Date: 25 Jun 2011 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
i really enjoy your stories. i am loving this one as well and look forward to more
thank you
Date: 25 Jun 2011 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 2
man renee is a bitch. all comes down to her being jealous of her own daughter. she should realize charlie loves each of them the way he should. my goodness renee get over it
Date: 25 Jun 2011 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue
wow i am on pins and needles i think i want to know what happened more than edward. love it
Date: 04 Apr 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
yummy chapter... Where is seth though? thought he followed her to the park?
Date: 04 Apr 2011 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter. Wow Lauren is one hell of a cunt aint she.
Date: 04 Apr 2011 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 3
stalker....of course. Wow those kids all had it rough. Glad the other families were there for each other.
Date: 04 Apr 2011 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 2
poor charlie and bella
Date: 04 Apr 2011 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue
great start. Cant wait for more.
Date: 27 Nov 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 5
yes really love your story, added to my favorites !!!! the kids are so adorable, and sexy Edward dad, yummy !!!!!
Date: 23 Nov 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue
What a lovely story, I hope you continue it.
Heard about it from a rec'd by the author of People Like Us.
Date: 23 Nov 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
I really like this, hope you continue.
Author's Response:
Hi there! Thanks so much for reading! If you'd like to continue reading the story, there are 50 chapters posted over on FFN under the same title: The Path We Choose by les16. I just haven't had time to get the story updated over here again. If you'd also like to take a look, I've just started a new story called The Greatest Gift on FFN, too. It's very different from anything you've read before and I'd love to hear what you think of it!
Thanks so much for reading and for taking the time to review. I love hearing from you and hope you'll read both stories over on FanFiction . net
les16~
Date: 16 Nov 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow, what a wonderful feel good story, I am dying to know about the prologue and see what happenes with these two beautiful people and the kids.
Thank you for a wonderful story. Oh and by the way I am piming you out to everyone here on People Like Us.
Fiorella
Author's Response:
Hi there! Thanks so much for reading! If you'd like to continue reading the story, there are 50 chapters posted over on FFN under the same title: The Path We Choose by les16. I just haven't had time to get the story updated over here again. If you'd also like to take a look, I've just started a new story called The Greatest Gift on FFN, too. It's very different from anything you've read before and I'd love to hear what you think of it!
Thanks so much for reading and for taking the time to review. I love hearing from you and hope you'll read both stories over on FanFiction . net
les16~
Date: 14 Sep 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
i really hope you update soon i can't to see them have family time, and for edward and bella to get closer!
Author's Response:
Hi there! Thanks so much for reading! If you'd like to continue reading the story, there are 50 chapters posted over on FFN under the same title: The Path We Choose by les16. I just haven't had time to get the story updated over here again. If you'd also like to take a look, I've just started a new story called The Greatest Gift on FFN, too. It's very different from anything you've read before and I'd love to hear what you think of it!
Thanks so much for reading and for taking the time to review. I love hearing from you and hope you'll read both stories over on FanFiction . net
les16~
Date: 14 Sep 2010 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 4
Aw poor edward has been through so much, and it's so sweet how he wants forever with her already!
Date: 14 Sep 2010 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
i am so anxious to find everything out!
Date: 14 Sep 2010 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
i love how she has a great dad and friends, but her mom is such a bitch!
Date: 14 Sep 2010 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue
ahh, i have to start reading this, i haven't been able to because of school and other updates, but i'm exicted!
Date: 27 Aug 2010 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
Thanks for writing a wonderful story even though I still don't understand the problem that her mother had with her and every other person waht are the other things that happen to Bella to make hurt so much please update soon
Author's Response:
Hey there~
There is lots to Bella's story and you will get to hear all of it as we go along that will hopefully help you understand more. There are 39 chapters of this story posted on FFN (yes, its a REALLY long story!) and I hope to update regularly over here to get you caught up. There is also a blog for the story www (.) les16-thepathwechoose (.) blogspot (.) com so check it out and let me know what you think of it. You'll find lots of pictures and other interesting things on there. (just take out the parentheses and no spaces from address above) Thanks for taking the time to read and leave a review. Hope to hear from you again soon!
les16~~
Date: 26 Aug 2010 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 5
Such a cute chapter! How long are you going to hold out on us before opening the curtain on Bella's back story? Never mind, this fluff makes it worth the wait.
Author's Response:
Hey there~
So glad you liked the chapter. There is lots more to happen before you get all of Bella's story. Hope you will go along with the ride until we get there. There are 39 chapters of this story posted on FFN (its a REALLY long story!) so I'll try to update here regularly to get you caught up. There is a blog for the story: www (.) les16-thepathwechoose (.) blogspot (.)com where we have lots of really cool things for you to look at including pictures of everyone. Give it a look see and let me know what you think of it! I love it and we've worked really hard on it. Hope to hear from you again soon, thanks so much for reading and leaving a review!
les16~~
Date: 26 Aug 2010 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
im happy hes falling for her he needs happness and the kids need someone to love
Author's Response:
Hey there~
So glad you liked the chapter! Things will definitely be moving along for our Edward and Bella. I have 39 chapters of this story already done and posted on FFN so I'll post here regularly to get you caught up. More to come really soon! Thanks for taking the time to read and leave a review. I really enjoy hearing from you!
les16~~
Date: 26 Aug 2010 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love it!!! Keep the chapters coming...can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Hello there~
So glad you liked this chapter! Things will definitely start moving along now. I have 39 chapters of this story over on FFN so there is lots more to come and I hope to update over here regularly to get caught up. Thanks for taking the time to read and leave a review, I love hearing from you!
les16~~
Date: 26 Aug 2010 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
I hope you update soon - this is really good
Author's Response:
Hello~
So glad you like it so far! I'll update again really soon so I hope you'll tell me what you think of it! Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
les16~~
Date: 26 Aug 2010 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
I liked EPV - great chapter
Author's Response:
Hello~
I had a feeling you all would like to hear from Edward! Glad you liked some of his back story. More to come soon. Thanks for reading and for the review!
les16~~
Date: 26 Aug 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
great chapter
Author's Response:
Hello~
Thanks for taking the time to read and leave a review! I really love hearing from you. I didn't mention before that there is a blog for the story:
www (.) les16-thepathwechoose (.) blogspot (.) com
Check it out and let me know what you think of it. There's lots to look through!
les16~~
Date: 26 Aug 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
this is shaping up to be a really interesting story!
Author's Response:
Hello~
Bella's story is far from being told. There is a lot to her so I hope you will hang in there with me until you hear it. This story is really long, there are 39 chapters posted over on FFN already and I hope to update here regularly to get caught up! Hope to hear from you again soon!
les16~~
Date: 26 Aug 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue
great chapter
Author's Response:
Hey there~ Thanks for giving my story a try! Hope you like what's coming next.
les16~~
Date: 26 Aug 2010 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 4
omg keep it coming i so want these two together and make this a long story you are a great writer i await your next chapter
Author's Response:
Hello~ So glad you like what you have read so far! Yes, this is a VERY long story! There are 39 chapters posted over on FFN so I hope to update over here regularly to get you caught up. There is also a blog for the story...www (.) les16-thepathwechoose (.) blogspot (.) com
Check it out and let me know what you think! Hope to hear from you again soon!
les16~~
Date: 23 Aug 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 4
i so hate lauren! but at least the got the 2 most adorible kids out of it! cant wait till the next chatper
Author's Response:
Hi there! Yeah, Lauren is a piece of work, you will definitely see her again farther on in the story. I am really glad you like what you have read so far. There are 39 chapters of this story posted over on FFN and I hope to update over here regularly to get you caught up. Thank you so much for reading and for taking the time to leave a review. Hope to hear from you again soon!
les16~~
Date: 23 Aug 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
love it!!
Author's Response:
Hello there! I am so gald you are liking the story so far. I have 39 chapters of this chapter posted over on FFN so I hope to update here pretty regularly to get you all caught up. Thank you for taking the time to read and leave a review. Hope to hear from you again soon!
les16~~
Date: 22 Aug 2010 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
What a great chapter.. I love it
Author's Response:
Hello again~ Yeah, I figured everyone would like to hear from Edward. He's up next as well and it won't be long until a new chapter is posted. Don't forget there are now 39 completed chapters posted over on FFN. I hope to post here pretty regularly to get caught up. Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review. I love hearing from you!
les16~~
Date: 22 Aug 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 4
I am really enjoying this story so far. i can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
So glad you liked hearing from Edward! He's up again next and it won't be long until I post again! Hope you like that chapter as well! Please be sure to let me know, I really love hearing from you!
les16~
Date: 21 Aug 2010 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
I likedthis chapter. Poor Bella and company-they have lived through a lot of sadness.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hello again! So glad you liked the chapter! Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a review. Yeah, they've been through a lot of sadness but they are stronger people for it. Hope to hear from you again! Don't forget I have the story posted over on FFN and there are now 39 chapters completed over there. More to come here soon!
les16~~
Date: 20 Aug 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love that Bella smella is spunky.... even after a crappy mother growing up...update soon
Author's Response:
Hi there! So glad you like the story so far. Yeah, you won't find a shy, reserved Bella in this story...at all! Thanks for taking the time to read and leave a review. I have 38 chapters of this story posted over on FFN and I hope to update here pretty regularly to get caught up. There will be more soon! Hope to hear from you again!
les16~~
Date: 19 Aug 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 3
well with a kid like that and a daddy like him i would be out of words too cant wait till the next chpater
Author's Response:
Ha Ha! No kidding! Masen is adorable, I love writing him so much...Maddie too. Can't wait to see what you think of the next chapter. Lots more Bella/Edward interaction as well as more kid time, too. Be sure you let me know what you think. Thanks for reading!
les16~~
Date: 19 Aug 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
her mom is just so sad !@ cant wait to read the next chapter
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks for reading! Yes, Renee is a piece of work, that is for sure! She comes into play in a big way again later on in the story! In case I haven't told you, there is a blog for this story with pictures and all kinds of other cool things! Check it out if you get a second.
www(.)les16-thepathwechoose(.)blogspot(.)com (just take out the brackets and use only the dots!) I would love to hear what you think of it. We worked really hard on it. Be sure to add yourself as a follower too!
Thank you for the review, I'm so glad you like what you've read so far!
les16~~
Date: 19 Aug 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
woo nice introduction LOL
Author's Response:
Hi! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave a review. I'm glad you like what you've read so far! I have 38 chapters of this story posted over on FFN so I hope to update here pretty regularly. More to come really soon! Hope to hear from you again!
les16~~
Date: 19 Aug 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Hi there! I'm so glad you like what you've read so far. Thanks for taking the time to leave a review. I have 38 chapters of this story posted over on FFN so I hope to post over here pretty regularly to get caught up! More to come really soon. Hope to hear from you again!!
les16~~
Date: 19 Aug 2010 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue
I'm enjoying this so far. First fic I've reviewed :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave a review. I'm really happy you like what you've read so far! I have 38 chapters of this story posted over on FFN and I plan to update here pretty regularly to get caught up. So, more coming soon! Hope to hear from you again!
les16~~
Date: 19 Aug 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
Well how do you do? lol
Author's Response:
Hey there~ Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave a review. I have posted 38 chapters of this story over on FFN and I hope to post here pretty regularly to get caught up! I hope you like what you've read so far! More to come soon. Thanks for reading!! Hope to hear from you again.
les16~~
Date: 19 Aug 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 2
wow wonderful chapter.
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! Thanks for taking the time to read and review! More to come soon, I promise. Be sure you let me know what you think of it!
les16~~
Date: 19 Aug 2010 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue
i like it. seems like this is going to be a dramatic story but i like it :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and leaving a review. It is a bit on the dramatic side, but nothing too off the wall. Lots of happy, fun and sexy times too. I hope you continue reading and liking it. I have 38 chapter of this story posted on FFN and I hope to update regularly here to get caught up. Hope to hear from you soon!
les16~~
Date: 19 Aug 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 2
I hope ed & bell meets soon !
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and leaving a review! I hope you like what you've read so far. I have 38 chapters of this story posted on FFN and I hope to update here regularly to get caught up. Don't worry, the meeting happens sooner than you think. Let me know what you think of it, okay? Hope to hear from you again soon.
les16~~
Date: 19 Aug 2010 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 2
aww.. my heart is breaking for the young Bella.. I don't like Renee... mean momma... and mommas have to be sweet.....update soon...
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave a review. I'm glad you like what you have read so far. I have 38 chapters of this story posted over on FFN so I hope to update pretty quickly over here to get caught up. Hope to hear from you again soon!
les16~~
Date: 19 Aug 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 2
You know what I realized? I don't think that I ever reviewed the first several chapters of your story on FFN. So here is my chance! Score!!
If you don't know by now, I love your story. I love the relationship that Bella and Edward build, I love the twins, I love the family.
What's not to love really?
I really forgot how much I love Seth in these first few chapters too. It's nice to go back and remember the beginning, when Seth was all that Bella had. It really helps you appreciate the family dynamic now even more.
Love you sweetie! So happy to see you posting here!
Author's Response:
You my friend, make me smile every damn day. I seriously couldn't do any of this without you, nor would I want to. And our Seth...boy he is just wonderful isn't he? He makes me smile.
Thanks for the sweet words as always.
I love you...
les16~~
Date: 19 Aug 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 2
Still hanging on the edge of that cliff, although there's a big enough hint to get a feeling of what may have developed in Bella's past. I may just have to venture over to FF, but, on the other hand, suspense is good. It is comforting to know that you have many chapters written already but please don't freeze up near the end as so many authors on these sites do. Keep up the good work.
Date: 19 Aug 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue
Well what a way to start a story. With a cliffy at the very beginning!!! LOL I can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading! I am so gald you liked what you read so far and that you left a review. There are 38 chapters of this story posted on FFN and I hope to post here regularly to get caught up. Hope to hear from you again soon!
les16~~
Date: 18 Aug 2010 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue
I like how you started the story. Can't wait to find out what the secret is.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review. I am glad you like what you have read so far. There are 38 chapters of this story posted on FFN already and I hope to update quickly over here to get caught up. Hope to hear from you again soon!
les16~~
Date: 18 Aug 2010 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue
wow this new story sounds awesome =)
im thrilled to know what bella's past is =)
please continue =)
xoxo Alica
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review. I'm so happy you like it! I have 38 chapters of this story posted on FFN and I plan on posting here pretty quick to get caught up. Hope to hear from you again soon.
les16~~
Date: 18 Aug 2010 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue
I loved this story.This could be the being of a wonderful friendshp!!
Author's Response:
He he...guess I'm stuck with you now huh? I wouldn't have it any other way. Your support and friendship has brightened all of my days.
Love you BFF~~
Date: 18 Aug 2010 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue
i loved it and can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review! I am glad you liked it. There are 38 chapters posted on FFN and I hope to update pretty quickly over here to get caught up. Hope to hear from you again soon!
les16~~
Date: 18 Aug 2010 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue
well im intrested cant wait to keep on reading!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and leaving a review. I have 38 chapters of this story done and up on FFN and I hope to post over here every day, or other day at the most. I am so glad you like what you have read so far!
les16~~
Date: 18 Aug 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue
Oh, come on!! You've hooked me. Now get that next chapter up so I can breathe again.
Author's Response:
Ha! Ha! Well, the story is also posted on FFN and there are 38 chapters to date. I'll be posting here hopefully every day or every other day. Thanks for reading, so glad you liked it so far!
les16~~
Date: 18 Aug 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 1 Prologue
I know this is giong to be loved here just as much as it is on FF. It's such an amazing story and I am so glad I could get it posted for ya!!
Love ya
EA
Author's Response:
I love ya girl! You are the best! Thanks for the support here as well as on FFN! The pod wouldn't be the same without you!
les16~~