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Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

continue, please. i likie. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you So much for reading it and reviewing the next chapter will be up once it is beta'd, it all written and ready.

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

Hi Nails233!  After reading the first chapter, my thoughts were that the story would make more sense if Edward was estranged from the rest of the Cullens and somewhat adrift (while still maintaining the vegetarian lifestyle and having access to all Cullen resources, such as money and J.).  Just my two cents!



Author's Response:

Your two cents are always welcome. His character as always been the third wheel in the family so that won't change here. In the next chapter you will see more of just how much he does without their consent and things they never knew he liked or was doing. :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

Please continue sounds wonderful so far and very exciting wink wink :)  Why would she not put Charlie down on her paper work maybe she was afraid that if someone saw his name on it they would pass her by?????



Author's Response:

It all stems from the event, which I cannot tell you about just yet but it will come out. It gets more puzzling in the next chapter. but like a puzzle if you put the peices together they do start to push you towards the answer. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. Thanks for your reveiw.

Reviewer: hcullen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

i loved it u should definatly continue



Author's Response:

Thank You!

Reviewer: suziefknq Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

Love it! Please continue?



Author's Response:

THANKS! I will, how can I say no to all you nice people who are screaming for more. LOL seriously, now that i know everyone wants it I am going to continue it. Thanks for reading it and reveiwing.

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

I can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I am workig on it very hard to keep it up to your expectations. It will be ready asap, as soon as the beta cheks it out. Thank you so much for reading it!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

Holy hell!!!!  Please continue!!!!!  If there is a God above and a devil below, you WILL continue this story!  This was an absolutely amazing beginning and I can not wait to see where you take this!!!  Holy shit!  That was so good, I may need to read it again!



Author's Response:

Thank you for such a glowing reveiw! and yes I will be continuing. I just wanted to make sure everyone liked the idea. But everyone seems to really like it so I am going to be contnuing. Thanks for reading it!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

OMG - Please continue this story!!!!!  This was hot and sexy and wonderful!

Thank you!!!!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked it! I am really enjoying writing it! I hope you continue to follow it! 

Reviewer: VABelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

please please continue...this was a great first chapter. I'm currently reading "War of the Worlds" so i am amazed that you have so many stories in progress yet your able to update regularly. I'm definitely adding this story to my favorites and you to my favorite author list.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Yes writing is my addiction. I have a story for every one of my moods. It makes it easier to update regualrly when you like what you're writing. Thank you for reading more than one of my stories! Thank you for adding me to your lists!

Reviewer: AlicecullensBFF Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

I wonder what Bella did...I can't wait to find out.  I already like this story and I want to read more.  Update soon :)



Author's Response:

I can't you yet but its going to be really good. I worked out the entire storyline so i have lots to write. chapter 2 will be going to the Beta tonite and as soon as its back I will post it. I dont wait for a special day. I hate to make people wait. Thank you for giving it a chance!

Reviewer: Virpukka Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

This sounds really promising, please continue!!



Author's Response:

Thank you and I have already decided to continue since you fans have been so wonderful how could I not. Thanks again for reading and reveiwing

Reviewer: elizabethjulia Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

Holy crap, this will be good....more please!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! More coming your way as soon as the beta does her best!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

OH I LIKE THIS.. I have often wanted a Vampire Dom Human sub..  Well, without the kiddnapping..(Although I like those too.)  hahah.. This should be a lot of fun... Can't wait for the next chapter..



Author's Response:

And here I thought I was the only one looking for one. Its nice to know there are others out there. Thank you for reading it!

Reviewer: wendemyre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

WOW!!! That was great please continue!!!! I can't wait to read more....



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading it and reveiwing. I am so happy you like it. next chapter will be up as soon as its ready.

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

YOU NEED TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!! I really enjoyed the first chapter!



Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear it. And Yes there will be more. Thank you for checking it out!

Reviewer: beverlie4055 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

love the story please keep writing it



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I will!

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

Continue!!!!!



Author's Response:

OKAY!!!! LOL, seriously, I am going to continue. Since everyone is so excited, how can I say no. Thank you for reading it!

Reviewer: Anadabyel Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

Mmmm very sexy so far!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I hope you keep reading it!

Reviewer: carlie cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

OMG I love it very original please keep writing & posting daily.......LOL I can't wait to read more. thanks :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I can only promise to write daily, but I cannot promise that my beta can do it that fast. Like me, she takes her time to make sure I don't screw up, LOL will get the new chapter to her pronto and as soon as I get it back you will have it. You have my word!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

It's too funny that I was searching for this kind of story yesterday! Thx so much for writing this , can't wIt to read more, I'm hooked already! Please continue!

Author's Response:

It would have been published yesturday if I had stopped sending my beta changed chapters! I couldn't help myself, I wanted to make it as good as possible. Thank you for reading it and reveiwing!

Reviewer: tickledpinkstamper Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

Please continue, I'd like to see where you take us on this journey.



Author's Response:

We are in for one hell of a journey! I hope you like the twist and turns I have planned! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and reveiw!

Reviewer: NYtoLAGirlyx3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

wow...

i really like it and i can´t wait for the next chapter.

please update fast

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I will do my best to get it to you quickly!

Reviewer: crhunt123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

It was great and please continue as fast as possible!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'll do my best!

Reviewer: pnkats Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

no i liked it and hope you continue it



Author's Response:

After such a warm welcoming I will definately be continuing. All these reviews are driving me to write quicker, but not at the expence of the story quaility. So an update is in the near future. Thank you for letting me know you liked it. Happy reading!

Reviewer: Flynnstones Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

definately continue. love that he can read her mind



Author's Response:

I thought it would be a nice change of pace for him to read her thoughts. Thank you for following my stories.

Reviewer: Leibeezer Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

I think your off to a great start! I can't wait to see what's going to happen with Bella and Edward next.  Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: BethyBooW Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

Continue, continue, continue!



Author's Response:

I will,

I will,

I will,

Thank you so much for your encouragement and for reading it!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

I beg of you to continue!!! My favorite "Edwards" are Edward as a vampire or Edward as a dom & you have combined both! Love the story!



Author's Response:

Those are my two favorites too! You can count on me to continue in fact chapter 2 is just about ready once my beta gives it the two thumbs up I will post it. Thank you!

Reviewer: sherriola Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

I like it.  in fact, I'm surprised there hasn't been more Edward as Vampire and dom type stories.  It makes perfect sense.  I like the beginning so far and can't wait to read more.  i've already got questions even.  Great start.



Author's Response:

I know what you mean. I have been watching for one and when I couldn't find one I wrote my own. He is so possessive and controlling it just seems plausible. As for any questions I am always will to answer them, as long as they don't give away too much to the storyline. Thank you for reading it!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

Loved it andvery intersted to know what happened to her update when you can thanks....



Author's Response:

You are the first to pick up on the fact that something went wrong in the past to change how it played out! There will be an explaination into what happened to her. I am not sure if anyone has picked up on the one line that I slipped in. Thank so much for giving it a chance.

Reviewer: dearjae Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

Really really like this!  Good smut, but also a really good story so far!  Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I will continue to merge the two (smut and a story) I have it planned so it will be a happy medium. I hope you continue to enjoy it. 

Reviewer: pumpkinmykitty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

Please continue, I can't wait to see where this goes!!



Author's Response:

Your wish will be granted, as soon as I have the next chapter beta'd I will post it. I am not one for holding my chapters for a certain day. So hopefully, it will be done quickly. Thank you for your review and for reading it.

Reviewer: nekabie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

An interesting twist on the D/s relationship.  Looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading it and reviewing it. I wanted something differant from the rest, so you can count on it being unlike any other you have read. Thanks again i hope you continue to enjoy it.

Reviewer: TheTTys Diamon Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

You should countine this story. I have a feeling that it is going to be a romance/drama story Please countine this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your thoughts, I have already started Chapter 2 and I will tell you the way the storyline is plotted you are correct, there will be a lot of romance and drama. Since it's being accepted so well I do plan on continuing it. Thank you so much for reading it.

Reviewer: Alice R Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

:D :D :D 

Please please please continue!!! :) :) :)

:D :D :D 

Please please please..*

:D :D :D 

Alice R..*



Author's Response:

You got it! It's nice to see so many people are giving this story a chance. I know it doesn't follow the usual type but that was sort of the point. So many of these stories are all human and I tend not to read many of them. I guess I like my vampires too much. Thank you for taking the time to read it and to review. The next chapter is almost ready so I will post it as soon as it's done.

Reviewer: fairytaleland Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

Great chapter.  Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I will get the next chapter up as soon as I can.

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

Oh wow, this is a great start, keep going!



Author's Response:

Thank you for giving it a shot. I am very excited about this story so I hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: glo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

You so have to continue!!!



Author's Response:

You got it! Chapter 2 is almost done just a few more tweeks.

Reviewer: lonely_angie17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

a really good start!!! loving it!! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you SO much for giving it a chance and for reveiwing!

Reviewer: CullenGirl09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

I like this!  It's gonna be interesting to see a BDSM story that's not all human like so many of them are!



Author's Response:

That's exactly what my freind said! I have only seen one other vampire dom/sub story and its funny and edward is the sub. I could never write it like that. The story as I have it outlined will be differant from all other I have read. Chapter 2 is going to the Beta tonite so i will post it as soon as it gets back. Thanks for giving a shot and for reveiwing!

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