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Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 20

I smiled the entire time I read this chapter!  It was so cute and I can't wait to read what's going on with Lauren!



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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 20

:)



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 20

Oh no Lauren. I hope Bella is ready for her. Lauren better not go up to Alex. I am glad that Edward is with Bella.



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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 20

Was wondering when Lauren was going to rear her head again.



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Reviewer: Belladonna88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 20

Wonderful Story..Very well writtem...Keep up the great writing!

I look forward to reading the next chapter :)



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 20

That was cute.  Charlie took it well and is happy for Bella.  The last person Bella wants to see I cant wait to see what happens.



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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 20

well leave to her to finally be happy and something alwyas comes up! keep the chatpers comming



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Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 20

Whoa!  Didn´t see that coming!  Your sneaky. I wonder how Bella will react? Will she introduce Alex, or maybe not this time? Great chapter as always!

 

krazi

xoxo



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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 20

You having fun with this story, makes it so much better for us having fun with it too!!!

I love it!

 

Even though you DID leave a cliffie.

*grumbles*

I hope she doesnt ruin what the kids are just getting around to figuring out.

*imagines taking out Lauren*

Love it, BB!

*hugs*



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Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 20

It looks like Bella does have a hurdle to jump before she can truly move on.  I am loving Charlie!



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Charlie's a riot!

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 19

Ha! Dinner at the Cullen´s always a great event. I just love little Ivy, and how Alex is taking to Nana  and Papa. This story is so awesome! Great Chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 19

OMG, beautiful!!

BB, I love it!

You can't help but love these kids!

*hugs*



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Reviewer: EvernightressIris Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 19

awwwww



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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 18

*giggles uncontrolably*

OMG, out of the mouths of babes!  :)

*hugs*



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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 17

Yay, awesome!!

Take some pointers from the little ones, dears!

*smiles fondly at Ed and B*

Loved it BB!!

*hugs*



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Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 19

Aww...so cute Ivy was so taken with Bella again. Bella seems to be great with kids. And glad dinner was not as akward this time around, LOL! Poor Em, getting smacked on the back of the head - again! ROFL!!

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 19

Dinner was great once thing got out in the open it was excepted because it is ment to be



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Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 19

I like Bella.  It takes a brave person to chance enduring another awkward evening and meal!  I'm gald Edward at least recognizes that she is special.  Charlie has some personality too which is nice to see!



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 19

This was such a sweet chapter.



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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 19

:)



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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 19

awww  nice dinner



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Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 18

ROFL!!! High-five, Anthony!! ROFL!! I also enjoy the thought of seeing Edward skip to his car as he's leaving Mary's lil flower shop!! Too bad Em didn't see him, LMAO!!

;)



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Em would have never had let him live it down!!

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 18

I couldn't help but smile  when I read this chapter.  You did a great job writing it and I can't wait to read about dinner with the fam!



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Thank you:) It was one of my favorites:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 18

:)



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Thank you for alll the reviewS:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 17

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Date: 27 Nov 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 16

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Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 18

Ha!  These two just crack me up, they are so frigging cute!  And the boys are just amazing.  Great chapter as always!

 

Krazi

xoxo



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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 15

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 14

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 13

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 12

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 9

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 18

That was cute I love what Anthony said Im only five and even I knew you liked her".  It is true you cant hid that shit from little ones they can feel it



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Very true

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 7

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 6

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 5

:)



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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 4

;)



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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 3

:)



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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 2

:)



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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

:)



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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 18

Anthony is too cute



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Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2010 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 17

Well, how sweet is that??!



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Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 17

Pure awesomeness! Way to go, Alex and Edward! hee hee  ;)



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Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2010 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 17

Alex is such a little charmer!  His encounter with Mary was just too cute for words, it had me in tears.  Anthony is a riot too, apparently he´s been schooling Edward on how to make Bella his girlfriend.  These two are just the sweetest!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



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Thank you:) I smiled the whole time I wrote this chapter.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 17

Alex was so cute in the flower shop melt my heart.  Edward wants her as his girlfriend he did a good job lol



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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2010 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 17

blue roses...yummy



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:) Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2010 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 16

People need to leave them alone and let this happen at their pace.



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Yes, they do:)

Reviewer: LissLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2010 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 16

aahw.. that last part about the flower is so sweet! (L)

I can't wait till your next chapter, so you better get going! (but, no pressure!)

xLiss



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lol, as long as there is no pressure:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 16

Awwww...  That was so sweet.  I´m just so in love with this story!  Alex and Anna are going steady, how adorable.  Rose was a hoot as usual.  Okay, now for more sweet kisses.  Lol! Great chappie!

 

Krazi

xoxo



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Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 15

Ha ha! Well here´s a litte snack, hope it tides you over.  Lol!  The date is going perfectly, and you ended it well.  Wow, that was really touching, the part about Esme being sick and all.  Can´t wait to read Bella´s thoughts on their first kiss.  The little Rascals romance between Anna and Alex is too cute!  Great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



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Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2010 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 16

Aww! Buying Anna a flower, LOL! Way too cute!

Thanks for another great chapter!

I wonder if she'll make Edward sleep on the couch if he sleeps over for Alex's birthday??!! Hmm... ;)



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Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 16

:)



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2010 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 16

How sweet is that.  Kissed and kissed again Love it. 



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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 16

those boys are just too cute



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Aren't they?

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2010 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 16

OMG that was beautiful BB!!!

So cute... I love it!

*hugs*



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Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 15

I keep imagining Sarah and Brody watching them and smiling. 



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I think they are too!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 15

OMG!  Yay!!!

*hugs*



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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 15

awww he is so cute.



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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 14

*sighs dreamily*

Once again, in the world of the Cullen clan and Bella, EVERYONE sees what those two stubborn blockheads can't... They are a match made in heaven.

*giggles*

Esme is a sneaky cheeky monkey, eh? lol, that was mom-awesomeness.

*hugs*



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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 15

I am so happy for them. I wish they would relax and just enjoy each others company.



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Reviewer: VampireEv Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 15

yay!!!!



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Thank you:) Took them long enough, huh?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 15

That was so sweet first kiss



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Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 14

Ha ha! No problem, it turned out great anyway.  I just love how the kids are on cupid patrol too.  Actually, everyone is.  Esme in the grocery store hmm... That was... awkward, but fun.  What does that say about me?  Lol!  Great Chapter!

 

krazi

xoxoxo



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Thank you:) I heart Esme:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 14

*LOUD ROAR OF APPLAUSE*

You smooth talker, Edward! That sounded more like an invite to hang out again, but it worked! Bella realizes it's a date! Way to go!

Another totally cute chapter! Can't wait for the date! :)



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They are so awkward, aren't they?

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 14

Once again, I loved it! can't wait to read the next chapter!!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 14

The kids are smart they know better how adults feel about each other than they do.  Esme should of just said jump his bone Bella he needs  it.  Cant wait for the date



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lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 14

Those boys are just too cute. 



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Aren't they? I love them:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 13

awwww cute first non-date.   lol    Stinky wolves....had to sneak that in huh?



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I did:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 12

hmmm me thinks the boys are trying to be sneaky.



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They are sneaky boys...

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 11

the flashbacks are cute



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 14

I like that Bella tells people what's on her mind, like with Esme and Emmett.



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Thank you:) I get tired of weak Bella who let's everyone push her around, you know?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 10

Glad she went out.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 9

awww  eddie is so sweet



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I wish we all had us an Eddie...

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 8

lol  for facebook friends



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:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 7

Em is such a goober.



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Yes, he is!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 6

ahhh  that explains Lauren.  



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 5

Glad she let him play soccer.  I get the impression she is extremely overprotective.



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Yes, she is.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 4

ahhh that explains Alex's dad.



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 3

hmmm   a partial peek at Bella's story. hmm   Guessing that The dad was either cheating with lauren or she just "stole" him from her and she did something stupid and the dad died.

Although if Lauren is just the step mom, dunno if I would consider her family or not. depends on the circumstances.



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Thanks:) Answer come inthe next couple of chapters:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 2

well we see why eddie is single...



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Yep:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

looks interesting hun.  dont know how you find the time and mind power to write these completely different stories.,



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lol, I don't either:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 13

I loved this chapter, it was very sweet! Great job.  Can't wait for the next one!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 13

Edward being Edwaard, he's WAY overthinking this!  They have sort of been dating without the actual intent of dating, if that makes sense!  Thank you for properly representing the inflated cost of zoo food.



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lol, no problem;)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 13

Beautiful!

Yay!!!

*hugs*



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: Kittrell-GarciaLove Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 13

Ok, this story is insanely cute & I cannot wait for an update. Great writing!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 13

Yes great time at the zoo please hurry and ask her out



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lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 13

Aww!! I was smiling the whole time I was reading this chapter! Luv'd it!

 

You can do it, Edward...ask her out! :)



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This was one of my favorite chapters of the whole story so far!

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 13

Awwww... that was just adorable.. I am so in love with these two!! The zoo was a great day!!! great chapter!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 12

Sorry I´m such a spaz! I commented on this chapter in the other review as well, but I fail to mention Edward reading Bella´s books made me piss myself! lol let´s head to the zoo!!!! great chapter!!!

 

Krazi

xoxo



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lol,it's all good! Thanks:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 11

lol. I know how Bella feels, the first time my son was away, I was a wreck and he was with my brother. lol. I felt bad for Anthony, he wanted Bella to hold him too. Thankfully, she offered to make him waffles for hugs, and Alex following Edward´s lead was too cute. Alex telling Emmett he was big was hilarious. I really love this story!!! great chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxoxo



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 13

They are so perfect together. They are both ready to date. They will make a cute family.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 12

Aww, way way cute! I'm smiling so big right now! :D

CUTE CHAPTER ALERT!



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lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 12

*reviews to definitely keep you happy*  ;)

Always showing some love for you darlin'!

*hugs*



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Thank you, hon:)

Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 12

I'm trying to figure out if the boys have decided that they should be a family!  They seem to miss having 2 parents.  It would be interesting to see them fight off potential suitors for either Edward or Bella...



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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 12

Poor Bella I know the first time the kids spend the night at someones house I am the one that has a tough time LOL.  I think they are going to have a great day.



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Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 12

This story is so cute and enjoyable!  I can't wait to read the next chapter.  Keep up the great work!



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Reviewer: EvernightressIris Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 11

awwwww right more, type it, whteva but this is seriously good i wonder wht will happen? will bella end up tipsy and kiss edward or will thy both realise it when both the boys r outside or something now im reallllllllllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy like WHAT WILL HAPPEN!



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lol, thanks:)

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