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Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 18

Well I hope that this dinner goes better than the last one did.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 17

I want an Edward!!! That was so sweet!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 16

How cute are those two kids! I wonder what Anthony has to say about Bella and Edward's kiss.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 15

They are so cute. It is a good thing that they are doing this because they both deserve to be happy again.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 14

Well how is that!! She has a date with Edward!! I wonder what everyone will say when they find out especially the kids.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 13

Awww... I think that Edward should go for it. I think that Bella would say yes.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 27

:)



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 27

Sorry to hear about your daughter. I hope she is alright. I hope Bella and Edward get brave enough to tell their feelings. They are showing them, but it is nice to hear. I love seeing the little kids all dressed up for Halloween.



Author's Response:

Thank you:) She's much better now than she was on Sunday.

Reviewer: Momof4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 27

Sorry to hear about your daugher, hope she is doing better. Love your stories.



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Thank you:) She's doing pretty good:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 12

I think that Anthony is kinna jealous that Alex has Bella and he feels left out. I really hope that he does things like holding her hand more because I am guessing that Bella isn't going to mind that at all!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 11

I wonder how long it is going to take the two of them to figure it out because everyone else is already steps ahead of them.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 10

It was good that they were able to get all of that off their chests because it would have made having a friendship between any of them hard.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 9

It is good that Bella is going to go out with the girls. I think that Alex and Anthony will have a good time with Edward.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 8

Well the parents seem to be getting along fine. I am cracking up at Esme though!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 7

I guess that it is a family trait with the Cullen's. That was a really interesting brunch and I don't know weather Bella will go back or not even if they beg her to go.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 6

Wow! It amazes me how little kids minds work. I wonder how my son is going to think about not having a dad later on in his life. While my story isn't like Bella's or Edward's  but his father still isn't here for him and that is terrible for a kid.



Author's Response:

I think it's all going to depend on how you raise him. My mom was a single mom and my dad wasn't very invovled in our lives. I don't feel like I've missed out on anything.

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 27

Glad your back Hon!   Still sending lots of love and prayers your way!  I truly hope your daughter is better!  

Now as far as Bella and Edward are concerned, they are seriously sexually frustrated, when it does happen, I know it will be epic!  I am in no rush.  I like the slow build, and speinding more time with the boys.  Can´t wait until they make it official and become a family.  Maybe when the kids go fishing with Grampa Charlie!  Lol!  Great Chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you, hon:)

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 27

THere is a lot sexual tension between lol they need some relief.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 5

It is sweet that Bella and Edward ar getting along and letting the boys spend time outside of school. I think that they need it.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 4

That is really sad that neither one of the boys really got to meet their other parent.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 3

So Alex's dad passed away too. Those kids have more in common than they should at that age but I guess that is good for their parents and them because they can be friends.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 2

That is really sad. So we now know what happened to Anthony's mom I wonder what happened to Alex's dad.

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 13

oohh they're so close! and i love that edward is reading her books!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 27

Aw...  short chapter, but too sweet.  I loved it.  Can't wait for more.  :)



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 27

That sounds like a family to me when are they going to tell each other they love each other????  I hope your daughter is doing good  my wish for health is with you.



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Thank you:) She's much better now than she was.

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 11

I love em and I love the dreams!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 9

I cried a little at the beginning I love this so much!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 6

I almost cried!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 5

HeyreTHey're alll so cute!

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 27

good chap



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 2

Poor Edward it seems like he's a little bit of a mess!

Reviewer: mialuvtwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

I realy love itso far!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well I guess that Alex is great at making friends quickly!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 27

lol, i never dreamed halloween would be so hard on a room mom...

thank goodness I refused when I was asked!!  YIKES!

Love it BB!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I was the sucker that said yes :(

Reviewer: Lil_rebel_devil Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 27

awwww sooo sweet lol x x



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 27

I love this story.  it is really sweet adn I can't wait to read what's next!

PS-I hope your daughter is okay.



Author's Response:

Thank you:) She's good now:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 26

Park and Pizza.   Great day

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 25

awww  the cookie thing is really sweet

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 26

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 26

I think the meeting went great.  I think Bella feels guilty that she is moving on.  She still love Brody but she loves Edward stronger.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 26

Bella needs to relax and realize that Alex is a well adjusted kid. He will be fine. Once she feels ready to tell him about Lauren, he will accept it. She will just be some one else to love. Kids are easy when they have been loved.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 26

Great chapter. I like that Christina girl that opens the gate everyday, LOL! And, Ninja Emmett!!! Priceless!!

And whatever you got going on in your personal life, you gotta take care of that first. We'll be here.  :)  *hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 26

That went better than expected.  Bella needs time I suppose.

Thank the stars she has Edward and Anthony.

*hugs*

Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 26

She extended an olive branch even though she was not totally comfortable.  Very grown-up of her!

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 26

Loved the chapter!

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 26

Another great night with the Swan-Cullen´s!  I hope they let the boys go fishing with Charlie, it was really sweet of him to refer to Anthony as his grandson too. They are so going to make the perfect family!  Great chapter Babe!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response: Thank you, Krazi ;)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 25

Aww... that ending was too sweet!  Glad the meeting with Lauren went well; I know    it´s hard for B to forgive her and just let it go, so I hope she does right by Alex.  The cookie baking was trully ´aww´ worthy, but Alex and Bella´s moment at the end swelled my heart the most.  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 25

I still dont feel sorry for Lauren.

But I can at least consider tolerating her

for Alex's sake.

I love family time with these four.  Its turly beautiful BB!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 25

awwwww so sweet.

Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 25

that was good it is time



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 25

:)



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 25

Awww.....

I have a feeling when the time comes for Edward to propose that lil Anthony will there too!

Very cute chapter, and I'm glad she met with Lauren and is forgiving her.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Lil_rebel_devil Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 25

aaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww!!!!

So sweet!!!

x x x



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 25

I wish I had such a good attitude making cookies with my kids and the mess they make!



Author's Response:

Ugh, I don't either!!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 24

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 24

:)  Glad that wasn't terribly drama-filled!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 24

I knew you would fix it, and FIX IT, you did!  That was hot and juicy, but still sweet.  I just love the story of these two.  Can´t wait for another sleepover!  Lol!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Told you!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 24

*wipes steam off of monitor*

Holy shit BB, that was fuckhot!!

I think that is my new word...

damnit Peter and his trashy mouth!

I love these kids, I am glad the misunderstanding didnt last long.

They need to get it on and get 'er done!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 24

Thank god he was able to stop her before she left.  Vic is a firy thing poor girl living in her dead sisters shadow her dad is a prick for not see what is in front of him.  Bella and Edward had a very interesting afternoon  wink :)



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 24

awww   Vikki not a bad guy.   Cool



Author's Response:

No, she's not:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 24

OME!!! I am just completely blown away!!

Vic, what a spitfire! LOL!

Then... holy hotness! When these two make love for the first time they're gonna set off a fire alarm!! ;)

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Thanks:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 24

I feel better now that you have explained Edward's actions. He is not a jerk...yah!  Poor Vic though, that is sad.

i can't wait to read the next chapter and see what happens next for these two.



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 23

Yay! Huge congrats to Bella!!

But uh, excuse me, who's this 'Vic' and why is 'her hand on his chest'???? WTF??!!??



Author's Response:

Hmm, perhaps I should post the next chapter.....

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 23

Who is Vic?  Is Edward really not perfect?  No!!  Poor Bella (maybe, it could be a cousin or something, right?  A good friend?  An older forgotten about sister?  I'm just trying not to jump to conclusions!).

Can't wait for you to update!



Author's Response:

lol, I promise to explain:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 23

WTF?



Author's Response:

All will be explained...

Reviewer: Lil_rebel_devil Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 23

omg thats all i can say lol xx



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 23

leave it to edward to fuck it up cant wait to see what happens next



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 23

Aaaaaaaaaaaa!  WHAT WAS THAT! NOTICE THE SHOUTY CAPITALS!   I did not see that coming.  You could have warned me.  I thought we were friends!  Sheesh!  I know your going to fix this, you would never hurt Alex and Anthony on purpose.  Keeping that thought at the forefront of my mind, gives me the courage to go on.  Your a sneaky little Butterfly!  Great chapter inspite of... !  Lol!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Wow, Shouty capitals and all....I am sneaky but you know me better than that, don't you? Next chapter will be up tomorrow. Maybe even tonight, if I feel inspired:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 23

:)



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 23

OH nooooo not another women vic has to be Anthonys Aunt????  Everything was going so good.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 23

hmmm   hopefully vik is a cousin or something......



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 23

*leaving love*

I really dont like misunderstandings.

Damnit Vickie!



Author's Response:

It's all good, baby. Just calm down!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 23

Bella knows in her heart that their is nothing on between Edward and Victoria. She knows Edward and she knows what his family has said about him. She better not let her imagination get away with her. She should have stayed and be brave.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: kvgamble Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 23

Must be Anthony's aunt. But I would be mad too he she touched him like that. Update soon



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 23

He surre is familiar with "Vic"!  Even if she is a relation of Sarah's or something, she was trying to mark him with a hand to his chest and she wasn't very nice.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 22

Wonderful and the boys are so cute..



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 17

I know I should be reviewing more, but I can't stop reading!  I am really enjoying your story!



Author's Response:

Thank you, hon:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 22

:)



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 6

I love it when children get these "crazy" ideas!



Author's Response: Aren't they fun?

Reviewer: Chicsarah Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 5

This is a really cute, happy story.  Just what I was looking for!  I love that Edward and Bella having been living parallel lives -- I can't wait until they merge...



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 22

As usaual, I loved this chapter!  They are so sweet together!  Cna't wait for the next chapter and to see what Bella does about Lauren.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 22

This chapter was so ... awww .... worthy!  Those little boys are just the sweetest, and I love how Edward and Bella refer to them as ´ours´.  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 22

OMG!!!!!!!!!!  How freaking beautiful!!

I love this formed family.

Its like they were meant to be together, boys and all.

BB, you are THEE SHIT!

*hugs*



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 22

Well one of them figured it out. One more to go.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 22

He has figured it out he loves her now it is her turn .  nice action in the kitchen lol



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 22

I am just sitting her smiling because you painted such a pretty picture



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 22

NOOOOOOO Not Camp Rock....my daughter was addicted to that movie for awhile.



Author's Response:

lol, so was mine!!

Reviewer: Kittrell-GarciaLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 22

Awww! I'm loving this story more and more with each chapter I read!



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Reviewer: kvgamble Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 22

so cute



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 21

Well, the drama with Lauren could've gone worse. I just wish Bella wouldn't act the way she does sometimes, like when Angela tried to lend her a sympathetic ear and she just gave her and the rest of the ladies a cold shoulder. Edward was great in this chapter. What happened to Emmett though? LOL Thought the boys were with him at first, and then when Bella went to play Skeeball with Edward and the boys, there was no mention of him.  :'(  LOL!

Oh yeah, and I'm thinking Alex got his b-day wish a little early? LOL!



Author's Response:

Emmett went to steal some tickets from the other kids ;) And you have to understand that Bella isn't used to being around people. She doens't do very well with them.

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 21

As usaual, so sweet! Can;t wait to se what is next for these two!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 21

Yeah for Edward stepping up again



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: velvetwhispers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 21

good one



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 21

It is time for Bella to let go and forgive.



Author's Response:

Definately, but it's easier said than done.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 21

:)



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 21

I think she handled the situation well considering what a shock that must have been.  And I give Lauren credit too for leaving when she did.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 21

I can understand why Bella kept Alex away from Lauren. It was probably the best thing for all. I think that know that she has cleaned up her act. Bella can slowly talk to Alex about her since he has met her. They can slowly build a relationship. Bella is stronger now that she has Edward and Alex is old enough to talk. He can say if something is not going right. At some point he is going to have to know his whole paternal family history. He will need to know about the alchohol problem so he won't develop one himself.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 21

GASP!

Holy hot horse shit Batman!!  Lauren is waist deep in it now!

How could she say that??  She deserved to live with that guilt!

*grumbles*

I love these kids, BB, thank you for writing them :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 21

I did enjoy it!  Squee!  The drama was necessary given the circumstances.  Hmmm ... Edward spends the night ... interesting!  Lol!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 20

dun dun dun........

Yep, totally loving the story so far!  :)



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Thanks:)

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