Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
awesome
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Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 38
lmao it sure was . better than my christmas pmsl
as always kisses
Author's Response:
thanks
Date: 02 Apr 2010 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 38
Lol yeah that was a heck of a way to end christmas. I don't know if you're planning ot do this or not but it would be interesting if Bella or Alice got pregnant would it lol as they wouldn't really be able to tell whether it was Jasper's or Edwards considering they share all the time lol. But anyways, great update!
Author's Response:
It's all in the plans:)
Date: 01 Apr 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
LMAO!!
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 01 Apr 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 38
awesome christmas!! hey what's the secret to the bacon? LOL
Author's Response:
Just add a smidge of lust and smut ;)
Date: 01 Apr 2010 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 38
Time for a cold shower!!!
Author's Response:
For me too:)
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2010 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
rotf fucking lmao!!!
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 31 Mar 2010 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 37
Harleys?? Oh HOT!!
Author's Response:
I know, right?
Date: 31 Mar 2010 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 37
I loved the Harleys!!!! Leather +Edward+Jasper+Bella+Alice= wet dreams for about a week! FUCK!!
I;ll go check the one-shot sometime later!!
xoxo
Marianne
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2010 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 37
i love the fact that they got the boys harleys and cant wait to see what will happen next and i love the outtake i read it when you put it up i cant wait to see who you do next for the outtake so please update soon
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 31 Mar 2010 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
ahh make sense.. yup sure did.. thax! lol dont you hate it sometime when ppl start questioning you about your story? dont you just want to say 'ppl just read and appreciate the fucking story!' lol thanx for taking the time tho.. cant wait for the next chappies for either one..
Tricia
Author's Response:
You know, what? I don't really mind because when people ask me questions it shows me that they are inerested in my story. I may not have really made that part of their relationship very clear when I started this story :) Now, just appreciate the fucking story, already! Just kidding!
Date: 31 Mar 2010 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 37
So they are going to get married on Valentine's day!! that is cute.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 31 Mar 2010 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 37
love the outtake.. i tried not think the parents part lol.. so i have a quick question if you dont mind... seems like with all these gifts flying around bella or/and alice have plenty of money.. but bella lived with rosalie/emmett until not too long ago.. since they work and successfully at that, it doesnt seem to add up that she was living with her sister.. im just curious maybe i miss a couple of turn in there somewhere lol .. but otherwise im loving it
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading the outtake. It is kind of weird about the whole parent thing. Anyway, the reason Bella was living with Rose and Emmett was because Renee and Charlie made that a condition for her living in LA. What you have to remember is that until Bella and Alice met Jasper and Edward, they weren't honest about how much they really loved each other or what their relationship really was. Bella was desperate for Renee and Charlie to be just as proud of her as they were of Rose that she would do just about anything, including living with Rose and Emmett. Does that answer your question?
Date: 31 Mar 2010 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 37
now that is a super cool present and nice use they made of its first run out, out in the open air now thats exciting, lol off to check out the outake thanks
Author's Response:
Wouldn't that be fun to take a nice ride with Edward or Jasper???? *sigh*
Date: 30 Mar 2010 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 36
What? What happened? Grrr, to your cliff hanger. And what kind of toys did Esme and Carlisle get, huh? Why don't we get to know? Everyone else does.
Author's Response:
Read the outtakes and you will find out too:)
Date: 30 Mar 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 36
I would definately like to read about the parents' first times!
Author's Response:
Thanks! First one is up:)
Date: 30 Mar 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 36
hi sorry also meant to say would like to read the outakes if you decide to put them up thanks
Author's Response:
Thanks! I will be putting them up in a bit so be looking for a new story from me:)
Date: 30 Mar 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 36
are they having the wedding abroad? sounds like they are all having a great time together and getting on well, thanks tracy
Author's Response:
Yes, the wedding is in Brazil.
Date: 30 Mar 2010 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 36
I am out of my fuckinf mind!! the presents are so awesome!! First the sex-toys set was hot and then the gave them WEDDING PLANS???!!!!
Perfect!
About the outtakes... I am a little afraid about the Charlie-Renee-Charlotte-Peter cause especially Charlie is a dad in my mind but my morbid curiosity will probably make me read it anyway! ;) About the other one?! I can't fucking wait!! Mr C is hot! ***winks***
xoxo
Marianne
Author's Response:
Thanks! I promise the outtakes are done tastfully:)
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2010 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 36
Oh yes please to the outtakes, i so wanna read them !!! would you deny your faithful reviewers Betty???
This story is addictive. Like my own personal brand of heroin lol xx
Author's Response:
Of course I wouldn't! I will be starting the outtakes in a bit!
Date: 30 Mar 2010 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 36
This story is crazy! I love it! YAY for Free Love :) I would love to love to read the parents 1st time!
Author's Response:
lol, I know, right? Thanks. I will start the outtake's in a bit:)
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2010 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 36
please tell me that i am getting this right but bellas parents gave them a wedding in rio this is going to get good i hope everyone is going to be there for the wedding this is going to be great i cant wait for the next chapter so please update soon
Author's Response:
You have it right:)
Date: 30 Mar 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 36
Kewl chapter i would lve outtakes
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 30 Mar 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 36
I am cracking up that Renee has planned their wedding! but it is going to be perfect.
Author's Response:
lol, sound just like Renee to me!
Date: 30 Mar 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 35
Wow just wow
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the reviews:)
Date: 30 Mar 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 34
Who said that great chapter
Date: 29 Mar 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 31
Wow thats just great until the end then that was just disturbing
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2010 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 35
God i fucking love this story hun xx
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 29 Mar 2010 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 30
I will me me me great chapter
Date: 29 Mar 2010 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 29
As always great chapter
Date: 29 Mar 2010 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 35
GO BELLA! GO BELLA!
ek
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 29 Mar 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 31
O.K. kind of saw that coming. lol
still lovin it though.
ek
Author's Response:
Would you say no?? I didn't think so:) Thanks for the review!
Date: 29 Mar 2010 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 30
eeeeeeee!!! Yes, say Yes. (huge smile)
Will babies make 6?
ek
Author's Response:
Eventually....
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 35
ok i cant wait to see what happens next with all the couples why do i have a feeling that alices parents are going to move in with carlisle and esme i also have an idea that carlisle and esmes house is going to be either sold or given to kate, garrett, rose, and emmett so please let me know if i am right and please update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. You are half right but I am not going tell you what you got right ;)
Date: 28 Mar 2010 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 35
Great! the gifts are so perfect for them!!
xoxo
Marianne
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 28 Mar 2010 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 34
What a foursome!! We have what 4 now?? lol
Nicely done!
xoxo
Marianne
Author's Response:
Yep, figure I might as well go for it all:)
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 35
Aww.... They are so cute!! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 35
Aww, Bella's building everyone a new house...lol
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 35
loved it very much can't wait to see what happens next thanks....
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 35
This is a really great story and I have enjoyed reading it! Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 34
OMG!!!!!!!! please tell me that bella said that out load to everyone this is going to be funny and to see there reactions to what she said so please update soon
Author's Response:
Yes, it was Bella:)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 34
these relationships get more and more complicated every time, how do they all expect it to work out when they all live away? will they all move to forks and be like the couples that every body gossips about? or will they just not care or is it morew of a temporary thing like experementing? more please thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you. I promise that things will be explained soon:)
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 34
that was funny thanks update when you can
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 34
I love your story. It's crazy!!! So many sex and people involved in there!!
Jajaja!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
fucking amen to that!!! lol loving it great job on the writing!!
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 34
And so I guess a trend was started in their families and they are all TOGETHER!!
Author's Response:
lol, I know. They are like bunnies ;)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 34
haha the love is spreading around. great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 33
I wonder what they got for christmas?
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 34
where the heck is this town again??? association membership fee or something?? lol
Author's Response:
I like to think of it as a little slice of heaven.....
Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 34
Haha that is just too funny lol. Really good update!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 16
Me too lol x
Great chapter hun x
Author's Response:
thanks:)
Date: 26 Mar 2010 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 33
I wonder what they picked for Renne!
I loved it!!
No fight :(
Doesn't matter! lol
xx
Marianne
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 26 Mar 2010 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 33
Like mother like daughter what ever works for them. Thing are not boring
Author's Response:
Yep :)
Date: 26 Mar 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 32
So the cat or should I say cats are out of the bag lol. Bella is an amazing women. It is good that everyone feels like they sould protect Bella hope Mike and Tyler dont do anything they will feel bad about.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 32
So the cat or should I say cats are out of the bag lol. Bella is an amazing women. It is good that everyone feels like they sould protect Bella hope Mike and Tyler dont do anything they will feel bad about.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 31
How could they say no it will be an interesting wedding and more interesting honeymoon
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2010 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 33
how sweet loved it can't wait to see what happens next thanks....
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 26 Mar 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 27
Good chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you for all the reviews:)
Date: 26 Mar 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 33
what was the perfect gift i wonder? bella made her acceptance perfectly clear of her mothers choice, i'm sure it will be complicated but will work out in the end,
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review:)
Date: 26 Mar 2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 25
That was unexpected great chapter
Date: 26 Mar 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wow great chapter
Date: 26 Mar 2010 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 32
That is amazing that she finished that when she was like 20 years old. I hope that Mike and Tyler will listen to what happened to Bella before they go off the deep end and think that Edward or Jasper would ever hurt her.
Author's Response:
THanks for the reviews:)
Date: 26 Mar 2010 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 31
Oh boy! That is shocking but at the same time not because we know how Renee and Charlotte feel about each other so we should have known that this was going to happen. I am happy that they are going to get married.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 32
ha..i love jack and daniel or jack daniels!!!! LUV IT and this1 keeps those updates coming fast!
Author's Response:
lol, you are the only preson to put that together!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 32
those boys will be put straight as soon as they ask i hope, lauren got her come uppence at last sarky cow, every body seems really happy now, on to the planning of a double wedding
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 32
oh boy this is going to be good i mean why do i have a feeling that puches are going to be thrown before everything can be explained this is getting better and better i cant wait to see what happens next so please update soon
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 32
yay... LOL still don't think I could have talked to my parents that casually after witnessing that though :) Kudos to Bella and Jasper for that! :) Love that they will be sharing the big house..and protective mike and tyler :)
Author's Response:
I know! Me either!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 32
Fight!! YAY!!! I want a black eye and.... NO scratch that! I dont; want those handsome faces hurt... Just a rib or two!! PLEASE???
I am crazy,ain't I??
lol
XX
Marianne
Author's Response:
little bit but it's all good:)
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 31
I told you no details of the parents but ok...
I'll just erase it from my memory...
Loved the proposal and the aftermathe ;)
Marianne
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 32
ohhh love it! cant wait for another.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 32
loved it i just hope bella can stop them before thanks....
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 32
srry for not reveiwing but you story is amazing and totally awesome!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks:) I'm glad you like it.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 31
bella parents and jaspers parents this could get complicated so edward parents and alices next?
Author's Response:
Possibly:)
Date: 25 Mar 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
lmao..guess.. can i say youre brilliant writer.. i love the way story is goin..of course the awesome foursome scenes are um hmm pantychangerslol
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 31
tell me again where i can sign up to this???? i dont mind being the 5th wheel on that foursome lol NOT THE PARENTS ok.. the bellaedwardjasperalice .. lmao
Author's Response:
Honey, if I knew, I wouldn't be writing about it:)
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 31
OMG i would sneek back up the stairs and tell alice and edward what they caught there parents doing that is just to funny or they are going to bust them this is going to be good why do i have a feeling that all there parents are going to wind up living in the same city as there children i cant wait to see what happens and please update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 31
OMG that is really not something you want to walk in on! LOL
Author's Response:
I know, right:)
Date: 24 Mar 2010 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 31
wow! the parents have the same type of relationship!
Author's Response:
I know!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 30
marriage proposals!!!! another surprise but a good one i'm sure they will say yes they are so in love and lust
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 31
loved it that was great update when you can thanks....
Author's Response:
Thanks@
Date: 24 Mar 2010 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 30
Aww that is just too cute! I hope they say Yes!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 30
Awww.... I really didn't see that one coming! I wonder what is going on with Alice's and Edward's parents?
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 29
Oh what are these boys thinking??
Date: 24 Mar 2010 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 29
Oh what are these boys thinking??
Date: 24 Mar 2010 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 29
Oh what are these boys thinking??
Date: 24 Mar 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 30
I have no doubt about the answer but how will it work? E-B and J-A or all together??
xx
Marianne
Author's Response:
All together:)
Date: 24 Mar 2010 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 30
They had better sure as FUCK say YES
Author's Response:
lol
Date: 24 Mar 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 29
Just when I put new underware on LOL
Author's Response:
lol, maybe I should put a warning up at the beginning of the chaps:) *warning: will cause you to need new panties*
Date: 24 Mar 2010 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 30
ahhhhhh!!!! hot!!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)