Date: 17 Feb 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 25
LOL, leave it to Emmett to tell it like it is. I so love that big guy :)
Author's Response:
I love him too
Date: 17 Feb 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 24
Holy hell. I knew Bella was gonna be a bad ass bitch, but damn! That was a perfect way for her to wake up and protect her whole family. Awesome!
I love that Claire is a wolf too :)
Author's Response:
thank you!
Date: 17 Feb 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 23
Emmett saying, "Shiny, let's be bad guys!" was total win! In my Serenity/Twilight crossover Emmett was Jayne :)
That was an intersting peek into a few more POVs we haven't seen.
Well, once again you shock me by Jake recruiting help from real werewolves.
OMG, Jake is such an idiot. He's threatening all of her family (even the rest of the wolves) and she seems to be rather pissed. Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned or a woman protecting her family.
Author's Response:
I always saw Emmett as Jane when I think about Serenity lol and yes, Jake is an idiot!
Date: 17 Feb 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 22
I just knew Ben and Tia would be Leah and Seth's imprints. That is awesome. It's kinda cool that all of their venom will change her.
Author's Response:
they are a family after all
Date: 16 Feb 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 21
Okay, so Seth is upset that Bella hasn't been changed. I wonder if Leah is upset as well. Bella is breaking my heart. She needs to hurry up and let Edward change her before the angst kills me.
Author's Response:
Leah is more concerned on how her mom is doing than anything
Date: 16 Feb 2010 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
Nothing better than quality family time with the Cullens :)
Author's Response:
Nope! lol
Date: 16 Feb 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 19
So much to worry about. Hopefully Leah will be okay with Bella changing so she can still have her mom around.
What a way to find out Edward sparkles :)
Author's Response:
lol I know!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 18
Well, there you go. The only choice is to change her. Seth and Leah won't want to be without their mother.
Author's Response:
exactly! and thanks for reviewing every chapter so far!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 17
Ruh roh! The pups are about to fursplode. Now you've got me wondering if Seth will imprint on Tia. That would be awesome :)
Author's Response:
lol just wait and see!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 16
Jake is really starting to scare me. I'm glad Sam is thinking with a clear head and stepped in. Yeah, I can see Leah being the only obstacle in the way of the plan. Poor stubborn girl just wants her family to be together and normal. Maybe she will back down when she hears that Jacob could kill her mother.
I really should be working but I can't stop reading.
Author's Response:
Jake is one scary mofo in this, I can admit it and I can't blame Leah either, my parents had a nasty divorce as well, complete with stalking and restraining orders
Date: 16 Feb 2010 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 15
Yay! Edward and Bella finally fully reconnected. It was so perfect for them.
Dear Lord! What the hell is Jake up to now? I think you've done a great job portraing Jake the way he would've been if Edward had left in the books and not returned until many years later.
Author's Response:
except for the fact that Jake is slowly losing his mind, I hope lol
Date: 16 Feb 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
A restraining order for Bella against Jake makes very good sense. I wonder how Bella will react to the plane. I can't see her thinking wow, Edward can take care of us. She'd be more like, WTF? I'm really not good enough for him. *sigh* Good luck ever winning that battle, Eddie.
Author's Response:
lol I know!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 13
Nice, sneaky move with the restraining order, Bella. Jake is really pushing it. Thankfully Allen was there and knew what was going on. I bet it'll be good for Bella to have some human friends to vent with about vamps and wolves anytime she needs it.
Yay for Jasper and Emmett :)
Author's Response:
yeah, I had to find a way to put Allen and Mischa in another story, even if it was just a small part!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 12
Of course they are boyfriend/girlfriend :)
It really sucks when you want your mom and dad to be together. I guess Leah hasn't quite grasped the reality that Jake imprinted on that other girl and not Bella. Of course she might not comprehend that until she phases and actually imprints.
Author's Response:
that's how I saw it with her
Date: 16 Feb 2010 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 11
Well, it's easy to see that Lauren and Jessica get their bitchyness from their mommas.
What a way to end the chapter. I knew Edward was still deeply in love with Bella, I just didn't expect a marriage proposal so soon. Way to go Edward :)
Author's Response:
lol I wrote that like a week before New Moon came out on top of everything...had everyone telling me how I'd had an Alice moment
Date: 16 Feb 2010 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 10
How sad that she received the final papers on her divorce on Valentine's day. Edward did an awesome job making her Valentine's day good. Awe, Bella told him she loves him. Even though she was asleep it was still sweet.
Author's Response:
I thought he did good too!
Date: 15 Feb 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 9
I just knew Leah wouldn't put up with Tia's bitch attitude. I loved it. I couldn't help but smile at the things big Daddy C (I love that) said to Bella. He's such a good daddy :)
Of course they snuck a cell phone for Bella. I'm sure Leah and Seth have one too.
Oh yeah. They're both still deeply in love with each other.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked! and yes, Leah and Seth got phones too lol
Date: 15 Feb 2010 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 8
I knew Jake would freak out. I just couldn't believe he hit Bella. That was uncalled for. He's lucky the other guys were there to hold Edward back. Of course Seth seemed ready to rip his dad apart.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I knew that was going to get some mixed reviews, but he's kind of an asshole now and yes, he's very lucky the others were holding Edward back
Date: 15 Feb 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
So glad to see you here!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!!
Date: 15 Feb 2010 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
LOL, Bella handling Tia was awesome. Of course a mom of teenage twins wouldn't be intimidated by a teenage half vampire.
Author's Response:
Exactly!!!
Date: 15 Feb 2010 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 6
Tia's quite the little spitfire. Can't wait for Bella to wake up and see what happens.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I had to make Tia a spoiled brat
Date: 15 Feb 2010 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
Looks like Crowley's cousin got more than he bargained for. I wonder what exactly Edward did to him and his friends.
I just love Bella's snarky attitude.
Author's Response:
Lol I never tell. I love her attitude as well!
Date: 15 Feb 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well, that discussion went pretty well. I knew Edward would love her no matter what she looked like. I'm still waiting for Jake to blow up when he realizes there's been a famp in his kids' house.
Author's Response:
He blows up alright lol
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2010 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 34
Very Nice! I joined on this site just to make sure I could read your stories and you didn't disappoint! Keep writing!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! *hugs*
Date: 15 Feb 2010 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 3
That's an interesting way for the Cullens to become vampires. I wonder how Bella will take it when she finds out. I can't wait for the first time Jakes smells vamp at her house.
Author's Response:
I wanted to do something different with their changes
Date: 15 Feb 2010 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 2
Obviously Edward wasn't a vampire when he and Bella first dated. I'm very interested to find out what happened.
Author's Response:
nope, he was just an adorable human
Date: 15 Feb 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like where this story has started. Bella is far from perfect and I can't wait to see what happens when she sees Edward again. I wonder how the kids will react to the divorce.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you've enjoyed it and hope you continue to like my story