Date: 03 Feb 2011 6:56 AM Title: Save your pennies
Thanks for the chapter glad your back Ari .........now get editing.............lol need more please Thanks :P
Author's Response:
LOL I'm glad to be back. Ummm well since you asked so nicely I guess I can get to editing :) You'll have more soon.
Thank you so much for your review.
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 03 Feb 2011 1:34 AM Title: Save your pennies
I can't wait for Edward to face his Mom, I was so hoping we'd get a chance to experience that! I've been wondering if Ang has been lying and buttering up to Edward's parents?
So we're being led to believe that the phone calls are coming from Eric, but we still don't really have confirmation on that yet, do we? I'm with Jessica, I think soumfin very bad is about to "hit the fan"...
Author's Response:
Edward will have him mommy time in the next chapter :) Eric that lil creep will be up soon yikes he gives me cold chills. And not in a good way LOL.
Thank you so much for your review.
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[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2011 11:41 PM Title: Save your pennies
Oh I love a fiesty Jessica and a pissed off Edward!!! Excellent chapter... cant wait for the next one !!!
Author's Response:
Jess is my new hero! And a pissed Edward is a sexy Edward :) We're so glad you liked it.
Thank you so much for your review.
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Feb 2011 11:25 PM Title: Save your pennies
We're all happy that Ari is back!!! We missed you! DUN, DUN, DUN!!!!! The you know what is really hitting the fan now!!!! ;)
Author's Response:
:) I'm so happy to be back I've missed y'all so much! Oh yes it's going to hit the fan big time! :)
Thank you so much for your review.
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Feb 2011 9:21 PM Title: Save your pennies
Geez---they have some nutty ex's!!!
Author's Response:
Nutter isn't the word for those two freak cases! LOL
Thank you so much for your review.
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Feb 2011 8:48 PM Title: Save your pennies
Lordy, Edward has finally grown a pair. Hallelujah, there's hope for them yet.
How about Jess, what a firecracker, loving her character.
Author's Response:
LOL yes he has grown a pair! It's about time. Jess is a lil firecracker thats for sure! :)
Thank you so much for your review.
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Feb 2011 8:24 PM Title: Edwardian Period
<3 <3 <3 a34; you're a star;D) hope that fills some of the love you were looking for!
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2011 7:43 PM Title: Save your pennies
W-O-W! That was something! Once again can somebody run over Angela with a school bus or something! I´m just saying! First mention of Alice and Jazz I can´t wait until they show up, and Mom!!! That´s going to be an interesting conversation. To be a fly on the wall! Lol! Great chapter girls! Welcome back Ari!!! We missed you, but you left us in good hands with DLIR! Can´t wait for and update!! Squeee!!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
LOL I love you Krazi! I'm glad to be back! Tell ya what if you wanna drive the bus I'll stand by ya while you run her happy ass over! And yes we met Momma Esme next chap! A lil warning she's not nice!!!! Workin on the next chap now!
Thank you so much for your review.
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Feb 2011 7:02 PM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
Some funny stuff has been going on! Good job!
I am so ready for them to be together! Bella dumped Eric; now Edward and Ang need to split. Maybe with Edward being in Bella's room that will happen soon!
Author's Response:
:) We're so glad you like it so far. We all are ready for them to be together. Keep your fingers crossed!
Thank you so much for your review.
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[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2011 6:51 PM Title: Edwardian Period
Hi ho hi ho... here we go! I can't wait until Ang gets served the new papers, I just want her to fall off the face of the earth. She's got some nerve trying to catch Edward cheating when she's been doing it all along. She's the reason he went to the swinger's party in the first place. I know that Eric's bi-polar ass is just waiting around the bend to wreak havoc on Kitten´s life. This is such a juicy little story! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 02 Feb 2011 6:24 PM Title: Save your pennies
Another great chapter. So can't wait to find out whos behind the mystery calls. I so think it might be Eric but not sure.
Author's Response:
We're so glad you liked it. The caller or callers will be brought out soon. there is a shocker there. That will make you go...WHAT THE HELL JUST HAPPENED HERE??? :)
Thank you so much for your review.
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Feb 2011 6:22 PM Title: Save your pennies
OHHHHH! Great Cliffie! Seriously glad your back ARI! I swear an update on this story is comparable to great wine, great...u know what, and pictures of certain Twilight men with their shirts off...and no I am not a wolfpack girl! LOL
Author's Response:
You have us panting now. Thinking of them with no shrits...or pants LOL Yay even better they can all be well just naked yummmmm :) I'm so glad to be back it feels really good. I've missed everyone so much. I'm not a wolfpack girl either LOL
Thank you so much for your review.
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Feb 2011 6:13 PM Title: I fucking love swings
How in the world did he do that much damage in such a short time? Poor Bella --- her quilt!
Date: 02 Feb 2011 5:52 PM Title: Save your pennies
well didnt see that one comming cant wait to see what he dose next
Author's Response:
:) We like to throw our readers off track every now and again. He's about to go all postal on Esme.
Thank you so much for your review.
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Feb 2011 5:46 PM Title: Save your pennies
Dun, Dun, Duh.. Lovin Jessica more now. In the immortal words of Emmett via Eclipse..AGAIN. lol I miss you guys when your gone..
Author's Response:
:) Jess is pretty cool! We're back and I don't plan on goin MIA again. Well let's hope not. Working on the next chapter now. Yaaaaay!!!
Thank you so much for your review.
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Feb 2011 5:35 PM Title: Save your pennies
ur initial AN had tears running down my face. so good to have the dynamic duo back together! Ari ...we missed u so. DLIR, ur the bomb woman. loved the chapter! glad to see edward grew a pair with his mother. mwah mwah xoxo
Author's Response:
LOL the dynamic duo :) I fell like we should have capes on with the wind blowing through our hair. LOL I've missed everyone so much. I'm so happy to be back. Ah Edward and Esme...well it's going to be a ride let me tell ya. It will be in the next chapter.
Thank you so much for your review.
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Feb 2011 4:54 PM Title: Save your pennies
OMFG wow wow wow!! I so cant wait for the next update and I hope it is soon!!
Author's Response:
LOL we're working on the next chapter now. Or I should say I am...DLIR has her parts done. Me and my slacker butt it's just begaining. So I'm keepin everyone waiting :( sorry. But I'm working as fast as I can.
Thank you so much for your review.
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Feb 2011 4:50 PM Title: To Happiness
So Bella is going to leave Eric. I knew that would happen!
I had forgotten about Ben, but I still think that Ang and Eric will end up together!
I trust that next chapter will be Edward!
Date: 02 Feb 2011 4:24 PM Title: Save your pennies
WOW, that was SUPER AWESOME! I really loved it so much! I really hope they find Eric ASAP! I cannot wait to find out what happens next with Edward's mother :)
Author's Response:
Oh where oh where is the lil creep Eric been hiding? Oh Edward/Esme are going to come to blows so to speak. We're so glad you liked the chapter.
Thank you so much for your review.
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Feb 2011 4:20 PM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
Good job! All 4 of them on a date --- Wild!
Jealous Bella is funny! I expect to see more of her!
Date: 02 Feb 2011 3:46 PM Title: Save your pennies
Ang needs to be in a padded room.
Author's Response:
LOL why yes she does! But you haven't seen her crazy yet. Just keep that in mind.
Thank you so much for your review.
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[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2011 3:00 PM Title: Save your pennies
Finally!! So glad Angela was put in her place, sort of. Not sure if I'd have told Angela about the incoming papers but whatever. Glad Edward is going to see his mom; hopefully before angela has.
Crank phone calls? Hmmmm.....Rose is on it!
I love how they argue but still love & hold onto each other. Bubble gum candy cotton sweet!
Cannot wait forgets next one!! This was fantastic!!
Author's Response:
Yes Ang was put in her place. I'm working on the whole Edward/Esme part now. Lets just say it's not going to be pretty. Rose is all over the calls. How ever what she finds is going to be a shocker! :)
Thank you so much for your review.
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Feb 2011 2:55 PM Title: Save your pennies
That was a close call! Jessica is smart and fast, no wonder Bella cares so much for her, and we know it's mutual.
Angela is stubborn and unwilling to end things, it seems she doesn't have that choice any more. I wonder what she'll do now?
As for Eric, where can he be? It's kind of scary not knowing.
Rose is going to track the phone calls, lets hope she can come up with something.
Author's Response:
It was a close call. Jess was very smart. Ang is going to fight this all the way. She's not done yet. Not sure where the lil creep is hiding. But he will show up soon. Rose will come up with something but it's going to shock ya on what she finds.
Thank you for your review!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Feb 2011 2:34 PM Title: Save your pennies
Who is calling Edward and Bella? Will Angela attempt to come into the building again? Will Rose be able to trace the phone call? Jessica was completely awesome in this chapter. What is Edward going to say to his mother?
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
LOL wow so many questions. :) We love questions. How ever I will answer them with answering them. Make sence to you cuz it really don't to me. Anyways. So it is the same person calling Edward and Bella. But I can't say who. ANg being as stupid as she is I would say yes she will try it again. Rose will try everything in her power to trace them. But I think you will be very surprised when it comes out. Jess was awesome in this chapter. I'm working on what is going down with Edward and his mom now. Lets just say it's not going to be pretty!
Thank you for your review!
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Ari & DLIR
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2011 2:06 PM Title: Save your pennies
First, Welcome bck Ari. miss ya big time. I fell out of my chair and peed my pants. Best chapter yet....I love Spartan in a tizzy, so sexy when he's frazzled. damn straight if I were marge I'd be all over that, im sure her sweetness is only the outside, you know what they about the quiet ones. lmao, just kidding, okay not really. Jess deserves some luvin here she gots her girls back, though she got she to Spartan without his shirt on and didnt appreciate it. Who among us wants to kick the living hell out of Angela already. if she wasnt such a huge bitch id be embarrassed for her how bad she is making herself look. Happy dance for Ari and and that teaser. sooo good now I have to go change. you know im kidding right.. good day guys.
Author's Response:
LOL oh we love you!!!!! I'm so happy to be back! I've missed everyone sooooo much. Sorry you fell out of your chair and peed your pants. Next time maybe we should put a warning :) Yes he is all sexy when he's frazzled. I say we get a mob together track Ang's stupid ass down and beat her ass! What do you think? You with me :)
Thank you for your review!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Feb 2011 1:44 PM Title: Save your pennies
It seems to me that Jessica is the smartest one in this chapter. At least she is thinking with her head (play with words). Can't wait for more. Love the jokes.
Author's Response:
LOL it does seem that way! She was very smart and thinking fast. We have to make our readers laugh! Glad you like them.
Thank you for your review!
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Ari & DLIR
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2011 1:05 PM Title: Save your pennies
nice surprise thanks to Ari too
Author's Response:
LOL we're glad you liked our surprise! :) Working on the next chapter now!!!!
Thank you for your review!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Feb 2011 10:27 AM Title: Save your pennies
ooooh things are really moving along now can't wait...btw snow sucks snow sucks big time hugs from Chicago
Author's Response:
Things are moving on kinda smooth right now. But we all know it can't always be so smooth. Lots more DRAMA coming up LOL. OOH snow does suck! Hope everything is well in Chicago! Hope you didn't lose power cuz that just sucks!!!
Thank you for your review!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Feb 2011 9:28 AM Title: Save your pennies
oooh can't wait for the next chapter
great work xxx
Author's Response:
:) We are working on the next chapter now! Well more like I'm working on it. DLIR has been busy and is done with her part. So everyone is waitin on my slow ass :) But I'm workin on it as fast as I can!
Thank you for your review!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Feb 2011 9:20 AM Title: Save your pennies
I really like Jess she is on Bella's side. I love the way Jess said she would kick Ang ass and when Edward told her he would see her in court. I cant wait to find out what happens with Edwards mother.
Author's Response:
Jess is the type of friend everyone needs that's for sure. And you wont have to wait to long to see what Edward tells his mom. I'm workin on that now!
Thank you for your review!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Feb 2011 8:42 AM Title: Save your pennies
YAY!!! GO EDWARD!!! It's about time he pulled all the stops out and manned up! Now to get rid of the shrew and whiney bitch... That's Angela and Eric, in that order. ;) Good chapter, btw!
Author's Response:
LOL Oh God Eric is the whiney bitch! I love it LOL yes I'm with you it's about time Edward does what he does best...Well maybe the second thing he does best! We're glad you liked the chapter!
Thank you for your review!
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Ari & DLIR
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2011 7:19 AM Title: Save your pennies
Damn Ladies: Didn't even make it past the AN before you had me waking the neighbors laughing here: "After twelve years of therapy my psychiatrist said something that brought tears to my eyes. He said, "No hablo ingles." Now that is hysterical shit! Are you two moving into stand up comedy now???
Oh and in response to: Men should be like Kleenex, soft, strong and disposable. HELL YES AMEN!!!!!
Welcome back ARI, you were Missed but DLIR does great work so things didn't suffer, however YOU WERE MISSED.. Wow that Ang is the craziest of Bitches! I just loved it when Edward called Ang a money grubbing Whore! Priceless! ;-) She is!
Eric hummmm I wonder where he really is. this is kinda a creepy! Glad Edward is going to set Momma straight...
Nighty Night all, as always this was fantastic,
Laters BB Kathy xoxoxo
Author's Response:
LOL huh what do you think DLIR? Should we move on to comedy? Nah then we would have to give up SMW and that just aint goin happen :) Awe thank you I've missed everyone on here so damn much! Ang is a money grubbing whore. I'm not sure where Eric has been hiding out. But he's just creepy anyways! Oh yes Edward is goin sit Momma straight and not be so nice about it.
Hope you had a good nights rest!
Thank you for your review!
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Ari & DLIR
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2011 6:49 AM Title: Save your pennies
Dam! The exes are getting more crazy by the minute. hehehe Can't wait for more. :)
Author's Response:
LOL yes the exes are very CRAZY! We're working on the next chapter now. :) Thank you for your review!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Feb 2011 6:47 AM Title: Save your pennies
Loved this chapter, it's getting good. Hopefully Angela backs off before she gets herself into trouble. She's not to smart to be playing around with Edward when he's a damn good lawyer.
Author's Response:
We're so glad to hear you loved the chapter. I wouldn't hold my breath that Ang is smart enough to back off. Thank you for your review!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Feb 2011 6:45 AM Title: Save your pennies
oh i can`t wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
:) We are working on the next chapter now. Thank you for your review.
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Feb 2011 12:41 AM Title: Edwardian Period
I love this Edward. And you're good at keeping the tension going, and making those descriptions of the times you want to speak to your man but can't becos of business or third parties or whatever. I have loads of that to deal with and it drives me mad!
Author's Response:
hahah...well i hope u enjoy the rest xoxoxo
Date: 01 Feb 2011 9:46 PM Title: Edwardian Period
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you xoxoxoox
Date: 01 Feb 2011 5:28 PM Title: Edwardian Period
I'm tingely with anticipation. Woo! Thanks for making Mike a nice guy, most of the fics I read always make his a douche. I think thats cool.
E/k
Author's Response:
Yah were really happy with our original idea...putting Ang and Eric as the mean ex's and have Mike and Jess be normal people who have important roles in the story xoxoxoxoxo
Date: 01 Feb 2011 5:01 PM Title: Edwardian Period
Aaaaawwwwww!!! Mike & Jess are too cute! :) And, YAY, he's got her ring & he's finally going to finish things with this divorce! Loved it!
Author's Response:
yayy...were sooo happy that u enjoyed it.....I may be posting the last part of this original whole chapter soon....ari is ready to write again. YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
Date: 01 Feb 2011 2:39 PM Title: Edwardian Period
ahhhh i am allmost thinking ange and eric deserve each other ;)
Author's Response:
hahahah ME tooooooo
Date: 01 Feb 2011 4:18 AM Title: Edwardian Period
I am so glad Edward stepped up and got the court order. I can't wait to see how Crazy takes that! I really like the Mike character and how he helped them out...they really didn't cover their basis, but I wouldn't have thought it either. Glad they are ok though! Love the story as always! Teasers are always APPRECIATED!
Author's Response:
:) xoxoxoxoxox hehehe crazy is gonna be well....crazy hahah... and Mike has a purpose in the story....I love how we threw him in there...Thank you for loving Spartan and Kitten xoxoxoxoox
"Where the fuck is he?"
All three of us looked towards the closed door.
"I know he's here! Edward???"
Kitten's face went ghostly white. I was fucking pissed, but I was caught off guard as Jessica took charge as Angela quickly approached the room.
"Bella, leave!" she demanded, pointing at the door on the opposite side of the room.
"EDWARD!" Angela bellowed.
I walked to the door.
"What the fuck are you doing Edward?!" Jessica pulled back on my arm.
"Ending this shit now!"
"No, no, no, no you can't Edward!" Bella pleaded as us three stood together.
"You can't be here!" someone said in the hall.
"Are you going to stop me bitch?" We heard someone yelling for security.
"Bella get out of here, Edward and I will deal with her."
"I can't leave you guys," she said to us both.
"Bella, she can't find you two together. Do you hear her?" Jessica whispered as Angela argued with a staff member right outside the door.
"Go Kitten." I pointed for her to go.
Her eyes filled with tears before she listened, she quickly exited through the second doorway.
"Get on the fucking bed," Jessica said to me as Kitten closed the door.
I nodded at her, knowing exactly what she was thinking. I threw my shirt off and lay down as I heard Jessica open the door
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2011 2:19 AM Title: Edwardian Period
Even without the teaser; I'd leave you some love :)
Oh... the suspense is killing me and you're gonna draaaaag it out, aren't you??? ROFL... I know how you are!
I fall more and move in love with your story with each chapter! Bravo my dear!!! Bravo!!!
~xoxoxox~
P.S. Neither Mike or Jessica are my favorite characters (mostly because everyone writes them to be horrible) but I'm really enjoying the kind nature they both have... give them a happy ending too... huh?!
Author's Response:
meeee?????? looks around..........u talking to me??? lol....ugghhhh yah im gonna drag it out a bit since this is the last part of the chapter that ari has read. I did start on the next chapter but i hope to have ari's input on it before i post it but we will c. xoxoxoxoxo and yes im happy with our original decision to go with Ang and Eric as their spouses and bring in the usual Main love intereest as smaller roles....important but smaller xoxoxxo
"Where the fuck is he?"
All three of us looked towards the closed door.
"I know he's here! Edward???"
Kitten's face went ghostly white. I was fucking pissed, but I was caught off guard as Jessica took charge as Angela quickly approached the room.
"Bella, leave!" she demanded, pointing at the door on the opposite side of the room.
"EDWARD!" Angela bellowed.
I walked to the door.
"What the fuck are you doing Edward?!" Jessica pulled back on my arm.
"Ending this shit now!"
"No, no, no, no you can't Edward!" Bella pleaded as us three stood together.
"You can't be here!" someone said in the hall.
"Are you going to stop me bitch?" We heard someone yelling for security.
"Bella get out of here, Edward and I will deal with her."
"I can't leave you guys," she said to us both.
"Bella, she can't find you two together. Do you hear her?" Jessica whispered as Angela argued with a staff member right outside the door.
"Go Kitten." I pointed for her to go.
Her eyes filled with tears before she listened, she quickly exited through the second doorway.
"Get on the fucking bed," Jessica said to me as Kitten closed the door.
I nodded at her, knowing exactly what she was thinking. I threw my shirt off and lay down as I heard Jessica open the door
Date: 01 Feb 2011 1:31 AM Title: Time To Think
Ang is messing things up for B & E!! I trust you to give them a HEA, though!!
I am glad that that B & E finally know who each other is.
I wonder if there will be anymore parties since they now know each other in real life!
Date: 01 Feb 2011 1:00 AM Title: Edwardian Period
Why, for the love of all that is Holy, didn't Bella DESTROY that damn tape?!? Well, okay, I'd totally want to watch it too...cause that sh*t was hawt...but is it worth keeping it around so that Ang or Eric gets ahold of it? I am really kinda stressed about this. Sooo glad Rose was with Edward to buy the ring...it is beautiful.Ü I really hope that Bella and Edward don't start to hide things (all in the name of "not wanting to stress the other out more") because that is no way to start their lives together. They need to communicate...silly kids.
BTW...love this story ;)
Author's Response:
dont worry...these chapters were supposed to be one soo we had a lot going on and didnt mean to have u guys worry for so long...xxoxo and the tape...at the moment that is the safest place until she can tell edward
Date: 01 Feb 2011 12:28 AM Title: Edwardian Period
ur the bestest DLIR! thank u for lovin us! Mama Ari...we miss u and will be here when ur ready! mwah mwah xoxo
as always the chapter is fuckin awesome ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you xoxoxoxoxoxo and yes we miss u ari........
Date: 31 Jan 2011 11:44 PM Title: Edwardian Period
Another great chapter as usual. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Thank u for ur support and positive review xoxoxoxo
Date: 31 Jan 2011 9:32 PM Title: Laurent
In the prior chapter, I thought Edward passed Laurent in the hall on the way to the room. In this one, Edward appeared in the room and pulled L off of B. Maybe the next chapter will help me understand.
SO SAD! I of course hate to see Edward suffer! Please treat him well!
I had to go back and check these lines from Ch. 1. I was thinking she said it was a 4 hour drive, and I was thinking, there is NO WAY! ----- I hate my country style house that's in the middle of fucking nowhere. I work in downtown Seattle for god's sake. Why would I want to live in Timbuktu? Well that's how I feel every morning and night when I make the hour drive back and forth to work. If I had my way, I would be living in the core of downtown Seattle, maybe in a penthouse in the tallest high-rise.
Author's Response:
yah he past laurent in hall and got hit in the head...while edward was out laurent went to bella....hope it made sense...xoxoxoxo and yah she doesnt live that far but for someone like me that thinks 10 min drive is far i call everything timbukto hahahahha
Date: 31 Jan 2011 8:51 PM Title: Mirror's Reflection
Uh, oh. I am afraid something bad has gone down between Bella and Laurent. BUt I think the next chapter has his name as the title, so I should find out!
You have Angela way OOC in this story! Good job!
I have never heard of one of these kinds of parties!
Author's Response:
yah i had a client tell me about this type of party....so i told ari the story and we went from there
Date: 31 Jan 2011 8:31 PM Title: Edwardian Period
:)
Author's Response:
:) :)
Date: 31 Jan 2011 7:32 PM Title: Edwardian Period
Wow knew Mike could come in handy.
Author's Response:
Yes he has....xoxoxoxoxo
Date: 31 Jan 2011 7:26 PM Title: Edwardian Period
Bella didn't tell Edward, she didn't want to worry him, as if that could be possible. He found out soon enough, Rose is keeping track of the case as much as Emmett and Edward are. They are preparing to take out the biggest guns against him and Angela. Speaking about Angela, has she received the notice? Perhaps that's what made her go to Mike for assistance. Good thing Mike wasn't up to it. He is risking his job, true, but he knows it's for the better. He is a good guy and Bella will be paying close attention from now on. Not as close as Jessica, but still.
So Edward has the ring!!! It's on its way. I wonder how will it go? Emmett's rose idea wasn't bad at all, but I think Spartan will find something much, much better.
Author's Response:
hahahah awesome review....I love this story and how were bringing everyone together xoxoxoxoxo heres a teaser
"Where the fuck is he?"
All three of us looked towards the closed door.
"I know he's here! Edward???"
Kitten's face went ghostly white. I was fucking pissed, but I was caught off guard as Jessica took charge as Angela quickly approached the room.
"Bella, leave!" she demanded, pointing at the door on the opposite side of the room.
"EDWARD!" Angela bellowed.
I walked to the door.
"What the fuck are you doing Edward?!" Jessica pulled back on my arm.
"Ending this shit now!"
"No, no, no, no you can't Edward!" Bella pleaded as us three stood together.
"You can't be here!" someone said in the hall.
"Are you going to stop me bitch?" We heard someone yelling for security.
"Bella get out of here, Edward and I will deal with her."
"I can't leave you guys," she said to us both.
"Bella, she can't find you two together. Do you hear her?" Jessica whispered as Angela argued with a staff member right outside the door.
"Go Kitten." I pointed for her to go.
Her eyes filled with tears before she listened, she quickly exited through the second doorway.
"Get on the fucking bed," Jessica said to me as Kitten closed the door.
I nodded at her, knowing exactly what she was thinking. I threw my shirt off and lay down as I heard Jessica open the door
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 7:09 PM Title: Edwardian Period
go edward!!! I love the hardass E!!
Author's Response:
mmmmmm he is smexy when he mad
Date: 31 Jan 2011 6:34 PM Title: Edwardian Period
OME! Aren't Jessica and Mike adorable??? And I like your Mike........the way he looked out after Bella by giving her the tape? Sweet!
The ring! OME!!! Beautiful! I love that you have photos!! Rosalie and Emmett completely crack me up with their different styles of approachin things! Gotta love it!
Going to be interesting to see how Angela reacts to the new way of handling the divorce. She is going to be P-I-S-S-E-D. But, really, it has been more than enough time for Edward to get in line and get ticked off at her already. I know that he was trying to be nice but really, he has done all he should in that matter. It is time to move on.
So, Yorkie the Dorkie............can't help but wonder what is up with him.
All in all...........loved the chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Keye
Author's Response:
I love this mike and Jessica...I cant wait for the story to progress xoxoxoxo
heres a teaser
"Where the fuck is he?"
All three of us looked towards the closed door.
"I know he's here! Edward???"
Kitten's face went ghostly white. I was fucking pissed, but I was caught off guard as Jessica took charge as Angela quickly approached the room.
"Bella, leave!" she demanded, pointing at the door on the opposite side of the room.
"EDWARD!" Angela bellowed.
I walked to the door.
"What the fuck are you doing Edward?!" Jessica pulled back on my arm.
"Ending this shit now!"
"No, no, no, no you can't Edward!" Bella pleaded as us three stood together.
"You can't be here!" someone said in the hall.
"Are you going to stop me bitch?" We heard someone yelling for security.
"Bella get out of here, Edward and I will deal with her."
"I can't leave you guys," she said to us both.
"Bella, she can't find you two together. Do you hear her?" Jessica whispered as Angela argued with a staff member right outside the door.
"Go Kitten." I pointed for her to go.
Her eyes filled with tears before she listened, she quickly exited through the second doorway.
"Get on the fucking bed," Jessica said to me as Kitten closed the door.
I nodded at her, knowing exactly what she was thinking. I threw my shirt off and lay down as I heard Jessica open the door
Date: 31 Jan 2011 6:09 PM Title: Edwardian Period
The ring sounds wonderful. It seems as though they need to start communicating more than they are. Bella needs to tell him about Eric, Angela's visit to security and the tape she got from Mike.
I hope things work out okay.
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
thank you and yah they need to communicate.....xoxoxo
heres a teaser
"Where the fuck is he?"
All three of us looked towards the closed door.
"I know he's here! Edward???"
Kitten's face went ghostly white. I was fucking pissed, but I was caught off guard as Jessica took charge as Angela quickly approached the room.
"Bella, leave!" she demanded, pointing at the door on the opposite side of the room.
"EDWARD!" Angela bellowed.
I walked to the door.
"What the fuck are you doing Edward?!" Jessica pulled back on my arm.
"Ending this shit now!"
"No, no, no, no you can't Edward!" Bella pleaded as us three stood together.
"You can't be here!" someone said in the hall.
"Are you going to stop me bitch?" We heard someone yelling for security.
"Bella get out of here, Edward and I will deal with her."
"I can't leave you guys," she said to us both.
"Bella, she can't find you two together. Do you hear her?" Jessica whispered as Angela argued with a staff member right outside the door.
"Go Kitten." I pointed for her to go.
Her eyes filled with tears before she listened, she quickly exited through the second doorway.
"Get on the fucking bed," Jessica said to me as Kitten closed the door.
I nodded at her, knowing exactly what she was thinking. I threw my shirt off and lay down as I heard Jessica open the door
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 5:31 PM Title: Edwardian Period
Hi -
Another fantastic Chapter thanks so much! Yay!!!! He filed for default... so now he's pissed, it's about time. Ang and her wicked ways, sorry ho had been cheating on him from the beginning of this story and now that he wants a life she wants to be a Biotch. I don't think so.... And Eric what's up with that, Oh Oh!!! Just can't wait for the next part of this chapter.
Always so mysterious!!!d :-) As always much love to the both of you and looking forward to more!!! Hang in there and know that this story is truly loved.
Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Date: 31 Jan 2011 3:38 PM Title: Edwardian Period
Loved it. Cant wait for next update.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 2:45 PM Title: Edwardian Period
I so love. huney you make me squeal like a girl,lol oh yeah I am a girl so your good. I love Em, you know that, if Rose wouldnt come over and kick my ass I'd be shagging her hubby after I finish with Spartan, I love his sense of humor, for me thats hot. rose too she is the best so I ain't messin with her man cuz I know better. the ring really is specatacular. thats a lot of money...... and for Ang can she really get any sleazier, she's gross. and the hairy back massage, sweetie I respect you that much more cuz I'd have to think about Spartan doing that too. Miss Ari alot but Im so glad your still hanging with us. Come back Ari, come back.....
Date: 31 Jan 2011 2:01 PM Title: Edwardian Period
Great Chapter. I can't wait until the next update.
Date: 31 Jan 2011 1:36 PM Title: Edwardian Period
Wow, can't wait to see Angela's reaction to that junction!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 1:35 PM Title: Edwardian Period
great hurry back
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 1:00 PM Title: Edwardian Period
Loved it!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 10:48 AM Title: Edwardian Period
There would be know one better to take with you to buy a ring Rose is perfect and a great friend to both of them. Emmett is Emmett LOL. About time he stoped messing around with Ang and thank god Mike is a nice guy. Where is the little creep Eric???
Date: 31 Jan 2011 9:09 AM Title: Pom Pom's
I'm deeply sorry for your loss. I lost my 27 year old nephew a few months ago while working on here with my coauthor. Nothing will replace that person in your heart but I hope the love and prayers you received from your readers helped pull you through. My heart goes out to you too.
Date: 31 Jan 2011 8:32 AM Title: To Happiness
and............BOOM !!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
hahahahhahaha keep reading hahaha
Date: 31 Jan 2011 8:14 AM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
****************Hope like a motherfucker, this shit don't blow up. This could end bad...very bad.************** NOOOOOOOOOOOOO, you're gonna make 'ang' fall back in love with you. She's already on the edge (what is that about anyway?).....just like eric did with Bella. Total backfire in the works.........why are men so dam dense?????
Author's Response:
yah some men are dense lol xoxoxoxox
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 7:59 AM Title: Edwardian Period
Man stop breaking up the chapters, this is killing me.
Thanks you for the update.
Fiorella
Author's Response:
sorry.....but theres one more part... I had to since Ari is unavailable to write soooooooo xoxoxod bare with us xoxoxo
Date: 31 Jan 2011 7:44 AM Title: Fuck My Life
HA, the intercom stuff was priceless !!!
And stop scaring us....the dream.
Author's Response:
hahahah thanks for reviewing xoxoxo
Date: 31 Jan 2011 7:29 AM Title: Laurent
Holy shit, this chapter almost killed me. I was jumping and cursing and yelling and yanking on my shirt cuffs, holy crap my blood pressure is like a million, dam.
Author's Response:
Im sooooo glad we got all those reactions out of you xoxoxoxoxoxo yay
Date: 31 Jan 2011 7:13 AM Title: Mirror's Reflection
I don't want to offend you guys....I know it's fiction but I didn't like Edward in this chapter. Honestly, verbal abuse isn't any better than physical...sometimes, it's worse. So, I did love it when Mike and Aro made his skin crawl. And'parmesan crusted chicken' is the best thing at tgi's. Okay, Angela gave her share later, but still.
I had a feeling he shouldn't have left the room. What the *** is with Laurent??? I guess to get to Bella? I can't go read, its 215, ugh. Wow, this is a weird review.
Author's Response:
hahah u dont have to like everything we write.....but hope u like the rest hun xoxoxoxo
Date: 31 Jan 2011 6:44 AM Title: Spartan Lover
This is a riot and Eric is such a wuss. I loved when Edward got up in his face. I am hoping the next one is epov though to explain 'the sniffing' and that he's probably crabby now because her husband cockblocked him, haha. Oops, can you curse in reviews? Oh well, just did. God, I need to go to bed, it's almost 2.
Author's Response:
hahah the sniffing will be explained xoxoxoxoox
Date: 31 Jan 2011 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh man, what happened on the phone?!
THAT was hysterical again. At the end of the last chapter, I forgot to beg and plead for epov this time, but oh, you're good...and kind. That was awesome.
Edward is Angela's husband....I didn't even think of that !!!!!!!!
Loving this story.
Author's Response:
sooo happy u started and are enjoying it xoxoxoxo
Date: 31 Jan 2011 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG, THAT was frigging hysterical....except the ch and renee part.
Author's Response:
Do u want me to send u my friggen awesome brochure.....hahahah....keep reading...be warned you shall laugh a few more times....
Date: 31 Jan 2011 5:23 AM Title: Edwardian Period
Even though Mike gave her the tape, I'm still worried about copies and worried that he can be bought. With a "lot" of money even normally decent people can cave. What if a different guy is on duty in Mike's place? And give is away or gave it away already. What if it is from another visit they forgot about and still shows on tape....and where the hll is Eric. Weren't Eric and Angela together at the Swing party? I thought Angela liked him. Why don't they get together and just drop it, leave our love birds alone. I think they will or have gotten together but will be bitter and try to do E/B harm just for the spite of it.
Author's Response:
Well I guess there could be other people working at the desk....great observation...And yah where the HELL is Eric Ari??? ari??? ohh shit......thats where is he...the bugger...xoxo heheh love ur review....xoxo hope u like the rest
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 4:59 AM Title: Edwardian Period
Thank goodness Edward is taking control & getting rid of the troll. If Angela thinks Edward is bluffing & doesn't respond....nada baby!
Now, let's deal with the dork once and for all as well so our couple can finally have the life they deserve!
Wonderful job!
Author's Response:
Thank you soo much....Our Edward is HOT HOT HOT when he all business and shit......le sigh............fans self...wow thats was a hot vision..hahhaah we have so much more in store for this story...hope you like where we take them xoxoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 4:55 AM Title: Edwardian Period
I love Emm's don'ts. hehehe I'm so glad that Rose took Edward shopping. hehehe And I love a Mike with actual integrity. :) Can't wait for more. :)
Author's Response:
Yah....we wanted to change around the characters in the story...and Mike had to have a place since Eric stole his Lead role...hahah.....xoxoxoxo Were sooo happy ur enjoying the story
Date: 31 Jan 2011 4:55 AM Title: Edwardian Period
wow keeps gettin better thanks :)
Author's Response:
Well were glad your still think that.... we love writing these two xoxoxo
Date: 31 Jan 2011 4:30 AM Title: Edwardian Period
well i hope they both get their divorces and figure out where duchebag is !
Author's Response:
I hope that happens too....but we do have a few things up our sleeves first xoxoxo
Date: 31 Jan 2011 4:24 AM Title: Edwardian Period
Wow, that was incredible! I really love the ring :) I cannot wait to see what the videotape is and how Angela responds to the order.
Author's Response:
I really loved the ring too when Ari showed it too me...and the fact it had Edward's name sold it....I cant wait till Ang gets it too....
Date: 31 Jan 2011 4:10 AM Title: Edwardian Period
wow, at first i thought miek was going to blackmail her. Seems he is a nnice guy here. Glad Edward got his balls back and is taking Angela down, now where is the bus to run over Eric, love ya
Author's Response:
hahahah scared ya for a second for second with the security guard....xooxxo yes ....Edward is stepping up to the plate...and Ang is the ball ...see ya.....xxoxooxo
Date: 30 Jan 2011 6:31 PM Title: Sinners Part 2
:)
Author's Response:
:) back xoxoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 11:28 AM Title: Sinners Part 2
Excellent!
Author's Response:
Why thank you xoxo
Date: 30 Jan 2011 4:17 AM Title: Sinners Part 2
can't wait formore
Author's Response:
Shouldnt be to much longer...xoxoxoxoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 8:47 AM Title: Sinners Part 2
Oooooh! You're soooO mean!
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE it! OMG... this is freakin' awesome. I hate cliffies but this one is great. Is it Eric? Is he going to totally go all postal? God, it would be spectacular if he could go postal, try to take out Bella but somehow get Angie instead and then the cops get him; he gets the death penality and then... bam! 2 birds with one stone!
Niiiiiiiiice... LOL
Can't wait for the next chapter! Hurry! Hurry! Hurry!
~xoxoxoxox~
Author's Response:
Omfg we should sooo make him go postal and kill ang in one shot....hahah that shit is good....but unfortunately ....we have other plans for them to go down....muahahha.....sorry bout the cliffy but heres a teaser for the next chapter
"Bella?"
I stopped walking and turned to look at who was calling me. "What's he want?" Jessica whispered to me.
"I don't know." I walked towards the security desk. I smiled at the guy I have said hi to on more than one occasion.
He smiled at Jessica and lifted his hand to her. "Hi, I'm Mike," he introduced himself.
Mike, that's his name.
Jessica giggled as she shook his hand. I knew that giggle. She was crushing on Mike. "Hi, I'm Jessica."
I stood beside her, deciding to stay quiet until they were done their introductions. "So you wanted to talk to me Mike?" I placed the bags I was carrying down on the desk top as did Jess.
His facial expression turned serious, his smile wiped away as he stood up from his chair and leaned closer to Jessica and I. "Um, well," he looked at Jessica.
"Whatever you have to say you can say in front of Jess," I clarified, feeling my heart race. He was starting to freak me out.
He looked at me now, nodding his head. "I don't know you that well, but I'd like to think were kinda friends since we say hello every day. I mean, you have always been nice to me so I only find it right for me to tell you this."
I furrowed my brows as he looked over my shoulder, and then his, clearly making sure no one was around.
"An Angela Masen came to me today."
My heart dropped to my stomach. I stood still lungs deflated, no attempt to fill them.
"What the ** did she want?" Jessica grabbed my hand as I said nothing. I barely functioned, let alone, comprehended what he was telling us.
"She actually tried to come on to me." He laughed a little which quick started my heart to life. I need to breathe to live. "Well after that failed attempt I noticed her staring at the monitors." He turned and pointed to the six screens that videoed various parts of the building. "She asked me if I had access to all the videos that were recorded and if we actually keep them. I had no idea why she was asking until she mentioned her husband."
I gasped, placing my hand over my mouth. "She wanted to know if I personally could help her. Maybe if I have seen Mr. Masen with any type of woman."
I shook my head not wanting to hear this.
"She offered me a lot of money. I mean A Lot." He started fidgeting with some papers. My eyes came down to see a small video cassette sitting under the papers he was purposely moving. He folded the paper, slipping the tape in the middle, placed it on the desk, sliding it towards me. "No one else has seen it and I plan on keeping it that way."
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 8:13 AM Title: Thank you Part 2
Oh praise be to God on the highest! Ok, that feels a little wrong to be praising God for Twilight porn... but anyway... you get the jist of it, I'm sure!
Thanks for the awesome lemonade. But it's a little creepy that both Edward and Bella are getting mysterious calls... is it Laurent? Eric? Ben? Someone Angie has hired to scare Edward back into her arms (not likely)... inquiring minds demand to know!!!
~xoxoxoxo~
Author's Response:
hahaha i love that your praying hahaha....Thats the best....Were soo happy ur enjoying it..I wonder who is making the calls myself...
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 7:29 AM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
wow... Angie just won't let it die will she. I mean hell she's been bangin' someone else but is begging Edward and blaming him?! WTF??? I hope she gets everything that's coming to her. She's a messed up, twisted little 'b' and ... ugh!
Die, Angie... DIE!!!
ROFL
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 7:10 AM Title: Use Somebody
Dum, da, dum, dum! Oh poooooor Angie... got caught fucking aorund...??? Hmmmm.... this should be interesting!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 6:16 AM Title: Pom Pom's
oh yeah... come on... DO IT already... I'm dyin here! ROFLMAO. I'm just enjoying the hell outta this story! Bravo my dear! BRAV-O!!!!! I am pimping it out to everyone that'll listen to me :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 5:54 AM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
ugh! soooO freakin' frustrating. can't Ang just have a little accident or something? Pleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaase?!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 4:02 AM Title: I fucking love swings
cool...psycho Eric... i always thought that little geek was unstable!!!
Author's Response:
Okay soooo I just saw all your reviews,,,,,,,,,,first THANK YOU for taking time to read it.....Second I hope our still enjoying it. Yes the laurent chapter was scary....and yes Bella should fight for what she wants...We cant wait for u to catch up and and enjoy our Spartan and Kitten more.....xoxoxooxox DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2011 2:10 AM Title: To Happiness
god bella stop whining and stand up for yourself and take what you want!!! dammit!!!
Date: 28 Jan 2011 2:58 PM Title: Sinners Part 2
I loved the tidbit about the Dopey engagement ring and Emmett's antics in the last jewlery store was hysterical. I'm really curious to see if Edward and Rosalie were more successfull in finding a ring for Bella.
Hearing about Edward's massage made me want to get one too. It sounded so relaxing.
I'm concerned that if Eric truly has an alibi for the night at Bella's house, could it be Laurent? Could Laurent be the person calling Edward and Bella? Does Bella really need to be concerned w/ Eric? What about Angela? I don't trust her at all and think Edward will have to do whatever he can to end his marriage with her.
Author's Response:
The beginning of next chap is Ro and Edward shopping soo hope u enjoy that...obviously we will tell u who is doing all the calls and stuff but not yet.... :) gotta get some other stuff out there first xoxoxoxox
Date: 28 Jan 2011 10:20 AM Title: Sinners Part 2
YOU OUR MEN ALMOST ALWAYS SAY THEY WONT LET ANYTHING HAPPEN TO US, BUT YOU KNOW THEY CAN'T BE WITH US ALL OF THE TIME AND IF SOMEONE WANTS TO GET TO US BAD ENOUGH THEY WILL. I HARDLY EVER GO OUT ANY MORE ON THE FIRST OF THE MONTH I HAVE TO GO GET FOOD AT THE MARKET BUT THAT IS AS FAST AS I CAN GO THERE AND BACK. I HAVEN'T BOUGHT NEW SHOSE OR CLOTHES IN LIKE 2 YEARS I JUST DON'T GO OUT MUCH ANYMORE IT'S NOT SAFE. SO I CAN SEE WHY BELLA MIGHT NOT WANT TO GO OUT BECAUSE SHE IS SCARD.
Author's Response:
Omg I hope ur okay??? Im sorry u actually feel the same fear as Bella.....Please be safe....xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2011 5:47 AM Title: Time To Think
oh why! oh why! does there always have to be angst?! He's not happy in his marriage... she's not happy in hers... but yet they always have to 'do the right thing..." blah. blah. blah...
but with that said, AWESOME story!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you..xoxoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2011 5:40 AM Title: Fuck My Life
O.M.G. I have a feeling things are going to get really nasty from here on out and I don't mean the lemony-fresh kind of nasty, either...
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2011 5:16 AM Title: Mirror's Reflection
Ang is a bitch. That makes me kind of sad but mostly because I'm used to her being written as such a sweetheart. I also hate that she's so mean to Edward ... Oh Edward... no prenup? What was he AND his Mommy thinking??? I hope he finds out some serious shit on Angie so he can't dump her ass and move onto bigger and better things... mainly Bella!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2011 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh my god. i just melted ... help!
Date: 26 Jan 2011 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
i would totally love a teaser...mwah <3
Author's Response:
hahahah MWAH MWAH here u go teaser for 19
"Bella?"
I stopped walking and turned to look at who was calling me. "What's he want?" Jessica whispered to me.
"I don't know." I walked towards the security desk. I smiled at the guy I have said hi to on more than one occasion.
He smiled at Jessica and lifted his hand to her. "Hi, I'm Mike," he introduced himself.
Mike, that's his name.
Jessica giggled as she shook his hand. I knew that giggle. She was crushing on Mike. "Hi, I'm Jessica."
I stood beside her, deciding to stay quiet until they were done their introductions. "So you wanted to talk to me Mike?" I placed the bags I was carrying down on the desk top as did Jess.
His facial expression turned serious, his smile wiped away as he stood up from his chair and leaned closer to Jessica and I. "Um, well," he looked at Jessica.
"Whatever you have to say you can say in front of Jess," I clarified, feeling my heart race. He was starting to freak me out.
He looked at me now, nodding his head. "I don't know you that well, but I'd like to think were kinda friends since we say hello every day. I mean, you have always been nice to me so I only find it right for me to tell you this."
I furrowed my brows as he looked over my shoulder, and then his, clearly making sure no one was around.
"An Angela Masen came to me today."
My heart dropped to my stomach. I stood still lungs deflated, no attempt to fill them.
"What the ** did she want?" Jessica grabbed my hand as I said nothing. I barely functioned, let alone, comprehended what he was telling us.
"She actually tried to come on to me." He laughed a little which quick started my heart to life. I need to breathe to live. "Well after that failed attempt I noticed her staring at the monitors." He turned and pointed to the six screens that videoed various parts of the building. "She asked me if I had access to all the videos that were recorded and if we actually keep them. I had no idea why she was asking until she mentioned her husband."
I gasped, placing my hand over my mouth. "She wanted to know if I personally could help her. Maybe if I have seen Mr. Masen with any type of woman."
I shook my head not wanting to hear this.
"She offered me a lot of money. I mean A Lot." He started fidgeting with some papers. My eyes came down to see a small video cassette sitting under the papers he was purposely moving. He folded the paper, slipping the tape in the middle, placed it on the desk, sliding it towards me. "No one else has seen it and I plan on keeping it that way."
Date: 25 Jan 2011 9:16 PM Title: Sinners Part 2
The spa was great, as it should be. A wonderful gift Bella gave Edward and both got to enjoy. Then the rest of the evening was, as good as the spa.
Emmett had chosen a Dopey ring!!!! That is just priceless!!! Thankfully he didn't give that to Rose, who knows she might have considered dumping him if he did ;) So yes, Em isn't the best choice when it comes to choosing rings. Rose on the other end, will be I am sure, just the person needed for such a task.
As for them running into Angela, it will happen, there's no way to avoid it, even more with how determined she is. Lets hope Rose is right.
Eric, oh Eric, where could he be? Hopefully he would be far from Bella, but we know that probably isn't the case. Poor Bella, she is so scared, and with enough reason. We'll have to see what happens.
Author's Response:
hahah i loved ur review.. I love to see how un depth our readers get...ideas they think are happening...it really is different from the writing perspective. Can wait for the next one..xoxoxo
Date: 25 Jan 2011 7:07 PM Title: Sinners Part 2
hmmm that could be a new team name the spartikins or the kittyans? just a thought....awesome chappy nice sweet spa scene... wanna see the rose/edward ring shopping trip.
Author's Response:
rose will be shopping in the next one...so u wont have to wait long xoxoxoxo