awesome chapter!!! i'm so glad you covered that much all at once. i was afraid to hope they'd get that far so quickly. now edward has confessed his love and everything. what an awesome first time. loved the sexy underwear! gotta find some for myself. this story is one that i'm always waiting for; it's too good to put down. keep up the good work.

Started reading this story this weekend and I am enjoying it. So much so that I have rec'd it to someone else. Just wanted to let you know a few chapters ago I was listening to my itunes play list and Rob Pattinson's Let Me Sign was playing and it thought it was definately a good song to be playing at that particular part of the story. It was just after Alice Pov and Edward Pov had just started. Also wanted to say thanks for writing. Look forward to your next update.

yours,

Lori

-Bella's really getting on my nerves.  It does sound like Alice suspects what is bothering Bella but what irks me is that as long as these two have been friends, Bella doesn't trust Alice enough to be honest with her.  We're talking best friends forever here and Bella can't bring herself to explain what's been bothering her.  I don't quite understand why Alice doesn't just bring it up unless she's just not sure and maybe worried she might insult Bella - but between the two of them - people could die - rhetorical comment, of course! 

Can't wait to find out what Bella and Alice have in store for Alice.  And what a little sneak Alice is for not letting Bella in on Edward and what's going on with him.  Yes, enjoyed the background on Bella very much.

Just found the site, about the 2nd story I read and wow!   You write so wonderfully, you can use the English language properly AND you can put them together to form an awesome story.

Never read a story with images before but yeh the images are hot...

Thank you for a mind blowing introduction to the site.

I love this story and I think you have really done great with it!  And for what it is worth, I LOVE the pics!  I am a visual person (not very imaginative, I guess) and it really makes the story for me to see what YOU, the author are describing.  The only thing that I find distracting are the comments from "the peanut gallery" -- it messes up the flow for me BUT that may just be because I am S-L-O-W. 

Thanks for sharing your story! 

Awesome chapter as always!

Thanks for the panty alert at the onset. Definitely necessary!

You are cracking me up with Bella's 'Inner Goddess" making comments like spending time on 'Dr. Domward's disco stick' to  Edward refering to his appendage as 'the Deviant' being in rare form or twitched a hey there... how are ya, at her.

Now that the cherry popping mess is out of the way let the Dom/sub sessons commence. Will they be in a  24/7 style relationship?

I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed this chapter.  That, and how much I like having the pictures in the chapters.  I actually started reading this story on fanfiction, and just found posted here recently.  After reading this chapter, and seeing the pictures, I will be rereading the other chapters when I have time. 

Thanks for sharing the story (even the cliffhangers at the end of the chapter).

It doesn't get much better then this.  I can't believe Bella would even think that Edward would set all this up just to tell her he didn't want her. 

Their night has been perfect so far.  I hope Bella is honest and tells Edward she is in love with him too.  Great chapter....thanks so much!!!

I just adore this story! It is unbelievably well written, and the way you get the characters emotions out so much so that I can actually feel them, is simply amazing!!! This chapter was awesome, and just absolutely perfect for them!! I love that you didn't keep it mussy slow and soft, it just wouldn't suit Edward and Bella, they needed the passion and WOW!! was it incredible! Thanks again for this incredible story, and I will wait with bated breath for Bella to tell Edward she loves him too, and put the poor baby out of his misery! LOL! Till next time, take care!

Wow, that was great and loved all the pics and that was a long chapter worth the wait.

No!!!! seriously? You left it there? Ugh!!!! Have you posted the next update yet?

Other than that, it was perfect!!! edward was so romantic with all the preparations!!! 

Loved it!!!!

omg that was so awesome i hope in the beginning of the next chapter that you have her telling him that she is in love with him as well and that she has been all along i am so looking forward to them having a personal relationship and a dom/sub relationship as well i await the next chapter you are a great writer

Holy shit!!!  After changing my ruined panties...this chapter was wonderful... girl you are so awesome!!!  I have been drawn in to your story and stop everything to read your updated chapters... I love that Edward is telling Bella how he feels...they love each other so much....just tell each other!!!

So many parts that I loved about this chapter.  This is just a few.  Otherwise I would be quoting back to you the entire chapter!  *smile*

I´d let him fuck me on top of one of those talking trash bins outside the CVS! Can we say, “thank you for the deposit!”

 The feeling of his morning wood suddenly poking me in the back caused me to gasp. “Sorry,” Edward rasped, his voice still thick with sleep. His warm breath cascaded across my shoulder, causing my skin to pebble with goose flesh. “He wanted to say good morning; I hope you don´t mind.”

Pfft... mind? I was just thinking, how rude of me not to say, “Good morning” to him!

Where are my manners!

 It took all the strength I could muster to get up off the floor and not go jerk one out before dinner. Instead, I headed to my room to wash up, changed into a pair of loose-fitting jeans and regrouped, all the while pouting like a Kindergartener. Yeah, Isabella took away my favorite toy... her pussy!

Wow, what a first time!  I don't think it can get any better than that, can it?  Oh and Edward said the ILY's!  *Squee*  Now you know that Bella loves him too.  Maybe she was just surprised that he said it?  I mean, she came to the hotel suite thinking he was going to dumb her so wth does she know?  LOL!!!  Like a guy would drag a woman to the Presidential Suite to dump her ass!  More like take her to Dairy Queen for  Blizzard!  LOL!!!

Great chapter.........can't wait to read what happens next!!  Oh, and I love the photos.  Everyone who doesn't can suck it!  *wink*

Keye

Dun, dun,dun!

The nice, generous Dr. Domward grew some balls! Can't wait to see what little B has to say to that!

I totally would still be drooling after all that lovin. *shakes head* Such a silly couple.

Til next time, happy typing!

CrimsonR

thanks as always awsome chapter

Wow!!!!!!That was some hot chapter.....Please update soon 

AMAZING CHAPTER :: THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATED, AND FOR THE RECORD I ENJOY SOME PICTURES IN THE CHAPTERS !! CAN T WAIT TO GET BELLA"S FEELING 

There is no other word than...Fuckhot...to describe that!  I seriously wish my first time was that amazing.  Anyway...great chapter!  Can't wait for the next update!

PS-I greatly enjoy the pics in the middle  :)

absolutely perfecgt!

AHHHHHH!!! That was f*ing amazing. You are such an amazing writer. I love that you covered a lot of time so we can start to see teh rest of teh relationship.

Bella better say that she loves him too, because we all knoiw she does=) Update SOON please!

~My Not-So-Secret Obsession

awesome job!!!!

will i hope that she dosent freeze up about his comment! i cant wait to see what happens next with these 2! 

Oh.

My.

God. *fans self*

Edward's plan won't backfire...Bella won't over-react...He did the right thing (& beautifully)...She will be over the moon happy...That's my story & I'm sticking to it...

Mighty fine chapter!I so glad that E & B spent some quality time together before his big reveal. NGL though I really worried about Bella's reaction. I'll be on pins & needles until I hear what she has to say.

Beyond well sone...again! Thanks so much.

Kat

oh god dont let her ruin it by getting freaked out

Great chapter. But I think I will read over at fan fiction because the last set of pictures were a little too hot for me. ......I liked the banana picture better :) than the real thing....Im kind a less is more type of person and I have a very vivid imagination with your mind blowing writing.

Krazi~

I fucking love you!  This was exactly as I hoped it would be!  I just absolutely LOVE this story.  You should be so proud of yourself because this is just flat out fucking amazing. 

Kasi~

Wow .... Just..... Wow.....

Well that was worth the wait,

Wow! Only had to change my panties twice while reading that! I may have to go shopping before they hit the playroom!

:~D

Sexy times!

wow i defenteily love the pictures in your chapters.

well seems things have moved along and we are getting steamy and wet. omg so hawt. they are together and so loving it. i am glad bella got her groove on. they are good for each other. loveit so much thanx for writing

"Leave me some love!"....Love, love, love!!!!  Can't wait for more of this story!

HOLYCRAP!

he seems to be scared?????? after that evening together he still doubts her?   cant wait to see where this go from here

xoxo

~m

Totally awesome!! Really glad you updated!! Can't wait for more!!

Oh boy!  I hope she doesnt run scared.

WOW , very nice.  I love the pictures thru the chapters, don't listen to the other people.  my husband really liked one on this page alot.  Guess?   anyway, love the chapter and the i love you was the icing on th ecake

I am glad that you are settling in nicely at your new job and trying to get back into the flow.  I know how hard it is to start working after you have not done it in a while.  It take alot of adjustment.

HOT, HOT, HOT!  I need a new pair of panties just from reading that chapter.

I do not understand why Bella did not say anything back?  I am sure she was shell shocked, but come on.  Leaving us hanging like that is so mean. ;)

I thought that Edward was going to tell Bella that he had been in love with her for years.  I read the chapter twice, and he only said that he loved her, not how long he had loved her.  I thought she would say something more to him as well, but all we heard was "it was always you".  I do not even think that he picked up on that tidbit.

Are they ever going to admit to one another that each of them coveted the other for years?

I am glad that they are moving into a relationship mode, but they really need to do some more talking and keep their hands to themselves while they talk.

I can't wait to see what you have for us next time.  I do not want this review to come off as bitchy because I love this story, but I was just disappointed that they did not tell one another how long they have wanted each other for many years.  Again, love the story and can't wait to see what comes next.

By the way, I love the pictures.  They are better than what my mind can come up with. Who would have a problem with the pictures...wierd

What a beautiful job you did for B&E... making it so special!  I love both of their inner ramblings, so insecure, so normal.  Thanks for the update, as always update as soon as RL allows.

Loved, loved, loved it. Have to cool off. Fan, fan, fan. Whoever doesn't like your pictures is nuts. Want more!!!!

Can't wait to see what happens next.  I hope she tells him ILU back.  Can't wait for them to start telling each other how long they've wanted the other.  :)

 Glad your liking your new JOB, (I take you are anyway!) Things will settle down and will become old hat before long, then we will have our wonderful Author back with us again,  We (your loyal fans) can be patient...your worth it...

What a well done Chapter!  Wow, the emotions that we see coming from our Oh, So Sexy as Hell Dom Edward is overwhelming.  He is the Sexiest Man Alive that's for sure.  You certainly made their first time together something very very special and romantic indeed.  Bless her heart she was so fearful she would disappoint him.  I loved it when he told her the only thing that would disappoint him was if somone else were in the bed with him.. Awwwhhh now that was killer, sorry but it was...

I know we are going to need to visit with the messed up psycho ex-submissive of Edwards before long, and I just feel the dread coming.  They are so blissfully happy right now...

Okay have good days at work and hopefully without stress and anexity!  Till the next chapter, (OH BTW, I personally love, love, love all the pictures in the story and that is the Main reason I use TWC over FF most of the time.)  You are the Rock'n'est!!!!

Laters to you! Krazi and Mojo take care!  ~Kathy xoxoxoxo~

the moments we've all been waiting for!!! for them to finally realize what we've all known!!  yikes this is getting soooooooo good!!!  i can't wait to see how this all plays out.  so hot and sexy!!! 

oh - btw - where the hell are finding all the sexy ass pictures you keep posting in the stories?

holy mother fucker in the heavens of lust!!! that was totally hot!!!  smoking hot!! loved it!

High Five

i really love this fic and hope that you continue it

I flounced on this a while back and couldn't remember why.  I saw all the reviews and tried again just to be reminded.  I hate the Bella's a virgin plot line.  I'm trying to ignore it because obvioulsy the rest of the story is good or so many people wouldn't tell you so, right?  I feel better at least saying somthing ;-)

Chapter is long but funny and sad at the same time..   your a awesome writer..  can't wait for the next chaptyer.  Night :)