Date: 23 Oct 2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 1 : 45 Days and Counting
well my guts are tellling me that bella is pregnant....
just hoping it is edwards...and not that phycos.....
waiting for next chapter......
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing and there is something to say for those gut feelings. :)
Date: 23 Oct 2010 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 24: Emotional Vortex
Well I guess that Bella is not really sick is she?? I wonder how they are going to deal with everything when they get back.
Author's Response:
I know right! I will say writing the next few chapters was a lot fo fun for me. I really enjoyed them. I will be still posting 2 chapters a week as long as I can. Having a bit of writers block right now. (no worries I have through chapter 26 about ready to go). Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 22 Oct 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 23: Formal Night
Awww..... And you ended it before we got to hear what she said!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
I will post next chapter soon I pormise 2 a week is still the on going way it is working. I have 33 chapters written so far so we have plenty of story to share yet.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Kasi~
Date: 20 Oct 2010 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 23: Formal Night
I can't wait to find out what Bella's answer is going to be. Is Alec going to be making another appearance soon?
Author's Response:
both your questions will be answered with in a few chapters but you will have the answer to one soon and then I am sure more questions will end up following that. I have 33 chapters written so we got a few to go yet. I will not drag this into the ground though.
Date: 17 Oct 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 22: Off To Paradise
awwwwwwww she deserves this this is to cute
Author's Response:
aww thank you so much!
I am greatful that you are reading and reviewing my story I hope to hear from you more!
Kasi~
Date: 16 Oct 2010 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 22: Off To Paradise
Well at least she didn't get mad at him for extending their stay for a week.
Author's Response:
she doesn't seem to get mad at much of anything he does, jsut kind of goes with the flow....that may change a bit soon.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 21:Graduation Day
this is an awesome story, great storyline and details
thanks
Tori
keep up the gr8 work!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you Tori for reading and reviewing and for the story love. Look forward to hearing more from you soon!
Kasi~
Date: 13 Oct 2010 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 21:Graduation Day
Wow Renee is really dancing to her own drummer isn't she? I really hope that Bella doesn't freak when she finds out that they are leaving for two weeks! I don't think that she will and after everything she needs to get away from it all.
Author's Response:
It is funny you mentioned the drummer thing becasue in a few chapters that gets mentioned, unless my beta cuts it..LOL
She will be glad about the time forsure.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Kasi~
Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 20: Dealing With It
That might be a problem.... That is just their luck that they get to have sex again and the condom broke. That is how I got my son and I will say that while I wasn't ready for him the best mistake that was made because I love that little boy with everything that I am and would die for him.
Author's Response:
I feel the same way about my son who was not a planned pregnancy. Thank you for continuing to read and review! I love your reviews!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 19: A Maelstrom of Crazy
Wow he really is a sick person. He killed his own family!! I am glad that he has confessed to murdering people because they are going to throw the book at him and kill him for what he did and hopefully then the nightmare for Bella is over.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I think that he is a sicko and I had to point out that all those states had the death penalty. Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 18: A Captured Man
shes pregnant
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing and all in due time there is much to happen yet. I promise some of it my be typical in a sense but some of ti will be not as well. Let's just say that not everything is the way that we think we see it.
Date: 10 Oct 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 20: Dealing With It
the condom broke. LOL
Author's Response:
I know right! :) Thank you for reading and reviewing! it means a lot to me to see the reviews!
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2010 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 20: Dealing With It
thank you for a great chapter! rl can be such a wake up call and the condom breaking is something that happens. I hope Bella will be okay with it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the great review. Like always I love it that one of my favorite authors likes the things I write. It is a HUGE thrill to me to have someone I look up to writing wise, reading my stuff and actually liking it. So a HUGE thank you to you! Thanks for reading and reviewing and for the story love!
Date: 07 Oct 2010 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 19: A Maelstrom of Crazy
Alec was a very busy boy, wasn't he? I hope he pays dearly for everything that he did. I can only imagine what Bella, Edward and Charlie were going through during the telling of Alec's story. Will we find out?
I'm excited to read your next update.
Author's Response:
Alec was a bad bad boy! There is a lot more story to come, and you may or may not have heard the end of Alec anyway. He does have a POV coming up in a later chapter. right now I am writing chapter 30 so there is quite a bit to go yet.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 19: A Maelstrom of Crazy
bravo, i love this story , bravo
Author's Response:
Thank you Sherry I am so glad that you love it! Thank you for reading and for reviewing I am greatful for all that you have reviewed and I hope that you continue to read it and enjoy it because the story is far from over yet.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 19: A Maelstrom of Crazy
wow what a crazy fuck! holy shit! Good for Bella! I am glad she said all of that and of course waited till it was all out! I can't wait for the next chap!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing and I am glad that you liked it!
Date: 06 Oct 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 19: A Maelstrom of Crazy
didnt see that coming..
Author's Response:
I am guessing that you were then shocked by the identity of the stalker huh?
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 06 Oct 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 15: Waking Up
ok now, I like a mystery. Story line keep it strong.
Author's Response:
Well in chapter 19 you find out who he is but the story is not over.
Next chapter posts soon keep reading and thanks for reviewing
Date: 05 Oct 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 10: Moving Day
hmm. who is it? Obviously not your first guess. I like the mistery.
Keep it going.
Author's Response:
next chapter is going to be posted soon! thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 02 Oct 2010 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 18: A Captured Man
Well now I wonder who this is because he is a pretty sick person. I can't believe that he burned off his fingerprints so that noone would find him out. I wonder what he is going to do if he sees Bella with Edward when she comes to face him which is truly what she needs to do to have closure to all of this nightmare.
Author's Response: He is sick huh? What a wacko. You read my mind I had most of this chapter written before I posted chapter 8 and the next one too. I hope that you enjoy chapter 19 that is the big reveal! Thanks for reading and for reviewing!
Date: 02 Oct 2010 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 17: Saving a Swan
I am glad that they found Bella before he had a chance to hurt her more than she was already. It is surprising that Rose opened up to Edward and I don't think that she does that very often but it is good that she had someone to talk to when she wanted to open up.
Author's Response:
yes I am glad they found her when they dod too! the next couple of chapters gets good!
Thanks for readingand reviewing!
Date: 02 Oct 2010 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 18: A Captured Man
For the life of me I can figure out who the stalker is... There are too many possibilities.
I'm glad that Edward is there for Bella. That should help with ther emotional healing.
Author's Response:
He is one of five but one of those five is dead for sure so one of four. You will find out next chapter who that evil stalker is that creeps us all out!
Thanks for reading and for reviewing.
Kasi~
Date: 02 Oct 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 18: A Captured Man
He burned his finger print off? SO GROSS! Such a whack job. Charlie has been so win in this fic, and he just continues to deliver. I'm a bit worried that Hurricane Renee will make things worse. Her flaky persona and over reactions might not be such a good thing for B's recovery. And I can't wait to see how she takes to Esme's innvolvement in B's life. Will she be resetful or grateful that there was support available when it was needed? SO looking forward to the big reveal! OH! And whole town of crazy? Awesome.
Author's Response:
Hey there FANGIRL~ WOOOWHOOO I am so glad to read your reviews they are always so great! You rock and yes the BIG reveal is NEXT!!!! I love Charlie a lot so it is easy to make him good, I have always thought Renee was a twit! Thanks for reading and reviewing. I do to think Renee cares about Esme and Bellas relationship, but that is interesting to think about and may be giving my story a future twist but if it does I will totally credit you for the idea! and town of crazy yes that is a good way to explain our little stalker.
Your reviews rock much like you do! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 6: Northwestern Memorial
it has to be jacob that was very good i knew it had to be someone she tutored
Author's Response:
Hi thanks for reading and reviewing....it is not Jacob, jake is one of the gaurds who helped find and save her. I am really looking forward to the reviews after you all find out who it ireally is!
Thanks for reading and reviewing and have a great day!
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 5: 41 Days and Counting
i love this story you keep me on my toes trying to guess who it is
Author's Response:
Thank you I was trying to keep it full of suspense up to the reveal!
Thanks for reading and reviewing
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 4: 42 Days and Counting
That was so creepy i loved it lol i hope bella can stay safe and that they can move soon so that she can feel safe
Author's Response:
I love that you are reading it and reviewing to the chapters.
Thanks for the reviews and thank you so much for reading my story!
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2010 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 3: 43 Days and Counting
oh now the stalking starts oh crap poor bella i can't wait to find out what the note said
Author's Response:
Yeah wait til you hear from the stalker he is a wacko!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 2: 44 days and counting
i really do like this story i can't wait to read more i have no clue who the stalker is yet but i will guess later lol
Author's Response:
no one has been abel to guess it correctly yet! so do nto feel alone! Chapter 18 will be the BIG REVEAL!
Thanks for continuing to review and read my story!
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2010 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 1 : 45 Days and Counting
that was very good i like how bella has a goal and nothing will stand in her way i just hope she and edward will cut loose a bit and have fun a dull life is no life at all
Author's Response:
Bella is very strong willed and knows what she wants in life!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 02 Oct 2010 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 18: A Captured Man
That was a nice chapter. I am glad to see that Bella is safe and I am curious to see who this stalker really is...even though he is caught, I have a feeling that Bella's recovery is far from over...any idea how many chapters are left on this story. Anyways, keep up the good work and update soon!
Author's Response:
well the next chapter is the big reveal however the story is not over. There are a few things that are going to happen yet. Not sure on how many chapters are yet to come but the story is not over. I would say about half way over maybe. The stalker may be in custody but who knows what is going to happen. Things will get interesting for sure and parts of this story are based on true events and there is more story to tell.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 02 Oct 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 1 : 45 Days and Counting
I LOVE this story. You are an awesome writer keep up the fantastic work.
Author's Response:
AWWW thank you so much! Thanks for reading my story and thank you so much for reviewing it! I am glad to see people loving my story!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 29 Sep 2010 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 17: Saving a Swan
I am so glad that they got to her in time! She has a lot of healing to do! They all do! But E&B will do it together! I feel so bad for them! I can't wait to see who the stalker is!! it is killing me!! lol Can't wait for the next chap!!
Author's Response:
you will find out who he is in chapter 19 so no worries it will come soon!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 29 Sep 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 17: Saving a Swan
YAY! Bella is saved and now can start healing. (And Rose can get busy with Em without risking his job.) He had 2 houses in her name, and a bank account? Can't wait to find out how much is in that account. Which leads me to my question. Where is this psycho getting his bankroll from? I'm guessing you are not quite ready to tell us who the mystery stalker is, but this has me vexed. I also want to know what the assault team did to him when they broke in to subdue him and release Bella.
Poor Bella. I hope she will be able to see how much Edward really loves her. And I suspect she will be stunned to find out how much Charlie approves of him.
Author's Response:
Fangirl~
Yes it is all shocking and in the next chapter or two you will find out more and the whole story comes out. The stalker is a twisted individual. There is more than 2 properties and a bank account. It is really bad how he has controlled so much for so long. SPOOKY. Thank you for reading and continuing to review I really am greaful for that!
Kasi~
Date: 29 Sep 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 17: Saving a Swan
i just love this story, people forget is rape really does happen alot more than anyone knows , so thank you for doing a very good job writing this, im just glad they found her , and cant wait to read more , bravo
Author's Response:
SherryJo, Thank you for reading and reviewing and especially for the story love! I am greatful that people have taken to this story they way they have. I wish more people would review because the more reviews the better chances I have for more readers. I will be updating soon again I promise.
Kasi~
Date: 27 Sep 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 16: Find Me Please
Bella was at least finally able to activate her bracelet. I think that Charlie is wrong about just throwing out the whole Aro lead because maybe that is the person that they are looking for and now they won't find him because they aren't following the lead.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading my sotry and showing the story love by reviewing it. I agree to not be tossing out the info on Aro as it really does become good to know info in the next couple of chapters. I will say this Aro is for sure int he running for being the stalker. But then so are 4 others well 3 now since tyler is dead for sure! Thank goodness she set off the gps that is great and it made me feel better. I was initially goign to have him keeping her kidnapped for a very long time but I changed my mind on that. I thik it is best the way I am playing it out.
Thanks again!
Kasi~
Date: 27 Sep 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 15: Waking Up
Well this terrible that he has Bella and noone knows where she is. I really hope that they are going to find her.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! It means a lot to me! Chapter 17 should be posted on or by Wed.
Kasi~
Date: 26 Sep 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 16: Find Me Please
Please let them get the signal from her bracelett...
Please update soon.
Author's Response:
thank you for reading and reviewing and next update will be on or by wed.
Date: 26 Sep 2010 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 16: Find Me Please
Poor Bella that is horrible!! I hope they find her soon!! what a fucking asshat!! ugh!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the story love and thank you for reading and reviewing. I love that you call him an asshat that is funny. The next chapter is much lighter and happier, and will be out by Wed.
Date: 26 Sep 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 16: Find Me Please
Good and bad in this one. Bad what just happened to Bella but Good that she finally was able to trigger the GPS. And poor Edward is completely lost in his dispair. It seems like the others have someone trying to comfort them, but not Edward. Is that because he refused it or was hostile when it was offered? Or is he just so out of it he doesn't notice that the relief is being given to him regardless of his awareness of it. Charlie must be seeing how this is effecting him, which would just show him the depth of feeling. I'm so glad Charlie approved of E, because this would have been so much worse if he didn't. Good update. Can't wait to see what comes up next!
And off topic, I want to say thanks for the notes you send back to me on my reviews. I really enjoy reading your reaction to my comments. This story has really captivated me, and i kow what you do takes a lot of effort and thought and for that I feel like you deserve a real response. Plus, you have this based in my city, and that just invests me that much more. Anyway, I wanted you to know I really enjoy this connection.
Author's Response:
Fangirl~
Thank you so much for your kind words, I am really greatful for them. When I finally gave in and decided to write a story I made a pack with my self to try my best to not make people wait forever for the next chapter and to ALWAYS answer each reply/review I got. That comes from the fact that I am currently readign several stories but there are a couple I am reading and have been reading religiously sicne they started and it is as if the authors have jsut given up on them one has not had an update in almost 2 months and the other is almost a month. THAT SUCKS! Then with the reviews, I try to review every story I read and if I am reading it as it goes I review each and every chapter. Reviews mean a lot to those of us who are (like me) unsure if our story really is good and really is worth your time to read. I am glad that you are vested in my story I know I have a small fan club following this story and as much as it would be really nice if more people read it and liked it the way the few of you that are here every update are. You few make me happy, so thank you! I know wordy and grammar are my issues but that is why I have a great beta named Abbyward and a wonderful prereader in Jess2002. they do not help me with my replies as you can see! LOL
The closeness I wanted Edward adn Charlie to have comes out more soon, and I wanted them to have a fast get along well relationship. Renee will show her WACKINESS more soon too. I wanted Edward to be stewing it helps show that his feelings were really there not just some fling type Love.
Next update will be on or by next Wed.
You have my email if you ever want to message me feel free! Like I siad if I have any questions about area's I may ask you anyway! thank for the story love and review! :)
Date: 24 Sep 2010 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 15: Waking Up
It is an amazing story. Can't wait to keep reading it :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the totally great review! Thanks for reading and for the story love! I really enjoy writing this story, and the next chapter will be posted either saturday or sunday. :)
Date: 24 Sep 2010 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 15: Waking Up
Who is the stalker??? I'm going nuts trying to figure this out. Please update again really soon.
Author's Response:
I will update in the next few days and thank you for reading and really thanks for the review they mean a lot to me!!! a whole lot. You will find out the ID of the stalker soon, but there is much more story to unravel.
Date: 24 Sep 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 15: Waking Up
Wow. So this guy has been pining away since he was 7 for Bella. That is crazy. I know, duh, kinda the point! So she recognizes him, and almost said his name, but WE, your faithful readers, are still in the dark. *sigh* I know, that's all part of building the suspense. It was good to know that he created a diversion on his own, and did not have accomplises with him to assist with the abduction. I was a bit worried about him working with others at the end of last chapter. It seemed unlikely, but there was still a chance he had some wackadoo minions. And really, that particular Rainforest Cafe is a freakin' maze! It would be really easy to get separated in that plac. And the layout and decorations would make it really easy to remain unseen until the oportune moment presented itself. Good stuff, once again!
Author's Response:
Fangirl~ your reviews rock! I am glad that my research on the rainforest cafe was pretty dead on since I needed her to be abel to get nabbed there and yes the dead mouse was sick but played well I thought! Up next you hear from Bella Edward and the Stalker. He is not a happy camper! Thanks for the story love and thanks for reading! AND A HUGE SPECIAL THANKS for the reviews!!!!!!!! Feel free to message me again anytime, and I will ask you if I need advice on a few things.
PS....Send me some Portillo's!!! LOL
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 15: Waking Up
this was a brilliant chapter and you nailed the cliffie, girl!!! You've got me on the edge of my seat!
Great job!
Author's Response:
Seeing as how you are one of my FAV's as authors go it means WAY MORE than you know to have this great review from you! You are such an excellent writer and I love reading your story "People Like Us". To have you give me such a wonderful review makes me super happy. Thank you so much for reading and a HUGE thanks for the review! Thanks for the story love and I hope to see you review more soon!
Kasi~
Author's Response:
Seeing as how you are one of my FAV's as authors go it means WAY MORE than you know to have this great review from you! You are such an excellent writer and I love reading your story "People Like Us". To have you give me such a wonderful review makes me super happy. Thank you so much for reading and a HUGE thanks for the review! Thanks for the story love and I hope to see you review more soon!
Kasi~
Author's Response:
Seeing as how you are one of my FAV's as authors go it means WAY MORE than you know to have this great review from you! You are such an excellent writer and I love reading your story "People Like Us". To have you give me such a wonderful review makes me super happy. Thank you so much for reading and a HUGE thanks for the review! Thanks for the story love and I hope to see you review more soon!
Kasi~
Date: 23 Sep 2010 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 15: Waking Up
holy shit!! who is it!?!? I think it is James... he repulsed her that is the only one I can think of... stay strong Bella!! I can't wait for the next chap! I am hooked to this story!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the totally awesom review. It is NOT james for sure 100% as well it is not mike. Thank you so much for the story love and review. The next chapter will post sometime soon next few days or so!
Date: 23 Sep 2010 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 14: Cornered and Grabbed
I hope they realize she's been taken before he gets too far from her. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
thank you for the story love I am really greatful for the reviews too! the story gets creepy for a couple of chapters then it will get better, he finally got his hands on her. Spooky for sure.
Date: 23 Sep 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 14: Cornered and Grabbed
Ok, I have to ask. Do you live in the Chicagoland area? First you are placing the story at Northwestern, and now you have them going to Woodfield. Now, I live about 10 minutes from Woodfield, and I even worked there for a time in high school. It was really nice to see you mentioned 2 locations within the mall that actually are there. Not everyone who picks a location gets it right, regardless of their best efforts to do so, which makes me think you live here. Just being nosy, feel free to not respond on this. It just tickles me to have local stuff in the story. We have a beautiful city here and it is under-utilized in story telling IMHO.
Poor Bella. They tried so hard to keep her safe. The one time only 2 girls go to the bathroom, and not the whole lot of them, and she gets nabbed. Did Edward see what happened? I'm sure he was watching for her return. Hopefully he did.
One small nugget on Woodfield mall. Having worked there I know a bit about the mall tunnels, for garbage disposal and what not. I am guessing you will have the stalker yank her thru those to get her away. In case you don't know, they do have security cameras down there since the recent remodel/refresh they did, so that could be helpful to the team.
Really good job on this fic! I am so totally engaged in it and really look forward to your next update!
Author's Response:
Fangirl~ Your reviews ALWAYS ROCK! I do not live in Chicago, I live in a small ass town in Iowa called Independence, but I was born in Moline Il. I have visited Chicago but have never been to the Woodfield mall, I did research. I did not know that the mall had a Victoria Secret but most do so I ran with that, I did reasearch on the rainforest cafe including thier menu. I did mention the security cameras in the next chapter so you will see that too coming up! I guess I am on the ball huh? Chicago is beautiful the last time I was there I had a BLAST! I wish I lived there or closer anyway because you guys are so lucky there....The Kings Of Leon were just there not so long ago in concert I wanted to go so BADLY!!!! I was there to see AC/DC last year (rosemount) that was the BOMB! My best friend grew up in Chicago well in a suburb of chicago called Naperville. Anyway.....Thank you so much for the story love I really do love hearing from you. You leave great reviews so thank you so much! The next update will be out in a couple of days and I think you will like it. It is creepy as hell in parts but it is good! I can not wait to hear your take on it!
Date: 22 Sep 2010 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 14: Cornered and Grabbed
Well this is terrible that with all of them out he was able to accomplish what he couldn't in school. I really hope that they figure out that she is gone before he gets too far from them.
Author's Response:
Thank you the review and yes he got her. The next chapter will be up soon! thanks for the story love and thank you for the review!
Date: 22 Sep 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 13: A Close Encounter
That was scary that he was going to let off a pipe bomb to cause a distraction so that he could get to her. It was very smart that the teacher said what she needed to before class so that his plans went up in smoke.
Author's Response:
yes his plans have been changed on him a lot and he is frustrated! thank you for reviewing you rock!
Date: 22 Sep 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 12: Fight and Make Up
I wonder what her little stalker will think if he knew what Bella and Edward just did I am thinking that he will want to kill Edward but I am thinking that has already crossed his mind.
Author's Response:
yes the stalker is very jealous and believes that Bella is in love with hima nd saving herself for him only!
Thanks for the review and for reading my story. :)
Date: 22 Sep 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 11: Back on Campus
Well we now know that it isn't Tyler at least the real on and it is sad that the real one is dead because of some mad person.
Author's Response:
I am glad that you are enjoying this book! Thank you so very much for the reviews they mean a lot to me! chapter 14 will be up soon. Look forward to hearing more of your thoughts.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 22 Sep 2010 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 10: Moving Day
Well I guess that means all of the security detail that Edward has is working for them.
Author's Response:
Well I know it was supposed to work but sometimes slip ups happen and they did in this case. Thanks for the story love and reading and reviewing. It is super awesome getting reviews for sure so THANK YOU!
Date: 22 Sep 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 14: Cornered and Grabbed
AHHHHH!!! You are leaving us there?!?! curse it!! lol!! I can't wait to read the next one and hopefully we will learn who the stalker is!! I hope they get to bella in time!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review and yes I had to do the cliff thingy I have been updating so often I just HAD to do it!
Thank you for reading and reviewing and thank so much for the story love!
Date: 22 Sep 2010 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 14: Cornered and Grabbed
I really have enjoyed your story so far. And I especially like how things are progressing now that it seems the stalker has her.
Looking forward to another chapter. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the story love I am very greatful as well for the review, I will post soon! Next few days I promise!
Date: 22 Sep 2010 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 14: Cornered and Grabbed
oh shit now, cant wait till you update , the reason i love this story is because you update every day, thats what i like, but it is a good story
Author's Response:
Well Sherryjo~ I hope that you like the story more then for just the fact that I update a lot, I will continue to update as often as I can but I am back to work now.... :( But I will update as often and as fast as I can I promise! The story is picking up. I hope that I start getting more reviews they seem to come and go in spurts. Thanks for the story love and I hope to hear from you again!
Date: 21 Sep 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 13: A Close Encounter
Aww, E&B are so cute post-coital. SO now I think you have confirmed the stalker is a TA in one of her classes? Otherwise why would they be asked to help grade tests. I am suspicious of this new tutoring subject tho. Is that a set up? She cannot have anyone in her new home. I can't believe Sam would agree to that with the security issues. I would think they would be able to arrange a secure office or conference room on campus that they could use for the lesson. Divulging her new location is just stupid and her security team has been too smart to allow something like that.
Author's Response:
Yes I agree and even smart people make stupid mistakes. Yes the stalker is a ta in one of her classes. Our stalker is a very SMART person. Does not mean that the stalker uses the smarts for the good of all. Thanks for the story love and the reviews they are nice and I only have a few of you that leave them so reading them are nice for sure! See ya soon with the next chapter! Will not be a long wait I promise.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 13: A Close Encounter
I have a quess as to the stalkers identity but I don't want to say incase i'm wrong. which i most likely am lol... great story..
Author's Response:
Personal message me via my profile and I will answer and let you know if you are right or not. As long as if you are correct you keep it to yourself. Thanks for the story love. things get really hairy quickly from here.
Date: 20 Sep 2010 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 13: A Close Encounter
I'm really enjoying My Sisters 3 and am very grateful that you are updating so quickly! I've been wracking my brain trying to figure out who the stalker is but can't wait for the big reveal...
Motherthing
Author's Response:
the big reveal will be soon....things get hairy from here! soon you will know who the stlaker is! thanks for reading and the story love and I will psot as soon as I can the next few chapters should comeout fairly fast
Date: 20 Sep 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 13: A Close Encounter
love it!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! Errr... I wish I could figure this stalker out!! Love it that B&E are kindaish turning into sex addicts! lol
Author's Response:
Yeah I had fun writing those lemons I am so new to that part I never write anything like that before, if you can't tell anyway! Thanks for the story love and for reading my story! see ya soon it gets hairy quick from here!
Date: 19 Sep 2010 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 12: Fight and Make Up
so sweet I love it!!! I can't wait to read what the stalker is thinking!! man what is going to happen when he finds out B&E made love!!! ooooo I can't wait!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the story love and yes when the stalker see's B&E together things will heat right up that is a garuntee. Right now he is already madder then a wet hen because he does not know where she is and he can not find her. Things escalate fast from here. That was my first lemon and so far no one has complained about it being lame or anything so hopefully that means it was good.
Date: 19 Sep 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 12: Fight and Make Up
Nice sweet lemon. I'm glad they admitted their feelings, even if it seems soon. At least they got the meet and greet with Charlie out of the way and he seems to approve. I also like how you show Bella working thru her frustration in a healty activity - cooking. She could have snuck out and gotten herself taken, but she wisely chose to stay with her security and pour her excess energy into a productive, non destructive action.
I wonder how her stalker will take her absence from school? And will he go so far as to hurt Alice or Rose to get to her? I would not put it past him. Once he sees or hears about Edward he will loose his shit, and that will most likely push him to making a critical mistake.
Some questions. If Edward and Bella are both pre-med how did they not have classes together? Are they in different years in their studies? Also, does Edward unwittingly know the stalker too?
Author's Response:
Fangirl~
I never thought about why or if Edward would know the stalker, so it was never a thought. I will say no that he does not because in later chapters there is no "oh I know you moments" between the 2. As for Edward adn Bella they are in the first 4 years of college right now and Northwestern is a HUGE school, so they could be takign the same classes at different times, or days, ordifferent classes all together. Once they start the Med program in the fall they could have classes together because they will nto be mixed in with all the other students attending Northwestern for all the differnt programs they handle. Northwestern University has a total student population of 17.089 as of July 2010 when this story is set in that same school time frame they graduate from the first 4 years to go on to the specialty training liek med school for them and law school for leah and jounalism for angela, ect. So with that many students and over a 4 year period of time and the requirements for med school being:
They could have taken all those classes plus extra classes but taken them at different times and such. So it would be easy.
I agree on the how soon they had their first sexual experiance together but in my book they are not human on one side and vamp on the other, and much like the book the love and attraction and desire between them evolved fast it did here too. I think that they moved too fast as well, but it had to work that way. I needed them to have that connection and for them to be together before things with the stalker got more hairy. Thanks for sayign the lemon was sweet, it was the first one I ever wrote. Charlie does liek Edward in my story that is importaint. As for the stalker you weill hear from him VERY soon. He is not a happy camper!
Date: 17 Sep 2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 11: Back on Campus
im intrigue who could be
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Author's Response:
I tried very hard to amke sure this story was able to provide suspense. I guess I did it. You are not the only one frustrated, but it all come out soon as to who the stalker is. Thanks for reading and thanks for the reveiw.
Date: 16 Sep 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 10: Moving Day
So what is Tyler's other identity???
Author's Response:
Maybe he is not really Tyler....??
When I started writing this story I was determinded to not give out to many clues, so I did not even decide who the stalker was for sure. I had a few people in mind and kinda wrote it from there. I did at a point decide that the one person was the stalker. I chose him mainly because I really dislike his voice in one of the movies for twilight. LOL Thanks agai for the story love and I hope to hear from you more!
Date: 16 Sep 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 7: 40 Days and Counting
AWWW. I think Rose felt a connection....could it be love???
Author's Response:
All three girls fall hard and fast for their guys. Just like in the book! I love them they are all so cute together. Thanks for the story love!
Date: 16 Sep 2010 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 5: 41 Days and Counting
Poor Bella...They must all be terified. I can only imagine what Charlie is going to do when he finds out.
Author's Response:
I love Charlie I think he is cool and kick ass too! More to come soon, and thanks for the story love and reviews! YAY!!!
Date: 16 Sep 2010 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 4: 42 Days and Counting
Okay, I know it's going to drive me nuts not knowing who the stalker is. I keep trying to think of who it may be. Is it a new character? Or is it a character from the Twilight series? I hope we don't have to wait too long to find out.
Great story.
Author's Response:
It is for sure a character from the twilight series. Thanks for the story love, another chapter will post soon!
Date: 16 Sep 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 3: 43 Days and Counting
I don't know if it is just a prejudice towards the character James in Twilight and the ffics I have read, but I don't trust the guy and think he is going to be trouble for Bella.
Great chapter...Alice and Rose really have a way to force her to shop.
Author's Response:
James is one of the few characters that I do nto like from the Twilight series. I wanted to make him be a creep but not the stalker it is too typical you know??? I like that fact that my story makes you think and gives you suspense. Thanks for reading hope to hear more from you soon! I will more sometime soon!
Date: 16 Sep 2010 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 11: Back on Campus
Wow crazy! great story! I can't wait to read more and hear more from the stalker so I can figure out who he is! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading my story and thanks for the story love. Another update will come out soon. The stalker is really creepy....
Date: 15 Sep 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 10: Moving Day
Another great chapter:) It's hard to tell who Bells's stalker is...can't wait to find out! Also your very welcome! I'm just glad it wasn't me...lol
Author's Response:
Ginny~
I am so glad it was not you either! I am still though trying to figure out why it did not post last night....???
Thank you for the story love! I have had a few interesting guesses on FF but a lot more are just saying not sure who the stalker is but man is that stalker creepy. Well he gets creepier!
:) Kasi~
Date: 14 Sep 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 9: The Weekend Away
Well this is really proving to be a really scary thing because he has access to Bella and they don't even know it. I am glad that Bella finally spoke her mind and told Edward how she feels about him because he felt the same!
Author's Response:
Yes he is quite creepy and sneeky too! I always like the the way that B&E seem to click so easy, and I could not do this story without that. they are just too cute together.
I will be updating VERY soon I promise!
So who do you think the sneaky stalker creepy person is?????
Date: 13 Sep 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 9: The Weekend Away
love it!! Stalker is sooooooo creepy!! I can't wait to see who he really is!!
Author's Response:
Hey Sarahlynn~
Thanks for the story love and the review! The stalker gets much creepier!! Got any guesses as to who the stalker is????
Date: 12 Sep 2010 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 9: The Weekend Away
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for the story love and review! More great chapters will be posting soon! :)
Kasi~
Date: 12 Sep 2010 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 9: The Weekend Away
This may be a duplicate review, I seem to have timed out before my submission was saved. SO I'm gonna try to recreate what I did. Ignore this if I'm repeating. SORRY!
"Besotted" is one of my favorite words!
It seems like the stalker is focusing on the girls a being his biggest obstacle to getting to Bella. Emmett better have a bigger detail for when the girls need to go to class. And I wonder, once the stalker shows his hand by calling her new cell number, will they be able to track it back to Carlisle's class? I would hate to see Carlisle get hurt or let something slip that could be damaging.
This review does not feel as complete as the first. I really hope you got that one!
Author's Response:
Fangirl~
I did not get the other review, so sorry....Carlisle is not the teacher I am trying to figure out how you came ot that conclusion maybe i missed somethign I am off to re-read the last few chapters. Carlisle is Rose's Mentor in the fact that he knows what her goal is and he has taken to her strong will and determination to be a in the cardiology field......I have not mentioned the names of any professors, none of them really play that much into the story other then they are teaching classes the girls and the stalker attend. The stalker is a very sneaky devious person and you will see jsut how devious he can be. Most all questions you may have reguarding the stalker will be answered by the 20th chapter. Things go pretty fast from here on out as far as his actions and the actions of the characters in general. I have a great Beta and I can not take credit for the word "besotted" that was all her so kudos to ABBYWARD she is the BOMB! I do however agree with you, the word worked perfectly! I get wordy and she fixes it and replaces it with great words. :) sometimes I manage to do it on my own though! LOL
Thanks for the story love.....got any clue who you think the stalker really is yet???
Kasi~
Date: 11 Sep 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Guard Begins
Our stalker is getting even more bold it would seem. If he hurts Emmett, Rose will be his biggest threat ever. I really like that Charlie likes Edward in this fic. It's a nice change. And really, what does that boy need with 7 bedrooms? Is he planning on having that many kids? Yikes!
Author's Response:
Ahh fangirl you caught that right?? This is his future home for his future family! YAY nice hint pick up! good job. Any guesses for the stalkers real name? I am excited to start seeing guesses soon. It only gets better from here! see ya soon with MORE!!!! Thanks for the story love!
Date: 11 Sep 2010 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Guard Begins
Oh I wish that she was right and that it would just be over that quickly!! Tyler was one of the names that he used and I am thinking that he doesn't look like that anymore. I can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the story love, and you are so right! Any guesses as to who it is? I will post next chapter in the next few days! see ya soon!
Date: 11 Sep 2010 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 7: 40 Days and Counting
I am glad that they have met Edward and that he isn't a suspect and all he wants is for them to be safe. I can't believe that he gave up his guest condo to them just so that he knows that they will be safe.
Author's Response:
He is always so protective of Bella so he would give anything for her. They did have that immediate attraction jsut sharign eyy contact for a brief moment. Her eyes have kept him captive, and vice versa. Thanks for the story love next chapter will be out in the next few days.
Date: 11 Sep 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 6: Northwestern Memorial
Wow so this person has known her for years and has been really close to her! That is really scary!! I really hope that this isn't Edward but I think that it isn't.
Author's Response:
No I do not think I could ever make a dark edward and do him justice. Any guesses as to who you think it might be? next chapter will be up soon.
Date: 11 Sep 2010 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 5: 41 Days and Counting
You have to wonder what Charlie is going to do with his daughter in trouble 1800 miles away from home.
Author's Response:
Charlie to the rescue of course! She has always related better to her father. It's all good!
Date: 11 Sep 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 4: 42 Days and Counting
That is really scary that someone has excess to their dorm like that. I don't think that I would feel safe there and would have to leave.
Author's Response:
I was hoping to give off the creepy, spooky and I guess I did! Thanks for readign and all the reviews you have left for me today! I love it!! ALOT!
Date: 11 Sep 2010 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 3: 43 Days and Counting
Well I wonder what is in that note that made her scream.
Author's Response:
my beta said a cliff ahnger there was a great idea and I have to agree it got a lot of replies! Thanks for reading!
Date: 11 Sep 2010 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 2: 44 days and counting
It is good that they are moving soon so that they might nt have to deal with those guys again.
Author's Response:
yeah the triple d's I loved them and wanted to leave them in the pool as the stalkers. to bad i changed my mind i jsut got tired of the same old suspects ya know???? thanks for reading
Date: 11 Sep 2010 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 7: 40 Days and Counting
thank you for a great chapter - that condo sounds wonderful
Author's Response:
Thanks for the story love! The next couple of chapters will post soon and it gets juicy fast!
Date: 11 Sep 2010 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 1 : 45 Days and Counting
Well I like it so far. Medical school is really tough and it takes up alot of your time but it will be worth it in the end when you get to do something that you truly love!!
Author's Response:
Yes, I chose Medicle school for hte sisters3 because it fit nicely into the story in the long run. I really wanted it to be set in chicago as well. Since I grew up in Il. I wanted to do something that gave me some insight. There are a few places I wrote about that I have been and had a great time at. One of the next chapters coming up soon is about a place that I actually love going to. So it is fun to write about that kinda of stuff. I now live in Iowa, but not too far from Il. Thanks for posting a review. Thanks for reading my story!
TAT~Kasi
Date: 11 Sep 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 7: 40 Days and Counting
Well I'm glad that Edward was easily cleared and does not give Bella the creeps. And being right across the hall will come in really handy for those potential future hook ups! As long as Charlie doesn't catch her.
I'm starting to think our stalker might be Eric Yorkie now. He was tech savvy, and elequint when speaking, so the letter would not have been outside of his skill set. Hmmm........
Author's Response:
I liek the way that you think Fangirl! You are giving this some thought and openign your mind beyond the spectrum. YAY YOU! does this mean you are right???? I will not tell. you will find out in chapter 19 or 20 the Stalkers real name. I will tell you this much there are 5 possiable choices...opps maybe not since a couple of them might not be alive anymore....HMMMM.
Edward and Bella progress very fast so watch out for a whirlwind!
Thanks for the story love.
Kasi~
Date: 10 Sep 2010 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 6: Northwestern Memorial
wow this is kinda creepy!! I like it! can't wait to read more!! and see some more B/E interaction!
Author's Response:
Another chapter will post soon so keep an eye out for it! Thanks for the story love I am greatful to hear from you all. As for B&E well when they start they go FAST FAST FAST kinda liek the book where they know almost right away they belong together. Well so be it! Who can really mess with that? Not me in this story.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 6: Northwestern Memorial
Excellent update! So now we can eliminate Edward as a threat, since he didn't know Bella before. Tyler is obviously out, since that was a fake name for our stalker. My money is on it being Mike Neuton. Or maybe Ben Chenney, since he was alway protrayed as smart. Damn, still hooked! Very nicely done.
Author's Response:
Actually tyler is real and that comes into play soon enough. Sit back my friend the ride has started! Keep your hands inside the cart and do not take off the seat belt yet. I have several people saying they think it is Mike. Hmmmm there are some devious minds out there and Ben now there was a new guess.....Hmmmm it is diabolical isn't it?
Thanks for the story love another update is on it's way soon!
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2010 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 5: 41 Days and Counting
LOVED it hunney bunches!
Author's Response:
Thaigher! I loved it too, and thanks so much for the review it is such a great feeling to get reviews. :D
Date: 08 Sep 2010 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 5: 41 Days and Counting
I'm totslly baffled on who it could be. There are too many usual suspects to choose from and it could be someone you have not introduced yet. You have me hooked!
Author's Response:
Well I am all about the suspense! It will be REALLY good before you know who it is! yay! I am glad you are hooked! I promise it gets better. I will give you this much for a teaser. When Edward comes into the story (SOON!) he comes in like a storm and him and Bella fall fast much like the characters in Twilight did! Only mine are human and over 18 so lemonade could be made!!!
yay!
Date: 08 Sep 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 4: 42 Days and Counting
Super creepy update!
Author's Response:
It get's better I promise! It has to have some kind of creepy value it is a stalker story. Ohh by the way here comes chapter 5!!!
Date: 04 Sep 2010 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 1 : 45 Days and Counting
Good story. I really want to read more. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Charming~
Thank you so much! I am so excited each time i see a review, it makes me get that kid in a candy store smile! YAY! Keep watching there will be more posted soon, I am way ahead where I thought I would be and as soon as I get them back from the beta and pre-reader they are out here for you all! See ya soon! thanks!
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 3: 43 Days and Counting
i'm very proud of where your story is going!!!!!! i hope it continues to do well with the reviews i can't wait to see more from you
Author's Response:
Thaigher~
If not for you and all your help and you showing me the way to Abbyward then I woudl not be here at all! SO big HUGS and HUGE thank yous to you as well. My friend you are AWESOME!!!!!
Kasi~
Date: 03 Sep 2010 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 2: 44 days and counting
hmmm - I'm not going to guess who it is right now, but I'm kinda hooked! And posting once a week is a great idea. (especially if you begin to second guess yourself like I do - gives you time to go back)
Great chapter
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks again! This chapter was a tad shorter then it started and a lot got cut but it was me being wordy! You liek most will be shocked I think. I actually have the stalker narrowed down to one of 4 differnt people in my head to stop myself from giving out too many clues. (SAD?, it is helping me keep suspense. LOL) Will be posting chpter 3 as soon as it is back from pre-readers and 4 will follow closely. I managed to write chapters 5 through 11 in less the a week and am jsut waiting for them to be finished being beta'd and pre-read as well. So I am fruther ahead then I thought I would be and right now the story is really flowing. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2010 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 : 45 Days and Counting
You did a great job with this chapter and I am looking forward to reading the rest of this story.
Michele (peoplelikeus)
Author's Response:
Thank you Michele, I really struggled and I had a beta lined up that fell through then got another and she saved me this chapter was a hot mess and a lot of mistakes. It still has a few but they are really minor, and I already edited it once and we can only get better from here. The story is going to get more involved and it will be more violent in places. I will post warning of that violence because I know there are people out there that do not like to read it or hear about it. Thanks for checking me out, I am glad you did and that you reviewed. Thank you so much and since I really do enjoy your writing having you give me a positive review means OHHH SOOO MUCH! Thanks again! chapter 3 and maybe even 4 will be posted very soon!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 2: 44 days and counting
This good, keep on writing!!
Author's Response:
Hey Jilli90~
Thanks for the kind words! It started off as a wreck but we are bringing her back and reviving her! I really love reviews they make me smile! I am glad that you are liking the story. It is going to get really good really soon! Chapter 4 will have a POV from the stalker don't miss that!
Date: 27 Aug 2010 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 1 : 45 Days and Counting
I second what the previous person has said.
Your idea sounds fantastic but it is simply unreadable like this.
I'm sure you've read some books before, you need to use quotation marks and paragraphs!
No two people may speak on the same line. So when one person says "My cat is black" Then go down the next line for the next person to say,
"My cat is white"
If i were you, i would find a person to proof read your story first. Fix up your first chapter and you will have many more readers.
Maybe read some other stories on here and look at how they use grammar and punctuation and incorporate that in your story.
I hope this didn't come out bitchy because i truly want this story to succeed! Your summary was fantastic and your idea sounds interesting - once you get the writing style down pat, i think this could be an excellent story!
Author's Response:
I am in no way at all offended. I had someone lined up to help me. Proof read and beta on another site and that person backed out whatever and I knew that if I tookt he first chapter and was outright open and honest and asked for help I would get it. I have a person on here that commented and has written a few stories looking at it now. I am not perfect and I like I said have only ever written a few poems here and there. So I am always glad for the critical side of reveiw because I know that I am spellign and grammar challenged at times and this is the very first tiem I have gotten the nerve to actually put it out there. It is a really great outline that I have and it will be a great story and I am really greatful to Thaigher Lillie who has agreed to help me by beta'ing my slop and helping me bring into a more readable form. I am happy to see that you thought the story has a fantastic summary and that the idea is interesting. The story will be good, I have no doubt about that. I am great at creating just not the writing I guess is how I look at it. I can tell them just not write them. We will see I am commited to see it through one way or another. Thank you for your honesty and please no fear you did not offend me I knew it is needing help! As soon as Thaigher Lillie gets done working some of the magic on the first chapter I will edit it and fix the error of my ways. So watch for it I think you will really like it when it is reader freindly!
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 : 45 Days and Counting
i like the idea. the only thing that needs work are your grammar ex Quotation marks when someone is speaking or italics when someone is thinking. It isn't bad. You should double space also it was a little hard to read bunched up. anywho if you want a beta i'd be glad to do it for you!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I will be in contact. I am greatful for the help.