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Reviewer: leonskiies Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Dayum! Alice, Jasper, Edward and Bella ... hmm, didn't know they had it in them. Can't wait to read more! This is very interesting, I really want to see how it turns out :)

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 30

I had a feeling they were going to purpose -- I take it Bella takes Edwards name and Alice takes Jaspers?



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Thanks

Reviewer: reneesmay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 30

i have a feeling that they will say yes in a heart beat i cant wait to see everyones reaction when they find out what the answer will be and i love the fact that not only are bella and jaspers parents getting together that there is a posability that edwards parents and alices parents mite be starting there own special reationship this is going to get good so please update soon



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Thanks!

Reviewer: Berrug243 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 30

Love it love it lovit

can't wait for next chappy

B



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Thanks!

Reviewer: ju007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 30

ouu love it!! update soon!



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Thanks

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 29

and now the parents are hooking up, did not see that one coming, so what were the boys whispering about? more please



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Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 29

Hmmmm... interesting. Deffinately looking forward to the next chapter!



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Thanks!

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 29

Have I said it again?? If so I haven;t regret it... WHAT A FUCKING STAMINA!!!

***chuckles***

xx

Marianne



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Aw, to be them.....

Reviewer: reneesmay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 29

oh boy what are the guys up to why do i have a feeling that it might involved rings for all of them i cant wait to find out or the boys are hornny again and they are figuring out how to attack the girls i cant wait to find out so please update soon



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Thanks!

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 29

Well I didn't see their parents becoming a foursome O.o, curious to see what the boys are nervous about



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I'm full of surprises:)

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 28

Quite the twist that their kids end up doing the same thing lol At least Peter came around quicker then the other parents

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 27

Jasper's mom is pretty perceptive lol

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 26

A lot of bad things seem to just target Bella, poor thing. Glad they pulled him off, and Kate gets to go back home

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 25

Wow that's messed up... Edward & Ali should hear her screams if she is now in the office & It's nice she & Ali designed their parents homes for them

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 11

Wow. Em and R took that surprisingly well.

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Thanks for all the reviews!

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 7

I was wondering if there was a plot. Lol
Seriously though, B and A need to tell Em and R to shove it. Clearly they don't have the same beliefs and B and A are adults.

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 2

Well at least he won't be her boss. Did E only use his 1st name the night before?

Reviewer: Es My Brand of Heroin Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

Boy you don't fuck around. That was some 1st chapter- lol

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 28

wow she is going to set them up loved it thanks....



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Thanks

Reviewer: debbieg Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 28

ok when is the next chapter coming.. you left us with a total cliffhanger.. is this when they all go and have a sex party?  I know thats gross thinking of yoru partents doing that... let allone you and your friends.. I have nevered tryied that but cant say I thought about it with my girlfriends..  wow I cant beleive i just said that.... lol...   I am so happy that Renee came around and found her love again.. Charlott.   Who would have thought we have Esma to thank for getting all the family back together and Renee finding her ture love.. 

Please hurry with the next chapter..  This story is really good.  see I told you I could nt put it away..



Author's Response:

lol, no sex party but ......

Reviewer: debbieg Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2010 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 18

wow I founnd your story and cant stop reading it.. This is very hot and sexy.  I cant beleive how lovely Esma is and how she could see right thru Bella and know there was something wrong.. She is a cool mom that everyone would want to have.. I am glad that she took all of them back to Forks to work things out with there parents.. Maybe Renee will come a long and for give Bella.. But than again she may be set in her ways..

Will I cant believe the sex sences with everyone.. so hot and steamy..  wow... thats all I can say.. Whats the thing with Kate and her husband?  he sure was cking out Bella.. They must be on the verge of a brake up or something that the feeling that I got.. He is a player.  Is there going to be more of them?   Willl I better get back to reading.. This is really great.. Thanks for shareing your story..      debbie



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Thank you so much!

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 28

so all the news is now known by all the parents who are all now on board, including how they all met which is a shock i'm sure, and charlotte and renee knowing each other was not expecting that,  as for rennee and charlottee knowing each other i wonder where they will take it? if anywhere 



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 28

Oh wow is this story going to get more interesting?? Are four of the parents going to suddenly decide that they need to be together too?



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perhaps...

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 28

Honestle i love the J/E/B/A but I don't really think my nerves will handle a R/Ch/C/P honestly... At least not the details... I really o think of them as parents...

lol ***winks***

xx

Marianne



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 27

Maybe the universal front is the way to go. I am glad that Kate is ok but what is going on between her and Gar?



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 27

kate will be ok with her parents to lean on, jaspers mum already realises something is up, i wonder which way shw will go esme way or renee way?



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Thanks

Reviewer: reneesmay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 28

why do i have a feeling that there is going to be another realtionship started between charlie, peter, renee, and charlotte im just curious to see if you have charlie and peter fall for each other this is going to get good and i cant wait to see what happens next so please update soon



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You just might be right...

Reviewer: ju007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 28

ooouu cant wait for more!!



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 27

I don't know why but my impulse thought-reaction in the line "is there sth you would like to tell us?" was: fuck! I am screwed-she knows "I didn't do anything Mom..."

lol

I liked that K is safe!!

Marianne



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lol

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 27

Loved it very much can't wait to see what they think of them update when you can thanks.....



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thanks

Reviewer: mz_cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 27

dude i love your story



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Thanks

Reviewer: reneesmay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 27

oh man i cant wait to see what happens next chapter between jaspers parents and the four of them this is going to get good so please update soon



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Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 27

what a way to meet the parents all beat up



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I know. Not the best first impression to make.

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 26

well he deserved nothing less, i hope bella will be ok, the family will enjoy having kate home



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thanks

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 26

Fucking prick... (I wanted to type other colorful words but let's keep it M-rated here...)

Can I kill him?? It will be slow and painful... Maybe the way Edward killed Jacob in Edward's Clan (if you haven't read it try it out its amazing... Then you'll know what I mean about slow and painful ;) ***devilish laugh***)

Marianne

Also sth irrelevant a good friend of mine started a story care to take a look?? It's only the prologue up but I think it's promising! It is called "The legend of the Raven" It's the angsty type... It's posted here



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lol Thanks. I'll go take a look at your friends story:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 26

Well I am glad that the nightmare is over for Kate.



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thanks for all the reviews:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 25

I didn't think that he would be that stupid to attack her at her work where is brother-in-law and father-in-law also work.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 24

It seems that Edward and Bella are getting to spend time together alone.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 23

Wow!! That was terrible. Now they all know just how strong she really is.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 22

Now they need to work on getting Kate away from that ass that she is married to.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 22

Now they need to work on getting Kate away from that ass that she is married to.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 21

I am glad that most of their parents accept them. Now the only ones that are left are Jasper's. I wonder how that is going to go.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 20

That was really sweet. Now they all need to be there for Jasper!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 20

That was really sweet. Now they all need to be there for Jasper!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 19

Those four what are we going to do with them?

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 18

Well three out of the four of them aren't that bad.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 17

all I have to say is Way To Go Charlie!!



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Yeah, I started to like Charlie here.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 26

How much shit can one person indure.  Alex is dead and kate gets to come home but what cost to Bella?????



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I know:(

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 16

I am totally with you on wanting Esme and Carlisle being my parents. I know that if I was in this situation I would want my parents support. I know that my dad would stand behind me because he has in everything that I have ever done. I got pregnant  2 years ago and while I was almost 28 my dad was my rock because I had no one. My son's father left all my friends left and all my mom told me was that I should have an abortion.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you have your dad. My mom is great like that too. My inlaws.......well, we wont get into that.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 16

I am totally with you on wanting Esme and Carlisle being my parents. I know that if I was in this situation I would want my parents support. I know that my dad would stand behind me because he has in everything that I have ever done. I got pregnant  2 years ago and while I was almost 28 my dad was my rock because I had no one. My son's father left all my friends left and all my mom told me was that I should have an abortion.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 16

I am totally with you on wanting Esme and Carlisle being my parents. I know that if I was in this situation I would want my parents support. I know that my dad would stand behind me because he has in everything that I have ever done. I got pregnant  2 years ago and while I was almost 28 my dad was my rock because I had no one. My son's father left all my friends left and all my mom told me was that I should have an abortion.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 16

I am totally with you on wanting Esme and Carlisle being my parents. I know that if I was in this situation I would want my parents support. I know that my dad would stand behind me because he has in everything that I have ever done. I got pregnant  2 years ago and while I was almost 28 my dad was my rock because I had no one. My son's father left all my friends left and all my mom told me was that I should have an abortion.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 15

Oh shit they have awaken the mama bear in Esme! This is going to be bad for Bella and Alice's parents. I am glad to see that Edward's parents accept them for who they are.



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I woudn't want to face Esme...

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 14

I am just glad that Rose and Emmett are going to be there for them all.



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Me too. Thanks:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 13

It is so sad to see the narrowmindness of some people. I had a friend that told me that she was gay when I was a sophmore in High School. We went to a school in a small town so of course when people started talking about her they started asking me if I thought that it was weird and I told them that I didn't because she never pushed what she wanted or believed on me and I was ok with her being gay.



Author's Response:

I grew up in a small town too. One of my best friends was gay. He didn't come out until just a few years ago but you know, people around here still talk about it. It makes me sick becasue he's still the same great guy he has always been. He just happens to like guys too:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 12

And now we know that they will all be ok.



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Yep:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 11

I am shocked that by their parents disowning Bella and Alice, Rose and Emmett stepped up and chose to be there for them.



Author's Response:

I know!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 10

And so now I guess that the shit is about to fly!



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Er, yep

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 9

Are they going to try to stop Alice and Bella again?? I must say that this is a great story!!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 8

HAHA Mike and Tyler are together!!! That is funny. And now that I have read some of this story I am pissed off at Rose and Emmett you would think that they would at least try to support their sisters!



Author's Response:

Thanks:) I knwo about Rose and Em.....

Reviewer: reneesmay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 26

i love this chapter and the fact that the asshole is dead and that kate will hopfully be home for christmas and not have to worry about being hurt ever again so please update soon



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Thank you!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 26

What a fighter love this strong Bella update soon thanks....



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: VampireEv Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 26

god thats really sad but its really good. good job



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

How come? weird talking at the same time on both sites LOL



Author's Response:

lol, It is kind of strange! I tend to do mean things to Bella...I just can't help it though!

Reviewer: rhapsody Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2010 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 26

A lot of bad things seem to just target Bella, poor thing. Glad they pulled him off, and Kate gets to go back home



Author's Response:

I almost feel guilty....

Reviewer: VampireEv Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 25

oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1



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Thanks!

Reviewer: BearMistress Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 25

WOW... what a horrible thing to happen...

Very nice chapter addition. Cannot wait to see what happens next.



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Thanks!

Reviewer: Mana Lusk Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 25

Damn you know how to keep people wanting more..



Author's Response:

Thanks ;)

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 25

OMG!!!! UPDATE, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I will

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 25

Wow that was really good please update soon great cliffy so excited to see what happens next thanks....



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Thank you

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 25

i knew he'd come after her thankgod the knife went in his chest not bellas and she did a great job fighting him off



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Hey, thanks for all the reviews:) I enjoyed reading them all~

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 24

the jacob story was not cool i'm glad he's out of the picture, i suspect fun & games at the office party

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 23

wow bella really showed that alex guy, bet he comes after her men like that dont take well to the humiliation

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 22

oh i bet that dick of a husband is hitting her,

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 21

dinner should be intresting, i'm glad her parents are now on board just jaspers parents to speak to  now

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 20

lots of guests for xmas, i glad thgat her mum came round the plans thing was a really special thing to do

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 19

i'm amazed they ever leave the house lol

Reviewer: Gikkas Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 25

:0O   noooooooooooo

where is Jasper???????

update soon



Author's Response:

I will, I promse!

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 18

some goodnews on the parent front

Reviewer: reneesmay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 25

ok no fare you need to upedate this today please i new alex was going to show up sooner or latter i just didnt expect him to show up at there christmas party edward and jasper are going to beat the shit out of him along with charlie william and carlisle so please a thousand times update today



Author's Response:

thanks! I will update later:)

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 17

way to get it all out in the open rose and emmett in a three way, rennee has some serious issues she dislikes bella on the grounds that people told her what a great girl she is, thats messed up

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 16

how rich are the cullens in this? carlisle and esme are superb, the fact that charlie is a mess hoping that means he's sorry but he should have said something sooner

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 15

esme is just lovely looking out for her son and helping bella, but what's up with kate and alex? something is off there

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Date: 20 Mar 2010 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 14

hope kates not an unkind sister think they've had enough of that for a while, and alex should keep his eyes to himself, and another first in the bedroom both boys together, is the couples thing abandoned now? does bella still feel more for edward and alice for jasper?

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 13

i am not liking this mother at all, what is her father doing? when he should be telling his wife to stop it, but the four of them have eachother and that's enough i hope

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 12

i wonder how thanksgiving will go with edward parents? another first in the bedroom both boys together thats leaving a lasting image in my brain lol

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 11

jesus her mother was a total bitch, i'm glad that rose and emmett saw their errors and turned to support, they were shocked at the parents also,

Reviewer: Jdonovan09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 25

I notice a lot of ur drama in the story gets solved pretty quickly..ever thought of extending and getting more in depth with the angst?



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I'vwe been workingon it:)

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 10

the trip is already going bad and they haven't told them all the news yet, get the impression rose is the favourite daughter,

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 25

What the fuck the guy is crazy you dont fuck with Bella



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Iknow!

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 9

big declarations of love to eachother, i hope this works out as it could get quite complicated, now what do rose and emmett have to say?

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 8

being together is pushing all their boundries, jasper and edward enjoying each other now, mike and tyler turned out to be gay no wonder the girld had poot first times with them

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Evil....

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 7

rose and emmett are not prepared to try and understand, i like that they are learning more about eachother besides just sex



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Thank you.

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 6

if both sets of parents think like rose and emmett then they wont be very pleased about the relationship either, as its a full on think now will they keep it hidden so well?



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Thank you for all the review:)

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 5

dinner was intresting, and now they are going to all live together, that will make all the sex they have easier, 

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Date: 20 Mar 2010 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 4

so thats how bella and alice got together, rose and emmett seem a bit reserved and obviously not ok with how bella lives her life, carlisle sounds ok bet he thinks they are  just two regular couples though

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 3

and just like that they are dating, i cant wait to see how this panns out the four of them in a kind of poly relationship

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 2

way to meet again, now they all get to work together, i hope that not going to be awkward i wonder id the boys planned on seeing the girls again or they just said that? more please

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

oh wow, big wow,  found this on most recent and glad i gave it a read, although i remember next time not to read before work, it left me with very vivid imagery the whole drive there lol hoping to find out more about bella and alice, 

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