Date: 19 Mar 2010 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Glad to hear that!! I really do think that original Bella is sometimes too weak...
Anyway I remember mentioning sth about oiled-up boys... ***pouts***
Nah... I won't hold you on this... ;)
I can't have everything! ;)
Marianne
Author's Response:
Have some patience. The oiled up boys, and/or girs ;) will be coming! HEHEHEHE
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2010 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 24
loved it can't wait to see what happens next....
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2010 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 24
loved it can't wait to see what happens next....
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2010 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 24
i cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter now that jaspers family is finally hear i think that they are going to know that something is going on with all four of them because i have a feeling that they wont be able to keep there hands to there selfs at the party i just hope that they dont out them to there co workers so please let me know if i am right and please update soon
Author's Response:
I can assure you that they will not be hiding anything from J's parents ;)
Date: 19 Mar 2010 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 24
Their quite the supportive little unit :D
Author's Response:
Yes, they are:)
Date: 19 Mar 2010 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 24
Awesome! I forgot to thank you about the Judo thing!! i like it when badass Bella takes over! ;)
Marianne
Author's Response:
I am a big fan of a strong Bella:)
Date: 18 Mar 2010 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow I knew Alex was a creepy bastard to bad she didnt hurt him bad. Kate will be safe and Alex is going to try and get revenge on Bella??????
Author's Response:
I know:)
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 23
That bastard!! I am glad that he is dead!!
lol Who goes around with 2 thousand dollars? Renee!
And i thought that Alice was the materialistic in the Cullen clan... ;)
Till next time!
Kisses!
Marianne
Author's Response:
lol, thanks
Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 23
It's nice to see them all come together to save Kate :)
Author's Response:
thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 23
ok why do i have a feeling that we have not seen the end of alex that he is going to go after bella i cant wait to see that one she is going to beat the shit out of him i like this bella that is strong and confident so please let me know if i am right and please update soon
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yes, we are going to see Alex again.....
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wow that was great Go Bella so glad she kicked his ass loved it can't wait to see what happens next thanks....
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 17 Mar 2010 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 22
Someone really needs to deal with Alec, before he goes after Bella
Author's Response:
Thanks, hon:)
Date: 17 Mar 2010 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
Good for Renee & Bella, looks like the right direction to rebuild their relationship
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 20
I'm glad Renee is finally coming around to be the supportive mother
Author's Response:
Thank You
Date: 17 Mar 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 19
Are they always going to be a foursome?
Author's Response:
Yes, they will always be a foursome:)
Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 22
That prick Alex... I knew he was abusive.... For his sake don't let him near Mr C!! But WAIT!! NO DO let him near him.... And let ME have my dream fight.... ;)
I am addicted...
Kisses
Marianne
Author's Response:
lol, You can have him!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 22
Alex is a creepy bastard that beats his wife someone please knock the FUCKout of him
Author's Response:
Yes, he is.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 4
wow!!!
Author's Response:
lol
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 22
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 22
wow i hope they can stop edward from killing alex update when you can thanks....
Author's Response:
Thanks, hon
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2010 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 21
that was great can't wait to see what happens next update when you can thanks.....
Author's Response:
Thanks, hon:)
Date: 15 Mar 2010 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 20
i don't know how i feel about that... i wanted the bitch punished but bells was hurt so i guess it's better that way....
I wonder how Jazz'z parents will be...
M
Author's Response:
thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 20
loved it thanks for sharing update when you can....
Author's Response:
thanks,hon:)
Date: 15 Mar 2010 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 20
Thank goodness Renee came around now I dont have to get a hunting party together to go bet her ass. LOL
Author's Response:
lol
Date: 15 Mar 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 20
Aww its so nice that she finally came around. Wonderful chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 20
I am so happy to see Renee finally came to her senses. It will be fun to have the whole big family Christmas. I love the one on one with Alice and Bella. The four of them are good for each other. This is one of my most favorite stories I have read. I cant wait to see what will happen next.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 20
ok you got me on that one i never thought that renee would show up at bellas work to say she is sorry and that she is so suportive of her work i cant wait to see what the next chapter has in store for us this is going to be good to see jaspers parents reaction to there relatonship so please update soon and by the way you are my favorit author on this sight so far
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 15 Mar 2010 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'm so glad Renee has come around about everything. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 20
love it
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 19
What did they get them for Xmas??? I am dying here!! (I really want sth that has to do with bondage fantasy!!Just imagine it....)
M
Author's Response:
lol
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 19
that was really good so excited to see what happens next thanks....
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 19
haha now thats just mean lol. Loved the update!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 19
fuck shit best story eva!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 19
why do i have a feeling that they are going to be naughty at work today because they are horn dogs and cant get enuff i cant wait to see what happens next so please update soon
Author's Response:
lol
Date: 14 Mar 2010 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 19
This is what you call a whole lot of fucking going on and we like it. Shit just throw away my underware LOL
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow!!! That was soo HOT! I just can't find appropriate words right now))))
Thnx a lot!)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 Mar 2010 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 16
Esme & Carlisle are definitely awesome parents... curious about Kate and Alec though
Date: 13 Mar 2010 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 18
At least Bella's dad is supportive! Renee calmed a little, maybe she can eventually come around!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 18
I don't really think that Renee should be let off the hook... It's just not right ya know!
Either accept it or not...
Anyway I liked that she has Charlie back!
Kisses
M
Author's Response:
I agree. I will just say that nothing I put in a story is there for no reason;)
Date: 13 Mar 2010 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 5
Rose & Em need to relax... as for the foursome... I'd stick to the couple only releasing in their mates... would be weird to get pregnant with the other persons mate LOL
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2010 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 18
How sweet. I am glad they have more support now then they did before Thanksgiving. I cant wait to see what is going to happen next with these four. I am sure more drama is ahead because life is never easy. This is a wonderful chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2010 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 17
I am glad to see Charlie standing up for his girls. Now they just need to get through Renee's thick skull and they can have their family back and even bigger now with the addition of Jasper and Edward along with Carlisle and Esme. Awesome job. I just hope Bella can get through her mom before Renee pushes both her daughters out of her life completely.
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2010 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 16
I am so happy they have at least one set of parents standing behind them and not judging them because they all four fell in love with each other. I am wondering if Charlie is going to be added to that group as well. Great job.
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2010 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 18
loved it very much can't wait for more thanks
Author's Response:
Thanks, hon:)
Date: 13 Mar 2010 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 18
At least most of them have came around and Renee kind of has also I would still like to bitch slap her hard.
Author's Response:
Oh, trust me! It's all coming together nicely *chuckles evilly*
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 17
i knew it charlie is the one to come around frist i love it and i cant wait to see what renee says now that she is alone with bella why do i have a feeling that she is going to try to kill her or beat the shit out of her one or the other is going to happen so please update soon
Date: 12 Mar 2010 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yeah me too! I really thought for a moment the when the door opens we will she Renee with a bloody knife yelling over a dead Charlie "I killed him I Killed him cause he wanted to accept his daughter" ***chuckles***
Incredible isn't it? There is always somebody that understands you!!
I am glad the Mr C took it so well!
Kisses
Marianne
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
LOVED IT CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT BELLA WILL DO NEXT UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN SO EXCITED.....
Date: 12 Mar 2010 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 17
wow one down 3 more to go!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 17
yay.. new chapter!!!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 17
Renee better wise up and stop being such a baby not getting the attention wah wah. I think Renee needs a little gang banging and I bet she would like it to invite the church ladys to watch that is not nice sorry.
Author's Response:
lol, thanks for that visual!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 16
aww cant wait to see what they say to them !
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 16
i love this story and cant wait to see what happens when renee comes face to face with esme this is going to get good i have a feeling that esme and carlisle are going to wind up with three new daughters and a new son i think the only parent that is going to be a part of there lives after this talk is charlie i cant wait to see what is said so please update soon
Author's Response:
Thanks, hon:)
Date: 12 Mar 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 16
Very understanding I would want them in my corner.
Author's Response:
Me too
Date: 12 Mar 2010 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 16
ME TOO.. wonder where i can sign up to be adopted lol
Author's Response:
lo, if I find out, I'll be sure to let you know!
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 16
why can't i have parents like that loved it update when you can thanks.....
Author's Response:
I know! Thanks:)
Date: 11 Mar 2010 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 16
I have fallen in love with this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 11 Mar 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
I agree with you, i so want Carlisle and Esme as my parents! Such a nice chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks, hon:)
Date: 11 Mar 2010 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 15
Hearing it again made me sad but I guess Esme had to know! I am glad that she understands... Will Mr C be the safe way? I wonder and hope so!
M
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 14
I wonder what is up with Kate and Alex. There is something not right the two of them and I just cant place it. Great work like always.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 15
I am so glad Esme is in her corner as well. They will always know that she will be there for them. I love this chapter and cant wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 11 Mar 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 15
nice chapter... but it went too fast! need more!
Author's Response:
I promise more is coming!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 15
Aww, i feel so bad for her. Stupid parents, they should love her no matter what or they don't deserve her.
Author's Response:
I agree!
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 15
loved it very much can't wait to see what happens next ya.....
Author's Response:
Thanks, hon:-)
Date: 11 Mar 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 15
Bellas Mom is fucked in the head that is what her problem is. Glad Esme knows . What is up with the perv Alex????
Author's Response:
lol, Esme is awesome!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 14
Uh oh, what is going on with Alex and Kate? Are they going to treat Edward just like Bella's parents treated her?
Author's Response:
Just wait and see:)
Date: 10 Mar 2010 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 14
I wonder why Eddie-boy is soo mad...Scratch that... i do susspect that Alex is the threat... hehe is it going to be a fight?? ****smiles dreamily and drools day-dreaming about Edward and Jasper covered in oil and sweat fighting with Alex(which in my mind is alec...)****
Kisses
Marianne!
Author's Response:
lol, Thank You for that visual:) It made my entire morning!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
Lol a very good chapter, although i am a little confused about the ending but i'm sure if i read it again i'll understand.
Author's Response:
It will all make more since in a few chapters:)
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2010 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 14
loved it update when you can thanks.....
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 10 Mar 2010 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 14
Hot bit with Edward and Jasper!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 10 Mar 2010 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 14
huh? cant wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 10 Mar 2010 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 14
what is up with Alex????
Author's Response:
You'll find out soon:)
Date: 10 Mar 2010 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
aww ... what an emotional chapter. Nicely done
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 13
GO Rose you tell her about her self!!!! , thier mother is a total tight assed bitch!!! im so glad Rose has done a turn around do i detect another couple being added to the happy 4sme any time soon lol
as aways keep spreading the magic xxx cant wait for the next update ;-)
Author's Response:
lol, I can assure you that nobody esle will be joining the foursome ;)
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
I like this chapter hun, even though its not a normal relationship between the 4 of them , there is something soo tender about about them all .
Which makes it acceptable lol
as always keeping spreading the magic hun x
Author's Response:
Thank you, hon:)
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 11
MMMM OKAY i take it back about Rose and attached the devil spawn bitch title to Renee instead what a heartless bitch grrrr my mum always favoured my sister over me too and still does so i can really sympathise with your Bella xx
As always keep writing hun x
Author's Response:
Thanks:0)
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 10
Awww that Rose is such a fucking kill joy and self righteous bitch in this story and i really just wanna kill Emmet instead of fucking him like normal lmao xx
as always keep wrting your magic hun
Author's Response:
I know!
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 9
Really liked this one would love to be Bella or Alice in this story.... well maybe i would prefer to be Bella lol gotta love Edward the most !!! xx
Author's Response:
Me too, honey, me too!
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
lol i like this chapter too , was suprised but entertained to hear that you put Mike and Taylor together lol , keep writing hunny as always xx
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 6
Everyone should have the chance to wake up like that in the morning lol, wow that chapter made me really hot im off to fuck my husband good and hard like the dirty minx that he says i am lol x
Author's Response:
lol, thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 5
MMM this chapter was a def improvement on the last one hunny, really enjoyed this one, lets just say my husband is gonna get very lucky tonight i just have to remember not to call him Edward lmao xx
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
lol i liked this chapter it was funny, and also quite tame compared to the first chapter but i m sure you are just teasing us and it will get hot and stemay agaon very soon lol x keep the good work up hun x
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
lol i saw that one coming, but cant wait to read the next chapter regardless x
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
WOW i mean Fucking WOW what an opening chapter!!! so fucking hot i cant wait to read the next one im totally hooked!!
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 09 Mar 2010 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 13
For fucks sake! Does she ever stops??? How could she?? She hurted both Bella and Rose in a matter or hours!! come on!
Anyway the love there is palpable! When Mr C and Esme are going to know about the four of them?
Kisses
M
Author's Response:
Very soon:) Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 13
loved it very nuch can't wait to see what happens next thanks....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 09 Mar 2010 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
Yay for Rose!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
Man this chapter ends sad but I am so happy to see Rose sticking up for Bella. Great job and I cant wait to see what will be thrown at them next.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 13
love it
Author's Response:
Thanks:-)
Date: 09 Mar 2010 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 13
So I fuckin hate Renee and I love Rose and I feel Bellas pain so sad.
Author's Response:
I'm jut going to say ditto:) Thanks for the review:)
Date: 09 Mar 2010 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
wow i hate renee! cant wait for an update!!
Author's Response:
Me too, right now:)
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2010 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 12
I am glad Edward and Jasper are there for both of the girls. They are going to need the support now more then ever since both sets of parents want nothing to do with them. I am glad Rose and Emmett are trying to work on getting use to the four of them together. I have a feeling these four are in it for the long hault. I wonder what Thanksgiving will bring to the four of them plus Rose and Emmett. Great job and i cant wait for more. Oh and by the way the sex scene was hot! Every girls fantasy.
Author's Response:
Thanks, hon:0 ) I know it's my fantasy!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 12
That was what I call i nice(!) way to forget reality ;)
Great!
M
Author's Response:
Lol, I wouldn't mind forgetting like that either:)
Date: 08 Mar 2010 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
What a fucking bitch! Never been born??!! is she a mother for fucks sake??
Anyway... Glad that Em and rose came to their sences! It was about time!!
M
Author's Response:
I know !
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 11
I am glad to see Rose and Emmett have come around and are trying to expect what is going on with the four of them. Hate when parents judge their own children. Then just throw them out like they were trash. I have a feeling they will regret that one day soon. Great job.
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 08 Mar 2010 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 12
FUCK that is all that comes to mind and I need a cigeretr
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 11
Looking forward to how their lives together develop. And of course, more sex!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 06 Mar 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow nice chapter addition very emotional i'm glad Em and Rose finally came around.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)