Date: 19 Feb 2010 5:33 AM Title: Pursuing
Yes, I was surprised by jake. I thought it was the Volutri ...so you fooled me too. Congrats. Looking forward to the sequel
Date: 18 Feb 2010 8:20 PM Title: Starting
WHAT is gonna happen to Jass??
Date: 18 Feb 2010 8:13 PM Title: Belonging
LOL I like how they still bitch at one another!
Date: 18 Feb 2010 6:23 PM Title: Comprehending
I like the timeline of your changing a lot better! Quick is good in this instance =D
Date: 18 Feb 2010 5:52 PM Title: Enlightening
Okiedokie! Im convinced...bite her Edward!
Date: 18 Feb 2010 5:33 PM Title: Explaining
Less talky more kissy.....LMMFAO!!
Date: 18 Feb 2010 5:27 PM Title: Killing
OWWWWYYYYY! Dang that was a freakin awesome torture scene!
Date: 18 Feb 2010 5:18 PM Title: Preparing
JAMES!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOO I can't believe Mike used his brain!
Date: 18 Feb 2010 5:07 PM Title: Confronting
Like a fat kid on a diet huh? BOL
I freakin love James! What an ass!
THIS IS SO GOOD! Onward!
Date: 18 Feb 2010 3:11 PM Title: Meeting
Creepy Edward...and I just cant stop reading
Date: 17 Feb 2010 2:31 AM Title: Pursuing
Wow ok first awesome story! I like how the vampires are, Second i remember you saying something about jake. I just thought it was a minor detail, i cant wait for the sequel. Its going to be awesome i can already tell!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 10:26 PM Title: Parting
Shit.. i laughed like a looney when she was going to say her goodbies to Angela.. Hahaha... and Ben, a pyro.. =D
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2010 1:57 PM Title: Explaining
This story is tons of fun... hate the cliffie though -- I'm dying to know what's going to happen next! I like how it alternates between funny and passionate with a dash of horror. The scary stuff always has tinges of humor, part of which is supplied by Bella's internal monologue which is hilarious at times. Love how she's fleeing for her life but turns googly-eyed when Edward shows up. They're a great pair, love the 2 of them together (it's the best part). Great story, thanks!
Author's Response:
Wow...thank you for the review! You summed up my story quite nicely.
You know how in books, authors place quotes at the beginning of it, to show the readers what people are saying about their stories? Yup...this would be mine.
Thanks again for the review! Oh, and if you like Bella's inner ramblings and such, you might like my one shot for the to kill a Cullen contest. Bella's ramblings are at a all time high lol
Date: 16 Feb 2010 4:48 AM Title: Killing
Evil! But I can't stand Mike so we're good.
Author's Response:
haha, well that's good...I didn't know if I went too evil on that one. lol
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 15 Feb 2010 5:59 PM Title: Beginning
Omg.. you have to keep going.. will Bella and Jasper just be turned to be thier mates, will they struggle with blood lust. It would be so cute to have Carlisle and Esme come to track the family down and be angry with "the kids" about this...update soon
Author's Response:
haha thanks! Will they be turned? well...can't tell you that yet. No, vampires in this universe don't really struggle with blood lust. That's one of the three things I changed about them. One, being that, two being the way they are killed and the third hasn't happened yet so I can't say it without giving it away. lol
Thanks for reviewing! I love hearing what people think about the story. I'll try to get the entire thing up over the next couple of days. I just have to find the time to look over each chapter before I post them.
Date: 15 Feb 2010 2:53 AM Title: Beginning
Good story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you are liking the story!
Date: 15 Feb 2010 12:00 AM Title: Beginning
love the story ! keep it up
Author's Response:
Thank you! and thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2010 9:02 PM Title: Introducing
loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks! and thanks for reviewing!
Date: 13 Feb 2010 8:44 PM Title: Introducing
Dangit! Don't stop there!! James is a funny baddy, love him! PLease update soon, I was really getting into this! xodana
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! I'll be updating a lot over the next two days, so hopefully the story will be completely up by then. Glad you're liking the story!
Date: 13 Feb 2010 7:06 PM Title: Knowing
Whoa! DAMN! This is awesome!!! I love bad vamps=D
Date: 13 Feb 2010 6:48 PM Title: Meeting
Oh man! That was very disturbing and erotic....
Date: 13 Feb 2010 6:16 PM Title: Missing
OOOO! Well as long as Jasper is here I am happy as a clam! Please don't off him!!! Great chapter! xodana