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Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 7

yep Edward is in trouble but he isn't the only one Bella is too!



Author's Response:

Got that right! Thanks!!

Reviewer: Iteachu4600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 19

I am loving this story now you don't draw out the angst to much.  I am reading to stories with long drawn out angst good to read a little fluff now and then.



Author's Response:

I've read a lot of angsty stories and many are very good, but you can only take so much before it drives you crazy! I don't like a lot of stress and really don't write it very well, so fluff with a little drama thrown in is what I do. (Hopefully a couple of laughs, as well!) Thank you for sharing your thoughts, I'm glad you're liking my story.

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 19

Ahhh, ya know I said in my last review I wondered if it was James....but have to say, honestly I did itsy-bitsy, teeny-weeny wonder if Mike was somehow involved!!  Way to throw us off the track!!  Sneaky author you!!

Loved the last two chapters!! Can't wait to see where they go from here and what on earth will Edward do for work now??!!  He is definitely not the stay at home type---he will drive Bella BONKERS!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad my sneakiness paid off... You're right, he would drive her crazy. Thanks for the kind words.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 19

whew! thank god she's ok! lol...he's gonna carry her around now and not let her lift a finger. Mike's going straight to jail right?

Author's Response:

Mike should be in the hospital for a while-dog bites can be serious!! :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 19

Oh Thank God she is ok.I love the "talk " Edward and Charlie had lol he is just being her dad and he loves her and so does Edward



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked that. You can thank my friend kiwibeme, she told me it needed to happen and I agree. I think it added a lot to the chapter in getting Edward's feelings across. Thanks!! :)

Reviewer: sherryjo Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 18

ah shit now come on , please dont make us wait forever, in other words love it



Author's Response:

I wouldn't do that to you! Thanks, I'm glad you like it. i appreciate yuo reviewing, too!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 18

Oh crap I never thought is was Mike  I just thought he was a creep ugh.I hope Esme got to her in time.I can't wait for Edward to come home .Loved it



Author's Response:

Good, I'm glad you didn't think it was him! thanks for reading and leaving me your thoughts!! 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 18

OMG, OMG, OMG!!! did he stab her in the leg??? or inject her with something???? please let her be ok! Edward is gonna go ballistic, nobody will be able to hold him back....

Author's Response:

LMAO-you crack me up! I know you're gonna find out, so I'll just say thanks for reading and leaving me a review!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 18

well leave it to herr to be all by her self and the stocker show up! cant wait to see her pov of what else happened keep the chatpers comming



Author's Response:

I know, right? LOL. thanks for reading and leaving me your thoughts!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 6

Awww... I think that things are going to be interesting for Edward while he back home.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to review! I hope you're enjoying my little story!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 5

Well it seems that Bella can hold her own when it comes to insults and that is a good thing. I wonder who the dog belongs to??



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you think so. It's important to stand up for yourself!  

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 4

Well it seems that neither Bella or Edward are buying into Alice's scheme to get them together. I am glad that Bella is making new friends.



Author's Response:

It would be nice to think that they are immune to Alice's plans. Thank you! 

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 3

Oh Alice is really up to something isn't she??



Author's Response:

Alice is sneaky! thanks!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 2

HaHa!!!! I bet Edward would like Bella to see his bed!!!



Author's Response:

LMAO! Thank you for R & R!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 1-Prologue

It is terrible that some people enter a marriage just to see it fail!! Those people make me sick sometimes because they really hurt the other person involved in it.



Author's Response:

You're right about that. Thanks for giving my story a shot and taking the time to review!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 17

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Thank you X 6!!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 16

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 15

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 14

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 13

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 12

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Thank you! :)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Thank you!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 9

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 7

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 6

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 5

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 4

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 3

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THank you!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 2

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Thank you!

Reviewer: Twilightfan85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 17

pls continue soon!!! pls!! i really want to know what happends next so pls hurry and continue soon!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you like it! Updating on Tuesday!

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 17

I think it was a great chapter.  I am glad that Emmett told Edward about what was going on. He needs to know even if he is thousands of miles away.  I feel bad because they both want to say I love you but other things keep getting in the way of that.  Poor Bella now the person knows where she lives too. 



Author's Response:

Thank you. I agree that he needed to be told, he would've been really pissed, otherwise. Yeah, all the drama kept them from declaring themselves. Maybe next chapter? :) Thanks for reading and reviewing! I love your username btw! 

Reviewer: kittylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 1-Prologue

I am loving this story so much!  It's a wonderful change for Edward to be something other than a student or a CEO.  I love the fact he has an exciting job.  Now don't get me wrong I still want him to come home....I worry about his safety.  Your Bella is a real woman - she's mature and thinks logically.  Looking forward to the update Tuesday.



Author's Response:

Thank you, that is exactly what I was going for! I appreciate you reviewing! See you Tuesday!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 17

shit, wish they coudl have gotten their I love you's  said.....  Please promise me next chapter they get to say I love you !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

It's coming! LOL! thanks for reading and leaving a review!!

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 17

That was tense, and full of angst, but I absolutely loved it!  I really think it´s James sending the flowers.  When she had dinner with Angela, she said,¨that he loved her in his own sick and twisted way, because Bella wasn´t just another name in his notebook.¨ So, my stalker vote goes to James, but I know Edward is leaving Twilight for Bella;  I just hope he gets home in time!  Great chapter!

 

krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

You're the only one who picked up on that. Well, and said something about it. But, You'll find out on Tuesday! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know what you think!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 1-Prologue

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks! I hope you like the rest!

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 16

Great!!  I loved it!!  You done good.



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you very much!

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 17

God Edward GO HOME!!! Please get them back together soon!! :)



Author's Response:

LOL! Thanks for reading and leaving me a review!  (soon) ha!

Reviewer: shedevil Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it i cant wait for you to get the new update up.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Look for it on Tuesday!

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 17

Thank for the update. I love the way the story is going!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I appreciate you reading and taking the time to review!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 17

Bella held it together pretty good.  Is Bella's ex wanting to reclaim what he thought was his????  Or is it one of her students wanting to be with her????



Author's Response:

Yes. I don't like whiny, helpless Bella. I tried to write her as independant and strong. ? Hope I achieved that. I'm not saying who the evil flower guy is. But, you may find out on Tuesday...Thanks for R & R!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 16

He needs a new job an go home to Bella



Author's Response:

You're right. Any suggestions? Thanks for R/R!

Reviewer: Tarbecca Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 17

I love it!  Thank you for not dragging out the whole Edward hostage crisis!



Author's Response:

Thank you. Yeah, it was just a little bit of drama. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 17

jeez, talk about stressing out! Edward can't concentrate over there and Bella's freaking out over here. please let him come home soon

Author's Response:

I know, it's crazy, huh? I think about bringing him home.. Thank you so much !

Reviewer: themrsmittens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 17

I love it!!!! Totally addictated!



Author's Response:

Thanks! It makes me really happy that you like it and took the time to tell me!

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 17

I think Edward needs and wants to come home.   He's more involved in what's happening at home then what's happening where he is.    And he's angry and frustrated that he's not able to do anything to help Bella.



Author's Response:

I think you're right about all of it! Thank you for the interest and taking the time to review!

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 17

oh my that was just WOW



Author's Response:

Thank you. I appreciate you reviewing and hope you liked it!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 4

Sounds like a great party! so far, so good!



Author's Response:

No doubt! I'd like togo to a party like that. Thanks for R/R! 

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 3

Alice is such a meddler ... gotta love that!



Author's Response:

She certainly has a way about her. I wanted her to play match-maker, just not too obviously. Thanks! 

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 2

I love their accidental meetings! Maybe it will build to more!



Author's Response:

We can only hope! lol! Thank you for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 1-Prologue

Their lives suck! The story is quite interesting!

Author's Response:

Yeah they do. I think they deserve some happiness. Thanks for R/R!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 17

VERY GOOD!!  Thank you for giving us two updates today!!  YEAH!!  I am so into this story now.  You are doing a very good job, keeping us on the edge, but also giving us enough!!

I am itching to know who "White Rose person" is!!!  My guess---James! 

Keep up the GREAT work!



Author's Response:

Wow. Thank you so much. I'm still blown away at the response this story has gotten. Reviews are so important. They don't only boost my ego, they let me know that people actually like what I'm writing. I never would have thought this would happen. Myself? I don't have the patience to wait on stories that don't update often. (I usually read 'completed'ones!) So, I try to post often and usually 2 chapters at a time. I think it helps with the flow.

I'm not saying whose leaving the flowers... Thanks!

Reviewer: unicorn_bliss Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 17

I hate it when people say 'good girl' it's like they are talking to a dog or something. It just sounds so demeaning. Guess that's just me *shrugs*

Amyway, it was a good chapter hope the guy gets caught soon way before Bella or anyone else for that matter get hurt.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I knew someone would have an issue with that. Although, Edward wasn't being patronizing, he said it because he was proud of her. That's okay, though. Everyone has a right to their own opinion. No worries! I appreciate your honesty and thank you for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 17

edward needs to come home

post soon



Author's Response:

Patience, dear. lol! Thank you for R/R! I'll post again on Tuesday!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 17

I am so glad he is safe I would watch my back if I were Alec lol .I just hope The Cullens and keep Bella safe and flower guy stays a way till Edward can get back Loved it



Author's Response:

Aww, it makes me happy that you care about the characters. (Edward, of course!) Thank you for reading and leaving me a review! I actually look forward to seeing yuors. I know you've been with me from the beginning. (as well as a few others!)

Reviewer: teamedward1430 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 17

I love this story!!!!!!!!!  Please update again soon!!!!!!!



Author's Response: Thank you! I'll update on Tuesday. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 17

Poor Eddie.  He's really scared for her.  Cant blame him



Author's Response:

Yeah, he isn't used to not being in control. Thank you!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 16

awww poor thing.   SOunds like he'll be looking for stateside security soon.



Author's Response:

Hmm, you could be right. Thank you for R/R!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 17

Love this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you!! I love that you love it! :)

Reviewer: Bluecanoe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 16

Doesn't sound like Edward is going to last very long in this job, I guess it was easier before because he didn't really love Lauren, but Hell, being apart when you're in love is a nightmare.



Author's Response:

Yes, that's it exactly. He never really loved Lauren, so this is all new for him. Thanks for R/R!!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 16

I loved it I know it will be hard on them both to be a part but they can make it.I just hope evil flower guy stays away from Bella .I think it's James that evil prick lol.

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Author's Response:

Thank you. And I'm not saying who the evil flower guy is! It will be revealed soon... Thanks again!

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 15

You did GREAT on the lemons!  Way to go, girl!  I LLLOOOVVEEE the dirty talk, ugh!!  That's just FUCKHOT!!  That's my new word, fuckhot (giggle).

Thanks for updating these two chapters at the same time.  I would have been super disappointed if you had left it at Chapter 14 w/o the lemon.

Can't wait for more!  You're doing great!!



Author's Response:

Thanks sooo much! Yeah, ya'll would've hunted me down if I only put up ch 14! Thank you for R/R! Awesome. Look for more Thursday or Friday, then again on Tuesday.

Reviewer: shedevil Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 15

I love your story .I hopea new chapter is out ASAP.I am hooked on it so please dont keep me waiting for a long time.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I won't ever leave a story unfinshed or keep anyone waiting too long (I hate that) I'll post again Thursday or Friday (2 chapters again, I think)

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 15

YEAH!  We got the real lemon!  And you did a great job with it, i might add...  I am so sad that Edward left...so he'll be back for Emmett and Rose's wedding, but that's still a couple of months away, right?    Did he ask Bella to be his date?  I hope you update soon - I've been spoiled reading the whole story in one day!



Author's Response:

So, you liked it? I will be posting again either Thursday or Friday :)

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 14

So, um, how did she thank him properly!????   Are you seriously not going to give us that lemon - the FIRST LEMON?!    You're mean!



Author's Response:

Ahh, the anticipation just makes it hotter!  :)  Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 13

Mmm, so close!   That was hot!



Author's Response:

Uh-huh. Thank you!

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 12

Gah, I can't stand it!   They need to just give in and sleep together!  Edward is being such a gentleman!



Author's Response:

OK, I see how you are. I just hope that when you get to it, it lives up to your expectations! Thanks!!

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 11

OH, not much time left to get these two into bed!  I hope it happens fast, because I would hate to have to see them wait 4 months without a lemon!



Author's Response:

LOL! That would suck. I wouldn't do that-to you or me!!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 15

That was hot as hell .I loved it I feel sda for them both since Edward has to leave so soon after them getting together but I know they can and will make it work .I love this story you never let me down .I just hope they can both stay safe



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm glad that you liked it. I appreciate your faithfulness in me and the story!  

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 15

Wow if that was your first lemon you better have a smoke because that was smoken hot looking forward to more LOL.  My heart broke for them when they had to leave each other how sad.  He will have to find a different job soon.



Author's Response:

Wow. Thank you. I have written a few as practice and I've read A LOT, so... But it was my first lemon that I let anyone read. I wanted their goodbye to be sweet and sad, wasn't sure I hit the mark on it, but it seems to have been recieved well. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 8

Ha, love the vampire movie reference!   Glad to see Bella does have feelings for Edward, but his job and his leaving are going to get in the way of that... wonder who left the hang-ups on Bella's phone?   Is it James?!



Author's Response:

Yeah, no one has commented on that besides you. I'm glad you liked it. I in no way meant it disrespectfully. I just thought it was funny. I mean, isn't that why we're all here? Our love of Twilight??  And yeah, I'm not saying who's calling...yet.  Thank you for R/R!

Reviewer: ksgeo Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 15

Never thought I'd like warm fruit, but that lemon was HOT! :)   I can't imagine how hard it will be for them to be separated for four months, especially since they've just found each other.  Maybe Bella will be able to go see him at some point.  Hope the time goes quickly for them!



Author's Response:

Thank you!! I was nervous putting it out there, first one and all. And yeah, it woud be tough. I appreciate the review!!!!!!

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 6

Glad to see Edward is willing to give friendship a chance, but how will he stop at that?  I can't wait to see what Bella thinks of that...



Author's Response:

I'm not going to respond to that, being that I know you've read it through to 15! But I will say a big Thank you! I appreciate you reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 4

Wow, what a fun party!   I wish there had been more interaction between Bella and Edward, but maybe tomorrow?   The chapters seem to be ending abruptly...it might be better to end on a bit of a cliffie, if only to entice readers to seek out the next chapter.

 

 



Author's Response:

Glad you like the party. I agree about the end of the chapters. It's my first fic and I've never written anything before, so... I'm still learning! Thank you!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 15

REALLY good story!  Can't wait for the next update....you've done good!

Keep up the good work have added you here on TWCS and FanFic!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Thank you, thank you!

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 3

So, is Alice a little psychic in this story too?   I'm surprised she didn't ask Bella if she could do her hair!    Wish I knew what Edward was thinking...

Liking it so far, hope you write really fast because I read really fast!



Author's Response:

I don't know that she is psychic, but she definitely sees that these two would be great together. I probably could have could have written that better so it came across like that. Thanks for reviewing!! 

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 14

I think it was an amazing chapter. Even the lemon.  It was very heart felt too with the goodbye;s and all.  I loved it. I am sure now that Edward has left, Bella is going to start going through drama with the flower guy. I cant wait to see what you do.



Author's Response:

Thank you!! It makes my day that most people are enjoying my story!

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 14

Best Parts:

Jake and I had become tolerant of each other. He was friendly enough, but I had a sneaking suspicion that he was the culprit of my recently missing boxers. I already knew he stole and hid my shoes. He was growing fast and was going to be huge. He’ll make a good guard dog. That thought made me feel a little better about leaving Bella.

I held the tiny box in the palm of my hand and presented it to her. Bella picked it up and opened it. She looked at the key and then me, waiting for an explanation, I suppose.

“It’s to my apartment. I want you to have it. And before you say anything, I would have given it to you whether I was leaving or not.”

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you like my story!

Reviewer: sherryjo Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 15

loved it, have got to say i did cry when he left



Author's Response:

Aww. I did too! Thank you for R/R! I am beside myself with joy that this is being recieved so well.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 15

so sad....she'll be a mess for a while....

Author's Response:

Thank you for R/R. Yes, it will be tough on them both.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 14

Can he be my boyfriend lol.



Author's Response:

I might have to set up a weekly rental program. The requests are through the roof! LOL! 

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 15

Ahhhh, how sweet but now the stalker shit can hit the fan right?? :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, and yes I think you may be right!

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 14

I would be happy to thank Edward properly!! * wink, wink*  :)



Author's Response:

Get in line, sister! LMAO   Thank you for R/R!!!

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 15

The lemon was amazing, and its so sad he is leaving.  Hopefully it isnt too hard on them.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm so happy you're liking this! Thank you for reviewing, it is greatly appreciated!!

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 15

excellent ,very nice lemon also, got a wee bit teary at the airport,,, looking forwrd to whats coming next?......until next time,cheerio .c.=)



Author's Response:

So, I get you all worked up then make you cry? LOL Thank you for the review-they really are appreciated!

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 15

I loved the lemons; very hot!!!!   Is Edward really going to be away for four months?   He's already having second thoughts and he hasn't even left yet.  I think he's teetering on giving up this job.. 



Author's Response:

Thank you. It was nerve wracking, putting the lemon out there. Yeah, you'd think he'd just say 'screw it' and stay home! Thanks for R/R.

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 2

Groundwork is set...let's get on to the party!  I hope that Alice or Jasper has invited Bella to the Cullen family picnic!



Author's Response:

Thank you, hope you like the party.

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 1-Prologue

I found this story doing a search on TWCS and didn't want to start it until I knew there were a few chapters to at least sink my teeth into.  I am looking forward to reading more!   I love the concept (that God Lauren wasn't really pregnant!) and look forward to Edward and Bella meeting!    I do wonder what impact his job situation might have on any relationship he enters into, but I'm sure you've got it all figured out.

Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

I'm the same way, I used to only read complete stories, but now I just wait until there's a few chapters. I'm so happy you're enjoying the story! Thank you!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 15

great work on the lemon, i loved it !! great work on the airport goodbye too !!

Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm really happy you liked it and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 15

Another great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I appreciate you R/R and am glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 15

awww poor things.  Skype is such a cool invention



Author's Response:

I've never actually used Skype, but yeah it's pretty cool. Thank you.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 14

my cats do the same thing with shoes.  Anything with laces get dragged all over the house, even up the stairs.



Author's Response:

That's funny! I've never heard of cats doing that. Thank you for R/R!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 14

such a great chapter!



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you liked it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 13

yumminesss even ifonly a precursor for the real thing.



Author's Response:

Yeah, well I couldn't just jump into it now could I? LOL Yes, I guess I could-but not in this story.  :) Thank you!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 12

awww  sweet day in the park



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. Thank you!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 11

awww  sweet chapter.  



Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate the review.

Reviewer: mrslilycullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 13

That was HOT!! Loving this story, update soon please. :)



Author's Response:

Why, thank you! Glad you like it and I should be posting again on Tuesday. Thanks!!

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 3

I sure would love to have Edward living across the hall from me! I would buy him more than just coffee filters.  Lol!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

That would be nice, wouldn't it? Thank you!! 

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 12

school with Edward!! All those school fantasies come true!!  :)



Author's Response:

Hmm, nice isn't it? Thank you for R&R!

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