Date: 18 Feb 2011 3:40 AM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
WOW! Esme is a case! The masquerade party creeps me out, and I am afraid he is not going to be back in time. It smacks of a setup, and Bella is going to walk into it face first and alone. I think Esme has a deal with Angela that she gets half of what she helps Angela get from Edward. That way she can make sure she gets more of the inheritance than he does.
Author's Response:
ohhhh u my dear have a good theory going on.....impressed lol......and the party...............wait and c.....were updating tonight
Date: 17 Feb 2011 8:57 PM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
ouch! what a hissyfit!
Author's Response:
hahahhaah xoxox thank you for reviewing
Date: 17 Feb 2011 12:24 PM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
Yes, I'm wondering how he can be so naive & not realize that Esme is working with Angela & has been since the beginning to get that money back from Edward. He's not so smart when it comes to people being deceptive & he's reckless again with his relationship with Bella, it seems to me.
Thanks for the update, more angst ensues...
Author's Response:
hahahha part 2 is sooooo good...and were updating tonight
Date: 17 Feb 2011 10:09 AM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
What is that whore planning??? Bella and Edward better be okay, and did Eric set this bs ball up??
Author's Response:
hahah well dear...tonight will answer ur questions....We are updating momentarily
Date: 17 Feb 2011 3:57 AM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
Another great chapter, ladies!!!! Esme is an unbelievable bitch!!! I love that Edward told her, but this masquerade ball is VERY concerning. Looking forward to part 2!
Author's Response:
part 2 may be up tonight xoxoxoxo
Date: 17 Feb 2011 1:51 AM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
Poor Edward! I missed them together in this chapter, but it needed to be done. I love how he just gives it back to his mother (although I believe in respecting your mother...I have sons!LOL) she doesn't deserve his respect. She has not EARNED it nor really cared for him in the way a mother would. If she really loved him she would want whatever made him happy, man I can't wait to see what happens. I have a bad feeling about this masq. party...where are Mr. and Mrs. Soon to be Ex-Crazies? UGH...update soon! HAHA! Great job ladies.
Author's Response:
Hahah yah if Esme was nice, maybe Edward would be respectful but she aint..lol.... and the ball ohhhhhh what a night its gonna be
I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.
I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.
His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.
His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.
My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.
“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.
Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…
I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”
I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 7:59 PM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
until today i thought i was reading a pretty nice, entertaining little story - after this chapter, THIS IS A KICK ASS STORY!!!!!!!!! congrats and well done!!
Author's Response:
awwwwwwwww THANKS.........runs over and hugs the shit out of ya....thank you for Loving the story....xoxoox hope we can keep up ur enjoyment
I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.
I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.
His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.
His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.
My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.
“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.
Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…
I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”
I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 7:11 PM Title: I fucking love swings
Uh oh! This might b awkward or just plain easy access for b and e!
Date: 16 Feb 2011 6:03 PM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
I dont think he sent the party tickets. I think Angela did.Glad to know Esme is not his mother. She was giving all mothers a bad name.
Oh well we shall see.
Author's Response:
Yah Esme is a BEEYATCH....lol and the tickets........i dunno who sent em but Dang New Years Eve is A great night.......
I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.
I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.
His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.
His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.
My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.
“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.
Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…
I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”
I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 3:57 PM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
WOW - where are you going with all this? Please tell me Esme isn't going to "off" Daddy C?! Oh and New Years is sounding scary - is it Ang or Eric???
So good...keep it up...just like our boy E!
Author's Response:
xoxoxxo thanks for reviewing. New years is fantastic heheheh
I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.
I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.
His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.
His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.
My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.
“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.
Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…
I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”
I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 1:17 PM Title: To Happiness
well eddie's plan is not working out so well is it? and what will he think of bella staying there? ang is just trying to get him outta the guest room and into her bed again.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 6:45 AM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
eddie your plan is cold hearted! to ang for getting her hopes up, to bella for not giving her the time she needs, and to eric for swooping in to steal his wife.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 6:26 AM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
Holy Shit what a chapter!!! I mean, DAYUM!!! That was completely awesome!!!! I just adore Carlisle!! Esme, well she is a complete beyotch, isn't she? Saddling up to Ang like that! Ugh. Makes you want to slap a bitch, no make that 2 bitches!!!! LOL!!!
Kitten is going to be furious with Edward for not calling. And who in the hell is sending them invites to the Ball??????? Is this part of Esme and Ang's plan somehow? Or how about Eric............we haven't heard from him in awhile. Hmmmm..........
The A/N cracked me up too. You girls are on fire!!!!!
Keye
Author's Response:
hahahh yah Ari A/N are the best...xoxox and the ball is great....hehehhe u will see
I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.
I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.
His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.
His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.
My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.
“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.
Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…
I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”
I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2011 6:20 AM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
Wow so Esme is a real bitch and she's not Edward mother. Surprise there. Please update soon
Author's Response:
hope to have part 2 tonight sooooo we c......xoxoxooxox
I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.
I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.
His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.
His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.
My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.
“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.
Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…
I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”
I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 6:18 AM Title: Time To Think
this is the problem with buttering your bread with someone else's knife, there are blurry lines in who gets what and when you have to give it back....
Date: 16 Feb 2011 6:17 AM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
I was not ready for Esme. Damn I've never read a story where she is such a Mega Bi**h. I really hope Edward could stick it to her. I want to see Carlise tell her to kiss his ass too. I won't lie this was a very exciting chap for me. Now on to Bella.. Is she smoking? If she goes to this ball alone she is crazy. This has trap written all over it. I know her eyes are rose colored at the moment but Damn gurl..
E/k
Author's Response:
heheheh trap??? I dunno....heres the teaser
I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.
I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.
His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.
His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.
My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.
“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.
Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…
I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”
I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 6:00 AM Title: Fuck My Life
oh shit what a way to find out about who everybody is! i wonder how the girls are gonna take it? they are friendly after all...
Date: 16 Feb 2011 5:32 AM Title: Laurent
well theirnight so did not go as planned! and there is gonna be a few other shockers once everyone s at the hospital and meets up. *evil laugh*
Date: 16 Feb 2011 3:53 AM Title: Mirror's Reflection
why would larant smack eddie upside the head? is he gonna go after bella? i wonder if eric and ang will hook up again? maybe bella and eddie can swap spouses? heehee
Author's Response:
hehehhehe ohhhh sweets read read read xoxoxoxooxoxoxo
Date: 16 Feb 2011 2:53 AM Title: Spartan Lover
oh i hope bella finds out who he is! maybe he will talk to her tell her how his marriage really is and then when she is all simpathetic she will figure out he is ang's hubbie on monday....
Author's Response:
ohhh were soo happy u found our story and ur enjoying the read...have fun catching up xoxoxo
Date: 16 Feb 2011 2:30 AM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
Of course, pretty please I want the teaser!!!!!! OMG It's amazing how all this fit into a chapter, okay part 1 of a chapter. Edward's life is a the brink of changing and it will be better for him. Yes, all he found out is a lot, too much to process. Add to it the drinking and the reunion with his former classmates, yep too much for one mind.
However, Esme's words can't simply be ignored. She has known about this for a long time. She has had plenty of time to plan things, I hope she hasn't been able to do anything. Why has Angela come to see her so much? That can't be good either.
Then there's the Ball thing, I don't think Edward planned that, so it has to be someone else's doing and that would mean it's a trap. Oh my!!! How does my mind work!!! I think I better stick to waiting for next chapter. :)
Author's Response:
hahahahahahah ohh i cant wait till u read part 2....heres the teaser xoxoxoxo
I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.
I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.
His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.
His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.
My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.
“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.
Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…
I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”
I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
why did she have to leave? and has eddie found a new obsession?
Author's Response:
maybe heheheheheh
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 10:59 PM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
today was so long so I can come and review. Esme makes Ang look like mother Theresa. what a beoyatch. ooooh the party is a trick, im all freaking out. lmao,,,omg you kill me James is jamie,,,hahhahahahhaha I fell off my chair and spit out water at my desk, not cute with all kinds of eyes looking at me. I love you guys to the bottom of heart now hurry and update cuz momma needs to know whats next. smooches for my bday present, i loved it.xoxoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
I know who is worse...Esme or Ang...I dunno..hahahah....Hope u enjoy part 2 xoxoxoox
Date: 15 Feb 2011 10:49 PM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
Wow, that is one heck of a family secret...well secrets [plural]. Edward had a lot thrown at him visiting home, but I am glad his Dad is cool and his bitchy mom is not his real mom...also glad you went ahead and cleared up the money issue right up front, cause I don't want him staying with Angie anymore for any reason whatsoever.
Bella made me want to scream this chapter. She is being stalked and dealing with crazy phone calls, yet sees no conspiracy with the sudden invitation to a masquerade. With all that is going on lately, I am not leaving my house without an escort like Emmett, and definitely not a party. So I can't wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
see the whole chapter was as one...so the beginning of the next chapter is her talking to Edward....so dont worry....the ball is great time for them
I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.
I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.
His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.
His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.
My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.
“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.
Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…
I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”
I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 10:16 PM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
And the truth shall set you free!
So....masquerade ball?? That has all the markings of a bad, bad set up! Hope neither of them succumb to it!
Wouldn't put it pas Angela or Eric to have something to do with it! Be safe children!
Fantastic job!
Author's Response:
heheh be safe children....I love that.....and not sure who's behind the ball but I know part 2 is Gr8888888888888888888
I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.
I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.
His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.
His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.
My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.
“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.
Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…
I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”
I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 10:03 PM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
Of course Esme could always kill him, especially if he is still married to Ang, she would get it and Esme would probably get it from her. The boy better watch his back.
Is the masquerade some set up by Ang?
Author's Response:
hahah that seems to be the question of the night....is it Ang???? I dont know...Ari wont tell me LOL
I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.
I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.
His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.
His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.
My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.
“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.
Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…
I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”
I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 9:43 PM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
Ohh, so much has happened, maybe Edward should just go the whole hog and fly kitten, Emmett and Rose down for New Years in stead and that will really piss the Esme off.
Author's Response:
hahahahha yah kick that bitch to the curb hahahaha
Date: 15 Feb 2011 9:33 PM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
mamma esme is a bitch cant wait t osee what happens next
Author's Response:
part 2 is great...xoxoxooxox
I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.
I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.
His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.
His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.
My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.
“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.
Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…
I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”
I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 9:26 PM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
OMG what a chapter. Well I have a feeling that if Bella and Edward goes to that party they will be making a BIG mistake. I have a feeling that Angela set that up to see if they go together or who Edward will bring. Hmmmm. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
a very good theory....is Ang behind it??? hmmmmm Im not sure...but I KNOW...part 2 is great
I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.
I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.
His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.
His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.
My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.
“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.
Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…
I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”
I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.
Date: 15 Feb 2011 9:03 PM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
:)
Author's Response:
:) xoxoxoxo thanks for reviewing
Date: 15 Feb 2011 7:58 PM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
okay this ball is a BAAAAAAAAAADDDDDD idea... LOL
Can I tell Bella now "she probably doesn't want to attend that" LOL
and the hits just keep on coming... and no.. sadly I haven't been drinking :)
Author's Response:
actually Bella does want to attend the ball hahahah .......trust me part 2 will knock ur socks off....
teaser
I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.
I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.
His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.
His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.
My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.
“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.
Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…
I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”
I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.
Date: 15 Feb 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
I think miss bella is gonna get some help finding her 'O'!
Date: 15 Feb 2011 6:10 PM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
Knew there was a reason for Esme's behavour. And he still hasn't spoken to Bella, not good.
Author's Response:
sorry but the chapter was all in one at first soo he does talk to Bella to ease ur mind......and the rest of the chapter is Fan fucking tastic
Date: 15 Feb 2011 5:16 PM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
Wow, that was INCREDIBLE :) I really loved it so much :) I want to see the teaser banner AND read the teaser ;) Go Carlisle for finally standing up to Esme ;) Cannot wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
not sure if ur on facebook but we have a group for Smw where we add the teaser and banner....heres the teaser xoxoxoxo
I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.
I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.
His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.
His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.
My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.
“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.
Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…
I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”
I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.
Date: 15 Feb 2011 5:03 PM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
Gosh! This is so good, Esme is OOC.
Author's Response:
Yes Esme has a screw loose..LOL xoxo thanks for reviewing and enjoying
Date: 15 Feb 2011 4:18 PM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
Esme is a real piece of work!
Hope that Carlisle and Edward have an iron clad way of keeping Esme away from the family inheritance. Ang and Esme are sure to be up to something.......probably from the beginning threat creating the mess called his marriage.
Edward needs to get back to Bella quickly.......something about that invite to the Masquerade Ball seems off.
I'm becoming more impatient as I type.....need part ll ASAP!
Author's Response:
shhhhh calm down....its all gonna be okay......u better??? alright......heres a teaser
I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.
I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.
His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.
His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.
My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.
“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.
Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…
I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”
I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.
Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:24 PM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
Loved it. Now bring on Part 2.
Author's Response:
hahah part 2 will be up as soon as we get it back...xoxoxoxo
Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:11 PM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
I am soooo glad that Esme is NOT is mother! She is an evil bitch...no wonder she is so close to Ang (and Ang has probably known this whole time that Esme isn't really Edward's mom). Grrrrrrrrr.
Kayso-VERY worried about Bella at this point. When is Edward gonna realize that, um, ya, she'd headed to disaster?
Author's Response:
hahahah is she????
teaser
I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.
I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.
His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.
His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.
My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.
“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.
Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…
I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”
I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.
Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:08 PM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
Ummmm, I don't have the teaser... lol!
Well, I can't say that I'm too surprised about the Esme thing. But what a bitch! I can see why she likes Angela.
Author's Response:
hahah yah Ang and Esme suit one another...hahah.....heres the teaser
I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.
I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.
His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.
His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.
My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.
“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.
Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…
I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”
I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 1:50 PM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
SO SO SO GOOOD!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I I I I I know hahahahhahaha xoxoxoxoxoox
Date: 15 Feb 2011 11:45 AM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
Wow lots going on...Esme is nasty!
Author's Response:
yah she's a nasty bitch.....but glad she aint his blood...xxooxoxox
Date: 15 Feb 2011 11:10 AM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
Poor Carlisle!!! Even after all this messed up story, the thing that stands out is that masquarade ball. That sounds fishy!!! I hope it isn't Angela's doing you know to get some kind of proof to infidelity or something!! Please hurry with the next chapter and I'll love to see the teaser.
Author's Response:
xoxoxoxo hope u like part 2 babes....heres the teaser
I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.
I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.
His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.
His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.
My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.
“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.
Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…
I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”
I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.
Date: 15 Feb 2011 11:09 AM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
awwww, poor carlisle!!! i cried hearing the story of amy :( but sucked in for esme hahahahahaha
Author's Response:
I know...Ari wrote that part so well....cant wait to post part 2
Date: 15 Feb 2011 9:16 AM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
Wow Ok girlz get me part 2..........LOL it's gettin good! Thanks :)
Author's Response:
hahaha well as soon as we get part 2 back we will post post post xoxoxo heres a teaser
I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.
I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.
His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.
His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.
My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.
“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.
Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…
I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”
I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.
Date: 15 Feb 2011 8:30 AM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
My mother has more money than brains! What's that's dudes name from those vampire movies? Robert Peterson…Robert Peckerson? Oh well anyways, I bet his house isn't half the size as my mother's house. --- LOL!! That is my kind of humor!
ESME is SO OOC! I thought I would hate it, but it is really kind of fascinating!
And NOW to know she is not E's mother??? Unreal! What a twist! Good job!
Please update soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much and yah Ari is hilarious....I always Laugh out loud the first time I read her part of the chapter...hahah...Peckerson hahahhaha...oh man.....and Esme not being his mother....was a great twist we threw in and isnt the last xoxoxoxoxo heres a teaser xoxoxo
I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.
I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.
His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.
His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.
My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.
“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.
Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…
I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”
I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.
Date: 15 Feb 2011 8:07 AM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
awesome chapter! love edward and esme squaring off!
Author's Response:
Yah I loved how Ari wrote that part....xoxox hope u enjoy part 2
Date: 15 Feb 2011 7:14 AM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
boo-yah! God I love me some hostile Edward! I'd love to watch that boy go off, then help him relieve some tension! ;) J/k, but not really. Seriously, Love this chapter!
Author's Response:
hahahahh I love a hot pissed off Edward....RAWRRRRRRRRRRRRRRr.hahahha and Im sure ur very capable of relieving his tension...But I have a feeling Bella will beat u to it. hahahah
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 7:14 AM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
OH gosh! Wow... what a BITCH!!!! That was a very interesting way to play Esme out. She's always so sweet and motherly. Hmmm... something tells me nothing good will come from the next chapter. Is Esme helping Angela? When is Eric going to appear again? Who sent the invitations? I can feel my skin beginnging to crawl! Hurry!!! UPDATE SOOON! Muah!
~xoxoxox~
Author's Response:
hahahaah ur sooo cute.....lots of questions. hmmm how to answer. Well cant answer all but I can forsure give u a teaser. haha part 2 is greatttttttttt
I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.
I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.
His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.
His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.
My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.
“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.
Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…
I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”
I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 7:09 AM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
Hi DLIR and Ari - Great kick ass chapter here. My My My I just did not see that coming at all! Really! So Shrew is not Edwards Mother, well that's really something! I am so hoping that he can get the upper hand on "The Shrew" and not have her getting over on him with some Damn Technicality or another. That would truly suck rocks, big time.
I think the Masquerade Ball is a set up of some sort not sure about that. I can tell you think, SMW keeps you on your toes with the intrigue and wondering what the hell is coming next, I love it.....
Okay till next chapter and I'm very grateful for all of your updates BTW. Have a good one, Laters BB Kathy xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks babe...we like twisting things up and throwing things around..honestly we have a outline of where and what happens but even when we read one anothers parts we are both surprised and excited to read what the other conjured up. Part 2 is great and I cant wait for u to read it
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 7:01 AM Title: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
That was intense. I can't wait for more. :)
Author's Response:
Thank u xoxoxoxo part 2 shouldnt take long to post...xoxoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2011 10:33 PM Title: Save your pennies
Can't wait for more updates!!!! Gettin' 'hairy'!!
Author's Response:
hahahah getting hairy....LOL...u need a wax?? The next chapter should be up soon....as soon as I get it back from the beta its up...xoxoxo
Date: 11 Feb 2011 9:35 PM Title: Save your pennies
I have been hoping that Edward would have a show-down with his mother. That should be good!
I hope his mother is Elizabeth and not Esme.....
Go Jess, keeping B & E's secret a SECRET! I didn't know she had it in her!
Keep up the good work. This is quite a story. I feel so sorry for Bella! Hang in there, girl.
Author's Response:
:) well the chapter should be back from our Beta's this weekend so it should up soon enough. What happens with his mother is great, Ari wrote it well. Hope you enjoy it xoxoxoxoxoxo
Date: 11 Feb 2011 9:14 PM Title: Edwardian Period
I really hope that Ang is not going to create too big a problem.
Good job! Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Were so happy ur enjoying so far.....xoxoxoxoxo thank you for reviewing....DLIR AND ARI
Date: 09 Feb 2011 7:56 AM Title: Thank you Part 2
Hot Christmas! I hope they get to Emm's house sometime!
Ang is being a pain! I think Eric is making those disturbing phone calls!
I look forward to seeing where you take the story next.
Author's Response:
Yes they go to Em's house...keep reading heheh.....xoxox thanks for reviewing and wait till u see who's calling.........
Date: 07 Feb 2011 3:52 AM Title: Save your pennies
Wow! I have really enjoyed reading what you have written so far! I love these two and the unique twist you have given these characters. I am getting more paranoid thinking Angela and Eric somehow are working together in some way.
Author's Response:
Thank you soooo much for taking time to read our lil story and reviewing each time... We do love writing it and hope u enjoy the rest. The next chapter is with the Beta so any day now
Date: 07 Feb 2011 3:31 AM Title: Edwardian Period
What is Angela trying to do. She was banging Ben, so who cares if Edward was stepping out on her too. No judge is going to demand they stay together. There are no children involved so this is an easy one in court. Where is Yorkie the dorkie hiding out? (I loved that by the way)
Author's Response:
hahahah ya yorkie the dorkie was perfect. And I think Ang is going through some crazy times...lol u will just need to keep reading and find out
Date: 07 Feb 2011 2:52 AM Title: Sinners Part 2
I am glad she was safe at the spa! She loves it, built it, and I really hope Eric take that away from her! The spa with Edward - amazing! They really do need to develop a plan for how to move forward.
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2011 2:30 AM Title: Save your pennies
So glad I have caught up - I have been reading them on my iphone & it doesn't allow me to leave reviews!!!
My heart is pounding from all the action in this last chapter - can't wait for the update... phew - exhausting!
But please know I love you guys so much & this story rocks!!!!
I try to review every chapter but of course RL gets a hold of us & it just doens't happen ... so sorry girls :)
Love ya work - you both so rock!!!
T2M x
Author's Response:
How dare u not review..........thats it ur cut off........hahah NO SPARTAN FOR U......jj....we hope u love what we have planned for our lovebirds xoxoxooxoxx
Date: 07 Feb 2011 2:25 AM Title: Save your pennies
wow shit is doing down with this pair. love this story get so happy when i see an update. glad to have you back ari.......big hugs
Author's Response:
Thank you soooo much......and I LOVE HAVING ARI BACK........yay....next chapter is great........and its with the beta...,.xoxoxo
Date: 07 Feb 2011 2:06 AM Title: Sinners Part 2
Ha! I wasn't the only one worrying about the spa??? Hahahaha.
That whole chapter to them and e and r and them......awwwwwwwwwww.
Date: 07 Feb 2011 2:00 AM Title: Sinners
Emmett was hilarious, and of course he could not let that go! Holy God - nine! Columbus! He he he!!!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 1:51 AM Title: Sinners
...........don't think it's going to be Edward that meets her there. These phone calls and seeing Laurent and Eric at the hotel is being played too low-key.....something's going to happen when we least expect it.
Date: 07 Feb 2011 1:35 AM Title: Sinners Part 2
great chapter!!
Date: 06 Feb 2011 8:09 PM Title: Thank you Part 2
Worth the wait! There are creepy things coming I am afraid! The whole Laurant thing seems like it is still out there hanging. Also, where has thinble dick been? Angela is simply delusional - 'we are going to my parents for Christmas?!" WTF!
Author's Response:
hahah ohhh thimble dick hahahah. Where is he??? hmmmmm i better find out....Hey ARi.................let me in on ur secret
Date: 06 Feb 2011 7:04 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
Angela is crazy. She surely knows she will get plenty and will continue on business as usual. She will not have to sneak around and be guilty when she goes out hunting for men! Bella was right, and possibly a bit psychic to leave when she did.
Date: 06 Feb 2011 6:20 PM Title: Use Somebody
Well that could not have gone much worse! It seems like Angela's guilt is gettting the better of her. Pointing the finger at Bella for tellng, takes the heat off of her for doing the deed!
Date: 06 Feb 2011 5:06 PM Title: Pom Pom's
I love these two and she is right to get her own place fast. Flirting with him while Angela is there is just wrong no matter what their relationship is.
Date: 06 Feb 2011 4:31 PM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
I really can't wait to see what is next too! Rose was right in more ways than one. Angela does not really deserve the false hope, and Bella would have totally took it all the wrong way. Now both under the same roof - goodness!
Date: 06 Feb 2011 3:36 PM Title: I fucking love swings
Eric is nuts! She was right to grab the fireplace poker when she did! Lucky that he did not sneak in during the night and attack her! How is she going to go stay at Edward's house?! Wow things are going to get interesting really quick!
Date: 06 Feb 2011 1:43 PM Title: To Happiness
Good for her! I ended the last chapter wondering what the hell she was thinking, and that fit perfectly well. Good for her realizing she needs to do this for her and her alone.
Date: 06 Feb 2011 1:19 PM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
I am really not sure what Bella has going through her mind. Putting Edward to the side for now, she was not at all happy with Eric before. Why the lovey dovey wife now? Gahhh! I do like Edward's guerrilla warfare plan!
Date: 06 Feb 2011 12:50 PM Title: Time To Think
They both have a lot to process! The elevator was of course great and will give them both somthing to think about while they are trying to make their current lives seem right.
Date: 06 Feb 2011 12:34 PM Title: Fuck My Life
I hope Edward is as convicted to his desire to ditch Angela as he was! They know who each other are! Whoot Whoot!!! This cannot go down easy!
Date: 06 Feb 2011 3:43 AM Title: Laurent
That was intense! My heart was in my throat the whole chapter! At least she knows who he is, and something tells me in that moment he looked at her, he did too. Please let him be ok!
Date: 06 Feb 2011 3:19 AM Title: Mirror's Reflection
Please let him be ok!!! If not Bella is not ok either because he will have access to his key!
Date: 06 Feb 2011 2:35 AM Title: Spartan Lover
The 'rub and tug' was too funny! I really cannot wait to find out what they think when they discover who each other is. Edward smelling the girls was too funny. Of course he did not smell her because in his wildest dreams he never thougt she would be Kitty!
Date: 06 Feb 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 2
Holy God! Who had the nerve to call her then! I love Edward & Bella's sarcastic side!
Date: 06 Feb 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
Holy Shit! That was insanely hot! I definitely look forward to what else you all have!
Date: 05 Feb 2011 8:43 PM Title: Save your pennies
Well, well well. about time to make this right. Why would anyone want to stay in a marriage with someone that does NOT love you?? AHH Money. Obviously.
Date: 05 Feb 2011 4:07 AM Title: Save your pennies
this is one of the best fucking stories i have read in a long ass time! i need the next chapter like yesterday lol love your guys' writing! much love!!
Author's Response:
Fuck yes! Now that's what we love to hear! You hear that DLIR one of the best FUCKIN stories! Ahhh we love you!!! We're workin on the next chap now. Just a lil more and it will be done and off to the betas! So glad you love it!
Thank you so much for your fuck awesome review.
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 04 Feb 2011 9:50 PM Title: Save your pennies
another action packed chapter. great stuff. keep it coming. glad your partner in crime is back too!
Author's Response:
LOL yes I'm back and I'm happy to be back I've missed y'all soooooo much! We're sooo glad you liked it.
Thank you so much for your review.
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 04 Feb 2011 5:28 AM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
Don't You Put it in Your Mouth --- TOTALLY bizarre! But I see why it was funny....
GREAT lines!!! ---- Angela, quite frankly, is a witch. Possibly scarier than the wicked witch of the west. I knew that from now on every time I see her coming, I'm going to think of the song that played in Wizard of Oz. And, every time I watch it I will see Angela on the bike, pedaling like a psycho bitch to, tada- tada-ta- da-da.
I guessed I missed this: How did Ang track down B & E, and how did she get to the hotel? Emm didn't pick her up, did he? Or did she SAY she knew where Edward was to trick Emm to say where he was? I def didn't get it all!
Date: 04 Feb 2011 4:48 AM Title: Use Somebody
You have some amazing "banners" for your chapters! Impressive!
"The E must stand for Elmo!" --- Dream on Edward. LOL!
"The way her hair was pulled up, exposing her long neck, made me want to bite and suck on for breakfast." --- Edward is thinking vamp-like!
Did Ang figure it out? If so, how??
You just won't let me stop reading for the night, will you? I have to know what happens next!
Author's Response:
:) We're glad you like our banners. LOL E for Elmo I love it. Yes he was channeling in inter vamp LOL. Nope we want you to keep reading :) Reviews makes us very very very happy!
Thank you so much for your awesome review.
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 04 Feb 2011 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Emmett is SO FUNNY. I honestly can't wait until he shows up because everything out of his mouth is hilarious. I literally laugh out loud !!
Date: 03 Feb 2011 9:24 PM Title: Save your pennies
:)
Author's Response:
:) we're soooo glad you liked it sweetie!
Thank you so, so, so much for your review.
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 03 Feb 2011 7:53 PM Title: Save your pennies
What a happy reunion between you two! You guys are better together than apart!!! Yummy chapter. Loved how Jessica got all in Ang's face. Funny.
I must have forgotten something...why is Edward going to tell off his mother? Was it that she wanted/forced Edward to marry that heifer or something like that? *Keye hurts brain trying to remember* LOL!!
Are we assuming that Eric is calling both Spartan and Kitten or are you guys going to throw a wrench in everything and have it be someone else??? You two are lovely but sneaky girls!! And I love that about you two!!!
Can't wait for the teaser and the next chapter!!!! *Squee*
Keye
Author's Response:
:) I'm so happy to be back with DLIR! I missed her and y'all so much. Jess is a riot. LOL Edward feels it's time to put mommy dearest in her place. It's been years in the making. You need some tylenol? We don't want your head to hurt sweetie :)
Sneaky...who us? Nah well okay we are LOL. And we can't tell you that :)
Thank you so much for your awesome review sweetie.
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 03 Feb 2011 6:48 PM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
I hope he knows what he is doing.
Date: 03 Feb 2011 6:16 PM Title: Time To Think
Oh what a tangled web we weave!
Date: 03 Feb 2011 6:00 PM Title: Fuck My Life
Yea they finally figured out who each other is.
Now comes the Drama.........standoff.........between wife and new love. Ben needs to get in on this action to take Ang away with him!
back to story
Date: 03 Feb 2011 5:24 PM Title: Laurent
Wow, Laurant was working for someone else.....who? It couldn't be Eric? Maybe Angela?
I glad she now know it's HIM from the building.
I need to get caught up so back to the story!
Date: 03 Feb 2011 4:42 PM Title: Mirror's Reflection
What kind of cliff hanger is this...............
Date: 03 Feb 2011 3:58 PM Title: Spartan Lover
This chapter was a riot.
Bella being jealous because hot guy did not sniff her......lol.
Emmett's booming laughter at the rub & tug banter, priceless. Can't wait for Rose to meet Bella.
Another weekend party, hope Eric gets his groove on. Partner swapping and they don't even know it yet.
Read on!
Date: 03 Feb 2011 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
That was quite the party. Drawn to each other even while in costume. That was explosive.
Need to read more!
Date: 03 Feb 2011 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
I was reading The Love of Dominence and she recommended this story......
I'm on the edge after this first chapter. Look forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2011 1:12 PM Title: Save your pennies
Good to see you back Ari, I hope all is well.
Thanks for the update, really good chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad to be back. We're glad you like the chapter.
Thank you so much for your review.
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Ari & DLIR
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2011 1:09 PM Title: Save your pennies
SOOOOOOOO GOOOOOD!!!!!! Man their exes have a few screws loose!
Author's Response:
LOL just a few... Oh hell I'm going for a whole tool box full of loose :) We're so glad you like it!
Thank you so much for your review.
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Ari & DLIR
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2011 10:16 AM Title: Save your pennies
wow I love your story so far. I actually started to read it today. it awesome. Have a great night Smiles Leona
Author's Response:
Awe we're so glad you like it! That makes us happy. Hope you continue to like it! :)
Thank you so much for your review.
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 03 Feb 2011 9:27 AM Title: Save your pennies
IT ABOUT TIME EDWARD IS GOING TO STAND UP TO HIS MOTHER ABOUT HER FORCEING HIM TO MARRY ANG. IN THE FIRST PLACE. I FEEL SO BAD FOR BELLA AND EDWARD FOR ALL THEY HAVE BEEN GOING THROUGH JUST TO TRY AND BE HAPPY WITH THE ONE THEY LOVE.
Author's Response:
Oh yes mommy dearest...well you will see in the next chapter. She's not so nice. We all feel bad for E/B but never fear they have there HEA just not yet LOL
Thank you so much for your review.
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 03 Feb 2011 8:15 AM Title: Pom Pom's
Edward under the bed -- too good! And what he had to hear? Priceless!
Ang mentioned Ben, but it did not seem that Edward questioned either B or A about him.
Angela is so clueless, but I guess that will make things easier for B & E.
I can't wait for B & E to be together all the time.
At this point, is Edward still in the period when he told Emm he would be away from the office for a few days?
Good job!
Date: 03 Feb 2011 7:57 AM Title: Edwardian Period
whats going to happen i feel like its something big i hope no one gets hurt i love this story