OMG!!!!!!!!!! CANT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER.......

Please do NOT let thin be the last chapter!!!!!I am glad they finally found out, I am glad after all th 'wishing & hopeing" things are lookin up!!!! OK PLEASE MORE!!!!

Arrgh! Bloody hell. Keep it going x

Excuse me, I probably didn't understand.. is this the last chapter of this story?

Please, don't do that... you must continue.

 Please, please, please...

well, i'm thinking that after all this, if you don't continue, i'll have to hunt you down and give you a good spanking.

great chapter, not so great ending...cliffies are very, very mean.

at least they know now...

you know it's very frustrating - of course you know, you've been trying to kill us all this time and doing a very fine job of it i might add - anyway, it's frustrating where there is very little dialogue between the people that we want to hear from and we're left with only the characters thoughts.  you have all of us screaming at the top of our lungs at our computer screen!  anyway, hopefully we'll get words from our beloved characters in the next update!

thanks for writing!

OMG you better keep going or I will but together a group of people who know how to make people scream and come after you Loved it so very much and I am so excited to see what will happen next I hope Edward lets her explain everything..... 

I don’t know if you’re from the US but if not you probably won’t get this but have you ever seen that commercial with the dog looking for “Beggin’ Stripes”?  The dog is going around the house saying “bacon...bacon..I smell bacon…gotta get the bacon…”.  I felt like that dog this morning when I saw you had updated “hell bent on getting my “bacon”– several of my “favorites” had updated and I was running late for work but when I saw FTLOD had updated I decided I could be a bit late.

So good…oh so good. And those pics of E *swoon*…fantastic update…I thought you would leave us before they “revealed” themselves so thank you for that…but is E leading her where she thinks or will we have some angst while they work things through??? They’ve been fighting themselves for so long…how will they respond now they both have what they want?  Seems they never do the sensible thing!  Again, oh so good!!! And like the dog…I want more…more…more bacon!

OMG! Where is he taking her? Please don't stop......must have more! Love this story.

Finally!!  Together at last!  I can't believe they didn't click and recognise eachother in the playroom, and it was interesting that they both started to obscess over eachother so quickly.  I thought that would be a clue since they'd obcessed over eachother so long, I thought they'd catch on there..but finally...they know.

Don't stop!!!

eveil evil woman,    thank god he didn't  just leave her there thou that woudl ahve been worse.  hoping for an update soon

brilliant!!

Yay they now know! Can't wait to see what will happen next!

Better not be the last chapter orr I will be terribly dissappointed

YOU CANNOT BE SERIOUS!!!! YOU LEFT IT THERE????????????? ARE YOU EVEN KIDDING ME????????????? YOU LEFT IT THERE??????????????? RIGHT THERE????????????? I DIDN'T TAKE A BREATH THE ENTIRE CHAPTER AND NOW YOU LEFT IT THERE???????????????

TO QUOTE 'MY' EDWARD AND BELLA - FUCK.MY. LIFE!!!!

Update soon please and by the way - I loved it!!!

PLU XOXO

He figured it out there is no way he can leave her .  Alice only ment good things to happen and look what gooooood things happened lol.

please continue....can´t wait what happens next....hopefully they will not only talk in dom/sub mode but also as edward and bella....can´t wait for the next chapter...

What so you mean  by "last chapter" and "quit"?!!!! NO WAY you are letting us hanging!!!!!!  Please let the Kettle One rest and come out from under the bed to continue this wondetful story!!!!!!  Don't keep us waiting too long!!! :P

So awesome!  I am just giddy.  I can't wait to see where this takes us, but I sure love where they've been so far.  I hope Edward's anger at Alice is short-lived ~ she really just gave them a little shove in the right direction.

fucking brilliant i so totally loved this chapter i loved that they didn't just fall into each others arms and profess their love can't wait to see how their conversation goes.

loved it

Keep going.  They're just getting started. Always enjoy your story.

Please, please, PLEASE continue this story!!!!!  I look soooo forward to each and every chapter!!!!!  Please don't stop now!!!!!!

Krazi -  They walked out and left Mojo!!! What the heck is up with that, Oh, I guess Mojo will just have to stay with Grammy Esme! :-)  

Oh this was wonderful they finally met.  I knew the second he touched her what happened, hopefully we will hear from EPOV what happened in that instants for him as well.  Because Alice jumped up from the Table and then Edward followed her out, then the text came... Alice knew right then and Edward did too and saw the look on Alice's face,  yeah! that sounds plausible...

Well now, I'm so proud of Bella for not turning tail and running after hearing them in the office arguing over her, you know she could have easily run, but I'm really glad she didn't. 

Come on how could you leave me this way hanging!!! Well not exactly hanging you did allow them to actually acknowledge each other and they did leave together.

The Grammy's were pretty good.   Would have been Better had they had RPatz as a presenter but we can see him at the Oscar's in a few weeks right...  :-)   Okay so ready to have the next chapter. Oh, really enjoyed the Rose POV on your blog that was great and LOVE all the pics. 

Till next update, lots of your recommends I have read or are currently following... good taste in reading.  hummmm imagine that.   Later BB  Kathy xoxo

At last they meet but what I don't understand is how have they not recognised each others voices? E & B have known each other for a long time surely one of them would have realised.  Great chapter can't wait for the next.

sweets as always you are amazing and i loved this i'm not going to write too much because there is another chapter for me to read haha but you did amazingly and wanted to thank you for sharing :D

This is so good!

I can't wait when Edward finds out that his pet is Bella!!!

best chapter yet!!! that was fxxx-hot. i love it when edward obsesses over bella, and it's killing me because he doesn't even know it's her. they're just both excited at the prospect of getting over years of fantasizing about something that could never happen. he actually left her sobbing...wow, must have been some good loving. i can hardly wait for the next chapter. any ideas yet how long this story might turn out to be?

Awesome chapter

love this story

MORE MORE MORE

Wow...what an awesome chapter!!!!  I can't wait until they meet.  I hope that is soon.  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Please upadet soooooooooon I'm so dying to know what will happen ! (A)

Love this story. Cannot wait for more

Can't wait for the next chapter.  Please tell me they are going to find out about each other soon.

Loved it very much and I am so excited I hope they will meet again soon thank you for sharing this with us and update when you can .......

OMG! That was pure fucking genius! I have never read anything  that has made the emotions just pour out of the page like that. You have such a special way with words. The emotions at the end were just gut wrenching that my chest tightened when you described how Edward felt having to leave her.

I also personally love that he saw that it was Bella, his mind may not be ready to accept it yet. I don't know how long it will take to catch up to his body, but it was amazing to see him fall for her all over again.

Great, Great Chapter! I can't see what you have to follow this....

Denise

Oh my god!!!! You blew me away with this chapter great work I felt like I was right there with them.

Aaah.......... words fail me

That wae Hot

W. O. W.

What an INCREDIBLY intense scene!! Yikes that man is HOT. Shit I want one of him for my birthday.  Damn I am going to be unbelievable impatient for the big reveal. I expect Bella to sleep for two days after all that. Damn if they are this good together now, I can only imagine how beautiful it will be when they learn who the other is. VERY glad Edward had Jasper do up the contract already.

Wow ... that was intense! I need a massage just from reading it! I can't wait until they find out who each other is...they have great chemistry together!

Wow, um, ya, that was quite intense...and f*c%awesome!!! ;)

I guess that you may redo the last chapter from Bella's POV, so that means they prolly won't discover their true identities for awhile, huh?  Well, that's just mean so you know! ;)

OMG!! That was so intense and just absolutely PERFECT!!! I can't wait till the sparks fly when they realize its actually really each other's soul mates, and they come face to face. WOW just WOW!!! I am still shaking after reading this, it was just too much, your writing is just incredible, and I feel everything the characters are going through, its an amazing gift you have. Keep it up, can't wait until the next chapter! Thank you!!!

*gasp* I read it twice....so hot! I can't wait for the next update. More please?

Oh my, holy shit. That was so intense. If I wasn't reading Master of the Universe last night, (during the SB) it would have happily been this. The anticipation is agonizing. Can't wait until identities are known.

Great chapter! So glad to see the scene finally! Loved the lemons!

Oh my God!!!! intense does not even begin to describe that. Sir and pet have just become my favourites.

thanks for pimmping my story! i have ur story on my read list i just havent had the time but i will soon!

OH.MY.GAWD!!!!!!!! That was insanely INTENSE!!! I made the disastrous decision to read this chapter in the bus and I'm quite sure people must have thought I was plagued with the St Vitus's dance disease by the way I was constently squirming in my seat.....Come on, as if you could have kept your body's reactions to that freakingly amazing scene under control.....Yep that's what I thought, you just can't ;)

So as you've probably already guessed, I loved this chapter....(Even if I was left high and dry at the end due to my situation :D) It was very well written and the feelings coming from Edward were extremely powerful and exhilarating...Therefore enabling the reader (aka ME) to experience this scene with the right frame of mind, the same desires and expectations BUT ALSO the same frustrations......Damn, I thought I was going to kill Alice myself at the elevator and maybe you too a little bit (sorry, unfulfilled needs can force people to do crazy things...) when Edward didn't analyse his reaction to Bella biting her lip any further......Unghh...That was HIGHLY frustrating!!!

Anyway, it was very good and I soooo wish I could have taken Bella's place but eh!! That's was dreams are for, right???? Can't wait for your next update and nex pics and teaser on your blog...XOXO

WOWWWWW HAWT DAMN  I LOVED IT!!!! To say the least.  It was great.  I am hoping beyond all hope that the next chapter they will finally really meant.  It has been way too long a wait and we NEED for them to really see that they are so in love with each other.  I am glad that he was able to pleasure her 4 times and he also got pleasure twice.  I love the exteme conection that he felt for her.  I was really dissapointed that he didn't stay with her when she asked him to stay.  But I understand that it was in the contract that SHE wanted so he was only sticking to the contract. 

I loved the chapter. I can understand how hard it was to separate at the end of such an intensive scene. They did not get the usual decompression time together. He did not get to make sure she was alright. He had to take some one elses word. I know he trusts them, but it is not the same. Edward is a Dom. He likes to be in control. I can't wait until they find out. How they adjust fantasy with reality?

Good Chapter.....

That was...perfect!  CANNOT wait for them to finally realize who each of them are!