Krazi- Thank you deary for another chapter!  OMG I was worried that perhaps you had writers block or worse .... like RL was kicking your butt or something, no one is immune to that kind of thing.  Well whatever know that I was so happy to see this chapter  ***shhhh don't tell anyone*** but I sneaked and read this chapter on my cell phone at work, everytime I had to be on hold during different phone calls I had to make... only problem was I had to wait till I got home to post my review, my silly Android doesn't let me review from there.... Anyway, yes,yes pet made it through the weekend. 

Ms. Leah and Mr Jake deserve each other, I wonder if Tanya can develope a crush on Jake and leave Edward alone... that would be perfect, although don't think that is going to happen huh!?  Oh, well... poor Bella really has esteem issues ... my heart was breaking for her during alot of this... especially the panic attach she had thinking that Sir was made at her.... He is a Strong and Very Strict Dom isn't he?!  Not that I am experienced in this, but it just seems that he is.... very strict.... I'm sure you can enlighten us more if it's a issue, but personally I love the way you write this, it gives it depth and passion and a greater sense of accomplishment in the submission it seems... Again that's just my take... He does have to establish presidence with his training of her also, so he can't be lax if he is going to be the type of strong Dom she needs... He does seem to consider ALL of her needs.. look at Mojo and how he planned ahead for that deary!!!! 

Oh boy, next chapter should be even better.... what on earth has he done now!?

Laters BB  Kathy xoxoxoxoxo

Interesting. There were times when I found Bella to be rather annoying.  Her "training" is not going to be easy if this is anything to go by but she agreed to it.  So bring it on. lol  

Bella needs to work on her self confidence. Bella sure talks mouthy to Edward. I thought even when they were just Edward and Bella she was to talk respectful to him. She has a bad temper that gets that mouth working.

Great story...it's my perfect fantasy and thanks so much for writing this and sharing with us readers...hope the next update comes (LOL...pun intened) quickly!

BRAVO!

REally you are leaving it there. I see mojo got a play toy for himself.. hmm.. keep it up.. really good with all the stories you write as always.:)o

So Mojo has a playmate too...  That was prett smart of Edward.   I can't wait to see what Bella says though.  I love these two!  Great job...thanks so much!!!

Leah needed a good slap unfortunatly it prob did not knock any sense in her at all.  Training is going to be fun looking forward to more lol

Hee Hee... is Mojo gonna get some doggy lovin going on now?  With his horny mom and new dad he's got to feel left out... I only hope Edward got him a girlfriend, unless Mojo doesn't swing that way. ;)  God, I love that dog.  He must've tols his new "friend" all about mommy since they both went running to her.  Can't wait to read about the "deal" Edward made with him... no wonder Mojo snuggled with his shirt... he was dreaming of his new campainion.

Leah and Jacob deserve each other as far as I'm concerned- she's just as shallow as he is; how can she be so freakin clueless?  I was worried that Edward would screw up his hand, so' "phew" on that one.  Poor little Seth- to be so frightened of his own sister. 

Bella just needs to move in with Edward... I'm Just Sayin.  I can't wait for him to give her a collar to wear all the time.  I'm very happy where things are headed with these two.Ü

great!!

Thanks for the update! Love the pics! :~)

awsome chapter ! looking foward to the next one  i love sexy time with master cullen... 

loved it!!!

Oh my Edward sure did work her over so jealous. I would hate to think Edward has been pimping out mojo

can't wait to see what's next

I definitely think that Bella should give a lot more thought to the idea of moving in with Edward.    He asked, so he obviously wants her with him....

Wow, that was amazing :)  I really loved it SO much!  Loved her first training session!  I cannot wait to see what exactly the surprise means...although I have an idea ;)  I cannot wait for the next one!

Loved it!

This is going to be fun; I can't wait to see what Bella and Alice come up with to fuck with asshole Jacob. ;)

I have finally finished all the chapters in your story. It is incredible and extremely well written.

loved defender Cullen smacking down Black.  Excellent!!  hot sex, lots of banter and wind ups - just great :D

I'm glad he punched him.  Bella's divorce is final.  Leah's too stupid to see that Jacob is playing her for what reason I'm not sure.  Why in the world would Bella need Jacob's money.  She's already wealthy.

Girl!  Thank you so much for putting up that image of Boris Kodjoe as Laurent!  I never thought of that.  He is just a BEAUTIFUL man.  :)  I like that your story is a real story and not just BDSM stuff.  Happy writing!

The update is not a disappointment!!  It is great.  My gosh, I'm totally going to be folloing you in a few minutes...  Ah, the questions and comments you use to start your end notes, has me waiting for your next update.  Please hurry!!!

I would be awsome if Mojo gets a shot at Jacob, and even better if Mojo and Edward bond through the experience.  Gah... the way you ended the chapter has me wanting to dig through your mind to get an idea of what you have planned...

Awsome recs by the way.  I recognize some of the authors, and toatlly agree that their stories are on the addicting side.

hmmmmm i'd persnally like to see mojo bite jake

Excellent!!! Can't wait to see what happens......wait isn't the annulment already finalized? So why didn't Jacob tell Leah? Hum this is really going to be interesting........... Thanks so much for writing!!!!!!

Won't be mad about updates if you keep putting out chapters like this. Can't wait to check blog but need to wait till I'm alone, know you understand why. Hope Mojo tears Jake's leg off and then gets a piece of Leah too.

Question – I’m confused about this whole "Seth" kid. Back in Chapter 4 when he was first introduced, he was the night guard at Edward’s condo or something like that. Now it’s like he’s a child and calling Bella "Sissy" – it’s very confusing. I personally don’t care for the whole seth storyline part because I find it very boring and having nothing to do with what I’m reading the story for, which is Bella and Edward. But I’m still reading – and since I am I was hoping you could clarify how old Seth is and what’s going on.

Krazi - I just caught up on the story.  Well, its smoking hot.  great plot and great E & B.

Hmmm, I say produce the copy of the finalized annulment.  Just call and have a copy faxed or emailed to her to show the bitch it is Jake pulling everyone's chain.  I hope Charlie doesn't have to arrest Edward for assault, but I wouldn't put it past Jake to press charges.  What a mess!  And what is up with Leah treating Sue and Seth like crap?  Yea, bring on the hate.  Thanks for the update!  I have really enjoyed this story and all the little twists you have tossed at us so far. 

YEAH.  LOVED that Edward decked Jacob.  What an ass and Leah is one hell of a bitch... gah!  HATE THEM.  LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED the chapter, though... can't wait for more.  I've been checking your blog site almost daily for hints of an update.  Glad you finally were able to do it.

Hey, if you want custom manips I have found an AWESOME lady.  Lindz ... she rawks manips... she has 2 blogspot sites:  randomactsoflindz and robmaniporn ... check her out and maybe she can do some for you once in a while. 

Love ya lots!!!

Fangs

Ah! perfect ending...little shit needs a good ass kicking.

Sooo glad that you have the Blog...cause I love the pics.  I actually looked at them first so that I didn't have to stop reading... it worked out nicely (hee hee).

I can't believe that Leah is saying this shit to Bella?  Wasn't the anulment done and sent to Jacob as well?  Obviously Jacob didn't bother to tell Leah about the Pre-nup that was done between Bella and him with the "cheating" clause.... So VERY happy the Edward punched him... I just hope he didn't hurt his hand (you know being a surgeon and doctor).  Don't think Charlie will arrest Edward... in fact I think he'll be secretly elated that Edward was able to do what he couldn't do.   I feel soooo badly for Sue and little Seth having that vial bitch around... I can only imagine what kind of "Satan Spawn" Leah and Jacob are going to produce *insert willys here*... ;)

I can't wait to see what is in the contract and to see if Bella will move in with Edward when they get back to Seattle.  I also hope that Bella sets Edward, once and for all, straight about her feelings towards him and hoe they are both on the same page......  When you think about it, they've been in love with each other for over half their lives...so why things may seem to be moving fast, it's really just the physical part they had left to develop, the emotional attachment has been there for a very long time.  I guess that's my way of saying, that for this story, they can move as fast as they want!Ü

Good Chapter.....

Greaat chapter! Charlie sure as heck better act like he didn't see anybody get punched because I'd be sorely disappointed in his arse if he did something like try to arrest E for sticking up for his daughter. What can Jacob's story be?

Can't wait to read more, missed reading about these guys.

Thanks for writing;D)

Awesome chapter! Cannot wait for more! Love the domward!

An update after so long. Great.

Anyway the chapter was fun to read, with the sexy time between Bella and Edward and also the activities with Seth. My guess is, that the next chapter is going to be funny, now that Leah and Jacob are back in the picture.

Also the pictures help very much for a visiual impression :)

See you next chapter.

Woo Hoo   Go Edward punching that arsehole.    And J and L should be ashamed at how they are treating sue and seth esp. 

awesome chapter!

nicely done...as usual.  I love that Jake gets a face punch here.  He is such a dick lol.  If Leah weren't preggers she would need one too.  Sorry bout the pictures thing.  If those women were smart instead of reading your story at work they should wait for private time.  I have learned I can't read yours when the household is awake lol so always read when the kids are in bed lol.  I love the pics they add a little extra breath hitch to the story.  Oh well I just went to the blog first got my eyeful (and what an eyeful I must say) then imagined them while reading.  Looking forward to next chapter! 

I know a lot happened in this chapter but all I can think of is GO EDWARD for decking Jacobs ass.

Author's Response:

I know right!  But for some I don´t think it´s over, Charlie may very well have to break out the badge and make it official!  One can only hope!  Thanks for reviewing!

I soooo need to get me one of those little numbers. ;)  Holy hell, that was awesome on a whole new level!  And I can only imagine who was knocking on the window.

The battle between Edward and Cujo...I mean Mojo is too funny and I can not wait to see who wins the next round.

I am loving this story more and more everytime!!! Update soon please !!! =]

Outstanding chapter...though I expect nothing less.  That dog is killing me.  Cujo, indeed!!  Congrats on the noms.  I'll be voting...shame there's not a category for the cockblocking dog!  samekraemer

loved it all very much thanks for sharing this with us and so excited for more update when you can......

omg thhat was so close let That be seth knocking on the window aND  to let them get to the house and him give her a bath and her give him head before they sit with her parents for dinner i want these two together for ever i await the next chapter you are a great writer

Have to say that Edward and Mojo are really funny in the way they act.  Reading about Bella practicing on her control was fantastic.  I can't wait to see who caught them in the car! 

When you say that the pics will only be posted in the blog, are you talking about the ones that you have been integrating into the chapters? (I just want to double check, becuase I really like the way you have it here) 

Thank you for sharing this wonderful chapter!

Oh my gosh...reading about Edward vs. Mojo and all those antics?  That was a scream!!!!  And the score keeping?  Genius!

Laughed out loud reading this:

I just chuckled lightly, they were the complete polar opposites, where Alice needed Ritalin, three times a day, and Bella was always as calm and cool as a cucumber.

Had to laugh at this too:

I cocked an eyebrow in his direction at the choice of his words. “Did you just say that you could feel the love radiating of me, Whitlock?” I grinned in earnest.

But, yes, Jasper put him right back into his place, right?  *grin*

*grumbles something about 'damn lucky Bella'*:

“Besides... being fucked six ways to Sunday, looks good on Bella.”

Yeah, busted by Charlie I'll just bet!!! Buaahaaaa!

Keye

I love Mojo I have 4 of them love my babys but they are very teritorial I am theirs.  Who busted them??? I cant wait for more.

i knew charlie was on the look out for them

Brill!

Hee hee. Little dogs can be SOOO protective of their mama's!! Some serious negotiations will be necessary for the boys in Bella's life to find mutual contentment.

Jasper must be having great fun seeing his almost-brother-in-law so utterly smitten. I suspect a little teasing will take place next time they are all together.

Hot DAMN but that was one hell of a car ride!!! Yikes, to be caught though. Wonder just who is knockin' on the window???