Date: 20 Jan 2012 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 10
It was really good to see Bella being so carefree. I was a little worried when Edward took off running after her. I was afraid that she would have a flashback. I am glad that she is ready to take that step with Edward. I am not sure Charlie is crazy about Bella and Edward getting together. I don't think he is ready to let his little girl go when he just got her back.
Date: 20 Jan 2012 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 9
Glad to see Bella talking to Charlie and not being nervous. Loved the end of this chapter. I hope this means that she is starting to heal.
Date: 20 Jan 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 8
I fell so sorry for Emmett. This has got to be so hard on him too. Charlie and Renee, too. Why does Bella call them Charlise and Renne and not mom and dad?
Author's Response:
After being gone for so long, it's hard for her to associate them with being her mom and dad.
Date: 20 Jan 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
It is going to be a long recovery for Bella.
Date: 20 Jan 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
I am glad that Bella seem to have a good time shopping.
Date: 20 Jan 2012 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
OMGosh!!!! She has been throught soooooo much and then those bitches are going to come up and be ugly to her, REALLY!!!!! Boy they have some nerve.
Date: 20 Jan 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
Thanks for answwering my questions in my reviews. Wow, 12 years old, that is awful young to go through what she did. It is awful no matter what age. I have been meaning to asking, Bella was brought home after two months of being found. Where was she for two months? What happened to the person that kidnapped her?
Author's Response:
She was in the hospital. they had to rebuild her immune system and make sure she was strong enough to go home first. As for what happend to the person who took her, it too will be answered:)
Date: 20 Jan 2012 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
Who took Bella? and how? How old are the kids? I know they were all born on the same day but how old?
Author's Response:
Who took her will be revealed later. The kids are 18 now, and were 11 almost 12 when she was taken :)
Date: 20 Jan 2012 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait to read more of this story.
Date: 20 Jan 2012 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds like Bella has been through hell. What in the world has happened to her.
Date: 11 Dec 2011 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 28
SHE WENT THROUGH SO MUCH TO GET TO THIS POINT I'M GLAD SHE GOT THERE AND I'M REALLY GLAD EDWARD STILL LOVES HER SO MUCH
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2011 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 3
oups!
heureusement que j'ai vérifié, je croyais que....
mais vous êtes le même auteur que sur fanfiction, lol. c'est vous qui avez écrit cette merveilleuse histoire!
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 11:24 PM Title: Epilogue
It was an amazing journey thank you for sharing it with me
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 45
a great story
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 43
glad she was able to handle it without trauma
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 42
yes I was surprised
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 37
well at least they found one of the rapist can you find a few more
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 34
Bella should become a shrink for troubled kids herself just like Garrett and Kate
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 33
seems like Bella is now helping everyone else heal
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 32
they were kids too at the time and obviously have their share of guilt even though they handled it badly
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 29
She is making a brave new world for herself and I hope she kicks Laurens and Jessicas skaky butts
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 28
I thought you did an awesome some and the Edward character you have created was perfect
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 27
this will be scary
this story deserves so many more readers
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 25
Garrett is definately a good guy
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 23
sounds like she will get the help she needs
this is an excellent story
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 21
finally some help for them
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 20
she needs someone to give her a break, what is wrong with the people of Forks
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2011 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
liked it, unlike so many others you made a different POV something new and just not a complete rewrite in order to buy time
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2011 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 8
damn the hysterectomy means a doctor had to be involved too
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2011 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 7
poor Bella
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
as parents they are probably terrified to let her out of sight and what about the other men who used her?
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2011 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 5
sad, and so many people feel guilty
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2011 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
scary that things like this actually happen
Date: 29 Mar 2011 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 32
Yeah, he would have gotten Bella eventually but they knew who had her. They could have helped her be rescued. Bella let it go way to easily and jumped to help them. She would have been 100% justified to her anger and Garrett would have been an asshole for trying to push her to forgive them or try to point out their cutting issues to make her feel guilty.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 12:24 PM Title: Epilogue
full circle for them all especially bella.
thank you for sharing your story
suzie :)
Date: 15 Mar 2011 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 49
that was so sweet!
Date: 15 Mar 2011 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 48
looks like em will have to share the jeep after all.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 47
thatwent well. angela has to deal with her shit.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 46
the big school meeting should be fun
Date: 15 Mar 2011 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 45
i knew bella would stand up for them
Date: 15 Mar 2011 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 44
loved the pancakes! heehee!
Date: 15 Mar 2011 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 43
it was sweet and just right for bella and eddie.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 42
wow that is a lot of bottled up hatred!
Date: 15 Mar 2011 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 41
poor bella it is just one blow after another for the poor girl
Date: 15 Mar 2011 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 40
so the bitchiness and fear ran alot deeper than i thought with will and cat. i hope they can pull their heads out their asses long enough to see the trueth.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 39
it has to be hard for both of them to know what has to be done and know what could be done but be to affraid to reach for it.balla is gonna take on tia's case and help her through it.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 38
wow tia is a bitch, kinda reminds me of bella. heehee, bet they will end up great friends.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 37
and another uphill battle for the group...
Date: 15 Mar 2011 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 36
holy shit! small world?
Date: 15 Mar 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 35
ok maybe it is just cause i am dirt assed poor but where are they getting the money for all of this? what 18 year old has money for emergency trips for 6 to brazil with 2 stops in chicago? nice that bella, garrett ad kate are coming full circle though.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 34
time for them all to do it on their own.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 33
a lot of good progress here.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 32
ok anothe rfucked up twist in the road.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 31
yes but fun where bella gets to speak up and throw down if needed.
Date: 14 Mar 2011 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 30
well a little back sliding is to be expected, right.
Date: 14 Mar 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 29
she is home and now it is time to start putting her life back in order.
Date: 14 Mar 2011 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 28
i get where you're coming from with the intemacy but it still seemed like too much too soon for them both. i am glad bella and eddie got to say their piece in the room.
Date: 14 Mar 2011 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 27
wow amazing progress for 3 months, but i dunno about the room....
Date: 14 Mar 2011 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wow that is fucked up!
Date: 14 Mar 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 25
The adults really have been clueless and lost.it has been the kids holding her above water, too bad there has been wave after wave crashing on her head...
Date: 14 Mar 2011 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 24
Bella is gonna have to relive all of it and find a way to move on and put it all away.
Date: 14 Mar 2011 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow bella is being a bitch!
Date: 14 Mar 2011 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 22
Wow that whole chapter was harsh!
Date: 14 Mar 2011 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow extreme measures! They all have to let her go so she can heal. Too bad it doesn't feel like the right thing right now.
Date: 14 Mar 2011 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
holy shit! who will find her?
Date: 14 Mar 2011 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 19
good for you bella! stand up ad don't be the victim anymore.
Date: 14 Mar 2011 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 18
it is nice to see all of them , well except will and cat rally behind her trying to help. i wonder what kind of fight will come when rose and jasper hear their parents want to keep them away from bella?
Date: 14 Mar 2011 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 17
i thought there was something fishy about will and cat and how withdrawn they were with her, i cannot believe they want to take rose and jasper away from her. that they are scared of her.
Date: 14 Mar 2011 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 16
holy shit talk about a bad day!at least she is ready to talk...
Date: 14 Mar 2011 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 15
more rocks on the road in school.......
Date: 14 Mar 2011 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 14
first day is off to a rocky start.
Date: 14 Mar 2011 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 13
poor girl she has shit jumping out at her at every turn.
Date: 14 Mar 2011 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 12
looks like eddie is gonna be on night duty fo a while, if not forever.
Date: 14 Mar 2011 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 11
she is slowly letting them in one at a time. eddie is gonna protect her like crazy and i hope they got her in classes with em and eddie.
Date: 14 Mar 2011 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 10
eddie has broken through to her. time to open up and let things out....
Date: 14 Mar 2011 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
momma bear came out to protect her cub.
Date: 14 Mar 2011 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 8
the poor family. and renee is right em can't do it all on his own...
Date: 14 Mar 2011 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
Holy shit! What will they do to help her sleep? And get rid of the nightmares with no drugs?
Date: 14 Mar 2011 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 6
Little bits of info are coming out to the group. I guess it has to be hard for charlie and renee to have bella out of their sight for even a second!
Date: 14 Mar 2011 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 5
Ok I think my standing review is gonna include a holy shit! There are just no words. I feel bad for charlie and renee, I know it would kill me if something like this happened to one of my babies and then to have them not want me around?!
Date: 14 Mar 2011 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 4
Poor girl has a lot to overcome!
Date: 14 Mar 2011 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 3
Holy shit! How old was she when she was taken? How old are they now?
Date: 14 Mar 2011 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 2
3 sets of twins! All living nextdoor to eachother! Wow!
Date: 14 Mar 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
I did the math that is almost 6 years! Holy shit!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2011 2:02 AM Title: Epilogue
What an incredible story. I don't know what you do in your life, career whatever but you have an amazing way with words. Reading this was almost as if reading a self help story or a public speaker talking of her own experience. I hope that is not the fact, but if it is I think you have found a wonderful outlet. Again truly amazing...
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I am actually just a stay at home mom:)
Date: 13 Mar 2011 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 17
Wow...that's all I can say. To read Cat's POV, that kinda pissed me off. A loose cannon. I really hope Jasper and Rosalie tell her off if she tries to keep them away...
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Feb 2011 9:52 PM Title: Epilogue
Glad the kids are all still together. Unfortunately situations like this actually happen. Hard to believe such sick people are in the world.
Author's Response:
Thank you for all the reviews. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and review:)
Date: 18 Feb 2011 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 49
I thought he was going to take her to a baseball game. Another step she needs to take.
Date: 18 Feb 2011 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 45
Angela surprised me. Didn't expect that from her.
Date: 18 Feb 2011 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 44
Was Bella ever checked for STD's?
Date: 18 Feb 2011 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 43
I find it hard to believe that Bella could find anything enjoyable after what she went through. Early hysterectomies often trigger early menopause. She probably needs hormonal therapy too.
Date: 18 Feb 2011 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 42
Not surprised at all. Some people can't see the truth.
Date: 18 Feb 2011 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 41
I don't know if you can ever have complete closure in this. When she and Edward eventually have sex it will always be a memory for them. In some ways it's harder for Kate and Edward. Just like when something physical happens to a love one it's not only the victim who suffers.
Date: 18 Feb 2011 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 37
It's not as easy when it happens to you.
Date: 18 Feb 2011 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 30
He should have told her before now.