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Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 20

thanks good chapter



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Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 20

OMG, that was horrible of him.  Please let this child heal.



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Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 19

Awesome Bella.



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Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 20

Well who can blame her for taking steps backwards...everyone is making her kidnapping about them when it barely affected anyone.

 

Good job.



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Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 20

omg that was heartbreaking. why are people so cruel. i just can't understand why someone else would be so mean. they just don't understand.

poor thing wants to die but she has so many people that love her. it will take a while for her to know she is not his dirty little whore.

bella go back to your parents. they love you.



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Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 20

Oh no.  How horrible.  What is the matter with people?



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It's amazing what fear of the unknown will make you do.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 17

well the kids no what family is

i am sad for will and cat. i think they are just scared. i hope they get their minds back to where they need to be. because taken rose and jasper from the equation will make things worse



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Yes, it would.

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 20

Great chapter.....



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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 20

well i hope that they get her help that she needs and not what she wants! i think its getting too much for her to do it by her self! cant wait till the next chatper 



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Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 20

I'll bring the red hot poker.  That SOB deserves nothing less than at least twenty four hours of painful torture.

This chapter was actually harder to read then the onese where Bella explained what happened to her because she is giving up.  That may be sadder than anything else.



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I agree!! It was much harder to write!

Reviewer: Alica1992 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 20

awesome chapter with a very very bad cliffhanger ;D

poor bella hope she won't die ...

xoxo Alica



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 20

OMFG she has went through every thing she has and then one stupid motherfuckin (I will bring the hot oil to dip the fucker in) and she loses it compleatly.  How did she get away from the others.  Cant wait for more hurry she has to be OK.



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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 20

*ties rope and bull whip to hip*

*lights the torches and hands them off to everyone*

 

I think its time for a lynchin' and a hangin'. *draws in a southern twang*

 

Now this was intense!  I love it!  I really cant wait to see what happens next!

 

*builds a brick wall behind us to prevent any further steps backwards*



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Thank you for making me giggle. I needed that and I love your review!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 20

I hope they find her before she can kill herself. Mr Varner better leave town before he ends up dead.



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Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 20

i hope they can find bella in time,,,,,, i will  help lead the hunting party,they really are morons,,,,,i still really don't get how they are scared of bella.maybe renee and esme will try castrate varner, after he has met with carlisle and charlie,don't think will and cath will be that supportive,

another excellent ch.,until next time.c.



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It's really more of the fear of the unknown than it is of Bella. None of them know how to be around Bella becasue they don't understand. The problem is, they never will.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 19

Some parents just dont understand.  SHe went through hell for six years while their kids cried for a week or so.

Ppppfffffhhhht *rolls eyes*  Morons. -_-

 

Love the update, I cant wait til she gets better and starts kicking ass.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 19

way to go bella,boohoo for all those who were sad when she dissapeared,don't think any of them could of come close  to feeling what bella did.it's really strange how some peoples minds work,,,,maybe it's a coping mechanisum(?),,they have to  try and defend their own,when most of them aren't even that close,and how hard it was for them to cope with everything,,,blah.....how can they think what jess and lauren did was ok!....it truly baffles me.

any way,excellent ch.,looking forward to more.c.



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Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 8

omg she has defentiely been to hell and back. i feel sorry for how much was taken from her and how much she lost and also that she will never bear any of her own children. i would have killed him slowly if i had a chance. thank god the police killed him



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 19

She is so strong with every thing she has been through



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Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 19

Great chapter.....



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Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 19

Seriously?!?  I am surprised Renee and Charlie didn't go psychi on those other parents.  I mean how heartless can you be?



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Very heartless but at the same time, they are scared, too!

Reviewer: Onelove3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 19

Wow.

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Thanks:)

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 18

thanks good chapter



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Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 18

I wonder how Rose and Jasper are going to react to their parents trying to keep them away from Bella.  Not well I think/hope.



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Not well at all!

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 18

ooohhh will and cat are being too quiet,do you think that maybe there children saying that ,that they will realize bella is gong to need everyone's help? i'm so glad that bella has that kind of family behind her,hope the bitches from school get an ear full ,hopefully rose and alice will rip them a new one,maybe bella will stand up for herself,

excellent ch. looking forward to more.c.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 18

Beautiful!  The road to recovery is a hard one.  I love the way you have all three families united as one to help her. :)



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 18

So heart breaking, I have never read anything like this.  I am a big wuss, I cried through the last two chapters.



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You are not a wuss, my dear, I sobbed like an infant while writing them.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 17

WOW!!!!



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Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 18

Love Rose and Jasper, wait until they find out their parents point of view.  I wonder how they will react?

 



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 18

So glad they all are behind her and want to help her every way they can.  Is that the way Cat and Will feel also or are they going to try to remove themselves  from Bella???



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It's not that they don't want to help but they are scared.

Reviewer: benna Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 18

Great chapter.Thanks for the update. Man your quick.



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Thank you:) This is already done, except for tweaking it up a bit.

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 11

It doesn't matter if it seems too soon.  They said that that have always loved each other at least she admits since the day she was taken.  She said he was her one sustaining force keeping her will alive.   I think given the situation not knowing when you might not see each other again, telling the person how you feel is the right thing to do.  Like what has happen tomorrow isn't promised.

This is one of the most original B&E stories I read.  Its hard to read but I love it!  It deals with real situations and a topic that isn't touched as much.



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Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 18

Great chapter.....



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Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 18

Hmmm, I noticed that Catherine and William were unusually quiet as everyone else was making a 'game plan' of how to help Bella.  I don't think they are going to like the reactions from anyone when their intentions become known.

I think Bella is doing so much better now that she is telling her story to more people.  It is kind of like when you are sick.  Throwing up is unpleasant, but you need to get the poison out of your system before you can get better.



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Noticed they were quiet, too, eh? Yes, they aren't in too many people's good book right now:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 8

Emmett is a awesome in this story.  He stepped to the plate.



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Yes, he has:) Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 17

Wow!  I love it!

 

Um, what is Carlisle up to??

 

I am excited to see what happens next!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 17

What is Carlisle planning for Bella?  I am sure its in her best interest but it sounds as if its going to be really bad.

I cannot help wonder how Will & Cat would think that Bella was a "loose cannon" who would harm their children.  I can understand you want to protect your children from the world's nasties but they know.  I hope they do not get their way, it will harm everyone.

The "kids" at least are 100% supportive.  

What a mess.

 



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Thank you:) Will and Cat are more concerned with Bella becoming violent with Rose and Jasper. :)

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 17

have to admit this ch.got me angry,not so much the ch.,more the way will and cat are reacting to bella telling what happened,such small minded people,i think they might be in for a shock,i don't think jasper or rose are going to allow them to leave bella or alice and em. hopefully bella can start the healing process properly now that she has been able to let it out what has happened,i loved how you displayed everyones reactions to what she has told them,,,looking forward to what comes next.until next time .c.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: benna Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 17

whoa intense. I liked how you showed a little bit of everyones pov. That was cool. Thanks for the update.



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Reviewer: BlessForTWi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 17

Oh my goodness, what a chapter!  How hard this must've been for her but it needed to be done.  I think things are about to get even worse with
Catherine and Will's POV of keeping Rose and Jasper away.  I'm not looking forward to that.

Great chapter as always.  Looking forward to the next!



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Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 17

Well William and Catherine definitely aren't going to be getting their way if their children have anything to say about it- hell probably if anyone else finds out about it too.  It was nice to get insight into how everyone else has been taking Bella's return.  I honestly question how close William and Catherine are to this group because to want to stay away from her because of what she's been through is, well, insane.

Good job.  Can't wait for the next chapter.



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Reviewer: MrsMcSparkly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 17

oomg soo saddd!! :'( 



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Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter.....



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Reviewer: oldmeone Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 17

Will and Cat a big no no, but sound like RL, so is not a surprise

The  others need professional help, the  mind is a tricking matter.



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Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 17

I can't believe that Will and Kat want to keep their kids away from her. It wasn't her fault what happened to her.

Carlisle and Esme just want to love her and help her. Even with Carlisle's thoughts of contacting someone that might be upsetting to the others, he only wants to help.

The kids all love her like a sister. They want their old Bella back and seem willing to do whatever it takes.

Charlie and Renee are feeling so much guilt and pain. I guess that is to be expected.

I just hope that Will and Kat won't do something in a misguided attempt to protect their kids that will only tear them apart.

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Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 17

thanks good chapter



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 17

Will and cat need the shit slaped out of them they need to relize that taking the kids away from Bella will destroy them all.



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Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 17

Jasper and Rose are going to have a royal fit on theor parents' asses if they try and keep them away from Bella.  And how exactly to they think that is going to happen?  Especially with Rose and Emmett being a couple.  Are they going to move out of town?  They would have to move across the ocean to keep them apart and even then I wouldn't bet against the kids.

As much as each of their perspectives were sad, I think Carlisle's broke my heart.



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Mine too. Carlisle's always does.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 16

Those bitches!!!  I really hope that Bella decides to press charges.  It was no accident.  There actions were totally malicious and they deserve to pay.

I am glad that Bella is ready to tell the rest of the family (which is what they are) her story.  I just hope they can all handle hearing it.

That is so sad what happened to Eleazar's daughter.  But it explains so much of why he is so willing to accomidate to Bella's needs.



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Thank you:) I promise that they will be delt with, eventually:)

Reviewer: Onelove3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 16

Count me in on the hunt. I hope she presses charges. They need to understand that with actions come consequences. Once again I'm in tears. Hopefully taking control back and allowing everyone in will help her start to truly heal. Great chapter.

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THank you:)

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 16

thanks good chapter



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 16

It must have killed Carlisle having to inflict pain on Bella for over 2 hours. Why would she not at least take a topical? Why does she want to go through more pain? She knows Carlisle would not hurt her on purpose yet she made him do it to help her heal. That was actually very crual of Bella.



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After being drugged for years so that men could hurt her, she can't handle that yet. Yes, it was hard on Carlisle but Bella couldn't handle that yet.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 16

Your Bella is certainly a brave one.  It was so sad to see her hurt again.  Jessica and Lauren are both nasty peices of work.  Lets hope they get theirs.

Looking forward to the next update



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 16

That's right.  We need to get a mob together.  You're doing a great job!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 16

Well, Lauren and Jessica will get what they deserve.

Bella sounds like she is far away from being ready with school and her new life. Hopf the meeting will help her.

thanks for sharing.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 16

Lauren and Jessica are so cool ... not. I don't think they meant to push her through the glass doors but it does make you wonder what they were hoping to accomplish. Whatever it was, I don't think they got the desired effect. Unless the desired effect was to look like a couple of stupid raging bitches.

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Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 16

my tissues are ready i always cry when she explains what has happened to her,looking forward to next ch. excellent job again.c.



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Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 16

Great chapter.....



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Reviewer: oldmeone Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 16

Lauren and Jessica  need more of a visual lecture than jail,

I thought Bella was incongruent, but in this chapter she come to senses and the last thoughts (" I was tired of being the freak. I wanted my life back. I fought hard to survive it all") is what she need to hold on to. She told 2 people and expect everyone to stay back, to understant something that is beyond their minds, is human nature to be courious and some people use agressive maners to avoid ignorances. (you know all this)

your an awesome writer, some times scenes to fast



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 16

A major step to healing is next, and I am eagerly anticipating that step for her.

 

And I hope she presses charges.  If they bully Bella they could bully anyone.  Next time their victim may not survive.  I really hate Bullies.

 

Great chapter, I am excited for the next chapter, as always :)



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 16

Mob my ass the death sqwad needs to get ahold of there asses  I didnt like them before I reaLLY dont like them know.



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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 16

well im glad that shes starting to talk to everyone else about what happened ! cant wati till the next chapter 



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Reviewer: Onelove3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 15

A few pot holes in the road. Although I have a feeling the speed bumps are going to be brutal. I'm not looking forward to the bitch brigade but unfortunately every school has them. But I have faith that my little friend karma will make herself known to them in a big way. Great writing.

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Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 15

great chapter.....



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Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 15

Atleast the teachers have been understanding. News travels fast, they probably didn't want a repeat of what happened in English and of course she has a note now.

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Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 15

This day must be exhausting for Bella.  She has been on an emotional rollar coaster from class to class.



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Yes, it is:)

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 15

thanks good chapter



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Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 15

Poor Bella, she is going well considering.  



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Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 15

i feel so sorry for bella,all the emotions that she must be going through must be more than hard for her,you as a writer must have amazing strength to be able to sucessfully portray them as words for us readers to fully understand what she is going through.......excellent job,i also feel this with you other work.

thank you until next up-date.c.



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Thank you so much:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 15

I new it would not take long before Mike ddi something to mess with Bella.



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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 15

Yikes!  What the hell was Mike thinking??  Idiot *grumbles under breath*

 

Awesome chapter, I cant wait to see Peter next... I mean.. Uh.. I cant wait to see what happens next!  *blushes tomato red*



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lol *snort*  YOu are so cute:)

Reviewer: benna Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 15

Another great chapter. Loved it. Thanks for the update.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 15

Poor Bella.  Kudos for trying so hard.



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Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 14

Wow...Bella hasn't been in school for 6 years yet she can take Spanish II and Trig?

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Yes, I explain:)

Reviewer: Onelove3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 13

Holy MF jeeze stupid reporters. Can't hate on you since that's how the vultures operate. Good but tearful chapter.

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Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 14

Well, no one said it was going to be all sunshine and daisies.  I am glad to see the principal and teachers are bing so accomidating.  I hope Peter plays a decent roll in this.  I already like him.



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No, it most certainly is not going to be all sunshine and daises:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2010 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 14

At least she made it through the first class.



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Yep:)

Reviewer: benna Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2010 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 14

Great chapter. So I am assuming that this new teacher is going to continue to be a big part of the story? I love how she is in class with someone in each period. Thanks for the update, and as always, looking forward to more.



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Yes, eventually Peter becomes a bigger part of the story.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2010 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 14

I would have hoped that the teacher's would have been warned. If the had the first teacher was so wrong. The second teacher was great and will be a great friend to Bella.

Author's Response: Mrs. Owens just didn't think.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2010 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 14

well thats an intresting chaper cant wait to see what happens next 



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Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2010 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 14

great chapter.....



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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2010 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 14

*starts to vibrate in seat*

*starts to breathe faster in short panting breaths*

OH.

MY.

GAWD!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG ITS PETER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  *starts to cry happy tears*

 

Ok, I am in love with this chapter, and he got at Mallory right off the bat, SWEET!

 

*grabs you up in a bear hug and twirls you in circles*  Thank You!



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lol, you're welcome! I love Peter:)

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2010 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 14

thanks good chapter

 



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Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2010 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 14

Its  really forunate for Bella that she has such good friends.  This was even more important to Bella, as the first teacher was a little thoughtless.  At least the Head and Peter Davies seem a lot more understanding. 



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Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2010 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 13

I am glad we got to see some of the reasons Bella had such nightmares.  Her desire to keep Edward safe while she was suffering was really sweet. 

Until next time.



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Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2010 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 13

I know she's trying to be brave and all but school doesn't seem like a good idea.

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No, it's probably not.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2010 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 13

thanks good chapter



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Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 13

I don't think this first day is going to go to well for Bella.  It really seems too early since she isn't talking to a therapist and anything could send her into a panic attack.



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Exactly:( thanks

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 13

I know the nightmares are horrible it causes Bella to get more of the story out, which will help her heal. I am glad that Edward was there to help her sleep after it though. She will be ready to face school if she has her 2 guys with her.



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Thank you:) Bits and pieces:)

Reviewer: benna Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2010 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 13

Awww! Sweet chapter. I wonder how school is going to go. Thanks for the update.



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2010 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 13

With every little bit she tells she heals I hope.  Reporters after every thing this poor girl has been through.  Waiting for the first day I hope she makes it with out losing it.



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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2010 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 13

Wow, intense!  That was an awful dream.  Poor B.

 

Thank goodness for 6 awesome parents and 5 super sibling/friends!

 

Great chapter

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Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2010 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 13

great chapter.....

Reviewer: benna Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it! Thanks for the update.



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Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2010 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 12

Edward seems to be putting out emotional fires all over the place.  It seems to be on his and Emmett's shoulders to keep everyone stable while Bella heals. :(



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Right now they are the only ones who know. She will trust the others.

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 12

Great chapter...



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Reviewer: The Duchess Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 12

Edward is such a sweetheart... I want an Edward.

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Reviewer: Onelove3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 12

*tears* another good chapter..

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Reviewer: 3kdz4me Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 12

Edward did better with the news than I thought he would.  I thought that he would be tossing his cookies for sure! 



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Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 12

EPOV was good to have.  It also shows much this has effected both families.  Looking forward to the next chapter.



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