Date: 29 Nov 2010 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 20
I smiled the entire time I read this chapter! It was so cute and I can't wait to read what's going on with Lauren!
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Date: 29 Nov 2010 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
:)
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Date: 29 Nov 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh no Lauren. I hope Bella is ready for her. Lauren better not go up to Alex. I am glad that Edward is with Bella.
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Date: 29 Nov 2010 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 20
Was wondering when Lauren was going to rear her head again.
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Date: 29 Nov 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wonderful Story..Very well writtem...Keep up the great writing!
I look forward to reading the next chapter :)
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Date: 29 Nov 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 20
That was cute. Charlie took it well and is happy for Bella. The last person Bella wants to see I cant wait to see what happens.
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Date: 29 Nov 2010 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 20
well leave to her to finally be happy and something alwyas comes up! keep the chatpers comming
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Date: 29 Nov 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 20
Whoa! Didn´t see that coming! Your sneaky. I wonder how Bella will react? Will she introduce Alex, or maybe not this time? Great chapter as always!
krazi
xoxo
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Date: 29 Nov 2010 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 20
You having fun with this story, makes it so much better for us having fun with it too!!!
I love it!
Even though you DID leave a cliffie.
*grumbles*
I hope she doesnt ruin what the kids are just getting around to figuring out.
*imagines taking out Lauren*
Love it, BB!
*hugs*
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Date: 29 Nov 2010 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 20
It looks like Bella does have a hurdle to jump before she can truly move on. I am loving Charlie!
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Charlie's a riot!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
Ha! Dinner at the Cullen´s always a great event. I just love little Ivy, and how Alex is taking to Nana and Papa. This story is so awesome! Great Chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
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Date: 28 Nov 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 19
OMG, beautiful!!
BB, I love it!
You can't help but love these kids!
*hugs*
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Date: 28 Nov 2010 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 19
awwwww
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Date: 28 Nov 2010 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 18
*giggles uncontrolably*
OMG, out of the mouths of babes! :)
*hugs*
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Date: 28 Nov 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yay, awesome!!
Take some pointers from the little ones, dears!
*smiles fondly at Ed and B*
Loved it BB!!
*hugs*
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Date: 28 Nov 2010 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 19
Aww...so cute Ivy was so taken with Bella again. Bella seems to be great with kids. And glad dinner was not as akward this time around, LOL! Poor Em, getting smacked on the back of the head - again! ROFL!!
;)
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Date: 28 Nov 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 19
Dinner was great once thing got out in the open it was excepted because it is ment to be
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Date: 28 Nov 2010 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
I like Bella. It takes a brave person to chance enduring another awkward evening and meal! I'm gald Edward at least recognizes that she is special. Charlie has some personality too which is nice to see!
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Date: 28 Nov 2010 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
This was such a sweet chapter.
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Date: 28 Nov 2010 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 19
:)
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Date: 28 Nov 2010 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 19
awww nice dinner
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Date: 28 Nov 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 18
ROFL!!! High-five, Anthony!! ROFL!! I also enjoy the thought of seeing Edward skip to his car as he's leaving Mary's lil flower shop!! Too bad Em didn't see him, LMAO!!
;)
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Em would have never had let him live it down!!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 18
I couldn't help but smile when I read this chapter. You did a great job writing it and I can't wait to read about dinner with the fam!
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Thank you:) It was one of my favorites:)
Date: 27 Nov 2010 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
:)
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Thank you for alll the reviewS:)
Date: 27 Nov 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 18
Ha! These two just crack me up, they are so frigging cute! And the boys are just amazing. Great chapter as always!
Krazi
xoxo
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Date: 27 Nov 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
That was cute I love what Anthony said Im only five and even I knew you liked her". It is true you cant hid that shit from little ones they can feel it
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Very true
Date: 27 Nov 2010 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 5
:)
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Date: 27 Nov 2010 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
;)
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Date: 27 Nov 2010 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 3
:)
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Date: 27 Nov 2010 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 2
:)
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Date: 27 Nov 2010 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
:)
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Date: 27 Nov 2010 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
Anthony is too cute
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Date: 26 Nov 2010 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 17
Well, how sweet is that??!
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Date: 26 Nov 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 17
Pure awesomeness! Way to go, Alex and Edward! hee hee ;)
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Date: 26 Nov 2010 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 17
Alex is such a little charmer! His encounter with Mary was just too cute for words, it had me in tears. Anthony is a riot too, apparently he´s been schooling Edward on how to make Bella his girlfriend. These two are just the sweetest! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
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Thank you:) I smiled the whole time I wrote this chapter.
Date: 26 Nov 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 17
Alex was so cute in the flower shop melt my heart. Edward wants her as his girlfriend he did a good job lol
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Date: 26 Nov 2010 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 17
blue roses...yummy
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:) Thank you:)
Date: 26 Nov 2010 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 16
People need to leave them alone and let this happen at their pace.
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Yes, they do:)
Date: 26 Nov 2010 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 16
aahw.. that last part about the flower is so sweet! (L)
I can't wait till your next chapter, so you better get going! (but, no pressure!)
xLiss
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lol, as long as there is no pressure:)
Date: 25 Nov 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 16
Awwww... That was so sweet. I´m just so in love with this story! Alex and Anna are going steady, how adorable. Rose was a hoot as usual. Okay, now for more sweet kisses. Lol! Great chappie!
Krazi
xoxo
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Date: 25 Nov 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
Ha ha! Well here´s a litte snack, hope it tides you over. Lol! The date is going perfectly, and you ended it well. Wow, that was really touching, the part about Esme being sick and all. Can´t wait to read Bella´s thoughts on their first kiss. The little Rascals romance between Anna and Alex is too cute! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
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Date: 25 Nov 2010 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 16
Aww! Buying Anna a flower, LOL! Way too cute!
Thanks for another great chapter!
I wonder if she'll make Edward sleep on the couch if he sleeps over for Alex's birthday??!! Hmm... ;)
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Date: 25 Nov 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 16
:)
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Date: 25 Nov 2010 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 16
How sweet is that. Kissed and kissed again Love it.
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Date: 25 Nov 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 16
those boys are just too cute
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Aren't they?
Date: 25 Nov 2010 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
OMG that was beautiful BB!!!
So cute... I love it!
*hugs*
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Date: 24 Nov 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 15
I keep imagining Sarah and Brody watching them and smiling.
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I think they are too!
Date: 24 Nov 2010 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 15
OMG! Yay!!!
*hugs*
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Date: 24 Nov 2010 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 15
awww he is so cute.
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Date: 24 Nov 2010 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 14
*sighs dreamily*
Once again, in the world of the Cullen clan and Bella, EVERYONE sees what those two stubborn blockheads can't... They are a match made in heaven.
*giggles*
Esme is a sneaky cheeky monkey, eh? lol, that was mom-awesomeness.
*hugs*
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Date: 24 Nov 2010 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 15
I am so happy for them. I wish they would relax and just enjoy each others company.
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Date: 24 Nov 2010 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 15
yay!!!!
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Thank you:) Took them long enough, huh?
Date: 24 Nov 2010 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 15
That was so sweet first kiss
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Date: 24 Nov 2010 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 14
Ha ha! No problem, it turned out great anyway. I just love how the kids are on cupid patrol too. Actually, everyone is. Esme in the grocery store hmm... That was... awkward, but fun. What does that say about me? Lol! Great Chapter!
krazi
xoxoxo
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Thank you:) I heart Esme:)
Date: 24 Nov 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 14
*LOUD ROAR OF APPLAUSE*
You smooth talker, Edward! That sounded more like an invite to hang out again, but it worked! Bella realizes it's a date! Way to go!
Another totally cute chapter! Can't wait for the date! :)
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They are so awkward, aren't they?
Date: 23 Nov 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 14
Once again, I loved it! can't wait to read the next chapter!!
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Date: 23 Nov 2010 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
The kids are smart they know better how adults feel about each other than they do. Esme should of just said jump his bone Bella he needs it. Cant wait for the date
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lol, thanks:)
Date: 23 Nov 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 14
Those boys are just too cute.
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Aren't they? I love them:)
Date: 23 Nov 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 13
awwww cute first non-date. lol Stinky wolves....had to sneak that in huh?
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I did:)
Date: 23 Nov 2010 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 12
hmmm me thinks the boys are trying to be sneaky.
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They are sneaky boys...
Date: 23 Nov 2010 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 11
the flashbacks are cute
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Date: 23 Nov 2010 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 14
I like that Bella tells people what's on her mind, like with Esme and Emmett.
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Thank you:) I get tired of weak Bella who let's everyone push her around, you know?
Date: 23 Nov 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 10
Glad she went out.
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Date: 23 Nov 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 9
awww eddie is so sweet
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I wish we all had us an Eddie...
Date: 23 Nov 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 8
lol for facebook friends
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:)
Date: 23 Nov 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
Em is such a goober.
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Yes, he is!
Date: 23 Nov 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 6
ahhh that explains Lauren.
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Date: 23 Nov 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
Glad she let him play soccer. I get the impression she is extremely overprotective.
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Yes, she is.
Date: 23 Nov 2010 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
ahhh that explains Alex's dad.
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Date: 23 Nov 2010 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 3
hmmm a partial peek at Bella's story. hmm Guessing that The dad was either cheating with lauren or she just "stole" him from her and she did something stupid and the dad died.
Although if Lauren is just the step mom, dunno if I would consider her family or not. depends on the circumstances.
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Thanks:) Answer come inthe next couple of chapters:)
Date: 23 Nov 2010 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
well we see why eddie is single...
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Yep:)
Date: 23 Nov 2010 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
looks interesting hun. dont know how you find the time and mind power to write these completely different stories.,
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lol, I don't either:)
Date: 23 Nov 2010 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 13
I loved this chapter, it was very sweet! Great job. Can't wait for the next one!
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Date: 23 Nov 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 13
Edward being Edwaard, he's WAY overthinking this! They have sort of been dating without the actual intent of dating, if that makes sense! Thank you for properly representing the inflated cost of zoo food.
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lol, no problem;)
Date: 23 Nov 2010 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 13
Beautiful!
Yay!!!
*hugs*
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Date: 23 Nov 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 13
Ok, this story is insanely cute & I cannot wait for an update. Great writing!
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Date: 22 Nov 2010 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 13
Yes great time at the zoo please hurry and ask her out
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lol, thanks:)
Date: 22 Nov 2010 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 13
Aww!! I was smiling the whole time I was reading this chapter! Luv'd it!
You can do it, Edward...ask her out! :)
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This was one of my favorite chapters of the whole story so far!
Date: 22 Nov 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 13
Awwww... that was just adorable.. I am so in love with these two!! The zoo was a great day!!! great chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxo
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Date: 22 Nov 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
Sorry I´m such a spaz! I commented on this chapter in the other review as well, but I fail to mention Edward reading Bella´s books made me piss myself! lol let´s head to the zoo!!!! great chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxo
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lol,it's all good! Thanks:)
Date: 22 Nov 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 11
lol. I know how Bella feels, the first time my son was away, I was a wreck and he was with my brother. lol. I felt bad for Anthony, he wanted Bella to hold him too. Thankfully, she offered to make him waffles for hugs, and Alex following Edward´s lead was too cute. Alex telling Emmett he was big was hilarious. I really love this story!!! great chapter!
Krazi
xoxoxo
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Date: 22 Nov 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
They are so perfect together. They are both ready to date. They will make a cute family.
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Date: 22 Nov 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 12
Aww, way way cute! I'm smiling so big right now! :D
CUTE CHAPTER ALERT!
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lol, thanks:)
Date: 22 Nov 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 12
*reviews to definitely keep you happy* ;)
Always showing some love for you darlin'!
*hugs*
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Thank you, hon:)
Date: 21 Nov 2010 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm trying to figure out if the boys have decided that they should be a family! They seem to miss having 2 parents. It would be interesting to see them fight off potential suitors for either Edward or Bella...
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Date: 21 Nov 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
Poor Bella I know the first time the kids spend the night at someones house I am the one that has a tough time LOL. I think they are going to have a great day.
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Date: 21 Nov 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 12
This story is so cute and enjoyable! I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
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Date: 20 Nov 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 11
awwwww right more, type it, whteva but this is seriously good i wonder wht will happen? will bella end up tipsy and kiss edward or will thy both realise it when both the boys r outside or something now im reallllllllllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy like WHAT WILL HAPPEN!
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lol, thanks:)