Date: 10 Jan 2011 5:31 AM Title: Thank you Part 2
Oh God the lemons were fabulous. I think the caller is scarry. That sounds dangerous. I am sure its both Angela and Eric. But the thing that bothers me is that you DO NOT need a signature for Divorce. All you have to do is serve them so that is not very realistic and it bugs me when people write that because that is not how it is really. I know its fiction but it should be as close to real as possible dont you think???? Anyway just a suggestion. I hope you can change that. Plus with Edward being a lawyer he should know this in his sleep.
Author's Response:
XOXOO thanks so much for reviewing...and yes its hard to keep things as close to RL as possible. But....we do know he doesnt need her signature...But he was hoping to settle things out of a court. IF she signed things could gave be setled easier. But now that she hasnt....Ari will be explaining it in the next chapter...He will proceed and it will go to court for the judge to grant him the divorce..,,Thank you sooooooooooo much for reading....and glad u enjoyed the lemons....we have a few chapters of none Ang and ERIC bad stuff sooo We hope u enjoy....
Ari and DLIR...xoxoxoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2011 5:11 AM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
loved it
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2011 5:09 AM Title: Thank you Part 2
I loved it That was so freaking hot hOOr down LMAO .Ang will never get it dumbass .I think it's Eric how is stalking Bella but I am not sure he is stalking Edward . Love you ladies xoxo
Author's Response:
*Looks around yelling* (Everyone stand back h00r d0wn! Don't worry I went to the fifth grade and got me my EKG! I know how to do CCR! Never fear psychopath Ari is here!) :)
Oh we love you sooooo much sweetie! Yes I know I put EKG. Yes I know it's CPR not CCR I was bein a dumb ass. Ya know like also BB! :)
Thank you sweetie for your review! We love our FB h00r!
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Date: 10 Jan 2011 5:09 AM Title: Thank you Part 2
WOW! I am stunned! If this Edward and Bella got that from waiting 15 days I can not IMAGINE that stupid blackout scene in BD (I mean had it been real...lol). I guess waiting till marriage maybe VERY underated! Unfortunately the married me is to late to try that! HAHA!
AWESOME ladies, on a noncitrus note I am feeling angsty about these phone calls and Ang...whew she is on the way to crazytown. They are going to need to conserve some energy for what I think is about to go down. It has to b Eric calling both with the pervy calls.
I trust you ladies...your story owns me...keep them coming!
Author's Response:
LOL Not only is Ang goin to crazy town, she lives there. But not only does she live there. She's also the Mayor. Ummm I wonder who it could be callin them? *Looks at DLIR. Dlir shrugs her shoulders.* Guess we'll all have to find out together! :)
Thank you for your awesome review! We are workin on the next chapter now!
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[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2011 5:09 AM Title: Thank you Part 2
Yes im with bella. thank you thank you hehehe hot chapter.
Author's Response:
LOL No thank you! :) We'ew glad you thought it was hot. We did too.
Thank you sooo much for your review BB. See ya soon with the next update. We are working on it now.
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Date: 10 Jan 2011 4:50 AM Title: Thank you Part 2
I absolutely loved this chapter. I'm really curious to know who is making the phone calls. Is it Eric? Is it Laurant? Could it be Ben? Too many possibilities to know for sure, but I can't wait to find out.
Author's Response:
Don't forget crazt ass Ang LOL Than again maybe it's none of them! Umm I wonder who it might be? :)
Thank you so much for your review! We are working on the next chapter now!!!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 10 Jan 2011 4:45 AM Title: Thank you Part 2
Thanx for the chuckle at the end. That was great. Now to business. I so HATE Angela, is she mental or what? I must say the way Edward yelled at the stalker on the phone was HOTT! I am worried for the two of them though. This is getting serious. By the way will we ever get to see what Eric is or has been up to. That would be interesting. Thanx for the fast update.. As Rob would say "Cheers mate". See you soon
E/k
Author's Response:
Yes! Ang is very mental! Oh you will hear something about Eric in the next chapter!
Thank you soooo much for your review! We love hearing from everyone!
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[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2011 4:04 AM Title: Thank you Part 2
That was great. I am so glad that they were able to be together for Christmas.
Is Laurent harrassing Bella? (He is the only one I know who has an accent)
Who is harrassing Edward? (no mention of accent in voice on Edward's end)
What is the status of Bella's marriage? I know that she asked for a divorce, and he is in jail.
Angela needs to realize that Edward would give up every penny he has to leave her. Not leave her for Bella, but leave her period! She is one psycho!
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
We are also glad they got to be together for Christmas!
Is it Laurent??? I would tell ya but then DLIR would kill me. So sorry I can't :( But I do know who has been calling Edward! But there again I can't tell guess why??? Yep you guessed it DLIR will kill me! She's mean like that LOL JK
Thank you for your awesome review!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 10 Jan 2011 3:56 AM Title: Thank you Part 2
The video was awesome! Really enjoyed watching that! I am glad that you clarified the name of it because I could not find it prior to reading this update. And this update? It was hawt!!!! Loved it! The reunion was oh so sweet! I can't really blame Ang for not wanting to let Edward go. Hell I wouldn't want to let him go either. So curious as to who is making the calls to both Spartan and Kitten. Are they the same person? And WTH are they calling them for? Geez?? Interesting that we have not heard much from Eric too. Wonder what he is up to??
The quilt was super sweet. I like that better than a diamond necklace any day. Don't get me wrong. Diamonds are nice but a thoughtful gift like that? Priceless! Good thinking on Edward's part letting Em know that they were going to be late. But wouldn't they expect that already? Especially since the kids have not seen each other in what? 15 days? So, really, is it all that much of a surprise that they would be late? Hell, I am surprised that they are leaving the condo at all! LOL!!! I would be hard pressed to do so!!!!
Great update. Totally enjoyed reading it. Loved the song choice and the video rocked as well!!!
Keye
Author's Response:
Wow thanks for the awesome review! God that's just...awesome!
We loved writing this chapter. Nope I wouldn't let Edward go either! Huuuh We are wondering also who is making the calls :)
We are working away on the next chapter right now!
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[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2011 3:51 AM Title: Thank you Part 2
That was so awesome- you never disappoint. MY panties just melted, and my heart swooned. now thats a christmas present. I dont think they should come out til New Years. I have to admit that voice calling them is freaky. LMAO to Fred my bitchy bro got a shot out, hahahhaha MY real life Im happy and good natured but if you cross me I do admit I bite. how funny my inner-outer bad girl got to play too, omg I fell out of chair and my family looked at me crazy(its not the first time so the moment has passed.) I'm sending liquor your way, totally deserved I may say.
Author's Response:
Alright we need some liquor my dear! :) I'm with you they shouldn't come out till New Years! But *sighs* the come out waaaaay before :( Love your shout out babes! You rock :) We are working on the next chap right now!
Thanks for your awesome review BB!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 10 Jan 2011 3:44 AM Title: Thank you Part 2
you guyz are the best love this story can't wait to read more from you both thanks :)Til next time
Author's Response:
Keeping fingers crossed next time wont be long! We are busy working away now! Awe we're both blushing! Thank you so much you have no idea how good that makes us feel!
Thank you sweetie for your review!
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Date: 10 Jan 2011 3:43 AM Title: Thank you Part 2
Oh yea loved it !!!! a chapter of lemons,, you girls rock. Loved the IHOP joke. okso are Bella's calls and Edward calls connected hmmm? Or is Eric calling Bella, and is Ang really using a voice changer, i got one of those (well my kid does) anyway. Or di d Ang set Ben up to call. And Ang, really we need to get her out of the picture. Maybe on the way to her parents she coudl be in a tragic car accident...... Gotta help Spartan get rid of her.
Author's Response:
LOL oh my God poor stupid Ang LOL :)
Not sure if they are connected or not. Can we borrow your voice change thingy? We wanna call Eric and Ang and tell them where to go :) Thank you for your awesome review sweetie. We are working on the next chap now!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 10 Jan 2011 3:42 AM Title: Thank you Part 2
that was HOTTT! i want a spartan too...can i borrow yours?? haha
Author's Response:
Sure you can borrow him for a night :) We are so glad you liked it! We are busy working on the next chap!
Thanks for your review BB!
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Date: 10 Jan 2011 3:32 AM Title: Thank you Part 2
well that was hot! cant wait to see whos stalking her! keep the updates comming
Author's Response:
*Gives DLIR high five* We are glad you liked it sweetie! Stalker??? Huh who do you think it is? We aew working on the next chapter right now!
Thanks for your review BB!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 10 Jan 2011 3:25 AM Title: Thank you Part 2
OH My goodness - I totally need a shower now!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL that's how we were writing it LOL!
Thank you for your review!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 10 Jan 2011 3:18 AM Title: Thank you Part 2
Wow, that was amazing! I really loved it so much! I wonder who the mysterious phone calls are coming from? I am so happy for lemony times ;) Cannot wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Huh we are wondering the same thing? Who could it be DLIR? *DLIR smacks Ari upside the head...You already know!* Oh yeah I do! Duh I forgot! Never fear we are working on the next chapter as we speek! Yaaaay we can't wait to get it posted!
Thank you so much for you review!
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Date: 10 Jan 2011 2:40 AM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
Trouble is can you every really trust someone that's had an affair?
Author's Response:
Thats a good question.....RL........I would have a problem...but I do have clients that HAVE been cheated and have worked on their marriage successfully.....as for Spartan and Kitten....I think they both know they were meant for one another
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2011 2:04 AM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
I had to stop reading during the middle of the chapter .... I am laughing so hard ...I am crying.....Norman f Bates!!!! I am can not catch my breath!!! You guys are good!!! Loving this!!!!!
Thanks
Gaylia
Author's Response:
xoxoxo well we just posted again....so have fun catching up......maybe u should get an inhaler.....just incase LOL
Date: 09 Jan 2011 11:11 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
hmm... i think Ang is really on the edge...
Bella is a coward.
Author's Response:
hahahah yah I guess Bella could have slapped her back...but only in good time
Date: 09 Jan 2011 7:39 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
I really liked this chapter. now let's see Angie grow up and sign papers giving her a reasonable settlement cause she needs to show some class and be a woman not a shrew
Author's Response:
unfortunately.......she's a shrew................xoxoxo hope u like part 2....which is coming
Date: 09 Jan 2011 7:11 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
Well I just loved the chapter. So much drama!! Angie is cracking me up. I mean, she doesn't really want Edward but she doesn't want anyone else to have him either. And the sad thing about it all is that Edward and Bella's "true" love suffers.
Can't wait to read what happens next.
Keye
Author's Response:
Well Im just about to work on part 2.....and then Im posting
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2011 6:43 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
Phew... that was a close one! Angela is one krazi bitch! I can´t believe she slapped Bella. I know it was hard for Edward not to punch her! Emmett is so damn funny, he couldn´t remember which of his feet were hurt. Lol! I was immediately nervous when Angela said she was going up and Edward hadn´t found the note. I enjoyed meet Rosalie too, I can´t wait to read the second half of the chapter. Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
she a crazy bitch...hahahah Im just going to work on part 2 and then It up xoxoxo
Date: 09 Jan 2011 5:27 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
Thanks for the update. Looking forward to part 2!
Laurent's definitely involved with either Eric or Ang or all 3 of them, those 2 are pretty close to bat sh*t crazy as you can get. Does Angela have no self respect? I get she says she loves him but like he said why? He's been a complete jerk to her.
Author's Response:
Part 2 coming up xoxoxoxoox
Date: 09 Jan 2011 4:27 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
OMG! I just know I'm right now. I am more sure than ever that Eric and Laurent and Angela are working together. My heart is racing and my hands are sweating.. This fic is making it hard to wait for updates. NEED MORE NOW.. lol lol want to watch the video on youtube but can't find it please give me the name of the video. Loving both of you.
E/k
Author's Response:
welll deary Im working on part 2 as we speak xoxoxoxoo
Date: 09 Jan 2011 4:04 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
I love it. So happy Edward finally took control and left that witch/bitch. BTW the picture of Angela dressed as the wicked witch of the west on the banner cracked me up.....so damn funny. Pleassssse update soon.
Author's Response:
hahaha I loved the pic....i had to....hahahahh part 2 is gonna be up tonight xoxxoxooxox
Date: 09 Jan 2011 3:53 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
Great chapter. Love getting both POV. Please update part 2 soon.
Author's Response:
we actually r enjoying writing both POV's......part 2 is up tonight.......
Date: 09 Jan 2011 3:44 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
You girls rock my socks! I love this story - the photos with Ang were perfect! Actually all the photos *clears throat* especially the banner are incredible! Not as good as the words though! Keep it up!
Author's Response:
xoxoxoox thank you we love writing and making the pics to go with the chapters............part 2 is up tonight xoxoxoox
Date: 09 Jan 2011 2:38 PM Title: Use Somebody
Damn, Damn, Damn!!!!! So much drama and the drama is getting more intensified!! LOVE IT!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2011 1:04 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
Loved it! Ang is a wack job!
Author's Response:
Yes she is hahahahah hope u enjoy part 2
Date: 09 Jan 2011 7:40 AM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
I SO GLAD BELLA GOT AWAY AND ANG. DIDN'T FIND HER ALSO I THINK TI WAY GOOD EDWARD WENT TO ANG. HOME AND TALKED TO HER AND LET HER KNOE IT WAS NO USE THERE WAS NOTHING FOR THEM TOGETHER. BUT KNOW THIS I AM COUNTING THE DAYS FOR EDWARD AND BELLA TO BE ABLE TO HAVE SOME ALONE TIME AGAIN, HAPPY TIMES.
Author's Response:
WElll my dear....you wont have to count for long.......here...start counting the minutes instead xoxooxxoo
Date: 09 Jan 2011 4:57 AM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
she really is insane! great chapter
Author's Response:
xoxoxo yup she is...hahahh We hope u enjoy part 2 xoxoxoxo
Date: 09 Jan 2011 4:34 AM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
o wow , what a biotch Ang is, glad Edward coudl put her in her place. Good thing bella woke up when she did, and love Em and his crippled foot drag LOL.
Author's Response:
hahahah I loved the Emmett part two....hahah wrong foot....hahah.....hope you enjoy part 2
Date: 09 Jan 2011 4:22 AM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
They have had so many close calls, it's amazing they have evaded all of them. Bella is right, yes, it's sad to know they have to put some distance between them but it's for the best on the long run. Things need to settle and calm down, especially Angela. That won't be too easy, but we can dream and hope. She is willing to put on a huge fight. I'm not really sure why but she is going to it seems. It won't do her much good since Edward is determined.
Bella has found a new friend in the midst of all of this. I'm talking about Rosalie. She was willing to help, even before meeting Bella. She was there, has invited her to stay at her place and even found someway to distract Bella right from the start. I hope we get to see more of Rosalie in the next chapters. As for Emmett, we know he already liked Bella, so I was counting him as a friend before.
Did Edward really see Eric at the hotel? And with Laurent? Or was it his imagination going wild? And if it was them... oh!!!!!! it is a surprise!!!!!
Author's Response:
Your reviews are always so good to read....Yes Bella has found a friend in Rosalie....and honestly Im not sure if Edward actually saw Eric and Laurent.......xoxoxooxox
Date: 09 Jan 2011 3:52 AM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
As much as I want them to just jump into the sack together you're during it the right way. Damn it!
Author's Response:
Welll babes u wont be waiting long.................................xixooxoxoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2011 3:16 AM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
excellent!
Author's Response:
Thank you and hope Part 2 is excellent as well
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2011 2:41 AM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
I want part 2 and if you love us readers you will post
Author's Response:
WE do love u guys....xoxoox and Part 2 is being fixed as we speak so its up right after xoxoxooxox hope u enjoy
Date: 09 Jan 2011 2:30 AM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
awesome as always thanks :)
Author's Response:
Thank you and hope you enjoy part 2
Date: 09 Jan 2011 2:03 AM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
please post soon, i love this story!!!
Author's Response:
We love you too and were updating tonight xoxoxoxoox
Date: 09 Jan 2011 1:57 AM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you xoxoxoxo we hope you enjoy part 2 just as much
Date: 09 Jan 2011 1:47 AM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
Great chapter. What a bitch Angela is. Here she has been having this affair with Ben and is bitching at Edward. Still wondering what she was doing til 2:00 AM when she wasn't supposed to come home that night. Maybe Ben gave her the he ho. Happy New Year.
Author's Response:
hahahhahah maybe he did give her the heave ho or maybe she was being a ho with someone else???????????????? haaha.............hope u enjoy part 2
Date: 09 Jan 2011 1:31 AM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
Ang is her head stuck that far up her ass.??? Eric and Larant are stocking Edward??? Rose and Bella get along I am so happy they are going to take care of her. I hope you get enough reviews to post the 2 part.
Author's Response:
WE were overwhelmed with the reviews xoxoxoxo part 2 is going up real real soon.....like Ari is fixing the last minute stuff as we speak
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2011 1:17 AM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
I'm glad I'm not going mad - after the last chapter I was sure that Bella hadn't told Edward about Ben. Talk about close calls in this chapter though! Still loving the story! Bring on the next chapter and riddance for good of the witch! :)
Author's Response:
Hahahah hope you enjoy part 2 and yes BYE BYE ANG I mean witch
Date: 09 Jan 2011 12:35 AM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
SHould I start the chant "WE WANT 2...WE WANT 2"...lol. I love this story, am so excited when it updates...like so excited it states how sad my life is excited (haha). Seriously I was so glad Edward ended things well, but not feeling good about how crazy witch can b also not feeling good about Eric lurking behind in the hotel...that can't b good. Can't wait..."WE WANT 2...WE WANT 2" anyone...don't make me review 100 times!
Author's Response:
hahahahah babes..i sing with you..........ARI we want 2 ....we want 2...........hahaha.....welll honey Ari is fixing up the last minute stuff as we speak. I hope you enjoy it
Date: 09 Jan 2011 12:28 AM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
FINALLY & HOLY SHIT!!!! That´s what I would call two crazy chapters!!!! Loved the switching POV`s ! Angela is sooo psycho and I´m worried about Edward "seeing Eric and Laurent but not quite seeing them"- incident...! Bless Em and Rose for saving B and E´s asses! I was really freaking out while reading because of the note Bella left and that the wicked witch would find it!! Thank God she didn´t thanks again to Emmets subtle cover up ;D Bella´s departure was so sad- even though it turned to be the best decision made! I just hope that the two of them don´t have to wait too long! ;D As always- can´t wait for the next chapter! You girlies are awesome!!! ;D
Author's Response:
Thank you for loving us and we love u to......We love writing in both POV's ...and part 2 is going up right away...xoxoxoo
Date: 09 Jan 2011 12:24 AM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
just as i suspected....u girls rock!!!! hmmmm so now i wonder if that really was eric...aka barbie sock...lol ;) i am proud of edward and how he managed to stay calm as he spoke with ang. i probably would have bitchslapped her after the first "BELLLLLLLLLA"...
mwah....thanks girls ur fuckin awesome...me heart you
Author's Response:
bahahha oh barbie sock hahahah..............yah Edward made me proud.....hope u like part 2 xoxoxoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2011 12:22 AM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
OMG I can not believe what a total manic Bitch Angela truly is. Okay have some pride even if it's just knowing that your not going to beg someone to stay with you whom doesn't want you. Seriously Ang!!!
Bella was right is her thoughts, they do need to be clear of her divorce and his before they can fully move forward, NOT TO SAY that they can't have some Juicy Lemony Goodness along the way, OH!!!what am I saying!!! hehehehe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hummmm what is Eric and Laurent up to? Doesn't sound good.. Thank Goodness for Em and Rose saving the day at the hotel.
Can't wait for more. Have a good one.
Laters BB
Kathy xoxo
Author's Response:
WEll you wont have to wait much longer ....u have great questions.....laurent and eric at hotel....im not sure??? and We love Emmett and Ro...they will be in the story a bit more now....xoxoxooxox
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2011 12:05 AM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
So fantastic. Im so proud of them. how freaky laurent and eric together,hmmm, i smell a rat. who knew Eric would be such a threat. I am so torn over feeling sorry for Angie or hating her. the think about Angie she doent know love becuz it wasnt her's to begin with, realizing that is horrid for her and it will hit her. I love Em and Rose, really love them here, they are the kind of couple you want to go have a drink with and act crazy. The picture of her as the witch is perfect,haha.
Author's Response:
hahahah i loved making the pic of the witch...hahahha. And hell yah I would love to hang out with Em and Ro......we hope u enjoy part 2
Date: 09 Jan 2011 12:02 AM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
oooh bribing :)
great chapter girls :)
Author's Response:
and my bribing worked hahahah part 2 is coming .......................
Date: 09 Jan 2011 12:02 AM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
Threatening isnt's nice. You know if you ask us to bend over backwards, we would do it in a heartbeat. You do know that, right? But, hey, here's my luv, anyways.
By the way, I like Edward finally getting a grip. Spartan is sexy, but Mature, Responsible Edward is HOT! Lucky Bella.
Author's Response:
Im sorry.............do u still love us??????????? Part 2 is coming right away
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2011 11:59 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
So sad.... i feel so bad for both of them.
Author's Response:
Oh you wont be sad for long :)
Date: 08 Jan 2011 11:38 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
Damn! You girls are sizzlin' with this chapter one! It was good in action! The suspense-ok what was the deal with Laurent and Eric? The angsty of of Lauren.
Excellent job!!
That is why this is my favorite story! You guys are my favorite!!
Author's Response:
awwwwwww thank you for loving us so much..............Hope part 2 keeps us as your fav
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2011 11:35 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
Love it!! Awesome job
Author's Response:
Thank you xoxoxooxox part 2 is coming soon
Date: 08 Jan 2011 11:21 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
Maybe Edward can get his divorce using INSANITY as his reason because Angela is fucking crazy!
Author's Response:
hahahhah thats a good one....lol...insanity....... welll part 2 is pretty insane on another level......
Date: 08 Jan 2011 11:10 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
im glad that he agrees with her keep the updates comming
Author's Response:
part 2 is coming right away xoxoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2011 10:50 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
Ok...here's my part of reaching your review goal. Make sure you count the ones on ffn!!
I'm glad Bella was the strong one....as much as they love each other, it's not the right time. Clean break, close one book before you start another, etc.
Angela is a woman scorned but I'm hoping she gives up sooner than later. Hate seeing the soul mates apart longer than they have to be!!
Good job! Looking forward to more!
BTW - love the dual POV's. Makes it so much more exciting!
Author's Response:
Yes we counted FFn....hahaha and we were overwhelmed..............part 2 is coming asap...Ari is doing the last minute fixers as we speak. and we love writing the two POV's
Date: 08 Jan 2011 10:13 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
I'm so glad Bella left their room when she did, and the Emmett and Rosalie were help to get her away before Ang could see her. I'm curious as to whether or not Edward really saw Eric at the hotel, or was his imagination getting the better of him.
I look forward to reading more. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Yah Im glad bella left too.....for her own reasons and because Ang was there....karma was watching out for her. Love our Emmett and Ro, they will have bigger parts coming up heheheh and yah Edward mind may or may not be tricking him....you never know!!
Date: 08 Jan 2011 9:57 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
Can I break out into a chorus of: Ding dong the witch is dead? Or is it too soon?
Author's Response:
hahahha nope....i'll even join in....ding dong the witch is dead....which old witch,....the wicked witch...hahhaaha ok maybe a tad soon...but ohhh welll....hahha cant wait for part 2
Date: 08 Jan 2011 9:45 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
:)
Author's Response:
:) thank you xoxooxoxoxox
Date: 08 Jan 2011 9:40 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
I hope they don't have too many more obsticals to jump over.
Author's Response:
ummmm?????? maybe later on ...but for now....enjoy part 2.....u wont be dissapointed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 9:40 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
Well that was a close call. Angela almost found Bella there. Bella is right of course he needs to finish with Angela and the divorce. I cant wait for their lemon once they get back together.
Author's Response:
hahah Lemon???? how bout LEMONSsssssss...hahahha u wont be dissapointed....MUAH
Date: 08 Jan 2011 9:38 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
I want part 2 please....*gives pathetic puppy eyes*
Author's Response:
pats head lovingly......good girl....i will post ur treat asa soon as its ready.....which should be tomm :) xxxooxooxoxoxoooo
Date: 08 Jan 2011 9:28 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
I am so happy Bella got out of there befpre Angela showed...very cool! I also love, love, love Emmett & Rosile - nice work! I am also very proud of Edward not blowing his calm...thanks for the update. can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve next.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the awesome review....we try to have a good combo in our story....humour....angst....romance.....SEX.....u know what I mean. Emmett and Rosalie are fun..and have bigger parts coming up....PART 2 is soooooooooooooooooooo good...hehehhe
Date: 08 Jan 2011 9:22 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
Please, please, please give us part 2, I wanna know what happens next. I am addicted to this story.
Author's Response:
WEllll........u left a review so ur adding to our numbers muahahhahahha....eifel hopes to have it done tomm the latest...and yes....U WANT PART 2
Date: 08 Jan 2011 9:06 PM Title: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
Wow, that was amazing! I really loved it so much! I cannot wait to see what happens next! Please let them have sexy lemon time again soon, pretty please? Anyway, cannot wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Well .....part 2 is just around the corner.......xoxooxoxox
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2011 8:03 AM Title: Use Somebody
love it!
Author's Response:
and we love u too....thank you for reading and reviewing. If u havent seen the video I made feel free to watch and watch and watch lol....until next time xoxoxooxxo
Date: 03 Jan 2011 9:42 PM Title: Use Somebody
OMG - an entire chapter of teasing and foreplay, but no payoff [yet]....you are so naughty to make us wait another chapter.
Glad they are moving forward with the penthouse, and I hope Edward seriously ends it with Angela ASAP, man is she annoying. That didn't look good that he answered the phone at 2 am with Bella's voice next to him, even if falling asleep in front of the TV was the truth.
Good thing Bella was planning on moving in with Jessica, since Edward slipped with Ben's name, I guess that warrants getting kicked out of the house. Can't wait to see what happens next, and if anything bad were to happen to Angela I would not be opposed :)
Author's Response:
Yup teasing and hotness all in one. LOL...Im sure you will enjoy the next chapter just as much xoxooxxoo until then enjoy the video I made http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hVbzoWuUC1w
Date: 03 Jan 2011 5:11 PM Title: Use Somebody
Happy New Year to you too!!!!
So there was a lot of shouting, anger, and tension in this chapter. They all have been walking a very thin line, they lost track of it and it's all turning into a bigger mess than it already was.
From Angela's comment at the end of the chapter, we might assume she does have cameras in the house, or is she just too angry at Edward? Does Edward suspect Angela is having an affair with Ben, or did he just say the first name that came to mind?
It's going to be messy, and the divorces a very painful thing I guess.
At least Bella has her place and she can move in very soon.
Author's Response:
Hehe a lot will happen in the chapter we are writing now. There was a lot of shouting and anger. No Edward heard Ang telling Bella about Ben. The divorce is going to be U.G.L.Y! So in the mean time until the next chapter gets posted. Watch the vid DLIR made for the story! 2 words for ya Hot, awesome, sexy, and hot! Okay so I can't count oh well :)
Thanks for the review! Please check the vid out you will love it I promise!
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Ari & DLIR http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hVbzoWuUC1w
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2011 8:24 AM Title: Use Somebody
A good start is an understatement!!!!
WOW - what a chapter...
Where do I begin? Hot stuff or what!!!!
The Inspections were great of the apartments...
Emmett just cracks me up to no end...
Angela - well, she can just piss off...
Any other citrusy lemons is just well... hot!!!!
Love it :)
T2M x
Author's Response:
LOL We are busy writing the next chapter as we speak. Shhh don't tell anyone but there's lots and lots of lemons coming your way! :) Thank you for your review! Go chack out the vid DLIR made for the story! Awesome, hell I'm still trying to cool down
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Ari & DLIR http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hVbzoWuUC1w
Date: 03 Jan 2011 2:26 AM Title: Pom Pom's
What an awesome chapter. I'm loving the build up to see what happens. Great writing you two. From what I read, one of you lost a sibling recently? I'm so sorry and my heart goes out to you. My hubs and I just lost our twins. They were just born too early. It's only been a few weeks and it's been hard. My prayers and well wishes will be with you!
Author's Response:
Ohhh love....were soooo sorry....:( I cant imagine the pain you went through. Ari is doing better, but our prayers are with u. If our story can put a smile on your face Im thankful xoxoxox..
enjoy the video I made
Date: 03 Jan 2011 2:04 AM Title: Use Somebody
I hope you get to update again soon. I loved this chapter.
Author's Response:
Were so happy u enjoyed this chapter. We decided to write the next the same.....So Ari is writing her last part as we speakxoxoxo enjoy the video I made
Date: 03 Jan 2011 2:02 AM Title: Use Somebody
Uh oh. Maybe they can play it off as sleep talking!
Author's Response:
hahaha.....were almost done with the next chapter sooo we will c what happens
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2011 11:38 PM Title: Use Somebody
hmmm. I just noticed my review is not here. uuggh, arrgh. sooo good. Bitch has a lot of nerve being mad. she is so guilty I was feeling a set up but Edward had to slip. Both Spartan and Kitten play dirty and we reap all the fun. and for the Letter, thats way too much wrk. I am so hoping that Bella opens a can of whoop ass On Angela and call it a day. If you like I'll hold her. just kidding
Author's Response:
hahah ok grab her arms...LOL....yah the chapter got all messed up so we had to delete and repost...so it erased all the reviews but thanks for leaving another one...just incase u didnt see this...i just made it....,enjoy
Date: 02 Jan 2011 10:55 PM Title: Use Somebody
another great chapter, gripping and funny and sad and worrying - everything you need to carry you along :D
Date: 02 Jan 2011 9:32 PM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
mmmmmmmmmmmmm :D :D
Author's Response:
Im glad u are enjoying the story....we greatly appreciate every review.....I just made this video...soo hope u enjoy and thank you again
Date: 02 Jan 2011 8:36 PM Title: I fucking love swings
sports sock? sounds too much like Borat lol :D :D sorry couldnt resist pml.
good solid chapter, carrying us along on a tidal wave of tension. can't wait for the next one.
Date: 02 Jan 2011 8:18 PM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
oh what a tangled web we weave!
Date: 02 Jan 2011 7:48 PM Title: Fuck My Life
great chapter!
Date: 02 Jan 2011 7:39 PM Title: Laurent
awesome chapter, gripping and shocking. I want to go at Laurent with a rusty knife blade!
Date: 02 Jan 2011 3:58 PM Title: Use Somebody
i love it.
Author's Response:
Thank you for loving it..xooxoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2011 3:30 PM Title: Use Somebody
So amazing! Really looking forward to the next update! Cannot wait to see how this will turn out with Ang and Bella!
Author's Response:
Me either....Angela is a little cookoo cookoo in the cabesa so time will tell....were writing it as we speak xooxoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2011 10:48 AM Title: Use Somebody
great chapter - I just wish that Jessica would leave or get lost or whatever... we need some more of your brand of kink ladies, it's been far too long... we need our dose of Spartan...please....
Author's Response:
heheheh I want Spartan to....but yah re refuse to have them together while things are all messed up...It wont be tooo long sooo dont worry ...Spartan will make an appearance soon
Date: 02 Jan 2011 9:49 AM Title: Use Somebody
Thats what you get when you cheat. He needed to break up with her>FIRST.
Author's Response:
Good point......wheres the mop??? theres a huge mess on aisle five.....sxoxoxoxo hope u enjoy the rest sweetie MUAh
Date: 02 Jan 2011 9:34 AM Title: Use Somebody
oh crap.....
Author's Response:
shit is right....hehehe.....xoxoxoxo
Date: 02 Jan 2011 7:31 AM Title: Use Somebody
Oh Man! My heart is pounding.. Damn that was a good one. Here I thought you were going to put Edward and Angela in a car crash and kill her. Much better cliffy than mine. OMG It's on.. Always a pleasure.
E/k
Author's Response:
LOL sorry about the cliffy! But just so you know. We are working away on the next chapter as we speak! And yes it's soooo on! :)
Thanks for your review!
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Ari & DLIR <3
Date: 02 Jan 2011 5:04 AM Title: Use Somebody
I have to say this is my Favorite Story right now. I am so excited when you update (I know my life is sad....lol). No seriously your story is fabulous and so filled with all the right angst, comedy, and love. I am loving how Edward and Bella have this awesome connection, I think that is what keeps the story fresh. They don't ever lose that or question it. Yes challenges arise but they stay true to their feelings for each other. I am loving this and can't wait to see if Edward fires off at Angela for yelling at Bella...oh by the way LOVING the teasing between this two.
Author's Response:
xoxooxoxoxo yah we are enjoying writing these two. I think we want to maintain a little more depth in their relationship than just sex. If so they could have done it a gazillion times by now. But the flirting, laughing and just laying beside one another watching a movie is what normal things couple do and neither of them have been in a normal relationship until now....THANK YOU soooo much for loving this story as ur fav. Honestly, it makes us so happy to know you love it....xoxooxox Thank you again. DLIR AND ARI
Date: 02 Jan 2011 4:27 AM Title: Use Somebody
That was INCREDIBLE :) I really cannot wait to find out what happens when Bella finally moves out. Also, what happens when Edward tells Angela about the divorce. Wonder where she was?
Author's Response:
I know...I cant wait to write the rest. The new things we think about as we write excites us...xoxoxoox
Date: 02 Jan 2011 3:59 AM Title: Use Somebody
awesome as usual thanks :)
Author's Response:
Ur welcome doll.....Hope you enjoy the rest
Date: 02 Jan 2011 3:29 AM Title: Use Somebody
The chapter was a tad chaotic for me with the switching back and forth of the points of view otherwise...great chapter!
Author's Response:
Awe we're sorry :(
We thought we would try something different. So sorry it was chaotic for you. Besides that we're glad you liked the chapter. Thank you for your review!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Jan 2011 1:52 AM Title: Use Somebody
Wow, the proverbial crap hit the fan!!! Can't wait to find out what happens next..I live for these updates!
Author's Response:
Never fear we are working hard on the next chapter! Glad to hear you like our story so much! makes us really happy!
Thank you for your support and review!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Jan 2011 1:39 AM Title: Use Somebody
Wow, you gave us such a great beginning to the New Year. I expected Angie to run into them, but I didn't expect Edward to open his mouth the way he did. OMG what a chapter. Loved it. HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!
Author's Response:
That's out goal giving everyone a happy way to start the new year LOL
yeah I swear Edward and his mouth/stupid ideas! Will he never learn? I think not! So glad to hear you liked it so much. Makes us sooooo happy to hear! Plus it makes us work harder on getting the next chapter done!
Thanks for your awesome review!
HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU ALSO!!!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Jan 2011 1:36 AM Title: Use Somebody
OMFG!!!!!! how can u leave us hanging like that!!!!! fuck-tastic as usual ladies! update soon ;)
Author's Response:
Sorry about leaving you hanging! We are busy working on the next chapter! So you shouldn't be waiting to long :) We are so glad you like it! Makes us do our happy naked dance!
Thank you so so so much for your review!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 02 Jan 2011 12:19 AM Title: Use Somebody
Oh yeah, Edward messed up big time when he told Ang to go eff Ben. No one knew about that but Bella, right? Well, Edward heard it when he was hiding under the bed. As if enough shit wasn't going to hit the fan, now they have a psyco beotch on their hands!!!! Mmmm...mmm...mm... I cannot wait to read what happens next!
Keye
Author's Response:
LOL We can't wait to see what happens next ourselves! We're busy working away on it. Yes Bella was the only one who knew. And Edward did mess up when he let it slip that's for sure!
Thanks you for your review!
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Ari & DLIR
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2011 11:55 PM Title: Use Somebody
Huh....I thought I reviewed this already!!
In any case....this may be a good thing! Angela will be pissed at Bella so Bella and Edward can be together with no guilt!! Edward can use this knowledge, maybe spin in that he's been suspecting infidelity so he had Angela followed and has can use it in his divorce proceedings so that Angela can't take all of his stuff since he never had a prenup! Threaten to go public with her skankiness if she tries to stick it to him!!
Love it!!
Happy New Year!!
Author's Response:
LOL you may have reviewed. But we had to repost the chapter. We couldn't respond to the reviews! I know stupid man for no prenup! Good idea about going public about her! We are busy working on the next chapter! Thanks for the awesome review!
HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 01 Jan 2011 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
I, too, live in a Seattle suburb in the trees and it DOES suck ass. As beautiful as it can be, I can't see the sunset. However, I'm the head of household, so I'm the only one holding me back. Good schools out here and all. Moving closer to Seattle this summer, though. I hate my commute.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 4:27 AM Title: Pom Pom's
I just finished reading all 12 chaps(started this morning-too bad I had to stop frequently to tend to RL). I love this story...and surprisingly I think that Edward and Bella's situation is pretty realistic. (I've known lots of people in loveless and miserable marragies that have found each other-doing the cheating and all...maybe not the best course to follow, but it is what it is.)
OMG...love your Emmett!!! I have lmao throughout this story, but always when Em is involved...*sigh*
Looking forward to an update
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much for reviewing. And yes it can be realistic as we all know people who have gone through it. Emmett is hilarious and thats my Ari's doing...She awesome. Hope u like the update I just posted...happy new year
Date: 28 Dec 2010 10:42 AM Title: Pom Pom's
I am soooo addicted to this story! I am up at five in the morning reading because it's that good :)
Please please please update soon or I'll go freaking crazy.
And I'm sorry, but Angela is so dense. She should know that something's up.
Author's Response:
hahah I love ur enthusiasm to the story. We will be updating sometime this week, whenever we get it back from the beta. xoxox thanks for reading and hope u enjoy the rest..and Ang lol.....hmmm not sure what she knows hahah
Date: 28 Dec 2010 8:39 AM Title: To Happiness
Well, now that I read Bella's pov I kind of feel bad fro my last review. I think Bella should just cut the crap and tell Edward that she really wants him, and then Edward can tell her he was just lying to Angela.
But I think Bella should've known better. If he was just going crazy trying to get her to talk to him yesterday, why all of a sudden would he want Angela the next day? I would've fought that... but maybe that's just me. Because I sure as hell wouldn't have believed that.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 4:46 AM Title: Mirror's Reflection
Damn! I soooo didn't see that one coming. I hope Edward can duck out of the way in time.
Author's Response:
I hope so too...Hope u enjoy the rest,.....xoxo
Date: 24 Dec 2010 12:31 AM Title: Time To Think
i love you for this
Author's Response:
I hope u enjoy the rest xoxo
Date: 24 Dec 2010 12:25 AM Title: Fuck My Life
you are more cruel