Date: 09 Sep 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom
Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom
You did a wonderful job with this chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Date: 09 Sep 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
I just found this story. I love it... What is Bella hiding that she didnt put charlie down on the app.
Author's Response:
I am glad you found it! the answer to charlie is in there if your looking for it.
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2010 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom
Oh my this is such a great story. Such a differnt twist. A caring new Dom. Not the expert Edward and newbie Bella.
The human vamp is so good can't wait to see an update. Hope there is more soon. Thanks meg
Author's Response:
Yes there most deffinately is more to come! as soon as my beta sends it back you will have it! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 09 Sep 2010 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom
I enjoyed this chapter very much. It was nice to see the conversation between Edward and Carlisle...oh, and the first playroom scene was HOT! I love Master Edward :)
Author's Response:
I am glad to hear that you enjoyed it! Carlisle and Edward needed that rebonding time. Thank you for reading it!
Date: 09 Sep 2010 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom
Aw... Edward is too freakin' cute as a vampire dom. I have a feeling he is going to have his hands full with his newly acquired sub. ;)
Author's Response:
I couldn't agree more! Thank you for reading it!
Date: 09 Sep 2010 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2010 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
Interesting start. Can't wait to see where you take this. Meg
Author's Response:
Thanks Meg, glad you like it! Michele / Nails233
Date: 09 Sep 2010 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom
oh that was luscious ... Bella's list of what she likes that Edward is doing is a perfect description of what I love about your story ... keep going
Author's Response:
I am so happy to hear you are unjoying it! More to come real soon! Thank you for reading it!
Date: 09 Sep 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom
crazy hot girl.
Author's Response:
Why THANK YOU! I am glad you enjoyed it. So much more to come! **snicker**
Date: 09 Sep 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom
I LOVE THIS STORY!! It's quite unique from other fics that I have read about the "lifestyle!"
I can't wait to read more and I hope that you continue this story.
Author's Response:
I am deffinately continuing this story. The fans like you have been great! Next chapter is already written just waiting for it to come back from my so talented beta! Thank you for reading snd review it!
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom
thanks awsome chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you and your welcome. It's so nice to hear when people are enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
Oh god these chapters are going to kill me!!!! They are so hot! :)
So I take it that Edward can read Isabella's mind?
Thank you - off to the next chapter :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing each chapter! I am glad you like this story. I will update as soon as I can!
Date: 08 Sep 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
that was an awesome chapter
loved the emotions from Edward to the punishment he gave
Author's Response:
Thanks for all your reviews! They do mean alot to me!
Date: 08 Sep 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom
Really liked how Bella described Master Edward. Great job look forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review it! More to come real soon! Hope you enjoy the next chapter!
Date: 08 Sep 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
excellent
Date: 08 Sep 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
completely enthralled ... on to read the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom
Whoa! That was an amazing chapter! Everytime you touch on Bella's doubts and fears of Edward rejecting her it makes my stomach twist. Their interactions are hot and intense and all around fucking fantastic. I wonder if Edward will allow himself to fall in love with Bella. I wonder if he will pull back if he finds that she loves him in her thoughts. I can not wait to read more!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing to every chapter! As for wondering well what can I say, I dont want to ruin it for you, but I think you will like where it is going!
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom
Awww this was rather sweet.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! More to come real soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! More to come real soon!
Date: 08 Sep 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom
I love this story it's so much diff than the rest I love vampire dom Edward please keep updating thanks :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I had been searching for a story like this but never found one so I wrote one. I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Date: 08 Sep 2010 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom
very good story! edward treats bella well...loving it!
Author's Response:
Thank you for readng and reviewing! I am so glasd you are enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom
glad Carlisle is coming around. maybe if Esme meets Bella, she wont think she's being abused or anything
Author's Response:
Esme will definately be coming around she just needs a little time to come to terms with her own issues first. Thenk you for reading it!
Date: 06 Sep 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter to get the deets on the dream.
Okay, I'm confused though. I don't know what she did wrong to get punished. He told her to wait to have an orgasm & she did until he told her to have one so what did she do wrong? Not have one soon enough? Was it the questioning him the first time he told her to have an orgasm?
I hope you can update soon, I like these characters so far & am interested to see where their relationship goes & where her experience comes from.
Author's Response:
Sorry for the delay in answering your review. The reason for her punishment was he told her to orgasim and she refused by trying to hold off and started to say so when she said "but" he had to tell her again before she would. Thats disobeying his orders. Someone who lived this lifestyle explained it best as saying Edward's ectasy is hightened but hers so he needs her to finish first to give him a higher orgasm. There are two types tops and bottoms these people who only roleplay the lifestyle (like Tanya) and true dominants and submissives poeple who live it and need it. Edward and Bella are the latter.
New chapter will be posted today. Thank you for readng it and reviewing!
Date: 06 Sep 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
Great chapter. Tanya's disturbing. How weird to have the fam all vying in their opinions on what Edward's sex life should be. But I guess it makes sense and fits with how a physically abused mother and a sexually abused sister would react. Just awkward for Edward.
I hope you'll keep writing;D)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading it! I be writing more right now my beta is going over the next chapter and as soon as I have it I will post it. I hope you enjoy the next chapter.
Date: 05 Sep 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
No, it was very,very far from terrible & you better continue or I'll send my vampire friends after you;)'
Date: 04 Sep 2010 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
Oooh, I liked the opening. I hope you maintain this level of intensity. That was awesome!
Author's Response:
Thank you for Reading it, I plan on keeping the intensity high and changing quickly. I am not a writer who will throw in a fluffy chapter just so I will have a chapter. I am fickle like that. I hope you contnue to enjoy it!
Date: 01 Sep 2010 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
you are gooood.. I was hooked from "Dreaming of Edward" so I knew you got lemony skills.. lol :) this is so fun.. virgin dom and virgin sub haha. aww..Edward was a little rough with the spanking. :( traumatized bella..
all three of them? who was training with her.. Jacob? lol and a Dom?
on with the dream...
Author's Response:
I am so happy to hear you are enjoying my work. These are a lot of fun to write. You are the first to say I have lemony skills, so thank you for that! I concider that the uttmost flattery! Hold on to your booties because I have spent days writing chapters full of them! My poor Beta glo has been sent so many she needs a cold shower every night! That or a large glass of ice water and the air conditioner on high! Either way I am keeping her busy. Thank you for reading my stories and I hope you continue to enjoy them.
As for all three? The answer is in chapter 6 and yes, it is written and going to my beta tonight!
Date: 31 Aug 2010 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
Awesome update!! :)
Author's Response:
Thank You!
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
It was both good and bad for Edward. It was, as he said, supposed to be the perfect, wonderful night, it almost was. But he needed to punish Bella. He might have doubted and even avoided it. He didn't. He is a good Dom, who will do what he has to, even if it's uncomfortable and painful for him.
A bit of Bella's past was revealed, but there's still a lot more for us to find.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. He was really good and did what was needed no matter how he felt about. So much more to desypher about Bella's past. But, the answers are coming. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2010 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
this is good!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am glad you liked it. More to come soon,
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
That was great :) I thought the jacuzzi scene was very good, too bad for the punishment. But Edward wouldn't be one not to fallow through. He is after all a Dom. Awe, it's sweet that he felt bad. ANd she was trying so hard to please him.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! It's nice to hear when people are enjoying what I write. There is so much more to come. Thank you again for reading and reviewing,
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2010 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
hahaha that was hot!!!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it! Thanks for reading it.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
I so loved the chapter! Dom Edward is hot. I am confused, what did she do wrong for him to punish her? What were the answers to the other questions in your author note in chapter 2? More, More, More, can't wait.
Author's Response:
She didn't obey when he ordered her to release, she talked back and tried to wait for him. its not her decission to wait for him. she agreed to do as she was told and he told her to. hence she disobeyed his order. So far everyne who lives this lifestyle has agreed she disbeyed and need to take the punishment for not complying. Yeah since I dont live the lifestyle I had to check into it. I can not tell how much I have learned about this alternative choice. it's very interesting and I found I am fascinated completely.
The answers you seek will be revealed. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
It was great...continue:) I love D/s stories...Just read up on it a little and figure out what you want in it. Seeing as you don't live the life style, doesn't mean that you can't write about it. It's mostly your perspective of it anyways. Keep in mind...there are vast amounts of different types of D/s relationships/ life styles :)
Date: 29 Aug 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
LOVED IT! LOVED IT! glad we got a little of the background on Bella, cant wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Next chapter is at the beta so as soon as it is ready I will post.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
Looks to be a pretty good story. I'm not sure I like the fact that he can read her mind though.
Author's Response:
It peaked my interest, about what if he could? So I thought this would be a good time to try it. Thank you for giving it a shot.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2010 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
That was crue to make us wait (cliffee). LOL Pleas hurry, I almost can't wait.
Author's Response:
LOL okay, i'll pass the word along to my beta. She already has the next chapter, and chapter 5 will hopefully be done tonight. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
Wow what a first.
Author's Response:
Sure beats mine hands down. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
I loved it! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing! I do hope you will continue to enjoy it.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope you continue to read and review it! Thanks again.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
Soo good... keep going please... I would love for them to fall deeply in love... he could turn her and then they couold play forever...
Author's Response:
Careful what you ask for, you just might get it! Thank you so much for a great review and for reading it!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
Great Chapter. I can't wait for details of her dream in the next chapter. I think that Edward is already in love with Bella. Vampires mate for life, right? I loved how you made him feel bad for punishing Bella, but atleast he went through with it. I was afraid that he would not finish the punishment. He did get easier on her toward the end when he should have made those last three the hardest. (I again can speak from experience) Edward is different from my Master because he can hear Bella's thoughts as he is punishing her. I think that that made the punishment situation comletely different than what would happen in the real worls. Again, thank you for a another wonderful chapter, and I cannot wait for the next. Happy writing.
Author's Response:
I can not thank you enough for such a great review. And for understanding what I was trying to convey in her punishment. It should have been rougher, but it's one thing to hear someone say ouch and another to see their pain inside your mind. I felt he had to finish the punishment, if he was truly trying teach her.
As for mating for life? Well there are somethings that never change. But sshhuusshh, dont tell Edward that he is not an incubus, he hasn't realized that yet! But we will all be there when he does.
Thank you for speaking from experience and as always I would love to hear about anything you think I should be putting in! I guess I would be called an interactive writer so everything my fans suggest is taken seriously and if it fits in the storyline I am more than happy to put it in.
Next chapter is already done and is being corrected, as soon as I get it back I will post it! Happy reading!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
Great chapter! I love how Edward is so obsessed with Bella. He may be the dom, and she may not know it, but she is really in control!
Author's Response:
Thank you! If you love obsessiveward than you are going to love possessiveward, I have always felt a submissive had all the control. they are the ones who can stop a scene with just one word. a subissives needs must always be meet and cared for first. If there were no submissives there would be no Doms. I am so happy you saw what i was trying to convey. I hope you continue to follow our adventure to their self discovery. Thank you!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
Man...punished right after she lost her virginity... that was harsh.
Author's Response:
Sorry! At least he went easy on her. But there was a hidden hint there, its a subjective veiw of what she saw in her training but it will be discussed when he figures out who trained her. Thank you for readng and reviewing it.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
Dear me, they both lose their v card and both become upset because of the punishment. It looks like they were made for each other LOL.
Author's Response:
I truly feel they were made for each other. Thank you for reading and reviewing. More to come real soon!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2010 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
I loved the impromptu dressing room head. That was the perfect combo of kinky and hot.
The sex in the hot tub was equally amazing. I love how she surprised him by taking him in fast instead of being timid. Even though he can read her mind, she can still surprise him.
I know the punishment was necessary and not overly harsh, but the whole interaction brought tears to my eyes. I would bet that she was crying more because she was upset with herself for disappointing him rather than the pain. And obviously he hated doing it as well. This scene was written REALLy well.
I'm glad he asked to lie with her as she fell asleep. I think that did more for her than any aftercare he could offer.
Wonderful chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for a glowing review! The secret to surprising him is to not think about what you are going to do. And your assumtions are correct she was more upset with herself for messing up. You will see that in chapter 4. I felt they both needed to comfort each other when it was over. Thank you again.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
I cant wait for the next chapter!! this is getting to be really good and it is only three chapters in...great writing keep it up!!
Author's Response:
Thnka you so much! I hope you enjoy the next chapter! It's already off being corrected and will be back soon. Thanks again!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
Very nice. Update soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I will!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
Interesting, I am surprised that he actually punished her after they both lost their virginity, I understand that it comes hand in hand with the lifestyle, and he felt he had to, but still. He's also already talking about the end of the arrangement. I didn't think he'd be 'there' after only 3 meetings.
Author's Response:
He has no interest in ending the agreement. but he wanted her to know when she did want to leave she would keep whatever money was left was hers to take to start a new life. but i think we all know possessive edward would be hard pressed to let her go.
Thank you for reading it. and i hope you will continue to enjoy it.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
I was wondering about something. When Edward's thinking how the cottage is perfect for her to scream, he also thinks the following, To feel so much desire for something was nothing new for me, but still it astounded me how
desperate I was for her. Is he talking about desiring blood? I only ask because in the first chapter he said that he had never even had an erection before Bella, so I was just wondering. I loved that he is so drawn to her already that he stayed outside to watch her sleep. It makes me hopeful that he will someday allow Bella to see some of his emotions. Edward as a Dom is so hot, but I am already missing his sensitive side a bit. The ending was heart wrenching! Thanks so much for the update- I love this story!!
Author's Response:
Please always free to ask if it doesn;t give toomuch away i am more than happy to tell you.
as for him being desperate. You are correct he was thinking aout his desire for blood especially from his newborn stage, but also he has been desperate to find someone who would full fill his life long dream of being a dominat..
You did read correctly he was a virgin until Bella.
i dont think you will be missing it for very long, some characteristics will show he is not as strict ss he thinks.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
thank goodness for Alice, the punishment was necessary.
Author's Response:
When they discuss her training in detail he will understand better to why she slipped up.
Who doesn't love Alice's ability to keep Bella alive!
thanks for following my story!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
great story please keep updating thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you! no worres the next three chapter are almost done. chapter 4 is already shipped off for corrections so as soon as i get it i will pass it along.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
Loved it very much and very excited to see what will happen next thanks for sharing update when you can thanks......
Author's Response:
Thank you! Next chapter is done and at the beta. Thankfully Dazzleglo is a fanominale beta and doesn't complain when I throw three chapters at her in one day! I will update as soon as I can.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
Wonderful! Loved the idea of the hot tub "deflowering" session & the spanking!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I am so glad you liked it! More to come soon.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
can't wait too see what happens in the dream i loved this chapter thank god alice told him about her visions so he didn't kill her loved it
Author's Response:
torturous i know but the next chapter is written and being betad as we speak. I hope you like it! Thanks for reading and reviewing it!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
Love it! I am so glad that Edward started things early .... just can't get enough of your story!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Your wish for more is duly noted and as soon as i get the next three chapters beta'd you will have them!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
Wow, this is going to be good! Do you update often? I hope so... I really like your characterizations of Bella and Edward... can't wait to see where this is going to go...
Thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
I try to update at least weekly when life doesn't get in the way. Some stories bi weekly depending on how quickly my beta can plow through my contastant onslaught of chapters. The moment I get them I update. I do not wait for a special day. Thank you so much for reading it. Next three chapters are in the works so as soon as I get them you will have them!
Date: 28 Aug 2010 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
Love that Edward has never been with Tanya and the thought disgusts him to the point of thoughts of projectile vomitting. When I picture Tanya, the strawberry blonde, my mind always conjours Lindsey Lohan... while she is beautiful, the things she does make her repulsive. lol
Author's Response:
Holy cow! Now everytime I think of Tanya, I am going to picture that! Too funny! Thank you that really made my night! And thank you for reading and reviewing it!
Date: 28 Aug 2010 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
Odd, he can read her thoughts.
Author's Response:
I thought it would intreging if he could. What can I say, sometimes things just strike me. Thank you for reading it.
Date: 27 Aug 2010 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
I like this story! It is really hot and has more than just sex can't wait to hear more to Bella's past.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Bella's past will have everything to do with how this story unfolds. I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Date: 26 Aug 2010 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
I am really enjoying this and cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Will be updating soon. ;)
Date: 25 Aug 2010 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
cool. ;0)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 24 Aug 2010 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
awesome really like this storyline
Author's Response:
Thank You! Next chapter is at the beta and chapter 4 is in the works. I hope you like them!
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2010 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
Interesting, I thought he was turned when he was 17 and it was over 90 years after that when he met Bella. That would explain why Bella is just getting out of high school with maybe a year of sub training.
I was surprised that he Cullen’s split over him being with Bella. Maybe Esme had issue because of her past as well as Rose. Why didn't Alice see this coming? She knew about in telling B to go shopping or maybe now that B is the picture she saw coming.
I think she may have omitted things from her application not that she was lying. She seems to be evasive. I can't under why she was living in her car unless she just finished her sub training and had to move on. She did say she has been looking for a DOM for a while. Maybe Jacob trained her as a sub and that's where Leah and the Res come into play. I also wonder what it was that Esme could remember reading something about Chief Swan's daughter. Maybe she disappeared for that year doing her Sub training and was hiding out on the Res. Medical records hum?????
I'm glad E has so much control keeping his thirst under control and am especially glad he can read her mind. She seems to second guest herself so much. I was waiting for her to confirm his pull to her.
I can't imagine what happened to her depending on when she arrived to Charlie's house!
I think this is a fu*k awesome story and can't wait to see YOUR HEA. Don't end the story to fast though. It’s hard to get good interesting stories so spread this one out to 100000.... Words. LOL
Author's Response:
No worries I have no intention of finishing it quickly. they have so much to learn about each other. And many of your suspisions are close but you will see in the next chapter. I have just a paragraph left then, its off to be beta'd. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2010 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
I love this spin on the story. The first I've read where E is a Vamp/Dom. Great story so far.
Author's Response:
Thank You! I am so glad you like it!
Date: 21 Aug 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
This is bit different than the other BDSM stories with Edward being a vamp but I like it. You've made Edward a grwon up as well as his morals still in tact example not doing the nasty Tayna etc to learn. So I am assuming that Edward is a virgin since his first erraction was when he saw Bella, but Bella is not a virgin? Can't wait for an update.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yes Edward is a virgin and no he didn't do the nasty Tanya. He spent decades looking for his first sub so he will be differant from alot of dom's who have had many.
Bella Swan is sort of a mystery, not everything is as it appears, but it will be fun learning about her as the story progresses.
So I hope you hang in there with us and figure her out!
Date: 21 Aug 2010 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
Bella's past, something had to happen to her and/or Charlie, something big that the Cullens remembered when Edward said her name. It can't be too traumatic since she was happy and acting normal when on the phone with Leah.
The Cullens are divided and that has to be painful for Jasper mostly but also to the rest. What Tanya did wasn't nice. It's Edward's place to say what he wants and when he wants to, to his family.
Bella and Edward's first session went well. He wants more, much more and will be coming to see her a lot.
It seems Bella has never met the Cullens, does this have to do with her past?
Author's Response:
Its been just over a year since the event so whatever it is. its been long enough that she has accepted it and move on but it did change her personality slightly but it didn't turn her into a sub that came naturally.
Jasper is going to feel the brunt of the split more so than anyone. all the hurt, frustration, anger, and anxiety has to go somewhere.
Definately frequent visits!
She has never met them because her past prevented it.
Thank you so much for reading my story, I hope you contiue to enjoy it.
Date: 21 Aug 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
Thanks for the chapter. I can't wait to find out about Bella's past. So many questions. Keep it going.
Author's Response:
I am glad you are enjoying it. Bella's past will be an interesting part of this story. In too many stories she waltzes into town and everything is hunky dorry. So the though came up that what if it wasn't and tha dah a new story is born. I so hope you continue to read it! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
Liked it very much. Edward being able to hear her thoughts makes it different, but also very interesting and intriguing. We'll have to see how their relationship goes because of this change.
There has to be a good reason why the entire family is so shocked to learn who Edward chose, I hope we find out in the next chapter.
Author's Response:
You will find out a few pieces of the puzzle answered in chapter 3. There is a few good reason why they dont want it to be her but they dont all share the same reasons. I am currently working on chapter 3 its taking longer than I had hoped because I seem to have a addition problem. I just cannot stop adding to it. Hope you like it!
Date: 21 Aug 2010 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
aww poor Bella didnt get fkd. boo hoo noooo..she just got sucked into a vortex of southern regional pleasure. lol
Author's Response:
She most certainly did, but no worries I am writing their first time as we speak. I hope everyone enjoys it! Thank for reading it!
Date: 21 Aug 2010 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
really liking the story so far, its smut but very well-written. Liking it sooo much.
Author's Response:
Thank you! What can I say my freind likes for me to write her smut and I happily oblige her. Thank you for giving it a chance. I hope you enjoy the adventure I have planned.
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
This was enjoyable. I hope Edward is not going to be too rough a dom.
Author's Response:
He's had enough years of research to know not to hurt her in a nonpleasureable way. Thank you for reading it and I hope you continue to enjoy it!
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
Leah huh? Interesting, I'm surprized that Edward didn't ask her about the phone call or La Push clinic whatever. I'm also wondering why she was living in her truck.
As for this chapter, I too am wondering why Edward didn't use her mouth, unless of course he wanted her to teach him how to masterbate..:)
Author's Response:
Wow you are the first to pick up on the truck hints. As for the phone call he can't ask her, she doesn't know he was watching and hearing it. He will ask her about the clinic but he is asking her questions daily in his attempt to get to know her slowly.
The masterbation was a lesson for them both. Since he had never masterbated he had no idea how he liked it. So he taught her how he liked it by doing it with her. this way she would know his prefferances and he would know them as well. Not to mention he also admitted he had never done it because he never had the desire to do it, with Isabella he finds himself wanting to do things that in the past repulsed him,
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I hope these explanations made sense.
Date: 20 Aug 2010 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
She wants to serve so badly. Why is she not telling the truth on her app??? She is going to get a spanking.
Author's Response:
I will give you a hint - she is telling the truth but you can read for yourself in chapter 3. She does want to serve badly and she hasn't lied about anything, yet. Thank you for reading it and for reviewing. I hope you continue to follow this adventure to self discovery. Thank You again!
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
Maybe she was orphaned and lived with Jacob? Or maybe she was married. I'm wondering what's up with the address, did she not think he was going find out where it was?
Author's Response:
You are more observant than you know. Chapter 3 will get to bottom of the address issue. the more I reread it the more I add so I will get it done as quivkly as possible. I will do my best to keep it fresh and new with each chapter. Thank you so much for reading it and letting me know your thoughts.
Date: 20 Aug 2010 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
eddie needs to step up his game. bella is spending too much time going into 'self doubt' mode. but i am sure she will outgrow that soon.
Author's Response:
He will definately be stepping up his game as he performs all the acts he has only seen. He will be fixing her self esteme as she encounters them. When he sees in her thoughts that she is doing it, he makes sure to say or do something that shows her she is good at what she does. He is going to help her grow more confident. Thanks for Reading it and as always i love hearing what you think.
Date: 20 Aug 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
Very nice! Love it and can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am so glad you love it! Next chapter is almost done. Please feel free to tell me you thoughts.
Date: 20 Aug 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
well that ws some first meeting! and why is it that eddie can't keep bella?
Author's Response:
He will if he has anything to say about it! Thank you! I hope you continue to follow it.
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
Whoa. Hot.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 20 Aug 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
Another great chapter! I think I am really going to like this story. I love Domward and all of his smutiness. I am very familar with the BDSM world.
This is a moot subject now, but Bella should not have called Edward "Master" until his collar was around her neck. You are requied to call the Dom "Sir" or "Mr. or Ms. blah blah" before that collar is around your neck. If you do, it will result in one painful ass the next day!! I speak from experience.
Again, love the story and this chapter. I have read so many BDSM stories about human Edward and Bella. I love your concept of Domward the "Vampire" and Bella the "human". Eagerly waiting for more.....
Author's Response:
I just figured out where I slipped, I was being so careful up to the email. Thank you so much for pointing that out and I will go back and fix it. When I know something is wrong I always want to correct it. Thank you and always feel free to tell me if I get it wrong. I believe in portraying the lifestyle in a good light, so any pointers you have are always welcomed.
The next chapter si being written as we speak. so once my beta corrects it I will post it. Thank you again.
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
Loved it and by Rosalies reaction I would say she was raped update when you can thanks.....
Author's Response:
There is an issue with Rosalie but because I have issues with the abuse it will vary slightly. Thanks for reading it, and I hope you enjoy the next chapter I am working on.
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
Fucking loved it!!! This may very well be one of the best Domward's I have ever read. And the fact that he is a vampire is just the cherry on top. His control is amazing, and I love the way he plays Bella's body like a finely tuned intrument. I am glad you gave him the ability to read her thoughts because it gives both him and the reader so much insite.
Now, Bella's past...hmmmm. Maybe Charlie found out about her wanting to be a sub and kicked her out. Maybe she moved to LaPush and stayed with Jacob and Billy till she found a Dom. That might explain her address in the middle of the bay. I might think she has an abusive past except that she is very trusting of Edward immediately, and I don't think she would be that comfortable if she had been taken advantage of.
I can not wait to read more. I am already throughly addicted to this story. It is my new mental crack!
Author's Response:
Oh, Wow thank you for such glowing compliments! I truly hope to never disapoint you! I am an interactive author so please let me know if there is something you would like to see and if I can fit it in, I will do my best.
You did correctly guess one part of Bella's past but I can't say anymore than that, since it would ruin the surprise. The reason she is so trusting of Edward is because of the dom who trained her. I am not saying who, but the person who showed her how to be a sub trained her that even though the sex is rough and pleasurable it's always done with care and responsibiliity.
As for your addiction, I hope to have your next fix of 'mentsl crack' posted by the end of the weekend if my beta can get it done in time. she tries her best but since I send her massive amounts of chapters for all my stories sometimes it takes a little longer. I hope you enjoy it as much as the first two!
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
i feel so bad she has to question herself every time :( i hope Edward can take away all that self doubt
Author's Response:
He will, but he is doing it slowly. He is smart enough to know not to be too harsh with her so not to scare her off. Being her first Dom puts a lot of pressure on him to take it slowly with her. Thank you for reading my story and I hope to hear from you again!
Date: 20 Aug 2010 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
I am so excited about this story- I love the plot & adding some intrigue about Bella's past is perfect! At this point Edward is so unemotional, which I guess at this point is to be expected. I only hope that along the way this story ends up like your others have, with the two of them madly in love. And a little possessive, protective Edward would be great as well! I'm not a big Tanya fan, so the idea of her training him was a bit disturbing, but at least he wasn't WITH her. And I LOVE that despite the story line, he still is experiencing everything for the first time. His POV is always my favorite as well. I was thrilled you wrote another chapter so quickly. Thank you so much for the great writing- I quite literally can't wait to read more! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing. I will do my best to live up to your expectations. From reading the rest of my stories, I am sure you have guessed I am a hopeless romantic! Tanya is not my favorite either but I could see her doing it to get his attention. Yeah, it didn't work. Not in my stories anyways. I cringe when I read summeries about them being together.
I hope to get the new chapter up just as quickly. It's almost ready to be betad but every time I reread it I add more. So I hope you like long chapters.
Thank you again!
Date: 20 Aug 2010 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
I have no idea what Bella's past is...but Edward is one lusious Dom!!!
Author's Response:
Isn't he though! Thnak you!
Date: 20 Aug 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
I like this story can't wait for more please keep updating thanks :)
Author's Response:
I will do my best not to make you wait. Chapter 3 will be finished tomorrow then after glo betas it, I will post it immediately. Thank you for giving it a shot.
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
This is good, looking forward to the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
Thank You! Next chapter is almost done, I hope you enjoy it!
Date: 20 Aug 2010 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
YAY!!! he collared her!!! loving it!!! :D cant wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading it! I am so happy to hear you are enjoying reading it as much as I am enjoying writing it. Chapter 3 is almost done, I will post as soon as I can. Thank for reviewing it.
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2010 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
I caught what changed in the timeline. Is it the family spilting on sides. Esme does not like Edward's lifestyle?
Author's Response:
Esme doen't like his lifestyle one bit and there will continue to be a rift between the family for a little while, but its not what changed in the past. the hints were very subtle, the answer to just the first piece of the puzzle is in chapter 3. I am almost done writing it. Thank you for reading it and reveiwing. I can't wait to see your future reviews to see if you guess everything that made up the new submissive Bella. Thank you again!
Date: 19 Aug 2010 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
Continue definitely!
Author's Response:
I am very excited about continuing this, so I hope you will continue to read it. Thank you for checking it out and for reviewing.
Date: 19 Aug 2010 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
Loved it. Interesting and promising to be different. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am striving to make this as differant as possible. Next chapter will be up soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 19 Aug 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
i like it so much wanted to review twice lol can't wait for next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you again! It's awesome that you reveiwed twice! You are the first to reveiw any of my stories twice. I am waiting for the chapter to come back from the beta then I will post it. chapter 3 is almost done then i'll send it to glo for her awesome betaing. Will update soon. I hope you continue to enjoy it and keep tell me how you feel.
Date: 18 Aug 2010 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
Definitely continue!!!
Author's Response:
I will!!! Thank you for reading it! I hope you continue to follow it. I love excited reveiws, so feel free to tell me how you feel as the story progress.
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2010 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
Yes I like it, sounds very interesting! I await your updates. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read it. I have another chapter being beta'd before I post it and I have started writing another one. i hope you continue to enjoy the story! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2010 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
Oh Good Gosh-that was fabulous! So intense,erotic, and totally an original storyline. Please continue!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I am so glad you like it. there will be more to come. thanks again!
Date: 17 Aug 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
I am ready for more Domward. Is Bella going to eventually going to find out that Edward is a vampire......I guess I will find out soon enough.
Author's Response:
Yes she will. and he will find out what she has been hiding. Thank you so much for reading it!
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
oh my god that was good like really good and if you stop writing it i will have to hunt you down lol i loved it and can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
All is good I have already sent the Beta ch 2 for her to check then I will post it! I am so happy to hear you liked it!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
I LOVE this idea- a virgin vampire Dom who (I'm assuming) just had his first orgasm and not only wants a human sub, but found one who's never had a Dom before- it's perfect!! I certainly hope you choose to continue as I can't wait to read more!! :)
Author's Response:
You assumed correctly. thank you for reading this story. Chapter 2 is at the beta being primpt and proped. I will post asap.
Date: 16 Aug 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
fuk yeah I like it. vanilla popsicle...mmm
Author's Response:
LMAO, Especially when it comes with an edward popcicle stick! God my mind is in the gutter after writing chapter 2! Thank you for reading it.
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
please continue it's a unique story and I don't thinks it's been done before.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Like you I have never seen one like this so I hope you continue to enjoy it!