It was impressive and filled with so much detail and care. How the entire wedding was planned, how by Bella almost loosing it thanks to Alice's planning, the perfect reception was created. Edward is really amazing at planning things. 

The strip club... well,  she was going to find out. The truth tends to surface always. Did Emmett and Jasper get out of it easily? I hope not. We didn't get to find out how it went for them after Bella and Edward's fight.

Bella wearing her mother's dress was a wonderful touch, I loved it. Now we only have to wait for the honeymoon...

Beautiful wedding, love her dress. Oh, and your jokes were great too.

I love Tony and Fay!  They are awesome!!!

Edward's proposal was sweet too!

I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Keye

Awesome!  Like she'd ever say, "No."  Damn, Edward's words were like wedding vows...they were beautiful.  Nice job ladies.

that was very romanic..  But what a cliff hanger..  We all know she'll say yes..  I hope..  Your not that mean..  But to make us wait is mean of enough..  haha. 

I love this chapter..  He would move mountain for Bella.  she is one luck women to have someone that love her with all is heart and soul.. 

:)Leona

excited to see her answer ! 

Edward was adorable in this chapter. But I must say Tony mkght catch up with him any second. The one thing about this whole chapter that makes me abit sad is that Fay and Tony might not be sharing a ouse with Bella and Edward.

Author's Response:

I love Tony he's a sweeie! :( I know it's sad but they have to move on. The good thing is it's just down the road.

Loved it.

Awe.. ILY's;D)

Em is too funny and Tony  hey he is the new bomb of teasin, right!!  Finally, he asked her...  Yay!!!  Kitten should make him sweat with the answer...  NOT!!  I'm joking...  hey how about a theme engagement party..  get it Spartan and Kitten...  LOL!!!!   So bittersweet that we are getting closer to the end of the story..  but what an amazing story it has been..  so till next chapter hope you both are well...  much love...and appreciation....  Kathy  xoxoxoxo

That was evil to leave it right there!  I thought that we would get an answer at least,

Thank you for the update

I soooooo dont understand why everyone cuts there chapters after he asks the question, 9 times out of 10 Bella always says yes!  Its a friggen no brainer, so just one I would love someone to let her answer the friggin question.

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Cracked up while reading this:

"You trying to get me drunk, man? If you are, just so you know, cuz I don't swing that way! I'm strictly for the pussy man."

"Not tryin' to get ya' drunk. You're already there and that's nice to know."

And this:

What I heard was... I'm Lucifer, come take a walk on the dark side with me and explore my deadly ways.

And this:

He hung up on me! Wait a goddamn minute. Jasper doesn't have a fucking dog! He hates dogs. So, I call him right back, but he must have turned his phone off because it went straight to voicemail. That motherfucker!

*reaches for Kleenex*:

I closed my eyes almost feeling like my dad was patting me on the back. And in that mere second I heard his voice. "She's perfect. "

Keye

I have to say I love this chapter, it was wonderful to see Ang step up and bow out.

I loved how Bella and Edward reconnected.  Wonderful.

Another spectacular chapter from you two! I can't tell you how much I enjoy your story. Great job to both of you.

I don't know which one of you came up with this idea. But this is the best story EVER! I still laugh at Emmett he's a trip. Oh god I just love it so much. It never gets old no matter how many times I read it. It had everything drama, funny in all the right parts, lemons in ALL the right parts. Which I love the lemons. I could marry this story I have to be your number one fan-girl! Please let me be I'm begging you two.

Yay!!

Wow, that was AMAZING!  I really loved it so much!  Go Bella for sticking with Edward, through the good and the bad :)  I cannot wait to see how everything wraps up after this :)

great chpter and it doesn't say the end so I hope their is more

SO happy they finally are back together!

I was glad for the update & for him to get over himself & for them to have their HEA. I'm glad they were both able to see the others side of things & care more about that than their hurt feelings. I don't know if I was Bella I could be as generous & understanding with Edward's rejection. You wrote it very lovely.

So, looking forward to more;D)

That was sad, happy, funny, Sexy, and so on. It was a beautiful chapter.
I agree with Bella they were both wrong in some way. But their love is strong. I do agree in fate. their is good and bad. But what is ment to be will be.. it just when You guys have done a beautiful job on the story..
:)Leona

So, he who shall not be named will be called, him. God, I'm pathetic.  ----  Sounds familiar.  Voldemort?   LOL!

Sweet.  SO glad B & E have worked things out.  Living there sounds like a good idea.

Will you give us a wedding?

OMG - I FUCKING LOVE EMMETT!!!!!!!  I spewed coffee all over the place when I read his warning!!!!  I am so loving your story!!!

Nice work around. I am so glad they, well did they really talk? Well dammit they will. Thank you for a great chapter!

Thanks for the new chapter. Yes, I'm glad he's finally stopped acting 4 years old.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Actually, I personally do not feel Edward had his head up his ass, so I resent you last comment!

That being said, I am glad that he has let go of the anger.  

I just hope Bella does a bit of grovelling as well, because she should have gone to him and not Ange, he had no one and Esme was a bitch to her and him and I cant say much more about Angela as well, instead of letting Edward go, she cause more shit than she even realises and Bella goes and comforts her... please give me strength.

Love the chapter, brought a tear to my eye.

Wow, that was amazing :)  YAY for Edwar finally getting it together again :)  I cannot wait to read BPOV and to see these two together again :)

tear drop for carlisl.... edward finally got his head out his ass and him and bella can work it out. knew what alice was doing as soon as she made the call... can't wait for more...

okay  i will say it DLIR  whoop whoop  two chapters in two days....   

well thank all the powers that be he finally got over his spoilt hurt childish behavior and woke up    sweet jumping tree frogs  FINALLY!!!!  

Love to you both have a wonderful one!!!!!! 

TTFN  Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxo

OH thank fuckin god he pulled his head out or I was going to have to go all ape shit on his ass LOL   I cant wait to hear from Bella I am sure I will have tears in reading her side poor thing

well im glad taht he got his head out of his ass! 

Edwrad had a very bad time.  So sad.  But at least he finally let Bella be with him.  He had to know in the back of his mind they would work out!

I did get a little confused with the Esme thing:  I know she was the mother figure in his life, but did he think she was actually his mother?  It seemed that he never knew that his real mother had died when he was a child.

This was the funeral; now I want the wedding of E & B!!!

Keep up the good work!

I am still on the fence when it comes to Team Edward or Team Bella in concern to his death.  On one hand, I think that Bella comforting Angela was the right thing to do because if it wasn't for Angela, Edward might have lost Bella in the big picture.  Also, Angela and Bella went through something very tramatizing together and stuff like that always brings people together.

On the other hand, I think Bella was cold and callous that she went to Angela instead of the love of her life, Edward, to comfort her about Esme's death. Edward should have been in forefront of her mind.  Hell, he is the one who saved her from Eric after all.  

She was damned either way she chose.  There are many arguements that can be made for both sides, but no matter how she chose someone was going to get hurt.

I really can't wait to read her POV and she what she was thinking.  I want to know if she ever felt bad about chosing Angela over Edward.  I know her brain works differently so the next chapter should be a pretty good read.

Thank you for two fabulous updates in two days.  All your readers greatly appreciate it.

You may swoon, but I am still mad as hell at him. When you loose people you are brought to the knowledge of "LIFE IS SHORT and NEVER FORGET TO SAY I LOVE YOU". His actions are horrible. Esme rubbed off on him.

He had to snap out of it. If it woild have taken longer I'm sure Fay and Alice would have found a way to force him. He is in pain, and pain tends to cloud judgements. His friends, correction, his family knew it and were just giving jim time. Talking about his father, remebering him and his love is what made him open his eyes. Luckily for him Bella and the rest were there already just waiting for him.
The reunion doesn't mean everything is settled, there will have to be a lot of talking, no doubt. A huge improvemend from the guy who was closing himself from everyone and everything.
Thank younso very very very vey much for this fast update!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Yayyyyyyyy...all is good in SMW land..hehe....I am just doing some last minute fixer uppers on the next chap and it will be on its way to the beta.....sooo hope ur not waiting to long in between. Thank you again for reviewing xoxoxoxo

Wow so much shit happening to him but he must remember the shit Bella went through and stop being such a baby that she did not go to him first.  I hope Bella does kick his ass when she finely sees him.

Well I can't say that I am over joyed with Edward right now!  But!!!!!  I understand that he is just completely torn up right now.... I have to say I didn't think I was going to be able to find humor in this chapter, but HELL IF I DIDN'T   you all are incredible writers!!!  That was some funny assed shit with his dream!!!! 

I know that he will come to his senses eventually, and I'm still not convinced that Bella's not preggers... wouldn't that be a lovely twist for him to find out that he left her pregnant and not allowing himself all the happiness that they could be sharing together as a family... After all his Mother and Father didn't take life for granted they loved fiercely while they could.....  Just saying  that I love this story and we all know our Spartan can think out of his ASS sometimes and NOT necessarily in the best way.

So glad your back writing and posting again and hope all is well with the two of you!!! Good to hear from your wicked minds.... :-)  TTFN  Kathy xoxoxo

You have killed off a BUNCH of people!

I have gotten SO far behind in this story!!  I have really missed it!  But I am about to be caught up so keep up the good work!

Please get E & B together quickly!

im excited for the next chapter ! 

ok I'm just gonna say it WTF?

Where is the logic here? This part of the story has just gone all wrong ..perhaps some prozac for Eddie boy is in order.

alright I am gonna say this right now. He lost his father and that is awfull. IS that Bella's fault? NO Esme & Anglea messed with everyone. Esme set up most of it, but without Angela, Bella would be dead.

Edward wants to be mad at her she needs to say fine. and leave them all to go to hell. I mean it.

Okay I understand that he is angry, but why is he so dismissive of Bella? He is so angry at her and has not even spoken with her about anything. Will this last long? Is it really over?

I THINK HE IS BEING A TOTAL JERK, HE DESERVES TO BE ALONE OR MAYBE HE IS A LITTLE MORE LIKE ESME

Why don't you want reviews?  Afraid of the ass chewing about Edward's irrational behavior?  Meh, it is what it is... I just hope that he and Bella can get past this whole fuckery and "communicate". 

He's being really stupid.

Great chapter. I don't blame Edward, but I also feel sorry for Bella. Can't wait to read more.

Great chapter. Hope in part 2 someone is able to knock a little sense in Edward to help him through the pain.