[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2011 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
loving it
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2011 11:22 PM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
very very interesting
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2011 7:15 PM Title: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...
I cant wait to see what happens next. Poor Bella and all her conflict
Date: 26 Feb 2011 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Great chapter! I hope all this extreme drama doesn't "damage" Bella or make her question her desire for submission. Talk about whiplash! Cannot wait for the next installment!
Date: 26 Feb 2011 10:32 AM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
Hey ! Thanks for updated I love this story very much so ! But why is Edward so harsh with little B in this chapt. ? he likes her, no !!!
Date: 26 Feb 2011 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
ahahaha poor Edward. Your a f#cking what?? classic. cant wait for the next chappie
Date: 25 Feb 2011 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
OH MY! Bet Edward didn't see that coming....
Date: 25 Feb 2011 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
I know you did not just leave us hanging. That was mean. LOL!!! I know you will make it up to us with another wonderful chapter....SOON!!!!!!!
I understand Edward wanting answers but he seems just a little mean with the way he talked to Bella. I was a little surprised by that. At first I could not figure out why Bella safe worded. But right before you revealed it to us I thought about her being a virgin and I was hoping that was the reason.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.....SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 25 Feb 2011 4:06 PM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
Great chapter - funny, lots of tension, then the cliffie!! I'm breathing a little easier now - time for these two to get it all out there so they can move on (on to the playroom!!!)
Date: 25 Feb 2011 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
haha
please dont let edwards reaction be a really bad one.
let him pop that cherry in a really nice and gentle way.
cant wait for more
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2011 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
OMG! I can't believe you are leaving us after she dropped the V-bomb!!! I swear I damn near fell off my chair when she safe worded on him. That was so fucking intense.! UGH!!!! I am on my knees begging, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
Date: 25 Feb 2011 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Holy Hell! What a monster of a chapter. I don't think you left an emotion unturned! I can not wait for your next chapter!
Date: 25 Feb 2011 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Very un lawlerly like behavior not being able to spit out what you got to say, he he.
Looking forward to E's reaction to the "V" news. I wonder how long she's going to forget to mention that she's not married? And what's with no contract?? Not very great Dom like behavior there.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
love it.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
What i wouldn't give to have seen Edward's face when Bella tells him she's a virgin! Oooh to be a fy on that wall...
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
wonderful
Date: 24 Feb 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Jesus how can you leave us there, you are mean, Hope you update next week, please?? From Lisbon, Portugal a good week for you.
Luisa
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
The bomb dropped. o.O
That was unexpected for Edward, but they are finally together (it took them long enough). Not really together but on their best way to be a couple. I guess there is more talk needed in this situation.
In my opinion a little more talking about their situation would have been better but I guess it will be in the next chapter, because they were a little bit interrupted with the blow-job and their passion/lust for each other ;)
Perhaps in the future can Edward forgive Alice for her meddling ways. She had good intentions.
Can't wait for the next adventure of these two.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
omg that was so awesome i am glad that he gets to be her first and that he can fall in love with her also i really want them together as a coupkle and as DOM/SUB BRING THEM BOTH ON ALSO LET ALICE AND THE OTHER BE FORGIVEN THEY WERE ONLY HELPING AND EDWARD NEEDED THIS AS MUCH AS BELLA I AWAIT THE NEXT CHAPTER IN ANTICIPATION YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER YOU DESERVE A 100 RATING
Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
cant wait to see what happens next to these 2
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
I only have one word for this chapter and your writing...Brilliant !!! Edward's conversations between himself and his dick are beyond hilarious. I was readimg this in bed last night while my husband was trying to go to sleep. I kept laughing out loud and he would just shake his head. When I read the line about his dick running the metal cup up his zipper and singing "Let My People Go", I just lost it! My husband just looked at me and said "You are a sick woman". I just couldn't stop laughing. Then you hit me with that cliffie... that last line is...I have no words. Thank you, thank you. You are amazing !
Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
I thought that was mentioned earlier. Did he forget in the heat of the moment? I think he is overwelmed with his new knowledge that pussycat and Bella are one and the same.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
i love this chapter:)
Date: 24 Feb 2011 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Okay the conversations between Edward and his penis were priceless!! I LMAO reading all that!!! And BTW, what a hell of a cliffie!!!!!! I cannot wait to see what Edward has to say about all this. I mean, the whole evening was a shock to the system and now to be given this info too??? Wow!
Loved the chapter! I hope you guys are writing like speed demons on the update!!! LOL!!
Keye
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Awwwwwww....mannnnnn...that's just CRUEL!!! PLEASE.....write fast! I need my fix...*grin*
Date: 24 Feb 2011 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Hi
ein sehr schönes Kapitel
oh ich bin so gespannt wie es weiter geht
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Okay, since I read this last night A LOT of the pics in this chap that were showing last night aren't this morning. It's says "forbidden" where the pic is suppose to be. Just a heads up. BTW....fuckhot pics! Holy shit!! Loved them!
WOW!! Fantastic chapter and OMG, the cliffie????? Holy shit!! I want to be angry with you for leaving the chapter where you did, but I can't be mad. You've been sooo nice to us in the past and not left us with many cliffies so I can't complain.
BUT, I am going to be chomping at the bit for the next chapter. Poor Edward, his emotions are being pulled all over the place, well and the same goes for Bella, too. I was a little surprised there wasn't more of an actual conversation/explanation between Bella and Edward. But, I'm sure they will get it all covered eventually.
Love you, girl!!! Can't help but adore this story!! Can't wait till next time!!
Date: 24 Feb 2011 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
wow awesome chapter!!! I can't wait to see what Edward thinks about the new piece of information!
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 10:54 AM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
¨Oh Edward,¨ she cried. ¨I would love to be your girl and marry you, but sweetie, I can´t. What would we do with your father?¨
Hahahahaha love it - my next thought was -- father's body
I couldn't help it
As Esme was wiping Edwards tears away my eyes were starting to tear up from the beauty of the moment.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
grat chapter hope he likes that little surprise
Date: 24 Feb 2011 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
cruel cliff...leaves us hanging....the chapter was great, but i am disappointed in edwards behaviour concerning the revelation that bella is pussycat...the "talk" is too short, the situation is not really clarified..a whole bunch of questions respecting their relationship status is not answered. so they start a scene and edwards frame of mind is not as calm as i would´ve liked. he is angry, agressiv and impatient.....she safewords and (after probing) drops the V-BOMB.....
so let´s see what happens next....i hope they talk as edward an bella, and not only as Domward and Pussycat....
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
By a mile that was the funniest, sexiest and most tension filled piece of writing I've read in a long while. The caps on the last line say it all, hahahaha...keep up the very excelent work...I live for each update *sad I know* but worth every moment of anticipation.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
so is he gonna be pissed at her now or what? loved the chapter and that the truths are all out now
Date: 24 Feb 2011 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
ooo can't wait to see how Edward deals with that revelation.
keep up the excellent work bb
Date: 24 Feb 2011 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
OH MY GOD!!! Poor Docward is never gonna get rid of his erection. If he's a doctor then he should know erections lasting over 4hours are not good and should probably call his doctor!!! LMAO....:)
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
Crap that last statement even has me cowering - it's just Bella's personality and strength in this story so far I think that has me feeling like that.
And I soooo can not wait for O.G.J.B.
I feel like doing a little Alice jumoing up and down squeeling at a pitch that even dogs have trouble hearing...
:D - even that smile isnt big enough to show how excited I am.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
NOOOOOOOOOO, you did not end it there.
I cant even find words to describe this chapter, this story.. I just love it and honestly I want "Sir".
I think I may have said it before, but you are an amazing story teller, most people can write, but to tell a story where the reader feels the emotions behind it, is the gift of story telling
thanks
Date: 24 Feb 2011 7:17 AM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
NOOOOOOOOOO, you did not end it there.
I cant even find words to describe this chapter, this story.. I just love it and honestly I want "Sir".
I think I may have said it before, but you are an amazing story teller, most people can write, but to tell a story where the reader feels the emotions behind it, is the gift of story telling
thanks
Date: 24 Feb 2011 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
hahahahahahahahah
love Mojo though
Date: 24 Feb 2011 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
great chapter. oh eddie just got the second big suprise of the night.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Gah update soon!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
wow what a hell of a chapter and so loved the photos.man oh mna i was worried there for awhile. so they both know and now what will they do. it is a beautiful thing of how submissive bella is for edward. she is perfect for him. because of their relationship or her yearning for him i think it is easier for her to submit to him. she does it so flawlessly. OMG edward your mouth must be to the ground and you probably blew your load as soon as bella said she was a virgin. my oh my what news. what will edward do now. love it
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Oh My Freakin' Gawd!!!! THAT is where you end it! GAH! You're killing me! Oh... I LOVE the way Sir and Pet interact with each other... He is the sexiest freakin' Domward I have read thus far! You are freaking brilliant... Litteraly... if you were here in front of me, I'd have to bow down and kiss your pretty little toes... ROFLMAO... Geez... I need to go take a cold shower, like pronto!
God Bless ya, darlin' You so rock it isn't even funny! And your rec's are great! I have most of them in my favorites already... ANYTHING by Fetish Fanfic is awesome! If you're feeling particulary kinky... go read her "Daddy's Little Girl Comes Home" that'll knock those frilly little socks right off your feet!!!
Gee... I see a foot theme going here... hell, I don't even like feet. Gah! I'm rambling! Help!!!
Muah!
~xoxoxoxoxox~
Author's Response:
Ha ha! You freakin kill me! I´m gonna keep writing just so I can read your reviews! Lol! Did you send me a msg on the blog about a having a friend who does manips? If so, send em my way honey! The more the merrier! And if I can give her pictures and she can attach the lovely Domward´s head to them, that would be orgasm enducing! Yikes! Overload, overload! Lol! Thanks for always leaving me lots of love! You rock bb!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 24 Feb 2011 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Ah shit! I can't imagine he would have too much of a problem with this? It may make things a bit interesting to begin with, but I would think that he would love that fact the he is the only one to have taken her. The "deviant" would probably love that! Can't wait for more! :)
Date: 24 Feb 2011 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Great chapter! So big bad Dom Edward seems to be a little afraid of the teeny tiny virgin sub Bella. Interestingm
Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
this was absolutely your best chapter yet! i loved E's thoughts about the whole dinner and finding bella. love how he took her home and how he's firm with her but takes care of her. so glad she used a safeword as her first time needs to be sweet with E! thanks for writing...
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Oh you really know how to end your chapters with us wanting MORE. He doesn't even know she never got married and now to find out she's a virgin. Just too much. I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!
Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Well finally all is out.. so to speak. All these pictures and that warning. I personally can do without the pictures. I get the drift when reading. Pictures at the top of the characters is fine the place is fine in the throws of ___. dont need that.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
That was hot can't wait for this to continue
Date: 24 Feb 2011 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yeah they finally know who each other is!!!
And I gotta say I loved the one line about his cock singing let my people go. I almost peed my pants I laughed so hard!!!.
Keep um comming (LOL)
Date: 24 Feb 2011 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
OMG you girlz are very naughty I see a spanking soon how could you leave me wanting for more..........LOL but the pics on the blog now those were CALIENTE HOT~Whooooooooo get crackin or else.........hehe Thanks :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
thanks good chapter
Date: 24 Feb 2011 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Hey Krazi! Loved the chapter, especially Edward's surprise at the end of the chapter. I'm glad Bella red'd him when she needed for him to stop. I think it is so important for them to build trust :). Hopefully we get the next chapter soon! I am addicted to your story! <3 thanks!
Date: 24 Feb 2011 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Hmmm. I think Eddie was a bit shocked! Can't wait to see how this works itself out!
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
OMG I can't belive you would leave us there He better love it because if he throws her out that will be when I get angry Let's just hope he is shocked can I thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can thanks......
Date: 24 Feb 2011 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
well, i'm trying to decide if the wait was worth it. i kind of feel jipped or maybe mislead or maybe i just had my hopes up for something more and it didn't happen.
more than the first half of the chapter was spent on things from edwards pov of the last chapter. and while that shouldn't surprise me because you've done that pretty much throughout the story, i was more or less hoping for an immediate pick up of where you left us in the last chapter.
while i do understand edwards belief that speaking to isabella as a dom/her dom, would be best in order to get answers from her as to what's going on, there really weren't a whole lot of questions asked. he should have kept asking questions until he got all of the information. i also know that doms are stern and can be a hard ass when they want answers to something, but edward really acted like an ass to isabella in this chapter and that disappoints me. and i might not necessarily have felt that way under normal dom/sub circumstances had i not known the basics... that edward is in love with bella.
he's thought of nothing but bella for how long? forever? he now has her in his grasp and instead of talking to her and asking the right questions, he's shoving his cock down her mouth and thinking about fucking her without knowing the whole story. that's wrong. i'm disappointed in that.
i thought when he lead her out of carlisle and esme's he wanted to take her somewhere and discuss w.t.f. was going on. i get it that he's impatient and has wanted her forEVER, but he acted irresponsibly...and now what's he going to do?
just imho...
still lovin' you though.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
ahhhhhh im going crazy
Date: 24 Feb 2011 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
I think its hilarious that she's a virgin.
Will Domward like that?? Hmm.
Love how you add the visuals.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Loved his reaction! Was wondering when he would figure it out!
Date: 24 Feb 2011 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
ahhhh....finally!
one word....masterpiece :)
i find it amazin that most of your recs are ones that i am readin or have read. great minds think alike..
Date: 24 Feb 2011 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Oh NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Why did you left it there?!!!!!!! That's plain mean!!!!!!
I'm glad Edward listen to Jasper and gave Bella a chance to explain!!!
Please update, update, update!!!!!
Date: 24 Feb 2011 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Best chapter yet! I love when it's EPOV...he reacted just the way I thought he would. Although, I am not sure how to take his last words? Was he shocked, surprised, angry, mad, totally fucking exctited? Of course we all know Bella will take it the wrong way... I am sure she's been chanting, "Please don't make me go, please don't make me go," since leaving the Cullen's! ;)
Date: 24 Feb 2011 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Gah, that was INCREDIBLE! I really cannot wait now ;) Dr. Domward, exactly how big are you, pervy minds want to know ;) I really loved this chapter so much!
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
That was hot
Date: 24 Feb 2011 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
oh my goodness
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Totally awesome!! I really REALLY need more!! ASAP Please!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Omg! What a chapter I can't wait to see how he handles this now will he be loving her sweetly or hard????
Date: 24 Feb 2011 1:53 AM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
Oh my god, I have no words. I'm like a crack addict waiting for the next chapter each week.
I hope he gets all possessive over her being a virgin, sounds like he's shocked!
Date: 24 Feb 2011 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You need to update, quickly or I'll find a way to tie you down and hit you with something=P Haha just kidding but I NEED to know what happens. And I loved Edward and Mojo, they'll be good friends=)
~My Not-So-Secret Obsession
Date: 24 Feb 2011 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
WOW.....wasn't expecting that!! Keep it coming!!
Date: 24 Feb 2011 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Such another fantastic chapter. Was so afraid you were going to leave us with them separated. Loooove the pictures too!Can't wait for the next update. Hope he takes care of the "problem" then.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
what a yummy chapter, love it. Glad to see some secrets revealed. Wonder how Sir is going to deal with that little cherry on top. Thanks for the recs...lol am reading all but one of them so will go check that one out cause those other stories have me wound around their little finger (aahhh Fifty)
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Now who saw that one coming. LOL
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
I ythought back in the bginning it stated she was a virgin, like the first time Alcie was talking to Edward abou the sub that she was a virgin
Date: 24 Feb 2011 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!
Date: 24 Feb 2011 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
The last few chaptrs have been an amazing read.
But you must tell me
What came first...the story or the pictures???...LOL
Date: 24 Feb 2011 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Oh my Lord, I'm so confused. You introduced two characters in this chapter: Garrett and Kate. Both described as old, Kate too old to handle her duties, Garrett an "old goat." Kate is depicted by Kathy Bates. Fine.
Garrett depicted by Gerard Butler?! SERIOUSLY???!!! OLD GOAT???!!! FUCK HAWT, MORE LIKELY. I think the bindings on your restraints are too tight. Or maybe you were being caned and got one in the head accidentally.
Seriously, no way would Gerard Butler hook up with Kathy Bates. Not even in a Twilight Alternate Universe. Not even in a Twilight ZONE Alternate Universe.
Just sayin'.
Love your story, by the way. But keep your hands off Gerry!
Date: 24 Feb 2011 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Well I guess you can say that was one of the things we were waiting for. Yes we were waiting for them to meet BUT...... now we have to wait for their first lemon. GGgGGRRRRHHHHHH How can he be mad that she is a virgin. I mean I would be a blubbering mess if he was shouting at me like that and he was my first Dom. I do want to say that I do not like the name calling. I know some people like that but to me it is very degrading to be call her Filthy and Naughty others use Cunt and that just seems so wrong to me. Apart from that I thought the chapter was good. I surprised he still wants to do something since he was whacking off so much. lol.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Is it me or was Domward being a bit mean to Bella? Personally, I think after the events that took place at the house, and he and Bella left, I think they should have had a conversation of the whole situation, not as dom/sub, but as Edward and Bella. They've known each other too long, not to mention that there is feelings involved between them as well. I just think it would have gone better to talk things out as Edward and Bella.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Krazi~
I love this story hardcore! What a fantastic night. Totally and completely fantastic. I am so wrapped up in this story, I can nto wait to see where this goes from here.
SO EXCITED!
XOXOXO Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
I am so glad that you gave us Edward's side of the situation. I was going crazy wondering what was going through his mind. I am glad that he knew Bella good enough to act like a Dom to get answers from her. Even then, he still had a hard time getting the information out of her. Bella needs to realize that she has nothing to be embarassed about when it comes to Jacob.
I am wondering how Edward will handle the three guilty people at the table and what else he may say or do to Alice. She knew the shit was going to fly, but I do not think that she realized Edward would blow up the way he did.
I am glad that Jasper came in and talked some sense into Edward. I just wish that Alice or Jasper would have told him the truth about Bella's marriage when he asked. They betrayed both Edward's and Bella's trust with the mystery submissive lie. Why stay loyal to Bella on the marriage issue.
I do wonder what Edward will do now that he found out Bella's virgin status secret??
Please tell me that since they both have loved each other for years that a real relationship will come out of this as well as a D/s relationship? Pretty please. I want them to declare their love for one another before anything physical happens.
Thank you for not giving up on this story. It is fabulous. I also love all the pictures that you insert into the chapter. Can't wait to see what is next for the two.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Holy shit.. He so was not expecting that to be the reason she safeworded. I cannot even imagine WTF is going on in his head with that little revelation. I can't wait to see What happens now that they are both on the same page.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
ROFLMAO ohhhh that little "cherry" bomb rocked this is gonna get good can't wait for next chappy you rock
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
LOL, finally that cats out of the bag! I cant imagine Edward or any guy being upset with this. I guess we will have to wait and see.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Holy Hell!!! That was something You are offically the Mistress of Cliffee chapters Krazi
Wow all those Pictures were killer!!! Seriously! Wow! I had no idea that the poor guy was thinking all that time that Isabella was still married, the entire dinner and drive back to Escala wow... then for her to have to tell him in the way she told him, no wonder he was sadly confused.. Bless her heart and His Huge Hard as Cement Cock LOL!!
Then she Safe Words I cant even phatom what his inner demon must have thought in that one instance. Seriously he is talking finally getting into some really wet warmth and she says RED... OMG..
Can't wait for the next chapter... You ARE the Queenie!!!!
Kathy x0x0x0x0
Date: 24 Feb 2011 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
What a roller coaster chapter...! Just Wow! I can't wait for the next discussion. Thanks for the update.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
Wow the star crossed lovers finally get together and just about to get their rocks off when the bomb drops. Such a cruel way to end the chapter! *Wails loudly*
Great chapter in spite of the evil cliffy tho! Gotta love Domward and Little Eddie's conversations... Everybody needs a friend like that eh...? Haha.
See ya next time, happy typing!
CrimsonR
Author's Response:
Lol! Glad you enjoyed it! And of course, everybody needs a GOOD friend! *winks* Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 24 Feb 2011 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
The night is just FULL of surprises for Edward!! Yikes. He might just want to let her put her mouth back to use before his dick falls off.
Author's Response:
Ha ha! OMG that was funny! I hope it doesn't fall off, we still have much need for that wonderful appendage. He had to stop, if not he could have seriously hurt her, unintentionally,but for the first time he needs to be in complete control!
thanks for reading and reviewing!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 24 Feb 2011 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
good chapter....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 24 Feb 2011 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
I love the pictures that you post .... very sexy! I can't wait to find out edwards response to bella being a virgin! Awesome story!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 24 Feb 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
UGH.... Thank you for not quittingf this story, as I feared after the last chapter, but you have gained mastery of frustrating this reader... I'm anxiously awaiting the next post...
Author's Response:
Patience pet, or you'll get no reward! lol! Ha ha! Happy times are ahead, I promise! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 24 Feb 2011 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...
I love the ending!!! he better not leave her!
Date: 23 Feb 2011 1:40 PM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
I AM VERY INTRIGUED!!!!
You Got My attention......although I despise the word Cunt (shudders when I hear Edward say it even though I had Edwarcula say it once) I am anxious to continue...
I love it when they don't know who the other is..lol...
Author's Response:
Ha ha! She has her uh... needs! I guess it works for them. lol! Welcome aboard and thanks for reading and reviewing!
Krazi
Date: 23 Feb 2011 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN
First off, I really, really like this story. The concept of BDSM is, in my 100% vanilla opinion, very compassionately presented.
However, the one thing that bugged me was the misuse of homophones. For example, in this chapter you used shear instead of sheer, your instead of you're, and except instead of accept. It makes my inner high school English teacher grit her teeth and uncap her red pen. So, I would recommend that you either use a beta who specializes in grammar (heaven knows you don't need help with your plotting :-) or revise with special attention to grammar. Alternatively, on certain versions of Microsoft Word there is also an option for contextual grammar check on the spelling and grammar preferences, so it might help if you used that.
My second detailed review point is about the intercalary dream sequences. I like them-- um, hard not to-- but sometimes I find it difficult to tell when you switch from the dream to the reality. Sometimes you use italics, other times you don't change it, other times you write a transitional paragraph. So, in that sense, I find them incohesive, but that's more formatting than anything else.
Third, I think its really interesting that you had Alice, Emmett, and Edward as siblings and involved in BDSM. I've seen storylines where the three are siblings or they meet through BDSM, but never both. It makes me wonder whether Esme and Carlisle are into it too, and the kids were raised a) thinking its normal or b) with a much more accepting attitude than the general public.
I can't wait to find out how the biological family/BDSM practicioners dynamic works out!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!!! I won't keep you waiting long, I promise! Don't forgetbthe blog for chapter teasers & picTease for the upcoming chapters!!
Laterzzz:)
~Krazi & Mojo~
Xoxo
Date: 21 Feb 2011 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...
I can not wait for more!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review! You guys are the best!
Teaser and PicTease for Chapter 12 are up on the blog! Squeeee! Run on over and check em' out!
Laterzzz:)
~Krazi & Mojo~
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2011 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...
Please keep on writting I love this story :D:D I'm dyin to know what will happen next :D
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review! You guys are the best! Teaser and PicTease for Chapter 12 are up on the blog! Squeeee! Run on over and check em' out! www.forthelovedomination.blogspot.com Laterzzz:) ~Krazi & Mojo~ xoxo
Date: 18 Feb 2011 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...
i am so freaking anxious for them to see each other again....this story O W N S me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 18 Feb 2011 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN
love love love
Date: 18 Feb 2011 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
i so love this story so far and i love love love your bella
Date: 18 Feb 2011 2:22 PM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
first chapter and I LOVE it so far