I prefer dreaming about Edward but whatever it takes to  make you happy!!

that was a lemon drop. lol. But it was good.  I cant wait for the actual lemon.  I am sure it will be awesome.

wow. I love how you update 3 chapters at a time, I get a better sense of continuity with the story. Can't wait to see how this progresses and who is the perpetrator of the creepy white roses...

Holly Hell that was one sweet little lemon. LOL 

Wow  he has will power LOL.

Yummy!!

Awesome!!  I love this story!  You are doing a great job!  I hope you get more readers and reviews.  It deserves it!

Yea they are together now=))) loved it.Now for stalkerman hmm could be the evil ex.I just hope that while Edward is gone for work Bella will be safe .

well that was totally hott! cant wait to see what ahppens next 

That was hot!!   And they had a great date as well.  

I really like this story a lot but the chapters are really short. 

Okay, I usually don't like to ramble so I sometimes just give # ratings BUT this site won't let you do that w/o leaving a review.

Soo, I just wanted to say that so far this is "just the right amount" of angst and "just the right amount" of yummy.  I'm impressed.

Hope you have had a great Thanksgiving day!  I'm sitting here reading your story, drinking wine and watching the "Boys".  Go Cowboys!!  Don't hate me b/c I'm Texan!

Gotta go.  Gotta keep reading.

I'm really glad that the misunderstanding that Bella was having about Edward was cleared up and that things are back to being okay between them again.

When she finds out she is going to feel like shit and red faced poor girl.

OH YA he is in big trouble LOL

OH no  trouble for Edward & he doesn't even know why!! :)

Yep you are in tons of trouble studward!!! :)

Love the chapter, too funny with Cindy in the garage.  Are we close to these kids having their first kis ?????? 

Poor B..... course ya cant blame her for jumping to conclusions in that case.  hmmm  Ben is a locksmith huh.

LOL  for the doggie/elevator scene

Go Bella with standing up to Alice.    And Ahhhhh Skankya appears.

awww  they are gonna be cute together

Best Parts:

“Yes, pretty good. Um, thanks for watching the dog. Why do you have him, anyway?”

“I heard him whining so I just brought him over with me,” he said matter-of-factly.

“Oh. I’m sorry he bothered you.”

“He didn’t bother me. He’s just a pup and was lonely.” Edward moved closer to rub the dog’s head, “Weren’t you boy?” He moved his attention to me. “I just had him out a little while ago, so he should be good for a while. Here’s your key.” he reached into his pocket producing my key.

I held the dog towards him. “Did you bring food over for him?”

“Yeah, I grabbed his food bowl and got him some water. It’s in the kitchen.” He thumbed over his shoulder towards the room.

I knocked and opened the door just peeking in. I opened the door and walked in, taking in the sight before me.

Edward was on the floor playing with the puppy. It was licking him, and wriggling around. I laughed and Edward’s head popped up.

“Hey,” he said, looking a little embarrassed.

“No problem, Cullen. Your secret is safe with me.” I told him.

“It’s complicated.” I said shaking my head slightly. I looked up at him.

He looked me in the eyes and said, “I think I can keep up.” I was lost for a moment in his gaze.

“If I tell you, you tell me?” I wasn’t spilling my guts unless I got something back. He nodded.

“Full version or abbreviated?” I asked him.

“What the hell, might as well get it all over with at once, don’t you think?” He asked.

“No Edward. It sounds to me like she was fully aware of what she was getting into. Granted, she may not have been cut out for that kind of life, but that is on her. Not you.” Bella looked angry. “Didn’t she have any friends? Family? Hell, she could have gotten a dog.” Bella picked up the pup as she said this.

“Do you have anymore? I can go out tomorrow and put a few more up.” I offered.

“You wouldn’t mind? That would be great. I can print a few more up. How many do you want?” Bella was practically glowing. It didn’t take much to make her happy.

I went to the drawer in the kitchen that should hold the take out menus. At least, it used to. I haven’t opened the drawer since I’ve been home. Nope, not there. I started checking all the others. The bitch actually took those? She probably would’ve taken the ice cube trays if the fridge didn’t already make ice.

“What are you looking for?” I didn’t hear Bella come back in.

“The menu for the Chinese delivery place a few blocks away. Apparently Lauren needed it in California.” Fucking bitch.

thank god for Alice.....meddeling little thing, but she's so good at what she does...lol

Author's Response:

Gotta love Alice! Thank you!

aaaannnnndd.....cue the misunderstanding.......lovely, Bella's gonna be all standoffish now

Author's Response: Was it that predictable?? Yes, it probably was. lol!

Thank God for Alice or these two would never get their stuff together lol that body shot was HOTTT loved it

That was great I just hope Edward tells Bella that Kate was just Laurens sister .I feel for the both getting cheated on sucks big time and does make trusting others so hard

awww, see it's sweet their starting as friends....with a dash of UST...lol

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you like it.

Hopefully they will get some alone time soon!!

I am glad Edward isn't going to fight it any more he likes her and he should get to know her no harm in that.I would love to see Bella open up more to him and others it will do her good .I really can't wait to read the next update

I liked it I love a stong Bella so Iam glad that is the way you have writen her.LOL that was so funny how she put Alice in her place but as we know Alice is going to win in the end

Loved what she said to Tanya if Tanya has any brain at all she will leave Bella alone.  That was a great party

Good party all but Tanya anyway.  I am glad Bella confronted Alice so both Edward and her know what the plan is.

Best Parts:

I woke up to a warm body lying next to me. The little guy jumped up to sleep with me sometime during the night.

“Hey, you. What are you doing?” I said, holding him up to see his face. He licked me.

I placed him on the floor and got up to look for damage. I was pleasantly surprised to find nothing amiss. No messes, nothing chewed.

“Good Boy!” I told him, scratching his head. Now that I got a good look at him, he looked like a Boxer. I put a pair of sleep pants on and the sweatshirt I had worn the night before. Just because it was right there. And still smelled delicious. I then took the pup outside.

I was nervous about it, not having a leash. I hoped he didn’t run off. As it was, he did his business and walked right back to me.

“Huh. Alright then, come on.” he followed me to the elevator and then down the hall to my apartment.

I showered and dressed quickly, thinking that I’d better stop somewhere and buy a few things since I was going to take care of him until his owners claimed him. I found another blanket for my car and we left. Along the way I posted a few of the flyers.

I stopped at a superstore, posting another flyer before buying some food, a bowl, a collar and a leash. I gave him some food right away, figuring he’d be hungry and we took off for Forks.

“Bella, if no one claims that dog, you should keep him. Single woman, living alone. Having a dog around would be good. Just train him up a bit and you’d be all set,” my dad suggested.

“I may just do that, Dad.” I smiled warmly at my father.

I told her about the dog, which seemed to excite her. She said that I should bring him, assuring me that no one would mind.

It was starting to rain again. “Can you find me an old towel? Or just some paper towel? I don’t want to let him inside all wet.”

I found an old towel for her and held the dog while she wiped him down. We joined the rest of my family for another game.

Best Part:

“Alice, because I am already here, I will stay and help. Because I do genuinely like you and want to be friends with you, I will stay. However, because I do want to be friends, you need to either come clean with whatever bullshit you’re trying to pull, or Stop. Manipulating. Me.” Bella’s face was contorted into a scowl.

“Well, I guess she told her,” I muttered to myself. Note to self: don’t piss Bella off.

I like that Bella stands up to Alice in this story and to Tanya...I don't like when she is manipulated.  Great story so far. really enjoying it.

I can't wait to read what happens next .I love that you are writing both pov's  loving this story .

I thought that was very good .They really had crappy luck in love .But when one door closes another one opens .Can't wait to read more .

Good for Bella not taking his BS!!

Sounds like he wants to show her the bed LOL

Great story so far can't wait to read more.

hmmmm...purple satin...coffee filters... bagels..... water valves... this is heating up...can´t wait for more...lol...great chapter

krazi

xoxo

Great start! Pottty mouth Edward is always a good thing! :)

I love Edwards potty mouth!! Good start!  :)