great update

So it's pretty funny that the only vampire who hasn't been a complete abomination so far is Tanya. I expected to hate her; that's usually the standard, isn't it? Thus far, she's nice. Jasper. Man, what a bitch! Of course, I have hopes that he'll have trouble sentencing Bella to death; doesn't he empathize with humans too? If he feels her confusion and pain, maybe he'll develop some type of Lima Syndrome for her? Here's to hoping! Thanks for sharing!

You two have a delightfully sick imagination. lmaooooo

love it!!!

♥ two hundred and fifty thousand fucking coffee cups for you!

GAWD DAMN I LIVE FOR THIS FUCKING STORY!

It is so off the wall and just fucking awesometackular!

You bitches rawk my fucking socks off with this shit...

He peed on her! bwhahahahaha....too fucking twisted...a little watersports there hey Edward....

I swear to fucking gawd if you take too long to update this again jells your ass is all mine! I am going to hunt you down and pour honey on your cooch and tie you to a tree next to a bee hive bitch if you don't get the next chapter up asap!

oh lord did i just say that? damn I been listening to tygs and her tweeter too much! hahahaha

MUAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

How will Edward handle the fact that Emmett wants to play with her too?

Poor B is really being drawn, quartered & set up for a kill.

great chapter!!!

love it already!!!

OH WOW, that was amazing :)  I really loved it and hope that Edward slips up soon to mark her as his true mater.  But, I also hope he can do it without being condemned to death.  Cannot wait for more!

Ive read living amongst vamps but I must say I'm loving this version alot better keep up the good work cant wait for the next update

thanks for the info

Oh please don't say this story has been abandoned!!!!! When is the next update coming !!!??????

Come.on.,please.write.soon..PLEASE..!
Anthousa,
xo xo

can't wait till the next chapter !!!

ahh!!! I can't wait till the next chapter!!!

Hello waves.  See I finally got around to reading it  and I am so glad I did. Poor Bella a small little pawn amongst carzy vampires.  I cannot wait to see what happens next. 

I love this story, I just wish that you would update sooner.

Oh no, now I"m caught up.

I'm gonna be jonesn for an update, hope your in the mood to write:D)

This is really good!!

Sooo happy to see the update!  Charlotte needs her ass beat!

Awww!! I love this story already! How awesome and what a great idea to have Bella and Edward meet as babies......really, really young babies! I am loving this story! Bring on the next chapter.........

My heart was beating so fast while I was reading the chapter. I had my eyes half way closed till I reached the next sentence because the chapter was that good. Since the shirt storm has just started, my nerves will be worn out. It will be worth it because this story rocks.

Damn, all my hopeful faith in Peter having some compassion was dashed in this chapter. Him and Char are something.

Poor Bella, at least she didn't suffer the whole chaper. Thanks for giving the girl an orgasm, her hell life needed a little bright spot.

I can't believe, I am going to write this, but I actually didn't want Edward to get torched in this chapter. I am feeling more connectd to him.

Congrats on passing the finals.

5/13/11 (9)

First of all, CONGRATULATIONS on passing your finals! You have my respect for undertaking RL along with this fascinating story.

Somehow I've missed the update alert for this, and I couldn't remember which chapter I last read. No biggie. I just enjoyed it from the beginning, all over again.

Wow! When you said a shit storm is brewing, I can't even imagine all the catastrophic events that will be taking place.

I'm going to go out on a limb and guess that Carlisle is the one who's purchasing B.

I like the twist you've added with the scent-killing pill. You truly know how to cover all your bases.

Why doesn't E get B and have her as his blood-whore to conceal the fact that B's his true-mate?

good chapter.  you've got a good way of writing tension, although some of it was a little emphatic.  could do with more frequent updates, so more please soon!

char if f-ing crazy!!  poor bella... ed you are  piece of work i hope you change your tune because i really don' t lke you at all!!  you are an arogant mother f-er..... why didn't bella's "parents" try to find her?

ed you are a real big prick!!! you have me liking jasper and not you.... a-hole.  so he found bella... he is going to be in soo much trouble if they aren't allowed to mate with humans... where is this all going to go?

okay ed and jas huh does that mean they are going to fight over bella too?  who wanted her?  jas or ed?  will they find out the truth that they killed their parents?  more more more!!!

carlisle and esme you are horror ridden...  pregers with ed? hummmm

Poor Bella.  Everyone abusing her.

Go Jazz.

Oi sumida, que bom que você voltou a att.. Eu gosto de mais desta fic aqui, quando você demorou todo esse tempo, eu aqui não perdi a esperança que iria acabar voltando e atualizando, que bom que não me decepcionei néh.

Mas aqui novamente na fic acho que ele está sendo covarde com esse medo todo, porque ele não fica com ela escondido, arruma um canto e mantem ela neste canto só para ele já que não pode assumir uma humana? e tomar cuidado com seu irmão néh. Até a próxima att., abraços

LOVED THIS!!!  Cannot wait for more! 

Charlie 

PS:  Congrats on passing your finals! :o)

intresting ending.

lol that is funny at the end with jasper and i like when edward is loving to bella then i hate him when he is a jack ass the the story cant wait untill you update 

Thanks for the update and congragulations on your finals.  Jasper  is looking for trouble.  So what are they going to do with Bella and is it Esme that has aranged to buy her????  I cant wait for more.

Amazing story!

WOW, let the games begin!!!

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  Please let Bella and Edward be together soon ;)  I cannot wait for more!

i dont like jasper very much for now

Loved it very much and I wonder what he will do when he goes back to her house and she is not there anymore Or is she moving in with them thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can.....

Yay! I live for when you and Jells update your stories.  They are by far my favorite.  I know Edward can't help what he's going through but I hope Bella has a chance to give her a piece of her mind. Tell him how bad he makes her feel.  I mean, he blamed her for what happened in that room yet she was the one who was tied down? And doesn't it concern him in the least that she's being sold as a slave? He could never see her again.  She could be sold to some sick fuck who wants a sex slave.  I think it will be interesting to see his reaction if she doesn't show up on the next school day because she's been taken away by her new owner.  Honestly, it would kind of serve him right.  While his internal struggle is understandable, him acting like a cruel, heartless bastard is all him though. Like, he can't help how he feels but he could react a little less cruel, right?  She didn't ask for any of this either. I hope one day he has extreme remorse over what he's done and said to her.  While he may not be able to help the feelings inside himself she still deserves to get her say and let him know how he hurts her.

While him being a prince doesn't supersede ownership, he has to know that ownership is hazy.  Much like Peter and Charlotte knew that they could kidnap Bella without much danger once they got her away.  Edward also knows they want to sell her, can't he buy her?  Maybe under the guise of making her his own personal blood whore?

Something else I'm curious about, when they had their first encounter in the locker room he refused to finish inside her.  Something about it completing the bond? Is that still true?  Did that happen this time? What exactly was that all about?

Congratulations on the finals! Woo Hoo! You are a free woman for a bit! Does that mean more time writing? *wink wink*  Since this was originally a longer chapter and you posted early so we didn't have to wait until next week does that mean we get another update soon? *crosses fingers and jumps up and down*

As far as rec'ing A Slave Who Wouldn't Obey, thank you so much! Sorry TWCS is being stupid.  A lot of people seem to be initially turned off by the fact it's a period type piece but it really isn't hard to follow or affect the story that much. Even if you just did the title, author and let people know it's available both here and on FF.net that would be great. Milk and I really appreciate it!

Okay, I'm off to read Baby Doll now! *HUGS FOR YOU AND JELLY JELLS!*

SQUEEE!!!! so excited to get an update.  Poor barbedpeenward,,, what is he going to do about Bella now that Jasper knows...  very awesome chap guys!!! this totally made my day.  Bella will work her magic on Edward and he will give in soon,,, love you guys!

Love it! Jasper is a sneaky little bastard!  I can't wait for the next chapter of both your stories.  :)

I LOVE this story!  Definitely kept me on the edge of my seat so to speak.  Cannot wait for more! ;o)

Charlie

wow! J'adore darkEdward!  J'ai hâte de lire la suite.

i leally love this story its my favourite on here i can't wait for the next update and hope its really soon i also wanted to mention that i love your writing style i think your really good and i also love your story living amongst vampires i was just wondering how long will it be before edward and bella get together?

i have just read the beginning and i already like this story a lot

i like the story but hate how edwarfd is and i know what he'll be come cant wait to see what you have nexty to write

Read the first chapter and was hocked. Can't wait for the next.

Great chapter! Looking forward to the next chap. :)