Date: 11 Aug 2011 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 29
well im looking foward to what happens next chapter but locking them in the room .... not a good idea !
Date: 11 Aug 2011 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 29
Okay, this can't happen again. I hate to say it but someone needs to ask them what they want to do or their going to have to go somewhere to be watched over (hospital ward).
Date: 18 Jul 2011 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 28
I''m still here. As hard as this is to read I can only imagine how hard it is to write. I know it will be a long road but I am along for the ride.
Date: 17 Jul 2011 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 28
B.B.
The two of them better accept Jane's help!!!! Or it's over for them. I can't believe that you & your muse are even thinking of the two of them not letting Jane help them. Woah!!!! Can't wait to see what you've come up with!!!!!!!
Great chapter as always!!!!!
Cory
Date: 17 Jul 2011 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 28
i hope taht they talk to jane ! i think they need to start to work it out together before they bring everyone else in
Date: 17 Jul 2011 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 28
Well, hopefully Jane keeps at it b/c sometimes it's helps to talk to a stranger than a family member or loved one.
Date: 17 Jul 2011 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 28
Wow....
This was an intense chapter.
I felt the dispair and the angst. For a moment there it felt like Bella was about to end it all... then Jane came. None too soon Im sure.
*hugs*
Date: 13 Jul 2011 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 27
thank you, I love this story. It is keeping me on the edge of my seat.
Date: 13 Jul 2011 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 27
I'm sorry that anyone would have to go through what both Bella and Carlisle have. I hope that some form of peace can be found.
Date: 12 Jul 2011 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 27
B.B.
A break is well deserved IMO. It's been a tough few last chapters. I'm just glad that you're going to finish this amazing journey!!!
I'm so ready for Bella to realize that she needs help!!! I think she knows it already and maybe Garett showed her that it's the right thing to do!!!!
Can't wait for the next chaper!!!!
Cory
Date: 12 Jul 2011 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 27
excited to see what happens next
Date: 11 Jun 2011 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 26
B.B.
That was a tough one to read. I really do hope that they will in time believe that they are loved by each of there loved ones!!!!
Fabulous 4 updates I just finished B.B.!!!!
Cory
Date: 11 Jun 2011 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 25
B.B.
This is going to be a rough ride for Bella & Carlisle I'm a thinking.
Great chapter!!!!
Cory
Date: 11 Jun 2011 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 24
B.B.
Thanks god they are all back together!!!
Now for the healing to begin again.
Cory
Date: 11 Jun 2011 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 23
B.B.
Back from holidays and catchiing up. And the first chapter back I get a stinking cliff hanger. UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Thanks god there's more chapters for me to catch up on!!! Off to the next one!!!
Great stuff B.B.!!!!
Cory
Date: 07 Jun 2011 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 26
I think the families need a huge group therapy session and your readers might need to sit in on it too. I feel so raw after reading these last few chapters. I don't know how you write it, but you do it so well. I know it won't come for a while, but I can't wait for them all to get to a happy place.
Date: 07 Jun 2011 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 25
My heart is breaking for Esme. How horrible it must be for her to have Carlisle scream at her that way. How does someone get past being so broken to allow themselves to be intimate with the people that they love again?
Date: 07 Jun 2011 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 24
Ugh, that was so emotional. I hate to see Carlisle and Bella so raw and volitile. I wonder how they will ever recover?
Date: 07 Jun 2011 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 23
OMG! I am so afraid you are going to kill off Carlisle! I was holding my breath through the whole last section of this chapter. :(
Date: 04 Jun 2011 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 26
This is truly emotional you should take a few days.
Date: 04 Jun 2011 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 25
Oh God
Date: 04 Jun 2011 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 26
well i hope that they talk to someone!
Date: 04 Jun 2011 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 26
*hugs you tightly*
You treat us readers so good BB!! This was a great chapter!
Its not gonna be any easier for these two for a while. I hope the rest of them see that!
Love it darlin'!
*hugs*
Date: 03 Jun 2011 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 25
well im excited taht they are home but i hope that they will be able to get past it all
Date: 03 Jun 2011 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 25
Wow...
That was a high on emotions chapter! Love it BB!!!
*hugs*
Date: 03 Jun 2011 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 24
OMG I'm just so happy they are safe
Date: 03 Jun 2011 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 24
you are my literary hero
Date: 02 Jun 2011 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 24
well im glad taht they are alright but i hope that they both can get back to where they were at befor all of this !
Date: 02 Jun 2011 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 24
*hugs you tightly*
I am a bit chocked up, BB, so I will make this short and sweet... well, as short as I can, it is me here...
It did get my pulse racing. Wow, that was so exciting, and now, to see the aftermath from other views, this is an amazing chapter BB, I love it.
*hugs*
Date: 02 Jun 2011 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 24
so glad that part is over..
Date: 02 Jun 2011 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 23
OMG I'm happy that bitch is dead and I hope the bullet hit Demetri.
I'm tearing up, I was so scared and sad for them.
Date: 02 Jun 2011 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 23
BB.....
*Peter hugs me from behind*
BB, I love your stories, I just really hate anything happening to some of them...
well, actually any of them... *closes eyes and bows head*
*takes in a shuddering breath*
This was a great, action packed chapter, alot happened! I love that!
*gives a watery smile*
I just really really love Carlisle and Bella...
*tears invade my eyes and I cant see the screen while a lump of emotion blocks my throat*
Peter... *dissolves into violent sobs*
"BB, darlin', she loved your chapter. She is looking forward to the next, I just know it." Peter gives you a sexy grin and tips his head as if he were wearing a hat. "We'll see ya next time, sweets." He winks with the smile still visible on his lips and in a heartbeat we're gone.
*hugs*
Date: 30 May 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 22
How could you? Damn, Double rape...can we get a warning next time.
So, it wasn't just about Bella, it was about Carlisle too...how is killing/hurting Bella (his daughter in law) going to get her Carlisle, exactly. Shouldn't she have went after his spouses. ?????
Wasn't Demetri the body guard, who watched her kids or am I mistaken?
for shock factor you getting a ten
Author's Response:
She felt Bella was the threat seeing as she was the one Kayla always saw CArlisle with. Also, once Demetri saw her, he wanted her. Yes, he was the one who watched over the girls.
Date: 30 May 2011 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 22
B.B.
Those are two sick puppies!!!! So looking forward to their demise!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
THank you:)
Date: 30 May 2011 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 22
wow... just wow
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: 30 May 2011 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 22
well i hope that they find them soon! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 30 May 2011 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 22
Alright evil one, a little warning would have been nice! Damn girl...you are asking alot for us to have faith. That was freakin harsh. I mean it is bad enough for that skanky whore to rape Carlisle, but to have Demitri rape Bella?!? Really, how much more are you going to put this poor girl through before she eats a bullet? The human soul can only take so much and I think she has suffered not only her share, but enough for Alice, Jasper AND E,dward.
I am officially putting your instincts in a time-out. Bad instincts, bad! I really hope you are writing as we speak to make this right.
But as completely emotionally frazzled as I am by this chapter...it was really good. ;)
Author's Response:
This is one of the hardest things I've ever had to write, and this was the mild verison. I can't promise that it won't get worse, either, and I felel like the biggest scum right now for doing this to them!!
Date: 30 May 2011 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 22
BB...
OMG that must have been very hard for you to write.
I am here, BB, I am here. I am looking forward to where you are taking this. This is gonna be the blowout of epic proportions!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thanks, Sweetie. I'm phsyically sick over this right now. I feel so guilty!
Date: 20 May 2011 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 21
You are killing me with this cliffy!!! Please tell me that Carlisle saw who took her?
Author's Response:
Of Course Carlisle saw who took her. The better question might have been, did they take him, too???????
Date: 15 May 2011 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow, and holy shit!
So evil, the perfect opportunity for the evil doer to abduct Bella. Poor Carlisle!
Sorry to hear you've got writer's block, hun. Hope it clears soon. This was a fantastic cliffie!
Date: 07 May 2011 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 21
OMG they took Bella and I felt the same as Alice after Katrina happened, my house totally didn't feel like him again.
Date: 05 May 2011 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 21
im sensing james...?
Date: 04 May 2011 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 21
BB
Oh dear god!!!!!! The only postivie I see from that ending is that maybe in the next chapter we'll learn whom this nutso is and why he/she is doing all of this to Bella!!!!
Even though it was a cliff hanger ending, that was a great chapter BB!!!! That being said, I'll just start pacing until the next chapter comes up.
I'm sorry to read your muse is being stubborn with you but, maybe this chapter will free her to write again!!!!
Cory
Date: 04 May 2011 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 21
well i hope for her sake that she can get away from who ever took her
Date: 04 May 2011 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow.. Why this is unbelievable.. how can someone have so many enemys. or ppl that stock her.. I 'm totally have no words. Bring her Back... :)Leona
Date: 04 May 2011 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 21
I love you BB, I always will, no matter what writings can or cannot come to you at the moment.
This was a phenominal chapter! Alot came to head, more so than I thought would!! I am ecstatic at how this panned out!!!
Loving it BB, This has alot of us hooked! :)
Date: 28 Apr 2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 20
That was BEAUTIFUL.. I can't believe that I've caught up. read both your other story's and loved them. and I love this one too.. It was awesome that the voltora let jas take them all out and let loose and no worries for just a litttle while.. To reconnected and come together has one 4 quarter becaming a whole. Love it.. Your a excellent writer I can't wait for the next chapter!
I want to believe it is James but somone has been watching her for a long time. Maybe it it Laurne.. I 'm almost 60% sure it her.. I always thought she would get back at Bella somhow. and she would problem know her way around the office and stuff. mmmm. Maybe? Am I close? hahah
Date: 28 Apr 2011 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh my god.. Bella is lossing it badly.. She is going to throw them away before they throw her away.. She lost and hurt. I know it is easy to push everyone away. But it don't help it just makes everything worse.. Poor Bella
awesome story so far excellent!! :)Leona
Date: 27 Apr 2011 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow.. I started reading this story last night. it took a bit to read the other 2 stories.. plus keep up my other reading.. I love this story. But can Bella every get a break.. Why? do you do this to her. it is so sad.. I can't wait to read the rest of the chapter. until I catch up. Awesome sad happy all the emotions are here.. and a beautiful family. Hope little why. dreams don't come true. I know she was more like bella.. I off, I will be ranking each chapter tell I catch up. thank you so much.. for continuing this squeal. it awesome.. :)Leona
Date: 18 Apr 2011 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 20
Jasper is awesome!!! What a fantastic idea for them to get away from the stress and madness in their lives if only for an evening. Excellent chapter!!!
Date: 18 Apr 2011 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 20
they are going to get thru this !
Date: 18 Apr 2011 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 20
I wish they hurry and find the crazy who is doing this to them.
Date: 18 Apr 2011 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 20
B.B.
I'm in tears here. (Sniffle, sniffle.)
Don't torture them much longer please!!!!
Great chapter as always!!!!
Cory
Date: 17 Apr 2011 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh dear... who is this sick bastard???
This is killin me BB!! I want to hunt him down and demand answers before I drain him dry!!
Love this chapter, especially the bonding at the end. simply magnificent :)
*hugs*
Date: 04 Apr 2011 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 19
she needs to step back and take a breather
Date: 04 Apr 2011 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
I cant wait to hear from Jasper! Gawd!
I want this sick fucker caught and fried.
*growls*
Still love it BB!
*hugs*
Date: 03 Apr 2011 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yeah, she is over dramatic, but she has every right. I can't imagine I would feel any differently if I were in her shoes. I thought she kicked ass at the conference. That took serious balls to go up in front of everyone like that.
It broke my heart when she was talking to Charlie and I love this last part between her and Alice. Very well written. ;)
Can someone please kick James' ass very very soon PLEASE. And don't try and tell me it isn't James. You and I both know it is that SOB.
Author's Response:
You want to bet on whether or not it's James????
Date: 03 Apr 2011 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
B.B.
Ok Bella was a wee bit over dramatic. But IMO she's intitled to it!!!
I know you have the problem already sloved in your fabulous idea filled brain and I soooooooooooooooooo look forward to the rest of the journey!!!!
More when you can please!!!!
Cory
Date: 26 Mar 2011 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 18
What an incredibly emotional chapter. My heart is breaking for them. To know that the sick fuck was in their house, near their children, is almost too much for any person. Excellent chapter.
Date: 23 Mar 2011 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 18
well i hope she starts to realize that is just not about her self and lets everyone help her !
Date: 23 Mar 2011 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 18
B.B.
That was a tension filled chapter!!!! Well done!!!!
If this ain't Jacob doing all this, then I haven't a flipping clue who's doing it.
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
Will check out the other story you've mentioned asap!!!
Cory
Date: 23 Mar 2011 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 18
I want to find the crazy person who is doing this to them
Date: 23 Mar 2011 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
*drool* in your basement?! Uh... well, I...
*gives puppy eyes and pouts perfectly*
Is Peter there? I know he is technically a Whitlock man, only Cullen by association, but a girl can dream...
*winks*
And the most appealing thing of it all, is you of course! Did I mention that before? Well, I did now, so... ;)
Date: 23 Mar 2011 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
This chapter was... wow. Thank the heavens for iron skin Jane!
Bless Carlisle's heart for calling her.
I would be acting like Bella if I were in her shoes too!
Breach by Catastrophia eh? Hmmm.... I will go check it out :)
And what is this group for? What do you do in this group? I read all the time, I dont think I have time for groups :) lol
Love it BB!!!!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
I don't know if Breach is over here on TWCS or not. I'm reading it over on FF.net. It's super smutty good! As for the group, you get to hang out with me and talk to me and did I mention me?? No, seriously, I put up lots of teasers, we talk about all the dirty things we would like to do with Edward and the rest of the Cullen boys, who I have locked away in my basement.....
Date: 23 Mar 2011 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 18
One question, where were the police? Is this not a federal violation now? And video voyeurism is also illegal in almost every state. I was just wondering why they were not the first to be called in to help with the investigation and see where the cameras are linked to.
Date: 20 Mar 2011 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 17
ok why do i have a feeling that this has something to do with kates ex-s death why do i have a feeling that this person is someone that he was screwing around with behind kates back and is out for revenge on bella for killing him i cant wait to see if i am right the only other person that it could be is james or it could also be the couple that they had black baled from getting there house built i mean the husband did get physcal with bella and acused her of sleeping her way to the top and commented on her life style i guess there is a lot of people that could have a grudge aganst bella i cant wait to see if i am right or not so please update soon
Date: 17 Mar 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 17
well i hope they catch who ever is doing this! but i have a feeling its james!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Mar 2011 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 17
holy shit!! SO wasn't expecting that lol update soon!! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Mar 2011 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 17
B.B.
Uggggggggggggggggggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! (thud) I'm on the floor with Bella.
It's gotta get better from here on right??? (Cory smiles as she says this)
Great stuffs. You've got me scared shitless now!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Mar 2011 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 17
WHAT THE FUCK?!?!?!
Ok, thats creepy! I am scared to death of this stalker now!
*hugs*
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 16 Mar 2011 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 17
OMG OMG!!!!!! Who is doing this??????????????
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 16 Mar 2011 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh the plot thickens! But who would have a naked pic of her? Does she recognize when or where it was taken or was it an invasion of privacy? I just hope that this pisses her off enough to stop the self pity act. It is beginning to grate on my nerves. Now I sound like the whinny brat, oh gosh darn it! Oh well.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Mar 2011 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 17
Ok seriously, how much more is she expected to endure? I don't think I could handle that on top of the sleep deprivation and fear for her children's safety. I really hope they find out who it is soon and nail his ass to the wall.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 Mar 2011 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 15
I want to know who it it.
Date: 11 Mar 2011 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 16
Poor Bella. At least she has the most amazing support system that anyone could ask for.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 Mar 2011 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 16
B.B.
We've got to catch this stalker STAT!!!! I'm scared for Bella's emotional state.
Great chapter!!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 Mar 2011 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 16
Wow, Bella's insecurities come back like a freakin tsunami! Holy shit!
Jeebus! Can she GET anymore angsty?! lol
Love it BB!!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 Mar 2011 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 16
im glad that hes comming back to help its going to be intresting to see them all work together again!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 15
Well thats a hell of a shocker ending!! I love the way your mind works BB :)
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 03 Mar 2011 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 15
Hey Honey! Thanks for another great update! Don´t worry about how long it takes, we´ll still be here.... promise! Missy ya when you´re gone! Great chapter!
FYI... I think it´s James and he´s doing it because they dropped his account. Someone else may or may not be in on it too, but James is most definitely involved!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you!!
Date: 02 Mar 2011 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 15
Bella going through the mill again. Edward steps up great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Mar 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 15
well i think its a good idea but i hope that hes going back for the right reasons
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Mar 2011 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 15
B.B.
Tense start to that chapter!!! So glad that it was only a dream!!!
Don't leave us hanging too long as to whom is doing this to Bella please!!!!
Updte when you can please!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I'm going to try to put up more, soon!
Date: 02 Mar 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 15
i agree with edward
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Mar 2011 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 15
I think Jasper is right. It is James. I don't know if Edward coming back to work is going to ease Bella's mind. If the kids are with Edward then at least she knows they are safe.
Excellent chapter my dear. Smut and drama all wrapped up in a lovely little bow.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Sweetie:)
Date: 05 Feb 2011 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
ive been waiting for this cshapter for like ever....job well done
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 05 Feb 2011 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, very intense!!
I'm so sad about her car, cuz I would totally love that car too, but I'm glad she's okay. Physically. I hope she gets the mental therapy help she needs.
More so, I hope they catch who it was. No excuse for both guards to be gone at the same time. I bet it was James!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 04 Feb 2011 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 14
Yeah that was intense. I just know it´s that fruit loop James. He is such a monster´s ball. I hate him. Poor Bella, it tough when you feel like your mind is playing tricks on you! great chapter bb!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 04 Feb 2011 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 14
Damn straight that was intense. I liked the scene in the art studio where Jasper got all angry and protective. He is really hot like that. Sorry. Can't help it.
Author's Response:
lol, it was good for me, too!! Thank you:)
Date: 04 Feb 2011 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 14
why does the shit always happen to bella??? thats really intense, but i think its time someone else got the shit just once then it can go back to bella
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 04 Feb 2011 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 14
That was really intense WOW!!! I know it has to be James because he is a bitter man that didn't get what he wanted .Loved it can't wait to see if they all stay on her side or think she has lost it.
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 04 Feb 2011 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 14
B.B.
Intense is the right word girl!!!! Great chapter!!!!
I wonder how long you and your muse are going to make us wait to confirm that it was James in the office that morning????? Any clues BB??? (hee, hee)
Post more when it's ready please!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 04 Feb 2011 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 14
it always happens to her i hope for her sake she goes and talks to someone !
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 04 Feb 2011 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 14
Yes, very intense!!! I will absolutely go into cardiac arrest if something happens to the family, ANY of the family...
I want to post nomads at every corner of each family house and the office.
Love it BB!! The suspense is a real awesome clencher!!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 04 Feb 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 14
Yes, it was f'ing intense! Omg is it James, who else could it be?
Author's Response:
There are several people it could be :)
Date: 04 Feb 2011 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 14
oh just like you promised! yeay!
too short tho :(
and who IS that guy?! it cant be a new one, right?
anyways.. i hope there's an update in the near future..VERY near.. as in tomorrow near..
ok, enough messing around with you.
gluck :D
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 Jan 2011 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
*high pitch scream* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! My car!!!! My beautiful car!! *sobs loudly*
Author's Response:
lol, thankS:)
Date: 20 Jan 2011 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 13
Well that was unexpected or was iit? Lol! This so has James´ crazy ass written all over it, but I know, I´ll just have to wait and see! Lol! I´m nothing if not patient. Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
lol, you are very patient, my dear!!
Date: 20 Jan 2011 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
wow I love this chapter setting the scene for the up and coming I hope. xx
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 20 Jan 2011 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 13
shit.. so expected lol. good one tho. :)