Date: 11 Mar 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 17
Just wanted to let you know that I am truly enjoying your story and hope that you plan to continue it. I'm sorry to hear that you get upset with the lack of reviews. I imagine that it can be frustrating. Unfortunately, I'm one of those that does not review often. However, in my defense, I just found this story and read all the chapters in one day and decided to review at the end. Like I said I really am enjoying the story and hope that you continue to update. Please don't get upset with lack of reviews, that doesn't mean that people aren't reading and loving it. In fact, as long as they keep reading that should give you some indication that we like it. I'm going to add you to my favorite authors and favorite story. I'm also going to check out your published stories, too. Best of luck to you. Hope to hear from you soon!
Date: 13 Nov 2013 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 17
Your story is really good and now that you are getting to a turning point in the story i have caught up with you. Can't wait to see where you are going with this. I figured the wolves would be entering into the picture. Please keep it going.
Date: 16 Feb 2013 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 17
too busy to finish this im really desappointed ;[
Date: 25 Jul 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 17
welcome back! i didn't know if you were going to continue this or not. i'm glad you've got a moment to do some no-pressure writing. i can't remember if this is the only story with such a combination, but it is certainly my favorite vampire edward + human bella + bdsm story. you rock!!
Date: 22 Jul 2012 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 17
Way to leave a girl hanging!!! I don't mind cliffies, but good God, please don't take forever to give us the next update!!!
I love the add in of Peter and Charlotte. They fit perfectly as you have written them!!!
Good luck with your publishing!!! I am in the beginning stages of trying to get a story of mine published so I understand what a total time-suck it can be!!!
Date: 10 Jul 2012 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 17
Won't lie, did a major squeee when I saw your update. Have loved this story for a long time and thrilled to see it continue. I know this is free, I know most authors work or are maybe published so I shouldn't complain, but nothing is worse that getting so into a story and then the author disapears. So thank you for coming back and letting us enjoy this wonderful talent that you are so willing to share. Thank you again, Cheri
Date: 06 Jul 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 17
Welcome back hun. I missed you. I have a few of your Mocked by Faith books but to tell the truth I dont even remember what the story was about. lol I have read so many stories its hard to remember them all. I did just find here on TWCS that they actually keep track of how many times you review. I think that is great so everyone can see when you tell them that you review every chapter they can go and look at your review count to see that you are telling the truth.
I see from you A/N that you really have been busy and quite accomplished too. I would have no idea how to start a publishing house and I am proud to say I knew you when....
I have really been trying to convince myself to write a story, however I have no idea how to start.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 16
I have just found this story and I love it!! I was always on Fanfic.net but with everything that happening over there I thought I had better try out this site, and I am very glad I did! :) You are a great writer and I can't wait for more. I have read a few BDSM themed fics but none with Edward as a vamp, so I love this change, also loving that he can hear Bella's mind..........well most of the time, I always though that would have saved a lot of time if he could. Anyways, keep up the fab work and I am soooo looking forward to the rest.
Lee Anne x
Date: 04 May 2012 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 16
Thanks for writing and sharing this story. I'll go back and read it occasionally. You do a great job of mixing the sexy BDSM side of their relationship with the sweet, romantic parts. I hope to see more of it someday soon.
Date: 19 Feb 2012 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 16
OMGosh!!!!!! Loving this story. Who is the vampire at this party???? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon. You are doing a GREAT job with this story. I can not wait to find out what has happened to Bella in her past, what has happened to Charlie, and why Edward can hear some of her thoughts and can't hear all of them. What happened the time that they were communcating through their thoughts???????? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
Date: 19 Feb 2012 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 14 The new playroom
I loved this chapter. I am so glad that they finally admitted their feelings to each other. Now, when will Bella learn that he is a vampire. And I forgot to ask. when she was at LaPush, did Jake and them smell Edward on her???
Date: 13 Nov 2011 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 5 The Panicking Dom
Hmmm, more clues. In one of Bella's dreams, Edward saw a black blur, and said it was a vampire. Who was it? Oh, I keep forgetting to tell you how much I love how you include Bella's inner thoughts as Edward hears them. I can't wait until Edward finds out that Bella's friends are wolves. It doesn't seem that he knows, but maybe I've read it wrong. Ooops, I almost forgot to say that Bella will undoubtedly get into tons of trouble with Edward gone for three days. I really can't wait to see what happens. =) Kelly
Date: 13 Nov 2011 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom
I'm going crazy imagining what happened in regards to Bella being homeless, and all the other mysteries surrounding her. All of my guesses have been wrong so far, so I'm at a loss. Still loving your story though! =) Kelly
Date: 13 Nov 2011 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
I wonder what the hell Esme meant when she said "Bella doesn't need anymore exposure to us." I'm getting a bad feeling here. There has to be a clue, the answer, or part of the answer in Bella's dream. Edward said that he was being pulled into her dream and something seemed familiar. Ugh, my mind is going places it doesn't want to go. I could just be overreacting. This is killing me! I can't wait to find out what happened and how the Cullens fit into it. =) Kelly
Date: 13 Nov 2011 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
I probably missed some big clue already as to what Bella's past is. All I know is that her not being in school, and not having a job has something to do with it. I wonder how old she is.
I could be wrong, but wasn't something mentioned about a man named 'Charles' being the one who beat the crap out of Esme? Not knowing if you've changed the dates that all the Cullens' were turned, I can't be sure how long Esme has been a vampire. If Bella's dad is the 'Charles' that would not only mean that Esme hasn't been a vamp very long, and that it was Bella's dad that beat the shit out of Esme. If that was the case then maybe Carlisle was the one to save her, and maybe he killed Charlie. Bella could be living off an inheritance, death benefits, or whatever it's called.
If Charlie isn't dead, then it's possible that he and Bella had some sort of falling out. It was mentioned that she put down Mr. and Mrs. Dwyer on her paper work. The things Edward noted from her paperwork, such as her address and that her doctor was on the rez, etc., I have no idea about.
Or how about it was Charlie's father, or great grand father, or something like that. Well whatever it is, it seems that Charlie is dead.(possibly) Esme got so distraught when Edward said Bella's name, it's got to be something like Bella is related to whom ever beat the crap out of Esme.
I'm going to stop now, my mind is swirling. I'm probably wrong about my guesses. I'm having a blast reading your story. What is Bella's past? Can't wait to find out. It's bound to answer all the questions I have.(I hope) =) Kelly
Date: 29 Aug 2011 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh no who's the vampire?! I hope this doesn't mean trouble for them just when he's getting his shit together about how he feels about her. I am curious he knows about the wolves and that she knows why hasn't he told her about him being a vampire and she is his mate? I think it would help her with her fear of him leaving her if he would explain things to her. Looking foward to your next update!
Date: 18 Aug 2011 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 16
glad to see you're back at work on this one! i love this story. i think it's the only vamp edward and human bella sub/Dom pairing out there. it was certainly the first one i've ever read like this. keep plucking along. i'm here for the duration.
Date: 17 Aug 2011 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
I 'm glade for the update.. I will always be wait for the next chapter.. RL gets in the ways, but it is more important..
Chapter was short but really good.. the cliffhanger is not nice.. I hope all is good.. I hate to see what Edward does if anything happens to bella..
Date: 15 Aug 2011 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 16
Thanks for posting your story here! I've been reading this for quite a while but have never been able to figure out how I can review from my phone until last week - freedom! So I can finally depots and tell you how much I enjoy your story :-). I very much enjoy your Edward and also Bella. Being a human, it's neat to see that she is so comfortable in her own skin, talking about her master to Jake as if it's nothing unusual to have a Master - I love that! Please don't give up this story until you are at your end, no matter what reviewers say (-;
Date: 14 Aug 2011 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 16
First of all want to let you know that I read your story some time ago, when I was new to the site. Loved it, kept watching for it to continue, but at the time didn't really understand the importance that reviewing meant to the authors. So I want to appologize to you that I haven't reviewed before. I love your Edward, I love your fragile, screwed up Bella. I love your lemons and I love how you write. Most important I love your story, so please don't think that because some of us are too dumb to review that your story is not appreciated and that I for one can't wait for this story to continue!
Date: 13 Aug 2011 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 16
You made me so happy when I saw your update in my inbox. I have really missed this story. As usual, you brought the heat, and left us with something to look forward to in the next chapter. I really love your writing, and can't wait for the party in the next update! Thanks for the great chapter.