lost mine Christmas Eve last year so I had to put on a happy face and pretend I was ok. Dont know how long ago you lost your dad but I hope the holidays have gotten a bit easier for you since.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) My father passed away fourteen years ago this past July. THe holidays have gotten much easier.
Date: 07 Oct 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 25
Wow, Im sorry *hugs you tightly*
You wrote this chapter beautifully. I loved it.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 07 Oct 2010 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 25
poor Bella. I absolutely loved the alien story though. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Wasn't that funny? I laughed so hard while writing that:)
Date: 07 Oct 2010 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 25
My Dad died July 30th so Thanksgiving was our first major holiday without him. It was hard but Christmas & New Years were worse; thoses were his favorites.
Nice to see Renee trying. It's hard.
Nice chapter...move the story along.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 07 Oct 2010 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 25
I think they did amazingly well on their first holiday without Charlie. Bella is getting stronger. She will be fine.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 07 Oct 2010 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 25
great chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Oct 2010 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 24
Loving the sequal!! Keep it coming! I hate that you killed off Charlie and Bella lost the baby, but I'm hoping things will get better for them soon. I have to say that I'm kinda liking that you have only really done a BPOV & a EPOV! The only thing I hope you don't do is have Rose or Alice prego and Bella not.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Oct 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 24
Aww! That ending was beautiful! We all know Alice is right.
So Bella FINALLY got her period. Maybe it's one of those that you get even tho you're already pregnant? If not, that's okay. They can't give up, it'll happen. In the meantime, they need to just enjoy each other and fuck like bunnies! LOL!
:)
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 02 Oct 2010 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 23
Who knew a cinnamon roll could be such a turn on? LOL! That was such hot lovin'!! And I'm glad Edward wouldn't let up and explained what he was trying to say. Glad they're ready to try again. :D
Nice to hear Renee is doing better, too.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Oct 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 24
I think that she is doing a wonderful job at trying to keep everything together. I don't know if I would be able to do that because I am so close to my dad that it would break me if something happend to him.
Author's Response:
I think she is too:)
Date: 29 Sep 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 29 Sep 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 24
Wow!! So happy and so sad all rolled up in one. Makes me think of my dad who I miss dearly. You have a way with words and always deliver perfectly.
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you:)
Date: 28 Sep 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 24
Wow, that bit in the store.... I still have tears cascading down my cheeks.
Amazingly beautiful.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I did too!!
Date: 28 Sep 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 24
Aww this chapter was so heartbreaking but brought a certain sense of peace
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Sep 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 24
Tough chapter to read. I know how hard it was to keep trying and not succeeding and we finally did ivf.
I truly believe those that have died are in heaven taking care of those who have gone on before and those on their way. Lost my dad 4 years ago and my niece almost 9 years ago at a full term birth and I know Dad is up there taking care of Angelina and all the other babies that didn't quite make it here on earth.
Hope Bella and Edward get their wish soon. It's heartbreaking to have unexplained infertility.
Author's Response:
After I had my miscarriage, I had a dream that my dad was sitting on his front porch. He was holding the most beautiful little baby in his arms. He looked over at me and smiled. He said that he had her now and that it was ok. When I woke up, I was crying so hard but I knew that he was taking care of her.
Date: 28 Sep 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 24
aww poor Bella. they chapter made me cry too. what's a story by you that doesn't make you cry. lol I love that they splurged on clothes though. too cute. Its been quite awhile since you updted this one lady, what's your excuse? lol thanks again bye
Author's Response:
lol, I have no excuse except that I had no idea what to write:)
Date: 28 Sep 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 24
well i hope that she gets what she wants but it cant always be easy cant wait till the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Sep 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 24
good chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Sep 2010 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 24
I hope Bella will find some peace and happiness. It is hard loosing a parent. I lost my dad when I was 19, but if you talk to my kids you would swear that they met him. They talk about him because he has been apart of their lives through stories and pictures.
Author's Response:
Same for mine. I've always tried to include him in what we were doing.
Date: 22 Sep 2010 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 23
great chapter.....
Date: 22 Sep 2010 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 23
Well I guess that they are healing in the way that they do!! I am happy that they are going to try again and I hope that this time they get to have a baby.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 Sep 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
Okay I wanted to smack Bella in the face talk first before you jump to conclusions please.
Author's Response:
She was scared but I agree, she needs to start talking to him:)
Date: 22 Sep 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 23
yeah they're back to somewhat normal and horny as hell. lol keep up the great work and yes to trying for another baby. I'm so excited. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 Sep 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 23
It was fine. Not every chapter has to be 10,000 words at a time!
They needed that, the needed to reconnect on that physical level. I know when I went through my blighted o & my miscarriage, it took a lot for me to feel "normal" & good enough or even woman enough. Sorry, tmi but in any case, I think you handled it well. Glad Edward pushed Bella to talk to him. Made it all better!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 Sep 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 23
well i hope everything works out for them cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Sep 2010 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 22
great chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 22
You're welcome, hun. :)
Ah...so the sun's shining. Let the sun's warmth fill us with love and laughter while its rays chase away the clouds and the darkness.
I think it's a sign that Bella is ready to move on. :)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 22
I am so glad that Renee finally remembered that she had a daughter. I know she was grieving, but Bella had 2 losses and Renee is suppose to be the parent.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 22
They will make it, I think. It's tough, they just can't catch a break but what doesn't kill them will just make them stronger.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 22
maybe she just needed her mommy to cry with and now hopefuly she will get better ! cant wait till the next chatper
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 22
well at least Bella met her mom again. that's great. I figure that's a step in the right direction. I love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 22
I feel really bad like I was bragging about my baby and all that in the review for the last chapter and if I came across like that I am sorry. All of my family is really close and we have had to deal with miscarriages and Endrometriosis and all of that stuff so I am really no stranger to the losing a child. I am glad that Renee came to see Bella because she needed that but I think that they both needed it as a sign that they would be there for each other in whatever way that they could be.
Author's Response:
You didn't come off that way at all:)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 21
I don't know how this feels and I hope that I never do I was one of the lucky ones that had a baby and everything was ok. I had my problems but the end result was my wonderful son. Mys sister had an aweful scare 3 weeks ago when she had her daughter and we could have lost both of them but thankfully God was looking down on them. I really hope that they get good luck here soon because I don't know how much more they both will be able to take before they break down completly.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 22
I hope B comes back from all the pain she has suffered and has Edward mourned for his lost, as well?
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Sep 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 21
*hugs* :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I needed that!
Date: 15 Sep 2010 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 21
I feel so bad for these two. Edward has it harder in a way because he is trying to be strong for Bella. I am so glad that he finally got to cry in his Dad's arms. He needed that time to be human.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 15 Sep 2010 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 21
wow way to pull on our heartstrings. :( I hope this gets happier soon. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 15 Sep 2010 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 21
That was so sad and just heartbreaking, but it was a wonderful chapter. Beautifully written for such a painful experience. I love this story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much:)
Date: 15 Sep 2010 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 21
great chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 15 Sep 2010 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 21
I pray for all the people who've lost a child.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 15 Sep 2010 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 21
I cried all the way through this chapter...I have lost both my parents now,one from cancer one from a heart attack,I know what it's like to misscarrage a baby also, I also know what it's like to feel like the world is closing in on you . I hope things start looking up soon cause I love all these charactors ,you said to trust you so I am trusting you.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 15 Sep 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 21
It was beautiful in a painful way. I remember trying to put on a brave face when I knew what was happening. My "first" was due on Christmas day in1999. That was a tough holiday that year.
Great job conveying the sadness, hopelessness & despair.
Author's Response:
Thank you. My baby was due in August of '99.
Date: 15 Sep 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 21
this will only make them stronger! cant wati till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 11 Sep 2010 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 19
This was hard for me. My dad passed away unexpectedly in July and it broke my heart for Bella. I could've used Edward and Jasper then! Yummy thoughts of Edward going through my head!! Hope it gets better for Bella.
Author's Response:
Thank you and I am sorry about your dad. I know how hard that is.
Date: 11 Sep 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 20
That is so sad that they are now going through this too right after losing Charlie. I hope that this doesn't push Bella off the edge that she teetering on. I trust that you know what you are doing and I am going to stick with this story!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 11 Sep 2010 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 20
First Charlie and now this. I really would love for them to finally get some peace and happiness.
Author's Response:
They will, I promise. Have some faith.
Date: 11 Sep 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 20
not gonna lie .. not liking where this is going
Author's Response:
I know but trust me.
Date: 11 Sep 2010 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 20
Poor Bella and Edward. they've suffered enough and now its going to get bad, like really BAD. no dad, no baby. Bella's already a mess and won't talk to anyone and now she's going to be comatose. (shaking my head) Please just say that there will be a HEAfter ending. they deserve something for all the drama they've been through. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
They will get their HEA. I promise.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 20
First of all, my condolences to you, butterflybetty. :'( *hugs*
I had to look up blighted ovum. Unbelievably, there are some women who were misdiagnosed and went on to full term pregnancies and the babies are doing well.
I don't know what could be worse than a miscarriage. Poor Bella and Edward...and Renee...and everyone. I hope this is the only miscarriage they have.
Author's Response:
Thank you, hon:(
Date: 10 Sep 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
no yelling, oh boy - Bella & Edward what a life.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 Sep 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
great chapter....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 Sep 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 20
I have been there twice. It is the worse feeling. I kept trying. The month after my 2nd misscarriage I got pregnant with my daughter who in now 15. It all happens in God's time. not ours. Bella will make it through. She just needs to heal mentally and have faith in herself and Edward.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 Sep 2010 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 20
My second pregnancy was the same thing. It was awful and I can totally empathize with what she is going through. Poor girl, how much more can they take? Thanks for the update. Been reading your other stories and loving them...especially FBI Bella...very cool! Thanks for sharing your talent!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much:)
Date: 10 Sep 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 20
she couldnt of carried the baby to term with all the stress and the non eating she wasnt doing! i feel for them but hope for the best in this story cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 Sep 2010 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 20
I get it. We tried for years to get pregnant, finally did & miscarried early. Got pregnant again & this time, blighted ovum (a lot more common than people realize) and then nothing. Finally did ivf & have a beautiful boy.
I know this may sound trite, but they are youngish & healthy. They have been through he'll and back with the separation, lost each other, Jake, the trial & then the death of Charlie.
Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Trust me, I know. I miscarrried back in '99 due to a blighted ovum and again in '05. It's very difficult.
Date: 07 Sep 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 19
This chapter was really hard to read. I was bawling the whole time I read it. I thought I would stop until she said that Charlie was superman, her superman and then I lost it again.
Author's Response:
Thank you. It was hard for me too.
Date: 07 Sep 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 19
I will keep the faith & trust we will all come out okay in the end. I just hope none of the couples cheat or break up....that's kind of a hard limit for me on this story!! Guess because they've goner through so much to get to where they are at that I can't bear it if they aren't together.
Author's Response:
I can promise you that none of them will cheat and they will not breakup, even if their relationships are tested. I appreciate the faith.
Date: 06 Sep 2010 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
Believe me, I have faith in you. I wouldn't be such a fan of your stories if I didn't have any, lol.
This was a very hard chapter for me to read personally, it just brought back the pain and sorrow of the day I buried my own father seven years ago. My own husband was there for me, very much like Edward was for Bella here. That made me smile.
Author's Response:
Thank you. My father passed away two months after my husband and I got married. I don't think I could have gotten through it without him.
Date: 06 Sep 2010 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 19
okay its starting to seem like all of your stories except the Reunion are out to make me cry. lol keep up the good work on the writing but lets try to get back to happier times, huh? lol thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you. I have trouble writing non-angsty stuff.
Date: 06 Sep 2010 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 19
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 06 Sep 2010 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 19
lovin this story,its very emotional and has had me crying buckets of tears,you are an excellent writer, ithink this of all your stories. keep up the good work, i think i should start buying shares in kleenex,lol.can't wait for next up date, thanks, cheryl
Author's Response:
Thank you. I put alot of emotions in to my stuff.
Date: 06 Sep 2010 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 19
As a girl whose dad died when she was 19, these chapters are the hardest. I cry like a baby. You did a good job getting into Bella's head of what she would be feeling.
Author's Response:
Thank you. My father passed away when I was 20, just a couple months after he walked me down the aisle. I understand.
Date: 06 Sep 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 19
i just hope that she dosent loose the baby! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks.
Date: 05 Sep 2010 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 18
OOOOHHHHHHHHHH!!!
Oh my!!!! NOOOOOO!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 04 Sep 2010 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 18
great chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 04 Sep 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 18
UGGGG how can you take charlie?
Author's Response:
I'm sorry. I feel horrible about it.
Date: 03 Sep 2010 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 18
Yes, you better go and hide HOW COUD YOU KILL CHARLIE!!!!! HAVEN'T THEY THEY ALL BEEN THREW ENOUGH. %0
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 03 Sep 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 18
I can't believe that Charlie died! That is so sad that he isn't going to see his grandchildren grow up or see the gang with them.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 18
I really like this story. Keep the updates coming. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 02 Sep 2010 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 18
I so hope you are not leaving it there!!! The sory has been a joy to read - please,please finish it.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 18
What a shock! I am stunned. I am trying to put my thoughts down and just can't seem to get it together. Really curious to see where this leads. So many different directions available.
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 02 Sep 2010 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 18
ugh, I have goosebumps. So sad.
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 02 Sep 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 18
cant they ever catch a break? i dont like it when they kill charlie off of stories! i like him a lot ! cant wait till the next chapter hopefuly with the stress she wont loose the baby! keep the chapters comming
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 02 Sep 2010 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 18
I can't believe Charlie died. I hope Bella is strong enough to survive this. She was just getting back to normal. I don't know if her boys and sisters will be enough this time.
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 02 Sep 2010 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh no....how can Charlie die?? After everything that happened and they are all finally together.....tragic.
So so sad........................
Author's Response:
Thank you:(
Date: 31 Aug 2010 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
Bella doesn't need anymore drama in her life. I hope Charlie is ok. At least he has a slew of family to take care of him.
Date: 30 Aug 2010 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 17
Seriously, why and why does she call her dad Charlie?
Author's Response:
Thank you:) She calls him Charlie cause that's his name.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 17
OMG didnt see that comming
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 29 Aug 2010 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh no! Not Charlie!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)