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Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 5:41 PM Title: Perjury & Sweet Dreams

sex dreams are good but are we going to get the real thing here soon?  i would have jumped him already virgin or no virgin... what is ed doing there?



Author's Response:

sex *cough* what?  Are you talking to me?  ; )

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 5:17 PM Title: Chipmunks & Oscars

oh i know where you are taking the tanya thing she is going to be pregers and she is going to say it's ed's and he turned her away so she ran to felix for comfort!  you know it!!!



Author's Response:

smartie. lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: unicorn_bliss Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 4:51 PM Title: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

Maybe it's just me. But isn't Bella kind of stupid in this chapter? The impatience and agitation from the cop would have given me pause.-I also wouldn't have rushed by myself, simply because some cop tells me to.

 

And she says Edward's stubburn? Hello, pot meet kettle.

 

Honestly, what on earth was she thinking? If her father really did have a heartattack. Wouldn't have been better for her to wait for Emmett and Rose to get home and drive together with them?

I don't understand her logic of needing to go that instant.

But since the cops along with Charlie is/was suppoed to be not far behind Bella. Then the guy couldn't get to far, right?

I really hope this doesn't turn to violent. And if it does. I really don't want to read the details.-Vague referrancing is fine by me. Though the descreption at the end there has me cringing. I could see why that was nessary.

But any descreption of abuse from here on out. Won't or doesn't seem nesassary, in my opinoin.

Crossing fingers Bella doesn't break any bones or get any permanant scars.



Author's Response:

she was admittedly stupid.  I know that when I am stressed...I'm the person no one better rely on  LOL  I am the queen of the panic attack.  It's not a good thing.  not at all.  Even if she had been rational...and maybe called a driver from Lou's company to take her...I don't think she'd have waited for Em and Rose...they couldn't fly back til the next morning.  Next Chap is posted which answers the rest of the questions.  hope you enjoy it.  Thanks!  (don't worry  NO gore)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 4:47 PM Title: Outtake: The He-Man Incident

ha! beauty and the beast was one of my first dates with my hubby we sat in the balcony at the old movie theater and we were the only "adults" there without kids! haa!



Author's Response:

lol  each of my daughters have a 'favorite' Disney princess.  Bella my middle one's.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 4:44 PM Title: Valentines & The Masters of The Universe

go bells!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 4:32 PM Title: Handcuffs & Power Suits

wow just wow didn't see that coming i thought you were going to pull the i am no good for you bella i need to break up with you card there... but i am waiting for it!!



Author's Response:

lol  Glad you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 3:27 PM Title: Aspen & Cold Showers

my hubby would do both.  sing all nice then give me a wet willie! ahaha!!!



Author's Response:

you are lucky...i think?  lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 3:15 PM Title: Haircuts & Pepper Spray

ewwww!! that is just disgusting!!!



Author's Response:

*snicker*  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 2:52 PM Title: First Dates & Riff Raff

Em you are a piece of work!!!!



Author's Response:

very true.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 2:39 PM Title: Tasers & Interrogations

oh em you are soo funny... yup ed you answered wrong!!!



Author's Response:

poor edward.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 5:20 AM Title: Bourbon & Epitaphs

wowo interesting fyi!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 5:07 AM Title: Red Roses & Burst Bubbles

okay bella you didn't listen to him when he said it is not what it appears.... come on  get it together even i know this!!



Author's Response:

yup....she should have listened to Edward.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 4:53 AM Title: Fried Ice Cream & A Cup of Tea

poor bells well at least he didn't do worse things to her that was a plus



Author's Response:

yeah...like i said...I didn't want her damaged  beyond repair.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 4:47 AM Title: Cosmic Boogers & Black Eyed Peas

i have said the f word in church too... on my wedding day.. i said some other swear words too. . but it was really hot and everyone kept yanking on my veil during pictures..... i hope god forgives!!



Author's Response:

i'm sure He does.  I've always said that other people's weddings are more fun than your own.  Mine was irritating...too many people giving too many directions...argh.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 1:15 AM Title: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots

I loved this chapter- thanks! :)

Author's Response:

thank you for reading and reviewing!  more to come soon...

Reviewer: amhall1977 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 2:25 AM Title: Outtake: The Turkey of Ill Repute

wow  that brought tears and goosebumps i love this wonderful story it is one of the best i have read in while

thank you

angel

keep paying it forward



Author's Response:

Thanks very much.  I'm so glad you liked the chap...and the story. 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 11:41 PM Title: The Dude & Dirty Harry

charlie charlie.... it's ed he is perfect for bella!!!



Author's Response:

gotta love Charlie though.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 11:28 PM Title: Mercer Island & Minibars

poor ed... but i have been reading enought that once the L word is out there it is all downhill from there!!!



Author's Response:

very true...but lots of story ahead.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 8:22 PM Title: Enchiladas & Store Bought Ta Ta's

i forgot bella's dream car is my dream car!!  go bella you are getting some moxi!!! i love it!!!



Author's Response:

there's a photo of the car on the facebook page.  I own a 66 but it's light blue.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 8:05 PM Title: Kelly Kapowski & The Cougar

well what up with them?!  is ed on the level?



Author's Response:

he's already fallen for Bella.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 7:39 PM Title: Grits & Vitamin R

Em is soo sweet and it is okay that he is barging in!!! ed you are after it, i hope you are after it for all the right reasons!!



Author's Response:

i love emmett...but he still drives me crazy.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 7:25 PM Title: The Snowman & Midnight Mass

love the fam.. they are really close  Em is extra sweet!!



Author's Response:

he takes over the story quite often.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 6:46 PM Title: Drunk Ironing & Snark

hum something esle happened to bella...  can't wait to see where this is going.



Author's Response:

lots and lots of chapters ahead... hope you like the story. Thanks!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 2:54 PM Title: Armpits & Coffee Stains

okay why is bells so fragile?  i hate when bella is a dishrag!  i hope that she is not in this stoy.  of course ed is hot and sexy i wouldn't expect anything less!!



Author's Response:

all will be revealed in just a few chapters...this is all about them helping each other overcome traumatic incidents in their lives.  More humor  than angst though... Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2011 3:29 AM Title: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots

Okay, so I absolutely loved the edited Leno bit!!! Sweet and oh so funny... great job.

I gotta tell you, even though I know how the pregnancy results will turn out, I'm still nervous! *sigh* Please, please don't pull the rug out from under me. I'm so invested in the story that I couldn't handle a heart fail!



Author's Response:

more stuff about Jill Richarson in next chap...test results wont come for a couple chaps though.  Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 7:26 PM Title: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots

Edward is a professional. He had to know he was still had the mic on. It was funny though. Can't wait to proof this crazy woman wrong about the baby. I feel sorry for the baby.



Author's Response:

what can I say...he gets flustered when he worries about Bella.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 3:53 PM Title: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots

nice update. Like the Leno portion- that was really cute. Hopefully Bella gets a better understanding of just how adorable she really is... even in her flustered state



Author's Response:

i don't know if she'll ever learn....silly girl.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 10:32 AM Title: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots

I so enjoy reading  about these characters. Very cute 'meet cute' for the Leno audience & Bella.

I'm getting anxious about B. being alone on Monday;-{o}



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I wouldn't worry about Monday though.  LRM posting in the next day or so.

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 8:21 AM Title: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots

loved it very much thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can ......



Author's Response:

next LRM will be ready to post fairly soon...maybe tomorrow?  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 5:02 AM Title: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots

Thank goodness....the truth will finally be revealed about the baby.
Liked it - especially the sleepy pseudo sex!

Author's Response:

well...now i know where your mind is.  lol.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!  LRM shouldn't be much longer...

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 1:48 AM Title: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots

So sweet.  You are doing an amazing job with this romance.  Can't wait for Jill to get hers.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! 

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2011 8:04 PM Title: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots

man o man ...bella is teasing the shit out of him...my edward would give her a spanking for that....lol....good chapter ...for a second i thought maybe bella was having second thoughts about getting married, i don't know exactly why ..but it popped into my head and then it was gone as i kept reading....have a great week sweety. i'll be waiting to see edwards reaction to the picture she sent....it would be sooooo freaking funny if alex or someone else like jasper answered his phone and saw it...lol...i know that's my sick mind....lol...louise



Author's Response:

you are sick...lol.  I wouldn't have it any other way!  Your Edward would have her trussed up with a sore bum by now...absolutely! lol.  Bella never has second thoughts..she's not thrilled with all the attention she'll get...but that's normal for her.  I just finished writing the next LRM...had quite a bit of fun with Edward.  I've said it before...i like him nervous.  Thanks!  I'll be watching for your next update also!  ---Anne aka Emmamama

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2011 6:31 PM Title: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots

Lol her jay Leno stunt and pics at the end were awesome. I loved it. I can't wait for Edward's reaction in LRM. Keep up the great work. Thanks again bye for now. 



Author's Response:

I just finished the next LRM...tweaking it now and then I need to edit.  Edward's reaction is amusing.  Thanks!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2011 3:00 PM Title: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots

loved it!



Author's Response:

Thansk!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2011 1:55 PM Title: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots

great



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2011 1:53 PM Title: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots

Bella at Leno was priceless... loved it!  Everything seems to be going well, TOO WELL!  I am worried about Bella being alone on Monday night... I have a very bad feeling about that!  Can't wait to read Edward's reaction to Bella's naughty text in LRM. ;)



Author's Response:

i enjoyed the Leno....he's going to be on Letterman too.  Don't worry about Monday night.  Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2011 9:01 AM Title: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots

I have a 17 year old son that does the SBD's and he can clear a room and he just sits there so incent rotten kid lol.  Edward is going to freak when he sees the calander and he is going to be lossing his shit when he sees her pic on the phone lol.  I am nervous about her being home on monday night by herself????



Author's Response:

isn't it gross that we even know what an sbd is? lol.  don't be nervous about Monday night.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2011 4:06 AM Title: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots

omg poor bella, wireless mic's....  gotta suck,  and then that the audience twittered all about it.  and Jill, wodner if Alec is the baby daddy????



Author's Response:

Alec is not the baby daddy...but that would have been very funny!  Glad you liked the chap.  LRM next!  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2011 2:52 AM Title: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots

Wow, that was AMAZING!  I really loved it so much! Ahh, the SBDs...I only had one brother but sometimes my dad acted much younger than he really was so he taught my brother and I about SBDs from an early age (my brother is actually 4 years younger).  Anyway, cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Everyone always likes Emmett...even if he's only in the chapter for five minutes.  Thanks!

Reviewer: msa121371 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2011 2:48 AM Title: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots

Just three words.....stll lovin it! MWAH.....have a great rest of the weekend you were my little reprieve from a sick three year old. Thanks for the break....Shannon

Author's Response:

i hope you're still saying that 20 chapters from now..lol.  Hope your baby is feeling better....i hate it when they're sick..or hubs cause he's kind of a baby too. lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: mahitabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 8:54 PM Title: The Dude & Dirty Harry

I'm re-reading the story and this chapter and I cracked up again. You do a great jub of describing the scene with Charlie and Edward. Funny.

Author's Response:

Thanks!   I just posted a sneak peek to chapter 59 of V&V on the blog and Facebook page.

Reviewer: Marybeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 12:34 AM Title: Outtake: The Turkey of Ill Repute

love it!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2011 5:56 AM Title: Outtake: The Turkey of Ill Repute

That was wonderful and very heart felt Thanks.  I enjoyed knowing what a great person she was.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2011 12:31 PM Title: Outtake: The Turkey of Ill Repute

This was a funny, but sweet story.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2011 4:03 AM Title: Outtake: The Turkey of Ill Repute

OMG thanks for the tears these chapters need warnings and if you gave one I missed it Eric Clapton is a great artist have a good week and thanks for sharing this with us*wipes eyes*



Author's Response:

I'm sorry....I hope it was what my mom refers to as a 'good cry'.  I can never tell how something will affect a reader...I was actually kind of nervous about posting this...it is SO different from what I normally write.  I'm very glad that everyone likes it.  Thanks very much my dear!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2011 3:46 AM Title: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

Loved it very much and I hope they get that girl and I hope she goes public and says sorry because its so wrong she could have caused So many problems I wonder if someone told her to do To try and break them up .......I guess we will find out soon



Author's Response:

we get a little more of her story in the EPOV chaps I'm working on now...then even more in the next V&V.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2011 2:58 AM Title: Outtake: The Turkey of Ill Repute

*sobs*

That was beautiful...

And I'm a very firm believer in paying it forward as well.



Author's Response:

the best part of 'paying it forward' is that it's never too late to do so...   Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 1:21 AM Title: Outtake: The Turkey of Ill Repute

Oh my goodness!  This chapter is VERY awe inspiring!

So deep, I couldnt hold the tears back.

Thank you for this chapter, its absolutely beautiful.



Author's Response:

I'm touched by your words...for heaven sake don't read about the inspiration for this outtake that I posted on the Facebook....it may shatter the illusion. lol.  You know I can never be serious for very long.  ;D

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2011 1:06 AM Title: Outtake: The Turkey of Ill Repute

aww crap more tears and no warning



Author's Response:

i am sorry.  Everyone's reaction is different....some people have admitted to crying.  I really wasn't sure how this chap would go over.  Thanks very much.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 11:09 PM Title: Outtake: The Turkey of Ill Repute

Thank you for the turkey story it was fun and the second half was even better...feel very tearful...



Author's Response:

it was sad...but I'm glad you liked it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 8:31 PM Title: Outtake: The Turkey of Ill Repute

Such a touching outtake. Amazing job.



Author's Response:

thank you much!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 11:09 AM Title: Outtake: The Turkey of Ill Repute

*_*



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 10:44 AM Title: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

thanks for writing:D)



Author's Response:

you are very welcome.  Thank you.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 3:52 AM Title: Outtake: The Turkey of Ill Repute

wow that was sad. I was actually crying. I wouldn't mind seeing Audrey appear later on in this story. that would be great. I feel bad for Renee not knowing but feel even worse for Audrey. :( thanks again and bye for now

Author's Response:

it was sad for me too...but hopeful.  I'm so glad you liked it.  Thanks very much.

Reviewer: grabadietcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 3:50 AM Title: Outtake: The Turkey of Ill Repute

Seriously beautiful chapter - all of it, Renee's kindness to her daughter (and Charlie's for indulging her), Bella's hero worship and Renee taking the time to reach out and touch the life of someone that no one else seemed to care about.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I appreciate your kind words....and I'm very glad you liked the chapter.  I wasn't sure how it would go over.

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 2:44 AM Title: Outtake: The Turkey of Ill Repute

aww the ending to that reminds me of three wooden crosses.... I still cry when i hear it.



Author's Response:

thanks very much.  i had to look up the lyrics to that song because i was not familiar with it.   very nice.  I'm so glad you liked the chapter.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 2:09 AM Title: Outtake: The Turkey of Ill Repute

I absolutely LOVED IT!  EXTRAORDINARY chapter.  It brought tears to my eyes.



Author's Response:

just showing my emo side.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 12:48 AM Title: Outtake: The Turkey of Ill Repute

Wow, that was Amazing!  I really loved it so much!  That is a slightly funny story but once again, very serious at the same time.  I cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 12:12 AM Title: Outtake: The Turkey of Ill Repute

Very good. I knew there had to be a funny there but I also appreciated the "pay it forward" as well.

Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you liked it.  It was a little different for me.

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 5:52 PM Title: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

I can't wait for the outtake with carlisle! i can imagine the other end of that call. 74days is too far away! I love these 2



Author's Response:

we'll get there before you know it.  i think..  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 9:02 AM Title: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

Dying to hear the hooker turkey story...



Author's Response:

i posted it a little while ago...the inspiration for it will be posted on facebook tomorrow in a note.  Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 8:40 AM Title: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

It is all so exciting and I cant wait to read about the turkey. 



Author's Response:

lol the turkey may have it's own fan club.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 4:01 AM Title: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

Aww...poor Edward, that must be awkward ;)  I really loved this so much!  Amazing job, once again!  I loved the invitations, so amazing!  I cannot wait to see what happens next!  I also cannot wait to hear the Hooker Turkey story ;)



Author's Response:

thanks.  Glad you like it.  more to come very soon.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2011 3:08 AM Title: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

So much in this amazing chapter - conflict, resolution, wild turkey, forgiveness, kissing, and Squeezebox?  Great chapter.  I can't wait until LRM is caught up and we move VV along.  I love this story.



Author's Response:

i got a little sidetracked with the outtake i posted today...but still working on LRM.  Thanks!

Reviewer: HopelessRomantic Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 11:09 PM Title: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

Still enjoying the story...and I like that there is a story!!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  glad you're enjoying it. more to come very soon.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 7:58 PM Title: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

well once again I am telling you how great you are so write those fingers to the bone.



Author's Response:

lol.  thankfully it's just my fingertips so far! Thanks very much!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 7:37 PM Title: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

lol that was great! Carlisle and Esme like to do it to the WHO. lol that's awesome. poor Edward. i'm glad they said something about that homewrecker. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye for now

Author's Response:

very glad you enjoyed it.  Edward's pov of the last bit should be fun.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Mrs M Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 6:54 PM Title: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

Loved it!!!! Father Pat sure gave some good advice there, glad Charlie called ahead of time to give him the heads up!!! Keep it up!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I really like Father Pat....wish i could give him more time in the story..but it is what it is...  Thanks!

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 6:20 PM Title: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

I am glad that Edward is going to hire a privte eye to dig into that lying witches past.  I am glad that they are going to take her to civil court about this issue.  I know it will take a court order for the DNA test, but in real life, you can have a DNA test before the baby is born.  I am trying to ignore everything I know as a biological science teacher and go with the flow, but it is so so so hard.

Thank you for the update.  Edward is wound so tight that he is ging to have a heart attak at the age of 24.  Bella is right about Edward needing to talk to a professional before the wedding. 

Thank you for the update, and I am so happy that LRM will be caught up with V&V.  I know that you have been working very hard to get the readers to this point.



Author's Response:

If it wasn;t so close to the due date...they probably would have pushed for an earlier test...but as it turns out we are literally only days from delivery.  Next chap or 2 will resolve a lot of this.  poor Edward...he really is on the edge somewhat.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 5:16 PM Title: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

Parents should never answer the phone when they are busy or at least not let their kids know what is going on at the house. It doesn't matter what age they are kids don't want to imagine their parents as sexual beings. Carlisle probably enjoyed embaressing Edward though. This girl is pretty stupid for doing this scheme. It is going to backfire. Edward is loved in the business.  If she did it to get her career restarted after the baby, the studio people are not going to want to work with someone that tried to hurt one of their big stars. It is going to hurt her career more than help it.



Author's Response:

lol. Bad Esme and Carlisle.  Edward probably wishes he was still keeping everyone at arms length sometimes.  ha.  We'll hear more about the pregnant chick in the next chapter...maybe 2...Thanks!

Reviewer: jeannettemason Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 4:53 PM Title: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

this was a great chapter it was agood thing that bella didn't get harassed in school that would have been too hard on edward. can't wait for the update i'll be waiting

Author's Response:

I think Edward has reached his limit.  He literally can't handle a lot more.  Thanks!

Reviewer: grabadietcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 4:49 PM Title: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

Nice chapter - and I hope Edward realizes she'll stand by him now. I am really looking forward to the Hooker Turkey story!



Author's Response:

i'll warn you now that the turkey story isn't funny...although the entire situation is humorous.  Not sure when that will be finished...i've been writing it as the spirit moves me.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 3:33 PM Title: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

This was a great chapter.  It is interesting how Bella is starting to relax and Edward seems to be getting more nervous and on edge!

I'm excited that VV and LRM are caught up.  It will be fun to alternate between the POVs in a more "real time" fashion.  I really appreciate all the hard work and effort you put into your stories.



Author's Response:

me too...i'm very glad...although sometime's Edward's chaps will be quite short.  Thanks!

Reviewer: msa121371 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 3:23 PM Title: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

LOVE LOVE LOVED IT!!!! MY FRIEND YOU DID A GREAT JOB ON THIS ONE!!!  SORRY NO REVIEWS LATLEY RL HAS BEEN SUCKING!!  BUT I AM ALMOST BACK TO NORMAL AND SYILL LOVING BOTH OF THESE STORIES AND LOOK FORWARD TO THE UPDATES!!!  HAVE A GREAT REST OF THE WEEK

MWAH

SHANNON 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm always glad to hear that readers are sticking with the story...lots of interesting things are about to happen.  MTV Movie awards will be fun!  Thanks again.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 2:46 PM Title: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

Absolutely awesome as always!! I cannot WAIT to see what happens with the lying preggy skank! It's not Alec's is it?
Anyway...glad to see the two stories merging soon!
Keep writing......it's so exciting to see these two & the movie bump?? Perfection! It was meant to be.
I always think the world is a marauders map (HP Reference) & fate is just waiting for us to bump into each other.

Author's Response:

more about the pregnant chick in the next 2? chaps, i think.  Thanks...very glad you like the stories.  Alec's? LOL  that would have been hilarious.  next up lrm...then...

Reviewer: binki Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 2:22 PM Title: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

I just love this story and can't wait for your updates!! I love the romance and the humor!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  i'm glad to hear it.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2011 2:04 PM Title: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

lol,   squeezebox , lol    great chapter



Author's Response:

i'm twisted what can i say.  There's a photo of a squeezebox on the blog and on the Facebook page.  no not THAT one.  lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: TheSavage Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2011 4:42 AM Title: Armpits & Coffee Stains

Ok I've only read up to chapter 53 but this has to be the sweetest story I've ever read in my entire life. It reminds me of my family a lot lol I don't want to get to personal or what not but my boyfriend and I broke up recently after dating 2 years so I've had a very depressing view of the world and love. Especially since he was almost a carbon copy of Robert Pattinson and acted like the Edward in your story *sigh* This is going to sound awfully cheesy, but your story has made me hopeful of the future which helps get my ass out of bed every morning so I don't fail out of college lol I hope Bella doesn't get kidnapped or anything, I think I'd have a heart attack. Can't wait to see what happens :)



Author's Response:

It makes me so happy that you feel that way about my story.  Thanks so much!  A lot more to come...just posted the new one.

Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 11:42 AM Title: Making Plans & False Allegations

Ugh!!!!! U must update soon!!! I can't take cliffies!!!

Author's Response:

wish granted! lol thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: OposKneg Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2011 9:25 PM Title: Making Plans & False Allegations

Guess I had beter go read LRM, but I think just maybe I am channeling Mrs Hernandez...



Author's Response:

Bella will eventually get to meet Mrs. Hernandez.  Should be fun.   Thanks!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2011 2:08 PM Title: Making Plans & False Allegations

Thanks for the awesome update!

I'm surprised by E.'s rejection of Bella, that's kinda cold & totally unacceptable, except that it's from 'him' so it's acceptable because he's 100%perfect.

Thanks for writing:~D)



Author's Response:

lol..and i was trying to prove that he wasn't perfect!  Thanks!

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2011 2:52 AM Title: Making Plans & False Allegations

aww poor B&E but it will work out can't wait for next chappy and hah i have no house plant to kill giggles



Author's Response:

neither do i ...i manage to kill them all myself.  Thanks!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2011 2:51 AM Title: Making Plans & False Allegations

I loved the happy times they had.  I don't like that E pushed B away like that.  Does he doubt that she belives him?  I think everyone who knows E knows he isn't the dad.  So I really need to see this from E's POV because there has to be something that we don't know.  Anyway, we all know that men suck sometime.



Author's Response:

he's freaking out over anything that can hurt bella...as usual.  next LRM just posted.  next V&V soon.  Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2011 4:06 PM Title: Making Plans & False Allegations

Some lowly actress must want to get her name in the papers to restart her career after she has a baby. Edward would not lie about something like this. Bella needs to understand that Edward has his ghosts as well. He can't always be the strong one. Bella might have to be the strong one on this subjuct at least for a little while.



Author's Response:

we'll find out about the pregnant chick next time.  Bella and Edward will have more than one conversation about this.  Should be interesting.  Thanks!

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2011 12:59 AM Title: Making Plans & False Allegations

Another good chapter I can't wait for the update to see what happens....



Author's Response:

me neither...i have no idea...well I sort of have an idea...lol  I'm just playing with you, I know exactly what happens in this story all the way until the blissful end.   Thanks!

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 11:55 PM Title: Making Plans & False Allegations

Thank you for the update. 

I am pissed at Edward for pushing Bella away.  She was trying to be supportive and he treated her like $hit.  Did he forget that she has self esteem issues?  His action on that porch will set her back in therapy.

O.K. are you going to keep throwing #hit at them the entire time?  Now this false pregnancy rumor has them all messed up.  Since she is 8 months pregnant, it will not take forever to prove that he is not the father.  All it will take is a DNA test.  Crap they can do them very early in the pregnancy now!  With Edward's status, a lawyer or a judge could force the witch for a mandatory paternity test.  I know that this is true.  Plus we are not even into the stalker yet.  What else are you going to throw at them to ruin their relationship?

I do not mean to come off as a bitch, but I am really passionate and involved in this story.  It just ticks me off.  I guess that is a good thing.  You are a fantastic writer in the fanfiction world if you can get that kind of response from me.



Author's Response:

a little drama keeps it interesting and i don't want to give away the story  BUT you know them well enough by now... I'm sure the way they handle this won't be a surprise.  We'll find out about the pregnant chick and her reasons in the next chapter.  Suffice it to say, B & E are strong.  have faith.

This is the first time since the Tanya debacle that Edward's been truly tested...so far he fails...  I will say that the road to the wedding won't be without a little more drama, but we will get there.

i'm glad you're passionate...it makes me so grateful that readers appreciate all my hard work.  I get mad at the characters myself...just like sometimes I'm appalled at Emmett's behavior...and I FREAKING WROTE IT!  lol.  Take care, and stay passionate. 

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 9:26 PM Title: Making Plans & False Allegations

I have to say that I would hate to be an A list Hollywood actor... this would be the reason.

People tying to get noticed just for the sake of money and fame, who cares who they hurt along the way.

Loved the chapter apart from the end, but hey the story needs a little bit of tension every now and then to keep us on our toes.



Author's Response:

i never believe these people that 'come forward' with information about actors.  I always assume they're lying first.  Unless the actor admits to it...or they've done something illegal which can be proven...i give the famous person the benefit of the doubt.  it would be horrible to have your life constantly under a microscope.   Glad you liked the chap...eh, we need a little drama now and then.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 7:23 PM Title: Making Plans & False Allegations

OH NO!  NOT good!  I am so happy they have made progress!  I also hope that they find out that the girl was lying!  Amazing job, once again :)



Author's Response:

working on next LRM right now...then back to V&V so they can sort out this mess.  Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 3:49 PM Title: Making Plans & False Allegations

Seriously?? There's NO way his MTV date is really carrying Edwards baby, is it?
Edward is just upset because of all this crap from his past continues to come up & screw things with his and BElla's happiness, right?
I understand that she's hurt that Edward pushed her away but he's a guy & sometimes they need time to sort it out in their own mind.
Great chapter! Especially loved the t shirt strip!

Author's Response:

Edward's still carrying his v-card, so no, baby is definitely not his.  rest your mind.  lol. A lot of guys do behave like that when they're upset.  next chapter...  I've got to finish a double LRM first though.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 3:03 PM Title: Making Plans & False Allegations

Great chapter!  Lots of fun at the beginning and then it turns serious!  I wonder why Edward pushed Bella away at the end... I'll be looking forward to the next chapter to see what happens next.  At least it won't be long until the baby is born and the allegations can be refuted.

Thanks for the update!  (P.S. - I'm glad you still like the banners!)



Author's Response:

I absolutely love the banners!  Every time I click on my name at TWCS and see them, it makes me happy.  lol.  Glad you liked the chapter.  Needless to say, Bella will have an intense week, hopefully E will get his head out of his butt and apologize.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 2:41 PM Title: Making Plans & False Allegations

loving the story, but i don't understand Edward's reaction to Bella , why woudl he be upset unless there is a remote chance it woudl be true



Author's Response:

he's definitely still a virgin.  He's just overprotective, overreacting (where Bella's concerned), over the top Edward.  He pushed away the person he worries about most.  frustrating, but he wasn't in control of his emotions at that moment.  Glad you liked it.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 12:28 PM Title: Making Plans & False Allegations

Phew... An idiot girl claiming Edward to be her baby daddy- I can handle.  I was fearful that the drama & angst (that I knew was looming cuz things were too good) would come in the way of Bella's anonymous flower sender going in full stalker mode!!!!  I really was shocked that Edward pushed Bella away though...kind of makes him seem guilty of something...nah, no way, impossible- right? ;)



Author's Response:

Edward is DEFINITELY still carrying that v-card.  That's not a spoiler, as long as you've read through chap 15..so it's all good as far as that's concerned.  We'll find out about the chick making the accusations in the next chapter...and we will find out why soon also.  The one thing about LRM is that it lets you inside E's head...yes he's def still a virgin, and he's been having nightmares about Bella, he's kind of a basket case right now but trying to hide it.  I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter...i'll try to update soon.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 11:49 AM Title: Making Plans & False Allegations

not sure why he pushed her away just now but I am sure you will enlighten us



Author's Response:

yes i will.  he's kind of a mess where she's concerned.  (just like the Edward of the books)  he thinks Bella should be insulated from everything.  i'll update as soon as possible.  Thanks!

Reviewer: meadowmate78 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 11:36 AM Title: Making Plans & False Allegations

HOLY CRAPOLA BATMAN!!!!!! Taking deep deep breathes KNOWING that B & E will still have their HEA;)

 

xxxxxx,

Jo



Author's Response:

deep breaths are good.  we all need a little drama...makes life interesting.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 10:29 AM Title: Making Plans & False Allegations

Oh man!  What a slap in the face!  Bella was just trying to support him.  He didnt have to lash out at her...

Damn Ed dude, that stung.

I cant wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

men do that don't they?  at least some men, referring specifically to hubs here.  I usually call him an a-hole or throw something at him, and we're good. lol.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 6:55 AM Title: Making Plans & False Allegations

Its women like that, that make Men question us in the first place He just needs to come out and say it It will set things right real quick thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can....



Author's Response:

suffice it to say that B and E will have a busy week in the next chap.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 6:17 AM Title: Making Plans & False Allegations

At least they wont have to wait that long for a test to tell everyone that Edward is not the father.  He should of trusted Bella enough to talk to her about his feelings instead of making her feel like shit and he doesnt trust her.  Please dont send Mrs. H to my house I kill my own plants LOL.  Have I told you lately that I love this story or should I say both stories.



Author's Response:

and i love that you love them. lol.  Thanks so much for always reading and reviewing.  I think Mrs. H has already been here...like every day for the last bazillion years...i can't keep any plants alive....even silk flowers don't like me much.  Obviously the pregnant chick is not thinking rationally..it will all come out soon enough.  They needed a little drama to keep them on their toes.  Thanks again.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 4:21 AM Title: Making Plans & False Allegations

Hollywood is full of these type of people. Looking for an angle. That is not fiction. Now why he took it out on Bella. Who knows?

I can not help but believe this will be fixed but hey Edward is also sexually frustrated and thinking she is never going to want sex.  That is all playing in his head, even though he does not recognize it right now. Right now he is angry.



Author's Response:

you are absolutely correct...all these things are definitely playing around in that gorgeous noggin.  poor eddie.  He's so worried about Bella being mistreated...that he did it first.  stupid stupid man.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 3:40 AM Title: Making Plans & False Allegations

I can't wait for LRM for the sweet 16 party...

Damn can't they ever catch a break.  Why do a lot of guys lash out at people they love when they are angry about something else?

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

that is a male trait...  he's worried about Bella, and then hurts her feelings.  he's a doofus.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 3:07 AM Title: Making Plans & False Allegations

It's making him look guilty by not talking about it.



Author's Response:

he is flipping out as usual.  He hasn't been tested since the Tanya debacle...i have faith he'll pull it together.  Thanks!

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