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Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2023 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 3

I'm going to assume that pregnancy prevention steps were taken?

Reviewer: KeraAtchley28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2018 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: Salanna Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2018 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 34

What about all the other men who raped Bella, and the so called doctor who performed the operation, has the police tried to find them?

Reviewer: Salanna Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2018 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 25

So the judge wasn't all that irresponsible, good that someone keeps a level head.

Reviewer: Salanna Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2018 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 15

As I said earlier, she's in no shape or form to attend school, not to mention the fact she is 6 years behind everyone else. What school would accept a severely traumatized 17 year old with the educational level of a 12 year old?

Reviewer: Salanna Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2018 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 5

If she was taken at the age of 12 there's no chance she could score high enough to take senior year, who would have taught her - the kidnapper? Don't think so. Further the judge was irresponsible releasing her without a court order to have psychiatric assessment and care before returning to school.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2018 3:15 PM Title: Epilogue

amazing

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2017 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 3

Poor Bella! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2017 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it!  Poor Bella! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2017 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!  Poor girl! 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2016 4:52 AM Title: Epilogue

Really a great story!  Thanks for sharing with us. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2016 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 48

That was a delightful escape from the angst and a great reconnecting for Bella and Charlie. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2016 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 47

Bella is definitely wise beyond her years. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2016 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 46

That was a great chapter. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2016 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 45

It was good of Bella to stand up for Lauren and Jessica. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2016 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 43

Another great chapter. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2016 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 42

So, they finally showed their true colors. What hateful people!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2016 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 41

I'm glad she gets to confront those horrible men!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2016 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 40

Wow, the parents really did a number on these poor kids. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2015 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 39

That was a couple of eventful chapters. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2015 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 37

Very intense!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2015 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 36

Soooooo, the plot thickens. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2015 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 35

Wow,  didn't want to stop there. Glad I don't have to wait for an update. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2015 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 34

Love that she was able to stand up to Mike and his cronies. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 33

Great chapter!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2015 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 32

Wow, wasn't expecting that they were involved with her abduction and for them to not tell anyone is all kinds of sick. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2015 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 30

I thought Garrett had already told Bella that Peter was watching her for him. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2015 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 29

I'm really glad I don't have to wait for updates. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2015 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 28

That had to help both of them. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2015 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 27

So glad they called Edward to come be with her when she goes into the room! 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 26

How horrible that she can't even play piano anymore. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2015 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 25

How very observant Garrett is. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2015 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 24

Such a great job giving us the details of Bella's horrible trial. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2015 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 23

Wow, they have all been terribly abused. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2015 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 22

She didn't handle that very well, but if anyone has the right to be angry, it would be Bella. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2015 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 21

I don't think Bella is going to understand. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2015 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 20

What a horrible thing for that teacher to do to her. 

Reviewer: kopec82 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2015 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 19

Its stupid, wrong and irresponsible to let a really hurt girl go to school It doesn't make sense I'm going to stop reading 



Author's Response:

Probably a good idea to stop reading. I do appreciate you taking the time to at least attempt my story.

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 19

What happened to Jasper and Rose's parents not wanting their children around Bella?

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 18

These kids are remarkable. It's great that they are so supportive of Bella. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 17

I'm guessing that Rose and Jasper aren't going to react well to their parents determination to keep them away from Bella. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2015 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 16

How horrible for Bella to have to endure that after everything else she has been through. I'm so sad u had to remove ur stories from FanFiction, but am so very grateful that they are still available on TWCS. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2015 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 15

I'm glad Bella had the idea. Can't wait to see how Emmett does in the kitchen. LOL

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2015 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 14

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2015 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 13

That was a touch chapter to read. Poor kid. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2015 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 12

It was great to hear from Edward. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 11

I was reading this on Fanfiction.net, but it disappeared between chapters. Anyway, I'm glad it is over here so I can finish this wonderful story. What a horrible thing to happen to Bella, especially the hysterectomy. I hope they're able to find some of the other men involved in violating her. 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 38

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 37

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 36

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 35

Excellent!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 34

Great!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 33

Amazing!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 32

Amazing 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 31

Excellent 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 29

Awesome 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 28

Great 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 27

Fantastic 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 26

She's amazing 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 25

Excellent 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 24

Uh-oh 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 22

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 21

Great 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 20

Uh-oh! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 19

Go Bella!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 18

They are amazing 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 17

Wow

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 16

Amazing 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 15

Wonderful 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 14

Awesome 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 13

Fantabulous 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it 

 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 11

She is such a strong person 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 10

Fantastic 

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 9

Excellent!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 8

Emmett is an amazing brother!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 7

Poor Bella!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 6

Amazing!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 5

Great!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 4

Fantastic!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 2

Amazing!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2015 10:07 PM Title: Epilogue

very emotional story ;) thanks so much for sharing it on here with us ;D

Reviewer: chrisbraddy Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2014 3:00 PM Title: Epilogue

WOW!!!!!!!!  That waa a very powerful story!!!!  Thank you for writing and sharing with us....  I cried, I launghed and It really made me think about thing that happen in the real world.  I am so glad that Bella has the people in her life that she did....  I really have no words... This was a hard story to get through because it was so sad and I cried so much but this is one of new favorite stories!  Thank you

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 2:17 AM Title: Epilogue

Thank you for an emotional, inspiring and touching story!! I don't know how you wrote this with such detail, but u did a fantastic job!!! Thx!
:)

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 36

Wow! Wasn't expecting that!!! :o I'm glad Bella will finally have a chance to see someone pay for all the suffering she endured!!! :)
Thx!!!

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2013 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 7

Wow! I don't know how you are writing all this! You are so descriptive. I truly hope it isn't bc you have lived this. No one should have to endure this and I'm glad that worthless piece of shit scum died!!! Of course him getting beaten and raped and then stabbed to death in prison would have been somewhat of a pay back. :)
You really know how to evoke so many emotions!!!
Thx!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2013 9:02 AM Title: Epilogue

Just completed reading this story, and I have to say I'm a hard person to make shed a tear, but this story had my heart wrenched. Even though it's a tragic story, it's written perfectly.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2013 11:50 PM Title: Epilogue

Wow! That was a really gut wrenching story. I'm glad they allude it through in the end. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2013 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 44

OMG. I almost peed myself reading about the 'pancakes'. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2013 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 32

They are so much nicer then me. If someone did to my daughter what they did I would of pushed to have them charged with assault. They were to little to be charged with withholding evidence and hindering a police investigation, but they knew better when they physically hurt Bella. I wouldn't want them to go to jail. But community service and a nice black mark on their record is exactly what they deserve.  

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2013 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 22

So much anger! I'm glad she is finally going to be able to get it out. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2013 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 17

I understand the need to want to protect your children but there is no excuse for what will and cat are going to do. I see world war 3 in the near future. I would take them to court and have their parental rights terminated. . 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2013 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 5

I can't wait for Rosalie and Alice to find out what Jessica and lauren did. They will defently mess them up. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2013 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 3

Carlisle is right it is amazing that she let anyone near her at all. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2013 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

I have read so many of your stories but completely missed this one. What a powerful first chapter. 

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2013 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 35

My heart just dropped into my stomach...

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