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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 9:53 PM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

OH MYLANTA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*squeals and hops around like a schoolgirl... or Alice*

 

This is going to be so beautiful!!  I cant wait to see what you have in store for the remainder of this doozy!!  :)



Author's Response:

yes...and we can be thankful that Emmett is not closeby to ruin things with his farts. lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 9:48 PM Title: Stellar Hineys & Carriage Rides

That was amazing :)  I really am so happy for everyone :)  Poor Jasper, Francis Jasper Whitlock!  The little boy I babysit is Stanley Calvin and they call him Cal :)



Author's Response:

wow...you are moving right along with this story!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 8:12 PM Title: The Dude & Dirty Harry

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much!



Author's Response:

Thanks! glad you liked it.

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 10:15 PM Title: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

I love this Bella and Edward, they are so cute together, even though poor Edward must have the worst case of blue balls ever.

Not sure about the cliffie, but I think it may have something to do with Emmett and his ad campaign :)

Author's Response:

as i said before i have offered time and again to help Edward with his 'problem'...he just won't hear of it.  oh well.  yeah yeah..i'm married...hubs would just have to understand...It EDWARD for cripes sake.  lol.  Thanks!   (as for your guess...everyone will find out very soon....still tweaking the next chapter.)  Thanks so much! 

Reviewer: wannabebella Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 6:55 PM Title: Haircuts & Pepper Spray

hahahahahahhaha



Author's Response:

i feel the same way.  although sometimes, like bella, I want to beat emmett senseless with my shoe.  *sigh*  Thanks!

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 1:26 PM Title: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

please update soon!



Author's Response:

The next chap is about 75 percent complete.  Another day or so.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 1:07 AM Title: Mercer Island & Minibars

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE!  I really loved it so much :)  Poor Edward, but at least I know that now they have something else in common.



Author's Response:

sad but true.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 11:32 PM Title: Enchiladas & Store Bought Ta Ta's

Wow, that was amazing :)  I am so happy Bella said "yes" and decided to give Camille a piece of her mind :)



Author's Response:

camille is creepy...thankfully we don't have to see her too often.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 11:19 PM Title: Kelly Kapowski & The Cougar

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad.

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 6:56 PM Title: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

"Oh my hell" indeed!... I laughed my ass off why I read that Ramsay scene... LOL... too good! Tiny confession... I have a thing for Gordon. I don't know why, but he's sexy when he's mad :)

Great update!



Author's Response:

he has quite the potty mouth...although he was rather tame in my story...lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 5:29 PM Title: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

I absolutely LOVE your story!  Can't remember when I've had so much FUN reading!  Looking forward to future chapters.



Author's Response:

well..you are in luck...just posted the next one.. Now back to V&V.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 5:06 PM Title: Grits & Vitamin R

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE :)  I really liked Rose's saying about grits.  I love grits and it is so true, sugar and grits are just WRONG.  The best way, I think to have them is to add cheese :)



Author's Response:

mmm.. i love grits.  with butter and salt and pepper.  Sometimes i add cheese too.  oh great...now i'm craving them. lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 5:04 PM Title: The Snowman & Midnight Mass

That was amazing :)  Emmett reminds me of my brother, only he is younger not older.  I was wondering when Emmett would watch "A Christmas Story", that is my family's favorite Christmas movie and we HAVE to watch it on the 24 hour rotation on TBS every year ;)



Author's Response:

Emmett is a combination of so many people...i have brothers...but he's more like one of my cousins...  A Christmas Story is definitely on his list most years.  Thanks very much, i'm so glad you like the story!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 4:54 PM Title: Drunk Ironing & Snark

Wow, that was amazing!  So, based off of the information I see here, Edward is 25 and Bella is 23 (if it is 2010), or Edward was born in 1985 and Bella 1987, is that right?  Anyway, amazing job :) 



Author's Response:

the story starts in Dec 2009 ..so B is 22 and E 24.    birthday in Sept and Jun respectively.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 4:47 PM Title: Armpits & Coffee Stains

Wow, this sounds amazing so far!  How old are B&E?  (or should I keep reading to find out?)



Author's Response:

thanks...22 and 24 respectively.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 11:01 AM Title: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

Awwwwww!

What'd they see?!?!

 

I cant wait for the reveal!



Author's Response:

next chapter is up now.  Thanks!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 5:56 AM Title: Haircuts & Pepper Spray

ROTFLMAO!!!!!



Author's Response:

ahhh...who says only guys like 'potty humor'  lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 4:57 AM Title: Cosmic Boogers & Black Eyed Peas

You are quite talented at writing the "funnies"...laughed so hard I couldn't see to read.  Even found myself laughing over a couple of them during dinner.  The funny stuff is so hard to get right, but you certainly got it right!

 

Thanks.

 

Catherine



Author's Response:

hopefully no one gave you weird looks.  Don't worry...i get them all the time.  It's hard owning my brain sometimes....i embarrass my family on a regular basis.  lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 4:23 AM Title: Mercer Island & Minibars

I am so glad I found your story... it's every fan's dream , played out very nicely.



Author's Response:

thanks, you are very sweet!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 11:07 PM Title: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

I keep saying I love this story.



Author's Response:

well..thank you!  I'm glad.

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 8:17 PM Title: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

oh my goodness Gordon Ramsay is my cooking hero....i'd both love and be scared to work for him.  though i would beg him to teach me how to make his perfect scrambled eggs.   loved the chappy...could alec be getting it on yet again?  Bella and Edward are so cute can't wait for next chappy



Author's Response:

next chap is up.  I love gordon also...we'll see him again btw.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 7:36 PM Title: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

Thank you for the update.  I am not sure what is going to happen, but I think that Alice convinced Edward to propose to Bella earlier than planned???

Patiently waiting for new chapter of LOV and V&V.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading and reviewing..the next chap is up now.  enjoy!

Reviewer: muccour Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 5:34 PM Title: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

the ending has to be emmett's billboard



Author's Response:

you were very close!  THanks!

Reviewer: ecsc Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 5:17 PM Title: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

Really? What clues? Now I have to go back and see if I can figure it.  Maybe Emmett's underwear ad?



Author's Response:

by now i bet you know if you guessed correctly! lol Thanks!

Reviewer: krisandrob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 5:12 PM Title: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

Oh what did she see? I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Next chap reveals all.  Thanks!

Reviewer: CassieCullen06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 1:26 PM Title: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

omg post quick bc I'm having memory loss!



Author's Response:

don't stress...you will find out as soon as the next V&V posts.  It's amusing.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Tinkerbell Blake Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 12:16 PM Title: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

I loved this chapter I don't think that Bella is able to have sex yet as she can't even say the word. Trust Bella to slip up about Alice. I can't wait to see what just happened in London.



Author's Response:

What?  lol  sometimes i have difficulty saying that word...lmao  probably too many years of having kids and not wanting to say ..you know..that word..infrontof them...lol.  i'm just being silly...we used to have code words for it when they were small.    holy crap i am seriously disturbed. Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 10:18 AM Title: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

The only thing that is coming to mind is what Edward said about having somewhat of a cover over his junk but not his but. I would like to see that. It could also be the skank that was chasing Edward. I dont know I am needing to know hurry hurry. I would love to be there it is a dream of mine. Happy New Year.

Author's Response:

no..edward and the other actors are filming while B has lunch with Crystal.  I promise you will find out at the very beginning of the chapter..Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 8:26 AM Title: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

Is it JD?
Loved it.....it seems like Edward wants to propose.
Happy New Year! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

several people have guess Johnny.  I promise you'll find out at the very beginning of  next chap.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 5:36 AM Title: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

Is it Jhonny Depp?    Love your story, goo dchapter, love the bubble incident.



Author's Response:

i promise you will find out at the very beginning of next V&V chap.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 10:44 PM Title: Tidal Pools & Capistrano

I met my husband April 10 1975 and married him June 5th 1975 love at first sight does happen



Author's Response:

i believe in it too.  i married the hubs 13months after we met...some people thought it was fast.  Been married for-ev-er.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 9:38 PM Title: Waxward & Sexward

I hope we don't have to wait too long for them to consumate their relationship



Author's Response:

it is a very slow burn...at this point they've only known each other for 3months..so it will be a while.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 9:19 PM Title: Makeup Kisses & Confessions

no hurry at all and I am really enjoying your story

Happy New Year



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it.  Thanks, and Happy New Year

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 1:53 PM Title: Valentines & The Masters of The Universe

great ads!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

very true!  Thanks!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 1:17 PM Title: Haircuts & Pepper Spray

taco bell



Author's Response:

i love taco bell!!!  lol Thanks!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 12:43 PM Title: Bourbon & Epitaphs

:)



Author's Response:

THanks!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 4:31 AM Title: Hello Kitty Undies & Lucky Thirteen

awe



Author's Response:

THanks!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 4:18 AM Title: Fried Ice Cream & A Cup of Tea

what a pair can't imagine how they will handle him leaving



Author's Response:

it's tough...and sappy and silly..lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 4:07 AM Title: Cosmic Boogers & Black Eyed Peas

the boogers were gross and I was trying to eat

Author's Response:

i always said my story should come with a warning!  lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 3:28 AM Title: Stellar Hineys & Carriage Rides

seems like these would be considered dates



Author's Response:

not technically...they went as a group. THanks!

Reviewer: read522 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 2:43 AM Title: Genuflections & Surprises

Great Chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2010 11:53 PM Title: Mercer Island & Minibars

a week is a little fast but these two have been searching for their other half for a long time, that person to make them whole



Author's Response:

i refer to them as 'soulmates with baggage'.  Thanks! 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2010 10:35 PM Title: Grits & Vitamin R

but Emmett is fun too however I am looking forward to Edward



Author's Response:

lots of edward coming up.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2010 9:23 PM Title: Drunk Ironing & Snark

This came highly recommended by one of my favorite authors so I am sure I will love it and it will be worth it.



Author's Response:

i hope you enjoy it.  THanks!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2010 9:09 PM Title: Armpits & Coffee Stains

so far so good, great start



Author's Response:

glad you like it.  THanks!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2010 1:37 AM Title: Genuflections & Surprises

loved it, loved it loved IT!!!  it wa s a fun chapter and I like how excited both of them were.  Keep em coming.



Author's Response:

i will...the next one is almost ready to go.  Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2010 8:02 PM Title: Genuflections & Surprises

I new there would be another women involved thanks for it being another man too and that Bella did not freak out and run.  I loved the reaction Edward had in his trailer before and after he found out it was her.  Have a Happy New Year



Author's Response:

i planned that scene for quite a while  (about Alec and the skank)...originally Bella hid in a closet...I like it much better this way.  Thanks!  Happy New Year.

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2010 4:41 AM Title: Genuflections & Surprises

OMG, I seriously loved Bella on caffeine! She's lucky the agent didn't think she was off her rocker LOL.

So, the Little Mermaid underwear were discovered... I find it interesting that she put them back where she found them. Guess she didn't mind that he was the one that took them ;)



Author's Response:

There was a moment there when I was afraid he would have her tested for drugs...lol.  The underwear matter will come up again...surprise surprise..lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: meadowmate78 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 10:02 PM Title: The Dude & Dirty Harry

Over 300 chapters is AWESOME!!!! I love this:)

 

Jo



Author's Response:

Be careful what you wish for...i could so write 300plus of this story..lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 6:52 PM Title: Genuflections & Surprises

awwwww :) loved the chappy



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 6:37 PM Title: Genuflections & Surprises

I loved how flustered & pissed Edward was when he thought a fangirl had snuck into his trailer & his surprise when he saw it was Bella!
Bella's word vomit at immigration was hysterical & Alec's indiscretion.....priceless!!
Great chapter!!

Author's Response:

Thanks as always.  Glad you enjoyed it...it was fun to write also.  Next one will post soon!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 6:30 PM Title: Genuflections & Surprises

oh i was laughing so ahrd and her ramble to the customs agent,  so Bella !!!!  Love the chapter !!!



Author's Response:

she is a goofball...a lot of her ramblings are things I say out loud, and my kids tell me to shut up.  Glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 5:55 PM Title: Genuflections & Surprises

A sweet story. He is so carefull with her. Loving. I am still not buying her no sex for this long. I think she would have folded by now.  I can see waiting for love and then being sure about that, passed that I think you have drug that part out.Waiting is good for teenagers especially since they change bf and gf so often.  I think waiting is good because then you have a relationship based on something stronger than attraction.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

i just think they don't know what they're missing...once they do...God help us..lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: PINKSAPPHYR Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 4:49 PM Title: Genuflections & Surprises

Oh God.....This chapter was absolutely hilarious....I'm clearly not gonna forgive Bella for her overcaffeinated babbling....That was way too funny to be offensive...I was laughing so hard that I almost chocked myself to death with my Diet Coke....And my poor computer screen got an awfully sticky shower!!!

Edward's reaction was also very amusing: yelling at first, then a pretty long freeze-frame and finally a very passionate come back to reality....So sweet and perfect!! He's so proud of her and completely head over heels for her that it makes want the EPOV even more ;)

The episode with Alec was uproarious: while Bella was completely mortified, She gave him hell and kinda made him fear her....That was irresistible!!

And She found out that Edward stole her Little Mermaid underwear...Wonder what She's going to do with that precious little tidbit...Hope She'll tease him merciless ;)

I wish you a Happy New Year and Happy Holidays Xoxo



Author's Response:

Rats...I forgot to put the *warning label* on that chapter...the 'don't read this while operating heavy machinery, drinking, eating, or at work or school where you will get busted for laughing out loud, oh and don't hold an infant while reading either'  heehee.  Glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks! 

Reviewer: krisandrob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 2:23 PM Title: Genuflections & Surprises

I loved the way Bella rambles on and on and for the surprise it was great now I can't wait to see what else happens in London.

Author's Response:

the next chap is almost ready to go.  THanks!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 2:09 PM Title: Genuflections & Surprises

Awwwww!  That was so sweet!  LOL, I thought it was funny, him saying he would have his bodyguard carry her out!

Loved it!



Author's Response:

he definitely wasn't going to touch her....can you imagine if a pap got that photo?  lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: Hitchy Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 1:32 PM Title: Genuflections & Surprises

Loved it!  Can't wait to hear how they're going to make the most of their time in London.  And Alec and the 'date'... ewwww, what a perv!  And in Edward's suite?  Yuck.

Hope you had a nice Christmas, and Happy New Year to you!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Happy new year to you also.  Alec is nasty...don't know if he will ever be redeemed..lol  I'm having fun with B & E in London..next post will be soon.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 1:24 PM Title: Genuflections & Surprises

I am so glad that Bella put Alec in his place. She is getting stronger. I thought Bella on caffeine was funny. Jet lag will do crazy things to you. I am glad that Bella woke up with her wits together since Edward was going crazy at a "stranger in his bed". It could have been a bad scene at first if she was disorientated. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

jet lag is murder...  I had fun writing that chapter..i think you can tell.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 1:19 PM Title: Genuflections & Surprises

Loved it! You had me holding my breath there for a minute, and then I actually felt bad for doubting him!! lol  I need a life!!



Author's Response:

join my club....i'm entirely too involved in this story..lol.  Although..reading Love Rescue Me will convince you to never doubt Edward...he is head over heels.  Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2010 1:39 PM Title: Yellow Carnations & First Class

I am worried about Bella and this unknown creep. She seems to attract them. I am proud that Bella turned down the drink and wanted a clear head. Bella gets into so much trouble when she drinks. She has enough trouble with the paps. I can't wait until she surprizes Edward.



Author's Response:

watch for the sneak peek on the facebook page (link on my profile page)  hopefully post it tonight.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!  Glad you like the story.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2010 2:41 AM Title: Yellow Carnations & First Class

I just found your story and I have enjoyed it immensly.  Your characters are easy to like and fun.  Keep up the great work.  I have a feeling more dark times are ahead, but you have given me faith in the characters that I know love and goodness will win.



Author's Response:

i believe in HEA, no matter what.  But..just like real life there are always sad or angsty things that happen.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2010 8:05 AM Title: Yellow Carnations & First Class

 

Sooooo.... those flowers are uber creepy. When Rose was talking about what their color meant, the heater kicked on...scared the crap out of me!

Thanks for the update... even if the flowers were creepy....bet it was that Victor James guy (btw- loved how you did the name)....maybe it was Mike....could be a random stalker...gah! When will we find out?!?!? And what will Caveward do?



Author's Response:

LOL...the heater scaring you makes me chuckle.  Believe me, I'm the biggest chicken I know...I get spooked very easily.  I can't go out in my yard at night because I swear there are zombies out there...and zombies don't even exist.  I scare the crap out of myself regularly.  You guys didn't believe me when I said I needed therapy...  Anyway, don't worry about creepy stalkers while B is in London...just have some fun reading about it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: PINKSAPPHYR Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 11:38 AM Title: Yellow Carnations & First Class

Oh yeah, I can't wait for her to land!!! This surprise will be phenomenal, I'm sure of it...Seeing the underlying feeling of concern and worry for Bella's safety, I'm 100% convinced that having her beside him will be the best surprise for Edward!!!

James is definitely creepy and He's probably not innocent in this situation!! And you gotta love such a protective and Mama-Bear Rose...I know I do!!

I can't wait for the next chapter....I hope you had a great Christmas

Happy Holidays Xxx



Author's Response:

Hope you had a good Christmas also.  Thanks very much for the review.  I'm so glad you like the story.  i'm posting a sneak peak of the next chapter on V&V's facebook page tonight.  The link is on my profile page. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 9:40 AM Title: Yellow Carnations & First Class

James is a real creep thats new NOT lol.  I cant wait till she gets there please dont let there be some ho in his room when she gets there.  Have a great week and write your little heart out lol.  Happy holidays and thank for writing a great story.



Author's Response:

THanks very much...about halfway through the next V&V...will post a teaster on the V&V facebook page tonight.  THe link is on my profile page.  Hope you had a great holiday.

Reviewer: LynnCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 5:03 AM Title: Captain Jack & Drunkella

Shut the hell up!!! I laughed during this entire chapter and I'm still laughing as I'm writing so please excuse any errors you might see. The lunch scene w/Johnny Depp was freakin hillarious!! LMFAO, I think I'm going to read this chapter all over again just for the damn laughs.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.  Needless to say, i'd never be invited to lunch with Johnny...because I'd probably get plastered and act out that chapter.  oh well...  Thanks very much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 4:13 AM Title: Yellow Carnations & First Class

So excited for Bella and Edward! He's going to think Christmas came early!
A bit concerned about Bella's stalker & Renee's cryptic message. I hope it's nothing.....
Great chappie!!
Merry Christmas!!

Author's Response:

Merry Christmas to you too...although I'm a bit late.  Don't worry about the creepy stuff while B's in London.  Thanks!

Reviewer: westernem Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 2:43 AM Title: Yellow Carnations & First Class

gosh creepy flowers and stuff wonder what's going on with that. they can never catch a break can they? haha 



Author's Response:

gotta have a little angst once in a while.  Thanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 12:44 AM Title: Yellow Carnations & First Class

Well James is always. James bad boy.  Will she carry that V card forever?  I am totally for waiting. 



Author's Response:

if they cash in the cards...i have to change the title.  ..well not really..but ..maybe.  Ah who knows?  They will cash them in before the story is over....how about that for a vague answer?  THanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 11:26 PM Title: Yellow Carnations & First Class

lovely chapter !!   really enjoy your story !!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad.  THanks!

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 10:09 PM Title: Yellow Carnations & First Class

squeeeee Edward is gonna flip in a good way.... oooh is creepy james the stalker guy.  Man for being cute Cam sure does play an evil bad guy very well. Of course Rob is sooo much hotter.



Author's Response:

i just saw Cam in Easy A..and boy is he cute.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Glad you like it.

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 7:26 PM Title: Yellow Carnations & First Class

just wanted to say I loveloveLOVE your story. The depth of the characters, and their struggles through their situations are great, and unlike some stories, I can actually picture everything you write about in my head, playing out as though it's a movie. You're an excellent writer! Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Wow..thanks very much...that was a very nice review.  I appreciate it!  Glad you like the story.

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 8:57 PM Title: Panty Droppers & Belly Dances

Yea!!! Drunkella is back! I love her Eward and clowns LOL.... belly dancing in underwear huh? Poor Edward... he's such a masochist!

I don't think I've ever gone to chuch hung over... I usually just say 'eff' it... sometimes it just hurts to smile!

Thanks for the update. Can't wait for England!



Author's Response:

I love Drunkella also.  Hey...at least she didn't belly dance naked like Rose..lol.  I think Edward would have had a heart attack..or Caveward would have immediately flown to Seattle.  Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 2:44 PM Title: Panty Droppers & Belly Dances

I worry about Bella and her drinking. She seems to get stinking drunk every time she drinks. It seems to be all or none. It is horrible that she has trouble remembering what she does especially when she has to worry about the paps. I am glad that Lou was looking out for them.



Author's Response:

it only happens now and then...i kind of went by my own college experience....thankfully i got wiser with age and learned how to just have 1 or 2....well, most of the time.  lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 10:59 PM Title: Red Roses & Burst Bubbles

nahhh I reckon he wouldn't of :)



Author's Response:

All is revealed soon enough.  Thanks!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 10:47 PM Title: Hello Kitty Undies & Lucky Thirteen

hmmm there is a lot of bitches in this story... LOL kill em off!! ha ha ha..



Author's Response:

yes...i could kill them.  As I've said before one of the reasons i enjoy writing is getting to play God.  lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 9:17 PM Title: Fried Ice Cream & A Cup of Tea

LOL after a horiffic chapter then you make me laugh... so good :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: hkimberly Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 8:27 PM Title: Panty Droppers & Belly Dances

OMG!!!!!!!! I laughed so freaking hard reading your story!!! My husband was like wth?! I laughed so hard I started snorting. Haven't done that in a long time!!!

 

Thank you for taking the time to post your story. It's amazing!! I cannot wait to read more. 

Hope that you and yours have a wonderful holiday season! 



Author's Response:

Thank you, the same to you and yours.  I was laughing just reading your review....hubs already knows i'm crazy so he doesn't even notice any nore.  lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 4:00 PM Title: Panty Droppers & Belly Dances

That was to funny poor Bella if she could of found a hole lol.  Poor Edward he will be need alot of cold showers with that memory lol. Emmett in a kilt that is a tasty thought.



Author's Response:

Emmett enjoys every moment of his life, that's for sure.  obviously, I had fun writing this one.  Thanks!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 12:49 PM Title: Cosmic Boogers & Black Eyed Peas

Little secret... the whole laughing thing emmett does in church and can't stop.. I am terrible I do that..

God.. I am juvenile LOL

 



Author's Response:

I love to watch people...so it naturally leads to inappropriate laughter ... often. lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 12:36 PM Title: Stellar Hineys & Carriage Rides

ha ha ha ha... honestly emmett and church is hillarious



Author's Response:

Emmett haunts my dreams.  lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 12:15 PM Title: The Dude & Dirty Harry

I am still laughing that is a crack up of a chapter..

brilliant :)



Author's Response:

That was a fun one to write too.  Thanks!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 11:22 AM Title: Mercer Island & Minibars

Awwww... how cute :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: PINKSAPPHYR Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 10:49 AM Title: Panty Droppers & Belly Dances

Ohhh I love drunk Bella!! She's hilarious but She has to stop feeling so unsure of herself....Yeah I know easier said than done but still!! She can't keep always shutting down everybody when She's embarassed or feeling ashamed!! It just makes Edward freak out...And that's NOT good! 

Anyway, this was a very funny chapter..I love to see them so carefree! Can't wait for your next update!!



Author's Response:

old habits die hard for Bella.  She has more self-confidence than before...but still slips.  Thanks so much!  Glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 8:56 AM Title: Enchiladas & Store Bought Ta Ta's

I cried...... I laughed.....

 

great job!!!!!



Author's Response:

Very glad you're liking the story.  Thanks!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 8:07 AM Title: Kelly Kapowski & The Cougar

I am really enjoying this.. thanks for putting it up here :)



Author's Response:

you are welcome.   Like I said before, I love your stories, so thank you too!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 7:39 AM Title: Grits & Vitamin R

I am laughing a lot during this story you have a great sense of humor.. :)



Author's Response:

In a few chapters you'll realize that i'm probably just insane.  lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 7:15 AM Title: The Snowman & Midnight Mass

Okay I sniggered all the way through that..

btw I take time reading as I am working and this is my break LOL

I am glad you like my stories.. I am liking yours also. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you like it

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 5:57 AM Title: Panty Droppers & Belly Dances

Of course, I loved this chapter! The characters' dialogue in this story is hilarious! I love the mental image of Bella dancing in her red underwear on Skype for Edward! :)

Author's Response:

I had fun writing it also.  I'm glad you liked it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 1:59 AM Title: Panty Droppers & Belly Dances

Another great update.  I loved the belly dancing for Edward.  Of course we expect Rose to belly dance for Emmett in the nude.  Bella needs to lose the rest of he insecurity.  When is going to realize that there is no way Edward would leave her again...unless she cheated...

I can't wait for her surprise trip.  I so want them to get engaged while she is over there. 

I love your wordiness, but I would love to get to surprise trip soon...please.



Author's Response:

I'm trying....I promise...just a few minor events need to happen before the trip...who knows...maybe I can cover them in one chap...I'll try.  Thanks!

Reviewer: 40sQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 12:43 AM Title: Panty Droppers & Belly Dances

I love that song. I want it to be my wedding song since I plan on a 40s wedding. Of course I need a fiance first, but that's just a minor detail.



Author's Response:

very minor detail.  It is a pretty song.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 12:06 AM Title: Drunk Ironing & Snark

hmmm... let me guess he will turn up to dinner? shock the hell out of her?



Author's Response:

maybe..i'll never tell, well actually I will in the next chapter.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 12:03 AM Title: Panty Droppers & Belly Dances

Loved this chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad.

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 11:52 PM Title: Armpits & Coffee Stains

LOL that was a really good first chapter.. can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.  Thanks very much!  Btw...I love your stories.

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 10:53 PM Title: Panty Droppers & Belly Dances

LOL i am learning belly dance and i will tell you shimmies hurt like hell. Supposedly it gets better the more you do it.  



Author's Response:

LOL..that's great.  I would love to learn that...always told hubs I would like to.  Not counting all those years and years of dance lessons as a kid...the only dance lesson I've take as an adult was a drunken tango lesson in Cancun....the instructor was hot though...in an Antonio Banderas sort of way...droolworthy but arrogant....but then again.. I was pretty toasted.  Thanks!

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 9:09 PM Title: Panty Droppers & Belly Dances

AWESOME!!! The only downer is that the chapter had to end! :) LOVE your story!!! KEEP IT UP



Author's Response:

it has to end ....in order for me to write the next one!  Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 8:57 PM Title: Panty Droppers & Belly Dances

I loved it!! Totally understand Bella's embarrassment but it was for Edward & he lves everything about her!!
Great chapter.....damn, when they do the deed, it'll be explosive with all the UST surrounding them!

Author's Response:

i know...probably cause power outtages..lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 7:19 PM Title: Pink Chiffon & Man Skirts

What an awesome chapter! Yea, those bitches were arrested! And I too have a friend who only thinks in terms of Facebook! "This is soooo going on Facebook..etc."

Can I just say...I'm picturing Emmett on the cover of some romance novel wearing nothing but kilt and carrying some ridiculously large claymore....sigh...I read too much.



Author's Response:

lol...as i told someone else, I might find golf interesting if the dudes wore kilts (but only if they looked like Emmett).  Thanks!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 7:40 AM Title: Pink Chiffon & Man Skirts

aww, I like how Bella can drive him crazy skyping while wearing a pink nightie...is it time for her to head to London yet?  Can't wait!



Author's Response:

soon,,,you will love what happens when they skype next chap.  Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2010 8:16 AM Title: Pink Chiffon & Man Skirts

I love Emmett kilt and all he is just good dirty fun lol.  It was funny all the different things that where said about Bella and the cops when they got them girls.  It is true we all love them gosep rags but I dont beleive anything in them I didnt even take there word that Adam Lambert was gay until he said he was lol.  I cant wait for London I would so love to go there.



Author's Response:

i have to say that I don't believe those things either.  they make the headlines crazy so people will buy them.  Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2010 12:00 AM Title: Pink Chiffon & Man Skirts

Loved it!! I thought it was adorable that Edward watched her sleep!! Cannot wait for the London reunion.

Author's Response:

Thanks!  he is a little obsessed...

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