Date: 24 Dec 2010 12:12 AM Title: Mirror's Reflection
loving it
Date: 22 Dec 2010 3:57 AM Title: Pom Pom's
Is Eric going to cause anymore problems? Is Angela going to find out Edward wants a divorce? I'm excited to find out what happens next.
Date: 22 Dec 2010 3:54 AM Title: Pom Pom's
thanks for the update. Really enjoy reading these characters story.
I'm curious why/who is behind [or maybe it was just random] the attack on Bella?
I still feel like Edward is living his life rather foolishly. He needs to leave the house, ignore that Bella is there & high tail it out. Tell Angela he cancelled the date because, in all honesty, he did not see their relationship going anywhere nor want it in any way shape or form to work out. Now that would be some clarity for her, he's fostering her cluelessness, kinda cruel or at least a very unattractive quality.
I'm sorry for your loss Ari;D(
Date: 22 Dec 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMFG i don't know what i need more at this point aa really cold shower or a cigarette and their haven't done anything yet.......... Heaven help me for when their actually get down to it lol........ can't wait to read more Katy :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 4:51 PM Title: Pom Pom's
wonderful chapter - I'm so sorry about your brother Ari. I have lost a brother as well and my heart goes out to you.
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 3:55 PM Title: Pom Pom's
I'm glad they're exercising ome restraint. Bella has it right; she needs to move out before Edward serves Angela with divorce papers. Edward should also find a place to live first & Bella should take a long vacation so Angela can't guilt Bella into ending things with Spartanward!
Good chapter....happy holidays....be safe!
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 3:53 PM Title: Pom Pom's
LovEd it she sure needs to move out n have some b n e loving again
Date: 20 Dec 2010 6:40 AM Title: Pom Pom's
Is Ang asleep around these two???? lol I am go glad Edward is not humping the furnisher anymore LOL. I am sorry to hear about your lose it is never easy to loose the ones you love Please find peace. Have a happy holidays and hope to hear from you soon because this is a fuck awsome story.
Author's Response:
Thanks soooo much...It makes us so happy to know people love it still....me and Ari are actually discussing the next chap now...so she will be on that fast fast.. writing makes her happy .LOL xxooxoxo happy holidays.....
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 5:52 AM Title: Pom Pom's
My thoughts are with you Ari... take care of yourself & your family over the Christmas/New Year period - it will be a very hard time but you can get through it day by day!
Awesome chapter once again lovies!!! I do love these two :)
Hot Sparten/Kitten citrusy lemons is always a great way to start the day :) LOL
Christmas cheer to the both of you
T2M x
Author's Response:
xoxoxooxoxoxoxox marry xmas babes.....xoxoxoxoxo
Date: 20 Dec 2010 4:32 AM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
Emmett to funny Edward is going to end up with a concution. Ang needs to just go fuck who she was going to and leave Bella and Edward to fuck alone lol.
Author's Response:
hahahah I know Angela needs to VAMOOS...hahaha xoxo
Date: 20 Dec 2010 3:08 AM Title: Pom Pom's
This was a wonderful chapter. I really liked it. I love the way they cant keep their hands off of each other. BUt I think Bella is right they cant do that in his house when he is still with his wife. Its not right. Now as for RL My heart goes out to you for your sibling I am guessing its a brother. You asked to follow on FB but I dont have that so what other SWM club are you talking about??? Please let me know also is there a FB name???? I am new at this so please be patient. Have a Merry Christmas and know he is indeed looking down on you and would not wish you to be sad at this time of year.
Author's Response:
Yes, Ari's brother passed away and thank you for the kind words.....Im sure it will put a smile on her face. xoxoxox and yes Bella cant do that in his house....I dont care how stupid Angela is, Bella is better than that
Date: 20 Dec 2010 3:04 AM Title: Pom Pom's
So sorry to hear about Ari's brother. Take as much time as you need.
I hope you both have a peaceful holiday.
~H
Author's Response:
We hope you have a merry xmas and all the best to you too...xoxoxoxo hope it wont be too long
Date: 20 Dec 2010 2:26 AM Title: Pom Pom's
I dont do Facebook ( I know... I know) but I was sorry to hear about the RL. My prayers are with you!
Author's Response:
Its okay to not have FB....xoxoxox
Date: 20 Dec 2010 1:56 AM Title: I fucking love swings
The sock that is so funny I have a friend that weres one when he tans to that is fuck hot just to think about. Eric has lost his mind and his barbie sock lol. I cant wait to find out what is going on with Edward when he finds out.
Author's Response:
I loved writing the sock part....U will never look at a barbie sock the same ever again LOL
Date: 20 Dec 2010 12:47 AM Title: To Happiness
Please tell me that Ang is going to tell Edward about Bella leaving Eric. I think Bella is right she needs to leave Eric because it is the right thing to do not just because of Edward.
Date: 19 Dec 2010 11:58 PM Title: Pom Pom's
I know just what that lack of control is like.....mmmmmmmmm :D
sorry to hear that real life has intervened in not such a nice way :(
Author's Response:
ohhh yah I would definitely not have any control myself....
Date: 19 Dec 2010 11:34 PM Title: Pom Pom's
You have my prayers regarding your R/L. Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Ari will be happy to see your prayers are with her....xoxoxoxo i cant wait to see what she writes next myself
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 11:16 PM Title: Pom Pom's
hopefully he can rid of angela as fast as she got rid of eric
Author's Response:
EEkkk....Angela is unfortunately like a tick.....never leaves and just grows and grows and grows more annoying hahahah muah
Date: 19 Dec 2010 10:49 PM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
I still think they need to switch Ang and Eric get along really well. I hope this works for him but I think Bella will be wanting to rip his balls off.
Date: 19 Dec 2010 10:02 PM Title: Pom Pom's
Wow!!! Terrific Chapter loved it!!! So glad they confessed their feelings and are going to move things along, of course we know this will not be easy, as these things never are, but really looking forward to more. It was terrific, no matter if our wonderful Kitten was trying to be a friend to Ang or not, but it was wonderful that Angela opened her mouth and inserted her foot so to speak, with Spartan just under the bed to hear her confessions.. (she says smirking at the screen!!)
Its Very sad and difficult to loose a sibling, personally happened to me 20 months ago, regardless of age, or cirumstances and religious beliefs it's difficult to have them missing in your life. My prayers and thoughts go out to Ari and all the family!!!
The fans of this wonderful story will be here ready for more when more is posted, until then you both have "This Fans' Understanding and Patience!!"
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
Author's Response:
Merry christmas and happy new year to you too.....xoxoxoxoo and yes.....Angela MAY have put her foot in her mouth too soon....we shall see????
Date: 19 Dec 2010 9:44 PM Title: Time To Think
Ang has to ruin everything LOL. Sex in an elevator OH YAAAAAAHHHHH What did the note say and when is he going to tell her that he hates Anglea????
Date: 19 Dec 2010 8:06 PM Title: Pom Pom's
My deepest sympathy to Ari!
Okay, the whole conversation that Angela was having concerning her waxing et al?? Hysterical!!
And Edward did not say a word about what he heard about a Ben "calling and calling". Does he already know or does he just not care to ask?
Edward hiding under the bed? Priceless! What some guys will go through for nookie!! LOL!!!
I pretty much LMAO while reading the entire chapter!! Ready to read when you are ready to post!
Merry Christmas to you and yours!
Keye
Author's Response:
The wax convo.......was real....I had a client that wanted me to put a T in her bikini...hence the I dont get paid to make shapes...LOL
Im so happy u laughed through the whole thing....I tried and had fun writing...hmmmm did Edward hear the things about Ben??? im not sure...we shall see
Date: 19 Dec 2010 5:54 PM Title: Pom Pom's
To Ari, I wish there was something anyone could say now to make things easier. Sadly words here tend to run small, however, my heart and prayers are with you.
We will be waiting for you, while sending our love through the holidays.
As for the chapter.... They finally confessed, kind of, to each other their feelings. And under Edward and Angela's roof, not that she is paying too much attention to what's going on there. Her mind is else where occupied with... a guy and TMI hair removal. Even if it's part of Bella's job, Angela's ranting was TMI even for her, poor Bella.
Bella was really uncomfortable when Angela came into the room and Edward had to hear from his unusual spot all that she was sharing. The thing was, Bella didn't know this side of Angela, and he does.
He is taking actions, both for her and him. That's more than good news!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hahahah the poor hair removal talk actually happened...hahaha i was asked to put a T in her bikini hence my wording....I dont get paid to make shapes or letter....thank you for sharing kind words for Ari...all the best to you over the holidays
Date: 19 Dec 2010 5:22 PM Title: Pom Pom's
wow, Edward got an earful under thebed,, and an E, or a star. oh well, not a visual i needed. Merry Christmas !!!!
Author's Response:
hahahah... unfortunately that is what I do for a living...so I get the visual all the time....;and FYI.....I was asked to make a T one time and I said what Bella said....I dont get paid to make shapes.....MUAH merry xmas
Date: 19 Dec 2010 4:38 PM Title: Pom Pom's
What a complete messed up situation. Hope Angela messes up big time. Bella doesn't need to be in the middle of this.
Author's Response:
WE shall see where this story brings us....we have our outlines done but we throw in here and there can change everything xoxoxo happy holidays
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 4:27 PM Title: Pom Pom's
Those two are something else. The heat cannot be denied but I am glad that Bella put some boundries between them. I really dont like to see cheating even though its there it's RL. That made me feel better so thnks hon, you totally get your readers and thats why you RAWK. Angela is so up to no good that I cant wait to see those divorce papers being served, shit yeah, about time Edward. Merry Christmas, Happy Holiday, and Happy New Year. Hope to see you back quikly. Ari I heart you so much, I'm so sorry to hear the loss of your sibling, We're here for you when your ready, sending both of you a virtual hug. Until later
Author's Response:
I know how you feel about the Cheating... we are reallly trying to have them be repectful and do things right as best as we can... Obviously we need to spice it up a bit BUT MY BELLA is better then sleeping with him in their house.....xoxoxo
Date: 19 Dec 2010 4:10 PM Title: Pom Pom's
Great chapter. Can't believe they have the nerve to try & get together in Angela and Edward's home. Too much. They better watch themselves, otherwise they will get caught big time. Sorry to hear about your friend's family member. Merry Christmas to you and hopefully I will see an update before the new year. If not Happy New Year!
Author's Response:
thanks for reviewing...and Ari will be happy to see ur kind words....her chapter is next so when she finds time and rest to write she will definitely pick up where she left off last....SPARTAN isnt spartan without ARI
Date: 19 Dec 2010 2:41 PM Title: Pom Pom's
:)
Author's Response:
thank you xoxox
Date: 19 Dec 2010 2:25 PM Title: Pom Pom's
well in the end its all that matters that they are happy
Author's Response:
And Happy is what we want...xoxo
Date: 19 Dec 2010 2:09 PM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
:)
Date: 19 Dec 2010 1:45 PM Title: Pom Pom's
footsie under the table how cute.....lol! that is way too much passion to have living under one roof....combustable!
luv how he is takin on the protector role as lawyer...he'll make barbie sock pay for his fuck-up
Author's Response:
buahahha,,,, well I threw that in last second.....sooo Ari didnt even know about it...so I cant wait to see what she does with my opening for ideas in her chapter....MUAHHAH i cant wait
Date: 19 Dec 2010 1:25 PM Title: Pom Pom's
Wow, that was INCREDIBLE! I really loved it all so much! I really cannot wait until the next chapter :D
Author's Response:
thank you sooo much... as Soon as Ari has time and strength to write we will love to update as soon as we can xoxoxoox
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 1:08 PM Title: Pom Pom's
I am hoping he tells Angela about the divorce soon! Loved it!
Author's Response:
Yah....I can see that in the short future....not to short but not like the end of the story :)
Date: 19 Dec 2010 12:21 PM Title: Pom Pom's
Ungh!!! What a chapter?!?! Sexual tension would be an understatement!!! ;D ;D Oh boy!!!
Fucking Angela and her cock/hoohahblocking ways!!!! It´s mre than obvious that they both can´t keep their hands to themselves (who can blame Bella- I´d soooo do the same) but they are playing with fire with Psycho bitch around! I think Edward should somehow find ut about Psych Bitch´s cheating ways before he tells her abut the divorce because otherwise he would end up as the bad guy! But then again...no one really likes Angela anyway! But Psycho would totally go after Bella, I think!!! But then again, I think she would go after Bella anyway as soon as she´d find out about them....GAH! Why do I even care abou PB´s spycho ways?!?! But still, how I had wished fr Angela slipping something about Ben when Edeard was tsill hiding under the bed or when she talked to Bella about him in the kitchen ....why couldn´t Edward have come down a wee bit sooner and eavesdropped on them?!?!? *grrrrr*
Anyway, you guys are awesome and I love your wicked ways!!! I wish you a MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!! <3
Author's Response:
welll we just have to see what Ari comes up with for the next chapter....the question is....did he hear and understand what Ang meant.....hmmmmmm taps mouth.....I dunno
Date: 19 Dec 2010 11:55 AM Title: Fuck My Life
Got to love Emmett I dont think he likes Ang. What kind of game is she playing trying to make up to Edward??? I am so glad they know who each other are now.
Date: 19 Dec 2010 11:17 AM Title: Laurent
Did they get Laurant and was it Eric that he called????? Did Edward see who she was?????
Date: 19 Dec 2010 10:20 AM Title: Mirror's Reflection
I dont think Edward likes his wife very much and she is not getting it. Laurant is going to hit Edward???? WTF????
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 9:24 AM Title: Pom Pom's
awesome chapter loved it.update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you soo much xoxoxoxo
Date: 19 Dec 2010 9:09 AM Title: Spartan Lover
Eric is a little scarry. That was funny they switched and Ang got stiffed and not the stif she wanted lol
Date: 19 Dec 2010 8:28 AM Title: Pom Pom's
That was intense.. All those times they could have been caught. You should let Angela catch them and in her rage, she could tell them that she is really involved with Eric. Their meeting at the swing ball has me suspicious.. I'm so sorry to hear about your loss Ari.. My prayers are with you and your family..
E/k
Author's Response:
Thanks for leaving kind words and love for us.....Ari will be amazed with all the loving words everyone is leaving......and yes...it was intense but i have a feeling thats just the beginning
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 8:11 AM Title: Pom Pom's
Much Love to Ari BB my thoughts are with you and you know I love you and DLIR very much .And I loved this update sexy Spartan and his Kitten are closer to being together now with pinky boy out of the way lol and very soon Angela will be in the past as well boy is she dumb LMAO "E" lol .XOXO
Author's Response:
*snort* pinky boy bahahhahahahah ohh I cant wait for the next chapter.....rubs hands together,.,cant wait to see what Ari conjures up
Date: 16 Dec 2010 2:01 PM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
DAMN EDWARD LUCK IS REALLY BAD. JURKING OFF AND NOT ONE BUT TWO WALK IN ON HIM HOW SAD. THEN HE IS ABOUT TO BE INSIDE BELLA AND HIS WIFE BLOCKS THAT. HE SHOULD JUST LEAVE HIS WIFE AND GET A PLACE WITH BELLA, THAT WAY THEY CAN BE HAPPY TOGETHER. I WISHE THERE WAS MORE UP TO READ SOON I HOPE
Author's Response:
We love each and everyone of your reviews....It means a lot to us that you really enjoy and try to understand the writing we do....xoxo thanks
Date: 16 Dec 2010 11:25 AM Title: I fucking love swings
WOW ERIC REALLY LOST IT DIDN'T HE? WILL HE HURT BELLA? AND WHAT WILL EDWARD DO WHEN HE FINDS OUT WHAT ERIC HAS DONE, HOW HE HAS SCARED BELLA BY DOING THIS SHIT TO THE HOUSE. WILL EDWARD AND BELLA BE ABLE TO GET TOGETHER AFTER ALL IT WOULD BE SO WRONG FOR THEM TO DO ANYTHING IS HIS HOUSE WHILE HE IS STILL WITH HIS WIFE. BELLA DOES NEED HIM WILL HE HOLD HER AND KISS HER MAKE HER FEEL BETTER WHEN HIS WIFE ISN'T LOOKING? OK IT'S SO GOOD I NEED TO MOVE TO THE NEXT CHAPTER
Date: 14 Dec 2010 5:06 PM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
Loved the goldfish story. This couldn't be the first time guys came on to Edward. It really isn't a pretty sight.
Author's Response:
I loved the fish story too the first time I read it...Ari is great....xoox thanks for reviewing
Date: 14 Dec 2010 4:18 PM Title: I fucking love swings
Eric was a freek case.
Author's Response:
Yup, he was....thanks so much for the review hope you enjoy the rest
Date: 14 Dec 2010 3:51 PM Title: To Happiness
One down. His plan is backfiring. Love all your pictures by the way. Very very hot. Oh, my god!
Author's Response:
Thank you we love making pictures,, especially when then Spartan hot...thanks for reviewing
Date: 14 Dec 2010 3:17 PM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
Loved Emmett's ramblings. Can't see anything good coming from Edward's plan. Going to make it much harder to get rid of Angela. Didn't Ang already tell Bella that he was a jerk?
Author's Response:
I just updated so hope you enjoy what happens next...xoxo thanks for reviewing
Date: 14 Dec 2010 2:41 AM Title: Time To Think
How worse could this get. Now she and Eric get along. What a mess.
Author's Response:
Clean up on aisle two.......:) i hope ur enjoying the read and thank you soo much for reviewing...xox
Date: 14 Dec 2010 12:51 AM Title: Fuck My Life
Gotta love Emmett's warning!
Author's Response:
Emmett is great in this story....Ari writes him perfectly....
Date: 14 Dec 2010 12:20 AM Title: Laurent
Not exactly the night they planned.
Author's Response:
Noooooo, not at all....xoxo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 13 Dec 2010 6:16 PM Title: Spartan Lover
Ang should get stuck with Eric
Author's Response:
Hahahahah she should xoxo thanks for reviewing DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2010 11:49 AM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
Couldn't read this fast enough :)
I LOVED IT!!!!
Awesome chapter - so can't wait for the next one.... hehehe
Edward hiding under the bed... classic!
T2M x
Author's Response:
i know...him hiding is sooo classic...glad u loved it...we appreciate the love DLIR AND ARI
Date: 11 Dec 2010 9:23 PM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
Talk about awkward. I'm sure Edward will get an ear full if Ang and Bella end up talking, while he's hiding under the bed.
I can see Edward going ballistic when he finds out what happened to Bella's house. Especially when he finds out that they think it was Eric? But I'm wondering...is it Eric or could it have been someone else.
Great chapter...great story.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the awesome review...and of course Bella and Ang will talk LOL....snort...oh yah...but let me know if u wanna teaser...I will send it ur way
Date: 11 Dec 2010 7:56 AM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
Good chapter, took me a bit of reading to realize that this chapter backtracks to before she moved in with them, but I liked it, especially the ending with him hiding under the bed at his own home - too funny!
I don't understand why he doesn't end things with Angela...he really seems to hate her and now he knows that this game of using her will totally blow up in his face if he continues. Now that Kitten is under one roof with him, I can't wait to see the future lemons being squeezed :)
Author's Response:
Thank you soooo much for the review....him under the bed is def priceless...let me know if u want a teaser...its ready xoxox
Date: 11 Dec 2010 1:27 AM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
cheating is not good. Shit or get off the pot.
Dont promote that. He needs to leave her or love her. Bella split her marriage when she was not being faithfull.
Author's Response:
yah cheating aint our goal.....xoxo and yes he needs to shit or get off the pot...we just have some plans for in between. :) hope u enjoy the rest
Date: 11 Dec 2010 1:11 AM Title: I fucking love swings
LOL staying with Angela & SPARTAN how funny.
Date: 10 Dec 2010 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 2
That was even more fuck hot than the last one and I love all the background also
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the reviews...hope you enjoy the rest
Date: 10 Dec 2010 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
holly shit fuck that is hot
Date: 10 Dec 2010 8:43 AM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
Ok first I want to say I really like this story as I am sure you remember me leaving you reviews. But I must say I did not like this chapter. It seemed very childish to me. The stupid client of Emmetts thinking Edward wanted to have sex with him, Emett acting like a kid at the pizza place, Edwards fishy tale I mean come on. If Emett was his best friend then I think he should at least act like a man and not a little kid. I dont mean to sound mean at all but this chapter really got on my nerves. All the other chapters were so much better. I just didn't find the stuff in here to be funny and I think that is what you were looking for. I found it childish and annoying. Edward is supposed to be a lawyer and lawyers are smarter than shit and I just dont think Edward or Emmett are acting smart at all. He needs to file for divore already and get rid of the evil wife that he never loved. Emmett needs to grow some balls and act like the best friend he is and not a cartoon charater. I know I am being harsh. I am truely sorry but after the wonderful chapters that I read from this story, this one is not even in the same catagory. I hope you understand that I am only trying to help your writing by expressing my true feelings about this chapter. It is not personal at all. I will continue to read this story and hopefully the following chapters will be better.
Author's Response:
We really do appreciate each and every review...whether u love it or dont.....where u disliked it others loved it...so we take each chapter as it comes. But We hope the rest do keep your interests and have u loving again..xoxox DLIR AND ARI
Date: 09 Dec 2010 9:29 PM Title: Fuck My Life
Ok, so I stopped reading the story that I was half way through, because this one kept updating and I was intrigued. It is awesome? I can't stop. I even tried to steal time at work today without my boss catching me. So far I really like the mystery of it, and the hotness factor. Then in this chapter Emmett made me laugh so hard with the intercom ABORT! You girls are going a fantastic job. Please don't abandon this story. It's to good. Can't wait to catch up. I might have to stay up all night. I can sleep when I'm dead right?
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking your time to read our story....hope ur enjoying it and love the rest xoxoxoxoxo
Date: 09 Dec 2010 5:48 PM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
That is priceless. Edward humping the couch! LMAO! Then standing there, little man in hand, when in walks the Troll and Kitten??? ROTHLMAO!!!! Okay, the cliffie at the end? I want to congratulate you on one hand for it being so genius and yet slap with the other hand because you left us hanging and I cannot wait to see what happens next!!! *giggle*
Oh and I love Emmett and Rose. I mean, when Edward had to hand the phone back to Em so that Rose could tell him to knock the crap out of Edward? Too funny! I just enjoyed the whole chapter.
I was also thinking that Edward better wise up if he wants Kitten. However, looks like Kitten just took matters into her own hands, didn't???
Like I said, I cannot wait to see what happens next!!!!
*squee*
Keye
Author's Response:
I cant wait for u to read the rest...were very proud of this story...love making u laugh. emmett and rose....Ari wrote that great....the fish everything....xo
Date: 09 Dec 2010 12:09 PM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
You guys really crack me up!!! I think I peed my pants because I had to laugh so hard while reading this chapter!!!! I couldn´t even tell what the funniest part was ;D
I can´t wait for Rosalie´s day at the spa now that she knows about Bella!
I really hope that Bella and Edward finally get the chance to talk and figure some of their shit out!!! ^^ And I really want to know what the hell Angela is up to!!!
I really love this story and can´t wait for the next chapter!!!
A late Happy Birthday and see you next time!!!! ;D
Author's Response:
thanks for the bday wish.....oxoxox and leaving a review....I hope u enjoy the rest of the story xoxoxoxo .heheheheh
Date: 09 Dec 2010 11:02 AM Title: I fucking love swings
What the hell?!?!? And I thought Angela would be the trouble maker...Eric is psycho,too!!!
This story keeps getting better and better! You guys are awesome!!!!
Sports socks will never be the same for me!!! ;D That was soo funny!!! ;D
Author's Response:
Like a Sports sock??? hahahahhaha...thanks for reviewing babe...
Date: 09 Dec 2010 8:53 AM Title: Eyes of a Tragedy
OMG- this is sooo going to end bad!!! Bella and Edward showing some kind of affection towards Eric and Angela will make Eric even more possesive or clingy or whatever and Angela even more crazy! That girl is crazy - is she up to something?! A few chapters ago she spend half the week with her "parents" and now she asks Edward for permission to visit him?!?! weird!!!
I can smell the drama....^^
Emmet cracked me up once again!!! I had tears streaming down my face when he tried to escape from Angela!!! I absolutely lost it when he refered to her as Norman Bated!!! ;D BEST EMMET,EVER!!!!! ;D ;D ;D
Author's Response:
hahhaha yes Miss Ari knows how to make people laugh...hope u enjoy the rest
Date: 09 Dec 2010 8:01 AM Title: Time To Think
Ungh....stupid effing Angela!!!!Old hag is a little bit on the bipolar/ two-faced side or however you wanna call it?!?! Has she secretely figured out that Bella is the one Edward was after at the parties?!?! She was soo quick to get all pissed when she saw them together....hmm...maybe she is just psycho...-but then again...that wouldn´t make the whole situation any better!!
Elevator scene was hot and Emmet was hilarious (again!!) ;D
Author's Response:
thank you sooooooooo much for reviewing...and yes Ang aint all up there...lol .....
Date: 09 Dec 2010 5:05 AM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
Wow, that was INCREDIBLE! I really loved it so much! I really am glad Edward is going to leave Angela too :) I cannot wait to find out how it all works out :)
Author's Response:
I cant either...but dont forget...Rome wasnt built in a day soooo we cant have it done in one chapter....so go make some tea or coffee, sit back relax and enjoy the ride....:) these chapters are gonna be fun....DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2010 3:42 AM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
well I am caught up now and am really enjoying your story, post soon!
CHeryle
Author's Response:
Thank you xoxoxx
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2010 3:01 AM Title: I fucking love swings
in real life I don't think you would call your lovers wife for help
Author's Response:
probably not, but that was her only way of calling Edward. If she had his number she would have just called him. She was weak and scared. She needed him so unfortunately that brought on Angela....xoxoxo hope you enjoy the rest of our story DLIR AND ARI
Date: 09 Dec 2010 2:41 AM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
So glad they ended together. I hope it is for a while if not the long run yet. I am still holding out for some sneaky Edward sneaking with Bella! Great chapter...keep them coming. I love this story. A great mix of humor and romance. AND HECK YES TO A TEASER...like a preChristmas present...haha!
Author's Response:
I will make sure to send u a teaser ASAP.......xoxoxoxoxoxoxo DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2010 12:22 AM Title: Laurent
an lavender roses smell the best
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you and i can say I have never smelt them xoxoxoxo
Date: 09 Dec 2010 12:04 AM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
loved it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing.....xoxoxo means a lot .DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
well thats hot, I wonder who it could be hehehehe
Author's Response:
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm I dunno???? lol
Date: 08 Dec 2010 9:23 PM Title: Mirror's Reflection
Oh no you didn´t !!!! WTF?!?!?!
Ok this is a quickie *giggle* since i really have to continue reading...like NOW!!!!
Um ok- I absolutely loved Aro and Mike and their subtle attempts to get into Edwards pants!! ;D Eric is still kinda creepy, Angela gained about 20 more points on the bitch-o-meter (although I almost felt sorry for her when Edward had his breakdown...almost...^^)...and I wish that Bella and Edward just rip those effing masks of their faces.....that being said...up to the next chapter!! ;D
Author's Response:
Oh yesssssssssssssss we did...lol,
Date: 08 Dec 2010 8:14 PM Title: Spartan Lover
Holy...this story just keeps getting better!!! Angela and Eric almost hooked up?!?!?! LOL !!!^^
Eric kinda gave me the creeps....gotta love Emmet,though!!!!
Author's Response:
keep reading babe....and yes Eric...ewwwww,,,,emmett omg Ari writes the best emmett
Date: 08 Dec 2010 7:25 PM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
So i actually love this story! I was soo very excited when i saw the chapter update...but honestly, this chapter was really dissappointing! :(
Edward just sounded plain old stupid, his interaction with Emmett and the gay guys were kinda pointless and not very funny. It felt like a filler chapter, and took my respect for Edward wayyyyyyyyyyy down. Before, Edward was written as very sexy, now he just seems stupid. Nothing he said, thought or did in this chapter was remotely attractive, or even very interesting. I feel like he was a completly different guy here...and i liked the guy he was before a hell of alot better.
I dont like how the chapter ended...that Bella took him back so easily, its unrealistic...i hope she puts up a hell of a better fight soon. He needs to prove himself immensly and is very undeserving of her affections at the moment. I am upset that Bella is even speaking to him, let alone making out and dry humping with him!
Very weird chapter...But a great story up until it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for loving it and hating it LOL....we appreciate every review....and we love how diff people have different opionions... Some loved this chap. It was a diff side of Edward. Non lawyer, non spartan. As my chap before, some people thought bella was mean to eric some thought it was priceless.. So hope we can still deliver a story u enjoy to read xoxoxo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 08 Dec 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
OMG!! I don´t know what to say....how about...that was damn HOT!!! ^^ Too bad it had to end so soon ;D
I have to say though that when Bella explained she was married to Eric...that was like...ewwwww!!! And Edward is married to Angela who is playing bitch royale?! I absolutely loved they way B and E explained their live and love for their significant other...*cough*....it was so bitter but absolutely funny at the same time!!! And they are both drooling over each other and now just had sex without knowing it!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! ;D
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and Reviewing....Yah eric was a needed change from mike...and Angela for Tanya. So we figured Angela and Eric are together in Movie it only fit.....I hope you enjoy the rest xoxoxoxo DLIR AND ARI
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2010 4:36 PM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
Not once but twice, that was just mean, funny but mean. I could totally imagine from Ang pov Edward dry humping the couch, omg tooooo funny and than with Bella, how many shades of awkward was that. I love Emmett so much and Rosalie too badass for her own good, I love her and Edward in this one. Mr Magoo was a hot mess too-ewww 68 and with two, I know someone just like and it aint cute. As for Mike and Aro there are no words how hilareous this duo is, I having trouble seeing it but I cant turn away; how bad is that?... loved and loved you cock blocker you. Happy Birthday BB Smooches sweeetie.
Author's Response:
LOL The whole dry humping couch thing. Was just to funny not to write! :) Yeah he did kinda get thrown out there when Ang and Bella walked in LOL Poor guy :) Oh you haven't seen all of Rose yet. She's about to make a huge and I do mean huge appearance. ANd it's not pretty :) As the story goes on you'll see her and Edward are like brother and sister! Mr Magoo I couldn't stop myself with him. Mike and Aro are just like a car wreck...even I can't look away LOL
DLIR is up next with her freakin awesome chapter! Thank you for her B-Day wishes <3
As always thank you for your sweet review. We greatly appreciate all of your awesome support BB! <3
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Date: 08 Dec 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved your very hot picture of Edward and Bella in the shower. Is that photshoped or did they pose for it. Yum
Author's Response:
ur welcome...xoxox Definitely photoshopped LOL......
Date: 08 Dec 2010 4:09 PM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
Ahhhhhh - what a bad timing for a cliffie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG, I so want to know Edwards new plan. And I think Ang is up to something, or better someone...
Hopefully Edward will find out about that. Maybe Rose will help, after she gets to know Kitten.
Thank you again for this new chapter.
Sabs
Author's Response:
IKR! We tried to tell Spartan that. But he woouldn't listen to us. And Ang is up to something'someone. But what and who? Edwards plan will be revealed soon. Rose will play a huge part in all this!
Thank you so very much for your most awesome review! We greatly appreciate all of your support!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 08 Dec 2010 3:47 PM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
Oh my God, that is the funniest shit I've ever read! What a Totally fucking great chapter. I'm still laughing.
Author's Response:
Aww I'm sooo glad it had ya laughin. My fav part to write was Goldie LOL. The fishy-suicide had me laughin so had I was cryin :)
Thank you so much for your fuck-awesome review! We really appreciate your support! DLIR is up next with her awesome sauce of a chapter!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 08 Dec 2010 3:40 PM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
That was another great chap. I've missed you. I've missed Edward and his obsession. Thanx for the dream and couch hump. That was fun.
E/k
Author's Response:
Aww Spartan has missed you also! <3
I couldn't stop myself from the whole humping of the couch LOL it was waaaaay to easy to write LOL.
DLIR is up next with her awesome chapter! We really appreciate all of your support BB! <3 Thanks for your awesome review.
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[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2010 2:14 PM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
Oh you were true to your word with an update. I loved it and can't wait for more. This ought to be very interesting.
Author's Response:
Very interesting indeed :) We're so glad you like it! DLIR is up next with her awesome chapter! Thank you for your review sweetie. We greatly appreciate your support!
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[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2010 1:19 PM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
Too funny Edward hiding under the bed!
Author's Response:
LOL I was goin have him dart into her closet...but thought he was already in one. So why not the bed LOL. We truely appreciate your support! Thanks for your review ;)
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 08 Dec 2010 9:57 AM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
great chapter I laughed most of that and though omg edward is such a guy.. HA HA HA.. loving it girls..
And Happy Birthday :)
Author's Response:
LOL Edward is such a guy :) I had a blast writing this chapter. We're so glad you like it! We really appreciate all of your support. Thanks so much for your review BB!
Thanks for DLIR B-Day wish :)
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 08 Dec 2010 8:18 AM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
now that was awesome....Ang must Go!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
:) aww thannk you BB! And yes Ang must go, like yesterday! We appreciate all of your support! Thanks so much for your review...
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Date: 08 Dec 2010 7:47 AM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
Please keep updating I love this story so much! Thanks :)
Author's Response:
DLIR is up next! And it's goin be good! We're so glad you really like our story. AKA our baby :)
Thank you for your review BB! We appreciate all your support.
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[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2010 7:30 AM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
wow... i laughed so hard... awesome chapter.. ty
Author's Response:
Good we're glad you like it :)
I've read the stupid thing over and over, and I still laugh at it. Thank you so, so much for your review!
We greatly appreciate your support <3
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Ari & DLIR
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2010 7:14 AM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
I'm glad Rose "slapped" some sense into Edward. He really just needs to end things with Angela. Its wonderful that Bella finally admitted to Edward that she needs him & he needs her. She has to tell him what happened with Eric.
Cock blocked?? Damn....there was going to be some major sexing going on if they hadn't been interrupted!
Really loved the update but could have done without the song lyrics. It was just a tad too much.
Cannot wait to see what Angela wants. Maybe she will do girl talk with Bella & confess her cheating so Edward can finally be rid of her!
Author's Response:
Rose/Em did knock a lil sense into him! :) Yes things would have gotten good if Ang didn't interrupt. Thank you so very much for your review! We really appreciate your support. <3
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 08 Dec 2010 6:59 AM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
OMG this is getting good.... Idea can ang have a car accident or something n just be gone from the story...lol or maybe I'll just leave the thinking to u
Author's Response:
LOL good idea! :) Ah yes it's just beginning. Lots more crazt stuff coming up! Thank you so much for you review! We appreciate your support.
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Ari & DLIR <3
Date: 08 Dec 2010 6:18 AM Title: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
omg, under the bed??????? surely there was a better place he could have hidden.!!!!! LOL LOL LOL
Author's Response:
LOL I'm sure there was, but that's the first place he thought to go! LOL Thanks for your review BB! Until next time.
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[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2010 7:51 AM Title: I fucking love swings
LOVE IT.. LOVE IT... LOVE IT :)
Love the sports sock especially - oh the thought... yummy!!!
Poor Bella... hopefully Eric is caught soon enough & she has FUN at Angela & Edward's house!!!!
GO FOR IT BELLA.... go get Edward :)
T2M x
Author's Response:
xoxoxooxoxx hehe sports sock....were updating tonight..................
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2010 9:30 PM Title: I fucking love swings
This is getting really good. Can't wait for future updates!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing...we love to see that people are enjoying it as much as we are writing....next chap is coming soon....DLIR AND ARI
Date: 05 Dec 2010 7:30 AM Title: I fucking love swings
i love the sport sock! cant wait to c what happens next
Author's Response:
I love the aports sock too....yes, its a running joke with me and the coworkers... and the next chap is gr8.....we will have it back and updated within a couple of days...xoxo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 05 Dec 2010 3:47 AM Title: I fucking love swings
well im glad that shes leaving him but i hope he dosnet do anything to her more! keep the chapters comming
Author's Response:
Thanks and yes he has more of a dark side that we havent discussed....The next chap should be up in a couple days...xoxox DLIR AND ARI
Date: 04 Dec 2010 7:50 PM Title: I fucking love swings
WOW, Eric has quite the temper...I didn't think he would destroy the house, and I can't wait to see what happens now that she is staying with Angela and Edward...uh, can you say awkward
Author's Response:
heheheh oh I cant wait....oh wait..i read it and know....hmmmmm Yes...I think you will LOVE it...heheh....should be up within a couple of days.,,..DLIR AND ARI
Date: 04 Dec 2010 3:30 AM Title: I fucking love swings
God love how u guys keep me all exited after every chapter just started reading this story today. Love it ... Now all I need is for ang to disappear n for E n B to be together :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much for reviewing...xoxoox we love u too....Ari chapter should be done in the next couple of days...hope u like the rest <3 DLIR AND ARI
Date: 03 Dec 2010 4:09 AM Title: I fucking love swings
LMAO.......SPORT SOCK!!!!!!!!! That would be Edward! Oh please dont make us wait for Chptr 11
i am on my knees beggin....please ;)
Author's Response:
*gigglesnort* for fucks sake get up.....oh wait your not eric......lol.....well we just finished tweeking ari chap...so some needed beta time and it will be up...and sports sock was funny....but let me tell u....Ari has her own tricks up her sleeve xoxox DLIR AND ARI
Date: 02 Dec 2010 5:43 PM Title: I fucking love swings
Yes, Way to go Bella finally getting brave enough to tell Eric she wanted a divorce! The whole naked Eric thing was pretty funny (sad but funny)
Now what is going to happen with her under the same roof as Spartan??? hummm should be interesting..
I love this story, very addictive for sure. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Heheh were glad ur addicted....and yes sad...but so funny u have to laugh...Hope u enjoy the next update DLIR AND ARI
Date: 02 Dec 2010 12:03 PM Title: I fucking love swings
your still really holding my attention with this story..
Quite hard to do at the moment as I am so flat out... well done :)
eric has lost it.....
Author's Response:
Were glad we still have u by the balls...hahah if u had them....hope u like the rest DLIR AND ARI