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Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 8:02 AM Title: Joy Rides & Clown Masks

OMG how wonderful... THEY GO TO THE PROM!!!!!!!!

 



Author's Response:

i would like to go to prom NOW ...i would be so much cooler knowing everything that I do today. lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 5:06 AM Title: Bourbon & Epitaphs

Yep, figured that s out. He never made a move on her, that should habe been another clue.



Author's Response:

you are one of the few that guessed it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 4:47 AM Title: Pedophiles & Daddy's Little Girl

Must have been impressive to move Rose.



Author's Response:

yep.  You get all the gory detail in Edward's POV.  Thanks!

Reviewer: MarilagML Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 4:35 AM Title: Joy Rides & Clown Masks

Emmett's mischievous.  He made me laugh.



Author's Response:

Bella, Edward and I have had our heads together for 2 days, plotting revenge upon Emmett.  He'd better be afraid. lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 4:34 AM Title: Red Roses & Burst Bubbles

He had to know this would be over the net. How stupid could he get?



Author's Response:

he's isolated himself for too long...he's pretty dense.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 4:27 AM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

That is so sad and Sweet I knew Edward would come home to her.  He always seems to find the way to comforted her when she needs him the most.     :) Leona

 

So Lovly.. 



Author's Response:

he 's so perfect...and obviously couldn't ever be real.  *I glare at hubs*  his response:  'what's for dinner?'   *sigh* 

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 4:22 AM Title: Hello Kitty Undies & Lucky Thirteen

Never had expeiences like that in church. Old lady was funny, but don't blame her.



Author's Response:

awww so you'd grope our poor Edward in church huh?  LOL  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 4:21 AM Title: Joy Rides & Clown Masks

through tear filled eyes I applaud you for another amazing chapter.



Author's Response:

thank you so much..that was very sweet.  more to come soon!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 4:11 AM Title: Joy Rides & Clown Masks

Chris is one of a kind! Loved it!

Author's Response:

thanks!  I agree.

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 4:02 AM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

I don't know how I missed this chapter.  awesome thou.   I just love your writing.  :)



Author's Response:

I thank you!  glad you liked it.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 3:59 AM Title: Fried Ice Cream & A Cup of Tea

What a sad story. Poor Bella.



Author's Response:

that was one of the hardest chapters to write. ugh.  While trying not to be too graphic...it was a hard line to walk.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 3:48 AM Title: Cosmic Boogers & Black Eyed Peas

Our son got married at the Olympic National Park last summer. It was beautiful. His wife was a park ranger there. Spent 7 days at Lake Crescent Lodge, went to Forks, La Push, Port Angeles the whole bit. Spent another two weeks in Seattle. Took AmTrack there from Illinois. Unfortunately spent the first 6 days with food poisoning from Union Station. Would love to go back again, they just bought a house by Lake Washington, so it's a good excuse.



Author's Response:

sounds like a great trip.  Sorry that the park ranger in my story is a bad guy.  He's actually based on a jerk i know here on the East Coast...they are federal officers..I'm fairly certain that if it's a national park it's the same there too..but if not I'll just claim artistic license. lol.  I'll give you a heads up that the gang is actually going to be taking a trip on Amtrak in the near future...hmmmmm...i think you'll enjoy that, but I'll make sure no one eats at Union Station.  My sister-in-law and nieces live in Seattle...good excuse for a trip.  Thanks for reading and revieiwing!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 3:32 AM Title: Stellar Hineys & Carriage Rides

That proposal was perfect Emmett.

My husband and I were discussing Clint earlier tonight. Found it funny. Glad Charlie's happy.



Author's Response:

Clint is a national treasure. lol.  thanks!

Reviewer: msa121371 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 3:13 AM Title: Joy Rides & Clown Masks

Loved it and can't wait for prom! For sure going to vote you know how much I love this and it's companion story. Have a great rest of the week....Shannon

Author's Response:

thank  you Shannon...i appreciate your support my dear!  Anne aka Emmamama

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 3:09 AM Title: The Dude & Dirty Harry

Charlie, Charlie Charlie.



Author's Response:

Team Charlie!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 2:48 AM Title: Mercer Island & Minibars

Wow, didn't expect that.



Author's Response:

a little shocking...but in a weird way it was fun to write. lol

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 1:59 AM Title: Enchiladas & Store Bought Ta Ta's

Way to go Rose.



Author's Response:

rose is awesome.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 1:35 AM Title: Kelly Kapowski & The Cougar

Really wondering what's going on with these two.



Author's Response:

glad you're enjoying it.  THanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 1:11 AM Title: Grits & Vitamin R

I agree, he would probably enjoy it. Hope Edward won't hurt Bella.



Author's Response:

we'll know soon enough.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 12:48 AM Title: The Snowman & Midnight Mass

Gotta love Emmett. I should really think about the chapter before I review but I'm just so anxious for the next chapter. Jake hasn't been mentioned, wonder if he is somehow involved in all this. And wonder what the deal with Edward is. Flowers were really sweat.



Author's Response:

no jacob in this story.  I've actually got another story in my head for later later later...in which the jacob character will figure prominently.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 11:40 PM Title: Drunk Ironing & Snark

Guessing Bella had a close call with some guys



Author's Response:

you'll get the whole story in a few more chaps.  Thanks!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 10:21 PM Title: Armpits & Coffee Stains

Love the humor you're putting in here. It's great when I smirk and no one knows what I'm smiling about.



Author's Response:

lol.  glad you like it. Thanks!

Reviewer: 2journey Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2011 1:18 AM Title: Cosmic Boogers & Black Eyed Peas

just wanted to let you know that i downloaded this to read while going back home (since there are no cell towers and internet access) to bury my father.  This chapter in particular made me laugh so hard and the humor so welcomed after being emersed in so much pain.  Thank you for the break you allowed me.



Author's Response:

I'm terribly sorry for your loss.  I've been there myself, and know the toll it takes on your body and soul when you have to bury a parent.  I'm glad my silly story was able to help even if just to distract temporarily.  Take care, and thank you.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 11:48 AM Title: Quiet Comfort & Perfect Words

I think it is so sweet how involved Edward wants to be in the wedding plainning.



Author's Response:

he may have to turn in his man-card. lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 9:06 PM Title: Quiet Comfort & Perfect Words

I am waiting for Edward to kick Jame's ass LOL.  I cant wait for the classes to begin I think they will be a riot.



Author's Response:

just finished writing the first class...part of it is in the sneak peek on the blog.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 7:24 PM Title: Quiet Comfort & Perfect Words

I can't wait,heheheheh...

Author's Response:

soon...a couple LRMs first then back to V&V.  Thanks!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 3:41 AM Title: Quiet Comfort & Perfect Words

this chapter was needed. i loved the wedding planning.  great job.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 2:15 AM Title: Quiet Comfort & Perfect Words

wexcellent chapter, very sweet and entertaining. I was very touched by Edward asking to meet Bella's mother. And I just loved some of the talk about the wedding. I can't wait for the lessons to begin, I am sure it will be very entertaining.



Author's Response:

emmett is trying to behave.  HA!  a couple LRMs and then the next V&V will post.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Hitchy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 1:39 AM Title: Quiet Comfort & Perfect Words

I love that Edward is home.  I love tha Edward is home.  I love that Edward is home.

Did I tell you that I love that Edward is home?  LOL...

I giggle like a school girl thinking about Bella and Edward taking those classes with Emmett and Rose... 

They do need some lessons, though.  I mean, she needs to at least play with the peen a little before marriage, no? 



Author's Response:

LOL....u r killing me here!  I'm knee-deep in the next LRM right now...then we're back to V&V.  The first pre-cana lesson is almost the first thing in the chapter...then on we go from there.  Soon.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 12:13 AM Title: Quiet Comfort & Perfect Words

coming in to be with B that day was extremely wonderful of E! if only we all had an Edward... **swoon**



Author's Response:

i would lock him in my closet.  Thanks!  Glad you enjoyed that.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 9:37 PM Title: Quiet Comfort & Perfect Words

I have just caught up on the last two chapters, and I have to say I am glad that Edward returned to her when she needed him the most.  I would of actually like to see her introduce him to her, but hey them's the breaks.

As far as this chapter the only problem I have is her giving in to how many people turn up, speaking from experience, when I got married I had 125 people at my wedding, and I have to say that most of them were mine and his parents friends.  I did not want more than 50 people if I could help.  But that did not come to fruition.  I just hopes that she has the dream wedding she wants and does not do what everyone else wants.

Please after everything she has been though please make that one thing come true for her.

Also can you please tell me what chapter she explains what happens to her mum again.  I cant remember what happened and I would like to read it again.

Thank you wonderful as always.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the great review.  It remains to be seen if that enormous guest list will stand.  The name of the chapter you wanted is 'Fried Ice Cream & A Cup of Tea' it's chapter number eleven.  Thanks again!  more to come soon!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 9:09 PM Title: Quiet Comfort & Perfect Words

just curious if this story will go beyond the wedding and how Bella will adjust to being Mr. Movie Star's wife?



Author's Response:

i plan for it to extend a few months beyond August.  Also, a sequel wouldn't be out of the question....it definintely has to be a second story though..because the title would have to change!  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Mrs M Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 6:45 PM Title: Quiet Comfort & Perfect Words

I so can't wait for the classes with Emmett!!! So is James behind all the stalking? Hmm maybe he is Jeff's brother using another name? Keep it up!!

Author's Response:

the stalker will be revealed a little further down the road.  Emmett is guaranteed to be a freak.  Thanks!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 4:46 PM Title: Quiet Comfort & Perfect Words

Wow, that was INCREDIBLE!  I really loved it so much!  Amazing job, once again ;)  I cannot wait to see what happens next :)



Author's Response:

thanks!  more to come soon!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 4:09 PM Title: Quiet Comfort & Perfect Words

Yes, I'd say Edward & Bella certainly don't know what's good for them & kudos to Father Pat to standing up to them & treating them the same as everyone else. I don't think in this case special treatment would be beneficial.

Thanks for the update, I been missing it;D)



Author's Response:

i'll probably be slower with the updates until I get a new computer.  Hope everyone will be patient.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 2:45 PM Title: Quiet Comfort & Perfect Words

Loved it very much and I am so excited to see what will happen next update when you can thanks......



Author's Response:

busily working on LRM at the same time I'm writing the next V&V.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 2:24 PM Title: Quiet Comfort & Perfect Words

love my story here!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 1:03 PM Title: Quiet Comfort & Perfect Words

loved the cemetary, meeting with Esme and chris and alice.  WEll just loved the whole chapter !!!!



Author's Response:

i'm glad.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 2:00 AM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

i really am so sorry for not reviewing sooner. i just love this story. i by-passed making it a favorite because the summary did not do it justice. i am so glad that i gave it a chance... since i am caught up I am moving over to LRM. i always love Epov. Anyway, thanks so much for sharing. i look forward to more update here...and I willl try not to be so selfish and review more :-)



Author's Response:

thanks very much!  the important thing is that you still like it even after reading ten million chapters! lol.  More to come soon!

Reviewer: americamom Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 2:01 AM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

Hey Sexward, what do you want to do today? What I want to do every day Peen... To take over that girl!!!

Author's Response:

LOL....on my V&V facebook page, I told everyone that I imagined Sexward and the Peen as resembling Calvin and Hobbs...I may or may not have been drunk-facebook-posting.  lol.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: americamom Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 1:35 AM Title: Waterworks & Heartfelt Sentiments

Loved the ending. Obviously, Esme has enough love in her heart for all of her "children".

Author's Response:

Absolutely.  She's a wonderful character to write.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: americamom Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 12:51 AM Title: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears

I kinda saw the pregnancy coming over this chapter. Only because Rose did not cry over small things like she did. I am happy to see I was right!!

Author's Response:

i leave lots of little hints...interesting to see how many people actually pick up on them...lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: americamom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 10:23 PM Title: Champagne & Diamonds

I love the Bella you created. Still innocent and sweet; still aware of her shyness over Edward buying gifts for her. Yet, unlike Twilight's Bella (who to me boarded on insensitive and rude when it came to gifts) she accepts them.

Author's Response:

this bella has had a lot of things forced on her.  emmett insisted on her living in that apartment and pays the rent...she's kind of used to accepting things reluctantly.  Thanks!

Reviewer: americamom Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 8:21 PM Title: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

Swoon!!! Gordon Ramsey

Author's Response:

he's awesome!  Thanks!

Reviewer: americamom Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 7:26 PM Title: Yellow Carnations & First Class

Love love love the "do you have anything to declare" rant!!!!

Author's Response:

lol  i have fun writing drunk Bella, over-caffeinated Bella, and nervous Edward.  Thanks!

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 3:41 AM Title: Grits & Vitamin R

oh edward is a sweetheart! Go Rose!!



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it  Thanks!

Reviewer: Stellarrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 2:55 AM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

I kinda hoped Edward would make it back....and I can't wait to see those four in Pre-Cana.  I suggest a horse tranquilizer and duct tape.  It would make Emmett much more managable.

 



Author's Response:

Emmett has promised to try and control himself...yeah right.  lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 6:55 PM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

He is perfect....***sigh***
great chapter as always.....

Author's Response:

Thank you!  glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 3:10 AM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

Loved it! And what a comforting and beautiful poem Father Pat passed on to her. So great that Edward was able to meet her at the cemetary after all, too. *sigh*

 



Author's Response:

i know...edward...i sigh a lot. lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: americamom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:33 PM Title: The Southern Gentleman & Caveward

That was sexy, hot, awesome, and FUNNY!!!

Author's Response:

well...thank you very much!  Glad to know you liked it!

Reviewer: americamom Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 9:57 AM Title: Perjury & Sweet Dreams

LMAO!! I don't know what was funnier...Emmitt waking her up with a fart or his realization of her "dream"!!!

Author's Response:

poor Bella.  lol.. Thanks!

Reviewer: americamom Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:45 AM Title: Tasers & Interrogations

I love Emmit's interrigation!!!

Author's Response:

Emmett is so crazy..he haunts my dreams sometimes..lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: americamom Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2011 12:46 AM Title: Grits & Vitamin R

This story is so funny!! I love the Emmett character, yet I also am enjoying
Rose and Bella as well.  I like how you also kept is real with the Christmas sad feelings. I also like the fact that you made the characters Catholic.  You brought out the funnier side of being Catholic.  I am so happy that the story is different than I had thought by the title.  Not doom and gloom.

 

 



Author's Response:

there's some doom and gloom....but that doesn't define the story.  as with all stories it started with a What If? and carried on from there.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 11:18 PM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

LOVE THE STORY KEEP IT UP!

Waiting Patiently, Impatiently,

OH MIA MYA



Author's Response:

lol  i'm writing as fast as i can...promise!  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 9:32 PM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

As soon as I read Dr. Phuket, I started cracking up! I knew there would be jokes about a name like that :)

And Charlie is soooo cute... being the gruff granddaddy. We all know he's a big softy.

Great update!

And sorry to hear about the death of your computer. Ouch.



Author's Response:

that name is one that stuck in my brain from my college days...lol.  I knew someone that always/on purpose gave it the wrong pronunciation..lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 6:43 PM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

I had a feeling he was returning on monday. He hates when he can't be their for her and when he was working extra long hours and couldn't skype with her. I had a feeling. I am so glad they are together on this day. Bella was so funny talking about not wanting to take classes with Emmett. Those classe will be funny. I remember when we took ours. Some of the subject matters will make Bella blush especially with Emmett in the room.



Author's Response:

unfortunately my church was so small that hubs and i took ours privately with just the priest...it was kinda boring.  nothing embarrassing came up..so I'm going to have to make this stuff up as I go...lol.  ours were a million years ago too....  Thanks!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 2:33 PM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

I really wanted him to return, but it was so he could be there for this day.  i am so glad he made it.  I LOVE EPOV, but now i just want the next chappie here.   Oh I am so torn.



Author's Response:

lol.  Thanks!  glad you liked it.

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 7:56 AM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

Loved it like always and I am excited to see what will happen next update when you can thanks.....



Author's Response:

Thanks! i appreciate it.

Reviewer: queenfrizz Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 6:53 AM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

Great chapter, the Emmett and Charlie humor stoppped it from getting too emotional, still well written and entertaining, I can;t wait to see what happens next, especially now that Edward is back. I am so very glad he made it there for Bella.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  here's a sneak peek of the next chapter - http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html

Reviewer: msugurly09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 4:00 AM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

Great Chapter! I love it, can't wait for the next update. I love Emmett in this chapter, he always brings a smile to my face in this fic.



Author's Response:

thanks!  here's a sneak peek of the next chapter - http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 3:39 AM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

finally home



Author's Response:

yes, what a relief!  Thanks!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 3:10 AM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

Loved the ending.  I am glad you didn't leave us hanging.  Where it would have been a scary ending, you made it into a teary ending for me.  I love these characters.  Keep up the great job with LRM and VV.



Author's Response:

thank you so much for you very kind words.  Here's a link to the sneak peek of the next chapter - http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html

Reviewer: muccour Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 2:56 AM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

i absolutely love charlie in this story..i want him to be my dad..loved him putting the ultrasound on the fridge..was a little afraid you were going to leave a cliffy lol



Author's Response:

i was sooooo close to leaving a cliffy...you have no idea.  lol.  Here's a link to the sneak peek of the next chapter - http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html

Reviewer: read522 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 2:17 AM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

Great Chapter, thanks for the ending.



Author's Response:

glad you liked it. here's a sneak peek for the next chapter - http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 1:12 AM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

Leaving off that last line until next time would have been awful, terrible, horrible....okay, maybe not that bad...so thanks for not giving me a heart attack.  It didn't even dawn on me that Edward would show up...his not being able to talk to her on Skype just seemed a part of him trying to wrap-up his filming.  I am glad that he made it home for her.

Now, as far as your computer: There are days when I have to wonder, "and I wanted to have kids, why?" (of course the little shit(s) turn around and do something that brings tears of joy and a heart filled with love.)- I suppose you had one of those moments upon the unsuspected death of your computer where you were wondering, "why?".  I love how you are working from the culprits tho...hee hee.  Hope you quickly have one of those "awe, I love my kid" moments soon ;).



Author's Response:

the kid is still in the doghouse.  she was sorry for what she did for like 5 minutes....yeah definitely questioning my sanity for procreating at this point lol.  anyway, back to V&V...here's a link to the sneak peek for the next chapter - http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html

Reviewer: bethcullen29 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 12:09 AM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

awesome chapter

can't wait for more more more



Author's Response:

glad you like it.  Here's a link to the sneak peek of the next V&V - http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 12:09 AM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

Ah, just beautiful... the poem was lovely
...as for Fr. Pats comments on the retreat
hahahahaha can you imagine Emmett in such a setting.

Author's Response:

unfortunately, i can.  lol.   Thanks!  Here's a link to the sneak peek of the next V&V chap- http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 11:57 PM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

Thank you so happy he is back in time to spend the rest of this day with her.



Author's Response:

next chapter is written...i'm editing and will post in the next day or so.  Thanks!

Reviewer: benna Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 8:28 PM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

YAY!!!! He's back. That was perfect. I agree you waited to have him return at the most perfect time. Thanks for all your amazing updates, as usual I will be looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

thanks!  there's a sneak peek for the next chapter posted on the blog.  here's the link:  http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 7:53 PM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

Thanks for the update. There are still scary unanswered questions about those yellow carnations & mom's boding warning. 



Author's Response:

all in good time my dear.  We have lots more story ahead.  Thanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 7:42 PM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

ahh sweet Edward loves that girl. Bella focus on the future. Your mother will always be in your heart.. That is where mine is too.

Author we have been on a long journey your computer has died and been resurected.

please get us to the Edward and Bella loving. I am worrying she will not be able to do this. I am hoping I am wrong.

These two deserve happiness.

 



Author's Response:

we will get there....even if it's on an uncooperative computer !  lol  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 7:22 PM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

I was hoping Edward could make it home in time to be there for her mom's anniversary, and you did not disappoint.



Author's Response:

glad you liked it!  just finished the next chap it will post soon.  Thanks!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 6:54 PM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

So beautiful and sweet.....thank you.



Author's Response:

you are very welcome!  thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 6:53 PM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

That was a tough chapter to get through.  You laid it out perfectly for us :)

And I was HOPING Edward would show up and surprise her!

Beautiful!!!!!

 



Author's Response:

thanks very much!  it was a bit of a strange chapter...tried to have a couple of light moments to break the tension. 

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 6:35 PM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

Awwwweee!!! That was so awesome!!



Author's Response:

thanks ver much! glad you liked it

Reviewer: Hitchy Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 4:34 PM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

I love that he rushed finishing the film to be with her.  *sighs*  if only men in real life were so wonderful...



Author's Response:

no kidding...i think they'd have to be 'Stepford husbands' lol.  thanks!

Reviewer: Mrs M Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 4:33 PM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

Awww great chapter!!! Gotta love that Emmett!!!! Loved Edward's homecoming!! Keep it up!!!



Author's Response:

thanks! more to come soon!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 4:27 PM Title: Iron Man & Safely Home

Wow, that was incredible :)  I really loved it so much!  Bella is so strong!  I am sorry they have to do some of the Pre Cana classes together, hopefully Father Pat will talk with Emmett before hand about annoying Edward.  I  am sorry about your computer :*(, mine just returned to me after being in the shop for 3 days because of a virus :(



Author's Response:

Actually having the classes together will be a lot of fun...for us! lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 9:38 AM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

gotta love Karma;D)



Author's Response:

very true.  Thanks!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 2:33 AM Title: Edible Art & First Steps

great chapter, but in the mystery department I'm still mystified as I don't see it as Mr. James being her yellow carnation stalker. He seems too upfront.

Thanks for the update, I didn't realize there was a LRM, will go there after reading next chappy.:~D)

<3<3,<3



Author's Response:

Thanks!  glad you're enjoying the story...LRM is a little different.

Reviewer: benna Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 11:33 PM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

Great chapter. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 4:10 AM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

Good chapter, I love me some Skypeward, but I have to admit I am soo ready for them to tie the knot and hopefully end some of the sexual frustration :)



Author's Response:

everyone probably agrees with you...even me...but sometimes(all the time) i just get wordy...we will get there eventually.  Thanks!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2011 7:41 PM Title: Pink Chiffon & Man Skirts

cuppage, is that a golf term too?;D)



Author's Response:

LOL...you are killing me.  I need to look that up...maybe it is.  Thanks!

Reviewer: neffi1957 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2011 3:43 AM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

Loved the chapter, I almost spit my water all over the computer when I read about the bus, classic.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.  I wanted her to go out with a bang. lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: krisandrob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2011 3:32 AM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

That last bit was too funny!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

glad you enjoyed it.  It was rather fun to write too!  Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 5:22 PM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

Bella and Edward can have a private wedding at the church in Forks. Then in the afternoon they can have a bigger reception at his parents house. The not everyone needs to be invited to both. They would also get some alone time inbetween.  Bella better get ready to see his peen. It is not going to wait forever.



Author's Response:

okay..that last bit had me laughing pretty darn hard.  out loud!  ah, I'm better now.  You read my mind with the first part.  We'll have to see what happens..all I know is that I want a spot on the shuttle bus with Emmett..everyone will be partying before reaching the reception.  lol.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 12:19 PM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

that was fantastic!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  posting next LRM soon.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 11:40 AM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

I really hope Edward returns home soon.  I know you told us already but month is he due back... or how long has he still got over there, I thought he was only there for a month... seems I am wrong?

Thank you for the update, yes I agree that karma will bit you in the ass if you do something wrong.

Fiorella



Author's Response:

I just write very slowly.  Edward arrived in london on 6 april.  He proposed to Bella on 1st of May.  The last chapter 'Skypeward & Karmic Rewards' ended on 13may...so not much longer...He's due to finish filming in late may.  glad you like the story!  more to come soon.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 7:14 AM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

To funny ya me to love hearing about that bitch being ran over but one with Emmett in nothing but underware priceless LOL.



Author's Response:

glad you enjoyed it.  i enjoyed writing about her demise. lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 2:45 AM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

I love this story.



Author's Response:

thanks!  I'm glad.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 2:02 AM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

Shuttling from Seattle to Forks - wow what a commute.  love the interaction again by skyping between these two.  I also like how flirty they are getting.  Geri and the bus, made me lol.



Author's Response:

i know....I want to be on the party bus with Emmett!!  Thanks!  glad you liked it.

Reviewer: blb0157 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 1:40 AM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

I love this story but when oh when are they gong to have FUN ?

Brenda



Author's Response:

hmm..is FUN code for something?  yeah..my mind's been in the gutter all day...so i'm guessing at what you're alluding to.  the answer is Yes.  Unless Bella joins the convent or something....  no...that's not happening, so Yes.  IT will happen.  Trust me.  All good things come to those who wait.....just enjoy the ride until we get to our destination.  well eff me...i'm a philosopher...lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 12:46 AM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

Holy! This chapter was the greatest! Seriously, the whole peen rhyme was too funny. Edward's peen that I've never seen...BWAHAHAHA.... I'm going to be saying that all day tomorrow!

And you ran Geri down with Emmett's ass on the side of a bus!!! Awesome.

Great chap!



Author's Response:

okay,..but if you say it out loud, don't blame me when you get in trouble.  lol.  Glad you liked it.   Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2011 11:25 PM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

ok



Author's Response:

thanks

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2011 11:21 PM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

loved it,    karma found ngeri



Author's Response:

she needed a memorable end...  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2011 11:08 PM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

Kayso...I am so going to hell for LMAO at someone getting hit by a bus...But that shit was funny!Ü  Soooo,  the flowers may be from asstard's brother?  I find that creepier than some random stalker (if that is the case).

*double sigh* Rpatz photos from Details...Lobster and Beer never looked so good! ;)



Author's Response:

God told me it's okay to laugh..because Geri's not real...so enjoy yourself!  lol.   There will be more from the flower/stalker...that's all i'm at liberty to say.  Ah yes the photo in question has been posted on the facebook page and on the blog.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 

Reviewer: msa121371 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2011 10:47 PM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

LOVE LOVE LOVE BOTHE V&V AND LRM!!! USUALLY EVRYTIME I READ AN UPDATE I AM ON MY IPAD AND IT DOENS'T LET ME LEAVE REVIEWS FOR SOME REASON. THIS IS LONG OVER DUE!!! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT AND YES KARMA IS A BITCH!!

Author's Response:

yep...and so was Geri Chance.  lol.  Glad you like the stories...the great reviews inspire me to continue.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: hautefoodie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2011 10:26 PM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

After all the UST between these two, I certainly hope Bella's not allergic to Edward's peen!!  And I think I might be up for the cartoon fanfic you mentioned...as long as there's lots of good illustrations...hehe!

Somehow I don't think we've seen the last of Jason Dryden...or his brother for that matter.  I just hope they don't screw up the wedding!  These two need to get married so Bella can finally fu...I mean, change her last name;)



Author's Response:

u r bad.  Get your mind out of the gutter woman!  lol.  look rpatz is the one who mentioned being allergic to vagina...i just took that statement and ran with it okay.  now i've got the idea for that cartoon stuck in my stupid head...In my mind, Skypeward and the Peen look a little like Calvin and Hobbes.....  yes the peen looks like a very big cat....or a very big peen disguised as a cat.  ugh... you know i fell and hit my head a couple of weeks ago..i'm not certain that i didn't sustain brain damage.

anyway...thank you for the review...I loved it.  You all keep me writing with your great comments!

 

Reviewer: Hitchy Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2011 9:25 PM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

LOL @ Skypeward and the Peen.  It sounds like something hunterhunting would write.

So, how long until Edward comes back to the States?  I keep fogretting. 

I like E's solution for the wedding.  Can't wait!



Author's Response:

he is scheduled to finish shooting at the end of May.  But that's not definite.  I'm so glad you liked the chap.  After reading GYNAZOLE, the title would work for something written my Mrstheking also...lol.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2011 9:21 PM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

Loved it!!!  Yes, the two of them have remarkable patience!!!  However, in the big scheme of things, if they have waited this long, 3 more months will be fine and make the honeymoon that more special than it will already be!

Geri Chance got what was due to her but I'm still worried about Bella's stalker. 

Hope nothing impedes their reunion and wedding.  They both have had enough angst to last a lifetime.  Let the stalker be the idiot Mike or James, they get caught and then be done with!!

Looking forward to the next one!!



Author's Response:

i agree ...3 months is nothing....   I enjoyed writing this chapter very much, and will enjoy Edward's POV when I get to that chapter in LRM.  There will still be some drama ahead...BUT...the wedding will still happen ..this is definitely a HEA story.  Don't worry.  Thanks!

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