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Reviewer: nicole1962 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2011 3:24 AM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

so nice and hot:)



Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2011 12:37 AM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

Awww, that was very amazing!  I really loved it! :)  I cannot wait to see what happens next!  Do you have a picture of the ring?



Author's Response:

there is a photo of the ring (and E's bracelet)  on V&V's Facebook page.  The link is on my author profile page.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it!  I think a trip with Edward to the Holy Land would be ABSOLUTELY AMAZING :D



Author's Response:

anywhere with E would be amazing.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2011 12:16 AM Title: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much :)



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2011 12:07 AM Title: Genuflections & Surprises

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  I am sure I would have the same comments as Bella in certain situation ;)  I would also probably kiss the UK stamp on my passport (if I ever went).  A lucky friend of mine has been twice, on a mission trip :)



Author's Response:

it's a wonderful place...I love every part of England that I've visited, and have many very dear friends over there.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2011 12:00 AM Title: Yellow Carnations & First Class

Wow, that was amazing!  If I were Bella, I would be worried about the flowers.  I would also be praying HOURLY for the other retreat members and praying for patience for Father Pat.



Author's Response:

no kidding..lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 11:32 PM Title: Panty Droppers & Belly Dances

Wow, that was amazing :) I cannot wait to see what happens next ;)  Is there a reason for the specific dates mentioned in the chapter end notes?



Author's Response:

not really...just trying to let everyone know what date we've reached in the story...for anyone wanting to keep track.  Thanks!

Reviewer: booMcCarty Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 10:48 PM Title: Pool Tables & Revelations

No idea why, but the thought of Charlie 'googling' really makes me chuckle. Seems so... un-natural! hee hee.



Author's Response:

you made me lol.  hahaha  I have a vision of Charlie cranking a 150 year old desk top to life and hammering away with TWO fingers only....hahaha..  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 6:15 PM Title: Pink Chiffon & Man Skirts

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much!  I believe "poofy" is a word, if only because my family calls my fat cat "poofy".  Adorable ;)  I cannot wait to see what happens in London :)



Author's Response:

lol.  THanks very much!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 3:43 AM Title: Some Justice & Escargot

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE!  If Rose had NOT royally messed with Geri, I would have been more than willing to do so.  In fact, I think she wasn't messed with enough, can I have a turn with her?  



Author's Response:

there's a tiny bit more Geri to come andit's ALL GOOD.  lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 3:35 AM Title: Creme Eggs & Welcome Distractions

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much!  I cannot wait to see what happens next :)



Author's Response:

Wow..you are almost caught up with me!  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 3:19 AM Title: Outtake: Ode to The Arse

Wow, that was amazing and funny ;)



Author's Response:

THanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 2:32 AM Title: Pool Tables & Revelations

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much :)  I miss my grandma on the day she died, mostly because it was so sudden (we saw her about 3 hours before she was found dead, she was sleeping, so it wasn't painful but it still didn't make the pain any better).



Author's Response:

i lost my grandpop a year after losing my dad.  Both were tough...especially on my mother since Grandpop (her dad) lived with them for the last 30 years of his life.  Thanks!

Reviewer: kawaiiloonie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 8:53 PM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

Wonderful story. It has made me laugh and cry and well is very romantic.

So excelent job and hope you keep gifting us with your beatiful work.



Author's Response:

absolutely..next chap is almost finished.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 3:19 AM Title: Lap Dances & Abstinence

Wow, that was amazing!  Poor Emmett, but I hope he can make it :)



Author's Response:

Emmett can survive anything.  THanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 3:07 AM Title: Wookies & Good Friday

OH SNAP!  I wonder what happened and how Edward can get himself out of this mess (I haven't read LRM, but I promise to ASAP).  I have so much to do for school and there are only 24 hours in a day but I am not complaining, but explaining why it is taking me a long time to read.



Author's Response:

LRM just give more detail...and Edward is afraid that he's a crazy stalker...his nervousness makes it funny.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 2:39 AM Title: Outtake: The April Fool

That was INCREDIBLE!  Poor Edward :*(  I would comfort him ;)



Author's Response:

LOL...Edward needs to get even.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 2:33 AM Title: Boxer Shorts & Serenades

Wow, that was amazing!  I loved it so much :)  I am happy Emmett and Rose are getting married in the Catholic church, I want to see what one is really like (my cousin got married in one but I was too young to go and although she videotaped it, the only copy I have seen was at my grandma's before she died, and now the cousin has remarried, so I don't think she has it anymore).



Author's Response:

it's not really that big a difference from any other church...unless both the bride and groom are Catholic and opt for a 'Nuptial Mass'...which is very long and beautiful.  Unfortunately, those of us who marry non-Catholics..just get the simple wedding ceremony.  That's what we'll have in the fic.  short, sweet and to-the-point.  But trust me, Emmett & Rose's wedding will be funny. (how could it not?)  .  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 1:51 AM Title: Ringtones & The Prodigal Son

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really cannot wait to see why Rose called Bella. 



Author's Response:

glad you are enjoying the story.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 12:31 AM Title: Unsolicited Advice & Airline Wings

Wow, that was amazing ;)  Maybe Emmett would prefer to join a Protestant church, if he ever rejoins so he doesn't have to worry about spouting off every single offense to the priest (I mean no disrespect to Catholics, but sometimes it is hard to remember exactly what you did).  I cannot wait to find out what happens next :)



Author's Response:

if you forget some of them, it's still forgiven.  all that's asked is for the person to confess 'to the best of their knowledge', we're only human after all.  i STILL wouldn't want to be in line behind Emmett.  lol.  THanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 12:25 AM Title: Swing Dancing & The Dearly Departed

Wow, that was amazing!  I think it's Tanya who is speaking at the end.  I personally loved the priest at the Mass on Palm Sunday, hilarious!  I know some other ministers that are like that (in some way) and it's funny ;) (is that sacrilegious to say?)



Author's Response:

he was pretty goofy...but guys like him definitely exist!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 12:17 AM Title: Wild Turkey & Jedi Training

Oh wow, that was incredible!  I remember when I went to Disney World on my Senior Trip, we got locked out of Disney World, because half of the group was outside the gates and the other half wasn't and we had no way of getting in contact with them.  Thankfully, we didn't have to wait that long before we got to explain our situation to a guard who let us in :)



Author's Response:

Glad you like the story.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2011 11:57 PM Title: The Southern Gentleman & Caveward

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2011 11:47 PM Title: Tidal Pools & Capistrano

Wow, that was incredible :)  I really loved it!  I don't think the marriage talk is too soon, my parents started dating in May of '75 and were engaged by Christmas of that same year (and were married in October of '76) also, a friend of mine, her parents were engaged 2 weeks after their first date!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  i agree.  Sometimes you know right away.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2011 9:50 PM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

You achieved what you wanted with the sweet loving and romantic.

 

Wonderful chapter but she still did not see his ass naked!!!

 

Loved it.

Fiorella



Author's Response:

without giving too much away...just be patient.  Trust me.  THe next V&V is half-finished.  Thanks!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2011 10:25 AM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

I LOVE this sweet and romantic stuff!  Taking their time makes it all better in the end.



Author's Response:

I agree.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2011 6:15 AM Title: Lap Dances & Abstinence

I saw this coming.  A friend of mine had the same meeting before her wedding.  But with her, she argued with the priest what Abstinence really entailed.  She actually argued with the priest that oral was not actually sex and should at least be allowed that.  I was seriously on the floor laughing as she told the story in the same Emmett animated fashion.  Gotta love crazy friends, they sure do make life interesting.



Author's Response:

this is true.  Emmett is out of his mind most days!  Thanks, glad you like the story.

Reviewer: benna Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 9:36 PM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

Very sweet, Very loving, and very romantic. Which made it very very hot! This was one of my favorite chapters. I love how he is with her. Thanks for the amazing update, and as always I will be looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

yes...these two are pretty sappy.  Had to have a little Gordon snark to balance it out.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 5:00 PM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

They better take these baby steps or Bella is not going to be ready to be intimate. Edward would not want a scared bride on their wedding night.

Edward had a wonderful proosal. I like the idea of him wearing a bracelet for his engagement jewelery.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: toyscowboys Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 1:43 PM Title: Captain Jack & Drunkella

Ive been up all night reading this story and so I loooooove everything. The last chapter as well as this one had me laughin so hard, I got a grumpy husband on my hands this morning but its soooo worth it to hear Pootie Tang



Author's Response:

LOL. My husband is grumpy all the time...doesn't need an excuse.  I'm very glad you like it.

Reviewer: toyscowboys Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 1:23 PM Title: Waxward & Sexward

OK I do have to say I wouldve jumped all over that chance to meet Mr "Jack Sparrow" mmmmmm in the words of the fandom " that got my knickers in a twist" lmao great story so far and cant wait to read more



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 1:23 PM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

Oh WOW the proposal was so sweet and very romantic. Thank you for updating so quick.



Author's Response:

Thanks! next chap is halfway done.  posting a couple LRMs first.

Reviewer: Sabs Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 9:01 AM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

Wonderful - just wonderful! The whole chapter was so romantic. *sigh* Just to think that he changed a room into a hobbits house....oh my.

It will be hard for her to leave him and I am very sure, that the paps will give her a hard time. So how long will it take, until their happily ever after?

Thanks again for sharing your fantasy with us

Sabs



Author's Response:

they will set the wedding date soon.  Thanks!  so glad you liked it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 7:42 AM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

That was a dream come true what a way to ask to marry the one you love my heart was beating out of my chest lol.  I am so glad they are not trying to keep it on the down low.  Wow I cant wait to hear what was going through Edwards mind. What a way to spend a last night you did make it sweet, loving and romantic hot and horny will come latter lol.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  That was very sweet.  Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 7:06 AM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

Ok...love the sweet, loving & romantic....and I get Edward not wanting to "do the deed" on their last night together but really?? Boobs revealed and all we got was reverence? Damn....those two have more self control than I could ever have!!
Great job...so glad he did it perfect for them! GR was epic!

Author's Response:

yeah yeah yeah...you and me both!  BUT this only gave Bella's POV...Edward may have been beating his horny side into submission...i guess we won't know until LRM catches up.  Thank you!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 6:08 AM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

sweet slow and romantic is so very much these two kids. Getting time to do the deed. I am worried she is still gonna have problems. I hope not. I hope LOVE will cancel out all the bad for both of them.

 

I love this story and the fact you do too. Updates keep us going. I dont have to reread the previous chapter each time. I thank you,



Author's Response:

That was very sweet.  I thank you.  Obviously their story is close to my heart...and sometimes my funny bone.  More to come soon.

Reviewer: meadowmate78 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 6:06 AM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

Yep, you succeeded!!!! I so love this fic:)



Author's Response:

THanks!  i'm glad.

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 5:11 AM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

really sweet chapter :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 4:59 AM Title: Tidal Pools & Capistrano

I know what you mean.  I am writing a story myself and I am keeping it very personal.  When not working on it, I have to lock it in my safe.  He even tries to read over my shoulder while hugging me.  He should know I am smarter than that.

As for the marriage thing...they are not normal either.  They were forced to grow up pretty fast and already know what they want in life.  They are not at the place most 20 somethings are.



Author's Response:

exactly...i believe they spent the first few months playing 'catch-up' emotionally because this was their first real relationship.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 4:54 AM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

It was swee t lovin and romantic, can't wait for more

Author's Response:

next chap is half-complete.  Thanks!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 4:48 AM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

You succeeded in not only sweet, loving and romantic, but hot also!  Made every reader you have soooooo jealous!



Author's Response:

Well, thank you.  i appreciate that.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 4:13 AM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

Awwwww!  How sweet!  He bought her that house?!

OMG Adorable!  So romantic!!

*swoon*

Love this chapter!   I SO want more!  :)



Author's Response:

More to come soon!  thanks very much

Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 3:16 AM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

I think you just won the award for best proposal ever!  I loved this update.  I have been faithfully following both stories and I love both equally.

I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I love to hear that readers are enjoying the stories.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 2:19 AM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

loved the chapter.  I like how she finally felt safe and her feelings have been awakened.  Laters to you.  Can't wait for more!!!!



Author's Response:

more is coming.  Thanks!

Reviewer: westernem Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 2:07 AM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

great chapter, loved everything about it :D 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad

Reviewer: krisandrob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 2:07 AM Title: Champagne & Diamonds



This chapter was amazing you did a wonderful job with the proposal and these reading each other beautifully. I am in awe!!!!

Author's Response:

i tried.  I thank you very much!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 1:54 AM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

SO LOVIN IT !!!  YOU DID A F_ _ k AWESOME JOB!! LOVE THE KEEPING TRACKOF THE DAY THING !!



Author's Response:

it was all Edward...he sufferes from OCD...undiagnosed of course. lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 1:44 AM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

Loved the Gordon Ramsey addition.Looking forward to future lemons.  



Author's Response:

gordon will be at the wedding, should be interesting.  Thanks!

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 1:36 AM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

YAY!!! Seriously, that was the perfect proposal! LOVE IT!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  So far everyone seems to like it. 

Reviewer: Hitchy Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 1:27 AM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

eeegads!  I loved, loved loved it!  Did I say I loved it? Because I did!  I really loved it!  MORE!

Hahaha!  I'm a greedy fangirl, but hey, at least I can admit it!

Great work!  (and more.... please!)



Author's Response:

more to come..i promise.  A couple of LRM chaps to do first.  Thanks!

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 1:13 AM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

Yeah!!!  I knew that he was going to ask her.   The way that he proposed was so sweet and thoughtful.  I can't believe that he bought Tolken's house for Bella.  I love Gordan myself, and I love that you included him in the proposal.  I think the end was perfect.  It was sweet and romantic not lust driven and cheap. 

I can't wait for the next chapter.  I can't wait until LRM catches up with V&V.

Love stories!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for everything you said.  Remember Gordon wants to attend the wedding.  That should be fun.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: zho9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 1:13 AM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

Wonderful chapter.  Thank you for posting this so quickly.  



Author's Response:

you are welcome, and thank you!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 8:31 PM Title: Captain Jack & Drunkella

Wow, that was amazing! My uncle, while drunk off his ass, once, instead of going to the bathroom to piss, pissed all over his clothes in his closet ;)



Author's Response:

ugh!  i have an uncle that stood in the middle of the street singing the Ave Maria....i could handle that better than a pissing uncle.. lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 8:15 PM Title: Big Hair & The Lucky Beyotch

Wow, that was funny, the drunk bit I mean.  I cannot wait to find out what happens next :)



Author's Response:

if you like drunkella...you'll love the next chap..Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 8:09 PM Title: Waxward & Sexward

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  I agree with Bella, I couldn't handle Sexward Masen twice in one evening either without jumping his bones (even though I am a virgin too).



Author's Response:

it's a true test of character...i'm ashamed to say i'd fail, miserably.  lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 8:00 PM Title: Makeup Kisses & Confessions

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much :)  I am so happy Tanya finally set the record straight :)



Author's Response:

definitely moving in a positive direction.   Thanks!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 11:37 AM Title: The Dude & Dirty Harry

I am sick while reading this.  So as I read the Emmett hunting tale I proceeded to have a coughing fit from laughing so hard.  That has to be the funniest shit I have ever read an Emmett character do!!!!



Author's Response:

oh my..you've just hit the tip of the iceberg with emmett....those chapters should come with a warning.  Read at your own risk!  lol  I will warn you that any time he shows up, you should put down all food and drink, sharp objects, and don't hold small children or infants.  There, enough said.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 12:42 AM Title: Vandalism & The Apocalypse

OH SNAP!  This cannot be good!  I really loved it so much :)  I cannot wait to find out what happens next!



Author's Response:

glad you're enjoying it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 12:07 AM Title: Perjury & Sweet Dreams

Wow, that was amazing.  I am so happy Bella got the Ranger to be put in jail :)  I cannot wait to see what happens next and how they figure out what to do about Tanya.



Author's Response:

hopefully he will go to jail after his trial.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 11:37 PM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

**SQUEE!!!** (Iknow it's an annoying sound, but I went there anyway!)

Can't wait for the next chapter. He is so sweet, having all that planned. I think it was the perfect proposal... ahem... assuming that's where it's going ;)

I can't really blame Bella for not wanting to see the sex scene. I wouldn't be able to handle it either. And way to go Crystal, punching that nasty bitch in the face! Great great chapter.



Author's Response:

squeeing is okay...i do it myself. (when no one is around).  proposal?  whatever gave you that idea?  lol   Thanks for reading and reviewing...almost ready to post the next one.

Reviewer: benna Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 9:10 PM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

YES YES YES!!! I am so excited and that was so romantic. I can't wait to get to see the rest of the proposal. Does this mean thier gonna do it already. I mean 49 chapters of no sex. They have to be in some serious need of lovin! Great story, great chapter. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

yes that's a lot of chapters but theoretically they've only known each other for 4 months....i DO promise however that they will be 'less inhibited' around each other...almost immediately.. we shall see what happens after that...    Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!  It is a long slow burn is it not? 

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 8:40 PM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

Yea!!!  I knew that Alice convinced Edward to push up his proposal date!!!  I am so excited to see what he says and how Bella reacts.

Ready for the next chapter....Write.  Please write. 

Thank you for the update.



Author's Response:

Alice is involved.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 7:18 PM Title: Chipmunks & Oscars

Wow, that was amazing!  I really am not excited about that last line, about how things are going to get bad :*(  Hopefully it won't be too bad, right?



Author's Response:

yes but i believe in HEA.  Thanks

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 7:06 PM Title: Outtake: The He-Man Incident

Wow, that was, wow.  I don't know what to say, Emmett is definitely a character ;)



Author's Response:

very true.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 6:55 PM Title: Valentines & The Masters of The Universe

Wow, that was amazing!  Yeah, Kellan's Calvin Klein ads are AHHMAZING, gah!



Author's Response:

i agree.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 5:34 PM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

omg, there better be a woudl you do me the extreme honor of becoming my wife next !!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

at least we know that Emmett is too far away to screw anything up!  lol  thanks

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 3:39 PM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

WOW, that really left me holding my breath!! I absolutely can hadly wait till I read more!! nancyk123



Author's Response:

thanks!  i'll post soon

Reviewer: msa121371 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 2:31 PM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

UGH!!!!! I read this last night on my Ipad and the damn thing would not let me type a review.  SO, let me just say CAN'T wait for the next chapter and so loving the companion story to this in EPOV!!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you like them.  I've almost been convinced to post the next V&V before another LRM....  ah well.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 1:24 PM Title: Handcuffs & Power Suits

Wow, that was amazing!  Poor Bella though, I hope all of it is resolved soon.



Author's Response:

soon enough.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 11:38 AM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

What a romantic way to propose. Edward is such a keeper. I can't wait for the rest of the evening.



Author's Response:

i'm writing it now.  Hopefully everyone will like it.  THanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 7:40 AM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

OMG he is going to ask her to marry him YES YES YES.  cant wait for her reaction hell I cant wait for his POV lol.  Emmett need I say more he is to funny.  Bella handled the love sceen very well I thought she would go ape shit. 



Author's Response:

after much begging, I've decided to post the next V&V before LRM....so it won't be much longer.  Thanks!

Reviewer: twifanpixie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 7:26 AM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

oh shit, that is evil to leave it there.



Author's Response:

 i am sorry...but Edward has a LOT to say...and that just needed to begin a new chap.  i'll post soon.  THanks!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 6:41 AM Title: Armpits & Coffee Stains

Well...most of the time it's just me, so no weird looks.



Author's Response:

well that's good.  I'm just one inappropriate chuckle away from hubs having me committed. 

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 5:20 AM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

OMG OMG OMG how could you stop it right there...why...that just cruel....I am really really hopeful that the next chapter will be out soon....PLEASE!!!!



Author's Response:

i'm working on it now.  I'll post soon!  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 5:16 AM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

You stinker. You left us on our knees with Edward.

 

Sweet.

 



Author's Response:

at least I'm not stinky.  what a relief!  lol  I'll post soon.  Thanks!

Reviewer: caddy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 4:51 AM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

I am thoroughly enjoying this story. I check regularly for new chapters for this story and Love Rescue Me. I am a big, big fan.



Author's Response:

THanks!  I'm glad to hear that!

Reviewer: ecsc Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 3:43 AM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

Wow proposing already?  Talk about whiplash he was dumping her a few weeks ago!!!!  LOVE IT!!!! :)



Author's Response:

Edward's nothing if not insane.  lol.  He's head over heels...Thanks!

Reviewer: read522 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

Great Chapter ending ! Update soon..



Author's Response:

working on the next one now.  Thanks!

Reviewer: mflow Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

Oh I couldn't have imagined it any better! I love it, even though you left us hanging :)

Author's Response:

sorry about that...does it help to know that the next chap is almost halfway written?   I think i'm going to post it before another chap of LRM to make everyone happy.  Thanks!

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 3:02 AM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

I am sure Bella would not have it any other way.  What a wonderful chapter.

Cant wait to hear how he is going to actually propose.



Author's Response:

proposal? what proposal? lol.  When he does, it will be perfect for them...  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 2:50 AM Title: Aspen & Cold Showers

Wow that was amazing :)  I really think Edward is so sweet :D



Author's Response:

he is.  confused and nervous, but sweet.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 2:44 AM Title: Haircuts & Pepper Spray

Wow, that was amazing :)  Loved Emmett's plan for the paps.  "Beans, beans the magical fruit, the more you eat, the more you toot, the more you toot the better you'll feel, so eat some beans with every meal"-something my dad loves to say ;)  Also, July 24th (Em and Rose's wedding day) is my mom's bday, mine is the 8th, so I think they should have it on that day, but that's my bias showing :)



Author's Response:

at this point, i think the 24th is the date.  Thanks!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 2:34 AM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

What can I say, but awesome and amazing!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you're not mad about the cliffy.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 2:15 AM Title: First Dates & Riff Raff

Wow, that was amazing :)



Author's Response:

THanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 2:13 AM Title: Tasers & Interrogations

Wow, that was so good!  I loved Emmett's interrogation of Edward ;)



Author's Response:

Emmett's a goofball.  Thanks!

Reviewer: westosobear Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 2:12 AM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

he's proposing?  OMG!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I'll post the next one soon.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 2:10 AM Title: Bourbon & Epitaphs

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE, once again :)  I cannot wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 2:07 AM Title: Pedophiles & Daddy's Little Girl

Wow, that was great!  I am so happy she is going to listen to him :)



Author's Response:

Glad you're still liking the story!  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 2:04 AM Title: Red Roses & Burst Bubbles

OMG!  Wow, that was amazing but poor Bella!  I hope Edward can explain his actions.



Author's Response:

Soon.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 2:00 AM Title: Hello Kitty Undies & Lucky Thirteen

Wow, that was amazing :)  Little mister booger fingers sounds like he might be a womanizer later in life ;)



Author's Response:

LOL...I hadn't thought about that...he's already a freak.  Thanks!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 12:26 AM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

Good chapter...even though he is an actor and the sex scenes are fake and unromantic, it would still be uncomfortable to watch someone you love pretend almost naked...so I don't blame her for leaving.

My one and only trip to England we went to Stratford upon Avon and I went to most of the places mentioned in this chapter, so that was really cool to read about.  The gardens are simply gorgeous.  And nice proposal cliffy, can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

i've heard stories about the 'significant others' of actors or actresses DEMANDING to be present during those scenes, so they can make sure everything is handled in a professional manner.  In this particular case, i don't think Bella overreacted.  Seeing Edward like that would be VERY hard to take.  Glad E keeps it covered..lol.

As you can tell, i love England...very much.  Thanks!

 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 11:58 PM Title: Fried Ice Cream & A Cup of Tea

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really almost didn't want to read Bella's backstory, because I don't handle stuff like that well but I did.  I am glad she didn't go into much detail because then I really would have skipped over it.  I really loved all of it :)



Author's Response:

it was intense enough...i didn't want it to be extremely graphic because i would have needed to bleach my brain. lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Hitchy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 11:56 PM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

Oh, you are too cruel to leave us hanging there!  He is so sweet, doing all of that for her.  I can't believe Bella didn't see it coming.

I wonder if Edward and Bella will make it to dinner, or if they'll head back to the hotel to 'celebrate'.  LOL!

Great chapter.  I think I need to visit England.  It sounds lovely.



Author's Response:

i love England.  The next chap will be more of the sappy and silly...with hopefully one or two surprises too.  Thanks very much!  The bus with the ad is posted on the V&V facebook page.

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 11:27 PM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

Great chapter!  Love the Tolkien bits, they're a nice touch.  Looking forward to finding out if this is the proposal!



Author's Response:

i could tell you....lol.  Hopefully everyone will like the next chap..it will be silly and sappy too.  Thanks!

Reviewer: westernem Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 11:17 PM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

gosh such an amazing chapter :D



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 11:01 PM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

such a mean place for a cliffie



Author's Response:

I know.  I am sorry but I really want the next chap to start with the 'What happens next' moment.  Thanks!

Reviewer: zho9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 10:24 PM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

Love it, love it, love it!  



Author's Response:

Thanks! i'm glad.

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 10:04 PM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

YAY!!! Good tears are now flowing freely! Beautiful! Love it! All that lovely non-sensical stuff! Keep it up!



Author's Response:

it is sappy and silly...but i was hoping everyone would 'get it'  seems like they have.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 9:57 PM Title: Cosmic Boogers & Black Eyed Peas

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE!  I really laughed hard.  I am POSITIVE God has a sense of humor (I am Presbyterian), I mean have you not seen some of the things He has created (such as a bug thats butt "explodes").  I really loved this so much :)



Author's Response:

people-watching is one of my favorite things....yes, I do believe He MUST have a sense of humor.  lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 9:53 PM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

It is what I think it is, isn't it??? Yes, yes, yes! It's the proposal and it's perfect!!
Edward couldn't have done it any better than he did! Please make it the proposal so we can get some of the tension released! I know they are "innocent" but they've been so good....let's let them fool around a little, okay??
So so good....cannot wait for the next chapter! Really hope it's soon!!!!

Author's Response:

you are making me chuckle.  I think everyone will like the next chapter...even though a lot of people are angry with me for leaving them hanging this time..lol.  Thanks!

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