Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 15
That was funny Bella and Edward thought they were being so sneaky LOL
Author's Response:
Apparently noyt, eh?
Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 16
O snap. Let it begin. Dun dun dunnnn!!
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 16
Wow, that's not a good start to their day. Great chapter. Really like that Carlisle & Esme seem to be on their side. Did not see that coming. Can't wait to read more! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 11 Oct 2010 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 14
What happen to Renee and Charlie??? They are together
Date: 11 Oct 2010 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 13
That was funny other than the bitch Renee
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 Oct 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 12
So what was her parent name???? to bad the kiss was blocked
Author's Response:
Damn Police!!
Date: 10 Oct 2010 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
At least she is talking with others
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 10 Oct 2010 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
why didnt she tell them that she told Edward
Author's Response:
Because Bella is very private, even with her brothers.
Date: 10 Oct 2010 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 9
Mike is a creep and needed his ass kicked. She could not have killed her parents????
Author's Response:
Yes, Mike is a creep!!
Date: 10 Oct 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
Edward is very excepting and kind
Author's Response:
Yes, he is:)
Date: 10 Oct 2010 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Bella my heart hurts for her.
Author's Response:
THank you:)
Date: 10 Oct 2010 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
Shit is going to hit the fan.
Author's Response:
Yep:)
Date: 10 Oct 2010 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 5
I got the idea that some really bad fuck up stuff happened to her. Please tell me she kicks Lauren's ass???
Author's Response:
Eventually :)
Date: 10 Oct 2010 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
What is going on with the gym???
Author's Response:
:)Thanks:)
Date: 10 Oct 2010 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love it Bella kick ass. Edward has made the enemy list boo hoo.
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 10 Oct 2010 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love that he turned Lauran down flat.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 10 Oct 2010 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
sounds like it is going to be good different
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 10 Oct 2010 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter, so it seems like the others aren't blind to Edward and Bella being together.
Looking forward to the tournament.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 Oct 2010 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 15
I enjoyed this chapter emmensely! Gotta love a little elevator action *giggles*
I cant wait to see the first tournament!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
Hahaha busted.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 09 Oct 2010 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 15
Really liked that last bit with Carlisle. Anxious to read more! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 09 Oct 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 15
well i hope that the other brothers are nice about it too !
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 09 Oct 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 14
glad shes starting to be a kid ! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 09 Oct 2010 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 14
Love it!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 08 Oct 2010 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wonderful chapter, Alice seems very intimidating.
Yay they kissed can't wait to see what happens.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 08 Oct 2010 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 13
finally the kiss!
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 13
AWE!!! Finally a kiss!!!!
Author's Response:
HEHE, thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2010 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
*gigglesnorts* Car...Carlisle got... got PUNCHED!! *doubles over in hysterics*
I feel bad for the bruised jaw that Em got *snickers* but Carlisle having a black eye is the perfect ending to a Mastercard priceless commercial!!
Renee and Charlie need to just leave. I dont like them, they are giving off bad ju-ju vibes. They are the cause for such a break down in B to begin with I think.
*tacklehugglesquishies you* Love the update! I cant wait to see what that semi-cliffie leads to! *waggles eyebrows*
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 08 Oct 2010 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 13
well i would beat renee up and pull her hair out ! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
lol, I would too!
Date: 08 Oct 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 13
great chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 08 Oct 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 13
Loved this chapter. I think it's funny how they keep shocking everyone with how their relationship. The ending definately left me wanting to read more. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 08 Oct 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
yay!
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 07 Oct 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
Well, I was surprised to see Renee and Charlie.
Great chapter :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2010 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
Holy dramatic inserted word Batman! That came out of nowhere!! Awesome :)
Totally shocked by the Charlie and Renee bit. Wow :) I love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I am full of surprises!
Date: 07 Oct 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 12
well at least they are starting to act like teenagers!
Author's Response:
Little bit:)
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 12
I love me some slow burn. Great chappy!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 07 Oct 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 12
great chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2010 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
*gasp* Who is it?!?!
Is it Jacob? Is it Peter? *swoon*
Duh duh DUH!!!! *suspensful music shrills through the air*
Love it :)
Author's Response:
Neither!!! Muahahahahahaha
Date: 06 Oct 2010 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter, I love Edward and Esme as siblings.
Can't wait to see who this mystery person is.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 06 Oct 2010 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 11
great chapter.....
Date: 06 Oct 2010 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 11
cant wait to know who showed up ! keep the chapters comming
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 06 Oct 2010 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 11
Esme sure isn't acting like much of an adult since she's taking rumors to heart instead of looking for the truth. Can't wait to see what happens next. :)
Author's Response:
You hear enough rumors, you start to worry. Plus, it's more of Edward's change in behavior that has her concerned.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wow who's the mystery guy but better question is why is this chapter only up to chapter 11 but on FF.net its on chapter 42? :( I'm soooo tempted to run over there and read all your stories. lol you're awesome. keep it up thanks bye
Author's Response:
Have you been FF stalking me again???? I started this story awhile ago over on FF and just now started it over here. I know, I am horrible and I should be ashamned. *hangs head*
Date: 05 Oct 2010 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter, Bellas story is so sad. Its nice that Edward makes her feel better.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2010 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh my gosh!!!!!! *sobs uncontrolllably*
Thats AWFUL! She was scared out of her mind, they had no right to try and keep her hospitalized! Dirty court system. *grumbles*
I really like how you wrote her story. What a tragedy!
Excellent chapter, keep up the good work. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 05 Oct 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
well im happy she finally has a friend cant wait to see what ahppens next and im glad we have the back story for bella!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 05 Oct 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 10
great chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2010 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 10
Glad it's out there and maybe she'll listen to Edward when he told her it wasn't her fault. So much weight on her shoulders. She really is a tough cookie even though she may not see it. Not all good stories are fluff and I love yours. To quote one of my favorite movies "it can't rain all the time" and I know you'll bring the sun with your words. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 04 Oct 2010 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 9
Poor Bella. I don't kow if I'd be able to deal with all the high school drama she puts up with
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 04 Oct 2010 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter...
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2010 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
Whoa! Ouch, she thinks she killed them?! Thats a total WTF moment there!
Loved the chapter, Now we see that E and B have more in common than we originally thought. Keeps us readers on our toes :) lol
I cant wait to read more! I am anxiously awaiting when they go to the gym for their workout/training. Is Carlisle going to be in the ring? I see a red vision-hazed knockout in his immediate future. heehee He is just begging for and ass kicking with his snappy mouth.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 04 Oct 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 9
okay this isn't going to get weird and she actually DID kill them right? lol just she's responsible? well now I can't wait to find out. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
I promise it won't get weird:)
Date: 04 Oct 2010 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 9
cant wait till the next chapter cant wait to see what happened in her life
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 9
Stupid cliffy!! No just kidding. I love that he stood up for her.
Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 03 Oct 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter, its nice that they are friends now.
Riding to school with the principal has to suck for Bella.
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 03 Oct 2010 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 8
thats great and a horrible punishment too who would want to ride with the princepal of the school lauren will just pick on her somemore! cnat wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 03 Oct 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter...
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Oct 2010 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
Hahahaha!!!!! Carlisle the hard ass!! B is gonna kick his ass in the ring *smirk* Never mess with a girl's bike!
Author's Response:
I know, right?
Date: 02 Oct 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 8
aww Bella and pretty boy are friends. lol I love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Oct 2010 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter. Those last two lines made me laugh. I guess arriving at school with the principal is just as bad as a police cruiser.
Author's Response:
Exactly!! lol, thanks:)
Date: 02 Oct 2010 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wonderful chapter :)
Bella seems to be trusting Edward, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh my gosh, that was spectacular! I love this chapter :)
He was all B needed. E is going to help her through this! Yay!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) It was a very emotionally charged chapter. Walls were broken and trust was gained.
Date: 02 Oct 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oops, Eddie did a big uh-oh *giggles*
Awesome though, next time I want Lauren to go down :)
Author's Response:
lol, thanks :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2010 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 7
Ahhh the never ending cliffy!! You're killing me. Always leave me wanting more. Until we meet again. (impatiently patiently waiting for the next update).
Author's Response:
I promise a new chapter tomorrow:)
Date: 02 Oct 2010 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 7
Bella needs to stop running from her brothers and just say no and stick to it. She wants to be treated like an adult but yet she's acting like a child with the tantrums and running away. I get her attitude though, I REALLY do. that poor girl has been through hell and right now Edward is the only one she wants to talk to. Love it. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Oct 2010 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 7
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2010 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loving this story!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 01 Oct 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter.
I wonder what kind of trouble they're in?
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 01 Oct 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 6
lol this is going to be interesting
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 01 Oct 2010 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 01 Oct 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter....
Date: 01 Oct 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 6
well she should of beat the shit out of her cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 30 Sep 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 6
well they're getting there. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 30 Sep 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
Bella's pov was amazing, it was nice to get a little glimpse at her back story.
I can't believe Lauren threw a coke in her face, can't wait to see what happens. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 30 Sep 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter.....i like bella pov very good
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 30 Sep 2010 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
well its a start into her past ! cant wait till we get more !
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh wow!!! The age gaps just go to show that their parents had a healthy intimate life :)
And I cannot WAIT to see what you have in store for us on this one, I am anxiously awaiting the reveal :)
Ok, what is Lauren Mallory's problem?? Bitch needs slapped, thats for damned sure. *plots Mallory's demise*
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 30 Sep 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 5
oh i hope she kicks her ass. one punch knock out!
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 30 Sep 2010 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 5
Damn you.... Always leave me wanting more!! :-) that being said... still hooked, you are my written drug.. can't wait for the next update. Until then..can I punch Lauren in the face? Please??
Author's Response:
Yes, you have my permission to punch Lauren in the face:)
Date: 30 Sep 2010 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 5
God everyone hates Lauren she is such a bitch. Secretly I think she's in love with Bella because in all the stories I read she hates her. lol I like the insight into what happened somewhat and I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Totally in love with Bella! You are right!
Date: 29 Sep 2010 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
Nice to see Bella can kick Edward's ass if necessary. Interesting how everyone kept looking towards her when they were discussing Edward at the gym. Can't wait to find out more of her background.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 29 Sep 2010 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter, seems like nobody wants Edward at the gym.
Looking forward to Bella's pov.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 29 Sep 2010 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 29 Sep 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
well Bella better have some answers because right now everyone in that gym are (well how to put it nicely) freaking jerks. including Bella. I can't wait to hear her story. :D thanks again bye
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2010 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
I can't wait for Bella's pov. Just by the way she acts around him, there's a lot going on in her head. And Jazz and Em. Hmmmm.
Author's Response: Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2010 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
LOL, fantastic!!! That was great! I am confused by all their reactions, Carlisle, Emmett and Jasper, but that will be explained though, Im sure. You never leave us hanging for too long :)
Author's Response:
Yes, it will all be explained. I promise and thank you:)
Date: 28 Sep 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
ooh there's going to be a fight!!! lol keep up the great work. I love that Edward turned Lauren down, stupid ho! lol thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh wow! lol, awesome :) I knew she would be involved with the gym somehow. That is so cool.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Sep 2010 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 3
want more please and thank u
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 3
Keep them coming. I'm hooked.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 27 Sep 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great story,looking forward to more. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 27 Sep 2010 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm enjoying the story so far!
Love the big sister Esme! I'm guessing that Carlilse is Bella's father? Maybe they meet and hook up?
Can't wait to read more!
xox Linda
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2010 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
great start.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 27 Sep 2010 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hmm, well Edward sure has his work cut out for him where Bella is concerned. If it helps, you are doing a great job with the Edward POV.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 2
this is looking good. Bella did look fearful when he came up to her regardless of her saying she wasn't scared. poor thing. can't wait to find out her story. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ooh! I love it!
I can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting so far. I haven't found many good "Bad Bella" stories, so considering I already like the way you write, this could be one of the good ones out there.
Just out of curiousity, why is Bella a Cullen instead of Swan?
Author's Response:
Because her father isn't Charlie. I promise to explain it all :)