Date: 05 Nov 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 16
OMG, I have no idea how this is going to pan out. I live 5 minutes from the U of M and only wish if this was a real story and involved a good Edward I would love to go and see him, but this is not the case. Still wondering if that guy is going to come forward. Can't wait for more.
Date: 05 Nov 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 15
Well I am guessing that they had a gang rape like they were trying with Bella. I am wondering if the one guy who said for them to stop it with Bella because she didn't want that will ever come forward.
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 16
Love the story. I am just totally confused about the plot and what is right/wrong and what is not. Is Bella walking away from Edward once she is old enough or do the Cullens expect something from her??? Will she be grateful for what they have done for her or is she going to turn them in?
Too many questions. Bed time! Thanks for sharing
Date: 04 Nov 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 10
OMG, Edward really is the bad guy here. I think the parents really bought Bella for him as a b-day present after his breakup with his ex-girlfriend. Who would think that Mike was a good guy and Edward the bad. Hmmmm
Date: 04 Nov 2010 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 16
and the plot thickens....can't wait for more
Date: 04 Nov 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 8
omg! At first I thought that Carlisle was up to something by the way he 'looked' at bella and the whole pin code on the phone thing, then I thought maybe he was just being nice and saving her from something worse, then Edward turns pushy and I thought ok, so Bella was 'bought' for his 16th birthday 'present' and the other buyer was made up to as an excuse for her to stay with the cullens and now I have no idea if Edward is nice or just a really good actor!! I am really confused!!! However, looking forward to reading how this story goes! :)
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 16
thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! That was really good!!! Can´t wait to continue.
Date: 04 Nov 2010 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 15
Wow - he's a fucking psycho.
Date: 04 Nov 2010 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 15
I really don't know what to think.....who is lying??? who is telling the truth??? What is real and what is not??? I just cannot believe that Edward and his friends or atleast one of his friends don't know what happened to Jessica. He is a good liar. I guess I'll have to wait and see. Very interesting story. Love it!
Date: 04 Nov 2010 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
Salamat sana lang sila talaga magkatuluyan ha. thanks so much
Date: 04 Nov 2010 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
well at least she found out some more from that night! cant wait till the next chaptet
Date: 04 Nov 2010 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 15
All this police involvement and she doesn't think to let them know she was sold by her mother and stepfather and bought by the Cullens. Seems like a six-pack short of a six-pack to me. Yes, I do mean a six-pack short of a six-pack--the gap is way to wide. Someone must be really dumb not to understand the implication.
Date: 04 Nov 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 15
So confused even if by some chance Edward is not guilty he needs mental help. I wonder if there is a twist that Luke is the one and is setting Edward up?????
Date: 04 Nov 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 15
hmmmm the boy has some anger management issues.
Date: 01 Nov 2010 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 14
HUMMMMM This one is a toughy... I hope Edward is innocent. He may not have done anything but he may know more than he is telling esp since he looked away from Bella when he said he didn't do anything to Jessica. If he was totally innocent he would have looked her in the eyes. Then again maybe he was addmitting to hurting Bella. This Michael guy Bella is hanging with is really creeping me out. not sure why but he is. He pushes for her to not trust the Cullens a bit too hard?????
Date: 31 Oct 2010 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 14
I dont think I believe him I hope I am wrong. cant wait for more I am all caught up.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 13
?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? I like Bella she has a good heart
Date: 31 Oct 2010 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 12
Im so confused now I cant deside if I like Edward or not Need to get rid of his so called friends. I think Bella is going to relize how much she misses him
Date: 31 Oct 2010 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 11
I really dont like this Edward and I have never not liked Edward I am a little destubed.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 10
I feel sorry for mikes mom but it was good for Bella to see only if she will be able to make it happen. I dont think she should every trust Edward until he gets help.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
Ya Edward has a screw loose and I think that Mike is right and I think that the other girlfriend sent him over the edge.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 8
Edward is a lying bastard and needs mental help
Date: 31 Oct 2010 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 7
Edward needs help how could he do that to her??? What are the Cullens going to do????
Date: 31 Oct 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 6
iS HE OUT OF CONTROL BECAUSE bELLA IS PAYING MORE ATTENTION TO OTHER PEOPLE
Date: 31 Oct 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 5
So glad he finely put that guy in his place., why does Edwards friends fear him???
Date: 31 Oct 2010 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 4
He really cares about her. I t is strange for her to see how a family can be.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 3
sounds to good to be true
Date: 30 Oct 2010 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
WOW what is Renee doing does she care??? Phil is a creepy bastard. Are the Cullens telling the truth???
Date: 30 Oct 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
I cant believe I have not started this story befor now I am reading many storys and I keep on seeing this one and I am so glad I went with my gut AND started to read I am loving it so far.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
If it wasn't Edward it was one of his minions. Hope Bella and Michael come out of this unscathed.
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 14
I don't know if Edward had anything to do with it or not.... And when he looked at the back yard maybe he buried her out there if he did do something. Wonderful chapter!
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2010 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 4
Is Michael like Jacob then? No offence but I hope not. Good story by the way. I really like it!
Author's Response:
No, no, no. Michael's nothing like Jacob.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 14
i dont think hes telling the truth ! cant wait till thenext chatper keep them comming
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 14
Love the chapter, and the progress, wonder what happened to Jessica, don´t trust anything Edward says any longer, =)
best wishes, Linda
Date: 29 Oct 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 14
yeah.....eddie knows something.
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2010 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 13
Loved the chapter but Edward is starting to creep me out =/
wonder how she´s going to get out of having to live w him... .
i´m betting Creepward and Trampica is getting hot and heavy
maybe even with some assistance.. *hmm*
best wishes, Linda
Date: 24 Oct 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 13
hmmm Jess will get prego I think at somepoint. or gang raped by them all
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 13
Curious to see what Edward is doing with Jessica, maybe he is going to push her off a cliff to get her away from him. Love the story!
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
I'm loving Michael :)
Date: 24 Oct 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
I think Edward is going to push Jess off the cliff...just to see if he could get away with it.
Date: 23 Oct 2010 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 12
Maybe Bella will meet a new kid (Jake) and get knocked up...only kidding. I get mixed signals about how Edward feels about Bella, its obvious he is possessive but he isn't concerned about her going about her day to day business.
Date: 22 Oct 2010 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 12
hmm I think Em and B are right. He's going to fail out with Luke as a friend. Or get charged with rape, the way that luke is.
Date: 22 Oct 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
post again soon please
Date: 22 Oct 2010 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
Reading the story over on FF and have enjoyed it but I thought you said you were going to change it up over here when posted. Seems the same or have I missed something. was kind of looking forward to a less evil edward.
Author's Response:
I was gonna change it, but I don't have a lot of free time on my hands. So I kept it the same.
Date: 22 Oct 2010 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 2
The initial indication of Bella's worth would lead this reader to believe she's worth millions. Did the drug used cause her to give up the pin number to get out the money? How could that be if she has to be eighteen to draw out the money?
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2010 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 12
It feels like the calm before the storm =) wonder how long she gets to enjoy this stillness,
Love the chapter and the progress,
best wishes, Linda
Date: 22 Oct 2010 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 12
well i hope that she remembers more! cant wait till the next chatper keep them comming
Date: 22 Oct 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
damn, phil really is a jackass and renee is not a mother but a birthcanal
Date: 22 Oct 2010 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
I´m confused, by this whole conglomoration of activity... the pranks aren´t really that bad... their not killing anyone, so why the over reaction... and I still don´t understand if we´re gonna have a HEA in this story... or what.. are Edward and Bella suppossed to be together?
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 22 Oct 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 11
this is getting really good please update soon
Date: 22 Oct 2010 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
i know getting drugged is not the best thing- but with the life that Bella currently has, hell maybe the kidnapper will take her somewhere better
Date: 21 Oct 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 11
oh wow its getting intense I can't wait for edwards reaction to bellas flashbacks
loved it
post soon please
Date: 21 Oct 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
Watching Edward leading such a dark path is sad, but it's good that Bella has Michael to lean on in her challenging moments.
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2010 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
Love the chapter and the progress,
best wishes, Linda
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 10
loved the chapter, Michaels homesituation was really a shock for her, and a first sign not to rely on Edward, seems like she doesn´t fall for his smooth moves any longer..
best wishes, Linda
Date: 21 Oct 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
hmmm I dont think its enough evidence but she should try to go to the cliff more to see if she gets more flashbacks.
Date: 21 Oct 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm glad Bella saw the relationship between Mikes parents. I'm hoping Luke isn't as bad as he seems.
Date: 21 Oct 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 10
hmmm at least she realizes what an unhealthy relationship is and will hopefully gaurd against it.
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 10
I kinda like Micheal... although I hope he just wants to be a friend to Bella and this doesn´t get awkward later... I´m still straddled the fence on the whole drugging thing... I just can´t find it in me to believe that Edward did it... so I´m sticking to that theory until you prove me wrong... I´m rooting for trusting Edward.. and why does Esmom need surgery? Great Chapter!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 18 Oct 2010 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 9
If Micheal´s story is correct... then things don´t add up...why would he drug her and allow all those boys have their way with her if he is in fact that possessive.. so maybe he was drugged too... I just don´t understand...and by the way will this story have a happy ending, because at this rate I don´t see her ever being able to trust him...great chapter!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am so confused...there is so much wrong with this picture...I don´t even know where to begin...I wanna be mad at Edward, but I still can´t find it in me to think that would purposely endanger her... much less allow other boys to touch her.. maybe he was a victim in all this too... I just don´t know what to believe...sheesh..you got me on this one....great chapter..lots of angst and drama!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 18 Oct 2010 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loving the story so far. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
This family seems alittle too good to be true, I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop!
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 7
I´ officially pissed with Edward...how could he do something like that...stupid jackass....I don´t know if I can forgive him for this one...she could have be raped or worse killed...and she´s never been with anyone...wjhat if she got pregnant...bad move Eddie...just a bad bitch ass move son!!!! Great Chapter even with all the angst!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
Whoa... Edward that was a little scary, but I can´t help but think it has something to do with him missing his time with Bella... she´s gaining a bit more independence and I think that scares him!!! Great Chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
Glad to see that Edward does really care about her...I was getting a little nervous...and I´m glad he finally put that douchebag Luke in his place...happy to see them share a very sweet and tender moment!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 18 Oct 2010 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
I don´t want Micheal teaching her anything.... I want her to be with Edward and Edward only....They haven´t yet explaiined their relationship...does Edward know that Bella was suppossed to be for him...and will he tell Bella... and when they go to school will she be a distant relative or his girlfriend? Great Chapter
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 9
From the summary of the story and the "Bella was given to Edward as a present" I tend to believe Michael. I am hoping I am wrong but after what happened on the cliff. I don't think I am. I wasn't sure if I wanted to keep reading this because of the cliff scene. i mean DarkEdward can be extremely hot but that was just wrong. Druging her and allowing others to watch him basically rape her. (Touching without proper consent in my view is rape even with out penetration) that is beyond Dark edward..Not trashing your story this is just my opinion.. :-)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
oh things are getting so interesting...Im hoping Edward doesn't hurt Mike.
Post again soon plesase
Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
Nice to see the whole gang is all there now...It was sweet of Carlisle to make light of what he had done for Bella... Glad to see them treating her like one of the family...Great Chapter!!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
That just bite...but I kinda figured something like that was going to happen..I´m just glad they got to her in time before someone to her God knows where... I´m glad this Edward is a gentleman and not a jerk.... Great Chapter..even though I wanna castrate Phil and shoot Renee...she´s better off without them
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
that was something... Renee is a biotch and Phil is a drunken child molester...poor Bella...I hope whoever took her doesn´t hurt her, but you´ve definitely got my attention...Great start!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 9
Maybe Michael is the crazy one? Although Carlisle does not come off as credible, so the Cullens may be the culprits too...guess I just got to wait & see! Loving the story!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 8
Hmmmm...not sure what to think? I like Micheal better than anyone else in this chapter!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 3
I seriously don't know why Bella's freaking the fuck out so soon. I know that she's supposed to freak out, but nothing that big really happened. Yes, I know that almost being sold is a ginormous thing, but she didn't get sold. So why is she having issues? She actually should feel no guilt and only gratefulness. I know she does feel that but it seems to me like she's only worrying about what happened and what could have happened. If my prediction is correct also, Edward is lying to Bella about her almost being sold to the trafficing people to cover up the fact that Carlisle actaully bought her. Shouldn't Bella wait a little to freak out as bad as she did today? Like maybe she could bottle that emotion up then let it spill once she finds out that she's a birthday present? Well, great first three chapters you have. Bye!
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved the chapter, love the progress and the new info, he could be right about edward.. .
best wishes, Linda
Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 9
well i hope michael is wrong! cant wait to see what twists and turns will come up next!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
I really hope that Edward and the Cullens aren't as bad as they sound right now but I don't see how they can't be at least not Edward.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 9
I think Michael is on the right track. i'm beginning to think that Carlisle didnt save her, just bought her for eddie.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 8
I think he's a REALLY good actor and him and Daddy are up to something
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loved the chapter, hard to think that Edward should have drugged the water, but who knows, he feels a bit unstable atm. Carlisle was disappointing towards Michael, he did save her life after all. Looking forward to the next chapter,
best wishes, Linda
Date: 17 Oct 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 8
well i think he did it and is just trying to make her think that it wasnt him! and why would there be sand in his hair! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 17 Oct 2010 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
Well all I can say is lie much Edward? If he didn't drug her he knew she was.
Date: 17 Oct 2010 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 8
Just found this story
Love it
B
Date: 17 Oct 2010 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 8
hmmm gotta ask and if you don't wanna give anything away pm me please but could Edward have multi personality disorder? there seem to be two sides to him if i am reading correctly. great chappy.
Date: 16 Oct 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow turns out Edward's a dick. If I was Bella I'd never talk to him again.
Date: 16 Oct 2010 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
ummmm...wow..cant wait for the next chapter
Date: 16 Oct 2010 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 6
glad bella has swimming at least.
Date: 16 Oct 2010 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 7
oh my....what just happened???? please post soon
Date: 15 Oct 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, watching Edward going into a dark tailspin is kinda sad. He seemed like he might be an okay guy. Guess we'll have to pin our hopes on Michael being the knight in shining armor for Bella.
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2010 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved the chapter, a lot that happened and wonder how they´ll move forward from this,
best wishes, Linda
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved the chapter, made more sense that he didn´t turn to Darkward all of a sudden =) (and *yay* for the extra chapter)
best wishes, Linda
Date: 15 Oct 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
Hmmm...Edward seems a bit more shady in this chapter compared to earlier ones...and sounds like an ominous cliffy of what is to come. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 14 Oct 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 5
really like it...post soon please :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved the chapter and the progress, =) wonder when the other shoe will drop and how she´ll react..
best wishes Linda
Date: 14 Oct 2010 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 5
hmmmm Only thing that concerns me is the "clingy virgin" comment he made.
Date: 14 Oct 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
So far, everything is good! Loving the story!