Date: 07 Feb 2011 9:17 PM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards
Ha ha ha ha!!! I can't think of anyone more deserving of the phrase "I hope they get hit with a bus" so I love it! As for the bus having Emmett in his undies on the side, well you just can't get better than that!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much...you totally get my humor. You may want to seek therapy ;) Glad you liked it!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 9:05 PM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards
I absolutely love this story. It has been very unpredictable, very sexy, some tears, lots of laughs....just EVERYTHING!!!! I hope that the flower sender isn't after harming Bella and more than I hope that I hope he doesn't take her v-card!!! NO RAPE PLEASE!!! I don't think Bella could recover after what she has already been thru dontcha think??? Cant wait for more!!!
Author's Response:
Let me put your mind at ease. Would I have brought our little Bella this far and let something like that happen to her? no way! It would kind of make her mom's sacrifice worthless....so no worries about that! there will be more from the flower/stalker but our girl will come out on top. big HEA ahead! (eventually) lol. Thanks so much for enjoying the story and reviewing...I literally wouldn't be inspired to type a single word without the support of folks like you!! so thank you!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 8:55 PM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards
Woohoo! The evil witch is gone! :-)
Hmm the idea with Jeffs brother is good, but I feel that another villain was sending the flowers and he might be much nearer when they know.
So yeah I will be waiting patiently (or maybe not so patiently9 where you take this story next.
Author's Response:
the flower stalker isn't done yet..... but that's all i'm going to say. Glad you liked it. THanks so much!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 8:28 PM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards
I absolutely LOVED Bella's inner discussion about Edward's peen..Damn, that was hilarious!!
I'm happy to see that despite what He said, Edward's actually getting involved into the wedding's preparations and has probably saved the day with his very clever proposition!!
I also have to agree with Tara and Joanna, She definitely has more will power than I do!!!!
And what about the psycho's brother??? I thought the flowers were from that deranged James guy.....Hum.....Mystery mystery!!
And while I'd never treat death like trivial matter.....The end of the unlucky Ms. Chance was particularly ironic and well-found....
Read you soon...;)
Author's Response:
as i've said before..it's fun playing God with this fic. Planning the end of Ms. Chance was a particularly rewarding experience. yeah baby! lol. Hey it's all make-believe. i had a great time writing the entire chapter actually. Thanks very much!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 8:02 PM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards
Wow, that was incredible :) I really loved it so much! I must say (for fear God will smite me down if I don't) that I feel bad that Geri died, but at the same time, I cannot help but wonder what would have happened if she didn't ;) I really cannot wait for them to be reunited soon :) I love Edward's idea of getting married in the morning in Forks and having the reception at his parent's house :)
Author's Response:
we can enjoy her death...she's not real after all. lol. not too much longer til E comes home. Thanks!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 7:44 PM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards
LOL, I enjoyed this chapter SO MUCH ;)
lol, That Karma... yeah.
Author's Response:
it was a fitting end for Ms Chance don't you think? I enjoyed writing it as well. Thanks!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 7:38 PM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards
Holy crow! You killed the Wicked Witch of the West! LOL! Great Chapter, can't wait for Edward to get back to his Bella.
Author's Response:
not too much longer until they're together again. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad you liked the chappy.
Date: 07 Feb 2011 7:37 PM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards
I loved this chapter!!!! I am so excited for the weddings and babies coming up!!! I HOPE you put Edward and Bellas lil ones in the story-they'll make such beautiful babies:)
Jo
Author's Response:
i know when this story will end....and for babies..I'll have to do a sequel. I will def do that if there's enough interest. Thanks very much!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 7:37 PM Title: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards
Loved it!!! Especiallly Ms. Chance getting hit by the bus w/Em's add!! That was priceless!!! keep it up!!! I'm soo hooked on this story!!
Author's Response:
great way for her to go..lol. Thanks very much!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 5:49 PM Title: Waterworks & Heartfelt Sentiments
i am looking forward to edward`s reaction, about the baby news
Author's Response:
just posted the next chap. Thanks very much!
Date: 06 Feb 2011 11:11 PM Title: Pool Tables & Revelations
Hahahahaha, Do love Charlie...
Author's Response:
Team Charlie! Thanks so much!
Date: 04 Feb 2011 3:16 PM Title: Waterworks & Heartfelt Sentiments
I just finished reading the entire story and I just wanted to say that I've loved every word of it!! Keep it up!!! I can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:
just posted more of LRM (Edward's pov of V&V) and now I'm working on the next V&V. Thanks very much!
Date: 03 Feb 2011 10:51 PM Title: Outtake: The April Fool
The best, hahahahahaah...
Author's Response:
yeah, that's one of my favorites too. Thanks!
Date: 03 Feb 2011 2:05 AM Title: Waterworks & Heartfelt Sentiments
Hi You have shown that family is unconditional thier is a bond that is made and can not be broken. with this family everyone is intwined one way or another.
And yeah I know about the bad sheep of the family it can be aweful if lose someone close to you because of it. Awesome story.
Have a great night. Smiles Leona
Can't wait for next chapter. <3
Author's Response:
thanks! I agree. Bella now had a larger family than she evern imagined. I'm glad you like the story.
Date: 01 Feb 2011 6:13 AM Title: Waterworks & Heartfelt Sentiments
Well, you were right... I teared up.
This chapter was soooo sweet! Thanks for it. My dad lost his mother (a wonderful lady I never got to meet), so when I was little he always celebrated Mother's Day by doting on my Mom. I used to think it was weird when daddy's went to see their mothers instead of doing the things like my dad did. Guess I was too young to understand. He always buys her roses, Just like Emmett did.
Thank you for making me smile :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for that. i've had a lot of feedback from people telling me how touched they were by the chap. I appreciate it very much. Next LRM just posted.
Date: 01 Feb 2011 2:07 AM Title: Waterworks & Heartfelt Sentiments
This is such a sweet story. Very happy to read it. All the bad things that happened to Bella and Edward are in the past now. They are going to be rewarded with a happy future. VIA our author!
Author's Response:
yes..not all the drama is over...but good will always outweigh the bad. thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 01 Feb 2011 12:48 AM Title: Waterworks & Heartfelt Sentiments
You made me cry at the end too.
Author's Response:
I hope it was a good cry...not a bad cry. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 01 Feb 2011 12:12 AM Title: Waterworks & Heartfelt Sentiments
Sappy is a great way to define this chapter...I loved it.
Author's Response:
I'm hearing that a lot! Thanks!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 8:57 PM Title: Waterworks & Heartfelt Sentiments
Great Chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks very much!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 5:42 PM Title: Waterworks & Heartfelt Sentiments
GREAT CHAPTER AND THE TITLE SAYS IT ALL!!!! LOOKING FORWAD TO THE NEXT UPDATE ON BOTH STORIES!!!!
Author's Response:
Thansk! next LRM will be soon.
Date: 31 Jan 2011 4:00 PM Title: Waterworks & Heartfelt Sentiments
Wow, that was incredible :) I really loved it so much! I am so happy for Rose and Emmett :) Although I do not accept Lillian's reasoning for acting the way she does, I understand it. I cannot wait to see what happens when Bella talks with Edward :)
Author's Response:
Mrs. W. is just plain nuts. Unfortunately, she's not alone in the worlds. Thanks so much! Glad you like the story.
Date: 31 Jan 2011 3:46 PM Title: Waterworks & Heartfelt Sentiments
Great as always! Col. Whitlock was perfect! Loved the "did I stutter?", etc. Sometimes people forget that appearances aren't everything. Who cares what others think as long as you believe & know the truth.
Btw - love Parma High!!
Author's Response:
I agree. Rose and Jasper had to have at least one sane parent. lol. Thanks so much!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 3:16 PM Title: Waterworks & Heartfelt Sentiments
*tries to clear eyes*
And once again, cue the waterworks!
I cried so much during this whole chapter! It was so beautiful, the good and the bad.
Author's Response:
oh my gosh...i'm sorry it made you cry. I've actually heard that from several readers now. i'm kind of amazed...and happy about it. lol. Thanks very much! glad you liked the sappy!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 1:32 PM Title: Waterworks & Heartfelt Sentiments
I am so glad that Rose and Jasper's dad finally stood up and put his wife in her place. Just because you have baggage doesn't give you the right to hurt people. Thank God for Esme for standing up and telling Lillian off. I am happy for Emmett and Rose. I just don't want to be them when they have to tell their good friend the priest. How much longer till the wedding?
Author's Response:
Father Pat's cool...that won't be a problem (it happened before Emmett promised to abstain). I agree with what you said about Mrs. W...we all know someone like her. yecchh. Em and Rose are getting married in late July...so about 2 1/2 months after this chapter. Thansk!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 1:16 PM Title: Waterworks & Heartfelt Sentiments
great
Author's Response:
thanks!
Date: 30 Jan 2011 8:40 PM Title: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears
Yeah... how many more weeks till Edward is back from England???
Author's Response:
he is finished filming in late may. Mother's day is may 9.
Date: 26 Jan 2011 3:22 PM Title: Stellar Hineys & Carriage Rides
Totally enjoyed;D)
Author's Response:
Thanks again! i appreciate that.
Date: 26 Jan 2011 2:52 PM Title: The Dude & Dirty Harry
Too cute, very cute 'meet cute'
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you like the story
Date: 25 Jan 2011 11:20 PM Title: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears
Wonderful chapter :)
Yay Rose is pregnant, can't wait to see what Emmett says.
Author's Response:
next chap is almost ready...i think you'll enjoy it! Thanks so much.
Date: 25 Jan 2011 10:01 PM Title: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears
Hi
That was amazing story so far. You have hit every emotion and more. Your a awesome writer.. I felt like I was there. all the surprize that you put into the story was awesome. I Can't wait for you next chapter. Oh Yeah I think it James that is sending Bella the Flowers. But I have a feeling too it could be Micheal from Forks. MMMMM Thank you so much.. have agreat week. Smiles Leona
Ps. Wow nice cliffhanger. I was so glade that I did not have to wait with the other chapter. it took me 2 days to read your story. and now I have to wait. :) hope feel not to long.
Author's Response:
the next chapter is almost ready. Thank you for your kind words! i appreciate them.
Date: 25 Jan 2011 9:34 PM Title: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears
awesome chapter
can't wait for more more more
Author's Response:
Thanks very much! glad you liked it.
Date: 25 Jan 2011 7:39 PM Title: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears
OMFG!!!! Great chapter. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
you are welcome! more to come soon.
Date: 25 Jan 2011 7:38 PM Title: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears
awesome chappy :)
Author's Response:
Thanks very much!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 6:00 AM Title: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears
I kinda guessed that Rose was preggers, but that was all the hints. I hope that Bella branches out and does something with Esme. She will be the only Mother she has left. This will warm the hearts of Edward, Esme and Carlisle. I also love these moments between Emmett and Bella. I think they are the perfect Bro/Sis pair. And I am so impatient. When is Edward coming home? I miss him too. Thank Emmamama for LRM!!!
Author's Response:
you are welcome! let's see...don't want to give anything away, but the next chap is all Mother's Day. It's an interesting day....not everything that happens is good...but i think you'll like it. In V&V it's May 9.....Edward finishes filming late in the month....if that helps. Thanks somuch!----Anne (aka Emmamama)
Date: 25 Jan 2011 4:46 AM Title: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears
Emmett is going to freak out LOL. It was good for Emmett and Bella to be together and talk about mothers day. Bella doent see herself clearly does she.
Author's Response:
little by little Bella will improve. The list of 10 things is a good exercise for her. The next chap is almost done...it's all mother's day. Thanks!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 2:56 AM Title: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears
Kinda suspected Rose but it's still all good!
I loved Edwards commitment bracelet. I know I'd be crying.....but that's another story!
Great job! Cannot wait for the two stories to meld!
Author's Response:
LRM is catching up.. I can't wait either. The next V&V is almost ready to go. THanks!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 1:05 AM Title: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears
the only hint for me was in this one...who wouldn't go eat cake? especially for your own wedding!
Author's Response:
lol too true! Thanks so much!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 12:53 AM Title: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears
Ya, kinda figured Rose was preggie with all the tears. I think it is great.Ü I am not looking forward to the chapter in which it is the anniversary of Renee's death...that is gonna be hard to read (probably harder to write).
Author's Response:
yes...and it's coming up soon. Thank you so much!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 11:22 PM Title: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears
Wow - you had me surprised with Rose expecting! Maybe I'm just oblivious, but I didn't see that one coming at all.
This was a big chapter...the interview was cute, and Em and Bella's Mother's Day tribute was so poignant. Such a great combination of sweet, sad and funny.
Thanks for sharing (and being Superwoman with the speedy updates)!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! Next one is almost ready to go.
Date: 24 Jan 2011 9:47 PM Title: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears
Renee sounded awesome :)
"Does your mother know what you're doing?" LOL.
I didn't get the hints until this chapter, but when I was reading it I was thinking, "I bet Rose has a little bud in her belly."
And their engagement is officially public. I wonder how Bella's popularity will hold up after this.
Great update!
Author's Response:
Thanks! yeah..i know there's a lot of stuff going on...but that's what life is really like so Bella has to deal. The next chapter is all Mother's Day.
Date: 24 Jan 2011 8:22 PM Title: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears
OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!! That was perfect!!!
So, whats the use in celibacy till the wedding now?
GO EMMETT!! :)
Eddie is so cute when he is all nervous and shit. lol
I cant wait to see what happens next!!
Author's Response:
Next chapter....emmett finds out...it will be fun. Thanks!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 7:40 PM Title: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears
I actually was thinking that but I could not remember how long they have been celebate. Rosalie has been acting weird for awhile. It get hard remembering when you go from EdwardsPOV and then back to Bella's POV. Bella needs to do something for Esme for Mother's Day since Edward is out of country and she will be her mother in law real soon. It will make her feel better.
Author's Response:
next chapter is almost complete...it is all mother's day....i think you'll enjoy it. THanks!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 6:17 PM Title: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears
good chapter, like the peek back at renee being a fun thing
Author's Response:
yeah...i toyed with the idea of making that day an outtake...but decided not to. Thanks!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 6:04 PM Title: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears
I could not stop laughing at Emmett with the stripper cake questions. That was so funny. I kinda thought that Rose was pregnant. Loved this chapter!
Author's Response:
so you caught my tiny little hints? Glad you liked it...more to come soon. Thanks!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 6:02 PM Title: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears
Emmett is such a dork, seemed like a short chapter, but keep on going I know you are working on at lease two
Author's Response:
it was a little shorter than usual. I wanted Mother's Day to being the next chap. Thanks very much!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 6:01 PM Title: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears
Wow! Happy mother's day. I think this was before their abstinence.
Author's Response:
Definitely. In the next chap we'll find out how far along she is. Thanks!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 5:54 PM Title: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears
Loved it. Emmett was so cute taking Bella out for laser tag! And I was a bit surprised with the pregnancy. Emmett's going to lose his mind. He'll be so happy!
Author's Response:
next chap should be quite fun. Thanks!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 5:50 PM Title: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears
Lol I knew for sure when she bailed on the wedding cake tasting!!
Author's Response:
See? I gave little hints. Thanks for the review!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 5:50 PM Title: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears
Wow, that was INCREDIBLE! I really loved it so much :) Yay for Rose :) I cannot wait to see what happens next ;)
Author's Response:
more to come soon. Glad you liked it!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 12:14 AM Title: Drunk Ironing & Snark
hi
I 'm reading another arthors story and she had your story has a favor it. I 'm so glade that I decided to take a look at your story. So far it is very exciting.. tense. . your a very good writer. I can easily be a fly on the wall watching them. I have a great imagition. Can't wait to finish the rest.
Sorry if I don't write reviews on the rest of the chapters. But I might sometimes and diffently at the end of the last chapter. thanks you. have a great day. Smiles Leona
Author's Response:
Thanks! Hope you continued to like the story. i update fairly often.
Date: 23 Jan 2011 5:52 AM Title: Edible Art & First Steps
Okay, the mashed potato boobs were hilarious... lopsided and all!
And OH MY GOD, it was delicious seeing Bella tell off Victor James, and her calling him an amateur was the cherry on freakin' top!
Thanks for such an awesome chapter :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked that one, i enjoyed writing it.
Date: 23 Jan 2011 4:15 AM Title: Edible Art & First Steps
Is it James stalking Bella? What a creep!
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
the flower/stalker will be revealed eventually. Thanks very much!
Date: 23 Jan 2011 4:14 AM Title: Edible Art & First Steps
I am so hooked on this story (well both actually) and can't wait for an update. (I've been spoiled being able to read straight through V&V and LRM for two days and am kinda depressed to be all caught up.) I am glad that you will be catching LRM up to V&V...it was really great to read Edward's POV right after it happened in Bella's.Ü
Author's Response:
i'm trying to get them caught up so that you'll be able to continue reading it that way...won't be too much longer. Thanks very much!
Date: 22 Jan 2011 11:54 PM Title: Panty Droppers & Belly Dances
I am a late atarter reading this...so I haven't been reviewing the earlier chapters, but I had to say that I am loving this story. I cannot wait to read LRM on the Belly Dance...hee hee.
Author's Response:
yes that will be fun...Poor Edward..lol. Thanks so much!
Date: 21 Jan 2011 6:50 PM Title: Edible Art & First Steps
I love this story! I really love the romance between Edward and Bella but also the mystery of who is trying to scare Bella.
Author's Response:
Lots will happen in the next few chaps. Mostly good..so don't worry... Thanks so much!
Date: 21 Jan 2011 5:24 AM Title: Edible Art & First Steps
cant wait to c what happens next!
Author's Response:
just posted another LRM...one more of those and then another V&V. Thanks so much!
Date: 20 Jan 2011 5:38 PM Title: Edible Art & First Steps
Been thinking this for a while, but forgot to comment: definitely thinking the mysterious flower creepo to be none other than mister Victor James. The sleazeball. Just 'listening' to him speak makes my skin crawl. ugh. He better get what's coming to him. And a sexual harassment suit against him as well. I can't believe she doesn't report him to somebody! Rose at least. She'd get him where it hurts ;)
Author's Response:
Bella should alert someone...but right now she is trying to be strong and handle things herself...instead of depending on others. Before the story is over hopefully she will learn to balance the two. Thanks very much!
Date: 20 Jan 2011 11:59 AM Title: Edible Art & First Steps
Thank you for a wonderful story - I love to see those little update messages in my in-box!
Author's Response:
Thank you too! I feel the same way about reviews!
Date: 20 Jan 2011 9:56 AM Title: Edible Art & First Steps
I think Emmett is priceless no matter what stupid shit comes out of his mouth LOL. Getting freaked out with the flower and James what a creep Bella did a great job telling him off but I dont trust him. Edward must be just freaking out so far from her.
Author's Response:
Edward is due to finish filming in England around the end of May. We left off on Friday the 7th of May...so not too much longer. Thanks very much!
Date: 20 Jan 2011 1:23 AM Title: Edible Art & First Steps
GOOD CHAPTER, GLAD SHE PUT JAMES INHIS PLACE
Author's Response:
me too...he's a pig in any incarnation. Thanks so much!
Date: 19 Jan 2011 8:51 PM Title: Edible Art & First Steps
Awesome chapter
can't wait for more more more
Author's Response:
THank you, I appreciate that!
Date: 19 Jan 2011 8:39 PM Title: Edible Art & First Steps
Good start towards help, she needs to open up :)
I am so scared to see what happens next with the issue of the flowers.
Loved this chapter! :)
Author's Response:
Bella and the therapist will move slowly. That portion of the next chap is already complete. Don't sweat the flower/stalker...it won't be resolved for a while. THanks!
Date: 19 Jan 2011 8:24 PM Title: Edible Art & First Steps
Thank you for that chapter - you just made my Wednesday evening better!
I loved, that Bella stood up for herself against James, but I am not really sure that it will make him step back?
To me, it was clear, that they would not wait too long for their wedding, but to let Bella set the date earlier was a surprise. Ohhh and Emmet....he is a pain in the ass, hopefully Bella will put him right in the next chapter, I am not sure, how long Rose will keep her calm (or at least a little bit of it)
Will you write about her talk with Dr. Miller? (SURE you will!;-)) I am very curious (did I spell that right?), what Bella will tell her first - that should be interesting.
Last but not least: You are keeping us on our toes regarding the sender of the flowers. Please don't let us wait too long for the solution, these two had enough drama, didn't they?
Either way, I will be waiting impatiently for the next chapter. Thank you for sharing your fantasy with us!
Sabs
Author's Response:
Wow! What a great review! Thank you so much. I will address each point to the best of my ability (wow sounds like i'm in court..lol). The James issue is not resolved yet...he's a jerk, obviously. The wedding actually ended up being close to the date from the books...not really on purpose..it just fit the plot that way. Emmett is a pain, but Rose secretly loves every minute of it. The part of the next chapter with Dr Miller is already complete. The flower/stalker issue won't be resolved for a while..so you can relax about it for now. remember...HEA. Thanks again...i will post soon.
Date: 19 Jan 2011 8:17 PM Title: Edible Art & First Steps
Emmett needs help. I don't think he will make it to the wedding. I think they should run off to Vegas and get married and then have the big church wedding in 2 months. This way Rose won't kill the groom.
I am proud of Bellla for standing up to James. This was a big step.
Author's Response:
Bella is improving. Emmett needs a smack...but don't let Rose fool you, she adores everything he does....no matter how embarrassing. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 19 Jan 2011 7:42 PM Title: Edible Art & First Steps
haha oh emmett, i really hope he makes it. this seems like such an important thing to him (even if he might be going a bit crazy at the moment). loved how bella stood up for herself/her relationship with edward.
Author's Response:
i like strong Bella...she's improving. Emmett...what can I say...he and Bella are spending 'quality time' together in the next chappy. Thanks!
Date: 19 Jan 2011 7:32 PM Title: Edible Art & First Steps
not wordy enough for me lol try harder. Great story can't wait for Edward to get home. Is Vicor the flower sender?
Author's Response:
from your mouth to hubs' ears. He WANTS to tell me to shut up...but doesn't dare. yeah...i have him afraid..lol. Thanks! (flower/stalker won't be revealed for a while yet). Edward finishes filming near the end of May.
Date: 19 Jan 2011 5:39 PM Title: Edible Art & First Steps
YAY! That was incredible :) I am so happy they have a date :) Will be praying for Bella, as she has one-on-one time with Emmett ;) Really hope they find out who is sending the flowers soon!
Author's Response:
it'll be a while b4 the flower/stalker deal is resolved. I'll be posting again soon! Thanks!
Date: 19 Jan 2011 5:33 PM Title: Edible Art & First Steps
Great chapter, but omg when is Edward coming back?
Author's Response:
he finishes filming around the end of May. This chapter ended on Friday the 7th of May. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 18 Jan 2011 4:42 AM Title: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge
I'm glad she's called Charlie in and isn't brushing off the flowers. I'm sure you have something creepie planned.
I love Emmett and Rosalie in your story - the idea of a bus size version of him in his undies going by Bella was a riot.
Author's Response:
there's a photo of the bus with the underwear ad, on the Blog and also on the Facebook page. Thanks so much!
Date: 18 Jan 2011 4:32 AM Title: Champagne & Diamonds
That was not only a really original proposal, but terribly sweet and romantic. I love that he didn't wait any longer and that they selected something for him as well.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it.
Date: 17 Jan 2011 7:43 PM Title: Outtake: Ode to The Arse
This was a great outtake! I loved this bit...A gift card for Outback?
Then to have them literally bump into each other, very fun little meet cute!
Author's Response:
bella stays a little obsessed with Edward's rear end. It's quite funny...she doesn't get that from me because I think butts are not attractive...unless they're attached to a cute little baby. lol. okay i'll admit that i could rethink my position if the butt was attached to Edward....maybe. Thanks!
Date: 16 Jan 2011 4:43 AM Title: Tidal Pools & Capistrano
Sometimes you just know. I talked about marrying my husband about a month into dating - it took us longer for other reasons, but I knew then and it wouldn't have changed much.
Author's Response:
i agree. I was married exactly 1 year after we met. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 15 Jan 2011 6:47 PM Title: Outtake: The He-Man Incident
Two of us peed our sleeping bags...that got me rolling!
Author's Response:
lol. Glad you liked it. Thanks!
Date: 15 Jan 2011 9:43 AM Title: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge
I SOOOOO LOVE your story!!!! Its so fun!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! i'm glad.
Date: 15 Jan 2011 6:57 AM Title: Haircuts & Pepper Spray
I've just started your stories and now I'm SO far behind on everything else I'm reading. I just can't stop reading yours. I love your Bella especially - how she is tough but so vulnerable. I like that. She lets people love her but she sticks up for herself.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much! I appreciate that. more to come soon!
Date: 14 Jan 2011 4:48 PM Title: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge
Loved her revenge and I am sure I would love the sight of Edwards butt. The cliffy though .........yeah not lovin' that so much :). I'll live I guess. Great chapter and I am so looking forward to more. Thanks for the amazing updates.
Author's Response:
the cliffy isn't a big deal...won't be resolved for quite a while. Glad you like the story. Thanks!
Date: 14 Jan 2011 4:41 PM Title: Champagne & Diamonds
i think you hit it dead on....sweet, romantic and loving....
Author's Response:
Thanks very much. I tried!
Date: 14 Jan 2011 3:59 PM Title: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights
holy hell...that was great and sooooo fitting withthe story and the characters.....great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks very much!
Date: 14 Jan 2011 3:31 PM Title: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen
this was a sweet chapter i lol at the peen discussion that is soooo....bella...and it's great that she had someone to hang out with....btw..thanks for the rec...i didn't get to read because i didn't recieve an update notice...because stupid me was so busy reading your story i never added to favorites...i know what the f was i thinking....i got ya now though......on to the next chapter..... t
Author's Response:
Thank you! i've been writing so much..my brain hurts. i've been enjoying the heck out of your story! i need to go back and review the chapters I haven't done yet. Glad you're enjoying mine too!
Date: 14 Jan 2011 3:23 PM Title: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge
Oh my, I do not think that there are words for Edward's bum. but what I am sure of now is that I am an impatient and selfish person. I would like nothing more that for you to quit your job and become a recluse just so you can write and write and write to continue this story that would hopefully never end. heheh So now that I am done being delusional, I will beg. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE hurry with the next chapter!!!! Thanks.
Author's Response:
i will try. I'm working on some LRM chaps first then back to V&V. Thank you!
Date: 14 Jan 2011 9:02 AM Title: Champagne & Diamonds
Great, great song pic! I have about 6 Van Morrison albums in my iTunes library including Avalon Sunset. Good choice :)
And yea!... they're getting married!.... Your story will soon need to be changed to "Virgouts & Villains" ;)
Author's Response:
love Van. I think that song by him ranks up there with Tupelo Honey for my favorite romantic Van songs. My favorite Van song is actually And It Stoned Me...a lot of people think that's a weird choice...but hey I never claimed to be normal. (I have brown eyes...it should be brown-eyed girl). anyway...the title..hmm ex-vigins? This story will not carry on too much longer after they are not virgins....precisely because the title won't apply any more...BUT...if anyone is interested, I would be perfectly willing to write a sequel. (I'll probably do it for myself even if no one is interested ..lol) Thanks!
Date: 14 Jan 2011 8:54 AM Title: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge
Holly crap loved the underware revenge very sweet and to funny at least he has a pare of hers that are freshly worn lol. did she think of that??? The Yellow Carnation is freaking me out I think it is James I am sure he has had his eye on her and was planing to have her for him self.???? HA HA what did they do to Emmett to make him call Rose a trolip lol. I think that an outtake would be funny just it being Emmett is enough to make it funny.
Author's Response:
I enjoyed writing the whole butt biting/underwear revenge, obviously (because i'm twisted that way) lol. We'll find out in a few chaps who's been sending the flowers. Emmett, ah what can I say. No one told Emmett to do anything except abstain from sex. Father Pat didn't even tell him to move into a separate dwelling from Rose...Emmett is just crazy and you know how he gets an idea in his head and goes all out (like needing to golf in a kilt?) he's insane...but fun! thanks
Date: 14 Jan 2011 5:46 AM Title: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge
Loved it....especially when Bella tried to sneak a peek!
The stalker is freaking me out a bit but I'm glad Bella called Charlie!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Lots of stuff ahead. Thanks!
Date: 14 Jan 2011 2:04 AM Title: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge
I really like this story the fluff is just right:) thank you for writing!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing! I appreciate it.
Date: 14 Jan 2011 1:38 AM Title: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge
Hmmm, well then I am going to ignore the last two sentences of this chapter if it is not gong to be resolved soon.
Thank you
Fiorella
Author's Response:
good idea! especially if it will drive you crazy...just forget about it for a while. THanks!
Date: 14 Jan 2011 1:08 AM Title: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge
I thought Edward was so funny. Edward wanted to be a little classy. He wanted to show the cute butt and leave the room. He knew she could not handle the real thing with how she acts at the movie version. She better grow up and soon.
Author's Response:
she hasn't seen the movie version of his butt in a long time...i probably would have bitten it. lol Thanks!
Date: 14 Jan 2011 12:56 AM Title: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge
As always loved every minute of chapter. I do have to admit the way you decided to exact revenge on Edward was pure genious! I would never have thought of that on my own. I wish I had a Rose.
I am trying to figure out who is sending the flowers. You said that it will not be "addressed" until later in the story. Is there anyway that you could throw in a hidden clue????
I love this story. Thank you for the update. I will not be mad for the cliffy if you get the next chapter out ASAP!!! :)
Author's Response:
i will try! no hints though...i just can't do it. sorry. working on a little bit of LRM..then back to V&V. Thanks so much!
Date: 14 Jan 2011 12:37 AM Title: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge
Marry those kids off. Get them in a normal life. Sleeping together on SKYPE LOL
Author's Response:
LOL. They have a Virtual Sexual Relationship..although not really...okay they have a Virtual sexually frustrated relationship. much better.. THanks!
Date: 14 Jan 2011 12:24 AM Title: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge
loved her trying to sneak a peek, and her pictures were fabulous !!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you liked it.
Date: 14 Jan 2011 12:18 AM Title: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge
Awwwww man!! Talk about a cliffie!
Author's Response:
i know. It's not a big deal though...not at the moment anyway. ohhh i'm so cryptic. lol. Thanks!
Date: 13 Jan 2011 11:10 PM Title: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge
Bella's obsession with Edwards' ass is hilarious, I love the idea that he could have shown up to work sporting a bite mark on his ass. That would be too funny.
I am almost as sad as Bella that she had to return home to the crazy paps and apparently a crazy stalker. Can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks!
Author's Response:
she likes his rear..but is afraid of his peen. Before too much longer i will have her say the line: 'i'm allergic to penis' I swear. watch for it. lol. THanks!
Date: 13 Jan 2011 10:49 PM Title: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge
Bella's revenge was perfect! I totally cracked up on Rose being compared to Jezabel, poor Emmet!! I am so trying to figure out who is sending these yellow carnations...
Author's Response:
a lot going on huh? It's going to get crazier before it gets calmer...if that helps..lol THanks!
Date: 13 Jan 2011 10:38 PM Title: Haircuts & Pepper Spray
Yo story is great. I love it, and it is making me lol soooooo much. Especially Emmett! Hilarious!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! glad you like it.
Date: 13 Jan 2011 10:01 PM Title: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge
great story, ok chapter would have liked her to actually bite his butt
Author's Response:
you and me both...ah well there's always next time. THanks!
Date: 13 Jan 2011 8:41 PM Title: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge
HA! bite marks on the perfect million dollar ass, just like J-Lo's legs and Julia Roberts' smile. Priceless pieces of art. :)
And HA!! Em called Rose a Jezebel!!! He needs to shake off his retreat weekend for a bit...
thats just creepy ;)
I want to know who these flowers are from!!!!!
I cant wait til Chief Swan gives his 2 cents on the situation with the creepy flower stalker!
Author's Response:
Charlie has a level head...but this is his little girl. He may just be loaded for bear! Thanks!
Date: 13 Jan 2011 8:35 PM Title: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge
Wow, that was amazing :) I really loved it! Bella's revenge was so amazing ;) I think an outtake of Emmett's retreat weekend would be funny. I cannot wait to see what else happens next.
Author's Response:
i'll update soon.. Working on LRM at the moment. THanks!
Date: 13 Jan 2011 8:23 PM Title: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge
no out takes if it delays the update of this I am hooked!
Author's Response:
lol. If I do one...it will be really short and won't delay anything. we'll see. Thanks!
Date: 13 Jan 2011 8:12 PM Title: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge
no crap about the cliffie here it makes one hold on to the edge of their seat and wait for the next chappy........off to work yay
Author's Response:
I'll be good and update asap...although the cliffy won't resolve for a while. THanks!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 5:03 PM Title: Haircuts & Pepper Spray
funny as shit man!! love emmett!!!
Author's Response:
he is insane..but effective! THanks!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 7:26 AM Title: Champagne & Diamonds
Awesome job with the proposal. Good to see they are getting closer to lemon-time, let's just hope for a quick engagement
Author's Response:
are we getting impatient? lol Thanks!