Date: 06 Sep 2019 6:51 AM Title: Chapt 30 The Way We Were
I really hope that you plan to update/finish this story soon. I am really enjoying it!
Date: 30 Aug 2016 11:32 AM Title: Chapt 30 The Way We Were
I love your story. Hope you update soon and I hope everything is well with you. Please update!!
Date: 09 Jun 2016 1:09 PM Title: Chapt 30 The Way We Were
Please update soon. I really love your story
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2015 3:05 AM Title: Chapt 30 The Way We Were
hope you come back soon looking forward to more
Date: 22 Nov 2015 5:04 AM Title: Chapt 30 The Way We Were
Soon? Like 3 years soon? :(
Date: 30 Nov 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapt 30 The Way We Were
I read this story all in one standing! Great job! i hope you finish it soon, because i cn't wait to see how her confrontation with Jake goes! Something tells me he knows more then what he has told her so far. Please updat soon!
Date: 12 Feb 2013 7:19 PM Title: Chapt 30 The Way We Were
Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 11 Feb 2013 3:52 AM Title: Chapt 30 The Way We Were
OMG WOW!!!!!! I love this story and I am on pin and needles and can't wait for your updates!!!!!!! HOpe it will be soon! take care
Date: 01 Jan 2013 12:57 AM Title: Chapt 30 The Way We Were
I love smut...im glad they are reconnecting
Date: 31 Dec 2012 11:42 AM Title: Chapt 26 - Coming Out of the Dark
Im thinking the man who thought renee was his daughter faked his death after he figured out his brother slept with his wife and fathered renee....he killed renee and wants to kill bella to destory aro like his world was destoryed by the affair
Date: 30 Dec 2012 7:56 PM Title: Taking Care of Business
Im pissed....edward telling bella she has to end her friendship with jacob is controling and wrong and evidental he does love her or trust her enough if he has to give ultimatums. Now what jake did was wrong but hes heart was in the right place. If it had been a girl as her bff, they would of done the same in the name of protecting their friend. If my bff came to me and told her husband cheated on her, i would help her pack her stuff and help her bash her husband and say he is a no good loser! And if she decided to keep a pregnancy from him i would support her decision, after i say my opinion. If she wanted to go back ill tell her shes stupid and once a cheater always a cheater than ill support her decision. If i say her in an emotional breakdown almost killed herself, over it you bet your ass id keep one of the cause of it aka her husband away from her until she was well enough to decide. In my eyes jake did what any best friend would do, his only fault was not letting her have all the facts and letting her decide when she was better. However, edward is completely wrong to ask for that friendship to be ended....its just gonna cause pain, and its not healthy to be emeshed with your husband you both need separate friendsto turn to with stuff you cant talk to your spouse about untill its all worked out in your head or if your bitching about them
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2012 12:17 AM Title: Taking Care of Business
Woo hoo!! At last she cut ties with Jacob! Sounds mean but I'm so pleased! P.S Loving the story.
Date: 14 Dec 2012 7:02 AM Title: Chapt 30 The Way We Were
tough.. LOL
Date: 12 Dec 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapt 30 The Way We Were
Wow! Excellent chapter!!!!!
Date: 12 Dec 2012 5:09 PM Title: Chapt 30 The Way We Were
Absolutely loved it :)
Date: 12 Dec 2012 5:03 PM Title: Chapt 30 The Way We Were
yumminess. ROFL for Charlie walking in. Too funny.
Glad B is doing so much better.
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2012 9:50 AM Title: Chapt 30 The Way We Were
Good to see another great chapter...just love this story.
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapt 30 The Way We Were
Great chapter
Date: 11 Dec 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapt 30 The Way We Were
I was just thinking about this fic! Thank you for the great update! Now that Bella and Edward are stronger than ever together, they can face anything!
Love those two connecting again in the most intimate of ways! LMAO that Charlie caught them literally with their pants down!! ;-)
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:07 AM Title: Chapt 29 - That Old Feeling
Loved this chapter!!!!!
Date: 13 Oct 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapt 29 - That Old Feeling
Well she is making slow steps forward, much like this story. I have been reading forever.
Please update, this story is so worth the read.
Date: 13 Oct 2012 4:45 PM Title: Chapt 28 -- Standing Still
Yep she has been afraid of confrontation. You can not change what you will not confront.
Date: 13 Oct 2012 12:23 PM Title: Finding Comfort in the Truth
this is a sad story. I know HEA perhaps but oh the sadness
Date: 13 Oct 2012 11:53 AM Title: Realizations and Regrets
Well that picture made that subject a little hard to deny.
Date: 11 Oct 2012 4:41 AM Title: Chapt 29 - That Old Feeling
Welcome back!!!
Date: 10 Oct 2012 2:48 AM Title: Chapt 29 - That Old Feeling
I have missed this story I absolutely love it !!!!!! So glad your back can't wait for more.
Date: 09 Oct 2012 10:58 PM Title: Chapt 29 - That Old Feeling
Welcome Back!!! Glad she is trying to work through the panic attacks. Yea for night alone.
Date: 09 Oct 2012 6:00 PM Title: Chapt 29 - That Old Feeling
She's finally exorcising those demons.
Great writing
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2012 5:17 PM Title: Chapt 29 - That Old Feeling
thank you for the update......they are finally together, I hope they get pregnant and we find out who wants Bella dead
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2012 2:26 PM Title: Chapt 29 - That Old Feeling
more please!
Date: 09 Oct 2012 1:21 PM Title: Chapt 29 - That Old Feeling
Excellent chapter - missed you!
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2012 7:16 AM Title: Reconstructing Bella
J'aime ce premier chapitre !
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 1:03 PM Title: Tale of the Broken Hearted part 2
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Date: 02 Jun 2012 5:59 AM Title: Chapt 28 -- Standing Still
is this story done? are you no longer posting?
Date: 04 Mar 2012 3:48 AM Title: Chapt 28 -- Standing Still
I am glad that Bella finally talked to Edward. But she still needs to quit running when times get tuff. About the holidays, if she does not want everyone there she needs to speak up and say so. I agree with her, she needs to confront Jacob.
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2012 10:56 AM Title: Chapt 28 -- Standing Still
Great story. Hope that Bella will be able to get some answers to her question and that jacob will answer truthfully.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2012 8:16 AM Title: Chapt 28 -- Standing Still
i've been waiting to see how they cope with their relationship
Date: 01 Mar 2012 4:41 AM Title: Chapt 28 -- Standing Still
those two really have a lot to work on, esp their communication skills
Date: 25 Feb 2012 5:47 PM Title: Chapt 28 -- Standing Still
glad to see an update! The confrontation between Bella & Jacob should be interesting.
Date: 25 Feb 2012 1:58 PM Title: Chapt 28 -- Standing Still
Fantastic chapter (even without the smexy times)!
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2012 7:16 AM Title: Chapt 28 -- Standing Still
Great chapter!!!! I love their confrontation and how they finally talked about what thery were feeling. Isn't unethical for the doctor to tell Edward the stuff he did about Bella's recovery he is not suppose to go into specifics that is against doctor patient confidentiality rules.
Date: 23 Dec 2011 1:17 AM Title: Chapt 27 -- Unexpected Visitors
great chapter...loved the surprise...who kne charlie could be xso sneaky...shame on billy for trying to make bella feel bad...hes lucky his son is still alive cuz i would have killed him....please dont make us wait so long for a new updat cant wait to hear about this reunion y
Date: 13 Dec 2011 4:58 AM Title: Chapt 27 -- Unexpected Visitors
ugh billy has a lot of nerve. Glad Bella stood up to him and Charlie was on Bells side for a change.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 7:01 PM Title: Chapt 27 -- Unexpected Visitors
Excellent chapter!
Date: 09 Dec 2011 2:51 PM Title: Chapt 27 -- Unexpected Visitors
Billy has som nerve coming over there and talking to Bella like he did. I do not blame Charlie for throwing him out. I would have too. I would not have worried about hurting his feelings like Bella was.
What is Edward doing there? I am glad that he is. Did Charlie arrange for him to be there??????
Good luck with the fundraiser and Merry Christmas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 09 Dec 2011 7:56 AM Title: Chapt 27 -- Unexpected Visitors
Great chapter. Good to see Bella getting stronger. :)
Date: 05 Dec 2011 10:24 PM Title: Chapt 26 - Coming Out of the Dark
poor thing. She has a long way to go huh? Wonder who the mystery visitors in her memory were
Date: 02 Dec 2011 6:02 PM Title: Chapt 26 - Coming Out of the Dark
Really good story!
Date: 01 Dec 2011 7:39 PM Title: Chapt 26 - Coming Out of the Dark
Love that Bella and Charlie are getting along better.
Date: 29 Nov 2011 9:17 PM Title: Chapt 26 - Coming Out of the Dark
Wondering who is really behind the attacks on Bella? And will Bella and Edward be able to get through this and have thier HEA? Looking forward to your next update!
Date: 28 Nov 2011 9:58 PM Title: Chapt 26 - Coming Out of the Dark
Loved the chapter. Cant wait to see what happens next.
Date: 07 Nov 2011 4:24 PM Title: Rising From the Ashes
I love how you have her withdrawals from the drugs sound like she is burning from how Edward's vemon was burning her inthe movie. Can't wait for more and more.
Date: 28 Oct 2011 7:41 PM Title: Finding Comfort in the Truth
I am so glad that they have finally gotten everything out in the open. Now maybe they can start healing. Thanks for updating.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2011 3:30 PM Title: Tropical Fruit and Twirling Pastries
fab plot so far. Can't wait to read on
Date: 09 Oct 2011 4:33 AM Title: Rising From the Ashes
ok reviewing as I'm reading so sorry if I ramble a bit.
Sucks that they have to take her back to where jake and all are. Going to taint good memories with the bad ones I think. Too bad they couldnt put her under and do a rapid detox.
Wow Charlie and Jake did a number on her before she got married to Edward. Wow crazy hallucinations. Really sucks that Charlie gets to be there considering he was part of her probelms. Recovering addict or not. Wow are they really going to let her talk to Edward?
Date: 09 Oct 2011 4:23 AM Title: With All My Love
ok reviewing as I'm reading so sorry if I ramble a bit.
hmmm not sure how I feel about Leah still being around. How Bella will react. Hmmm At least Charlie realizes some of it is his fault. I wouldnt want to listen to Leah either. Kinda glad he did though to see how much more Aro had done. Glad Leah had it all written down.
Oh wow carlisle has to look it all up? not good. Poor Paul. hmmm Still think Aro is invcolved in her attempt murder somehow. Love forceful Esme. Oh wow....they just get back together and now they want to send bella away? thats not going to go over well.
Uh oh....the cops are going to make this worse I think. Oh wow...not letting Edward be there? Hope jazz can make the cops behave. Ugh Carlisle and Charlie tag teaming Edward cant be good. I could see edward taking her and disappearing. Poor Edward having to do that to her. Forcing Edward to tell her was cruel I think. Sure hope Charlie doesnt get to see her if Edward doesnt. Poor Kids
Date: 09 Oct 2011 4:12 AM Title: Rising From the Ashes
I just found this story, and it is wonderful! The twists and turns are captivating. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for writing.
Date: 09 Oct 2011 3:59 AM Title: Salacious Sensations and Impassioned Pleas
ok reviewing as I'm reading so sorry if I ramble a bit.
I dont think she was stupid and immature. She was confused and hurt. True she should have talked it out, maybe not that night, but before she left. Poor Bella. Really sucks to find out about all liars and manipulators in your life.
Yummy playtime. Can understand Edwards condom reasoning. Lord knows what she's been on. LOL for wanting a clear shower door. yummy shower. Hope jake gets in alot of trouble for drugging her. Poor Bella with all the liars in her life. Poor confused, panicy bella. Glad Esme is there for her
Date: 09 Oct 2011 3:46 AM Title: Finding Comfort in the Truth
ok reviewing as I'm reading so sorry if I ramble a bit.
Cant really blame her based on a naked skankya in the bed. But his story is plausible. Ha ha for Em beating the crap out of him. Man more and more into the story, Aro and Jake have ALOT to answer for. Wow Sounds like James was mostly a good friend. Oh crap they drugged him? Hmmm So did vicky want money for the video?
Well at least its all out on the table now.
Date: 08 Oct 2011 10:08 AM Title: Rising From the Ashes
Yay!!! Awesome update! Thank you for it!! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Thoughts and prayers are with you. It's so difficult losing a loved one. I lost my mother this year after her 3 year battle with Ovarian Cancer. Tough year. But we must forge on and live our lives to the fullest for ourselves, our families, and our lost loved ones.
Will be awaiting the next update.
peach
Date: 18 Aug 2011 9:45 PM Title: Realizations and Regrets
Sad but good story
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2011 10:01 PM Title: Realizations and Regrets
OMG! This story owns me. I truly hope you are able to finish this story. After all you did promise us readers a HEA. :) I hope all is well with you. Gah! My heart is beating so fast. I hope that you do continue this story. Thank you so much for this incredible story!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 4:09 AM Title: Realizations and Regrets
I am so addicted to your story! I started reading it and couldn't stop! Please update soon!
Date: 29 Dec 2010 2:49 PM Title: Realizations and Regrets
I saw the beginning of this story on Twilighted, and when I read that it was here as well, I had to read it. It's a story that reaches out and consumes you! I am so glad to be reading this, and have felt each and every emotion. You are very good! Thanks, and hopefully, we'll be seeing updates in the near future. Thank you again!!
Date: 23 Dec 2010 1:29 AM Title: Realizations and Regrets
this story is amazing
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2010 9:10 AM Title: Realizations and Regrets
I was alittle afraid to read this story but once i started i could not stop. This story is amazing can't wait to see how it ends.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 5:24 AM Title: Realizations and Regrets
wft? this story has me completetly confused :/
Date: 01 Oct 2010 4:16 PM Title: Realizations and Regrets
OH MY GOSH!!!!! That had to be soooo hard for Edward to do. Afte all that they have been through. I really hope she is ok with all the drugs that Aro was giving her. WHY WHY would he endanger her life. Who is trying to kill her? Please update soon.
Date: 01 Oct 2010 9:34 AM Title: Realizations and Regrets
any plans to update soon?!? Im dying to know who is trying to kill bella and if edward and her are able to finally work things out and move past all the BS.
Date: 25 Sep 2010 2:05 AM Title: Tale of the Broken Hearted part 2
So glad that Bella is turning to Esme. She needs a GOOD motherly shoulder to cry on. I hope Aro gets what is coming to him. I hope he does not get to hind behind all his money.
Sorry it has taken me so long to review. Read this chapter when you posted it but just now getting to review. RL sucks sometimes. lol.
Date: 11 Sep 2010 8:14 AM Title: How To Make An Entrance
I'm sorry but I dont like Edward right now. it talks of him cheating!
i hate cheaters. so why the heck does she want to get close to one again.
I also dont understand why bella hasntfiled for a devoirs if i where her and i didnt see or speek with my cheating husband in 4 long years i would have filed for a devoirs and gottin it done by now...
and why is she wanting his love, and touch. who knows what the he** his hands been on.
if i were bella i would be yell at him then file for one right there or maybe file for a devoirs later that night.
But thats just me, lol
I like your story. though your characters sometimes piss me off, thats normal...
oh before i forget what is up with felix, isnt he her lawyer?
Update soon!!!
oh wait the next chapter is already up LMAO
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Date: 24 Aug 2010 11:46 PM Title: Realizations and Regrets
I am absolutely loving this story!!! It's so powerful and intense that I couldn't stop reading! Please post more :D
Date: 23 Aug 2010 9:10 PM Title: Reconstructing Bella
i love this story! great job so far and cant wait for an update. I really hope you don't plan on dragging out the suspense cuz i need to know who is trying to kill bella. Oh, i LOVE LOVE LOVE the banner.
Date: 22 Aug 2010 2:49 AM Title: Realizations and Regrets
Alright I love this story. I read it from the beginning because I didn't want to miss anything. There are so many amazing aspects that all mesh together beautifully. The drama that kept them apart is intense.
The anguish that Edward and Bella feel at being apart again is heart breaking, but so necessary. I'm glad that Edward was strong enough to let her go so that she could get better. I'm really glad that in the end Bella realized that Edward was not leaving Bella.
Great job I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope that your hands are feeling better.
Date: 18 Aug 2010 5:36 PM Title: Realizations and Regrets
Loves it bb!
Date: 17 Aug 2010 9:42 PM Title: A Turbulent Affair
Holy sheets!!! Love your writing and the angst!! Sorry it took me 4 chapters to review! Can't wait to read more!!!
Date: 17 Aug 2010 8:35 PM Title: Realizations and Regrets
My only issue is that I'm sure they are going to have her in with people who chose to be addict and they will treat her that way instead of the victim she is.
Date: 17 Aug 2010 7:56 PM Title: Tale of the Broken Hearted part 2
wow yummy and sad chapter. I still want Jake to have something done to him. Drugging her was so not cool.
Date: 16 Aug 2010 1:19 PM Title: Realizations and Regrets
new reader!!! just finished catching up. love this story. post soon please
Date: 16 Aug 2010 1:08 AM Title: Realizations and Regrets
These kids have a long way to go and well I think with every writer things change at some point with there story. But I'm all about going for the ride with you. Can't wait to see how things work out.
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2010 11:51 PM Title: Realizations and Regrets
Great chapter. Thanks
Date: 14 Aug 2010 3:27 AM Title: Confessions and Consequences
k, so I know i;m kind of late coming in into the story but once I started to read it I can't stop.
p.s. I do not like Felix
Date: 14 Aug 2010 1:55 AM Title: Nostalgic Nightmares
I am really loving this story so far! It's really good and has plenty of intrigue~
Date: 13 Aug 2010 9:02 PM Title: Realizations and Regrets
Thanks for the chapter!
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2010 1:49 AM Title: Realizations and Regrets
I hope this won't be too long of a seperation.
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2010 12:17 AM Title: Realizations and Regrets
Great chapter. I can't wait to find out who is behind Bella's death threats. Please update soon.
Date: 12 Aug 2010 11:38 PM Title: Realizations and Regrets
Thank you, for another amazing chapter. I'm a nervous reck after reading that chapter.
Date: 12 Aug 2010 11:05 PM Title: Realizations and Regrets
AMAZING chappie!
Date: 06 Aug 2010 6:34 PM Title: Shattered Dream & Coal Black Curses
Kinda made me tear up there : But I'm glad that Edward finally calmed down a bit. I still can't mask the pity I feel for Jacob though *.* He must really love Bella. *Sighs* Superb work, as per usual.
Date: 06 Aug 2010 5:43 PM Title: You’ve Made Your Bed..
*Jaw drops right through the floor* Holy...shit.
THAT was not the reaction I was accepting. You took this story to a whole different level and I LOVE it! Amazing work!
Date: 06 Aug 2010 6:17 AM Title: Nostalgic Nightmares
Off to the next chapter I go! Just wanted to pop in a review here to say great job (:
Date: 06 Aug 2010 6:04 AM Title: Difficult Dialogue & Unexpected Nightmares
....FFKSMFD. WHO THE HELL DID THAT?! OMFG. I CAN'T SPEND TOO MUCH TIME ON THIS, CAUSE I GOTTA READ THE NEXT CHAP. GREAT JOB.
Date: 06 Aug 2010 5:01 AM Title: How To Make An Entrance
I want to run Felix over with a friggen truck.
Amazing chapter though! Keep up the great work ;D
Author's Response:
thank you soo much for taking the time to review! I really apperciate you letting me know how you feel about the chapters! I love to see how your responses and takes differ from chapter to chapter! :) xoxo--FunkyD.
Date: 06 Aug 2010 4:37 AM Title: Reunion
Jacob Black makes me freaking day. (:
Great chapter!
Date: 06 Aug 2010 3:50 AM Title: Reconstructing Bella
DAMN! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO THE BABY *.*
Off to the next chapter I go~ Great start!
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2010 5:42 AM Title: Tale of the Broken Hearted part 2
I do really like this story, just a question...
Are you going to update soon? ;) i'm in like desperate need of an update.
Take care.
Author's Response:
Hiya Candy!
real life has been killing me... and i apologize for not being able to update when i promised... i am currently re-writing my chapter cause it was UGh just not good enough.. and then it will be off to the BETA... after she works her magic... well then of course... i will post... i wish i could say this week.. but probably next week at my best.
I will post a teaser sooon.. on the thread here on the writers coffee shop or the thread on twilighted. :) i will def let you know!
xoxo--FunkyD.
Date: 18 Jul 2010 10:36 PM Title: Reunion
Hmmm I don't trust Uncle Aro or Felix. They seem a little eager.
Date: 18 Jul 2010 9:16 PM Title: Reconstructing Bella
I just stumbled upon your story and after the first chapter have added it to my favs list. I hope there is an Edward side because at the moment he seems like a ass.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 8:58 AM Title: Tale of the Broken Hearted part 2
This chapter was really hard, emotionally. Bella's fear and insecurities are literally radiating from these words! I love Edward, I love, love, love that he is so in control and sure about his feelings! But I don't understand that why did they use condom? They are married?! I don't want to sound as a big naive girl, but still... :)
Looking forward to next chapter!
Date: 12 Jul 2010 11:08 PM Title: Shattered Dream & Coal Black Curses
It's really sad. I hope they'll find their way out of this.