Date: 20 Dec 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 20
Bella should have sat down and talked to her family before she went to school. Sometimes Bella is not too smart. She knew she had to face them. Why would she want to face them for the first time at school.
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Date: 15 Dec 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 20
Well this is such a touching story. Look forward to the next update. Thanks for sharing
Date: 15 Dec 2010 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 14
This is such an amazing story. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you:)
Date: 13 Dec 2010 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 20
What a mess and the final line tore at my heart.
Author's Response:
Mine too!!
Date: 13 Dec 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 20
LOVE your story!!!!! cant wait for more!!!
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Thank you:)
Date: 12 Dec 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 10
she has every right to be a bitch until she feels like it.
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Thank you:)
Date: 12 Dec 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 20
you ended the chapter like THATT.. thats just evil..lol i cant wait for the next chapter nowww im obsesed
Author's Response:
Yes, I'm quite cruel ;)
Date: 12 Dec 2010 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great Chapter....
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Thank you:)
Date: 12 Dec 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 4
they were on vacation!! lol...not sure it could be a million reason how she wound up there. give me some time i will think of something.
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lol, deal:)
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2010 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 20
I am glad that she did not give in to her brothers needs to speak to her, they should have though of their actions, blood is thicker than water, and even though Bella does not share the same blood as Emmett and Jasper, they are her brother in her mind. So to her they are blood.
I am glad that Bella is making small steps, I just hope she really opens up to her family. No more pussy footing around. She needs to grab the bull by the horns and hold on tight. She needs to set the record straight with Esme, Carlisle, Jasper and Emmett and they really need to hear what she is saying not just listen. That is what I would like to see in the next chapter.
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Thank you:)
Date: 12 Dec 2010 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 20
esta biem pero creo que ya debe tratar de hablar con jasper y Emmet y regresar a su casa y con la ayuda de su familia empesar acomponer su vida
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Date: 12 Dec 2010 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 20
i have to giggle at edward with justin bieber cd......but great chapter.......
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Thank you:) I couldn't resist putting that in ;)
Date: 12 Dec 2010 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 10
realmente yo no vreo que Bella sea mala yo creo que esta defendiendo la unica familia que ella conoce, lo siento por los Swan pero ella es una Cullen ahora
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Thank you:)
Date: 12 Dec 2010 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow that was a big step. I hope that she is able to get past the hurt that she feels.
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Thank you:) Huge step!
Date: 12 Dec 2010 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 20
:)
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[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2010 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 20
I love this story its a fav of mine :D
hate your cliff hangers though :L it kills me to wait !!!
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Thank you and I am going to try not to make you wait too long. This update would have come sooner if I hadn't had a real life crisis.
Date: 11 Dec 2010 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 20
yea...school is not the place for those conversatins. They all need family counselling.
Poor B. Glad Edward and his family is there for her.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh man, that whole chapter makes my heart hurt...
I just want to hug them! Hug them all!!!
Love it BB@@@
*hugs*
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Thank you:)
Date: 11 Dec 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 20
OMG!! I have waited a long time for this chapter but let me tell you it was well worth the wait! What ever your doing keep doing it and please update soon!!!!
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Thank you:)
Date: 11 Dec 2010 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 20
well i hope for her brothers sake that she starts to forgive them but im glad that shes oepening up to charlie even if its a little!
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Thank you:)
Date: 11 Dec 2010 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
:)
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[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wow, it has taken me about 6 hours to read this story and I have to say that I love it. I am pimping your ass out baby.
The emotion you have put into this story is breathtaking. I really do feel sorry for Bella and as everyone was tearing her apart, I had tears come to my eyes.
I really can not wait for the update. I love it.
Fiorella
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Thank you so much:)
Date: 30 Nov 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 19
Great story so far :-)
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Thank you:)
Date: 29 Nov 2010 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 19
Bella is going to have to stop hiding. She needs to go back to her family. Carlisle and Esme love her so much. Therapy is what she needs to talk through all of her feelings. She will get through this, but she has to stop hiding.
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Thank you:)
Date: 29 Nov 2010 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 19
There right she needs to get it out or she is going to loose it again.
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 29 Nov 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
Edward is so good for her.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2010 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 19
OMG, I want Ed and Liz to be my parents!!!
Wait... I have already said that, havent I?
*clears throat*
Love it, BB!!! I hope she find a therapist that lets her hit a punching bag *winks*
Thank you VERY much for the FFL update *blushes*
*hugs*
Author's Response:
lol, Thank you:)
Date: 29 Nov 2010 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 19
I swear if every girl had an Edward Masen of her very own we would have a well-adjusted society!
Author's Response:
Wouldn't we? Thanks:)
Date: 29 Nov 2010 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 18
Can't wait to read more...hope she can find a balance to have both families part of her life
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Nov 2010 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 18
Bella needs to listen to them, but she also needs to tell them her needs.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2010 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
OMG I love Ed and Liz Masen!
I want them as MY PARENTS!
Loved the update BB!!!
Its still sad thinking of Elli...
*hugs*
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 17
Well look who pulled their heads out of their asses!!!
Jebezus! Took alost killing the poor girl to see they were tearing her apart.
Lub lub lub it BB!!!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Nov 2010 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 18
well that a kind of a teary chapter towards the end! i wonder which parents and cant wait to see what they have to say
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 27 Nov 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 18
Please tell me it is Esme and Carlisle or maybe it is all of them???
Author's Response:
Yes? ;)
Date: 27 Nov 2010 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
Great Chapter......
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Thank you:)
Date: 27 Nov 2010 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 18
OH .... which ones??? You are evil.. hahaha.. I love your version of Elizabeth. AND i love that Edward takes such good care of her. so sweet.
Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 27 Nov 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
hmmm which ones....or all of them. my guess would be the latter
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Thank you:)
Date: 27 Nov 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 17
Great Chapter......
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Thank you:)
Date: 26 Nov 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 17
Wow, Carlisle got pretty harsh there, glad they resolved it peacefully.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Nov 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 17
well its about time they start to think of bella and not them selfs!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Nov 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 17
Please update soon. I can't wait to see how Bella handles this.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Nov 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 17
Good job Sam I love the way he told them to back the hell off. The talk is something they needed to do bad. Angela needs help with her issue of hating Bella when she thought she was dead and now that she knows she is alive. I think it is a good idea that they all get to know each other.
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Thank you:)
Date: 26 Nov 2010 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 17
The Swan's are finally realizing that they are strangers to Bella. It does not matter what the blood test says. They needs to become friends first. They can not expect to become family instantly. They say they love her well they love the idea of her. They do not know Bella. They love the memory on Isabella.
Author's Response:
Very well said:)
Date: 26 Nov 2010 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 17
Go Sam...Tell em off. Gladd edward is there for her.
about time.....for the ending
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Nov 2010 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 16
Heh. I'm glad he told off Emmett. Hopefully now everyone will start to get their heads out of their asses.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 25 Nov 2010 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 16
Go Edward go I am so glad he told them. Thank god she did not fall
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Thank you:)
Date: 25 Nov 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 16
OH, that is so sad. At least she has him.
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Date: 25 Nov 2010 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 16
great chapter.....
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2010 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
I just wanted to say Happy Thanksgiving BB!
And thank you for your beautiful writing!
And sorry I forgot to rate Ch. 16 on AWK. But, as always, a totall over 10! :)
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you:) Happy Thanksgiving to you, too!
Date: 25 Nov 2010 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 16
Go eddie. About time everyone heard what bella is feeling like. And all at the same time.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2010 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 16
I knew it, I just fucking KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Damn Swans!
I should just throw a kick ball and nail Coach Swan right in the nads!
Renee Swan can get flighty and fly right off a cliff!!!
Angela Swan just needs her ass beat severly by some bigger kids.
Emmett and Jasper Cullen need to be grounded and have a stern talking to.
Poor Bella. Jesus, can you imagine going through that as a teenager? Being pulled all different directions and getting flack from each person for doing what you thought was right.
Imagine being 17 and being through all that Bella has been.
Its time to lay some smack down, and Edward is just the person to do it.
*hugs*
Author's Response: LMAO, thank you for the review, I really enjoy all of yours more than you will ever know. They make me smile and laugh:)
Date: 25 Nov 2010 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 16
Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story is amazing!
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Thank you:)
Date: 25 Nov 2010 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 16
OH THANK GOD.. you posted this today.. My Thanksgiving can continue.. ha ha ha .. I am so glad she has him.
This was a wonderful surprise for my Thursday. I hope you have a wonderful Thanksgiving...(If you celebrate.. and if you don't..well. enjoy some turkey?)
Thanks...Great Chapter.
Author's Response:
Happy Thanksgiving to you, too!!!
Date: 25 Nov 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 15
AHHHHHHHH! Update soon! PLEASE!
Author's Response:
I will, very soon:)
Date: 25 Nov 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 15
That's just wrong endingit there. :(
Author's Response:
I promise to give you more.
Date: 25 Nov 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 15
It felt like it was building to something big. Was Edward really the only one who felt that? Didn't any of the others see what they were pushing her to? I hope Edward has fast reflexes and can get her!
Author's Response:
I don't think they wanted to see it.
Date: 24 Nov 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 15
NOOOOOO she cant fall. Emmett and Jasper need there asses kick for treating her that way.
Author's Response:
I know, right!! Such jackasses!
Date: 24 Nov 2010 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 15
wow Em is really being an ass.
Author's Response:
Yes, he is:)
Date: 24 Nov 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 15
great chapter.....
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 14
Ah Dad time, then Ed time... Love it
*sigh* C'est l'amoure *bats eyelashes and swoons*
*hugs*
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Date: 24 Nov 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
They have got to go to therapy. Carlisle and Esme need to sit those boys down and talk to them. They are acting like brats to Bella. She needs their love now more than ever.
Author's Response:
They will, I promise:)
Date: 24 Nov 2010 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 15
Update soon. Please!!!!
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Thanks:)
Date: 24 Nov 2010 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 15
Damn I cried like a baby I love the story Emmett need an ass kicking for his comment to Bella cant wait till next chapter
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Thank you:)
Date: 24 Nov 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 15
HOLY SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT.. ... .... .... I am DYING.....I cried my eyes out this whole chapter.... I don't think I will make it through Thanksgiving if you don't update... I swear I wont... I am so sorry for not reviewing earlier, but I was just so into your story... Bella was pissing me off... Jasper and Emmett were assholes.... and Edward... well.. I guess he was the only cool one. BUT NOW..
How could Emmett say that to her... I was dying... that was horrible. I think I would have jumped too.... Seriously, I am a mess... I really need that next chapter if I am going to go cook Turkey for 35 people that I don't really like... ( HA HA HA ) kidding.. some are okay.. LOL.
Thanks for the wonderful story.. Don't be surprised if you have a blue coffee cup SOON.. lol.
Author's Response:
lol, Thanks and I promise an update soon:) Like very sooon, like well before you think there will be an update, there will be.
Date: 24 Nov 2010 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
Another great chapter. Emmett and Jasper need to get their head out their asses. They are hurting Bella much more then her biological family are.
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Thanks:)
Date: 24 Nov 2010 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 15
well i would of kicked emmetts ass and i hope esme and carlisle do that for her! keep the chahapters comming
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Thank you:)
Date: 24 Nov 2010 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 15
Eek! A literal cliffhanger!!! Poor Bella. I feel the urge to Gibbs Slap Emmett and Jasper.
Author's Response:
Nice NCIS refense:) I love Gibbs:)
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2010 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 15
oh no!!!!
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Thanks:)
Date: 24 Nov 2010 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
The day with her daddy was a good thing.
Author's Response:
Yes, she needed it:)
Date: 23 Nov 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 23 Nov 2010 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 14
well im glad that dad and daughter got to spend some time together cant wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 23 Nov 2010 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 14
After her conversation with Carlisle, he need to have a talk with those boys.
Author's Response:
Yes, he does.
Date: 23 Nov 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 13
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 23 Nov 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 13
I think it was a great thing that he opened up to her it explains why he is so compationate about what is going on for both sides.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
*wipes tears away*
Poor Edward! :(
Well, he is just trying to give Bella another perspective, not exactly trying to tell her which way to go.
Poor girl is gonna explode!
Lotsa Love BB!!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you, hon:)
Date: 22 Nov 2010 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 13
I loved learning about Edward's family. Bella and her family needs to go to therapy so they can talk this out. She is going through so many feelings at one time.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 Nov 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
awww Eddie is just too sweet
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 22 Nov 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 13
well i hope that him opening up to her will help her in the long run! keep the chatpers comming
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 Nov 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wow I didn't see that coming, I thought it was going to be his mom or something like that. Now I can see why he feels for Ben. Poor Bella is so twisted around right now. If they don't get her into counseling soon and I'm surprised they haven't done it already. She's going to seriously break. How is she suppose to know what's right anymore? Everyone has an opinion but it seems like no ones really listening to her. They all want her to feel this and that but have they stopped to think about how they would feel in her position? Yes many are hurting but no one is hurting like her. Esme and Carlisle should stop and realize that them saying she should be civil and except them and stating that she has other siblings is a big slap in the face. I mean did they stop to think that she would feel like they were throwing her of on the Swan's now. Like they are excepting they are not her parents and not seeing themselves as that any longer. Yes obviously that's not how it is but to a 17 year old child with with years of abandonment issues that probably how they are coming off. Also I really think that people are expecting too much too fast. She didn't even had a chance to process before people started coming in telling her how she should feel and what she should do.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 12
Man... damned if you do, damned if you don't.
Effin' Swans *grumbles profanities under breath*
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Nov 2010 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
well didnt see that one comming keep the chapters comming
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Thank you:)
Date: 21 Nov 2010 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 12
This would be a nightmare trying to juggle everyone's feelings along with your own.
Author's Response:
Wouldn't it?