[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2011 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh shit, James has gone a little psycho. I know you are going to say that you didn't mention James, but we all know he is koo koo for cocoa puffs.
Author's Response:
lol, you know me too well!! Yeah, he is a little crazy but maybe he's not the only one.....
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2011 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 13
OMG it's James isn't it...he's crazy.
Bella, Carlisle had a wife and two kids you have THREE spouses and FOUR kids, you are not superwoman.
Author's Response:
Is it James???? ;)
Date: 20 Jan 2011 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 13
B.B.
Oh god!!!! (Thud - that's me falling!!!)
Bella needs a body guard STAT!!!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
*scrambles over to pick you up* Are you ok? DId you hurt yourself? No? Good. :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2011 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 13
Holy Shit!
Fucking James, what did that car ever do to him?! Asshat.
*grumbles under breath*
Loved this update BB!!
Its about time she accepted help, she was going to burn out way too soon and anything could have happened. Thank goodness for Papa C!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Again, who said it was James?? Yeah, I went there!! Thanks, Sweetie:)
Date: 20 Jan 2011 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 13
well life is going to get a whole lot difficutl! keep the chapters comming
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2011 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 12
Nothing like dropping an asshole client... 20 cups of coffee... hot office sex... and a cliffie to bring it all home. Once again I´m left speechless! Lol! I just knew James wouldn´t go away quietly! Then again... does he ever? Great chapter hon!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
That's if it is James in the car, right? ;)
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2011 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have fear pumping adrenaline through my veins. Who is following them?!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thanks ;)
Date: 09 Jan 2011 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 12
Once a again a chapter with a lot going on from Seth, James and Edward. You pack alot into each chapter. Thank you.
Date: 09 Jan 2011 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 12
B.B.
That was a teaser because you ended it off with a car following them!!!!!!!!!
I don't like it!!!!!!!! What will that James do?????
Great chapter!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Would I tease you??? Ok, I would but I never said it was James...
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2011 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 12
oh god i say the car is james.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2011 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 12
No no no please don't let that be crazy James. Please don't let anything happen to them.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 09 Jan 2011 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 12
Office sex is fucking hot!!!
I don't like the idea of James following them home. It creeps me out big time thinking that he could hurt the kids to get bback at Bella for dropping him.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I never said it was James in the car;)
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2011 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 11
Thanks for recing the group!!!!!! Totally hot!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 01 Jan 2011 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 11
B.B.
Wonderful love filled chapter!!!!
Sorry your computer is giving you troubles. Those dang things are supposed to make your life easier not harder.
Looking forward to more when it's ready!!!!
Happy belated Merry Christmas & Happy New Year!!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Thank you, Cory. Hopefully I got it all worked out:)
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2010 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 11
Smok´n hot and well worth the wait! I just love anytime we get to spend with these four. It´s always one hell of a ride! I´m with Bella though, I don´t know if James is worth the headache. I just feel like he may be up to something. Who knows? Great chapter bb!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you, sweetie:)
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 11
Happy fucking new year! Damn! Way to go out with a bang! A double strip tease (emphasis on tease) by our two favorite men! That was damn hot and very creative you naughty girl you! LOVED IT!!!!
Author's Response:
lol, I have been holding onto this little gem for a few chapters now. IT seemed like a good time to use it. BTW, I pimped your story, Use Somebody, out on a twilight group over on Facebook. I hope it brings you bunches of new readers. They were looking for a good tattward and I thought of yours;)
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 11
I hope you are feeling better, and that your computer doesnt hate you anymore :)
As for this chatper, I loved the sweet torture that is a seductive dance from E and Jazz. So nice...
The James thing is gonna blow... I am not looking forward to that.
Loved it, and the promise of exacted revenge from the girls :)
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you, hon:) I am feeling better and for now, my computer loves me. But that's just cause I gave it smut :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
Way to leave us hanging! Lol! James is a real douchebag! I don´t trust him at all! Can´t wait for thid epic night between EBJ&A! Sounds hot!!! Lol! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
lol, You're welcome for the cliffie ;)
Date: 10 Dec 2010 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 10
sounds like fun what ever they have planned! keep the updates comming
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 Dec 2010 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
I hope your daughter is feeling better.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 Dec 2010 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
Hi I haven't reviewed in a while. Just wanted to say "I love your writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 10
I hope all is well now that you are home and your daughter is recovering.
I liked this updaet alot.
James gives me the serious creepies!
Love it BB!!!!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 10
I loved it and can't wait to see what you have instore for them next.James is a big asshat lol.I am so glad things are going better now for you all
Author's Response:
I am having so much fun with James!! I have plans for him....
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 10
update quickly dude i wanna know what they have planned!!!!!!!11
Author's Response:
I'll try:)
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 10
I hope your little one is doing better.
What is going to be epic?I want to smack James so hard.
Author's Response:
She is doing better. Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
OMG! I hope your daughter is ok! Our kids always come first, so never apologize for being the mom you are. ;)
Excellent chapter! I love these four and can not wait to see what the boys have up their sleeves next.
You gotta love Bella. She never shows her weaknesses in front of others. She reacts with anger first...love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you. She's ok, just working through a tough situation right now. Childhood diabetes is no fun:(
Date: 10 Dec 2010 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 10
no worries, take your time. i hope all is well!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 Dec 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 10
B.B.
Firstly, how is your daughter? Everything has been worked out in her hospital stay I hope!!! Real life always comes first!!!!
You know you're readers will wait!!!
As for the chapter. That James gave me the creeps in this chapter. Not liking that creepy feeling at all!!!!
Update when you can. But just incase you don't before I leave for Cozumel on the 15th. MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!! Hope Santa brings you something you want for Christmas!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
She's better. She was diagnosed with type 1 diabetes so we are working on managing her care and learning to change our lifestlyes a bit. She's doing good though, giving herself her own shots. She amazes me more and more everyday. Anyway, I hope to get back to my somewhat normal schedule but if I miss you, I hope you have a very Merry Christmas, Cory:)
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 9
You know that feeling you get... when the hair on the back of your neck stands on end?
I have that now...
and it involves something that is going to happen...
because of James.
Weird aren't I?
He wasn't even in this chapter.
Its just a feeling I get. I am strange, I know.
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2010 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great update!
I'm happy for Seth and Tanya. :)
And newly concerned about Whitley and Mackenzie facing the wrath of ignorant, bigoted people. Urgh! I can only imagine the moms of those girls on the way home. I hope they don't pass on their bigotry to them and the girls end up asking about it or tormenting Whitley & Mackenzie at the next class. :(
Oh, and...
All work and no play would make Bella a dull girl, no?
LOL! ;)
Author's Response:
Yes, it would:)
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 9
awww... Seth and T are headed to Forks. Love that Bella won the bet! So... will Ms. Di be giving the other simple minded Moms a piece of her mind? I would love to see he put them in their place. Great chapter BB!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Nov 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 9
B.B.
Family time. You gotta love it!!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2010 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 9
Hope you and yours had a good Thanksgiving!!!!!!!!
Good chapter!!!!!!!! Totally knew they were going to keep Seth, yay!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Nov 2010 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 9
Ahhh, I have missed them. Such a simple but sweet gesture, but sometimes those are the most important.
I loved that Bella and Carlisle were betting over Seth and Tanya moving. That whole group needs to go to a gambling support group. They bet on anything!
Author's Response:
I seriously, think they all have a problem:)
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 8
haha!!! this is a trip. Love Seth´s smooth tactics. i thought he was going to ask Carlisle could he re-open the office in Forks. Loving this story!! great chapter!!
krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
All I can say is... Whoa!
;)
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 17 Nov 2010 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 8
I love when these four get all hot and sexy in bed. Being together and parents has not dimmed the flames and I love it!
So Seth and Tanya are leaving LA? Sorta saw that coming. But as fun as they have been in this part of the story, they need to be in Forks with Angela and Ben.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I love writing their lemons:)
Date: 17 Nov 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 8
B.B.
I was over the moon to see a new chapter this morning from you!!!
You got me on this one. I wasn't expecting Seth to quit.
Looking forward to what you and your muse are going to do now!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2010 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 8
*smacks self for not reading the novella*
Ok, so Seth quits.... HOLY OYSTERCRACKERS BATMAN!!! There deep in the soup now!
*giggles at bad joke*
Peter is hunting, and Charlotte is shopping, so I can get away with corny jokes like that. ;)
I get bad vibes from James. I think he is up to something to get back at Alice and Bella. I don't like it. It could hurt all of them. There are children involved. This is scary.
Wow, I am so happy to see an update here!
Now I eagerly anticipate an update for FFL. See ya next update BB!!!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thanks:) My Boys is up next and then FFL:)
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2010 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 8
What is up with James, he isn't going to fuck up Bella's reputation is he, I hope not?
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Nov 2010 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 8
aww wonder why hes quiting! keep the chapters comming
Author's Response:
Thank you:) If you haven't read Diffferent Awakenings, it might help understand.
Date: 26 Oct 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 7
B.B.
Kind of mean to let Edward leave with out some fun but, I'm sure you'll make up for that!!!!
Jasper was just letting out his inner animal with Bella. Loved it!!!!
As for the extra chapter with Seth/Tanya/Angela & Ben. I'll read it!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 25 Oct 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 7
i love these stories, they are so good; please keep writing them!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 25 Oct 2010 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 7
well i hope the teacher gets the stick out of her ass!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 25 Oct 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
I think an outtake would be suffice. But that is just my opinion.
Ok, I need to work in the building where office sex is that easy to get away with. And throw in a Jasper for good measure please? LOL. Loved the hot office action. Very nice. ;)
Mrs White is still a narrow minded bitch, but Bella needs to remember that the kids are most important and as long as she is being decent to them, she needs to let sleeping bitches lie.
Ahh, James. Edward is going to pull a Hoffa and put him into the cement of the foundation of his porn store. I can see it happening. ;)
Author's Response:
Yeah, I need to find an office like that, too!
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 7
I say outtakes.... the foursome focus is so much better between Alice, Jazz, Edward and Bella.. and besides it wouldn´t fair to the other couples... the only got outtakes... I still wanna kick Ms. White´s ass... she´s such an old bitch... and desk sex with Jazz was hot... poor Whitley and her nightmare.. good thing her Mommies and Daddies have such a big bed....lol!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 7
Can we have it be a small side story!!!!!!!!!!
I'm totally looking for Jasper at work, now!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I am leaning toward it being a side story:)
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, that's a tough question. I think it'd be great as a sidestory all its own, if you've thought of a plot and everything to make it longer than a oneshot. If not, then it's okay to just do an outtake. Either way, I'm reading it!! LOL! ;)
Back to this chapter...
I figured Mrs. White was still up to her shenanigans. *rolls eyes*
James is a turd.
The lemon was hot! I like that side of Jasper. ;)
When it was over, it was the end of the day? Cuz when Jazz entered, Bella said it was the middle of the afternoon. Whew! I bet they just left early, having to go see if they could join Alice and Edward, LOL! ;)
Author's Response:
No, they left early:) Either way I do it, it's going to be a few chapters.
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 7
Well, for me personally, I say do it as an outtake.
I will read it if it is an outtake, not if it is its own story.
Loved the update BTW, Mrs. White has it coming, I just know 8it. Phil is gonna step in, she is gonna cause a scene, and make an ass out of herself, anf Phil will be the hero!!
I love it!
Oh, wait, that was just my imagination. Drat!
Anywho, I cannot wait for you to show us whats in store, Im all excited!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) If I did make it it's own little story it would only be a handful of chapters.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2010 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 6
haha...Carlisle and Embry to funny with all the questions... and What´s with Seth, Tanya, Ben and Angela.. another foursome in the making... haha.... that´s too funny, glad Edward will be working with Bella on the project.... I really say if I trust James.. he´s a sneaky one..... no worries... delays in posting just heightens the anticipation!!!! lol.... great chapter!!
krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 5
haha...gotcha Mrs. White.... I guess you heard that you old bat... it was nice to see Phil show up in the story.. with a positive roll not doubt,,,, great chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 4
Yeah... I kinda figured that Ms. Whitw was a bit of a biggot and had been mistreating the kids... How sad of her to take out her ignorance on the innocent children.... I can´t wait until they get ahold of her...great chapter.. and I´ve really enjoyed all three stories...
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
I´ve got a strange feeling Ms. White doesn´t like any of the children because of their parents.. but I can´t wait til she gets put in her place!!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2010 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
SO FAR SO GOOD... ALTHOUGH I FEEL THAT THE TEACHER IS GOING TO HAVE SOME NEGATIVE VIEWS ON THEIR FAMILY SITUATION...I THINK SHE PICKED UP ON THE FACT THAT BOTH GIRLS CALLED EDWARD DADDY WHEN IN THE LAST CHAPTER THEIR WERE CLEARLY TWO SETS OF PARENTS...SO I GUESS THE NARROW MINDEDNESS IS COMING SOON
KRAZI
XOXO
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
Holy shit that was HAWT! You are an amazing author!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Oct 2010 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 6
B.B.
Loved it!!!!!!
Why am I glad the Edward is going to help Bella on James' project??? I just don't like that James and feel something bad MIGHT happen.
Cory
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 6
Holy hell! Edward can play that game any fucking time he wants!!! That was fucking hot!!! And the fact that Alice and Jasper were just watching them...even fucking hotter!I am so glad I read 'Living Through the Pain' first cause I just knew you would have a juicy little pick me up in here. ;)
Sooooo Seth and Tanya and Angela and Ben, hmmmm? Very interesting. I wonder where they are going to live when they finally get their foursome settled?
Need to go have my wicked way with my husband now. ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks ;) I needed the pick me up too!
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh MY MY MY MY... DA YUM, BB!! Wow! I am in desperate need of a shamwow right now, LOL! Seriously, that was so HOT! Yes, definitely a shamwow to dry up all the drool, and I need a cold shower!
Whew! ;)
Author's Response:
lol, I need one too!!
Date: 12 Oct 2010 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
well i hope everthing goes well with james ! cant wait till the next chatper and that was one hot lemon!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
I thought this last chapter but are Seth & Tanya and Angela & Ben interested in each other?
Lemon: Hot I love a dominate Edward!
I love them with the kids and seeing them balance family life.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) And yes, but I'm still trying to decide if they will take the next step:)
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
that was so hot i don't think edward has ever been that raw it was very sexy loved it i hope that you will do an outtake of the set /tanya /ben/ang weekend lol
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I am planning on doing an outtake or two of their weekend if I decide to go that way:)
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
I loved it iam glad phil is a good man and put that old bat in her place
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 03 Oct 2010 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Finally got the time to start this story. Awesome love it had a lil of everything!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Oct 2010 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
B.B.
Way to go Cullen parents!!!!!! And I'm really liking princiapal Phil!!!
Looking forward to more when it's ready!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
Yeah, that meeting sure didn't go well. :( I hope Phil keeps his word, too.
Wouldn't hurt to think of a Plan B, just in case. Like a private school or home teaching, or even full-time tutors. It is L.A. after all. How do you think celebrities and the like handle their kids' education?
Or maybe Rose could just replace Mrs. White? Yeah! :)
Author's Response:
I got me a plan:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
Damn it! I was hoping for a Mrs. White vs. Bella smack down! Damn! Oh well, there is always hope for that to come up later when she doesn't change her attitude. I like the addition of Phil as the principal.
Author's Response:
LOL, I have a plan for Mrs. White:)
Date: 02 Oct 2010 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well at least the principal is understanding of different lifestyles.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2010 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 5
I love it I love it I love it!!! *squee*
Oh my Gosh!!!!!! Phil!!! *hugs you relentlessly*
*racks brain for characters*
Oh, who is he paired up with?? I am so anxious to see :)
*bounces in place like Alice on a sugar buzz*
Thank you for updating this, I love this story and I cannot wait to see the down-nosers like Mrs. White (whom was left by her husband 7 years ago for another man because she was such a bitch *giggles*) get their just deserts. Karma can be such a ass-biter sometimes!! lol
Author's Response: lol, thanks:) I am still working out the deatils of Phil :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2010 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 5
OMG I'm with Bella let's kick her ass!
Author's Response:
lol,thanks:)
Date: 02 Oct 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 5
Another great chapter I always look forward to your updates
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Sep 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 4
B.B.
What's up with the teacher??? Solve this stat please!!!!
I think Bella took her punishment extremely well!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Yes, she did! Next chapter is a little somthing I call "Mrs. White gets bitched slapped."
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wow!!! That was very, very juicy!! Loved it!
:D
Had a feeling the teacher was going to be a problem! :(
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 27 Sep 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 4
well i hope they get what results they want from the teacher but i have a feelign they wont ! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 4
I SO LOVE UNTRADITIONAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
lol, me too!
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
We love the lemons!!!!
I knew that Mrs. White was going to be a problem. I can not wait to see this meeting. She has no idea the shit storm she has invited upon herself by treating Bella's daughters badly. LMAO!
I like the little flashback to the whole James situation. It gives some perspective on why Bella really doesn't want to work with him.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I wouldn't want to get on Bella's bad side, or the others for that matter!
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 4
I knew that teacher was going to cause problems for them I just hope someone can hold Bella down lol hell all of them for that matter no one picks on your kids that's when the shit will hit the fan lol great chapter love the lemons.I think james is going to be a dick to them as well and try to get back at alice and bella for the past but i hope the guys can step in and kick his ass
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
Mmm, who wouldnt want a punishment like that? Amazing chapter and Mrs. White can go to hell if she can't be nice to innocent children.
Author's Response:
I know, right? I would take that over and over again!
Date: 21 Sep 2010 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
B.B.
Well now, James is back. And wanting a new building. Interesting!!!!
Great chapter!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 3
Okay I'm sorry but Mrs. White needs to get over herself. Even if you don't like the parents choices you DO NOT take it out on the kids. Also, it does not matter what the parents are doing as long as the kids are alright that's all that matters. She needs to learn tolerance and respect for others. She does not have the right to judge anyone.
Author's Response:
Hey, I agree with you but not all teachers do:(
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
I loved it i don't think Mrs.White likes ppl who are different but i hope they can fix this problem .I don't trust James but then again who would lol
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 21 Sep 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
Yum! That was a mighty good lemon, thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I rather enjoyed it myself!
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2010 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
Hot beginning and intrieging ending. Seriously the visual of an Alice sandwich with Bella attacking Jasper...too fucking hot for words.
I have a feeling that Mrs White is not very open minded to non-nuclear families. LOL, I can not wait till she has a sit down with these four. Bella is going to rip her a new one. Mrs White won't know what hit her.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) Wouldn't that be the perfect way to wake up???
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 2
I know the teacher is going to be a problem for them but they will handle her i know bella and she wont put up with any crap from anyone
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
love the start of this story please continue its really good!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 2
Awww, so cute! Edward is such a wonderful father.
Sorry for the confusion with my last comment. I simply meant that I was surprised there weren't more children between Bella, Edward, Alice, and Jasper. That Bella and Alice had had only two children EACH. LOL! With the four of them like rabbits in the bedroom and all, LOL! I kinda expected Alice and Bella pregnant every year. Because sometimes once you have one...you're on a roll, LOL! :D
Date: 18 Sep 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
B.B.
Now that's what I call a busy day for Edward!!!!
Great chapter!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 2
OMG was Mrs. White judging Edward for his situation with the others. She was stand-off with Embry and Jared on the kids first day. Being a stay at home dad is sext especially on Edward.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 2
It think Mrs White is being bias against the realationship they have - With both the girls calling Edward "Daddy" I think that she is VERY dissaproving and we will hear a lot about it in the future! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 2
This is a whole new type of Domward (Domesticated Edward). I loved the view we got into a day in his life as a stay at home dad of four.
So, Mrs White is just now realizing that their family is a little bit more than meets the eye? I can not imagine how that parent teacher meeting is going to play out. I just hope she isn't nasty or dismissive to the girls because their family dynamic isn't the same as everyone else's.
Excellent chapter!
Author's Response:
THank you:) Yes, This is a new Domward ;)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 2
I just love your stories so much and I cant believe how much you have grown as a writer! Please please please keep these 4 coming back and back and back! I cant get enough of them.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much:)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
I LOVE EDWARD!!! Where can I get one?
Author's Response:
I wish I knew!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2010 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
Really loved this chapter - Edward's day was lovely to read about. I wonder if the teacher has an issue with the family lifestyle?
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Sep 2010 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
Looks like Mrs. White has already figured out the nature of our favorite foursome's relationship and isn't very happy about it. I love how you are writing the third enstallment to the Awakenings Series.
Great chapter. Keep up the good work!
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[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 2
awwww its soooooo adorable!!!!
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Date: 17 Sep 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
I LOVE DADDYWARD!
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[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Aww, that was so cute! LOL! What a way to start the third installment. So glad Bella's recovered so well.
And for the whole chapter to be in Jasper's pov, way cool. Liked it.
Was expecting more kids though, LOL! Just 2 each? LOL!
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Just two??? They have four between them!?!?!?!?!?!
Date: 15 Sep 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome chapter. Looking forward to more of the lives of the Cullen Clan.
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Date: 15 Sep 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yay!!! Edward and Bella had a baby together! OK, that makes me feel better! Love it! :)
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[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really liked it. I really am glad that you grew the kids up a little, I really wanted to see how they would handle their kids a little older.
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Date: 15 Sep 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!!
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Thank you so much:)