[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2010 4:49 AM Title: I fucking love swings
I'm glad Bella called Edward even if Angela answered! She's going to stay with them & now that Edward will know Bella has left Eric, he can leave Angela. The pretense can end!!
Author's Response:
:) she needed her Spartan....xoxoxo thanks for reviewing DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2010 4:06 AM Title: I fucking love swings
was it eric - the loon?
Author's Response:
You willl soon find out........ :) DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2010 3:52 AM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
i hate that these two are messing each other up so badly - something's got to give sometime
Author's Response:
Time heals everything.....:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2010 2:51 AM Title: I fucking love swings
I loved the spa talk, i love naughty woman talk, nothing like a sports sock(Yah Babeee) poor Barbie sock gotta get hated on. The break up with Eric was painful but necessary. I truly felt so bad for him what a blow to his ego but his behavior after the fact- I'm gonna kick his ass and yes I know he is not real but still her mom's blanket that was foul-poor poor Bella. I have to say I got very very ill for the holiday-in the hospital with walking pnemonia and all I could think of other than my kids and I felt like I was dying(" oh please dont update til I get home")-I missed my gals so seeing this makes me so happy though I cant catch my breath with all that my lungs hate me right now. Please update with our Spartan soon to make your girl better faster puhlease........
Author's Response:
Omg......take care of urself......DLIR AND ARI gives ur a hug....OH HELL....SPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRTAAANNNNNNNNNN get ur ass over here and hug the damn woman.....u can leave kitten for a sec GEEESSSHHH....Men...cant live with them but u cant live without them...especially if they are ROB aka SPARTAN HOTNESS......MUAH....Ari has her chapter written so a few tweeks and off to the BETA....xoxoxoxoxo
Date: 02 Dec 2010 2:09 AM Title: I fucking love swings
ALRIGHT...sorry my inner 12 year old is psyched that she is going to stay with Edward.I hate cheaters but its a story so I sooo can't wait to see how they attempt to stay apart in confined quarters. HA! I LOVE this story...keep the updates coming.
Author's Response:
Thank you for seeing the "its a story" I am not fond of cheaters.....but we try not to have them "cheat" as bad as it could be....hence no sex with the actual spouses....that shit aint cool....MUAH....Spartans house will be very interesting DLIR AND ARI
Date: 01 Dec 2010 11:29 PM Title: I fucking love swings
Its gonna get goooood..........with Bella staying with the two of them.
Author's Response:
I hope sooooo.....muhahahhaha <3 thanks for the review MUAH DLIR AND ARI
Date: 01 Dec 2010 10:24 PM Title: I fucking love swings
I love this story more and more!!!!! Please,Please get Edward and Bella together soon!!!!!! I Cannot wait for another update.
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much.....xoxoxoxo yes we want them together tooo..but u never know what lies in their future.....*wink wink* DLIR AND ARI
Date: 01 Dec 2010 7:45 PM Title: I fucking love swings
love this story!! i can't believe eric. he's a freakin psycho. i wonder how edward's gonna feel with bella staying at his house now? can't waitt for the next chapterrr!!
Author's Response:
wait till he see's bella in his house.....muahhaha,....ohh im tearing...xoxoxoxo dlir and ari
Date: 01 Dec 2010 7:02 PM Title: I fucking love swings
LOved the chapter. Who would think that Eric would turn out to be such a douche? Yeah, I think it was him that trashed the house. It was too "personal" to be done by anyone else. Oh and the whole conversation about the "sports sock" and all that? Hysterical! And I cannot wait to see what happens now that Bella is going over to Spartan's HOUSE!!!!!! *squee* That is going to be something!!!!!
The video was rocking!!!! Loved it. What software did you use to make it? I am always curious about stuff like that.
Ladies, as always, great job and I cannot wait to see what happens next!!!!
Keye
Author's Response:
I use one true media for the videos.....its free. thank you soo much for the review...and yes....SQUEALLLLLLLLLLLS with u...she going to see spartan...heheheh....sports sock,..oh god its a joke between me and my friends at work for a while now...so i figure i write it in the story and share....xoxoxo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 01 Dec 2010 6:03 PM Title: I fucking love swings
Told you: See more proof that Eric had something to do with Bellas attack. Eric is C R A Z Y.. I could see this becoming a serious problem for her. OOHH and wait til Edward finds out about this.
E/k
Author's Response:
heheehh I cant wait either.....and pretty good theory with Eric....hmmmm interesting.... :) DLIR AND ARI
Date: 01 Dec 2010 5:59 PM Title: I fucking love swings
Wow, that was amazing! I really loved it so much :) I really hope they find Eric soon! Amazing job, once again :D I cannot wait to find out what happens next ;)
Author's Response:
I cant wait to see ur reaction to what happens next ;) xoxoxoo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 01 Dec 2010 5:22 PM Title: I fucking love swings
Great - Can't wait for more
Author's Response:
We hope to keep them coming quickly....Ari has her next chap written...just some fine tuning then off to the BEta.....thank you sooo much DLIR AND ARI
Date: 01 Dec 2010 5:15 PM Title: I fucking love swings
:)
Author's Response:
Im glad u enjoyed it xoxoxoxo :) Dlir and Ari
Date: 01 Dec 2010 4:48 PM Title: I fucking love swings
uh ooh... did Eric do this?????
Author's Response:
I dont know did he?? hehheeh muhahah (evil laugh) : ) hope you enjoy the resssssst.... xoxo DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2010 2:35 PM Title: I fucking love swings
Bella had to encourage herself but she finally did it. She had the courage to take a huge step into putting her life in the order she wants and needs. That step wasn't an easy one, and it brought consequences she never imagined. She told Eric their marriage was over. An understatement is to say he didn't take it lightly it seems. However Bella needed this and needs now to not stop. Her next action was a surprise, I never imagined she would call Angela. She did, and now, she is taking her help, oh my! What will that be like?
Author's Response:
Love ur review....yes she called angela in a way to get to edward, since she didnt have his number herself....will it backfire or will she happy to see him? thank you for the review....We love each of them DLIR AND ARI
Date: 01 Dec 2010 2:12 PM Title: I fucking love swings
Poor Bella! Is Eric really that psychotic? Holy crap!
I don't know about Bella living with Angela and Edward. It seems like an unnecessary amount of melodrama is about to come flying our way.
So... I take it Edward's nightmare about Angela sleeping with him while he was hopped up on meds actually happened. Does this mean she tricked him into getting her pregnant? How fucking sick is that?
I love what you guys are doing here. Keep it going!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much....we hope you enjoy the rest of the story.....Melodrama coming up...wellll there will definitely be things happening....LOL.....Angel pregnant??? hmmmm Hey ari is she??? yah she makes me sick too...but thank you sooooooooo much for reviewing....DLIR AND ARI
Date: 01 Dec 2010 10:55 AM Title: I fucking love swings
Yes, I liked the chapter;D) I still think Angela is no good. I wonder if she was involved or if Laurent or whoever was involved with attacking her was involved in this too?
Thanks so much for updating~.~
Author's Response:
i loved your theory with Laurent......Not bad...not bad....your just gonna have to see if Angela was being it or not.... :) DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2010 9:10 AM Title: I fucking love swings
wow this was a really good chapter. I think Eric is crazy. Well I guess this is one way to get Bella and Edward in the same house. I cant wait for the next chapter. I am thinking that Angela is planning this whole thing so that she can get proof of Bella with Edward so she can get all his money.
Author's Response:
That is a very good theory you have going on....Is it right??? you will just have to be patient....but yes there is a lil more to the story then we have mentioned.....xoxoxo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 01 Dec 2010 8:03 AM Title: I fucking love swings
great story please keep updating thanks :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing...it honestly makes us sooo happy and wanting to write more...Ari chapter is written and will be with the Beta soon.....xooxoxo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 01 Dec 2010 7:05 AM Title: I fucking love swings
I will never look at a sports sock again. This was a great chapter and is a perfect reason why I wait patiently for your updates. With that said, stop having a life and get to the next chapter! How dense can Angela be? How well can Bella lie? How stupid can Edward be?
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much for the review.....yah u cant look at a sports sock or thimble or barbie sock the same ever.....hahah...im glad u enjoyed the humour i tried to portray...some people found her harsh but I enjoyed writing that soooo much....xoxoxoxo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 01 Dec 2010 6:35 AM Title: I fucking love swings
Who would have thought, Eric would get so aggressive? Whiny, yes, but not breaking down the house.
And now Bella is going to live with Angela AND Edward??? OMG - I am so looking forward to these "roomies".
So please don't let us wait too long for the next update. Now that Bella found the strength to kick Eric out, how long will it take for Edward to finally break up with Angela?
Sabs
Author's Response:
Thank you soooooooooo much for liking and reviewing this chapter...and yes, i cant wait to see the roomies in action....Ari has her chapter written soooo off to the Beta is goes....DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2010 6:07 AM Title: I fucking love swings
Wow! I really feel that Bella was really a little harsh on Eric when she was teasing him about his size. I had a boyfriend who unfortunately was like that and I would never have said the things she did to him. In the long run I think Eric must have retaliated. Well this should be really interesting. Bella living under the same roof as Edward, how convenient. Hmmmmm. Cannot possibly wait another day for another update, but I guess I will have to. Happy Thanksgiving.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing....Bella could have been a little nicer. Would I have said it prob not....but Bella outspoken and at that moment she had enough...sorry if u hated that. Eric did retaliate but he aint as nice as we have written him so far.... :) Ari's chap is written so it wont be a long wait....xoxoox thanks for reading DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 12:28 PM Title: To Happiness
Ok - that was a very interesting chapter!!!
Can't wait to read what's going to happen next :)
So curious...
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 6:54 AM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
Oh this is so going to blow up in his face BIG TIME!!!!
Watch out Edward - Angela is very clever too!!!!
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 6:17 AM Title: Time To Think
Lemons in elevators are always awesome :)
Yes, kill Angela & Eric - LMAO!!!!
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 6:01 AM Title: Fuck My Life
It's been extremely hard to read today - just when I thought I had the whole day to myself... my 12yr old daughter decides to break her arm :(
So off to the doctors we go & yes, in plaster for the next 6 weeks!!!!
End of our school year here, she's School Captain, State Athlete & School champion swimmer.... as well as dancing & singing concerts - she has to cancel everything now :(
So I didn't get to read until now - so now it's off to another chapter :)
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 1:41 AM Title: Laurent
Nasty man!!!
Yeah - jumping for joy she has found out!!!!
But is Edward ok - will he remember it all? I do hope so...
T2M x
Author's Response:
:) you will just have to read and see....thank you for your review...it means a lot to us DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2010 1:48 PM Title: Mirror's Reflection
Geez - you keep on leaving these cliffies & I have to get to the next chapter....
Which thank goodness for me is up just for me!!!!
Sorry - no long review - must read .... midnight here & have tog et to bed too :(
T2M x
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much for the reviews. Im glad your enjoying the beginning of Spartan and Kitten..hehe ur in luck..u have a few more chapters to read...and we should be updating in the next day or two....Dlir and Ari
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2010 1:16 PM Title: Spartan Lover
Another fantastic chapter....
Can't wait for when they realise who each other is :)
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2010 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
OMFG - what a hot citrusy lemony chapter - WOW!!!!!
I think I held my breathe thru out that whole chapter..... :)
Now on to more - yippee...
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2010 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hot doesn't even describe it :)
On to the next chapter for me!!! WOOHOO!!!
Got rec'd to your story - so glad I did :)
T2M x
Date: 25 Nov 2010 5:12 AM Title: To Happiness
great story
Author's Response:
thank you sooo much................our next chapter is off with the BETA...shoudnt be tooo long......DLIR AND ARI...................
Date: 25 Nov 2010 1:42 AM Title: To Happiness
Great Story looking forward to the next chapter. You two should write more stories together.
Author's Response:
thank you so much....xoxox we have one other story we wrote....its under ari and its called Im coming my love.....but we love writing together....we feed off of each other soooo its really fun...We love seeing all of you enjoying it as well.... DLIR AND ARI
Date: 24 Nov 2010 1:35 AM Title: To Happiness
Angela and Eric are clueless, at least I hope Bella is strong enough to get out of her marriage with Eric, and that she does it for her, not for Edward
Author's Response:
Bella has a head on her shoulders.....so she took the first step.....we will just see what happens next ...thank for reviewing DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 10:31 PM Title: To Happiness
love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you and we love you too......xoxoxo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 22 Nov 2010 9:51 PM Title: To Happiness
I really didn't like this chapter because it was the same thing on in BPOV so yah I dont really like reading the same thing twice. We did kind of see that Angela knows. At least that is what I think.
Author's Response:
Sorry u didnt enjoy it but it shed some answers that people were asking us.....Like why was she holding Erics hand...why was she laughing with eric if she isnt happy....why did she ask him to dance. So hopefully the next chapter floats ur boat lol i love that saying....xoxoxo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 22 Nov 2010 7:33 PM Title: To Happiness
I have faith in you to fix this ....
Great Chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you for having faith....pray to the SMW lord......becuase I WANT SPARTAN......................lol DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 3:30 PM Title: To Happiness
These two are a mess. Poor Bella, she is so torn by her want and her ethics. and Edward honey, don't give up like that you scoundrel. I love him though that Spartan of yours which is why i am so glad Eric is going to be let go, not fair to him either, Angela is a sneaky lil bitch, hmmmmm..
Author's Response:
I love spartan to.......and eric HAS TO GO.....hope ARI gives us what we want in the next one......but i have a feeling Angelas is indeed a sneaky bitch
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 2:23 PM Title: To Happiness
Stupid, stupid, stupid! Edward, your plan is going to blow up in your face. Clean break baby...clean break!
Author's Response:
Tell him that....stupid stupid boy....he not even a man now....bella's got him by the balls...hahahah DLIR AND ARI.....thanks for reviewing
Date: 22 Nov 2010 6:40 AM Title: To Happiness
Glad Bella finally decided to leave Eric!! Good Chapter. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you.....im actually writing the part where she is telling ERic.....LOL....ohhh soooo good....xoxooxoxo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 22 Nov 2010 4:44 AM Title: To Happiness
Things are not turning out as they both hoped or expected. So what now?
Bella is kind of going down the right path, she needs to feel good with herself, about herself before she can do anything else. So she is taking a step she should have a long time ago. She might have done it at first to spike Edward, but when she heard Angela's desire to fix her marriage, she decided she was doing it for her.
Will Angela keep her word and say nothing? What will Edward do and think when he finds out?
Author's Response:
xoxoxo thanks for your reviews....u have very good questions.....Edward seems to be spinning a vicious web that he doesnt realize will hurt him in the end.....stupid boy.....xoxoxo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 22 Nov 2010 4:38 AM Title: To Happiness
I luv your Bella. I can't wait until Edward gets snapped back into reality and stop playing games. Geez, wooing the wife to make the love of your life jealous. Genius.
Author's Response:
I know....he is so S.M.R.T hahahah. WElll what i have read of ARi's next chapter is great soo I cant wait....xoxox thanks for reviewing DLIR AND ARI
Date: 22 Nov 2010 4:22 AM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
They are both stubborn,jealous and short tempered. It's going to be a bumpy ride if they keep up with annoying each other. Meanwhile Ang and Eric seem to be clueless and in their own little world. I wonder if that world could be just for the two of them?
Date: 22 Nov 2010 2:45 AM Title: To Happiness
ooooh edward has it all wrong bella leaving he husband can't wait to find out what he will do
Author's Response:
i cant wait either....I know ideas we discussed in ari chapter but what she will do, I cant wait....thanks for reviewing xoxoxo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 21 Nov 2010 11:14 PM Title: To Happiness
I HAVE READ ALL 9 CHAPTER'S AND I THINK THEY ARE GREAT I JUST LOVE YOUR STORY AND I DO BELIEVE BELLA LEAVING HER HUSBAND IS FOR THE BEST HER MARRAGE WAS OVER YEARS AGO LIKE SHE SAID WHY DID SHE PUT IT OFF SO LONG? NOW SHE WILL BE FREE TO BE WITH WHO EVER SHE WANTS AND IF EDWARD DOES LEAVE HIS WIFE ALSO THEN MAYBE THEY WILL GET TOGETHER SOMEDAY THEY ARE HOT AS HELL TOGETHER. I AM SO READY TO READ MORE CHAPTERS SO WHEN EVER YOUR READY TO TAKE ME BACK TO THE LAND OF SWING MY WAY I'LL BE WAITING
Author's Response:
Omg....i love u already.....Ari is busy writing EPOV soooo we will try to not keep you away from SWING MY WAY LAND...oh my I love that./...and thank you sooooo much DLIR AND ARI
Date: 21 Nov 2010 9:43 PM Title: To Happiness
Edward is a dumb ass who needs to file for divorce. Gerr.. Poor Ben, but he had to expect this. I mean really, no sex for more than how long? All I know is it was probably longer than six months, that is obviouse maritalfail. You should want to jump each others bones all the time. Angela just pisses me off because she just annoys me and I want her out of their way, she is also a conniving bitch.. none of his money is hers at all and she threatens-if he files for divorce- to take it but says she loves him? Bullshit. If you loved someone you would let them go.. Or fight fair, not dirty.
Author's Response:
I personally hate to love Angela.....Ohhh i cant wait for the next chapter......DLIR AND ARI
Date: 21 Nov 2010 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
Holy hell this is good! I usually don't go with the extra-marital activities but you guys were getting so much buzz from other others and - HOLY SHIT - the banner...anyway, just finished only the 2nd chapter and am so ready for more!
Really good...so glad you guys didn't go for the always obvious Tanya and Mike bad marriages for are favorite hotties! I love the "clean" writing, refreshing and you write the characters so well...of BTW where can I get one of B's brochures????
Author's Response:
*snort* I will ask Bella when she plans to sell her brochures.....hehehe oh my I loved your review....the banner I KNOW...hahahhaha glad u like it....DLIR AND ARI
Date: 21 Nov 2010 9:09 PM Title: To Happiness
awesome story please keep updating thanks :)
Author's Response:
WE plan too.....expecially after reading awesome reviews and support like urs....thank you soo much DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 8:11 PM Title: To Happiness
Oh boy, Bella is going to have the guts to leave and then Edward won't know and will keep up the wooing fiasco. This will probably be the only time Angela keeps her mouth shut. Hmmm. Looking great.
Author's Response:
AHhh yes....Angela....Thorn in Bella and Edwards side....xoxox thank u sooo much for reviewing...DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 7:44 PM Title: To Happiness
I love this story! It's so funny at times. I love the banter between E&B too. Good job! Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
I think Ari is hilarious....soo her chapters have me pissing myself sometimes...I try my best but its always funnier when its someone else....Thanks sooo much for reviewing....DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 7:39 PM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
Well I can see it now. Angie and Eric should be together and we all know who Bella should be with. Very funny Emmett chapter. Love the alerts to his office.
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 6:51 PM Title: Time To Think
What can I say, you have me on the edge of my seat. Edward has to leave Angie and Bella just has to be with Edward and forget about that nerd of a husband.
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 6:24 PM Title: Fuck My Life
Well at least they know who the other one is now, but I see all hell breaking loose. Now Angie will know who Kitten really is. Oh my.
Date: 21 Nov 2010 6:18 PM Title: To Happiness
damn.....ladies, i am so addicted....
lol..how often do u post?
~m
Author's Response:
Hey babe.....welll we really try to post every week or as often as our chapters are done...However RL does intervene at times...but Ari was almost done her chapter then off to the BETA.....xoxoxoxoox thanks for being addicted to kitten and spartan
Date: 21 Nov 2010 6:17 PM Title: To Happiness
Yes, Edward's ideas of making Bella jealous seemed pretty immature & lame. He kinda, no totally deserves to have that shit backfire on him.
Thanks for the update
Author's Response:
Well.....he may get tortured .....soon muahahahahahha DLIR AND ARI
Date: 21 Nov 2010 6:00 PM Title: To Happiness
It's time for the fireworks. YAAYYY!
E/k
Author's Response:
Ohhh I cant wait.....,these next chapters r FUN....DLIR AND ARI
Date: 21 Nov 2010 5:57 PM Title: To Happiness
Wow, that was amazing! I really am happy that Bella is deciding to leave Eric, even though sometimes I get annoyed with people who divorce, this time it is right, they aren't happy. I wonder how long it will take Edward to do the same thing with Angela? Amazing job, once again :) I cannot wait for more of Kitten and Spartan ;)
Author's Response:
I am a firm believer in trying for your marriage...to many give up to soon....but their marriage was over years ago.....thats why i had bella not be with eric for a while now....I wouldnt have felt right writing her being with one and then the other....xoxoxo I want more kitten and spartan too.......DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 5:15 PM Title: Laurent
You both may have had shitty weeks, but by God you both are writing a hell of a story. I am speechless. Love it.
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 5:04 PM Title: To Happiness
love it! awesome job. cant wait to see what happens next :)
Author's Response:
Thank you and I cant wait to see how everyone enjoys the rest....xxoxoxo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 21 Nov 2010 4:52 PM Title: Mirror's Reflection
These people need to get away from each other. Too much. Edward better learn that women change fragrances. Hmmmm
Date: 21 Nov 2010 4:26 PM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
I don't know about this game playing that Edward is doing...it could backfire on him!
Date: 21 Nov 2010 4:12 PM Title: Spartan Lover
Oh it turns out to be such a small world. Hmmmmm. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 21 Nov 2010 3:41 PM Title: To Happiness
This just got better.
Author's Response:
and you made me smile....xoxoxo muahahah the things we have coming up.....DLIR AND ARI
Date: 21 Nov 2010 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
This story just gets better and better. Very different and I am just loving it.
Date: 21 Nov 2010 3:03 PM Title: To Happiness
I love this story. I hope you update again soon. Please..
Author's Response:
I will bug ARI over and over to write faster hahah....i have my next chap written soooo as soon as ARI is done we post post post .....DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 2:56 PM Title: To Happiness
WTF!?! Will these two ever get it right??? Does Edward want to stay with Angie now? Hope he finds out she has been cheating on him for so long with Ben. Actually, I hope she stays with Ben and just lets Edward go to Bella. Then everyone will be happy. Or maybe they could just spouse swap and Angie can go with Eric. Either way, we just need to get Bella and Edward together cause it's just wrong any other way... Thanks for the update. I think...lol ;~)
Author's Response:
I know....I want them together but *cough* Ari has EDWARD doing dumb dumb things...hahaha hope you like the rest....DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
I don't even remember how I came across your story, but I am really thrilled that I did. I LOVE IT!
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 1:43 PM Title: To Happiness
I am hoping Angela blabs to Edward about Bella, and lets him know she offered for her to stay with them! Would love to hear his reaction!
Author's Response:
HAHAHA,,,,,hmmmm not sure what ANGELA will do.....<3 thanks for reviewing xoxo DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 1:37 PM Title: To Happiness
Oh dear, that did not go the way Bella wanted to did it? LOL.
Author's Response:
No it didnt.....*pouts* xoxoxoxo DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 1:08 PM Title: To Happiness
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Author's Response:
EEEKKKKk ......yesssssssssssssssssss....it had to....But just u wait......;) DLIR AND ARI
Date: 21 Nov 2010 12:54 PM Title: To Happiness
Oh the angst of Bella! You know it would be better if those two crazy kids would actually have a conversation! They are so passionate all the way around that it is proving difficult. LOL!! Edward. Dumb Edward, leading his wife on and pushing Kitten away. I'm thinking that is not what he is trying ot accomplish.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Keye
Author's Response:
Ohhh i cant wait for the rest.........thank you sooo much for reviewing.....DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 12:40 PM Title: To Happiness
I am glad to see that Bella got out of that dead end relationship, let hope that Edward see the light soon.
Wonderful chapter.
Loved it
Fiorella
Author's Response:
Thank you soo much...I appreciate every word.......DLIR AND ARI
Date: 21 Nov 2010 10:00 AM Title: To Happiness
nice chapter!!! looking forward to more!!!
Author's Response:
thank you very much.....hope u enjoy the rest DLIR AND ARI
Date: 21 Nov 2010 9:54 AM Title: To Happiness
:)
Author's Response:
:) xoxoxoxo thank you
Date: 20 Nov 2010 11:36 PM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
Great story. Love it. Kitten and Spartan. And now that they have found each other, the real fun begins. As Kitten wants time and Edward wants Bella, he thinks that trying to make her jealous by doing things for his wife is going to help?? That's rich! Not to mention the fact that now his wife is going to think he wants her again. I do suspect that Eric and Ang will end up together therefore paving the way for Edward and Kitten to be together. And wow!! Elevator sex, huh? You know that there are camera's in just about every elevator in an office building, right? They gave some bored security guys some excellent footage!!!! LOL!!!
Well, I cannot wait to see what happens next!!!
Keye
Author's Response:
Your review was fantastic...xoxoxo...heres another chapter coming right up....xoxo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 20 Nov 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
oh nooooooo... take off the masks... nooooo noooonooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Author's Response:
hahaha I love ur reviews...i hope you enjoy the rest of the story...I know ....it would have been easier if they took the masks off hey.....xoxoo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 20 Nov 2010 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
HOLY SHIT... that was one hell of a first chapter.. good grief... whew.. I need a cold shower... but that next button is calling to me.... I must resist.. ..oh who am I kidding.. thet shower can wait.
Great job
Date: 20 Nov 2010 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 2
OH MAN I NEED TO PUT MY FAN ON ME THIS IS SO HOT I LOVE IT
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much....we just had the idea and its amazes us with how many people love it xoxooxo
Date: 20 Nov 2010 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
YOUR FIRST CHAPTER IS SO DAM HOT I HAVE TO GO NOW TO READ MORE
Date: 20 Nov 2010 4:27 AM Title: Time To Think
Now that was worth it. What a Elevator ride! hahahaha! In true Bella fashion thinking of others. Not to say that's wrong but....Hey it's her Sex-God after all and she is his Kitten... goodness these two need a break!!! Love the story I'm still reading!!!
Author's Response:
Ohhh an elevator ride it was...LOl....I hope hope hope to update this wknd....xoxox DLIR AND ARI
Date: 20 Nov 2010 4:01 AM Title: Fuck My Life
Shit Shit Shit!!! What a life poor Eddie!! Oops I mean Edward! That poor boy just can't win for loosing can he? I mean seriously. Did he or didn't he has sex with Angela? She better not be preggers I'm gonna be ticked... arrggghhh!!! Love, Love, Love the story and so excited for the next Chapter!!!
Author's Response:
I love your enthusiasm...heheh yah poor edward...but sometimes things happen to you becuase u asked for it...hahah baby??? thats a good theory.....is she preggers ARI??? not sure myself...xoxo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 20 Nov 2010 3:40 AM Title: Laurent
Heck lots of action in this chapter. This is getting better and better all the time. I would love to keep encouraging you in your writing as you certainly are gifted in writing. Thank you for this story and can't wait to read more. Please let them find each other and divorce those dip sticks they are married to Eric and Angela....
Author's Response:
your review was awesome....you keep reading and and enjoy the rest of the story....I hope to have my chapter updated sometime this wknd..Its just being beta'd now. xoxo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 20 Nov 2010 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow,Wow and Wow that is all I am saying for now.. got to read more...
Author's Response:
hehehehe.....enjoy......DLIR AND ARI
Date: 19 Nov 2010 3:39 PM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
hmmmm, Have enjoyed it so far, this chpater Edward bothers me. I woudl think the best way to show he wants Bella would be to get rid on Ang. And don't even get me started on her. time for Ang to go bye bye, then eric !!!!!!
Author's Response:
lol....yah ang and eric need to go....And Edward.....stupid stupid man....We will c what happens...xoxoxo...I hope to have the chapter up soon....DLIR AND ARI
Date: 19 Nov 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 2
you girls are too funny!!! Good for us thou !!!! Lovin your story !!!!!
Date: 18 Nov 2010 6:57 AM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
Oh that's going to be good...looking fwd to more! Thanks for the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing...My chapter is just with the BETA so it wont be too long..I hope by this wknd for sure....xoxoxo I hope u enjoy the rest DLIR AND ARI
Date: 16 Nov 2010 6:34 PM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
Uhmm why do I have the feeling that Angela is the one that hired Laurent to rape/beat Bella? And why doesn't Edward just do what he needs to do & divorce her? Yes, it should back fire on him, being an idiot it would be befitting karma for him.
Author's Response:
Hmmmm honestly we dont even know who hired Laurent....not sure what Angela has up her sleeves..her lips are shut. xoxoxo my chap is up next..so hope Bella can shed some light for all you guys on whats going through her NOGGIn...DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2010 2:36 PM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
Hmm, I understand Edward being an ass to Angela, but why would she want to work on this relationship when his heart is not in it. I know he is now giving her false hope, but he was not before.
I have a bad feeling about this, I really feel that it is going to blow up in his face big time and maybe loose both of these girls.
I cant believe Bella fell for Eric crap, he could not give to fats rats about her until she found someone else. Same with Angela, as soon as he found kitten she was threatened. I feel sorry for these two, maybe they are good for each other, they can have their boring sex and crazy life.
Interesting to see where your characters take this.
Fiorella
Author's Response:
welllll.... my chap wont be long till I post it.. Its with the BEta.....but I hope BElla can explain whats she thinking....Eric etc. thank u sooo much for the review... DLIR AND ARI
Date: 16 Nov 2010 7:44 AM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
Whew, this story is hot...they are both so unhappy that I hope they don't draw it out too long and keep having these sexy trysts until they can be together (I hope)!
Author's Response:
Hmmmm I jope they get their shit together soon too.....my chap shouldnt be too much longer....xoxoxo DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG What a way to start a story, I really hope she leave the deadshit Eric behind, even if she makes it out on her own. What is the point of being in a loveless marriage? A year ago my husband came up to me one Saturday morning and told me that he needed to go find himself after 12 years and let me tell you that the last 3 years were the worst of my life.
I wish I had of listened to myself, I should have gotten out earlier, I was his mother, wife, maid, cleaner, chef, washing lady, ironing lady, bill payer, and everything else you can think of. He always wondered why I was too tired of an evening and wanted to sleep, but I would put my tiredness aside and give him what he wanted as well.
He needed to go find himself, pfff, I hope he found so much more than himself... well that is my wish anyway. Hehehehe.
So I really do hope Bella gets out of that marriage.
Great story
Fiorella
Author's Response:
Shit babe....What a loser...but i think in the end..YOU WON..You deserve to be loved, and adored. And YES...I hope Bella will get that in the end too... xoxooxo thanks for the review DLIR AND ARI
Date: 15 Nov 2010 3:49 AM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
WHAT? I really hope Bella can figure out what to do so she and Edward can get back together!
Author's Response:
Yah not sure what Bella's problem is....oh wait, yes i do i write her POV...lol....welll my next chap will be up soon enough. Hope it answers some questions....DLIR AND ARI
Date: 15 Nov 2010 3:47 AM Title: Time To Think
That was incredible! Can we just solve all of this with Bella and Eric divorcing since they aren't happy AT ALL? Then something with Angela and Edward...hmm.
Date: 15 Nov 2010 3:44 AM Title: Fuck My Life
This story is absolutely amazing so far! I really hope something can be resolved soon! I love it all :)
Author's Response:
Were glad your liking it.....my chap is with the BEta's soooo it wont be long xoxoxoxo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 15 Nov 2010 12:06 AM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
What a wicked web! I actually feel badly for each of them. Everyone so very unhappy - maybe Eric and Ang would be best together??????
Author's Response:
Oh what a tangled web we weave, When first we practice to deceive...Oh my God I've always wanted to write that in a review! LOL Thank you. I love that saying :) We think Eric and Ang would be awesome together. It's just making them see that for themselves is the problem. Thank you for your awesome review! We appreciate it, from the bottom of our hearts!
xoxoxox Ari & DLIR
Date: 14 Nov 2010 9:34 PM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for all of your reviews BB! We appreciate them so much! Hope you like the next chapter. It's DLIR's
xoxoxox Ari & DLIR
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2010 9:26 PM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
This shit is totally going to blow up in his face!!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL that's what we kinda think too. *sighs* men!
Thank you for your review! We totally appreciate it.
xoxoxox Ari & DLIR
Date: 14 Nov 2010 6:14 PM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
I love Emmett, that was so funny. lol
Author's Response:
LOL I love writing Emmett! He's so crazy. Thank you so much for your review! We appreciate it so, so, so very much.
xoxoxoxo Ari & DLIR
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2010 5:10 PM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
It looks to me like Ang has a thing for the Oompa Loompa... let´s hope so... Bella kicking Edward under the table... haha... priceless... I loved it as always... can´t wait for more... Great chapter... Love ya BB....
krazi
xoxoxo
Author's Response:
*runs and hugs Krazi*
Hiya BB! I'm thinkin Bella wanted to do more than just kick Edward under the table. I was getting major hostility from her. Poor Edward LOL But I'm also thinkin that if he goes through with this lil plan of his. He better start wearing a cup. Cuz Bella might just go for his balls! LOL We are sooooo glad you like our story BB! Oompa Loompa that cracks me up! Thank you for all your awesome reviews BB. We love ya hard!
xoxox Ari & DLIR
Author's Response:
*runs and hugs Krazi*
Hiya BB! I'm thinkin Bella wanted to do more than just kick Edward under the table. I was getting major hostility from her. Poor Edward LOL But I'm also thinkin that if he goes through with this lil plan of his. He better start wearing a cup. Cuz Bella might just go for his balls! LOL We are sooooo glad you like our story BB! Oompa Loompa that cracks me up! Thank you for all your awesome reviews BB. We love ya hard!
xoxox Ari & DLIR
Date: 14 Nov 2010 5:01 PM Title: Time To Think
Elevator = hot sexin! (crazy hair & ripped clothing)
I so want these two to find some happiness.
Author's Response:
We want to see that too. *pouts and looks at DLIR* I wanna be Bella! I wanna have hot elevator sexy times!
Thank you for your review! We really, really, really appreciate it!
xoxoxoxxo Ari & DLIR
Date: 14 Nov 2010 4:48 PM Title: Fuck My Life
Ladies, you never cease to amaze me! Awesome reconnect!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the great review....always makes our day to see them...xoxoxo DLIR AND ARI