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Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2011 5:02 PM Title: Hello Kitty Undies & Lucky Thirteen

I hope that those girls get what they deserve!!



Author's Response:

eventually they will.  Thanks!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2011 4:26 PM Title: Fried Ice Cream & A Cup of Tea

That is terrible everything that Bella has been through and it is good that she wanted to tell Edward about it so that he knew about it.



Author's Response:

difficult to write that chapter ...Thanks so much!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2011 3:55 PM Title: Cosmic Boogers & Black Eyed Peas

So I am shocked that Bella was that lost control in church. I wonder how Edward is going to take the rest of Bella's story.



Author's Response:

Bella's a bit of a 'blurter'. lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2011 4:36 AM Title: Stellar Hineys & Carriage Rides

Well Rosealie was surprised and the center of attention which is good and now I wonder what their wedding is going to be like and what kind of antics Emmett is going to pull at church.



Author's Response:

Think 'lavish'.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2011 4:19 AM Title: The Dude & Dirty Harry

That is terrible that Bella got hurt but it was funny to see Edward and Charliie interact especially when the metion of Clint Eastwood was added into the picture



Author's Response:

Charlie is always a lot of fun to write.  thanks, glad you like the story!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2011 3:58 AM Title: Mercer Island & Minibars

Wow it is sad that Edward had to go through all of that before he even got to be around the fakeness that is sometimes hollywood.



Author's Response:

I agree.  Thanks!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 9:54 AM Title: Reality Shows & Apparitions

Loved it thanks for sharing this with us and I love the cliffy see you next update....



Author's Response:

Thanks.  New chapter posted!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 2:58 AM Title: Kelly Kapowski & The Cougar

It is a good thing that Bella is trying to move on with her life and if it is with Edward then good for her!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 2:25 AM Title: Grits & Vitamin R

Well I have to admitt that National Lampoon's Christmas Vacation is right up there on my list of favorite christmas movies!! I am cracking up that Emmett is a total class clown and I am loving his character in this story!



Author's Response:

thanks!  i have to admit that I like Emmett also.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2011 2:53 PM Title: The Snowman & Midnight Mass

Wow it seems that there is never a dull moment there when Emmett is around!



Author's Response:

he is the life of the party!  THanks!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2011 2:08 PM Title: Reality Shows & Apparitions

Wow great cliffie.  Loved the meeting witht the publisher.  Can't wait for the old girlfriend story and the road trip.



Author's Response:

his meeting with Meghan is told in detail in the latest chapter of LRM.  He will also tell Bella about it in the next V&V...just not as detailed.  Thanks!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2011 5:16 AM Title: Drunk Ironing & Snark

Well I guess there is more to Edward than what others know about him.



Author's Response:

absolutely.  Once you've read the first fifteen chapters of V&V...feel free to read Edward's POV in Love Rescue Me.  Thanks!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2011 4:52 AM Title: Armpits & Coffee Stains

I am liking this story and I cant wait to see what happens because Rose is cracking me up about reeming Edward about what he better not do to Bella.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it so far.  THanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2011 11:09 PM Title: Reality Shows & Apparitions

His past has come back to haunt him.  That was such a happy chapter til then I love Bella ranting about his penis to funny.



Author's Response:

she is a bit crazy.  Thanks!

Reviewer: binki Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2011 6:10 PM Title: Reality Shows & Apparitions

Oh I can't wait to hear about their encounter!  I love this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Hopefully you read the latest LRM....gives edward's side.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2011 5:43 AM Title: Reality Shows & Apparitions

I am not getting this he saw her?  He went out with her as in saw her. Or she was on the road and he SAW her. Or he had a dream and he saw her??  That is confusing.

They are getting close to marriage and all hell is breaking loose.

He is desperate because Bella may get mad and leave him??

 

YOU ARE SO MEAN.

 

 



Author's Response:

he was out with emmett...he saw her when emmett wasn't around...they did speak.  He's just shaken up and freaked out..we'll learn about in in the next LRM and V&V.  Edward adores Bella...he has lived in hatred of Meghan for 7 years.  He would never seek her out.  Hope that clears some of it up. Thanks.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2011 5:04 AM Title: Reality Shows & Apparitions

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  So happy for Bella ;)  I was not a fan of the fur...but I can imagine it was fake.  I really cannot wait to see why Edward saw Meghan.  I also cannot wait to read the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

you know Bella...it was faux fur.  I actually like fur...except for the time I found this old...and i mean OLD mink stole in my Mom's closet.(it was an antique)..I was snooping around, like little girls do, I opened a box and found that nasty thing...but it wasn't just the fur it was made of the ENTIRE bodies of little dead creatures with glass eyes.  I almost had a freaking heart attack...scared the living crap out of me....worse than any horror movie. lol.  So, yeah, I should actually hate fur.  AND...the above is one of the many reasons I'm twisted. 

needless to say, i've never snooped in her closet since. 

Thanks! 

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2011 3:21 AM Title: Reality Shows & Apparitions

If I didn't know better, I'd say you have it out for these two. ;)  It never even occured to me that this would happen.  I can't wait to read LRM and see the exchange between Edward and Meghan (if there was one).  I am a bit shocked that Em didn't pick up what was going on; however, if he was in "buying snacks for the road trip coma" I can understand why... hee hee.

On a totally different note... I am currently betaing two stories by babylou23.  It has been my priviledge to to do this and I thought you might be interested in checking them out. (O, who am I kidding?  I am totally wanting to pimp my girl out here!Ü) The stories are Speak and Please Remember Me, by babylou23 (here and on fanfiction.net also).  I actually fell into the beta position shortly after she started both because I was immediately intrigued and hooked.  Please Remember Me's Edward is angry, complicated, and lost- I love him; and Speak's Edward and Bella are nothing compared to Edward's son Anthony!   



Author's Response:

Emmett is a social butterfly...suffice it to say that he wasn't with Edward at every moment, so Edward was alone when he saw Meghan.  It was just a chance meeting.  They do speak.  Edward is just flipping out about the entire exchange....you'll understand with the next chap.  A couple people were worried that he still had feelings for M.  No way...he's actually lived in hatred of her for 7 years.

I will definitely check out those 2 stories...i'm always looking for good stuff to read for those moments when I'm not writing! lol.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2011 3:04 AM Title: Reality Shows & Apparitions

Love it!



Author's Response:

thanks very much!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2011 10:36 PM Title: Reality Shows & Apparitions

Can't they catch a break? So glad she didn't freak out about the car.



Author's Response:

don't think of this as something bad....will be more like closure.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2011 7:44 PM Title: Reality Shows & Apparitions

I. Cant. Stand. Cliffies.

Cliffies are evil, I dont like them at all.....

Great chapter though, I always get excited when I see updates for this story.

Makes me even more anxious when I have to wait on an explanation of said cliffie.

Grrr......



Author's Response:

it will be good...think of this as 'closure'.  Thanks for liking the chapter anyway. lol.  more to come soon.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2011 7:42 PM Title: Reality Shows & Apparitions

Well seeing Meghan must have been a kick in the pants.  I know that he doesn't have feelings for her, but I bet is was a shock. Bella sure gets these crazy bouts of diarrhea of the mouth. She is going to go crazy for the next 60 days with Edward around all day and night. I can't believe Edward was saying Bella was driving too fast. This can't be the same Edward who has a Vanquish. Maybe she just wasn't paying attention. She does have a problem with daydreaming.



Author's Response:

He was beyond shocked to see Meghan.  Without giving too much away, I'll say this:  he's lived in hatred of M. for years and kind of flipped out when he saw her.  they did have a conversation which flipped him out more.  He adores Bella...has no feeling whatsoever for the ex.

Bella is a goofball...drunk or sober.  I guess that's where her character has the most ME in her.  pfft  i control it better than she does...but when it's just me and hubs..yeah i tend to babble in silliness.  I've posted the photos that 'inspired' the Diva shots on the V&V facebook page, if you're interested (link on my author page).

The driving...my hubs and i both own Mustangs...his is a LOT more valuable than mine...mine is a 66.  He takes me out on joyrides and guns the car and I don't complain....let me drive 5 miles over the limit and he's practically in tears.  i think it's a guy thing. lol.  Although I think Bella tends to look at Edward more than at the road....i'd probably do the same and wrap the car around a tree. *sigh* Edward eye-candy.

Thanks for reading and reviewing...more to come soon!

Reviewer: Maven Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2011 7:31 PM Title: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

Wow, I am beyond moved by your writing. From the humor to the drama, you pull us in to your story. THANK YOU.

Author's Response:

you are very welcome.   I'm glad you're enjoying it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2011 6:41 PM Title: Reality Shows & Apparitions

you deserve every award you are nominated for!



Author's Response:

Thanks you so much!  I don't expect to win,....but I'll bug everyone to vote anyway. lol.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2011 6:24 PM Title: Reality Shows & Apparitions

ooh he saw Meghan! this is going to get good. Hopefully the little ho didn't say anything. :( now about that calendar: :D wow! I can't wait to see Edward's reaction. Is she going to give that to him before or after the wedding? its a bday gift right? Darn! bc I'm sure if they were married, he's bound to jump her right then and there. lol maybe I'll get lucky & he'll say screw the marriage, lets go now! :D one can hope. I can't wait to read more. this is soo freaking good. can't wait till the next LRM update. :D thanks again bye for now



Author's Response:

hopefully you've seen the photo I posted in V&V's facebook...it's also on the blog.  It's the original pose from Gypsy...easy to imagine Bella doing it though.  Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2011 6:19 PM Title: Reality Shows & Apparitions

Poor boy.....so glad he has Bella to help. They are so right together!
Great chapter....can't wait for the updates!!

Author's Response:

that chapter was up and down and all over the place....ah well.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Mrs M Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2011 6:09 PM Title: Reality Shows & Apparitions

You sure know how to leave us hanging!!! Good Chapter!! Can't wait for more!!!



Author's Response:

i have to have something to write about in LRM. lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2011 2:15 AM Title: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

Thank you for sharing that chapter with us it made me smile update when you can....



Author's Response:

thanks so much...next chapter is up.

Reviewer: ju007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2011 1:38 AM Title: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

Gah!!! I love this story!! I've been reading the last few days and I'm already dying for an update, great work!! 



Author's Response:

thanks so much!  next chapter is posted.

Reviewer: krisandrob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 11:45 PM Title: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

This couple has been through hell and back and they both deserve some great loving time now together!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

lol...we'll get there.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 9:27 PM Title: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

yeah Badass B!!!



Author's Response:

lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 6:38 AM Title: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

This was an awesome chapter, one of many in one of my favourite stories. The best parts for me were Edward kissing her bruises, as well as the applause from Bella's classmates and the epiphany that caused her to have.  Well done!



Author's Response:

thanks very much!  next chapter is posted

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 4:51 AM Title: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

Ooh that chapter made me cry. Just everything but especially Edward & the bruises mixed with the graduation. That was great! Keep up the great work. Thanks again bye for now. 



Author's Response:

what can I say..except thank you very much.  I appreciate that.  next chapter is posted.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 4:36 AM Title: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

*Stands up and applauds loudly*

Hoo-Rah!!

Well said, indeed. Loved it. Very inspiring. You rock!!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks very very much! next chapter is up.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 1:53 AM Title: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

It is good to see that Bella knows she is strong and others see her and not just who she represents.



Author's Response:

she's getting there.  Thanks!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 1:27 AM Title: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

I am ready for a few chapters of fluff.  You have brought Bella so far.  From the broken girl to someone whose strength is admired not only by those who love her but by those who only know of her.  Please keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

thanks so much! next chapter is up.

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 12:32 AM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

I can't wait to go read LRM now!!!!  Poor Edward!  So glad Bella kicked some ass and I hope she's okay.  I will be anxious for an update.Ü



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  Thanks so much! next chap is up.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 12:27 AM Title: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

Great chapter, and ~1/2 way through I was wondering how it is that I'm crying reading this? {It's not that time of the month.}It always seems like a such a sweet light story about a movie star & young college girl that swept him of his feet & young college girl who was swept off her feet by the dashing movie star;D)  It seems like strange dichotomies ..the laughing about Emmett's shenanigans, the movie star drama and the serious tragedy of attempted rape & murder but you make it all work really well in this story. So it always throws me when your story gets really touching, but I love it.

So, now that I've reviewed for you, feel free to go right that next chapter! ha ha

No, really, thanks so much for writing, it's been a pleasure to read what you've written.



Author's Response:

What a wonderful review!  thank you so much...next chap is up..and as usual it's got a little of everything.  thanks again!

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 12:14 AM Title: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

Holy Hell... I am behind and so glad because I get to go right to the next chappie!  But, I had to review cause I had to say, "You're one sneaky woman!"  You assured me nothing was going to happen to Bella on the Monday when she was alone...I guess I should have been more observant that she still had to get through Tuesday ;) On to the next chappie...



Author's Response:

omg...that was you!  I couldn't remember who I told that...knowing the entire time that she was going to be nabbed on Tuesday...i'm so bad...*chuckle*.  Thanks!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2011 11:23 PM Title: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

boy...you sure can write the emotions!   LOVED IT!



Author's Response:

you'll like the next chapter...it's all over the place ...happy...sad...silly... I just posted it.  THanks so much!

Reviewer: randomly_mad Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2011 7:51 PM Title: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

Great Job. I had a lump in my throat thru the whole thing.



Author's Response:

thank you so much!  just posted the next chapter...

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2011 7:06 PM Title: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

wow,     stunning chapter !!!!!!  love the graduation !!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad.

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2011 6:50 PM Title: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

Great chapter! I freaking love that song, and to have Edward using it to sing her to sleep... nice.

Buuuuut, I'm kind of curious about what the press is saying! Will that be in EPOV?



Author's Response:

exactly...we have to leave some stuff for E to talk about...hand in hand with that will be the police findings.  Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2011 6:01 PM Title: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

I loved this chapter. I am so glad that Bella sees herself differently. She is a surrivor. She is strong. She is loved by many. She has a good life.



Author's Response:

i agree completely.  Thanks!

Reviewer: binki Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2011 5:58 PM Title: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

I like how Bella is handling everything with great style!!



Author's Response:

she's def getting better.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2011 5:41 PM Title: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

wow, that was GREAT!!

OMG I was literally biting my nails!  eesh!

I am so glad she had another epiphany :)



Author's Response:

me too. Thanks so much

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2011 5:08 PM Title: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

I love Chasng Cars

 

Hopefully these two are heading for their HEA with minimal angst



Author's Response:

me too.  i love pimping music.  Thanks

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2011 4:53 PM Title: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  SO happy Bella is ok and even though, like Bella, I don't like that the ranger is dead, I am happy that she is safe now :)  I cannot wait to see what happens next :)



Author's Response:

I tried to be honest with the reaction to being the cause of someone's death...even a bad person's. Thanks!

Reviewer: Mrs M Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2011 4:14 PM Title: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

Awww i'm soo happy she is no longer feeling guilty about it!! Great chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm happy you liked it.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2011 4:12 PM Title: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

That was a beautiful chapter. You could feel the pain in Edwards words. Great job!

Author's Response:

thank you so much!

Reviewer: Autumn-Spring Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2011 5:37 PM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

have just spent the whole bank holiday reading from chapter 1 through....loving it - cant wait for next chapter. I like the way in which Bella talks to herself - something I seem to do more and more!



Author's Response:

me too. i have quite a bit of things in common with Bella. lol.  Glad you liked it.  Next chapter is posted now.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Hitchy Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2011 2:49 PM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

Wow.  That was intense.  I can't even imagine what this will do to everyone - mostly Edward, of course.  Gah.  Can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

next chap is up now..Thanks!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 7:02 PM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

...The ranger.... it was the ranger the whole time... That caught me off guard... wow...

And ewww, please don't tell me he and Geri were "together".... well they're together now.



Author's Response:

lol not together like that...eww.  They were friends.  Thanks! next chap is up now.

Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 3:06 AM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

so glad Bella was able to keep her cool (finally).  Poor Charlie - to think that Bella was gone - even for a second.  love your writing!



Author's Response:

THanks much! next chap is up.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 7:04 PM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

wow!  holy crap, the ranger?!

 

Cmon Bells, be ok!....

 



Author's Response:

Thanks! next chap is up.

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 6:00 PM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

ok...now you have me waiting to see what is going to happen and i cant wait to hear bella's thoughts...good chapter...



Author's Response:

THanks! next one up now.

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 5:12 PM Title: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

i don't know how i missed the update except to say that my e-mail was messed up....stupid bella should have called the hospital to check on him ..or one of the other officers.....silly girl....thanks for the update.....



Author's Response:

thanks!  i think TWCS had a wonky day last week.  Fanfic has entire wonky weeks. lol. 

Reviewer: HopelessRomantic Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 2:38 AM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

Enjoyed the chapter...glad she is found



Author's Response:

Thanks!  glad you liked it.

Reviewer: dirtydianna Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 1:44 AM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

Thank God...Bella's ok. Now we just need some Edward and the world will be right again! Great chapter as always :)



Author's Response:

i posted a sneak peek of the latest V&V on the blog and facebook page.  Thanks!

Reviewer: binki Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2011 5:29 PM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

These last two chapters were nerve wracking!! I can't wait for Edward to get to her!



Author's Response:

hopefully you read the latest LRM....i posted a sneak peek of the next V&V on the facebook page and on the blog.  Thanks!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2011 10:04 PM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

Oh man....what a chapter!  Can't wait for the next one!!



Author's Response:

next one is guaranteed to be a lot calmer.  Thanks!  Sneak peek of next V&V posted on facebook and blog.

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2011 1:33 PM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

Brilliant!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much! Sneak peek of the next V&V posted on Facebook page and on the blog.

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2011 5:06 AM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

Love it!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks much!  There's a sneak peek of the next V&V posted on the blog and facebook page. 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2011 3:21 AM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

Wow, great chapter.   I cant wait to read it from E's POV.



Author's Response:

hopefully by now you've read the latest LRM.  I've posted a sneak peek of the next V&V on the blog and facebook page.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2011 2:10 AM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

No it was not too bad. She has had enough hurt for 10 women. It is time for her to have nothing, I mean nothing but HAPPINESS.

 



Author's Response:

we are headed toward a HEA...i think.  Yes, yes we are. Thanks!

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2011 2:00 AM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

Great job!  Very exciting!  Thanks for the quick update!



Author's Response:

Thanks much!

Reviewer: mflow Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2011 1:16 AM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

Awesome chapter and I have to say I never saw that coming. Wpw is all I can say! Btw I liked the officer's pov.

Author's Response:

thanks...a little Charlie angst is something we rarely see..but it was appropriate. 

Reviewer: Sparta Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 11:28 PM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

Oh wow, what a chapter!!! That was amazing, I was begining to think it was real. Please update soon, I can't wait to see Edwards pov



Author's Response:

hopefully by now you've seen Edward's pov...there's a sneak peek of the next V&V posted on the facebook page and on the blog.  New chapter tomorrow or next day.  THanks!

Reviewer: meadowmate78 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 10:18 PM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

You did awesome!!!!!!!!!!! THe only thing missing was a tissue warning!!!! I cannot wait to read the next chapter-and hopefully move on to happier times!

 

Jo



Author's Response:

hopefully you read the latest chapter of LRM...and there's also a sneak peek of the next V&V posted on the blog and the facebook page.  NExt chapter in a day or two.  Thanks!

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 9:01 PM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

Wow, I never thought we would hear from the ranger again.  He wanted to give payback to Bella and Geri for ruining his career.  He did that to himself.

I am so proud of Bella for fighting back.  I thought at first she was going to just give up, but then she remembered everyone who loves and cares about her and found the will to fight.  I am thankful for the boots with heels that Rose gave her.  Heels can be very dangerous when used with enough force.  I am glad that Bella got into the fetal position on the floor boards when the car was crashing through the forest.  Again, I am so proud of her for fighting back.  I do not know if getting out of the car was the best decision, but at least she was able to find a place in the forest where she could call 911. 

Edward is going to flip his shit when he finds out exactly what happened.  I am sure that he is going to throw himself a pity party and blame himself for the incident.  He always blames himself, and 98 times out of 100 Bella is the one to blame.  I love Bella, but she really is very naive (sheltered).  I understand why she is the way she is, but can we get her to make smarter decisions?

Thank you for the update. I love how you write your cliffies.  You have them resolved in the next chapter unlike other authors who string it out over five chapters.



Author's Response:

i don't like long cliffies...especially in fanfic because you can't sneak ahead (like I do when reading a book--yeah i'm a little cheater) to make sure everything turns out okay.  If I didn't know E was coming back whilst reading New Moon, I would have bitten my nails down to the nub.  lol.  Bella is getting better...this is all about how they are both changing and growing into the people they were meant to be...takes a while to catch up.

Thanks!

Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 8:10 PM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

GAH!  Well hopefully it will be soon for the next update.  Good gravy I can be so impatient.

Waiting Patiently, Impatiently,

OH MIA MYA



Author's Response:

i posted a sneak peek of the next V&V on the blog and on the facebook.  THanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 7:50 PM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

Thank goodness she's alive but I bet Edward will be upset with her.



Author's Response:

his reaction is typically Edward, I think.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 7:44 PM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

whew....   what a relief.   now did edward survive or is he sedated??  



Author's Response:

poor edward.  he is a long-suffering hero isn't he?  Thanks!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 7:32 PM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

She did exactly what I would have done.  I would have hicked him dead if I had to.  But why diid she not just follow the car trails out of the forest? There must have been a path that the tires made, especially in such a wet climate.  But I do suppose she had quite the head wound.  Will we get LRM next?  And how come I did not receive the update?  I found it by accident.



Author's Response:

it was dark...i don't think she would have been able to locate the tracks.  I tried to convey the impression that the car spun before hitting the trees also....very disorienting.  TWCS was failing with updates last week...hopefully better this week.   You've probably already seen the latest LRM.  I'm almost done the next V&V...posted a sneak on facebook and the blog.  THanks!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 6:58 PM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

great chapter except too darn short

I would have flown out the door it it was anyone I loved so I don't blame Bella, dying to know why the Ranger was so obsessed with her



Author's Response:

every time i'm writing a chapter and i'm almost finished but it's less than 5000 words...i think of you lol....You'll like the next V&V..i think it's over 9000.  I posted a sneak peek on the blog and on the facebook.  Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 6:09 PM Title: Boot Heels & Body Bags

I guess my parents taught me to be rational during stress. My dad and my husband are both retired military. Learned from a young age to never go off half cocked. When my dad died in a plane crash, I was nineteen. I can handle details under stress.



Author's Response:

my dad was retired military also...veteran of 3 wars actually.  I inherited his logic...but i also inherited my mother's crazy.  She is really tough...i mean when Dad was stationed in India she didn't let him go alone like some wimpy women would have...she hauled all of us over there and even gave birth to my little brother while we lived there...It was not an easy place for Americans to adapt to either.  We ended up loving it. 

BUT she will freak the heck out and fly off the handle quite easily.  Very high strung....made for an interesting childhood let me tell you.  I tended to hide ... a lot .. lol. 

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 3:00 PM Title: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

Wow!  It's exciting to see the return of the "Villains!" I guess there's something wrong with me because I love cliffies!  LOL

Also, did you know that the TWCS server was down the day you posted this important chapter?  For most of the chapters posted on Friday, April 22, there were no e-mail alerts sent out.  Just FYI, you might want to put something in the next chapter's author's note to make sure that your readers saw this chapter.  KWIM?



Author's Response:

I'm glad somebody does! lol. Even with all those probs...TWCS is still doing better than fanfic....it was down for days.....  Thanks!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 5:23 PM Title: Wild Turkey & Jedi Training

Em you are way way way out of hand... don't get thrown out!!!



Author's Response:

he is a nut.  Thanks!

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2011 1:43 AM Title: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

GAH I trust you but GAH



Author's Response:

sorry!  Thanks for the review though!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 5:47 PM Title: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

Natural Family Planning????  Is she for real?!!!!!!  I knew this was going to happen!  OME!!!  I just wonder who it is.  There has been no word that the killer is out of jail so maybe it is one of the others.  Watch it be someone like Alec.  Although I don't really think it is.  There has to help on the way.  She cannot be taken and miss graduation.  This will also be huge news.  I cannot wait for the next update.

BTW, I never did get my update for this chapter, I found it by looking for something else.  Is the update not working?



Author's Response:

i'm so far behind...responding to these reviews. sorry.  I heard there was a glitch with TWCS a few days ago..hopfully resolved now?  Natural family planning...yes there are folks who actually do that.  main reason my first child was born BEFORE my first wedding anniversary...*Cough*  .  Anyway...thanks very much!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 5:40 PM Title: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

Okay, I'm trusting you but I gotta say I'm not liking you too much right now, arrghh, what a cliffy!

Thanks for writing.

Seriously, no birth control? I don't blame him for worrying about her physical safety.



Author's Response:

keeping it real.  ;)  I'm so far behind in responding to reviews..ugh.  Thanks!

Reviewer: HopelessRomantic Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 3:02 PM Title: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

Great cliff at the end. Looking forward to what happens next



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm so behind on replying to reviews. I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 9:36 AM Title: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

Bella will believe anything poor girl. Edward is out of his mind and Emmett OMG cant imagine.  I cant wait to see how she gets saved and the bastard that has her dies.



Author's Response:

by now you've read the next one.  Glad you liked this chap.  Thanks!

Reviewer: dirtydianna Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 4:56 AM Title: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

fine..i trust you but shit, edwards probably freaking right now and gah i so dont like cliffies...hurry i need an update



Author's Response:

Hopefully you've seen the update by now.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 2:15 AM Title: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

Holy crap.  I knew you were going to do something like this but I was not ready after all the sweetness.  I will be wringing my hands waiting for your next update.



Author's Response:

hopefully you've seen the new chap...although TWCS has been fail this week with notifying people.  Thanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 1:33 AM Title: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

You know, she has been almost murdered is she really THIS DUMB?

 

SIGH?



Author's Response:

but she was very young then.  This is a hard way to learn.  Thanks

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 1:13 AM Title: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

A lot of things went in his favor.



Author's Response:

some of them he caused, but not all.   Thanks!

Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 10:16 PM Title: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

Oh My Gosh! Why can't things ever go smoothly for these two? You're drivin me crazy I tell ya. 

Waiting Patiently Impatiently,

OH MIA MYA



Author's Response:

because then the story would be boring. lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: thinkingboutyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 9:42 PM Title: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

OMG OMG!! another cliffy.. when are you going to update? until then, ill be awaiting another awesome chapter:)



Author's Response:

Hopefully you've seen the update by now.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 8:11 PM Title: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

OMG Please tell me you are going to update very soon. I am trying to trust you but  damn I am so afraid for Bella right now. Edward is going to freak!!! The fear you wrote in Bella and Emmetts words was amazing. I hope we finally get to see who has been stalking Bella.



Author's Response:

obviously i'm behind with my review responses...by now I hope all your questions have been answered!  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: msa121371 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 7:40 PM Title: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

WOW!!! Nothing like a roller coaster ride this afternoon! But I loved it still. Thanks for the update and have a great Easter weekend!
Love
Shannon

Author's Response:

You just never know do you?  THanks.  I hope you had a nice Easter as well.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 7:31 PM Title: Captain Jack & Drunkella

i love it she drinks like a fish but finds nothing wrong with it but won't have sex!!



Author's Response:

it's call the twisted mind of a Catholic okay...LOL  well, except my Mom...Very Catholic - Hates alcohol.  My daughter used to call her on the phone to squeal on me whenever I drank a beer.  In the privacy of my own home!  ....yeah my kids are turds.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 7:12 PM Title: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

I trust you but please hurry back. Can't wait to find out who it is I have a couple of guesses.

BTW why don't these two exteriment a little, hands, mouth even virgins experiment a little



Author's Response:

lol...okay...i am so behind with these review responses....lalalalala....Thanks!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 7:06 PM Title: Waxward & Sexward

okay she is really starting to bother me... girl let it go and have fun with him... you are wasting sooo much time... i would have jumped him already too!!!



Author's Response:

LOL...Bella is not gonna do it...not yet anyway.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 6:57 PM Title: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

omg i trust you but coemon,..... how long are we going to have to wait for the next update,   and mot lrm.     I have to know what is going on.  please.     as a faithful reader and reviewer,  i need something !!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

okay....i'm obviously behind with my review responses...been chained to my laptop...writing and writing.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 6:54 PM Title: Makeup Kisses & Confessions

wow didn't expect tanya to be so gracious and honest... intersting.  glad they made up and thanks for making bella have some moxy and stand up for herself i love it!!!



Author's Response:

She is learning to be tough.  Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 6:48 PM Title: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

Bella was so stupid not to listen to Edward and stay home. She should have called Edward. She should have called the hospital. She did not even get the "deputy's" name. She just freaked out and put herself in danger. She wonders why Emmett and Edward have to watch her. She can't take care of herself. She needs security. She has no common sense.



Author's Response:

She should have called the hospital or a deputy she knew...like Deputy Mark.  Edward wouldn't have answered the phone because he was interviewing.  She just panicked...unfortunately it's a hard lesson to learn.

Reviewer: grabadietcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 6:39 PM Title: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

Poor Bella - well at least we'll start to figure what's up with her stalker!!



Author's Response:

finally.  Thanks!

Reviewer: meadowmate78 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 6:13 PM Title: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm holding out for the HEA-but holy cow this is some deep shit!

 

Jo



Author's Response:

next chap up...hopefully you'll feel better.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 5:56 PM Title: Vandalism & The Apocalypse

knew it was coming thought it would be the park ranger but you let it build!  i was right about the baby thing too... let's see what happens now!!



Author's Response:

Edward always has to be the martyr...lol.  THanks!

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