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Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2012 8:49 PM Title: Red Sky (Part One-Mini)

Please more...soon!



Author's Response:

More coming ! =) 

Reviewer: Charlie0925 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2012 8:41 PM Title: Red Sky (Part One-Mini)

Loving this!  As always, cannot wait for more! ;o)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! More to come!

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2012 8:35 PM Title: Red Sky (Part One-Mini)

I am so confused.  Thank you for the chapter, but please hurry with the next one.



Author's Response:

You will be confused no more!!!!! We're coming with the chapter in a few hours.

Reviewer: mebk03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2012 8:28 PM Title: Red Sky (Part One-Mini)

Oh my gosh...three updates in a week...you spoil us so.  So after the last chapter I was thinking man I need some "Living Amongst Vampires" to counteract the two updates.  Then you send out this chapter and now you have my curiosity peaked and I want to be selfish and want both stories updated.  Any way...I really like your stories, your creativity and I probably don't say it enough to you.  Thank you so much for sharing with us your great talent.  Look forward to seeing any update you give.



Author's Response:

Aww thank you so much! *blushes* I really appreciate that. And I'm totally flattered that you enjoy the stories. If it wasn't for Tyggy, LAH wouldn't have been as great as it is. 

 

I will try to finish the LAV chappy today after part 2 of the mini LAH chapter. I've got a lot of work. LOL

 

Thanks again. Your comment made my day =)

xox

 

Jells

Reviewer: lambykins Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2012 8:24 PM Title: Red Sky (Part One-Mini)

uh oh!!! What are the vampyrcients up to!!!  Poor Emmett he is in for a lashing if he tries to take Bella away.  I am no longer cornfused thanks Jells!!! *big huggies to you*



Author's Response:

*big huggies back* 

 

Gotta watch out for the  vampyrcients! They are very primal, most feral of all!

 

Im working on lAH mini chappy part 2 then I gotta switch gears and finish lAV chap. It's nutzo today lol

 

As always, thanks for reading. 

 

xox

 

Jells

Reviewer: telaviv Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2012 7:58 PM Title: Red Sky (Part One-Mini)

Alien Attack!I really pity Humans right now;They are barely surviving with Vampires present,now with Aliens on loose........MWAH!



Author's Response:

Lolol. Hey! Those Vampyrcients are Vampires too!.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2012 7:53 PM Title: Red Sky (Part One-Mini)

OH SNAP!  I really loved it so much!  I cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

It's coming!

Reviewer: MissMollyCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2012 7:52 PM Title: Red Sky (Part One-Mini)

I can't wait for more! 



Author's Response:

It's coming!

Reviewer: fenrirchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2012 10:02 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

Please finish.  I wanna read more!  This is fascinating.  I love the darkness and the different take on each of the characters.  Jasper is truly an asshole in this lovely tale and I am in love with it.  Don't give up.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! =)

 

The next mini chap is up and more will be on the way =)

Reviewer: BoisterousButtercup Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2012 7:22 AM Title: Hate

I'm impressed of the compassion that the female vampire is capable of in this instance, especially considering since the pair has just drained the infant's mother and father. A fine chapter none-the-less

Reviewer: lorens Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2012 6:19 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

I died with these last to chapters... I was not expecting what happened and is Edward contemplating running away with Bella? hmmm...

Author's Response:

You'll see soon ;)

 

Thanks for reading! 

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2012 4:21 AM Title: The Gauntlet Pt 2

Good chapter***

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2012 4:07 AM Title: We Usually Don't Do This On Here

Grrrrr

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2012 4:06 AM Title: The Gauntlet part 1

Good chapter.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2012 7:48 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit

Good chapter.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2012 4:13 AM Title: Prepare to be Pissed

okidou

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2012 4:12 AM Title: Pull

Good chapter.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2012 1:59 AM Title: Taken

Good chapter again.

Reviewer: Killersupergirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2012 12:38 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

Oh wow another chapter THANK YOU!!!!! I wonder what emmett's going to do? I love how Psychotic everyone is:D Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading! *giggles* We love the psychoticness too ;)

 

Thanks again,

 

Jells n Tyggy

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 11:40 PM Title: The set-up

Another good chapter.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 9:55 PM Title: A New Beginning

Another good chapter.

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 9:22 PM Title: Hate

Good chapter.

Reviewer: Cullenfest Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 8:20 PM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

gruesome!!!!



Author's Response:

Why thank you *giggles*

 

Thanks for reading. New mini chappy is up. 

Reviewer: VC Toliver Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 7:44 PM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

This is excellent, Tiger and JSjellybean!  I love the parts you added.  ;)  Can't wait to find out what happens next!  

xx

Cocoa



Author's Response:

Hi *waves*

 

Thank you, Cocoa. I appreciate all of your help! It means a lot to us. Btw Tyggy let me hear it with the Ole knife LMAO  Hey I was tired. *giggles*

 

Thanks again,

 

xox

 

Jells

Reviewer: ginabella59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 7:40 PM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)

Its look good...let see what happen next

Reviewer: scareDcat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 11:09 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

Wow-can't blame Jasper, Carlisle's a proper vampire, and if it weren't for Bella then I'd be happy to see Edward get what he deserves!

Author's Response:

I know right?! Edward's just a nasty vamp.

 

 Thanks for reading =) 

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 7:45 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

So bloody, so dark, so barbed. lmaooooo



Author's Response:

LMFAO! I wish I could favorite your comment here! 

 

Thanks Roonie! Tygs and I are busy at writing... well me more sleeping lmao I'm exhausted.

 

XXOO

 

Miss Bean *giggles* 

missbean

Reviewer: fangrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 6:48 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

Edward and Bella are screwed. Heck, I'll bet Tanya is going to get the short end of the stick, too. 

Jasper is weaving his trap quite well. 

Thanks for the update. So nice to see this story progressing.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! We appreciate it!

 

xox

 

jells

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:42 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

God I really dislike Jasper in this one.  Bella's going to get screwed over no matter what......too many obstacles to overcome.  Can't wait to see what goes down with Emmett.



Author's Response:

I dislike Assper too. He's such an arse lol 

 

Thanks for reading!

xo

Jells

Reviewer: telaviv Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:35 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

UH OH! Emmett!Now how will Edward save Bella?

I never wanted to bitchslap Jasper as much as i do right now

Carlisle is so barbaric;That scene gave me the jeebees



Author's Response:

lmao I'd love to bitch slap Jasper. j/s

 

Carlisle is a twisted vamp. Very dark, but then again, you'll see that about Esme too... very soon.

 

Thanks for reading! We appreciate it!

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 4:41 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

Jasper is a bastard evil cant blame him but that is wrong.



Author's Response:

Hey *waves* 

 

I agree. Hope you'll like the next mini chap.

 

Thanks for reading

 

xox

 

jells

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 4:37 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

never thought I'd say this in a story, but Carlisle needs to f'ing die....painfully



Author's Response:

I know right?! Carlisle is sick!

Thanks for reading! 

Reviewer: Lud Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 4:17 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

They are in so much trouble, I hope you find the plans of Edward Jasper.
I love this story (like dark stories) and look for updates.
And not to mention that even though Edward is an ass to Bella he's hot.
Thank you.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!! We hope that you'll continue to enjoy this story. Lots of twists and turns coming up!

 

Jells and Tyggy

Reviewer: djuvinity Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 4:09 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

Wow thanks for the update! it was really great. I can't think of anything besides that because im beat. im nodding off typing this! But are updates going to come more quickly now? because if this is a new pattern im ecstatic!



Author's Response:

Hey *waves* Thank you! =)

 

We are hoping to do some mini chapters. I know with school starting it'll be more difficult but we will do our very best!

 

Thanks so much for reading. We appreciate it!

 

Jells and Tyggy

Reviewer: marysway Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 4:04 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

Wow 3 updates in the last few days.  Loved them.  Now it's getting good and into things now.  Jasper sure is a devil in this one not sure I can I blame him but..........Looking forward to the updatess.  I know you guys are busy with school maybe this semester your load is not as heavy?  Thanks again for the wonderful updates you have given us!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading. We're happy that you're enjoying the story so far.

 

We're hoping the workload won't be too heavy. We'll continue with as many updates as we can even if they are mini chapters.

 

Thanks again,

 

Jells

Reviewer: Molliegoodgolly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 3:59 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

im soo excited you're getting this story out!!! it's my fav story line im reading right now!!



Author's Response:

aww thank you so much! More to come =)

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 3:17 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

shit is going to hit the fan now!  Emmett is on the war path.



Author's Response:

You'll see ;)

 

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 2:46 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

thanks good chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

Reviewer: ToshaLovesTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 2:18 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

That was great. But now im sad that there no more to read. I hope there will be more chapters soon. Thanks for all 3 posts



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

Reviewer: ToshaLovesTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 2:06 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

:-)

Reviewer: ToshaLovesTwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 1:56 AM Title: Hiss Pt.1 (Actual Chapter)

I was trying to save up enough chapters so I wouldn't have to wait too long for updates, but what the heck I can't wait. Great chapter. On to the next

Reviewer: Robshandmonkey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 1:53 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

RAWWWWWWWRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!

Never been more sure in my life!!!!!!

I ABOUT DIED WHEN I READ THIS!!!!!

“You’re pathetic.”   

“Says the human who fucks the prince.”

“See if it’ll happen again.”

“I bet it will. That pussy is mine. You know it. I know it. Stop with the fucking games.”

ADMIT IT BELLA HE OWNS ALL OF US!!!!

Barbed by E



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Reviewer: kaykay85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 1:51 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

WOW



Author's Response:

Thank you =)

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 1:49 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

thanks for the quick update

Carlisle scene was kinda gross

everyone seems to have different plans for Bella



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! Hope you'll like the next mini chappy! =)

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 1:39 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

i rushed home to read this and was not disapointed that was soo good thanks for the update cant wait for more



Author's Response:

aww thank you =)

Reviewer: AllieM74 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 1:32 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

That was fantastic! Thank you for the quick update.



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: MissMollyCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 1:29 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

loved it!



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 12:53 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

Thank you for staying up, for so long I was wretched waiting for updates after I found this story and was completely hooked.  Noe I've had three that were in a row.   So very awesome!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much =) We appreciate it and we are happy that you're enjoying thsi story =)

Hope that you'll continue to enjoy it, lots of twists coming up.

 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 12:50 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

Carlisle is one sick bastard...jas is bent on revenge....damn it is getting tense!



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

 

I know right?! This story is nuts LOL

 

Hope you'll like the next mini chap!

 

Thanks again,

 

xox

 

Jells

Reviewer: lambykins Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 12:31 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

another chap!!! I just peed in my pants again!!! *waves hi*   Wow Carlisle is one sick fuck!!  and Jasper,,, he needs to die, just sayin.  thank you sooo much for the update made my day. 



Author's Response:

LMAO! xD

 

*waves hi back* 

 

IKR?! Daddy C is twisted .... just wait till you get a load of Momma Cullen. The things she does in my mind will have you .... O_O  lol

 

Aww Thanks Lambykins,

xox

 

Jells 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 12:02 AM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

Oh snap!  That was amazing and intense all at the same time!  I cannot wait for more of this and the other one, "Living Amongst Vampires" :)



Author's Response:

Hey *waves* Thanks so much!

 

I'll have an update for LAV hopefully this weekend.

 

Thanks again,

 

xox

 

Jells

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 11:28 PM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

I must confess that I can`t wait to read what you write next.Your collaboration seems to be the proof that talent is a precious gift that sometimes can be shared.Keep going.Hope to see Bella and Edward together.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Glad you are enjoying the story =)

 

Thanks again,

 

Jells

Reviewer: fall up Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 10:59 PM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

Damn, Edward is fucking scary. I loved Tanya, sad to see her turned into Edward's puppet. Amazing written chapter. Very engaging to read.



Author's Response:

Thanks honey buns! Edward is a peculiar vampire. I deal with him everyday. He talks about the women but sometime he just won't shut up! lmao. I'm glad you like it babes! See you next chapter!

Reviewer: fall up Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 10:55 PM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

Excellent writing



Author's Response:

Hey *waves

 

Thanks so much!

 

Jells and Tyggy

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 10:45 PM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

Fang-Pod? ROFLMAO!

Thank you for being such great supplier! Your story gives me a great high!!



Author's Response:

Don't laugh at me I had to do it! lmfao. I couldn't resist the Fang-POD ~*Tyggy~*

Reviewer: Charlie0925 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 10:44 PM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

Oh, please don't wait too long between updates.  This is by far one of the best fic's out there, and I'm always on the edge of my deat waiting for more! 

Happy New Year to the both of you! ;o)

 



Author's Response:

Happy New years to you as well cherie! We won't. We've been motivated. *winks*

Reviewer: tigga14 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 10:42 PM Title: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

loving it cannot waqit to see what happens next !! XD

please update soon!



Author's Response:

WE SHALL CHERIE!

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 4:11 PM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

Wow.  What was that venom to make her so compliant.

Love your story (both versions)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! 

 

It's a special venom which calms a female vampire. It tends to be used in child birth too.

 

I'll try to have an update for LAV this weekend.

Thanks again,

 

Jells

Reviewer: writer4life Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 4:28 AM Title: Hate

this story is coming together, keep up the good work ladies

Reviewer: writer4life Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 4:18 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)

hmm this story has a very interesting prologue, I cant wait to read more and see the plot carries on

Reviewer: cullenmother05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2012 4:18 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

Finally I got caught back up.OMG You blow my mind like the most intimate of lovers barb cock and all. This Edward is stunning in his maleness OMG. I flove ya girls forever and every and ever!!!



Author's Response:

*Big HUGS*

 

Love you!!!

xxooo

 

jells n Tyggy

Reviewer: kaykay85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 9:44 PM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

I couldn't stop reading. I'm sucked in too much. PLEASE post more! Thanks and happy new year

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 9:40 PM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

Poor Tanya.   Eddie really needs a reality check.  Hope B can stand up to him somehow.



Author's Response:

I know right?! He's horrible!

 

Thanks for reading!!!

 

xox

 

Jells

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 9:40 PM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

more more more please i will do anything for another updat! is it to much to ask for living among vampire to? im greedy ha ha ha please post asap

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 9:33 PM Title: Hiss Pt.1 (Actual Chapter)

well at least he's doing the right thing at the end.

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 9:27 PM Title: Hiss Pt.1 (Actual Chapter)

this is getting to good

Reviewer: mimi2006 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 9:26 PM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

please keep going guys xxxx

Reviewer: LSAB Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 9:14 PM Title: All ABout Losh!

i would love an living among vampire outtake :-)

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 9:13 PM Title: Urge

i hope tanya understands great chapter

Reviewer: djuvinity Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 8:18 PM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)

I love thisss chapter! I love that yhu up dated so fast, i didnt expect it till at least another 2 months! Love me some edward badazz! "Yhu female shut up & we will get along better that way" lmao

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 5:40 PM Title: The Gauntlet Pt 2

I HATE THIS JASPER I HOPE EDWARD STOPS HIM GREAT CHAPTER

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 5:15 PM Title: The Gauntlet part 1

love it :-)

Reviewer: scareDcat Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 10:33 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

I love this chapter - Bella is really seeing his true colours x

Reviewer: Robshandmonkey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 9:18 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

stories/38448/images/barbed.jpg*snort giggles*

Reviewer: telaviv Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 9:12 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

I liked this chapter;Thanks for continuing this story;It has one of the most dominant motherfuckers i've read

Happy New Year;Party hard;Be safe;and update Very Soon

Reviewer: Cullenfest Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 8:40 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

what an antideluvian Edward!! I seriously want to kick HIS ass!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 7:57 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

Happy new year and thanks so much for 2 chapters I was blown away.  Edward is a spoiled rotten prick. 

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 7:24 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

i don't like Edward being mean to Bella... i do however like a dominating Edward but not mean



Author's Response:

oohhhhhhhhhhhhh i'm sorry babes but thats just how it is. The story is different from what you're use too. These Vampires HATE humans and being logical, I have to stick with that demeanor  and stay true to it or this story will up just like all the others. I truly hope you continue to read though.

 


~*Tyggy~*

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 7:23 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

Thank you for starting my new year off with some great reading!

Reviewer: janefanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 7:10 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

I'm glad Tanya isn't dead? I'll admit that you've got me hooked onto the idea of whatever Tanya's family's backstory may be; the hints were nice, but it makes me all the more curious!

Reviewer: Charlie0925 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 6:22 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

I truly, truly LOVE this story!  So happy that you gave us a couple of chapters in 2 days.  As always, cannot wait for more! ;o)

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 4:46 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

Ok, I take back what I said about Edward's soft underbelly.  Ha!  I do like that Bella tried to stand up to him.  I don't care for shrinking violets.  Poor Tanya is now a robot basically.  Yikes.  Nasty venom.

Reviewer: Lilygirl88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 3:36 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

wow he managed to go from trying to save Bella from Emmett to being a total dick in showing she is still to do as he says.

Reviewer: sakura77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 3:32 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

I am so excited for the update! I cant wait for the next one.

Reviewer: TwilightTucker Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 2:53 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

hE'S going to explode one of these days with all the pompusness and anger. there will be tiny bits of him on every surface for miles.



Author's Response:

That was the word I was looking for last night!!!!!!!!!!!!! pompus *laughs oh so fucking hard* I could not figure out what it was for shit!!!!!!!!!! I was like " I know this word...what the hell is it?" thanks yoU!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 2:46 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

thanks good chapters

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 2:45 AM Title: Hiss Pt.1 (Actual Chapter)

Tanya truly cares for Bella and is trying to protect her  even from the one she loves.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 2:26 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

OH SNAP!  That was amazing!  I really loved it!  I cannot wait to see what happens next!  I also cannot wait to see how everything works out for Bella and Edward ;)

Reviewer: fangrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 2:25 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

Still not sure how Edward is going to make all this work for him. It seems that at every time he turns around there are new challenges facing them. 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 2:25 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

Ed you are an ass!  Poor Tanya.  Can't wait for more.  Happy new year!

Reviewer: Killersupergirl Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 1:56 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

Hahaha I loved Bella's line 'Your a bastard Edward' Go Bella!!! I wonder how long Tanya will be under Edwards controll and how she will be able to do her job of protecting Bella like this? Loved this chapter and can't wait for more:D

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 1:55 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit

i know i said this before but this is getting really good

Reviewer: AllieM74 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 1:36 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

Great update thanks!

Reviewer: LSAB Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 1:32 AM Title: Prepare to be Pissed

rl always comes first before anything else

Reviewer: LSAB Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 1:32 AM Title: Pull

this keeps getting better and better

Reviewer: Gemini73 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 1:24 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

Love it!!!

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Date: 02 Jan 2012 1:22 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

wow  i'm speechless!!!!

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 1:12 AM Title: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

I cant believe he did that...well I can but damn!!!

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 1:12 AM Title: Hiss Pt.1 (Actual Chapter)

OMG that was so great!!

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Date: 02 Jan 2012 1:11 AM Title: Taken

Will Phil get her back? hmmm...

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