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Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 21: Catīs Out of the Bag... Time to Face the Music...

Love it!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

That was one hell of a weekend!  Bella cracks me up with her reaction to the new puppy.  I am worried Tanya is going to go after Bella.  That will not be pretty.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 21: Catīs Out of the Bag... Time to Face the Music...

I thought the press conference was funny. Bella should not have run back to her mother. She should have told her over the phone. She is an adult and Renee could have come to Washington if she wanted to see Bella.

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 21: Catīs Out of the Bag... Time to Face the Music...

As always, you did a wonderful job!!! These two just couldn't get any hotter(but knowing you, they will)!! So glad Bella decided to move in with Edward. Who was she kidding anyway...we knew she would. I loved the press conference and the way she put that guy in his place. Now she has to face Renee; but hopefully you will have her back in Edward's arms soon. Thanks for another great chapter. Your story is one of my favorites!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 21: Catīs Out of the Bag... Time to Face the Music...

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it so much!  I hope that Bella's trip won't be too horrible. Cannot wait for more :)

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 21: Catīs Out of the Bag... Time to Face the Music...

oh man, just the right amount of plot and sexiness to get me through the day. Plus I subscribed to your blog last chapter lol so the pics were in my head while I read the story lol those were awesome by the way, expecially in the office.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Well we all knew Tanya would be coming back at some point.  Edward is going to have to deal with her once and for all.  Even though I don't know how he is going to do that since she just won't go away. 

Loved the Bella and Edward time!  That is always fun.  I loved seeing Jasper in his Dom mode.  Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 21: Catīs Out of the Bag... Time to Face the Music...

it was sooooo HOT!!!

HURRY BACK

Reviewer: tlmorris Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 21: Catīs Out of the Bag... Time to Face the Music...

I am dissapointed that Bella let Renee dictate to her.  Phones and skype work wonders...Other than that it was brilliant as usual!

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 21: Catīs Out of the Bag... Time to Face the Music...

If there was a fan fiction anonymous, my kids would probably force me to join but I would always miss the meetings if you had updated because I can't not read what you write! Everything else can wait!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 21: Catīs Out of the Bag... Time to Face the Music...

loved it looking forward to seeing whath appens next chapter 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 21: Catīs Out of the Bag... Time to Face the Music...

never a disappointment!!!   need new panties... thanks so much for the chapter...  you and I love all the same stories....  :-)  please take care  till next post...  oh  loved the pics on the blog!!!

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 21: Catīs Out of the Bag... Time to Face the Music...

fantastic chapter.loved it.wow that was so hot!hope bella doesn't take any grief off renee.update soon

Reviewer: eumenida Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2011 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

If it has not been that crap of BDSM, this woud be a fucking perfect story. And not the BDSM per se. You see in every fucking story with BDSM every dom Edward  ( i just refuse to write it  with capital "d") pull out that dom shit somewhere out of the schedule, mostly in heated debate when he don`t have other arguments to silent his women. And I mean WORD arguments. Hell , that is VERY low punch. Like you said sometime - If you can`t play , buddy , whith big boys ( read girls) don`t enter the big leage.The big leage is self assurance. If you had it, you don`t need some dom shit to silent somebody. One and the only Dom ( and with capital) I´ve red about, who didn`t pull that crap is from tara sue me stories ( and I think you all know whom am I talking about). I`ve abandoned many good stories at half ( like People like us, Heartbrake remedy or Edwards eternal kiss) and their authors, when shit like this : "he (ab)used his dom`s voice to silent her " appeared. More affection word don`t cause  dick to defect, boys.  So to summon a long tirade - A minus... because he is still one of the beautiful Edward i`ve red of.

Reviewer: KeyeCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2011 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

Loved how Edward handled Tanya in that he got Tyler to get rid of her.  Loved the photo of Tyler too.

Loved who you chose for Mrs. Cope too!

Snickered when I read this:

fucking purred with satisfaction. 

The whole conversation between Carlisle and Edward was fabulous but I almost choked on my margarita (hey, it's Saturday night, what can I say) when I read this:

“Oh close your damn mouth, Edward,” he scolded jokingly.  “I may be old, but I´m not dead.  I know that Bella´s driving around somewhere in Seattle with your balls in her purse.  Where the hell do you think Esme keeps mine?” 

Good pic of the message from Isabella too.

Awwwww.....love the puppies!!

Another fab update!!!!!  Can't wait to read what happens next!

Keye

Reviewer: MexicanChapina Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2011 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

Amzing =) finally caught up!!!

Reviewer: Where Who Me Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

Awwwww!  It is nice to see Edward being so thougthful when it comes to Mojo (such a change from when they first met).  This chapter is one of my all time favorites now because it has some of my favorite details in the story.  Not only that, but the story changed with the perspective (not just switching I said to he said etc.).  Seeing everything from Edward's point of veiw is great, and so powerful.  It is a very cute picture of the little white dog you found, and the dog with the stuffed animal. 

Can't wait to read more of your stories!  On a side note, gret rec's... I actually recognize quite a few of them from my own story alert lists. :p

Reviewer: Where Who Me Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Gah, I totally forgot aobut the picture you have here! *looks down* I got a little behind on this story, so I'm catching up with it now.

Great chapter by the way.  Now I really want to eat a corn dog... and to see what happened to Edward when Bella saw the two dogs.  Mojo and Edward's love hate relationship is toatally awesome!  I love how protective Mojo is of Bella, and the 'mutual understanding' that is slowly surfacing between the dog and Edward.

Reviewer: songii Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2011 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

lol! Em is crazy!!

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2011 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

Where did you get those dog pictures?  Absolutely adorable!  Great chapter.  I truly though she was going to hand him his ass because she was going to have to take care of two dogs, but seems like the big bad Dom is onto something.  Great chapter, and thanks for the rec!  Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2011 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Hey, pimp!  Thanks for the rec!  Somehow I missed that this had updated and I got behind a chapter.  Can't wait to see how he handles Tanya effing Denali!  Great chapter.  Congrats on your awards as well.  They were definitely deserved.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2011 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

Krazi~

I have no words that will fully show the love that I have for you, because you are always so kind to me.  You are an amazing writer and I just totally FLOVE this story.  I love the playful way that you put in the friendly banter between Seth the doorman and Bella.  I FLOVE that I just know that Bella is ten different shades of red for her lack of verbal filter in the offering of blow jobs before work for Edward for the new puppy.  AND how cute, both Esme's pup and Bella, Edward and MOJO's new puppy girl....AWWWW.  Thank you for always PIMPING me out and thanks for always sharign your wonderful story with us all.  YOU ARE THE BOMB DIGGITY!

Flove ya chicka,

Kasi~

xoxo

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2011 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

Tanya is a nut case.  Hot weekend.  Love Em!

Reviewer: slc6548 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

ooohh yummy yummy yummy.    

woo hoo for skankya's departure.

Reviewer: My Not-So-Secret Obsession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

=P

there are no words. you are such an amazing writer. I love this story so much, i'm like obsessed with it lol. Please update soon=)

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2011 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

Definetly Very Very HOT!!!!   Loved it,  loved the dog too!!!  Oh yea, Tanya better disappear if she knows what's good for her, something tells me Edward doesn't want her anywhere around Bella......just sayin!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

It was worth it...God was it worth it. Just perfect.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

loved it ! cant wait till the next chapter 

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

Tanya is completely mental and I don't think she cares about the NDA.  Edward is very smart to document everything she does with witnesses around.  She is likely not going away quietly.

Loved their hot sex weekend.  Also, those pics of the new puppies are TOO Adorable, I love them :)

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

loved it! so hott! hmm bet we havent heard the last from tanya....and the dog is soo cute!

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

What a wonderful thing to find on a Monday morning.....an update to your amazing story! I can't tell you how much I love your Domward. He is one of the best!  And sweet Edward.....he just couldn't get any better! This chapter was the perfect blend of drama (Tanya), hot sex, and humor. Loved this line....." And like the good gentleman my father had raised me to be, I filled each one of my hands with an ample amount of her ass; you know to keep her from falling."  Wonderful story, great chapter.....thanks so much!!

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

Thank you... thank you... thank you.. for updating so soon... I don't car eif the house is cleaned or the kids are fed... I'm reading!!!!  I really want Bella to move in with Edward... they are so awesome together!!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it!  So...Skankya is gone for now, YAY!  I cannot wait to see what else happens next ! I love Marley, so adorable :D

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

sois Tanya going to be a problem?????

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

Loved the playroom time. I am sooo glad that they finally got together to spend some time together. I love the puppies. So, Edward got Esme a puppy and also got a puppy for Mojo. Does Mojo like the new puppies??? WOW!!!! Mojo has a girlfriend at Esme's and has one at Edward's. Mojo is a stud!!!!!!! lol. As always, Can't wait for your next update.

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

Please feed my addiction! Send my more of of the words that keep me going with a smile on my face.

Reviewer: labonte18slm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

Amazing chapter! I loved the Tanya debacle...yikes!...we all know that that situation isn't going away as easily as Domward wants lol! Wait until he realizes just how long she has been after him, omg this is going to be bad! Too cute, the little puppy he got Mojo...awwwww! This story is the best! Take care until next time!

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

lol like that definiton of tanya a fly that keeps needin to be swatted away.fantastic chapter.wow that was hot i think domward out did his self.wow need a fan to cool down.love emmett hes so got a way with words lol.update soon

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

oh hell Tanya is soooo damn bonkers I'm scared why the psychotic "B%&$#!" is going to do..  I love this story and thanks for another chapter so quickly....Love Love Love DomWard!!!  OMG Marly is so adorable!!!!  Dr. Sexy is one smart cookie!!!!!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2011 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

Love the chapter. It was full of humour and sex. A perfect combination if you ask me.  I cannot wait to see what the crazed Tanya gets up to. :-)

Reviewer: My Not-So-Secret Obsession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2011 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Oh gosh crazy Tanya...

Amazing chapter=) please update soon!

Reviewer: manolomel9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Tanya is certifiable, that's for sure.  It has been awhile since I read the earlier chapters, have they had any contact since he shredded her contract and left for Europe?  I have a feeling she is going to cause some trouble for our favorite couple :)

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Dunn dunn din.. Some more drama will enfold, after the whole Jacob/Leah issue is (probably) finished now on with ex-girlfriends, who can't take a hint. (or was Tanya an ex-sub? I can't remember anymore).

Anyway, great chatper with lots of great Bella and Edward moments and also funny Edward and Mojo moments. These two are becoming brothers ;)

I just looked at the pictures in your blog, for this chapter and also for the next one. It looks pretty promising, can't wait for the next one.

The one with the title "Esme's dog brownie" is sooooooooooooo cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute, really lovely.

Can't wait till the chapter is out to read.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2011 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Love it. What made Bella get upset about Jacob??? Did something happen or did she just start thinking about it?? Love how they can't be without each other. As always, you leave me wanting more and more. Can't wait for your next update.

Reviewer: Spider-Hand Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Hi, there seem to be bits missing from the chapter. What was the deal Edward made with Mojo? Also, there are many more pics for this chapter that I was not able to find any content for.



Author's Response:

Hey there!  Umm... as far as Edward's promise to Mojo, it will be revealed in the second half of the update and as far as the pictures are concerned, all the ones I uploaded are showing up.  So, I don't know about that.  There are more pics on the blog, but I can't put them up here! That's a courtesy for my readers who read at work or out in a public setting.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Holy Shit!  So happy for the update, sorry it's taken me a few days to get it read, but I am sooooo very happy you had the chance to write and update.... I love FTLOD and will be happy to check out the tomato soup awards blog and vote. 

Can't wait to find out what the Heck our wonderful Edward has to say to Ms. Denali!  Girlfriend my A$@!!! More like Crazy Stalker BIOTCH!  right?!  Just saying!!!

 

Okay Laters Krazi and Mojo!!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Edward needs to convince Bella to move in with him. He needs to let her know that she can sleep at Jasper's if she is scared to be by herself in his house when he is at work, but other than that she needs to be at his house. He also needs to set Tanya straight ASAP. Edward is so cute with Bella. He is a different person. He is still a Dom, but with a soft side.

Reviewer: slc6548 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Great chapter as always. You have my vote!

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2011 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

He better set her straight and make sure everyone knows who his girlfriend is!!!

Reviewer: twilightlover19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

this is great please update soon :)

Reviewer: Teri Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Love this chapter.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

has been a while and you have been missed

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

GAH, that was amazing!  I really cannot wait for part 2!  YAY!  Tanya is crazy as always ;)  Yay for quick updates :D

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Krazi~ Voting is over on the tomato soup awards, and you won for something, but I could not begin to tell you what.  There was a lot of drama and crap surrounding the awards I guess, and sadly they got taken down early and stopped.  There is a facebook group called tomato soup awards group and you can pick up your winning banner there.  If you don't have facebook , let me know I will copy the banner for you and I will send it to you via Email.  I flove you girlie, and this story is HOT and rocks!  I can't wait to hear how Edward imboosticates that slut Tanya...HATE HER!  I am very much what my name says and I am team all twilight, but I kid you not there are some people, I just DONT LIKE.  I don't care for Tanya, just because she is portrayed as this perfect match for Edward, and honestly I cannot see Edward matched perfectly with anyone other than Bella.  AND I really dislike Paul, I just don't like him.  Don't forget to put JessAndTAT on your alert list, because that story we are writing together is going to seriously ROCK!  Lots of loves, hugs and kisses, this story is phenominal and I FLOVE IT!  xoxo, Kasi~

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Loved it. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Awesomeness!!  Loved the naughty pics and videos on your blog!!  Soo fucking hot!!

Tanya, that bitch!!  I hate her (and not just in the is story)!!

Can't wait for the next chappie!!

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

mmmm, need a shower now lol. 'Course Tanyas screechring voice sent chills through me there at the end lol. I love your chapters they are well written full of fun. Went to check out the blog before I rec'd. Whew woman that was hot.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

thanks good chapter

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Awesome chapter! Cant wait for the next! Will it be in EPOV to?

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

loved it

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Good Chapter....

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Oh no! You can't stop there. LOL.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Loved the chapter. Edward is a horny so and so isn't he? lol 

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

tanyas in for a big shock then when edward comes out of his office.fab chapter.that was hot!hope she moves in soon.update soon.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2011 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Yummy chapter as always.   He is so sweet with her.   Poor thing didnt get his way on the living arrangements...yet.    Ugh Skankya makes an appearance.

Reviewer: mikokitty10 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2011 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

Love this chapter and story please update soon. I'm dieing to read what happens to Edward.

Reviewer: carebearconnor Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2011 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

I love this story....can't wait for your update.  Really enjoyed the pics on your Blog site too!

Sincerely,

C

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

Hey, thanks for the shout out!  You're awesome.  Of course, I'm a sweating mess waiting for the hubs to get home from work thanks to that chapter!  Great job.

On another note...my e-mail is for shit because my computer's screwed up, so to answer you, I took down Rusty and Spidey...it wasn't getting any new play, and I didn't want it to look like I had nothing to do but sit around and write fanfiction all the time.  With Trip being the effing decathalon that it is, I have no intentions...at this time...to go back and write more about Rusty and Spidey.  If I change my mind, you'll be the first to know!  Love ya!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2011 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 10: Itīs Playtime...

Shear perfection..........

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

thanks good chapter as always

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 5: Revelations... Whatīs Done In the Dark...

What a great chapter~it was one hell of a roller coaster ride!!!!

Love how your brought Eclipse into it..hehehehe

Can't wait for these two to get together....

thanks so much

Reviewer: Kinga72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

:)

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

I do believe Mojo got his own sub.

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2011 11:10 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...

That was brilliant - you being the one to safeword...  :)

I love that Esme knows everything...just like a mother <3

Thanks so much~

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2011 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

I hope Bella isn't still on her Master's time speaking to him like that!

Guess Edward promised Mojo some action of his own.  ;)

Keep writing pleeease.

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2011 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...

hahahaha - I love jacob got what was coming to him....brilliant revenge. :)

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2011 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN

Tanya is such a bitch......I hope it was Edward that safe worded just he wouldn't have to touch her anymore....

Thank you!

Reviewer: lovingrobpatz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2011 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

Love ur story, had to finished the whole thing b4 I was able to review, sorry. Can't wait to read some more. I love d/s stories but sometimes they get to be a lil tedious. Yours has been really fun to read. It's funny, crazy, love ur Alice and Rose ;). Also it has the usual angst. I wonder what u have planned for Tanya. She is another psycho SMH. You haven't mentioned her for awhile so I hope u bring her soon. Thanx for this amazing story.

Reviewer: My Not-So-Secret Obsession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2011 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

=) Ohh godm Edwardddsss in troouublleeeee lol great chapter=) I love your writing

Reviewer: twilightlover19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

this is great please update soon

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

OMG!!!!! He got Mojo some pussy....I mean a girlfriend. HaHa!!!!!

Loved the training!!!!!!!! GREAT GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!!! Panty warning!!! I am sooooooooo loving this story. Thanks for the upate and hope to read more soon. Thanks for sharing with us.

Reviewer: lmb Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

Great Chapter.  I am glad they made some progress.  I am confused about why she can't call her master if she signed the contract?  I hope she decides to move in with him soon.

Reviewer: Little71099 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

I always look forward to these updates.  I hope Leah gets the idea that Jake is a jack ass eventually.  Great job as always!

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

Wow..  that was a hot and sad chapter..  lots of emotions in this chapter.. 

But  a good questions why is the 2 dogs..  hahahha.  boy Edward is in trouble.  But then why?  you think he hurt her dog..  mmmm.. 

Loved it.. 

<3 Leona :)

Ps.  sorry I did not review last chapter.  i somehow missed it.  and just finish reading it.  it awesome too.. 

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

Let the fun begin! 

Reviewer: michele_my_bella Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

krazi......LOVED it! could feel all of her emotions as she struggled with their first weekend 

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

oh edward! :-)

Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

Loved this chapter!  They are getting where they need to be.  I am sure we haven't heard the last of Jacob yet ---

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

:) perfect chapter...the set to with Leah and Jacob was brill and the begining of training...beautifully drawn.

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?

Hahahaha - I love a woman that gets revenge on slime.....

Thank you for the chapter!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 4:16 PM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

Oh yeah - ready to play Master.....  :D

Wonderful first chapter!

Thank you so much~

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

Always a great chapter! I am glad they've told off Leah and Jacob.  Poor little Seth going through all of that!  I'm glad that they have finally defined their relationship as well.

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

Awww....He got her another puppy.....How sweet.  I love this update Krazi, and I seriously look forward to more.  I am goign to atempt to finish my epi this weekend.  I am so tired, but cannot sleep....But not sensible enough right now to write.  As alway your story makes me tingle, FLOVE it!  Keep up the wonderful work dearie, lsove and hugs, Kasi~

Reviewer: FangMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED it!  I've missed you BB... 

I have a new o/s up ... go check it out, I'd love to hear what you have to say :)

Taste of Honey and Human Sexuality 101 are AWESOME, btw... 

XoXo ~ Adore you to the max BB ~ Fangs

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

Nicely done.  B seems very unsure of herself though.  not the playroom stuff but the abandonement issues.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

WOO HOO  super de dooper chapter.   Jake had the nerve to put his hands on B?  OMFG  he should be happy charlie didnt shoot him.   Leah needs to grow up.  LOL for spa time.   Yummy playtimes.   Uh Oh for the doggies.

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

Onviously her dog needed a friend.

More please!

Reviewer: oldmeone Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

:)

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