Date: 03 Feb 2020 4:09 AM Title: A Game
I would really love to finish this story again I love it so much
Date: 17 Mar 2019 5:55 AM Title: Adult movies
I love this story 😍 but I was wondering if you could post the rest of the story
Date: 13 Feb 2018 8:37 AM Title: A Game
I would lov to know if you have this finished anywhere and if you did publish it what author name did you use. This really was a cute story!!
Date: 14 Mar 2014 11:52 AM Title: A Game
Thank you for uploading this! I'd love if you could put it back on fanfiction.net. It's hands down my favorite story!
Date: 18 May 2011 12:37 AM Title: Rocking Car
I hope you can update more soon I love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 04 Mar 2011 8:38 PM Title: A Game
I loved the whole chapter, but I thought Bella defending Edward's man-boobs (*gasp* as if!) was adorably funny!
Date: 03 Mar 2011 5:10 PM Title: A Game
I loved the little game that they played at school. Somehow I didn't Edward would be able to go a day without swearing.
The next chapter should be really interesting.
Date: 03 Mar 2011 12:22 AM Title: A Game
These two are so cute, it's a little nauseating. But adorable nonetheless. Glad Bella's still trying. It'll get better for her, I hope.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 28 Feb 2011 4:41 PM Title: A Game
great chapter! Can't wait to see more :)
Date: 28 Feb 2011 12:09 AM Title: A Game
great story its cute and funny :) loved it!
Date: 26 Feb 2011 10:17 AM Title: A Game
She is going to get the sex thing down. That was a good exercie to get him not to cus it would of been alot funer if she could of touched lol.
Date: 26 Feb 2011 2:20 AM Title: A Game
WOWWWWW bella you gooo girl!!!
Date: 25 Feb 2011 11:01 PM Title: A Game
I loved Bella's game, even though Edward failed miserably. I also liked him waking her up because he couldn't go to the bathroom...just a thought, why didnt he rub it out? Anyways, good job and looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 25 Feb 2011 10:56 PM Title: A Game
hehehe great chappy and yes we share favorie parts of the chappy.
Date: 18 Feb 2011 5:57 AM Title: Shocking News
Hmm... I kind of wondered about whether that was Rose's problem. Rough. Personally, I hope she gives it up for adoption rather than try to keep it. They could do an open adoption, wherein the child would have some contact with her, and would probably understand why it was given up. But I've seen a lot of people ripped apart trying to care for an unplanned baby they can't support, and I don't think that's fair to the child or the parent. Just my $0.02.
I am glad Bella finally talked to Edward. She should go see a gyno though, as any woman over 18 should, especially one who is sexually active. It's a simple health thing.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 17 Feb 2011 6:12 AM Title: Shocking News
Its a good thing to have a Doctor in the family. At least Bella can feel relife that she is OK. Rose pregers suprise
Date: 17 Feb 2011 4:42 AM Title: Shocking News
look forward to each new chapter
Date: 17 Feb 2011 2:53 AM Title: Shocking News
I agree with you. Not everyone's first is the same and I can understand how Bella might feel embarrassed and insecure about everything. You are making me nervous that bad times are ahead...I hope with a sequel (espcially a wait inbetween), there will be a little of a HEA..till sequel! LOL I am excited that you are not letting these characters go, I love how much they have changed each other for the better. I can't wait to see how they end up.
Date: 17 Feb 2011 1:35 AM Title: Shocking News
I am glad Bella opened up to Edward!
Date: 17 Feb 2011 12:47 AM Title: Shocking News
Gelix-
You are right I did not see Rose and Emmett with news of a baby that's for sure. Favorite part, I think it was Edward telling Bella that she could talk to him about anything and that just seemed so endearing to me.
Okay, so we get a Sequel to this, will it be like another full story or more like MTTE with just being added on at the end of the other chapters. This has been terrific story and hope your moves goes well.....
Later BB Kathy xoxo
Date: 16 Feb 2011 10:44 PM Title: Shocking News
great chapter... can't wait till next week!
Date: 16 Feb 2011 10:03 PM Title: Shocking News
I liked it when she confided in Edward about her sex related issues. I just hope that he doesn't mention Rose's condition to anyone because it really wasn't Bella's place to say anything.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 9:58 PM Title: Shocking News
Rose is pregnant? Panicking.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 9:43 PM Title: Shocking News
I loved it. Part of me is extremely curious to know what Carlisle was thinking during his talk w/ Bella. I'm also gad that she finally confided in Edward about how she was feeling. I hope that Rosalie and Emmett can decide what the best choice for them will be concerning her pregnancy, and I'm nervous about the dread Bella seems to be feeling about the rest of the school year. I hope that everything will be okay.
My favorite part...To me it was how Rosalie wanted to confide in Bella about the pregnancy.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 9:41 PM Title: Shocking News
Favorite part...big Daddy C! He's just SO great!
Date: 10 Feb 2011 2:10 PM Title: Give and Take
Not really what I was expecting for their first time. I was one of the lucky ones and didn't feel any pain the first time I had sex so I have a very hard time understanding the pain aspect. Thanks for the chapter!
Date: 10 Feb 2011 6:02 AM Title: Give and Take
I just love how gentle Edward was being for her. Considering the way he used to be with her. It's a turn on. He's so sweet.
E/k
Date: 10 Feb 2011 4:44 AM Title: Give and Take
Great Chapter Gelix - you do not disappoint! Love the story and Love how caring Edward is becoming more and more with Bella. Bella I hope is over reacting and not something else like a cyst or something.
Anyway, kind of curious as to what Rose keeps calling Bella for.... should be interesting...
Well till the 16th then.. Have a good week and weekend.
Later Kathy xoxo
Date: 10 Feb 2011 1:33 AM Title: Give and Take
I loved the chapter.
Great job:)
Date: 10 Feb 2011 1:07 AM Title: Give and Take
Governments have the strangest rules don't they?.. well, good luck on the internship. Hope they don't work you too hard. And you are correct about each girl being different. My first time (with my hubs btw) was not too bad from what i remember,, but that was about 30 years ago so my memory is a bit rusty cause I am old ya know.. One of my grandmothers said it was awful and always was and that if she had her way all men would be castrated..lol... hopefully it was not that bad for Bella.. your story made it vaery sweet for them. I am vaery curious about the Bella/Carlisle conversations though.. Pam B.
Date: 09 Feb 2011 11:41 PM Title: Give and Take
Congrats on creating one of the most realistically written first times!!! Most fan fics are not realistic at all when it comes to a female giving away her virginity, and I appreciated the fact that you kept it real in this chapter. I don't think Bella is overreacting but I do think that it's weird to ask Carlisle about it when she can make an appointment to see an GYN...I wouldn't talk to my man's father about those type of intimate details, even if he was an M.D. That's just...weird.
Date: 09 Feb 2011 11:17 PM Title: Give and Take
ouch not fun great chappy btw. yeah my friend said it hurt so bad fr her she made him stop and 12 years later she has yet to try again. I guess i was lucky i was an active kid swimming horeseback riding iceskating so it didn't really hurt
Date: 09 Feb 2011 11:12 PM Title: Give and Take
Oh boy. I get that she's embarrassed to talk to Edward about this kinda stuff, but she really should get over it. He'll most likely over-react because she tries to keep him from feeling bad.
Date: 09 Feb 2011 10:15 PM Title: Give and Take
ok first the quote was ""You have such sweet pillow talk, baby" from Armageddon
Great chapter... Can't wait to see more, and the conversation with Carlisle! :)
Have a good week!
-Kate
Date: 05 Feb 2011 7:47 AM Title: Camping
Wow what a camping trip ;) I am glad they didnt go all the way there they need to be alone when that happens.
Date: 04 Feb 2011 2:38 AM Title: Camping
ok quick things about MTTE keep all chappy files on your puter and if publishing pull the fan fic those who love it will understand that you are doing a org fic publish and let me know when it is published so i can buy a copy :)
Date: 03 Feb 2011 7:28 PM Title: Camping
wow!!! I am loving this story!! Can't wait to see more :)
Date: 03 Feb 2011 1:47 PM Title: Camping
Very sweet. I love camping trips! But I have to agree with Edward, not the place you want for your first time.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 03 Feb 2011 7:13 AM Title: Camping
What an awesome camping trip. Favorite line of this chapter was dick-flavored popsicle, lmao. I think the quote in the chapter is from my favorite actor Ryan Reynolds in Blade 3: "Fuck me sideways"
Date: 03 Feb 2011 4:30 AM Title: Camping
I love this story and cant wait until wed. this was a great chapter
Date: 03 Feb 2011 4:00 AM Title: Camping
i would have to say that my favorite part was when bella opened her eyes and got an eye full of edward penis, why can't that kind of stuff happen to me..lol :)
Date: 03 Feb 2011 3:56 AM Title: Camping
I loved the awkward lap dance Bella had to give Edward.
I really liked that chapter and was not too surprised to find out that Carlisle found Edward sleeping w/ Bella in the guest bedroom. Now we just have to wait for them to get caught on a night that they've snuck into each other's rooms.
It should be intersting to see how the next couple of chapters go. Will Bella go to the doctor and get put on the pill or will they use a condom for their first time. It should be interesting to find out.
Great chapter.
Date: 03 Feb 2011 3:28 AM Title: Camping
Gelix -
So excited for your wonderful news, so much going on all positive. Fantastic! Oh BTW you do NOT use the F word too much for this Edward.. That is who he is! There are tons and tons of other FanFics out there where he uses alot more severe, and foul language than your stories do. Again, this is YOUR story not SM, your rating is NC-17 not T. Very excited about your Married to the Enemy news, wouldn't that just be incredible if it is published...
I loved them cuddling @ the fire too, however, I really liked the part where she went down to the water to only discover they were as naked as the day they were born, then Emmett left, she opens her eyes to him standing right in front of her face with his God like features in full view. That was pretty funny...
Loved the whole chapter, ready for more and ready for your new story as well!!!
Best of luck!!!
Later BB Kathy xoxo
Date: 03 Feb 2011 3:06 AM Title: Camping
i loved the lap dance...post soon
Date: 03 Feb 2011 2:47 AM Title: Camping
Don't worry about a hate review.. go with the majority and you know the majority loves your story(stories) so just let it roll. Congrats on getting into college. Awesome. Best of luck with the publishing company and manuscript.. The naivety of Bella is adorble.. i like that Edward explains things to her and doesn't make fun when she doesn't know or understand. I can relate.. i had never been with anyone before my hubs.. trial and error can be a fun thing..(being with one another now for over 30 years has been a good learning curve i think..). thanks for posting ..loved it as always...
Date: 03 Feb 2011 1:09 AM Title: Camping
Awesome! Edward is cute. A little hormonal but cute.
Date: 03 Feb 2011 12:43 AM Title: Camping
Mine was the part where he told her she could open her eyes! lol
Date: 03 Feb 2011 12:25 AM Title: Camping
Great chapter! Favorite part...her doing the lap dance! Funny shit!
Date: 02 Feb 2011 11:00 PM Title: Camping
My favorite part was Bella getting a "peak" of the boys skinny dipping!!!! LOL! I love Emmett & Possessiveward!!!! :)
Date: 28 Jan 2011 4:16 AM Title: Fighting
I liked the I love you's too!
Date: 27 Jan 2011 7:20 AM Title: Fighting
I love these two.. (big smiles)
E/k
Author's Response:
Thank you! :D
xx
Gelix
Date: 27 Jan 2011 4:51 AM Title: Fighting
Wow, who would believe this Edward is the same manwhore from just a few weeks prior. He's too sweet.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Yeah, go figure. He's changing even if he doesn't know it! ;)
xx
Gelix
Date: 27 Jan 2011 3:25 AM Title: Fighting
Gelix -
You ask an impossible question, "What's your favorite part?" The whole thing was my favorite with the exception of maybe the shopping trip yeah, that could have been shorter, I love my B & E time like they are getting the last part of the story. She needs to over come her fear of his tongue on her precious lady bits, she will be in for a Big Surprise.
Your the best, can't wait till next week. Take care have a good remainder of the and a fantabulous weekend.
Laters Kathy xoxoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! :D
xx
Gelix
Date: 27 Jan 2011 1:48 AM Title: Fighting
wow edward is changing so much, i love it but i also like that he is still very assertive and a litttle possesive. I also see that Bella is getting to the lemons slowly but surely!!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah, he is really changing. They both are ^^
xx
Gelix
Date: 27 Jan 2011 12:28 AM Title: Fighting
The whole thing was my fav. I think James needed his ass kick but I dont think it will stop him. I love the way she said that his sperm was on her that was all to funny.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :D
xx
Gelix
Date: 26 Jan 2011 9:40 PM Title: Fighting
ahww! I´m loving it!
Great chapter!
xxxLiss
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 26 Jan 2011 8:21 PM Title: Fighting
I can't decide which part I like the most. I just really liked the chapter as a whole. I hope James doesn't continue to be a problem, if he does, I hope Bella is able to take care of him herself.
Loved the chapter & I absolutely love the story.
Author's Response:
Thank you! And we'll see about James... ^^
xx
Gelix
Date: 26 Jan 2011 7:34 PM Title: Fighting
Sweet ending! I love a possessive Edward. :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love him, too! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 21 Jan 2011 1:39 AM Title: Adult movies
the advantage to being old, is I can watch porn if i want... I am in my fifties, think it's still going to corrupt me or something?? (too late!!)I was going to say the hubs and I don't watch porn in secrecy, but truth is, my mother in law lives with us so we have to be careful.. we just minimize it on the laptop if she walks in the same room..truth be told though, I much prefer to read porn than watch it. At times just seems to much fakery added. So Edward made it to second base? or would that be almost 3rd. Is it 3rd if he got to touch her hooha? lol.. anyway.. thanks for the post.. and yes I too loved the part with the talented fingers... laters.. Pam B.
Date: 20 Jan 2011 6:25 AM Title: Adult movies
Poor Edward is the first to say it. I just know it. With Bella's big "O" revelation, will she begin to develop a more open personality? What will Edward do with Bella's thank you? Totally lovin this fic man! See you soon
E/k
Date: 20 Jan 2011 4:05 AM Title: Adult movies
Gelix -
I never get tired of telling you my favorite parts of the Chapter!!! My favorite part was when he told her that Porn was really the right kind of research and then when she asked him about his sexual experiences and he admitted to her Yes, indeed he had tried it, but then felt slighty embarrassed over it. That just tells me that he is truly invested in her. Oh Hello, when he asked her if she wanted him to help her, and she wasn't really sure that she understood that she was excited... That was my favorite parts, WELL ASIDE from him bringing her to her first "O" of course... Yes I would have to say pretty much the hum....WHOLE ENTIRE CHAPTER!!!!
Till next update and thanks for the frequent updates BTW I appreciate it.
Laters BB
Kathy xoxo
Date: 20 Jan 2011 3:01 AM Title: Adult movies
Hmm... I rather think it may have been Bella who said "Thank you" to Edward's "I love you." That's just how I see those two. But boy if that's not going to make for an awkward morning!
BTW, I watch porn all the time! And I have a live-in boyfriend too. Pron is fun, but not where Bella should go for any kind of realistic education. Porn is kabuki sex, all nice and clean and dramatized and fake. Real sex is silly, and sometimes awkward, and messy and fun, as I'm sure you know. I am really glad she's not wanting to do it on prom night though. So cliche!
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 20 Jan 2011 3:00 AM Title: Adult movies
SQUEE! I loved this chapter! Favorite part was when Edward comforted her in the night. It shows how they really need and help each other. I think Jacob would be happy they are there for each other! AWESOME chapter!
Date: 20 Jan 2011 12:26 AM Title: Adult movies
Sorry my favorite part was Bella caught watchin porn!!! Great stuff!
Date: 20 Jan 2011 12:23 AM Title: Adult movies
hahahaha
whoever said thank you deserve an ass beaten.
hmm..i think Bella said thank you. I glad when i say i love you to my boyfriend...he said it back not thank. lmaoo. he would have a size 9 footprint on his ass. hahahaha
love it!!!! Cant wait for nxt week!!
i watch porn sometimes too. i think its educational. haha
Date: 19 Jan 2011 11:26 PM Title: Adult movies
I love all of Edward parts but I think my fav is that Bella is getting more proactive with Edward and of course she was watching porn LOL. I think he said I love you and she thanked him because she is polite.
Date: 19 Jan 2011 10:07 PM Title: Adult movies
Love the chapter my favorite part was Bella getting caught watching porn. Its hard to believe that Bella is 18 she acts so much younger. cant wait to find out who said I love you. It was kinda funny when I got to the end of the story it reminded me of me and my husband when we got together he said he loved me first i didnt know what to say so I said thank you anyway love the story
Date: 19 Jan 2011 10:04 PM Title: Adult movies
YEYYYY it's getting hotter and hotter by thre chapter. I can't believe Edward has changed so much, but I am glad!!!
Date: 19 Jan 2011 8:53 PM Title: Adult movies
I loved this chapter! I enjoyed the lemon the most because it showed that Edward is different with Bella. He put her first, which he never did before. I think it's so sweet that he's not rushing her but he's willing to slowly initiate her in the art of love!
I can't wait to find out who said "thank you" to "I love you! That's such a let down! I would feel terrible if someone said "thanks" after I made an admisssion like that.
You're a great writer and I am eagerly awaiting next week.
Hope your new job is going well.
Date: 19 Jan 2011 8:46 PM Title: Adult movies
I liked how Edward walked in on Bella watching porn and how he was able to educate her in the ways of her body was good. I really did enjoy it and cant wait to see what happens next.
Is your quote this week from tghe Gilmore Girls with the whole "I love you." and "Thank you." thing? Cant wait for next week?
Date: 19 Jan 2011 8:11 PM Title: Adult movies
Awesome chappy...yeah i have to say besides his talented fingers Edward catching Bella watching porn. Watch porn...yeah in secret? only when it is girl on girl my guy knows I am bi but you know don't wanna give him any ideas.
Date: 19 Jan 2011 7:44 PM Title: Adult movies
Edward catching Bella watching porn. Funny!
Date: 19 Jan 2011 7:38 PM Title: Adult movies
Loved the chapter and can't even imagine who said each of those lines. I thought it was really funny when Edward got to Bella's and could hear her watching porn.
I'm excited to read the next chapter.
Date: 14 Jan 2011 11:13 PM Title: Riding a bike
Very Cute. I love him teaching her to ride the bike and never letting go until she told him to. Adorable.
BTW, the quote this week is a variation on Sweet Home Alabama: "Why do you want me to be your girlfriend?"
"So I can kiss you anytime I want,"
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 13 Jan 2011 2:35 PM Title: Riding a bike
Okay, the quote is from Sweet Home Alabama. I cannot wait for some citrusy fun.
Date: 13 Jan 2011 6:02 AM Title: Riding a bike
Another great chap. I agree with you the part where Edward ask the "big" question is the best part. Followed closely by the kiss to make it all better. lol
E/k
Date: 13 Jan 2011 5:28 AM Title: Riding a bike
Sorry you are having a bad few days, I love this chapter
Date: 13 Jan 2011 3:01 AM Title: Riding a bike
So I just love the direction this is taking. Edward is really changing and that is awesome. I can not WAIT for lemonade...wink, wink. LOL Finally they are a couple!
Date: 13 Jan 2011 2:39 AM Title: Riding a bike
Ohhhhh that was nice that he kissed it to make it better!!!!!lol. I think he should have kissed more to make it better faster!!!
Date: 13 Jan 2011 2:37 AM Title: Riding a bike
So...after all this time I finally got one....Sweet Home Alabama! Yay me! Favorite part was when he asked her if he should get down on one knee. Great chapter! See ya next week babe!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 9:55 PM Title: Riding a bike
I got the quote from "sweet home alabama", and Edward checking out her bruising and kissing it better, with not turning it into sexual, was very sweet. I love this story can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 12 Jan 2011 9:51 PM Title: Rocking Car
This chapter is so Sweet! :D is the quote from Sweet Home Alabama?
Date: 12 Jan 2011 9:40 PM Title: Riding a bike
I know, never cycle on a man´s bike! And I´m a Dutchie so I know about that, right? (we Dutch are experts on bikes! Hell, there are more bikes than people in our country!) Always go for a girl bike, they're way better!
I sometimes get butterflies! Depends if the story is well written and whether I'm totally in it =)
Can't wait untill next week!
xxxLiss
Date: 12 Jan 2011 9:11 PM Title: Riding a bike
Awesome chapter. I loved it all, but I loved how he left school during lunch to check on her. Then to offer to look at her injured area with out getting all "teenage boy" on her. That could have totally gone in another direction if he had acted like an overly horny teenager.
Date: 10 Jan 2011 4:54 AM Title: Rocking Car
I love your stories, just got through reading married to the Enemy, and I love this story can't wait for a new chapter!
Date: 07 Jan 2011 4:29 AM Title: Back to reality
awwwwww!!!!
Date: 07 Jan 2011 1:50 AM Title: Driving Lessons
awwwww Eddie is so catching feelings
Date: 06 Jan 2011 10:48 PM Title: Life from a new perspective
ooooooh i can see where this is going...
Date: 06 Jan 2011 3:41 PM Title: Rocking Car
I didn`t read your biography until now. And I`m delighted. Eclipse is my favourite part of Twilight series, too. Also like to peak to the end of stories (you`re right, why bother).
Most of all... so you red Wide awake (I absolutly adore that story). I saw some similarities between your story and mentioned. I was literaly sick during reading Wide awake, because they are so damadged, too much young for that kind of expirience. What Edward did for Bella in the gym was absolute perfection. Anyway, this is not rewiev for Wide awake. I want to say that your sroty is similar but distinctive in its own way. Just what reader expect of fan fiction. I just love your main caracters. Also, the way you develope yore story. Please, don`t stop. Write it to the end.
Oh, and I also hate internet language.
Date: 06 Jan 2011 5:45 AM Title: The Party
OMFG!!!!!!
Date: 06 Jan 2011 5:06 AM Title: Rumors vs Truth
You have nothing to worry about, the chapter is great. Thank You
Date: 06 Jan 2011 2:45 AM Title: Rumors vs Truth
I love that they are FINALLY a couple but haven't changed who they are...I am loving where this is going!
Date: 06 Jan 2011 2:36 AM Title: Rumors vs Truth
Favorite part...the announcement at lunch! That totally rocks!
Date: 06 Jan 2011 2:27 AM Title: Rumors vs Truth
that would have been embarassing about the condom.. but she has a point if it's gonna be a while..... i see him wearing her reserve down though after a bit.. school was a pain for them.... i am glad im old so i don't have to deal with high school shit anymore.. even my kids are out of high school... so no more!!!.. but i think it would be fun for Bella to beat the shit out of lauren...
thanks for posting... wonder how long before they get caught by the parents...
laters.. Pam b.
Date: 06 Jan 2011 2:01 AM Title: Rumors vs Truth
I liked the whole chapter in general. You did a really good job writing it, and I don't know if this is right, but you did have a quote from A Walk to Remember (People will see....or maybe it was can see). Well anyways, looking forward to next Wednesday
Date: 06 Jan 2011 1:29 AM Title: Rumors vs Truth
awwww the was so sweet. I loved how he said that he would always find a way. TY for updating. can't wait to see how the relationship progresses!
Date: 06 Jan 2011 12:37 AM Title: Rocking Car
WOW Edward is a royal jackass.
Date: 05 Jan 2011 11:02 PM Title: Rumors vs Truth
I loved that chapter. I am so glad she told Lauran off.
Date: 05 Jan 2011 10:01 PM Title: Rumors vs Truth
Cute first date for these two. Nice that Bella can see that her Edward is different than how he was before.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 05 Jan 2011 9:52 PM Title: Rumors vs Truth
I loved every minute of it there so cute together....post soon