Date: 17 Nov 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
omg that was AMAZING!
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well...What can I say...I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!...MORE PLEASE...pretty please.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
I LOVED THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN WAIT TO READ MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this! Thanks for posting.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story really hooked me because I am curious why Edward has been treating Bella this way and holding back this last stage their relationship. He obviously cares for her and acts like they are in a relationship, but goes elsewhere for sexual intercourse. It is like he thinks she is too good to date him or fears ruining their relationship, but like Edward said, making out and oral sex already changed their relationship.
I am surprised Bella did not move on when he rejected her request and dated another guy, but she is really tolerant of his behavior. I don't like how he has been sleeping around and will have Bella sleep with him in the same bed that he had sex with someone earlier, clean sheets or not.
Date: 10 Oct 2010 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
oohhh poop you're just going to leave us hanging? for now at least? lol I like it. and just like the movie a simple kiss between those two are everyone I'm sure gets hot and bothered. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye