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Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 23

Love vamp stories. Loved read this one. Thank you.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 21

Sweet. Not saying anything about Jerkob. He's such a little prick

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 20

Good fight scene

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 19

I like how you've twisted BD into this storyline as well as all the associated characters.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 18

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Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 16

Oh!!!

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 15

Good one

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 14

Good chapter. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 13

This really has turned into a compelling read. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 12

Enjoyable read. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 11

Oops. Looks like he caught her afterall. 🤓

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 10

Gees. She can't catch a break at the moment. Good chapter. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 9

Lol. You know I'm so hypocritical. If canon Jerkob came out and said 'she's mine' that would be so repulsive and icky. But when Eddie says that well let's just say there is a lot of swooning happening around here. LOL

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 7

Oh. Didn't expect Eleazar. Edward is so sweet. Confused but sweet. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 6

Good backstory and Edward is always Hawt

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 5

This is really interesting. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 4

Oh. Wow. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

Nice mystery developing. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2016 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 2

Nice one. Thanks

Reviewer: kopec82 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2016 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 23

Diferent I like it

Reviewer: jimmy dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2015 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 9

Nice..Edward..

Reviewer: jimmy dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2015 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 8

Wow..I really love...this vampire.. Bella..awesome..

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2015 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 23

awesome story ;) i loved her powers ;) how come they had silver rings? wouldn't platinum be stronger?  also their father wasn't a minister? ;D

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 23

This was areally good story, regardless of it being your first vampire tale! All the elements of a good story were there and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 22

Quite a lovely way to say goodbye, even though it took three hundred years to achieve!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 21

Such a soul-satisfying ending to that battle! The wolves are pretty happy Bella didn't end the world, too. I think she's rather glad about that herself!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 20

It's with a sense of gratitude that read the scene where Bella dealt with that nasty little bitch, Jane! Aro was a ower hungry deluded fool!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 19

Hope there's enough help for Bella to defeat Aro and his army!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 18

I think it was the perfect time for them to totally complete their bond this way! I'm betting it will make them even stronger now they are truly one.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 17

Whew, that was close! I didn't think Edward was going to be able to talk sense to Bella for a minute!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 16

Bella seems to have tapped into Alice's powers, and witnessed what could happen when the Volturi come for her. What I don't understand is why them coming causes Bella to kill her family? It makes no sense!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 15

I really like the rapport between Bella and Rose. This isn't the usual dynamic for those two, and it's a nice change. I'm thinking Rose is on the right track, also. Bella may have all that power and ability, but it doesn't mean she has to end the world!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 14

This is such a poor time for Carlisle to stick his nose into Bella's love life! Oh wait, maybe it's Jasper?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 13

Okay, now I have to hear what this prophecy is all about!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 12

It must be a real burden, to have that much guilt weighing down your soul. Maybe acknowledging Edward's love for her, and her's for him, will help ease that burden.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 11

Appears that Edward is a calming influence on Bella's enormous powers. It's progress that she's finally admitted to at least thinking she's in love with Edward.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 10

Now what do the wolves want with the vampires? It's good that Carlisle and Bella discussed Edward and it's good that she and Eleazar cleared the air a bit.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 9

Now we know why the brothers want Bella. Hope to heaven they never find a way to get her!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 8

Eleazar knows how to understand powers, so he must be telling the truth about Bella! That was a kind of devestating story, alright. Don't blame Bella for the guilt she bears.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 7

Well, obviously no love lost between Bella and Eleazar. Now UI'm curious to know what went down in Africa! It seems to mean an awful lot to Bella.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 6

Maybe now they will figure it out! Hearing how Bella destroyed a large newborn army, I'm beginning to see why even the Volturi don't mess with her!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh goody, now we get to hear the history pf Jasper and Bella! Can't Bella or Edward figure out what's gouing on between them? I never thought vampires were that clueless!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 4

Just had a suspicion that shapeshifters might be involved with that uneasy feeling Bella had! She kind of seems to enjoy school more than she thought she would.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 3

I wonder if it has something to do with Edward?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 2

I thought this history would be compelling, and I was right! Off to be compelled some more!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

I already like that you made Bella and Carlisle siblings! Their's must be a really interesting backstory, especially if it's been three hundred years since they have seen each other! I know I'm going to want to know why and how Jasper and Bella are together, too!

Reviewer: inlovewithSethPaulJasper Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 23

I'm not a big Edward/Bella fan but I really did injoy this story. I really liked the different layout of the background of the story and how you switched it up BIG time. I can't wait to read more of your stories. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2012 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 18

YIPPIE. Houston we have ignition!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2012 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 15

Finally Rose and Bella! Friends, sisters not in battle even.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2012 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 6

okay here we go. This is their problem. They are attracted to each other and are fighting it.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 23

Excellent loved it.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 9

:-) cute even if she scares him !

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

sister this is good.

Reviewer: LiquidTopazEyes330 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2011 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 23

that was an amazingly original story with one of the most beautiful endings!!!

Reviewer: newmommyak Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 23

I like it. I think you have potential. :)

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 23

This is the first story of yours I've read, and I really liked it! I chose a vampire one as they are usually my favorite, and I was glad to read you plan on writing more. However, I enjoyed your writing so much, and you have so many other stories already written that sound great- I can't wait to start reading another! Thanks so much for the great writing! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Rockmamaoff Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 23

What a fantastic story.  You created such an interesting and unique story.  I love the friendship between Jasper and Bella and making Bella and Carlisle siblings was very creative.  Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: jessie183 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 23

cool story

Reviewer: moewerts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 23

absolutly loved it! started it late last night... finished it this morning! great read



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Sunnycarolina Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 23

very good story!!!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Sunnycarolina Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 18

wootwoot!!!! Finally :)



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: EvernightressIris Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2010 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 23

Oh my god that was an AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Sunnycarolina Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2010 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 10

crap crap crap I have to go to work......ugh!!! I wanna read on!!!!



Author's Response:

Didn't I tell you that I was taking this down in like five minutes???? Ok, I''m kidding:) We'll be here when you come back:)

Reviewer: Sunnycarolina Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

so far so good :]



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 23

Awww   Thanks for taking the time to write.



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I put up three new stories yesterday that I am working on, if you want to take a look at them:)

Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2010 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 23

What a wonderful story!  I read it all in one day!  Great plot!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 23

*whistle* Bravo! Bravo! *whistle*

Loved it, and I can't wait for the next one!! Woot Woot!



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Thank you, hon:)

Reviewer: dax Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 23

That was a great story thank you. This is the first Bella Carlisle story that has actually made snes and i greatly enjoyed it thank you. ANd any story that kills Aro get a plus.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 23

OMG  *blinks rapidly to clear tears*

I loveyou so much BB.  This story is pure perfection.  Out of all of your stories I have read (which is all but 2 now) this is my favorite.

So beautiful.  There isnt a dry eye reading this story, I guarantee it.

Love it, love you BB!!!!

*tackleglomphugglesquishies you*



Author's Response:

Thank you:) It was certainly different and it was a challenge but I enjoyed it alot!

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 23

Well done!  I lovedthe entire story and that was a perfect ending.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 23

I really loved it it had it all .i can't wait to see what you will write next as always it will be worth it and i can't wait .



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 22

awww   liked the "family reunion" there at the end



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 22

OMG, beautiful BB!!!  They really needed that.  She and Carlisle can let go of the past and concentrate on the future.  Wonderfully written dear.

 

I missed you yesterday!!  *hugs*



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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 21

Wow, touch and go for a minute.  She is so powerful.  At least the Volturi are gone

*sighs with relief*

Awesome!  Loved it!

*hugs*



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 21

Ah-mazing!! Ah-some chapter! Best one yet! The fight, the lemon... the end of the chapter...

LOVED IT!!!



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 21

good chapter



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: Elmo_is_my_bitch109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 21

*sobbing with joy*



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 21

sweet!!!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 21

awesome

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2010 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 21

woo hoo  e1 is good



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: Elmo_is_my_bitch109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 20

HOLY COW SHIT THAT WAS AWESUUUUUUM!!!!! please write more PLEASE write more!!!!! make it quick cuz im dying over here!!!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 20

HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow! I cant believe that!!  Aro was so stupid.

He should have known better. 

Im trembling slightly BB, I really cant wait til theres more :)

*hugs*

 



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: bellawitch75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 20

Please don't kill anyone of our faves. Nice chap BTW



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 20

yikes..hope they're okay!



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: Elmo_is_my_bitch109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 17

GOD DAYUUUUM.....thats all i can say.



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: Elmo_is_my_bitch109 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 14

yes i can say awkward and a few other things like " HOLY SHIT "



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: beccasmind Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 20

She sure is powerful.  She has expoloded with power before and it did not hurt anyone before only cracked things lets that is the case again.  Maybe it was a shield explosion again...........

 

Bella is kickass



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 20

YIKES!!!!!!!



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 20

hopefully everyone is just knocked out.



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: Cullenbabe1231 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2010 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 19

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH



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:)

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2010 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 19

O.S.M evil cliffy,lol, please don't leave us hanging for too long,excellent ch. .c.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 19

WOW, OMG the battle is on!



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2010 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 19

*dabs eyes to clear tears*

*tries to catch breath*

BB... I cannot express how much this chapter meant to me.

*starts to cry happy tears again*

Peter... and I...

im the same chapter...

Thank you BB, thank you so much!!! *clears throat and gets down to business*

Oh my goodness, I hope she can do this without killing everyone!!!

Poor Bella.  She finally gets laid then BAM!

Aro get jealous and wants some.

Creepy old fart!

 



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Just don't let Charlotte catch you. I hear she is a real bitch ;)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 19

yikes!!!!!



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 19

of course she will.    If she kills chelsea first, maybe everyone else will come to their senses



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:) Thanks!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 18

awwww for meadow sex



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Thanks :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 18

I have to say, this chapter turned out quite nicely :)

You Rock, dear BB!!!!

Sweet ass lemonade as well, if I must say so... and I must, I absolutely must *giggles*

See ya nexy update BB!!

 

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 18

Very nice chappie.  :)



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 18

Yeah, they finally made love.  I think it was very romantic and fuckhot.  I am curious to see who shows up on the Cullen's side of the fight with Aro. 

Thank you for the update.  How long do you intend on the story being?



Author's Response:

I have through Chapter 21 done and there will be three more. SO not long.

Reviewer: Onelove3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 18

:-) you did good.

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Thanks:)

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