Date: 16 Mar 2010 5:04 AM Title: False Allies
Looking forward to the next chapter. Hoping that the next one is posted quickly. I read your kismet and Kindred Spirits story on Fan Fiction. I checked out your other stories when I was finished it and decided to read The Delicate Dance of Marriage. I followed you here to TWCS but read/watch your stories on both networks.
Author's Response:
thank you sooo much for the review.... BUT wanted to make sure you know.. I only have this story and Raging Hearts and Fighting Destines... I have never read nor written kismet and kindred spirits...on FF or anyother sight... but either way.... i am really really happy to have you as a reader! thank you again ---- FunkyD.
Date: 16 Mar 2010 4:30 AM Title: False Allies
There goes Bella just assuming again! She needs to learn to ask strait out! I hope he did not sleep with anyone else but four years is a long time and he could have finally just given up. Evil Cliffie you left us at! lol I look forward to the next chapter.
Date: 16 Mar 2010 3:45 AM Title: False Allies
How could you end it there??? When I started typing this, I could feel the tension in my body LOL I am going to be pacing and in full on panic mode til the next chapter is up.
So, I'm still not convinced about Tanya. And there is something definitely going on with Victoria. Did he marry her in Vegas? he couldn't have cause he and Bella are still married, right? Did he sleep with her and she ended up preggo? I think I'm going to go insane until I find out what happened.
I am sick at what Jacob and Leah did to Bella. Just sick.
You are amazing that you can stress me like this. Good writing skills, chicka :) Thanks for the chapter and you know I'm waiting ;0)
~Susan
Author's Response:
As always you are awesome with your reviews... really. It helps to know i have made a connection with ppl when i write... I will post a teaser on the forum on twilighted forums sooon. you are awesome. xoxo---FunkyD.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 12:21 PM Title: Playing the Part
Oh My GOSH!!!!!! I can not believe this. Aro is not Bella's Uncle. What or who is he??????? I am really sad.....I have been able to go from chapter to chapter and not have to wait for updates, now I have to wait. THis is going to kill me. Bless you heart with so much stuff to do in real life. I have been through building a new house. Good luck. I do hope that you will have some down time to work on this wonderful story. You have done an excellent job writing it. The plot, the feelings of the characters, the supense and the lemons are all wonderful. GREAT JOB!!!!!
Author's Response:
you are soo sweet and amazing for reviewing every chapter.. i love to see what ppl think as each chapter goes by... really i can't say thank you enough. I have posted a teaser on the forum over on twilighted.
the link is on my profile... i should be posting this week. xoxo--FunkyD
Date: 15 Mar 2010 12:21 PM Title: Taking Care of Business
WOW! That must have been really hard for Bella. I hate that she had to do that with Jacob. Maybe one day they can be close again. After Jacob finds someone to love.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 12:21 PM Title: Are You Still Mine?
Who was the guy at the resturant? I am assuming that the guy knock Bella down the stairs when she lost her baby. That is why he asked her about Emmett and Rose's baby. WHY is he trying to kill her? Did Paul kill him? I am so glad that Edward is there for Bella.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 12:20 PM Title: When a Man Loves a Woman
WOW! A lot in this chapter. You scared me a little with Edward's dreams. I can't wait to see what else is going on.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:52 AM Title: Shattered Dream & Coal Black Curses
What was the deal wlith Felix out in the hallway when he tripped her to the wall and would not let her go in?? I do not trust Felix. He is up to something.
What did Bella mean when she was in the hospital and saying ‘the man with the coal eyes, tell Edward, the man with the coal eyes.’ What is she talking about?
I feel really sorry for Emmett in this chapter. Poor thing. But I do feel sorry for Edward, too. He has really missed out on a lot of things with Bella.
I am glad that Edward took Bella back to their suite. I love the way you wrote Edward feeding Bella and bathing Bella. I can't wait to read the rest of this story.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:42 AM Title: You’ve Made Your Bed..
OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!! This is awful!!!!!!! I am off to read the next chapter NOW!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2010 3:01 PM Title: Are You Still Mine?
I hope Edward and Bella will stop second guessing each other and move forward now. Starting with living in the same home. What really happened with Victoria?
Date: 12 Mar 2010 6:45 PM Title: Whispering Truths and Facing Inevitability
GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!!! I am soooooo loving this story.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 2:16 PM Title: Desperate Devotion
PLease let her tell him. Don't let Bella wimp out. Let her be the Brave Bella. The Strong Bella.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 2:15 PM Title: Painful Poses and Pestering Posers Part Deux
Oh please don't let them mess things up. Please let her tell him about the baby before things go to far. Again, I am so glad that I don't have to wait for and update. On to the next chapter.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 2:15 PM Title: Painful Poses and Pestering Posers
Great chapter. I am glad that Jacob did not let his pride get in the way of helping Bella and took her to Edward. I loved the way you described the photo shoot. I am so glad that Edward came up and kissed Bella with Vic standing there. That was priceless.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 2:14 AM Title: Playing the Part
Well all the secrets are about to come out. I can't wait to see what they are.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 1:06 AM Title: Reservation for Explanations
WOW this is getting really intense. So many things going on. I am really loving this story. You are doing a GREAT job writing. I can feel all the characters feelings.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 1:05 AM Title: Deception Unveiled
For some reason I think Felix is BAD news. If he finds Tanya will we find out the REAL truth or will we find out the"truth" that Felix wants us to know. I am glad that Bella has admitted that she still loves Edward. Jacob is in love with Bella, isn't he? OK, I understand that Aro and Jacob kept Edward from finding Bella......BUT four years.......that is still a long time to be away from each other. Did Edward cheat on Bella during those four years? Who were the women in the tabloids with him????
Date: 12 Mar 2010 1:05 AM Title: Nostalgic Nightmares
Ok, here is my theory......Tanya and Felix are working together. Felix put the grave stone in the room. It has to be someone on the inside to get through security.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 1:04 AM Title: Difficult Dialogue & Unexpected Nightmares
OH MY GOSH!!!!!!! Who would do that?????? Does Tanya have something to do with the other mob families that are not wanting to quit the feud??????? I thought when Esme was crying that everyone had thought something happened to Bella because of the way she left her room with all the dishes thrown around. WHO DID THIS????? I am so glad that I don't have to wait for an update. I can go on and read the next chapter NOW!!!!!!!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 1:03 AM Title: Tropical Fruit and Twirling Pastries
So Edward did come looking foe Bella. I would rip Jacob's and Aro's head off if I were her. They would be so dead. I can understand if they did not want Edward to see Bella right after the baby had died and she was not mentally stable but they could have told her sometime in the 3 freaking years they were apart. That was just wrong.
What is the deal with Felix? He is up to something.
Jasper or Rose needs to talk to Tanya and ask her some questions.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 9:15 PM Title: Confessions and Consequences
What is the deal? Did Edward selpt with Tanya or not. When Bella walked in on the nake girl in their bed where was Edward? Still in the shower or in the bedroom. Edward really does seem like he still truly loves Bella BUT if he does WHY did he wait four years? Why did he not come and get her and try to work things out earlier. Waiting four years just does not make sense to me.
I feel so sorry for Bella for losing her baby. That had to be so painfull. Especial after just hearing what she did about Edward. Poor thing.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 9:14 PM Title: A Turbulent Affair
What is the deal with Edward denying he slept with someone. Great job with writing the hot steamy feelings that they are having for each other. I could just feel it myself. The way you wrote Edward at the end of this chapter, I feel kind of sorry for him. He really seems to be hurting.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 9:14 PM Title: How To Make An Entrance
I thought Alice and Jasper were already married. I like how you did the bidding for the dance. Does Felix have a thing for Bella or is he just trying to keep Edward away from her because of the situation. Great job with how you wrote Edward entering the ball.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 9:13 PM Title: Reunion
I like how you have Jacob trying to keep Bella from drinking. That is funny.
What happened to Bella's baby? Where is it?
Date: 11 Mar 2010 9:12 PM Title: Reconstructing Bella
Ok. something I don't understand. If the Cullens have an annual ball, has Bella not gone for the other 3 years that she and Edward have been seperated? Has Edward not tried to contact her? Four years is a long time to be married and not have any communcaition.
Author's Response:
thank for the review! keep reading... everything will be answered.... well almost answered by the time you catch up!
xoxo--FunkyD.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 5:00 PM Title: Playing the Part
I'm really interested to see who the heck Aro really is... and I'm hoping that Bella and Edward will have some kind of relationship epihany or breahthrough
Date: 11 Mar 2010 2:52 PM Title: Taking Care of Business
Bella had to do it...but I still can't help feeling like Edward is the bastard in this situation. He's a man with $$$ and power and couldn't find out what happened to his wife? Sure he wrote, he even went to Italy...but after that he did NOTHING.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 11:00 AM Title: Playing the Part
Hey funky WOW~ So Aro is her what?Dad? Grandfather? or nothing at all? Oh well hey guess we will have to wait and see! and Jacob the little shit should just tell her what he knows about Edward cos hes pissing me off..... I would really love to see what he has got to say about Edward esp if Edward is claiming to be innocent! Well looking forward to the next updates :0) Keep up the awesome writing and Good luck with the move and all x
Date: 11 Mar 2010 7:57 AM Title: Playing the Part
HE's her father HUH! Sorry I had to review and I am new here but I have just read all these chapters and that is my guess huh that uncle Aro is bella's grandfather. HeHe So Ok that man with the coal eyes was reponsible for bella losing the baby but my question is why if Edward wants to get his marriage back on track is he being so quiet about everything. I would think that if my life was in danger and I was attacked that my husband would be all over it and being VERY loud. I mean I understand the whole public shit but come on we get more of a reaction out of him because of Jacob??? I was relived to see that reaction from him when Bella told him about the baby he should get angry and yell and scream that's what a normal red blooded man would do....He just seems kind of wishey washey about everything else and they need to talk (Seriously talk) I know its makes for a boring chapter but its life you cant just stick your head in the sand and wait for shit to pass I'm glad that Bella is starting to come into her own but Edward needs too also
Date: 11 Mar 2010 4:52 AM Title: Playing the Part
What a place to stop!!!! What is he??!!!!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 4:27 AM Title: Playing the Part
oh crap!!! Can't wait to see what is going on!!! Keep writing! :)
Date: 11 Mar 2010 1:56 AM Title: Playing the Part
Great story, but what a meanie for leaving an awesome cliffhanger!
I really like the original plot line; I haven't read anything like this before. Also, you have kept the story moving with a good tempo without leaving out crucial details. I cannot wait for the next chapter.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 1:00 AM Title: Playing the Part
He's your father, no your brother, no your grandfather?? huh huh?? what is it? What is it??
Author's Response:
LOL. i am writing it as I write to you... LOL. I promise to have it updated sooon.
xoxo FunkyD.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 12:48 AM Title: Playing the Part
Apologies I haven't reviewed the previous chapters (and I know how hard reviews are to come by on this site lol) because I have literally spent this evening racing to reach this point.
this story has been incredible - the characterisation, the tension, the action, the emotion, the teasing, the arguments. everything. however I couldnt not put something after the rollercoaster ride of this story - bloody well done! can't wait for more!
Mind you, I've wanted to beat Jacob and Felix over the had with a VERY LARGE baseball bat several times!!
Author's Response:
Cullenfest! Loved your review... it happens to me all the time trying to play catch up with all the chapters that i forget to review! I thank you for taking the time to review it means soo much to... everyone who reviews is awesome and it is always apperciated. Makes an author feel validated and knows the connection that is made with the reader... I apperciate it.
I am working on the next two chapters as i am writing this to you.... so... let's hope the beta team can get this out to you all faster. thank you again! It means soo much.
xoxo--FunkyD.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 12:26 AM Title: Taking Care of Business
WOW~ exactly what she needed to do! He was only hindering their relationship. Way to go Bella make a stand! Thanks for the update :-)
Date: 11 Mar 2010 12:05 AM Title: Are You Still Mine?
Ok this might be twisted but since Leah didn't put out the pills for Bella that evening could Jacob have done it in order to come in and save her and be the hero?
Date: 10 Mar 2010 11:02 PM Title: Taking Care of Business
That had to be so hard for Bella, but Jake forced the issue.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 10:08 PM Title: Playing the Part
hmm very good loved it
Date: 10 Mar 2010 9:36 PM Title: Playing the Part
No he ie her father,oh grap.
but i like it how u write..)
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2010 7:48 PM Title: Taking Care of Business
Whew! That was tough but it had to be done. Now if Edward and Bella can start communicating maybe they can get back on the right track.
Author's Response:
Thank you soo much for taking the time to review! i have updated to chapter 20 now.. i hope you enjoy them! xoxo-FunkyD.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 7:43 PM Title: Taking Care of Business
Great chapter~ Bye Bye Jacob.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 7:38 PM Title: Taking Care of Business
wow she finally let him go to the dogs ! cant wait to see what happens next !
Author's Response:
:) a lot of ppl were waiting for this chapter. Le sigh. let's see if it sticks.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 6:12 PM Title: When a Man Loves a Woman
Awesome story. please update soon!!!!!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 11:25 PM Title: When a Man Loves a Woman
Poor Edward!!!
But what happened in Vegas that made him realize that Bella was the only one.
No use crying over spilled milk.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 10:25 PM Title: Shattered Dream & Coal Black Curses
OH!! I was crying at my desk!!
Everyone in my office thought I received bad news.
If it wasn't Edward's breakdown then it was the explanation of what really happed to Bella.
The last portion of the chapter was so heartwrenching.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 9:53 PM Title: You’ve Made Your Bed..
damn! That was hard to read...
I mean I get how Edward feels but damn, she lost the baby, that's hard on a woman.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:27 PM Title: Desperate Devotion
argh!! Bella what are you doing!! Noone's going to blame you!!
Ugh, I love that I'm so in tune with your characters!!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 4:49 PM Title: Painful Poses and Pestering Posers Part Deux
What the Hell Rose!!! I mean I understand Rose keeping her eye on them but this would of solve a whole lot of heartache if she would of just said something.
Bella shouldn't blame herself; what's done is done.
I hope she makes Edward understand the baby situation though.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 4:47 PM Title: Painful Poses and Pestering Posers
What the hell Edward, he was a little too awkward to "just be friends" with Vic.
And who the Hell does she think she is! I would have decked her and suffer the consequences later...ugh!! She just pissed me off too.
Edward is such a smooth operator!!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 4:45 PM Title: Reservation for Explanations
Oh I like that Edward's fetish is watching her eat!!! That is too cute, hopefully more moments like the described in the previous chapter.
Ugh, I can't even imagine living in the spotlight and you can't even argue without the whole world finding out.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 4:42 PM Title: Deception Unveiled
Oooh, I like yelling Bella.
Better than avoidance and shying away from the problem.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 4:39 PM Title: Nostalgic Nightmares
I can see how she would turn to Jacob; he's been there at her worst.
I like where this is going, reconciliation.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 4:33 PM Title: Difficult Dialogue & Unexpected Nightmares
Dammit Bella stop being so stubborn and say what you mean and mean what you say!!
That was freaky! OMG!! How is Edward gonna take the news.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 4:32 PM Title: Tropical Fruit and Twirling Pastries
Oh I totally get how the sweets can help with that...LOL
Jasper! I'm so happy Bella has him and Emmett in her corner.
She's going to meet Edward isn't she! YAY!!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 4:30 PM Title: Confessions and Consequences
I've got my eye on Felix. He seems a little slippery!
Love all the confliction in this chapter.
A desperate Edward is wonderful!!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 4:28 PM Title: A Turbulent Affair
Poor Edward! DAmmit Bella just talk to him!!!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 4:27 PM Title: How To Make An Entrance
He sure does know how to make an entrance!! phew!!
And Felix what was up with that! talk about overstepping your boundaries.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 4:26 PM Title: Reunion
Oh I think Felix is going to be a problem.
I like that Aro is loving towards Bella.
The love and adoration you protray from the Cullens is comforting.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 12:21 AM Title: Reconstructing Bella
That was extremely hard to read.
So much anger and resentment and mostly loss for poor Bella.
I'm glad she gave JD a break, I was getting worried for her.
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2010 7:50 PM Title: Shattered Dream & Coal Black Curses
Oh good! My breath was caught in my throat when I got to the end of the chapter. I am SO glad there is another one for me :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2010 1:33 AM Title: You’ve Made Your Bed..
Edward is NUTS! She lost the baby through no fault of her own. I hope she kicks his ass to the curb for good this time.
Date: 07 Mar 2010 8:24 PM Title: Painful Poses and Pestering Posers Part Deux
When did Edward sleep with Tanya? Was it before he met Bella or after she left?
Date: 07 Mar 2010 5:40 PM Title: Nostalgic Nightmares
Oh no...now I think it was Emmett that is behind all this shit!
Date: 07 Mar 2010 5:24 PM Title: Difficult Dialogue & Unexpected Nightmares
OMG...did Jacob do it? I think he's the one who pushed Bella down the flight of stairs that killed the baby.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 4:49 PM Title: Confessions and Consequences
Sure Edward didn't cheat, but what excuse does he have for not going after Bella for 4 years?
Date: 07 Mar 2010 2:37 AM Title: When a Man Loves a Woman
These two are giving me a headache. Hopefully Edward will see his dreams are trying to tell him what a Psycho Tanya is and she definately set him up both times.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 2:15 AM Title: When a Man Loves a Woman
I am glad that he can feel and just imagine what all she went through now. Now he has to man up if he wants his wife.
Date: 07 Mar 2010 1:45 AM Title: When a Man Loves a Woman
Glad that they are trying! Still worried about Felix!
Date: 07 Mar 2010 1:41 AM Title: Shattered Dream & Coal Black Curses
OK, when are we going to find out that Tanya set the whole thing up just like she did with Rosalie?
Date: 07 Mar 2010 12:59 AM Title: When a Man Loves a Woman
love it please up date soon
Date: 07 Mar 2010 12:59 AM Title: You’ve Made Your Bed..
Fucking Asshole. She did not lose the baby on purpose, there was nothing that anyone could have done after the fact.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2010 11:17 PM Title: When a Man Loves a Woman
It's about time he started seeing things from her view and realize that there is more to their probelms with all the people involved and I don't trust Aro and Victoria I think they working together to make sure they stay apart.
Date: 06 Mar 2010 9:24 PM Title: When a Man Loves a Woman
The 3 chapters were brilliant
Date: 06 Mar 2010 8:26 PM Title: When a Man Loves a Woman
While Bella has made a ton of mistakes, she certainly has been manipulated. And Tanya! What a piece of work. What a terrible nightmare. I noticed how both E and B hit the bottle.
Date: 06 Mar 2010 8:44 AM Title: When a Man Loves a Woman
Awesome pov from Edward. he shouldn't of let himself get into the prediciment with Tanya in the first place and I am glad he realizes this... She is just one nasty ho! and why has it taken them so long to find her I sure a few chapters back they were going to find her but nothing has come up yet and would she lie? Most probs :-( thanks for the update :-)
Date: 06 Mar 2010 7:51 AM Title: Shattered Dream & Coal Black Curses
Hmmm I wonder where they are going?
Date: 06 Mar 2010 7:14 AM Title: You’ve Made Your Bed..
Ha if he ever finds out it was the pictures of him and Tanya that made her run! Oh well I suppose he hurting too!
Date: 06 Mar 2010 5:50 AM Title: When a Man Loves a Woman
amazing few chapters... Glad that everything is out in the open...Keep writing....can't wait to see more :)
Date: 06 Mar 2010 5:43 AM Title: When a Man Loves a Woman
wow that was a great indepth pov of edward i cant wait to see how they work on their marriage!
Date: 06 Mar 2010 5:15 AM Title: You’ve Made Your Bed..
damn is all i have to say about this chapter !
Date: 06 Mar 2010 1:01 AM Title: Whispering Truths and Facing Inevitability
Wow that was intense. My husband is pissed cause I have been reading this most of the day and refuse to get off the computer. LOL. Oh well only fair since he has his days of WOW non stop for hours at a time.
Date: 06 Mar 2010 12:01 AM Title: Desperate Devotion
She needs to just tell him already because the longer she puts it off the worse he is going to feel about her keeping it from him. When they were apart and she was under the misconception that he had cheated its one thing but now that they are try to work things out she needs to come clean about everything.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 11:18 PM Title: Painful Poses and Pestering Posers Part Deux
I know that Edward will be mad when he finds out about her keeping the pregnancy and the miscarriage from him but lets hope that they can work past it and be happy.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 9:30 PM Title: Whispering Truths and Facing Inevitability
Let's hope the girl follows through. I have a feeling that not only Jacob is in love with her but he is also manipulative.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 7:48 PM Title: Painful Poses and Pestering Posers
Wow that was hot hot hot!
Date: 05 Mar 2010 7:07 PM Title: Deception Unveiled
Oh shit Bella grew a pair! Lets hope that its not to late and that Edward can forgive her for keeping her miscarriage from him. I am really rooting for them to get back together and work all their issues out.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 6:45 PM Title: Nostalgic Nightmares
I can't wait to see what she meant at the end. She KISSED him lets hope she is not going to let them convince her not to give him another chance. Its like when she is with him she starts thinking strait and then she gets taken from him again and she is confused and conflicted.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 6:29 PM Title: Shattered Dream & Coal Black Curses
let me take a wild guess here based on the titles of chapters 15 & 16 edward somehow finds out about the baby and in his stupidity leaves bella...if i'm right and i win could i maybe get to read the actual chappies ...pwetty pwease with a cherry and sprinkle of edward on top
Date: 05 Mar 2010 6:29 PM Title: Difficult Dialogue & Unexpected Nightmares
Ok I will say this she need to quit leaning on Jacob so much if she is going to have a chance at reconciling with Edward. Cause we all know that is what she wants. I can't wait to see what comes next.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 6:23 PM Title: You’ve Made Your Bed..
i love the chapter end noter as well as the author's chapter notes but you seem to be missing the actual chapter...
Date: 05 Mar 2010 5:21 PM Title: You’ve Made Your Bed..
Great title for chapter 15, but that's all I can read. I think something is wrong with TWCSL today. I don't want to miss any of this story so if you could, can you please repost chapter 15?! Thankyou thankyou.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 5:19 PM Title: Desperate Devotion
OK Bella needs to grow the F up!!! Just tell the boy, it cannot be worse than what she is imagining.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 5:02 PM Title: A Turbulent Affair
That was intense! What was a mistake? What she thought happened or him was he really intending to cheat but got caught? What What?! I want to know! LOL so I guess I will keep reading.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 4:56 PM Title: You’ve Made Your Bed..
Ummm wheres the story?
Date: 05 Mar 2010 4:37 PM Title: You’ve Made Your Bed..
emm no worgs came up on screen
Date: 05 Mar 2010 3:59 PM Title: Reconstructing Bella
Wow what the hell! Did Bella misunderstand what was going on when she walked in on that woman or is Edward that much of an asshole. Can't wait to find out.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 6:31 AM Title: Whispering Truths and Facing Inevitability
Oh...a cliffie...I think I have a better idea on who the inside man is...hope I'm wrong...
Date: 04 Mar 2010 9:53 PM Title: Whispering Truths and Facing Inevitability
Ok guess we will have to wait and see huh! thanks for the update :-)
Date: 04 Mar 2010 8:51 PM Title: Desperate Devotion
Gah! she needs to tell him the longer she leaves it the worse it would be! Hey thanks so much for the updates :-)
Date: 04 Mar 2010 8:45 PM Title: Whispering Truths and Facing Inevitability
im loving this story its great cant wait for more