Date: 12 Dec 2013 2:48 AM Title: Never Gonna Be Alone
I must say that I was very pleased with the fact that you left them as a threesome, I have read many stories where they write the ending as a twosome and in following story make Bella choose the other one. I hate that, I love that you left it alone. I think it was a great ending, I am almost afraid to read part 2 if you decide to change it.
Date: 20 Dec 2011 2:33 PM Title: Sex on the Beach Outtake 4
i loved this story..i started reading it this weekend and its the first fic iv read that has potrayed jacob and paul in a positive light i just cudnt stop reading till i was up to date with the sequal bt i jst had to leave my review abt how gud it was! From heartbreaking to fantastic same as the sequal so far...great job
Date: 06 Jul 2011 1:09 AM Title: Epilogue: Never Grow Up
Cute ending for a great story, and I like the name 'Jalayla' I have never heard it before, it's pretty.
Oh and and FYI note: babies don't start showing facial expressions (ex. Smiling) until they are at least a month old. That's just the minimum. It can take up to two months before a baby starts smiling.
Date: 28 Apr 2011 6:06 AM Title: Never Gonna Be Alone
yay she choose both of them!!! so happy about that. i totally agree this is the best way to go as they all work so well together.
trying to figure out what the hell kind of name you are gonna use to to put together paul, jacob,and bella?!?! jacaulla? i don't know! heehee
Date: 27 Apr 2011 3:25 PM Title: Lest We Forget
Well shit! What the fuck is gonna happen now?! Heehee! I sure hope leah gets her beatdown! And now I am wondering who bella will end up with? For a while I thought you would just go poly, then you said paul, but now it looks like jake? I just don't know!!!!
Date: 27 Apr 2011 12:27 PM Title: Let Me Go
what the hell?!?!
#1 bella has had her heart broken so her wanting to flip it around and do it to jake is fucked up.
#2 leah is gonna get a beat down when the trueth comes out, emily too.
#3 it is so not fair that bella is gonna use the boys against eachother.
Date: 27 Apr 2011 5:43 AM Title: Just That Sexy
ok i am kinda confused. in the restraunt chapter bella knew paul was a bartender, in the intro chapter paul said he was a bartender, now here he says he is am editor, waht the fuck?!?!?! what am i missing here? i hope we find out soon cause i am confused.
the one on one sex was fun and they are all slipping even deeper as time goes by...
Date: 23 Apr 2011 12:31 PM Title: Drama Sex and Confrontation
well the boys were right it was a good thing they found her in the truck and not someone else! glad to see paul stand up to leaha, she deserved it, maybe now she will think twice when she needs to vent.
thanks for all the reviews. :)
Date: 20 Nov 2010 4:32 AM Title: Sex on the Beach Outtake 4
Omg I loved the ending of this!!! I am a little nervous because the second story sounds like its full of angst and I just want them all to be happy lol is Paul definitely going to be the father of the second child? I really hope so! Cant wait for the next story!
:D iam glad you liked it! thanks!
lots of angst in the second one in deed. drama drama drama.
Date: 20 Nov 2010 4:29 AM Title: Sex on the Beach Outtake 4
Loved the update.
I am afraid of the sequel though.
Unless it shows Tanya burning at the stake.
Then I will peruse it.
I really really really dont want this 4some to dissapate.
:D thanks for reading hon! and dont be afraid. its just a little drama.
Date: 10 Nov 2010 3:47 PM Title: Sex on the Beach Outtake 1
I love this story and cant wait for the sequel but am excited for the rest of the outtakes! I was hoping Bella would choose them both. If I had the option that would be my choice lol I was wondering if you always planned on her choosing both of them or if you just sort of fell in love with them both while writing the story and changed your mind?
I always planned for her to choose both. :) now picking the baby daddy is a whole different story lol i'll explain more on that next week.
Date: 10 Nov 2010 12:11 AM Title: Sex on the Beach Outtake 1
I loved this outtake. I hope Paul reaalizes now he is needed and wanted and wont take off again.
I want to wait till the sequel for the paternity. It will bring more anticipation for the sequel and I want that more than wanting to know paternity. I want to see Tanya have Karma bight her in the ass.
Yes, I am evil... but only when it comes to Tanya and Victoria.
LOL thanks for the review hon.
Date: 07 Nov 2010 3:41 AM Title: Never Gonna Be Alone
VERY happy with the reunion of our trio. Knew they'd both be thrilled at being a daddy. Despite it all, I do feel bad for Edward. While he is an ass for how he treated Bella, no one deserves a bitch like Tanya. How she thinks she's gonna get out of this fine mess, I cannot imagine.
:D thank youuuuuu.
ooo i dont feel bad for edward at all. he's yucky. LOL
Date: 06 Nov 2010 9:43 AM Title: Never Gonna Be Alone
Loved the last chapter. I love that she chose both, you are in the right about that. I am a big fan of the Triad fics :)
I still wish Tanya would fall off a cliff or just dissappear... I really hate her.
Loved it!! :)
Thank you! :D
lol tanya can't disappear yet.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 6:11 AM Title: Never Gonna Be Alone
LOVING IT!!! I LOVED THAT SHE CHOSE BOTH. I really hope that it continues that way. So what if it isn't normal. Does every relationship have to be? Sometimes you can't explain what the heart wants or needs... Great job.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 6:05 AM Title: Never Gonna Be Alone
I LOVE YOU!!! o_o
Here's your combo 1, A sizzling sandwich of Paul and Jake. thank you for coming, please come again!!! OMG Yessss!!!! she chose bothhhh!!!! -dances around happily- I love you more and more with each chapter!!! I'm so happy. and the guys are THE best. I envy Bella SO much!!!!
I can't wait for the baby shower part and the epilogue and the sequel.
And Bella Jr will be the happiest baby alive!!! And the cutest baby!
I just seriously hope that tanya's baby isn't Paul's or Jacob's after some drunk loving. I don't care if its any other guy but if its theirs... -twitch, twitch-. Anyway, i'll let you do whatever you were doing before reading the review, just wanted to emphasize how much i love you for not making her choose one or the other and for putting up this chapter and this story and everythinggg!!!!! *-*
i LOVE THE COMBO. thank you so much! :D
i can't wait for the updates next week either. and yes the new baby is going to be simply adorable.
tanya's baby is not paul's or jacob's. its someone else's! ;) ;)
Date: 31 Oct 2010 3:43 AM Title: Restarant
OK! Comming from a TEAM EDWARD fan. It killed me to see Edward to get his ass kicked by Paul. (yeah, it hurt a lot) This is the first and only story I've every read that Bella was not with Edward. And I am enjoying it. Can't wait for more chaps..
Tanya is always a B*$#h in every story I read. I say: Bella slap that B*^$h. lol
Thanks for reading lol. beating edward up didn't bother me at all. LOL but i am glad you are enjoying it.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 2:06 AM Title: Drama, Love and Lationships
I am sooo glad that the boys are back. Giddy with anticipation at their discovering Bella's 'secret'!!
Does Bella really even have to choose? It would certainly be a difficult road, but they all love each other and have this totally fucked up history together...
How the hell can Tanya hide from Edward that she isn't pregnant? and how does she expect to 'hide' the baby? Even if she leave it for adoption, Edward will NOT go for that. He'll fight and claim his parental rights were violated. Dumn bitch!
Grateful to know there will be a sequel. There is so much of this story left to be learned.
Love the totally fucked up history line.
But Bella does have to choose. However, you never know WHAT she will choose. Just hang in there and see. :)
Date: 29 Oct 2010 12:05 AM Title: Drama, Love and Lationships
OMG OMG OMG OMG... when I saw that Paul was going back to Forks I had this hunch that he'd run into Jacob in the airport and I was right!!!!! :D
But OMG OMG OMG OMGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!! CLIFFY!! T_T... I want to know what Bella will doooooo!!!! I NEED to know what Bella will do!!! And I hope she chooses Combo No. 1... Paul and Jacob.. I don't want her to choose the single pieces. They are way too adorable to be rejected!!! I mean... just look at those cute faces!!
And FFS I HATE Tanya, seriously, the only character I hate more than her is Leah. But OMG OMG OMG!! I need to know how she will react to having her two gorgeous boys back and I need to know how she'll tell them about the pregnancy!!
I can't wait until your next chapter, you seriously have me on the edge. Did I mention I LOVE this story with all my heart and is like... one of the only stories I look forward to having update alerts every week?? Well I do. I love it so freaking much, thank you for writing it! :D
No pressure on updating though XD :D I can wait a couple more weeks... I think.... :)
lol i've given worse cliffies.
I agree with what you've said. and you only have to wait a week for Bella's big choice.
Big hugs! :)
Date: 28 Oct 2010 5:41 PM Title: Drama, Love and Lationships
Wow. Awesome, the boys are back! Now, get them home!!
I want Tanya to die... slowly and painfully. I really hate her. -_-
:D thanks for reading hon.
Aww we can't lose tanya yet! she's our little villan! lol
Date: 26 Oct 2010 6:16 PM Title: Wait For Me
Waaah pçease don't killl me like that, I thought you had already posted a new chapter T-T
I don't know if I've ever reviewed you back at fanfiction.net, buuut if I haven't I wanted to let you know I just love it!
You indeed are an amasing writer. I wish I could be like you some day.
I want to know what happends next, pleeease update soon? I beg you.
lol sorry and thanks for replying hon. :) hugs
new chapter this week.
Date: 26 Oct 2010 5:21 PM Title: Wait For Me
OMG you have had me hooked on this story since the first chapter!!! I read it on Fanfiction.net. I am glad i got to read the rest. this is a great story can't wait to find our what happens next. I also liked it of face book.
:D thanks hon! :) you rock!
Date: 25 Oct 2010 9:09 PM Title: Wait For Me
Sigh. Is it sad to say that I read this on fanfiction and just had to read it again? I lovee this story to pieces and I miss it on Fanfiction. Grumble, mutter, sigh. Love you anyway Cam! Can you tell me how the format to upload a story works here? Thanks!
Lol not sad at all. :) i miss posting over there too but thanks for following me here. HUGS! :)
To upload a story you have to place go to accoutn info, hit manage stories and paste JUST your stories summary there. THEN you go to manage stories again and add chapters. there are three sections. oen for an author note. one for the chapter and one for an ending author note.
if you need more help let me know.
Date: 25 Oct 2010 6:39 PM Title: Sex on the Beach
I think I've just become a stalker... I'm following you here, JBnP and still on ff.net.. Haha! xD So I guess I'll be "stalking" you for a while.. Especially since I like your idea for your new Paul/Bella story! :D
thanks for following me. :) i appreciate it. :D hugs!
The Paul Bella story wont start until next year but i am excited for it. :D
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:17 AM Title: Goodbye
Ok, what can I say, first of all, hey, I am a fan of you since you were in fanfiction.net. I can't believe that they made you erase the story, truthfully I find it BS, considering that most of the other M-rated stories have lemons as well and they are still up in the site, but whatever... their loss.
I definitely LOVE your story, and it breaks my heart to think that she will have to choose between one of them, since both of them are the sweetest ever.
I got so mad at Paul it wasn't even funny, well... no, actually it was, my parents were asking me why I was yelling at the computer and I just couldn't spare anything more than a glare and myself resuming the scolding to Paul.
And I'm SO glad Jacob finally made Leah leave, god I hated that b*tch. Buuut it annoys me that he doesn't notice that Bella loves him too!!! Urgh and the fact that Jacob and Paul are so stubborn and don't want to answer their phones annoys me even more, I mean Bella is at home PREGNANT with one of them and they're away... I mean urrrghh! But I love it so much, I can't even begin to find words to explain every reaction you've gotten outn of me with this story.
I just adore it, keep up the GREAT work :D
Thank you so much for following me over hon. :) i hate that they made me move it too. its caused me a great deal of stress this weekend. sigh.
Lol I'm frustrated with the boys too. but dont' make guesses about the endings. You never know what might happen. ;)
Date: 25 Oct 2010 2:49 AM Title: Sex on the Beach
Just wanted to let you know I have followed you over, you probably knew that already with all the comments I have left you. Looking forward to your next chapter. Hope all is well. Here is some wolfy goodness just for being awesome (we can share and take them off of Bella's hands :-P )
Thanks for following me over honey. :) big hugs! :D i think you can use your account here to get updates on when i post my stories. just go to account info and edit preferences then select that you want the stories you favorite to email you when a new chapter is posted. but you might have to fave this one first lol
Date: 25 Oct 2010 2:21 AM Title: Goodbye
Followed from fanfic and Im glad you found a new home for this story I would follow it anywhere! Its dick what FF did but Ive had a few other stories get pulled that Ive saved to read again later. I love the story and cant wait for the updates! Does this site tell you when new chaps post like fanfic? I read a lot on my phone at work and I dont know if this site has a mobile like they did... hope so or other wise its gonna be a lot of late nights trying to read up!!!!
Hi hon and thanks for following me! :)
If you open your account here and click on account info and edit preferences you can select to be updated once you have favorited a story. :D let me know if you have any trouble.
I might update everyone at fanfiction.net and direct them here when i post a new chapter if it doesnt work. :/
hugs hon! :)
Date: 24 Oct 2010 10:42 AM Title: Goodbye
Hi just to let you know I've followed you from the other place (like some creepy stalker) because I can't not know how this ends.
lol i love that you followed me. at least some of my readers will stick by me. :) new chapter this week.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 9:48 AM Title: Goodbye
Hi:) Really, this is what SUCKs with ff.net. It gets me so mad that there are people sitting out there reporting good stories because they have nothing better to do. But good thing you could move the story over here and not have to take it down completely. And by the way, you don't have to be a member here to read it, but it turns out you have to be a member to review... Do you know if there are any way to get 'story alerts' on this site? I just registrered now, and I'm hopeless at these things:P
I love your story, please keep posting it! This only sucks for ff.net to loose their best and most popular stories. Keep it up, you're doing a great job with it. Can't wait to see what happens:)
if you sign into your account info it and go to edit preferences you check a box that will send you reviews on whatever story you favorited :)
Date: 24 Oct 2010 8:36 AM Title: Sex on the Beach
Sorry you had such a rough time posting your story. The way the fanfic nazis are patroling that site and getting stories pulled is an outrage! I enjoyed your story and look forward to the conclusion. :)
Thanks so much honey. i will post a new chapter this week.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 8:07 AM Title: Sex on the Beach
It was a total bummer that you had to take down this story from ff. I'm a huge fan of this and I'm glad you've posted it on here. I signed up just for this story :) I can't wait until you update. Looking forward to it. xx J