Date: 23 May 2011 5:41 PM Title: Detective Hale
Yikes! I can understand why Bella is being pulled in both directions. Bella and Angela bonded during this whole kidnapping thing. The fact that Edward's dad just died is really sad, but I don't think Bella is quite processing everything right now. She has to be in some kind of shock over everything she's gone through. I hope Edward and Bella will be able to get past this. Great chapter.
Date: 23 May 2011 5:14 PM Title: My Baby Girl
I really liked the chapter.
Date: 23 May 2011 4:57 PM Title: Bromance
Who was shot? Was it Angela? I'm really glad that Bella was found and rescued by Edward, but I'm hoping that gunshot at the end of the chapter wasn't Esme trying to get revenge on Bella. Great chapter.
Date: 23 May 2011 4:31 PM Title: Not in my world
Great chapter. I hope Bella will be okay. I guess I should also say that I hope Angela will be okay also, but my main concern in Bella. I'm hoping they all get to her soon, or that the gun was actually from the police.
Date: 18 May 2011 1:34 AM Title: Detective Hale
OMG.... poor Edward, lost both his parents (not Esme, crazy)
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2011 1:02 AM Title: My Baby Girl
Okay guys. This was a hard one to read. What a bitch but she was a bitch that played all the wrong cards. I felt really sorry for her. And even more I now feel so bad for Angie's loss. That woulda, shoulda, coulda kinda thing. I have to admit I read this when you updated but my husband and I separated that weekend and I could not focus on anything to say in a review for my own diluge hit me quite hard. No worries my dearest naughty ladies, I am well I just had to adjust and pick up. This is me picking up. I love you both, thank you for giving me something that I get excited for and even more distracts me. I want Spartan love so on to the next chapter and yes hookers I know Rosalie was wrriten for me.
Date: 04 May 2011 3:29 PM Title: Detective Hale
I come back after a being away, and come back to this! It's scary and intense and heart chugging and the list just goes on and on.. What do I say to this fic.. I LOVE IT!!! OMG. Damn you Esme. And for Carlise, I want to curse you two out. But I love you guys so much. Did you have to kill him. huh. I'm hurting so much right now. Do I laugh or cry. Oh forget it, I'm crying.. I'm so thrown I don't know how to think. What is going to happen next? Can't wait for more.
E/k
Date: 04 May 2011 1:35 PM Title: My Baby Girl
Whoa dude!
E/k
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2011 1:38 AM Title: Detective Hale
That was tough.....yay Esme but not Carlisle!
Yes ladies, the pitchforks may be coming out!
Date: 03 May 2011 6:34 AM Title: Detective Hale
This is fiction right? So, like you could bring Daddy C back to life, right? Although it may of been his time to go, he was sounding kinda like he was close to his expiration date with all that Grandma Hale talk.=D}
Date: 03 May 2011 12:09 AM Title: Detective Hale
oh jeez, i agree bella was wrong, but what are you supposed do in that situation? you did a great job! i love this story, cant wait for another update!--once i get notified about an update i stop studying and read the chapter!
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2011 10:23 PM Title: My Baby Girl
Yay! Good riddance, I say!
Date: 02 May 2011 7:08 PM Title: Detective Hale
sigh can't stay mad at you with that end of chappy note lol. HEA right?
Date: 02 May 2011 2:55 PM Title: My Baby Girl
absolutely in love with this story.. in a way im happy esme killed herself and im very happy that she didnt shoot bella or edward. i hope carlisle is okay!
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2011 12:42 PM Title: Detective Hale
Okay, I am not upset that you killed who you did, I am pissed at Emmett.
Fuck if she wants to go after Edward, then fuck let the bitch go. Over these people that think they know better. Bella did wrong by going to Angela and comforting her when Edward needed her, but let her got the fuck after him. Now is just caused a shit fight for not fucking reason.
GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2011 5:42 AM Title: Detective Hale
This is the second fic in a row where E yelled at B and something that can't be taken back I hope he understands that thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can....
Date: 02 May 2011 4:44 AM Title: Detective Hale
why carlisle! i hope that your all have a plan! keep the updates comming
Date: 02 May 2011 3:16 AM Title: Detective Hale
What noooo you killed Carlisle! And now Edwards gone all crazy with grief at Bella no what's going on?
Author's Response:
Dont stress......its all part of the plan...... :D
Date: 02 May 2011 2:06 AM Title: Detective Hale
Esme dead is a good thing Carlisle dead is a bad thing. Edward is in pain but he should just chill Bella already told him Ang saved her so why wouldnt she try to help her??? So I think you two should sneek back to your computers and fix this Bella and Edward need each other.
Author's Response:
hahah yes they do.......and Carlisle dieing has reasoning for the story......all in good time
Date: 01 May 2011 10:16 PM Title: Detective Hale
Rose is to blame for being too confident. For thinking she knew how things would go and how people would react. Could she have done things differently? Perhaps, but the results didn't all depend on her.
Sadly things turned out a lot messier and complicated than anyone expected them to. No one acted wrongly, but they didn't do perfect either.
Poor Edward, his world has just crumbled even more and now he won't allow anyone near him.
Author's Response:
Yes edwards world is crumbling around him but the things we wrote had to happen...u will see where we are going with it soon enough
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2011 9:46 PM Title: Detective Hale
Ok that was fucking sad!!. But why would you but Edward against Bella!.. What the Hell.. I dont' understand that. did not see it coming. Kind of figured Carlisle was died. But to have Bella and Edward to suffer when they should be helping each other. that so cruel.. Well I hope it not a long fight.. But I still loved this chapter.. you guys are great writers..
:)Leona
Tears for Carlisle and Edward and Bellas..
Author's Response:
Sorry,,,,,,but all in good time...there is a method to our madness
Date: 01 May 2011 7:46 PM Title: Detective Hale
ok, holy crap very cute in your author note, but WTF with the ending of this chapter!!!!!! youg ot me so frickin confused my head is spinning, andi am not linda blair
Author's Response:
hahaah well we did throw that lil carlisle part in last minute but we have our reasoning...and we love having fun with the authors note
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2011 5:38 PM Title: Detective Hale
oooh i was right edward dad so sad tearing up :(
Author's Response:
Awe sorry to make u cry,,,,but its all part of the storyline...had to be written
Date: 01 May 2011 5:34 PM Title: Detective Hale
OH MY GOSH! NO! I really cannot wait to see what happens next, that was INTENSE! I loved it though :)
Author's Response:
we love surprising u...,and sorry but that had to be written..there is reasoning behind it for our story to conitnue
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2011 4:52 PM Title: Detective Hale
Yep angry here you stirred up ander, and heartache and death all in one chapter....what too much caffeine or something? put the red bull down!
Author's Response:
*puts the red bull down* sorry what were u sayin?? lol....well were glad we got all those emotions out of ya....unfortunate for Carlisle but we needed it to happen for the story to go where we wanted
Date: 01 May 2011 2:39 PM Title: Detective Hale
Well here I was thinking that this was going to be the same kind of story. Guy saves girl and they live happily ever, but as always you are a great writer and changed things up. Sorry that you killed off Carlisle, though. Happy that you killed off Esme, but am thrilled the way your story turned around with Edward being angry with everyone. Love the twist.
Author's Response:
guy saves girl............boring LOL.....had to spice things up ya know. We have a vision of where this story will go and end and unfortunately Carlisle made the choopping block hahah
Date: 01 May 2011 1:50 PM Title: Detective Hale
Okay... a bit intense, ladies! ;) I understand why Edward is so pissed at Bella right now- I even understand Rose agreeing- but, "HELLO" Bella was the one kidnapped and tortured WITH ANGELA... I totally get how she went to Angela first having experienced that shit with her. I just hope that Edward can calm down enough to understand. So, that HEA I thought they'd get, finally, not feelin it so much now! >:(
Author's Response:
hahah sooooorryyyy but we delayed the HEA just a smidge.....promise.......it will get there
Date: 01 May 2011 1:00 PM Title: Detective Hale
Whoop! Whoop!
ROTFLMAO at your beginning A/N!
Great line:
Well Mister, I'm-not-too-fuckin-smart-cuz-I-just-totally-pissed-off-Rosalie-Hale. Your ass is fucking going down.
Now, just who doesn't, LOVE this Rosalie?? My hero!!! LOL!
Geesh...but you keep the suspense up throughout the whole chapter. Can't breathe while reading it! And I cannot seem to read it fast enough to suit me either.
Carlisle...you just GOT to love him to:
"You're one hell of a women, Rose! You got any single sisters? A mom… hell, I'll even settle for your grandma as long as long as she's as feisty as you." I
Um...hello? Anyone else feel this same way? *Keye raises her hand*:
Not to sound like a bitch here or anything, but she should have thought about Edward before running to Angela.
Oh but your ending A/N?? The prayer?? OME!!! That was completely awesome!!!!
Do I have your permission to post that on another site, giving you both full and complete credit of course, but it is just to good to leave here and not share with others!! *bats eyelashes* Pwease??
If you would rather me not, I will totally understand and respect your wishes. I will cry uncontrollably, but I will respect your wishes.
Keye
Author's Response:
Whoop Whoop...thanks babes...u were the first one to do that :D
And we love to make u laugh with A/N
Ari writes Ro amazingly
and the prayer is totally not mine....someone sent it to me a while back and I found it approriate to use in the A/N sooooo go ahead and share cuz its been around the web soo not sure who actually wrote it
Date: 01 May 2011 11:25 AM Title: Detective Hale
great job girl!!!! not happy about carlisle but i am sure u had a reason
Author's Response:
yes we did change that last second.....we wanted the story to go a certain way and that made it work :D
Date: 01 May 2011 9:01 AM Title: Detective Hale
:)
Author's Response:
XoXoXoXoxo
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2011 8:02 AM Title: Detective Hale
Dam! Why did you have to kill Carlisle? He was going to get away from the bitch and have a chance at being happy for once. sigh.... You could have killed Laurent and Eric. What is with Edward being an ass to Bella? That is really crappy. :(
Author's Response:
Sorry this upsets u but we wanted the story to go a certain way sooo it had to be written..........if it makesd u feel better he finally is with Amy <3
Date: 01 May 2011 7:59 AM Title: Detective Hale
Poor Carlisle and Edward. This is hard to take.
Author's Response:
WEre sorry but we hope the outcome of writing this scenario is worth it
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2011 7:14 AM Title: Detective Hale
Well, I agree with Rose. Bella should have been there for Edward first and Angela second.
I knew it was Carlisle that was shot. Yes, he did save Rose, but if would not have been where he was, he probably would not have gotten shot.
Now I can play Devil's Advocate for Bella's behavior. Angela and Bella had been through some pretty heavy shit together for God knows how long. Beaten and tortured. They both helped each other. One would distract while the other was able to get away with something small that would help them in the long run.
I really hope that Edward does not stay mad at Bella for too long. Shit, he was going to propose and he did not get the chance because Bella was kidnapped! Can you ever let these two star crossed lovers a break? I mean, like come on!!
Y'all should be hiding...I am from the south, and we like our guns....kidding
Author's Response:
hahahaha i soooooooooooo laughed out loud with the south comment..........hahah ohhhh guns lol
we hope u enjoy where we bring our two love birds next
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2011 7:09 AM Title: Detective Hale
***laughing to hard to write**** "Run ARI…their coming…SAVE YOURSELF."
Seriously now~ I hate that Carlilse is dead and how it happened, and that Bella diddn't think about how much Edward was suffering too! Not just Angela, but okay consider this. Angela and Bella were friends before all the SHIT STORM of love and lust with Spartan, infidelity, stalking and kidnappings. It stands to reason they bonded during their time of darkness and not knowing if they were going to live, then you top that off with Angela just discovered during this ordeal that Esme was her biological mother, to only have "Said person shoot's herself right in front of her", well HELL that would be enough to make even ME (a total Ang hater) want to hug her. So.... I think that given time and hopefully alot of wonderful creative writing on the illustirous part of writing genius that are DLIR & ARI, I am hopeful that our Hearth Stopping Gorgeous Hunk of a Man Edward aka Spartan will come to his senses and forgive Bella... Holy Hell what a Damn ending to that chapter.
May I just say I was sitting here stunned I couldnt seem to move the page and read the A/N and when I saw it I just fell over laughing..... that is why I started this off with telling you I was laughing... Seriously You BOTH are way way toooooo Much... Love ya though that's for sure..... Have a good one.... TTFN.... Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
hahahahh i had sooooooooooo much fun writing the A/N hehehehe
I know killing carlisle and having bella go to Angela pissed a few readers but we have our reasonings..........hope u like where we bring our story for its finale
Date: 01 May 2011 6:49 AM Title: Detective Hale
Bella was an idiot, no?
Author's Response:
i think so myself but she had her reasonings
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2011 6:45 AM Title: Detective Hale
LMFAO... OMG... U guys just don't stop!!!! Gah... cliffy after cliffy after cliffy then you go and kill Carlisle and crush Edward...
I don't know what to say... other than... I sure do love the holy shit outta ya both!
Hahaha... great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. I do hate that Edward is acting out and I'm torn on what Bella did. Damn, she just went through hell and back and Angela, fucked up bitch that she is, did try to help save her. These are things Edward AND Rose don't know.
Then again, Edward... WTF?! What about Bella... geez, she just got her ass beat for how many days? And its all about "poor little ol' me..." ???
Oh ... People are going to hate me now ... LMAO...
OK, I'm shutting up before I am totally banned from TWCS. I can't wait for the next update.
Muah ~ Tracy
Author's Response:
we love ya too...........and the cliffy's and catching u guys off guard. hahaha but we wrote it for a reason and we hope it was worth it
Date: 01 May 2011 3:49 AM Title: My Baby Girl
I never would have guessed Esme would do it... I figured she was way too self absorbed and selfish. I didn't realize Carlise was already hurt, so I thought he was the second shot. Thanks god this fuckery is almost over and these two can start their HEA... right?
Date: 30 Apr 2011 7:42 PM Title: My Baby Girl
this is like an episode of Hawaii Five 0!!!!
you two crack me up :D
Date: 30 Apr 2011 5:04 PM Title: My Baby Girl
Fanfuckingtabulous chapter! Glad Esme is finally gone! Can't wait to read whats next. Post SOON!!
Author's Response:
THANKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU FOR being 1000 xoxoxoxoxo we love ya
Im just updating chapter now
Date: 30 Apr 2011 2:02 PM Title: My Baby Girl
Aaaaahhhhhh! You killed Carlisle? But, he & Edward were just starting their relationship! :-( I'm really, really sad right now! I'm glad the wicked bitch is dead, but I can't believe you killed Carlisle. :*( I'm looking forward to RPOV because WTF just happened!!!!
Date: 30 Apr 2011 1:58 PM Title: My Baby Girl
Awesome chappie. I think that you captured the bitchiness...the craziness that is all Esme! So nice to see her portrayed as the evil on her and not so nice-y nice as she always is, you know what I mean? Can you imagine what Angela felt knowing she had a psycho for a mom? Tsk!
Do we want Rose POV? Um....YES!!!!! C'mon ladies....REVIEW!!!!!
Please tell me that Carlisle is going to make it!!!!
Loved the A/N!! You two crack my ass up!!!
Keye
Date: 30 Apr 2011 4:47 AM Title: My Baby Girl
Well I'm glad the evil witch is dead even though I have a hard time of see Esme so wicked. I hope Carlisle survies. Great story.
Date: 30 Apr 2011 2:29 AM Title: My Baby Girl
well they can have some calmness now with er gone
Date: 30 Apr 2011 2:29 AM Title: My Baby Girl
Great chapter. Update again soon please.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 9:45 PM Title: My Baby Girl
Ahh! She's finally gone!
Date: 29 Apr 2011 8:34 PM Title: My Baby Girl
WOW! That was INTENSE! I really cannot wait to see what happens next! I am kind of sad Esme is dead, only because now she cannot be put in jail for the rest of her life, but she will get her karma in hell ;) Hehe. Cannot wait for more!
Date: 29 Apr 2011 8:00 PM Title: My Baby Girl
OMG!!! What is going on???? Surely not Carlisle?!?!?!?!? My God, how fucked could Esme get?
Can't wait for what's next. Rosalie's POV would be FANTABULOUS!!!!
Esme got what she deserved, COLD HEARTED FUCKING BITCH!!!
AWESOME STORY!! Give me more now, can't wait for next part!!! PLEASE!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2011 5:35 PM Title: My Baby Girl
wow you guys are the first ones to make me hate Esme in a story....you really pull me into the chapters.
Date: 29 Apr 2011 4:55 PM Title: My Baby Girl
Good one didn't see that one coming, hope Carlisle is ok.
Date: 29 Apr 2011 4:47 PM Title: My Baby Girl
Laurent and Eric weren't the only two crazy people in this mess. Esme has been part of the group for a while and now she completely lost it.
She had a terrible experience as a teenager. She isn't the only one and that doesn't give anyone the right to hurt others. Unfortunately lots of people think they can seek revenge when ever and to whom ever crosses their path. I didn't like Esme but I do feel bad for her. She could have had a good life, perhaps not her dream life but a good one. She worked for the opposite.
Her future wasn't looking pretty or happy, but there was a chance Angela, in time would have forgiven her. But Esme didn't stop to think. She chose the things that have happened to her.
I hope you get to the magic number and the next chapter is up soon!!!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2011 4:12 PM Title: My Baby Girl
Man you are a beast!! This was a fuck awesome chapter!
Date: 29 Apr 2011 3:51 PM Title: My Baby Girl
Great Update. I am not a fan of this Esme's POV but it worked.
Date: 29 Apr 2011 3:02 PM Title: My Baby Girl
OMG you girlz are soooooooo naughty ! Time for spankings now give me my chapter dammit.......LOL Don't make me get Rosalie she might just drug your drink ......hehe or I could send Demetri he is one psychotic MOFO......LOL
Thanks:)
Date: 29 Apr 2011 2:59 PM Title: My Baby Girl
Ahh, I hope Carlisle isn't dead. Yay, I'm so glad the bitch is dead!
Thanks for the update, looking forward to next update;D)
Date: 29 Apr 2011 1:45 PM Title: My Baby Girl
Why on earth did they uncuff her?
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 1:42 PM Title: My Baby Girl
oh thank god I was worried it was Carlise at the end of last chapter. I do not think anyone will miss esme. Great update. oh yea and nice dress !!!!!!! ha ha ha my husband laughed his ass off
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 12:15 PM Title: My Baby Girl
Wow I really did not see that turning out that way! GREAT STUFF!
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 12:01 PM Title: My Baby Girl
hope Carlisle will be OK and all this will permanent change angela for the better, most of this wasn't her fault
Date: 29 Apr 2011 11:58 AM Title: My Baby Girl
Yay I'm so glad that Angela told that bitch off! She deserved that with all of the shit that she's done.
Please don't let Carlisle die though. His random hitting on Rose is quite funny.
Please don't keep the chapter hostage for too long.
You guys are great by the way!
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 10:43 AM Title: My Baby Girl
Well, I guess I am not that great a clue. I would have never come up with Esme in street with the gun committing suicide.
That was a great chapter. Now, Carlisle went into that house to get Angela, right? He already new that Edward was not their and went somewhere else?
I hope you save Carlisle. Esme should be the only one who dies in this story.
Thank you for the update, and I would love to see Rose's POV please.
Date: 29 Apr 2011 10:37 AM Title: My Baby Girl
Thank you!, Please ... POST!
Date: 29 Apr 2011 8:26 AM Title: My Baby Girl
It couldnt happen to a better person I hope she got enough brain mater all over the place yah I dont like her at all. Poor Ang to find out that your mother is an evil syco.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 8:23 AM Title: My Baby Girl
Loved it very much and i can't wait for more thanks for sharing this with us and I hope Ang leaves them alone now.....
Date: 29 Apr 2011 7:55 AM Title: My Baby Girl
whew I really thought she was going to kill Bella.She did the courts a favor by ending her own life. Then she can discuss eternity with Jesus.
what a chapter
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 7:55 AM Title: My Baby Girl
Wow! Thanks for the wonderful chapter update!!! Yes, I am impressed for sure. Almost felt sorry for Esme! Notice I said ALMOST! Well so Carlilse did sacrifice for Esme's daughter in the end didn't he... At least we know that Esme truly love somone in her life, Angela!
Great chapter, I bet you make the 1k mark with reviews.... crossing fingers, toes, eyes and all body parts hoping you do...
TTFN - Kathy xoxoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 7:38 AM Title: My Baby Girl
Well, at least the cat is out of the bag so to speak. GREAT story, very exciting, very sexy!!! Lets hope Carlisle makes it and Angela gets a divorce and doesn't take Edward to the cleaners. TRAGEDY would be is Esme had shot Bella......Can't wait for more chapters!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 7:36 AM Title: My Baby Girl
OMG, is it awful that I'm glad that she killed herself? Dam! I'm a bitch too. hehe
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 7:07 AM Title: My Baby Girl
Wow.. I knew it could be her shoting but to kill her self. oh god.. What a crowerdly way to leave this earth.. I hope Carlisle will make it. oh my god.. :) Leona
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 6:40 AM Title: My Baby Girl
Gah... I saw this post and had to read it really quick. I'll be sorry in the morning but that's ok... ya'll are totally worth it :)
Yeah! Esme is dead. I hated her... LMAO... Carlisle... OMG... hope he's going to be ok.
Can't wait for the next update. I, of course, always prefer EPOV, then BPOV then ... I guess it doesn't matter. LOL... not that any of that means anything to you... hehehe...
XoXo ~ Tracy
Date: 29 Apr 2011 6:34 AM Title: My Baby Girl
so mean, glad she's gone even if its a tad sad that it had to end this way for her after all this time, hope you update soon
Date: 29 Apr 2011 3:48 AM Title: Bromance
Geesh....so glad that the server problems are done so I could read this!!!
Okay, I totally have to laugh whenever I read your A/N's. J/s
*mumbles something that sounds like "damn evil cliffie"* But, man oh man, what a good one it was. Now I would like to say that it was Angela all dead and shit but something tells me that you would NOT make it THAT easy, right???
I cannot wait for the next update!
Keye
Author's Response:
hahahah......mumbles........i just posted
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2011 12:53 PM Title: Bromance
Loved the litle prelude acting bit, you two are hilarious!
Emmett and his music.....does that song really exist?
Is Angela dead, is Carlisle OK. If Eric was holding a gun to Bella why didn't he shoot back at Edward when he was on the ground? Where did his gun go?
Now I just have to not so patiently wait for answers.
Date: 27 Apr 2011 5:43 AM Title: Bromance
I absolutely LOVE this story but this cliffhanger is agonizing! Please update soon.
Oh and the "Don't you put it in your mouth"commercial thing was awesome! This coming from a girl who grew up in Canada because yes she lives in Winterpeg. I laughed so hard when I read that.
Date: 26 Apr 2011 10:47 AM Title: Bromance
Another cliffy! EVIL! I hope someone shot Esme!
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2011 2:34 AM Title: Bromance
OMGGGGGGGG no way. no fucking way. Oh god Ang is dead isn't she? omg that was brutal. Edward was kick ass with that gun but I have to admit I want more Rose. I can see Carlisle's fascination. I have a girl crush true and honest. She is the baddest bitch. I missed our Em, Em I love you, you can be my Amish love anytime sweets. and uhm yeah can we say awkward with Carlisle and his lusting over Rosalie, though Carlisle deserves a hot piece himself. So what will be Esme's consequence for this? hmmmm, pray tell sistas do not hold back becuz this dirty whore wont take no for an answer. Hurry, hurry, hurry pls update I have to know who died, omg Ang poor girl. or is it CArlisle? omg why else would he be crying? Please tell me, please.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG I LOVED UR REVIEW....hahah sooooooo Esme POV is next and then ur ROSE pov....she had to be heard again...xoxoox I just finished the next chap.so I sent it to ari.....i have a few fixes and off to beta it goes
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 10:20 PM Title: Bromance
Oh my god.. I thought is was angla. But I have a funny feeling it is Carl.. please not him.. And I think Esme got hold of a gun and fired it at Bella. MMM.. what do you think can I be close?
Author's Response:
Hmmmmmmmmmmm pretty damn close....but what are close about??? hahah not telling ya...sorry.
but i just finsihed the next chap.....so I sent to Ari...a few fixes and then off to the beta we send
Date: 24 Apr 2011 7:05 PM Title: Bromance
OMFG at least he has Bella back I hope that the gun shot was not at her. You guys are cruel to us who is Rose trying to help who is aready gone please not Carlisle. I cant wait for more
Author's Response:
Yes Im sooo happy they are together,,,,,,,I just finished the next chap sooo u wont have to wait toooo tooo long
Date: 24 Apr 2011 4:07 PM Title: Bromance
Oh no don't leave us hanging long we need to know who's dead,please update soon.
Author's Response:
I hope to get it up soon enough....I just finsihed the chap....so a few fixes and we will send it to get proofed xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 2:43 PM Title: Bromance
Oh.....is Angela dead? Another gunshot?
You guys are evil cliff devils!
Great job ladies!! Enjoyed it!
Author's Response:
We are sooo happy u enjoyed it.sorry bout the cliffy but it was needed ...I just finsihed the next chapter soooo a few fixes and I shall send it to the beta shortly
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 1:22 PM Title: Bromance
I am dying to find out what is going to happen! Loved it!
Author's Response:
Were sooo glad u like it.....or loved it i should say....xxoxooxoxo it keeps us writing.
I just finished the next chapter soo hope u arent waiting to long
Date: 24 Apr 2011 9:14 AM Title: Bromance
:)
Author's Response:
XOXOXOX
Date: 24 Apr 2011 5:31 AM Title: Bromance
Well this was a great Easter treat except for the cliffy. I am going to guess that it is Carlisle on the stretcher and that someone shot Esmee because she was getting ready to shoot Edward. But of course, I read too many mystery novels. Can't wait to read what really happens. Saw WFE at Thursday's midnight showing (because I couldn't wait) and I really liked it, but I have to say that I didn't like Reese and Rob together (just no chemistry there) and didn't like the animal abuse (even if it wasn't real). Would see it again, just wish he had a different actress. Rob, Chris and of course Rosie the elephant were GREAT!
Author's Response:
Sorry bout the Cliffy,,,,,,,I just saw WFE again,,lol.....still loved it.........and cried again hahah
soooooooooo u like mystery novels hey?? ur pretty close but not 100%
Date: 24 Apr 2011 5:28 AM Title: Bromance
Great to know Ari is better, but please keep taking care of yourself!! :)
Edward's gut was right, he somehow knew where Bella would be. He didn't wait for someone to listen, he simply took off. Good thing he did, there's no way to know what might have happened with how Eric was acting.
Meanwhile, Rose was heading to another location with a similar situation. One that sadly seems to be worse than the one Bella was in.
We need to wait to find out how badly who ever is injured is. And yes, there's still a lot more Esme needs to explain.
Author's Response:
Ari is def taking her time to heal.......Im soo happy to have her back
and yes his gut sent him the right way, And tthe next chap is ESME pov soooooooooo it will explain A LOT
Date: 24 Apr 2011 5:26 AM Title: Bromance
another Cliffy...arrghh
Thanks for the chapter & ? update. not sure if anythings really changed because probably Esme just shot & killed? Bella? Edward? and Angela is dead on the stretcher?
Somehow I feel we've come back to square one, minus idiot Eric.
Hope you can update soon, Happy Easter to you too!
Author's Response:
Sorryy about the cliffy.but I am done the next chap...so hope were not keeping u hanging long.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 4:23 AM Title: Bromance
I assume that is Carlisle, what hapened with ANg, too soon for a cliffie, we waited so long :(
Author's Response:
Sorry for how u waited...but I just finsihed the next one.so a few fixes and I will get it to the Beta ASAP
Date: 24 Apr 2011 4:06 AM Title: Bromance
well im excited to see what happens next
Author's Response:
I just finsihed writing it soo im excited for u to read it xoxoxo
Date: 24 Apr 2011 4:01 AM Title: Bromance
Wow, that was AMAZING! I really loved it so much! I cannot wait to see how everything works out! So happy Ari is all better :)
Author's Response:
YAy.......so glad u enjoyed it...I just finshed the next one sooooo hope u enjoy it just as much
Date: 24 Apr 2011 3:46 AM Title: Bromance
It's Carlise, isn't it? If it was Ang, then Bella wouldn't have said, "Oh shit Edward is that...oh God Edward, I'm so sorr..." I hope to God that Esme gets charged with murder. And where exactly did the lastest gunshot come from? WTF, you two are just mean- even if you make me lmao with your little lines before the story ;).
Author's Response:
hahahah We love to make u laugh and hate in the same chapter.that awesome.........sooooo is it carlsile........i cant say. but the next chapter is written sooooo not to long for an update
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 2:44 AM Title: Bromance
ok so that was totally MEAN, MEAN, MEAN... LOL
I cannot wait for the next chapter! I hope someone shots Esme but I'm thinking that it's not her that gets shot... Angela? Carlisle? Edward? Bella? Gah... I HATE cliffies!!!
Happy Easter!!!
XoXo ~ Tracy
Author's Response:
Sorry Sorry SOrry
Love ya....and the next chap is done...just a few fixes and off to the beta's............
Date: 24 Apr 2011 2:19 AM Title: Bromance
Another cliffy.........I could wring your neck.
Author's Response:
gah................i need to breathe to write,,,, ohhhh whooa thanks for letting go
hehehe
next chap is done soooo hopefully not to long before we update
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 2:12 AM Title: Bromance
I'm so glad that bella and edward are together again but did you have to write another cliffy? What did I ever do to you? hehe Can't wait to see who is dead and who is shooting a gun now.
Date: 24 Apr 2011 1:54 AM Title: Bromance
This has gone absolutely crazy.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2011 1:53 AM Title: Bromance
Loved it very much and I think Daddy died and I think Evil Step-Mommy killed him and then turned the gun on herself Loved it update when you can thanks.....
Date: 24 Apr 2011 1:48 AM Title: Bromance
happy easter to you too, we went and seen WFE though it was great... oh good chapter by the way please update soon...
Date: 24 Apr 2011 1:35 AM Title: Bromance
W T F ???????
Author's Response:
:D..............u love us still right???? I hope so.......I promise it's worth it.....Im starting my part right............NOW
Date: 24 Apr 2011 1:31 AM Title: Bromance
fast paced and energetic. am puffed just reading it. can't wait for the reveal in the next chapter, you ratbag!
Author's Response:
:D.............u love us............heheh...hope u dont wait too long.....its gonna be two POV's sooo im starting mine now.